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Satou Satomi & Kayano Ai - Madoromi no Yakusoku (TV Size)

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wcx19911123
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年5月23日 at 15:16:35

Artist: Satou Satomi & Kayano Ai
Title: Madoromi no Yakusoku (TV Size)
Source: Hyouka
Tags: Kyoto Animation IMAGINE Oreki Houtarou Chitanda Eru Fukube Satoshi Ibara Mayaka Nakamura Yuichi Sakaguchi Daisuke ending Nymph
BPM: 89
Filesize: 8946kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.87 stars, 91 notes)
  2. Hard (4.82 stars, 196 notes)
  3. Nymph's Normal (4.1 stars, 121 notes)
Download: Satou Satomi & Kayano Ai - Madoromi no Yakusoku (TV Size)
Download: Satou Satomi & Kayano Ai - Madoromi no Yakusoku (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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anime「氷菓」ED「まどろみの約束」

Normal by Nymph
video by AoiX

and you can find OP here : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48147
Nymph
省的你不看 我就贴在这

[Hard]
hitsound:
00:12:720 (1) - 可改finish 开头最高潮的一个音 继续whistle有些单调
00:21:989 (3) - 感觉可删 效果更好一些 没必要特别突出
00:41:034 (3) - +whistle 前面的3白线没加whistle就算了 因为比较连贯 这个单独note建议就加上
00:48:281 (2,3) - 头finish 去掉2slider的中间clap音 这里finish肯定更合曲 没必要死继续下clap
00:48:787 (3,4,5,6) - 3结尾 456可以考虑sc2clap跟鼓
01:09:349 (1,2,3) - 同00:48:281 (2,3)
01:25:697 (1) - whsitle 结尾是个高音 可以用减音whistle 比普通hit好
no kds

Download: Satou Satomi & Kayano Ai - Madoromi no Yakusoku (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [Nymph's Normal].osu
Starry_old
Mod as requested.

[General]

Clean.

[Easy]

OD + 1

00:16:765 (2) - I think you should add whistle.
00:44:405 (3) - Remove Unnecessary note ?

Everything else good.

[Nymph's Normal]

HP + 1

00:33:619 (2) - Remove this note.
00:39:012 (4) - Make the shape of the diamond.
00:39:012 (4) - Add a clap.
01:06:315 (6) - New Combo

[Hard]

00:24:854 (4) - New Combo.
00:01:259 (1) - Can you add whistle?
00:36:147 (5) - Change to whistle
00:36:652 (6) - Change to clap.

Map so gooood :cry:
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ wcx19911123 ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hard]


  1. 00:25:529 - Add clap.
  2. 00:35:304 - Add whistle.
  3. 00:48:450 - Try decrease some volume,too noisy here.

That's all ~ Nice song and mapset ~

Please accept my star ( My heart ) >///<

Good luck with rank ~
Miya
Hi wcx and Nymph~
Sweet song from Hyouka. Love this <3

General
  1. Seems fine. Good.
Easy
  1. AR-1 to balance with your HP drain?
  2. 00:14:068 (3) - I think the hitsound at the slider end is more suitable for finish since you add a finish at the 00:12:720 (1) - . The finish sound there will close your finish rythim nicely imo.
  3. 00:24:854 (3) - How about adding a finish sound at the start? I feel the music goes up there and fit with the finish sound. It synchronize too with your previous finish sound.
  4. 00:26:203 (1) - ^ but remove the clap because it doesn't sound good if it joined together?
  5. 00:35:641 (3) - I think you miss a whistle at the start. There's a gap here between your whistle rythim. And doesn't good to hear.
  6. 00:41:034 (2) - ^
  7. 00:46:428 (3) - ^
  8. 01:18:787 (2) - How about you add a finish here too? Since you have finish rythim every 2/1 note afterward but not at this one.
  9. 01:25:529 (1) - Not sure with this spinner. I think it can be hard for beginner because it's quite short. And i think it can be extended to 01:27:551- if you want to follow the guitar at the back.
Nymph's Normal
  1. AR -1 to balance toward the easy diff?
  2. 00:14:068 (3) - Same as easy, i think it's more good to change whistle into finish at the slider end.
  3. 00:44:068 (2) - This note doesn't consistant with here 00:33:281- . So it's good to remove it. At the first encounter i can't read the rythim since i think it have the same rythim with 00:33:281- . Better to remove it. Don't forget to fix the spacing if you follow this suggestion.
  4. 01:09:686 (2) - The clap sound at the slider end is really makes the drum sound at the bg very loud. It's awkward since it suddenly the volume goes very high and then decrease very low too. Better to remove it.
  5. 01:17:101 (5) - Hmm, since i hear a cymbal sound at this slider end spot, so it's better to change whistle into finish to fit with the cymbal sound.
  6. 01:18:113 (2) - If you do suggestion above, it's good to have another finish sound here at slider end.
  7. 01:24:180 (3) - It's good to add another finish sound here at slider start like wcx easy diff.
  8. 01:23:169 (1) - Hmm, since you don't have any 1/4 stack before. This stack is kind of awkward imo. Find another pattern?
  9. 01:25:529 (1) - Hmm, same as easy,maybe this slider is too short and can be extended to 01:27:551- .
Hard
  1. 00:15:416 (1) - Hmm, same as Nypmh's diff, how about you change this whistle into finish?
  2. 00:24:854 (4) - Just like easy diff, i think you need a finish here.
  3. 00:30:248 (2) - I think you need a whistle here to fix the gap between your whistle rythim. And it's have same beat with the spot you add a whistle.
  4. 00:35:304 (3) - ^ at the slider end.
  5. 01:09:854 (2) - This slider is too noisy D: What makes it so noisy? If it Nymph's case, she has a clap that makes it noisy, but you don't have anything like that. Really, it's too noisy.
  6. 01:25:697 (1) - Well, if you follow my suggestion at this spinner in easy diff. Don't forget to extend this spinner too.
Wow, really good map as usual wcx and Nymph. :)
This is really deserve a star. So please accept my star.
Good luck~
Mystica
王長喜神mapper你好

