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Sakakibara Yui - ANGELIC DESTINY (Short Ver.)

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Doraton
34 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Doraton
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sonntag, 27. Mai 2012 at 13:13:13

Artist: Sakakibara Yui
Title: ANGELIC DESTINY (Short Ver.)
Source: Vanitas no Hitsuji
Tags: eroge hentai game japanese visual novel
BPM: 150
Filesize: 14341kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,42 stars, 91 notes)
  2. Hard (4,46 stars, 175 notes)
  3. Insane (4,98 stars, 223 notes)
  4. Normal (3,35 stars, 116 notes)
Download: Sakakibara Yui - ANGELIC DESTINY (Short Ver.)
Download: Sakakibara Yui - ANGELIC DESTINY (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st serious Beatmap. Opening of the Eroge: "Vanitas no Hitsuji"

Please Mod!

EDIT: 17.05.2012: New mapping on all diffs.

EDIT: 23.05.2012: New Video (Thank you, Sieg)



Easy: 100% (Me)
Normal: 100% (Me)
Hard: 100% (Me)
Insane: 100% (Me)
Last edited by Doraton , edited 29 times in total.
Arnold0
1,675 posts
Joined February 2012
Arnold0
I'm sorry to say this but your timing is completely wrong, it makes the beatmap near unplayable
You should try this
BPM : 150
Offset : 1899 (To be checked more)
And I saw you used 1/6 on insane , that is not good you have to use 1/2 , 1/4 and rarely if needed 1/8
With that you will be able to map correctly and the result will be playable .
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei

Arnold0 wrote:

I'm sorry to say this but your timing is completely wrong, it makes the beatmap near unplayable
You should try this
BPM : 150
Offset : 1899 (To be checked more)
And I saw you used 1/6 on insane , that is not good you have to use 1/2 , 1/4 and rarely if needed 1/8
With that you will be able to map correctly and the result will be playable .



No Problem^^

Should be fixed - ty for mod.
Doraton
34 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Doraton

Arnold0 wrote:

I'm sorry to say this but your timing is completely wrong, it makes the beatmap near unplayable
You should try this
BPM : 150
Offset : 1899 (To be checked more)
And I saw you used 1/6 on insane , that is not good you have to use 1/2 , 1/4 and rarely if needed 1/8
With that you will be able to map correctly and the result will be playable .



Yes, thank you. I think, I fixed it.
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
hi more general things :lol:

- There are two OSB files, delete the one titled "Sakakibara Yui - ANGELIC DESTINY (Doraton)", and make a Full Submit
- your BG pic is currently 500 x 375, make it 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768

no kds

Good luck! nice song :D
Doraton
34 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Doraton

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi more general things :lol:

- There are two OSB files, delete the one titled "Sakakibara Yui - ANGELIC DESTINY (Doraton)", and make a Full Submit
- your BG pic is currently 500 x 375, make it 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768

no kds

Good luck! nice song :D


Very thank you :D
I will fix it.


EDIT: Fixed
jesse7419
405 posts
Joined March 2011
jesse7419
HI :)
from random mod
just in General

you adjust the offset and BPM so all note not in needle.
you can use Resnap All Notes ↓
SPOILER
and adjust some circle and slider
if you all fix. I could mod again.

nice sone,Good Luck
Doraton
34 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Doraton

jesse7419 wrote:

HI :)
from random mod
just in General

you adjust the offset and BPM so all note not in needle.
you can use Resnap All Notes ↓
SPOILER
and adjust some circle and slider
if you all fix. I could mod again.

nice sone,Good Luck

Ty :D

I resnaped notes and handled some notes.
If something's still wrong you may say it :D
jesse7419
405 posts
Joined March 2011
jesse7419
Ummm...

General

＞You will fix every detail in your map. (Some note not in the correct needle)
＞note must be in white and red needle. if you want to make continuance 3hit or 5hit or up still put note in red needle.
example: (this is your start in 00:06:499 - )
SPOILER
＞the sound you can put the clap in first & third needle.
＞Kiai time start in 00:06:699 - end in 00:21:099 -
＞Green is most unless...

I suggest you make the map again completely.
good luck
Doraton
34 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Doraton

jesse7419 wrote:

Ummm...

