1. D.N.Angel's Hard (4.86 stars, 208 notes)
2. Easy (2.14 stars, 86 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 267 notes)
4. S h i o n's Normal (4.35 stars, 121 notes)

｜ ~ 7th Ranked Map ~ ｜
　
Easy by bossandy
S h i o n's Normal by S h i o n
D.N.Angel's Hard by DarknessAngel
Insane by bossandy

HeatKai wrote:

Source: The Law of Ueki

can i make the taiko :> ?

Frostmourne wrote:

D.N.Angel's Hard
00:38:202 (3) - I think clap at the end of slider is the great one you should try
00:43:982 (2) - clap is better for this one , no hitsound here feel empty
00:44:168 (3) - whistle at the end ? , good with above ^
01:00:201 (3) - end this slider with whistle is weird in my opinion , I think clap is better
01:03:370 (1) - any sound at the start ?
01:11:014 (4) - move down 3 grid for better spacing ,it too closes to 01:10:454 (3) - imo


Good luck Boss , S h i o n and DarknessAngel

popner wrote:

[Normal]
00:27:576 (1) - 轉盤后note要加NC，不然是unrankable的 fixed

Frostmourne wrote:

S h i o n's Normal
00:27:576 (1) - new combo here , bug fixed
01:14:929 (4) - at the start, clap+whistle makes good sound fixed
01:21:826 (1) - clap or finish maybe good for this blank spinner fixed

Good luck Boss , S h i o n and DarknessAngel

Chewin wrote:

[General]
I suggest you to use 1000 as lead-in, it's enough Oops! I use 500 instead 1000

[Easy]
00:40:067 (1) - Since there should to be a clap here: 00:40:812 you could to edit this part in this way, it fits much better the song imho:
I think it's fine for me xD
Just this suggestion, really a good map.

[Insane]
00:08:374 (4,5,6) - Improve this triangle making it larger since this is an insane: http://puu.sh/CQwq (5): x192 y216 and (6): x320 y216 ya~ fix~
00:31:677 (2) - CTRL + R it? Yep , feel better now~
Awesome map Thanks~! >w<

That's all, good luck for tank >w</ Thanks again ~!

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright andy let's see what we got. Mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun

[General]
Add opening or OP2 in the tags since this is the 2nd opening in the anime. Added :3
You should add the OP video of this anime so that people that never heard of this show might watch it by looking at the opening. I don't like video D:
All notes at the very beginning must be NCs. it's an unrankable bug as it stands. Really? fixed anyway xDD

[Easy]
It should be AR3. with the BPM slightly high, AR2 is too slow and it doesn't flow at all. ya
00:05:764 (3) - add a whistle on (3) like you did on (2) for consistency purposes. I didn't add whistle because of the music
00:11:729 (4) - Do Ctrl+H. the path might feel uncomfortable for beginners as they have to go in a sharp left turn. if you do Crrl+H, the path would look easier and it'll flow a lot smoother during gameplay. No , I want to keep it as now
00:23:661 (2) - To make it easier, make this repeat once and add a circle to replace the end. i suggest that you stack this circle on the end of (1). i think it might be easier if you do this. if you ignore this, you can put the circle anywhere you like, or you can do something similar to what i said. Fixed , But use my way to change it
00:40:067 (1,2) - To follow the vocals nicely, remove (2) and add a repeat on (1). it'll follow the long pauses in vocals a lot smoother. ik it's following drums, but since it ends at the red tick, and the note starts at the white tick, the rhythm would look weird for beginners to play IMO. No , I want keep it
00:56:472 (4) - add finishes at the beginning and at the repeat arrow. it'll match the cymbals in the song, and maybe at the end for more effect? the beginning and the repeat is that you should do it, but the end is just a suggestion. ya , nice suggetion , added
01:08:404 (3) - ^...since you added a finish at the end, do the same thing above . sure
01:24:064 (3,4,5) - make these curved sliders to give it more of a flowy feeling to the song. No change~

[Insane]
The settings should be "HP6" and "OD7". if you put HP7 with a BPM this high, the bar will quickly drain if you're not careful. No change for now , If some one say this again , I will change
00:04:272 (2,3) - Make these notes NCs. since D.N.Angel did it, why don't you do the the thing for consistency in the diffs, and instead of stacks, how about spacing these notes out a bit for more effect in the song? okay
00:08:560 (5) - with the pattern like this, i don't think it's a good idea to make this note a normal hit-hitsound. it'll ruin the pattern and it'll sound bad during gameplay. fixed
00:15:458 (1) - replace this for a stream of circles to make it fun for players. Okay
00:30:745 (3) - do Ctrl+H. you'll blanket the previous slider if you do so. Sure
00:48:083 (3) - there's cymbals on this part, so replace the whistle for a finish. yaya~
00:56:472 (1,2,3,4) - same as normal, but add finishes with the claps. Same as above
01:08:404 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same as above but just the (1)s ^
01:22:572 (1) - same as 00:15:458. Same as 00:15:458 xDD

i guess that's it. GL Thanks

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

HI 老大 \o.o Hi 小雪 \o.o

既然mapper都是華人我就不客氣使用中文了 xDD

[General]

>>tag要不要加個opening 還蠻多mapper這樣做的加了~

[Easy]

>>AR3感覺較佳 done

00:19:187 (1,2) - 互換? 感覺滑條先比較好 我感覺現在就不錯了 所以沒改 xD

[Insane]

Fine Ya~

Thanks~

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

[D.N.Angel's Hard]