General

＞You will fix every detail in your map. (Some note not in the correct needle)
＞note must be in white and red needle. if you want to make continuance 3hit or 5hit or up still put note in red needle.
example: (this is your start in 00:06:499 - )
SPOILER
＞the sound you can put the clap in first & third needle.
＞Kiai time start in 00:06:699 - end in 00:21:099 -
＞Green is most unless...

I suggest you make the map again completely.
good luck


You mean Insane?
jesse7419
405 posts
Joined March 2011
jesse7419
yes. Insane :)
Doraton
34 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Doraton

jesse7419 wrote:

yes. Insane :)


Ok :D

I will map new, because it got crap with new Beat Snap divisor :D

Thank you :D I will work on it :D
Aoriki
778 posts
Joined February 2011
Aoriki
Hello there. Here is your background that you requested.
Please feel free to PM me if you would like a different background, thank you.
So yeah...


Doraton
34 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Doraton
Thank you^^
jesse7419
405 posts
Joined March 2011
jesse7419
HI :)
I come ~ get your message in osu.
I just small mod in your Insane,and some suggestion.

[General]
＞ Sound is think OK in most part,but some still disharmonyI,and Kiai time no add sound(can add clap in 1&3).
You can search some sound in viewtopic.php?f=56&t=15407
＞ Youe normal sound Vol. fix to 50% will be fine,100% too noisy.

[Insane]
AR+2
00:06:699 - to 00:25:899 - I suggest there sound in normal will be better than soft sound,as like your Kiai time.
00:12:999 - add a circle.
00:17:899 - to 00:20:499 - here in high sense,I suggest fix to this
SPOILER
00:40:299 - add a circle.
00:40:499 (1) - shorten this slider in 00:40:899 - and add circle in 00:40:999 - and 00:41:099 - ,and then 00:41:299 (2) - move to 00:41:399 - and remove 00:41:499 (3) -
SPOILER
01:29:899 (1) - remove? and add spinner end in 01:33:099 - (add finish in spinner)

In my opinion,your arrange still a little irregularity.
I think you can see more other people map which is rank. That can help you more.

map will more and more nice,GL
Xylem Beer
260 posts
Joined September 2011
Xylem Beer
[General]
Try cutting your mp3 since song ends at 01:45:899 -

[Easy]
00:39:899 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/wIAu Align them properly?
00:51:499 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]
AR+1
01:05:899 (5) - Add whistle

[Hard]
AR+1
00:15:499 (6) - start nc here
00:25:499 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix this?
01:10:899 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:14:899 (7) - add finish

[Insane]
AR+2

Nice map :)
Doraton
34 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Doraton

Xylem Beer wrote:

[General]
Try cutting your mp3 since song ends at 01:45:899 -

[Easy]
00:39:899 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/wIAu Align them properly?
00:51:499 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]
AR+1
01:05:899 (5) - Add whistle

[Hard]
AR+1
00:15:499 (6) - start nc here
00:25:499 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix this?
01:10:899 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:14:899 (7) - add finish

[Insane]
AR+2

Nice map :)


Thank you for mod and compliment^^
jossieP
1,875 posts
Joined May 2010
jossieP
hello
/me dl witouth video

[General]

  1. The current offset feels pretty early, also my test play gave me this offset: 1920 (+21 on current)
    Check the mod first, Ill give my suggest on current timing
  2. The BG image dimensions should be 1024x768 current is 1 pixel less but since this is a rule you cant break it
  3. You have not custom normal hitsounds, use default normal soundset on those green timesections
  4. Use slider velocities on a razonable way
    right now [Insane] uses 2.0 SV
    > [Hard], [Normal] and [Easy] has 1.0 SV, man please are you serious? for an [Easy] diff is ok but when the difficulty rate increase the slider velocito should increase too, use 1.20~1.30 for [Normal] and 1.50~1.60 for [Hard]