00:15:551 (x) - 加circle? //不想給這diff放1/8 notes

Byakugan249 wrote:

[D.N.Angel's Hard]
Maybe increase the HP and OD by 1. i wanted this diff to be a bit of a challenge for me and other players. OD+1
00:07:628 (2) - add a finish at the end to match the cymbals in the song. //k
00:15:458 (1,2,3,4) - since the instrumental's rhythm's pace increases, remove this pattern and try this. it's 4 circles and a 1/2 slider. if you ignore this, ik you can do something similar to this. there are so many patterns i can imagine that you can come up with. if you do this, it'll be a fun diff IMO. //It is intencial that I don't want to add any 1/8 notes since it is a Hard diff
00:39:507 (2) - similar to 00:07:628. //k
00:46:778 (5) - ^ //k
01:01:692 (2) - the whistle doesn't fit with this part because of the cymbals in the song, so replace the whistle for a finish. //k
01:03:370 (1,2) - same as normal. //I followed the lyric bcz of the mapset
01:09:709 (1,2) - ^ //^
01:22:572 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:15:458. //so is it
Use your whistles sparingly in the kiai. there's some parts that fit with the song and there's others that sound weird and they don't fit...well for me that is.

Chewin wrote:

[D.N.Angel's Hard]
00:33:169 (3) - Move this slider to x:60 y:136 and make it more curver to improve the blanket with 00:32:609 (1): http://puu.sh/CQsh It seems fine ...
00:34:660 (2) - 1 grid down 1 grid right always to improve the blanket with previous slider //k
01:05:048 (4) - x:308 y:76 //k
01:06:539 (4) - Curve this slider to create a blanket with 01:05:980 (3): http://puu.sh/CQuv //k
01:09:709 (1) - Remove new combo and use nc here instead: 01:09:895 (2) //k

Cilvery wrote:

[D.N.Angel's Hard]
00:50:879 - add finish //k

Midasmens wrote:

D.N.Angel's Hard
00:10:238 (1) - 感覺在 00:10:145 這裡開始好一點~~如果是跟著vocal的話 否則有點怪怪的 //不會啊:O
00:38:202 (3,6) - 結尾都加clap~~~怎麼突然沒了 //加了一個
00:42:863 (4) - 結尾finish //恩
01:00:201 (3) - 結尾clap //恩
啊咧~ DarknessAngel居然沒做跳圖0.0
不過這排列也很不錯www 好厲害吶~~~ >3<
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Leorda wrote:

[D.N.Angel's Hard]
01:01:692 (2) - Add finish at head slider //k

-Bakari- wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
^ instead of D.N.Angel's Hard //I alway name my Hard as "D.N.Angel's Hard" >w<
00:19:559 (1) - remove new combo since it doesn't make any sense and so on.. new combos seems to be overused //because of lyric changed
00:38:762 (5) - clap //no

• • Preview Time: 51400
  • Source: The Law of Ueki

• • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • 00:25:152 (1) - End this spinner at 00:27:017 (white tick).
  • 00:56:099 (3) - Move this circle a bit up
  
  SPOILER

  

• • HP Drain Rate: 5
  • 00:15:458 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:15:831 (x) - ^
  • 00:24:966 (1) - End this spinner at 00:27:017 (white tick).
  • 00:32:609 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:33:914 (4) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:34:660 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:51:066 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:51:625 (x) - ^
  • 01:20:708 (x) - ^

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello and sorry for the huge delay That's okay :3

[General]
- Fine \:D/

[Easy]
- 01:15:486 ~ Maybe add a finish ? I use whistle instead of finish , because there is no cymbal here :3
- Very nice and clean but maybe a bit harder than most easy difficulties I will notice next time

[Insane]
- OD +1 to make everything even and nice ? Alright
- Nothing, very good I am glad to see this xDD

So overall everything is really nice, call me back

ddda9630 wrote:

good

lovhin456 wrote:

First, I apologize for all the time I took to check this Finally , you come and recheck , waiting about 1 month T^T

[Easy]
- 00:26:852 ~ This and the next section are useless ok
- 00:51:821 ~ This section is useless ok

[S h i o n's Normal]
- 00:09:151 ~ The slider should start here imo, to follow the vocals more add a note here :3
- 01:20:517 ~ Add a note here and on the next tick to follow the music? ya , but become a 1/4 slider xDD

[Insane]
- 00:35:610 ~ I really think you should add a note here You are right , added
- 01:14:927 ~ This slowdown isn't bad but it could confuse some players Hmm , I use New Combo , so I think it fine now xD

Let me bubble this after the fixes

Mafiamaster wrote:

Source name is different on Shion's. What a stupid mistake! Fixed!

[Easy]
00:40:082 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:41:573 (2) - New combo.
00:48:654 (3) - ^
00:49:026 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:51:635 (3) - New combo.
00:52:008 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:03:561 (4) - New combo.
01:03:933 (1) - Remove new combo. Nice , All fixed here

[Insane]
00:52:008 (1) - I suggest not putting a new combo in an anti-jump pattern like this. You can possibly move this farther and continue your normal spacing starting with this note. Okay

If possible, I suggest making this map harder.
Example: 00:26:666 (1,2,3) - Compare this with DNAngel's Hard. You should rival this and make your jumps bigger OR make his jumps smaller since yours is supposedly the harder of the two difficulties. I will make my another map harder >_<
And fixed this! :3

Your hitsounds are really quiet. I suggest changing your 50% volumes to around 70% volumes on all difficulties. Actually , volume +20 is too loud for me , I +10 instead of +20