[Insane]

your spacing/location of almost all notes seems random, I used to make this but I always tried to have a clean playfield, also almost all your sliders are streight, play moar with shapes of sliders
  1. 00:06:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can place this on a nicer way
    a maybe
    72,56,6699,1,0
    168,160,6899,1,2
    192,48,7099,1,0
    288,152,7299,1,2
    312,40,7499,1,0
    408,144,7699,2,0,B|336:360,1,200,2|4
  2. 00:22:899 (7) - place it away from 00:22:099 (5)
  3. 00:25:899 ~ long break for a short ver. fill it please?
  4. 00:35:499 ~ and now you use squared patterns, I preffer this instead random placement
  5. 00:39:499 (3,6,1) - you added that custom clap just for this 3 objects? use your custom moar constantly please, a clap on every downbeat sounds nice, dont know how you wanna use it though
  6. 00:54:299 (4) - many repeats, cant think on a better pattern?
  7. 01:02:699 - cant see the reason of this speed up, although is the chorus of the song there is no high speed section here, a kiai time is suposed to be the climax of the map, but this is just a speed up, you are not using different patterns, just the same 1/2 circle, slider
  8. 01:04:499 (1) - if you are going to use many repeats set all the sliders with repeats with the same amount of repeat arrows, like 01:06:099 (5), just have 1 repeat arrow, and as the speed got up player cant see rally how many repeats this slider have
  9. 01:30:299 - you can start a spinner from here to 01:33:099 or earlier
well, here is the main problem of the diff: random placement, repetitive rhythm, almost the same patterns on whole map, the off-topic speed up and unconcistant repeat arrows

[Hard]

well, that the SV is ridiculously low
  1. 00:15:699 (2,3) - Try that the clap pattern dont get break so suddenly, add clap to this 2 notes to avoid it
  2. 00:29:899 - well the break on [Insane] is moar long D: that is suposed to be moar harder and has moar score point, why you maked this so short?
  3. 00:40:299 (1,2,3,4) - are you following the vocals? cant hear what you are following here, or just are 1/2 notes?
  4. 00:42:899 (2) - simmilar as up, maybe move to 00:43:099 and remove the repeat?
  5. 00:49:099 (6) - simmilar as [Insane] use the same amount of repeats for all sliders
  6. 01:02:699 ~ the end of some sliders are unsnaped, see 01:03:699 (4), this should ends 01:04:099 (that red tick) but current is not on any tick

[Normal]

increase SV please
  1. 00:13:899 (3) - hmm exteend this slider, so it can be a 1/1 long and remove 1 repeat
  2. 00:15:299 (4) - move to 00:15:499 (1/1 is better to [Normal] difficulties
  3. 00:21:299 ~ oh the break start earlier

[Easy]

  1. Generally speaking, use 1,00x as distance snap on whole map
  2. 00:21:099 - oh moar earlier break
  3. 00:39:899 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - many circles in a row may be tyring for newbies, you was using some nice sliders after
  4. 01:22:299 (2) - dont use speed ups for easiest diffs x_x
  5. 01:24:299 (1,1) - many many repeats :o
  6. 01:30:299 (1) - oh use this spinner on the other diffs please

well, Ill suggest you this: look at the structure of other maps, or simmilar songs if you want, look how other mappers use circles/sliders not common snaping, silences between notes, jumps and streams
You will have a lot of job here
its a funny and interesting song and it can be mapped better and more beautiful of course
This map has a symmilar rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/b/50290
I dont really like the repetitive 1/2 of [Insane] and that speed up x_x
ant the other diffs are basically the same, variate your patterns and rhythms
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
Hi from my mod Q ^.^

Insane

00:10:899(6) - make end slider so http://puu.sh/Abbj
00:13:899(4,5,6) - make so http://puu.sh/AbbO sound and look better
00:15:299 - add note
00:46:499 - delete this note
00:54:299 - make this http://puu.sh/AbcO
00:55:699(1,2) - ^
01:08:299 - http://puu.sh/Abdp
01:07:499 - remove 1 repeat and add note on red tick
01:10:299(5,1) - ^
01:29:899 - start spinner
01:33:099 - end spinner

Hard

00:17:099(5,6) - stack better
00:49:099 -remove 1 repeat and add note on 00:50:299
00:54:699 - ^ and NC
00:56:299 - remove NC
01:08:699 - make this combo so http://puu.sh/Abhe
01:10:899 - here NC
01:14:799 - add note
01:16:099(4,5,6,7) - correct spacing
01:28:899 - remove 1 repeat and spinner same in Insane


Good luck ^^
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