[Easy]
00:45:079 (1,2,3) - 我的錯覺么.或許你還是擺正點?
01:12:720 (2) - 爲什麽我耳機裏面
01:21:315 (2) - 確定1/3對新手沒問題么 0.0

[妮姆芙萌妹子's Normal]
不考慮用用s1-clap的那個whistle聲么

[Hard]
00:23:506 (1) - 總覺得你clap可以在這做點變化
01:13:731 (4) - 根據你風格的話這個拉到slider末尾或者跳的更大點會比較好
01:20:978 (3) - 來拉正點

神mapper請接受星
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
updated
thanks you all :3
BeatofIke
STAR~

I will mod this map later.
Aleks719
Nymph's Normal
00:23:506 (1,2) - add whistles to the reverses of these sliders please

Irc log for another stuff :
12:59  *wcx19911123 is listening to (Satou Satomi & Kayano Ai - Madoromi no Yakusoku (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48363]
13:01 <Aleks719> : only +6? okay
13:02 <wcx19911123> : I'll find some mod soon
13:02 <Aleks719> : i'll mod right now
13:06 <Aleks719> : irc will be fine?
13:08 <wcx19911123> : ok
13:08 <Aleks719> : Co., Ltd. <- not sure in these tags.
13:08 <wcx19911123> : I see
13:08 <wcx19911123> : I'll remove them
13:09 <Aleks719> : http://puu.sh/ugBc can you say without editor where is start here?
13:09 <Aleks719> : better unstack a bit in Hard..
13:10 <wcx19911123> : it can read by the approach circles in fact
13:10 <wcx19911123> : maybe a little hard to read o.o
13:10 <wcx19911123> : or I move the NC to 00:12:045 - ?
13:11 <wcx19911123> : the NC at 00:12:720 -
13:11 <Aleks719> : oh well, as example, i have been distacted a bit, for half second, looked on another side, replace head back
13:11 <Aleks719> : and have seen this, it's hard
13:11 <Aleks719> : nc would be fine
13:11 <wcx19911123> : ok :3
13:14 <Aleks719> : that's all in Hard :D
13:18 <Aleks719> : and Easy
13:21 <Aleks719> : OD+1 maybe? add whistles to the reverses here? 01:01:933 (1,1) -
13:21 <Aleks719> : 01:12:720 (2,1) - and here
13:28 <wcx19911123> : I think the Easy is easy enough, so I keep the OD a bit lower
13:26 <Aleks719> : i'm checking timing
13:35 <Aleks719> : okay, timing seems fine, but my metronome a bit "shake" in the start
13:35 <Aleks719> : maybe because of slow bpm
13:35 <wcx19911123> : maybe :3
13:38 <wcx19911123> : anything else o.o?
13:39 <Aleks719> : very interesting why & in the title
13:39 <Aleks719> : as i see in video
13:39 <Aleks719> : dot between them
13:40 <Aleks719> : http://puu.sh/ugKQ
13:40 <Aleks719> : 3rd line
13:41 <wcx19911123> : umm.. I see many maps use & when artist is not 1 person o.o
13:42 <Aleks719> : well, maybe you are right, cuz dot seems strange
13:43 <wcx19911123> : a bit strange
13:43 <Aleks719> : but it's original title.. Guess nothing else to pick.
13:43 *Aleks719 shrugs
Nymph

Starry wrote:

[Nymph's Normal]

HP + 1 actually I think current is fine :)

00:33:619 (2) - Remove this note. seems necessary for this note, I think better to keep it.
00:39:012 (4) - Make the shape of the diamond. yeah but I didn't meant to...
00:39:012 (4) - Add a clap. sounds weird imo
01:06:315 (6) - New Combo I guess this is not necessary?

Miya wrote:

Nymph's Normal
  1. AR -1 to balance toward the easy diff? actually I think ar5 is quite fine for a 4 stars normal diff, so I think I am gonna keep it.
  2. 00:14:068 (3) - Same as easy, i think it's more good to change whistle into finish at the slider end. seems better. changed it.
  3. 00:44:068 (2) - This note doesn't consistant with here 00:33:281- . So it's good to remove it. At the first encounter i can't read the rythim since i think it have the same rythim with 00:33:281- . Better to remove it. Don't forget to fix the spacing if you follow this suggestion. actually I didn't meant to have a consistant here, so I guess it is okey :)
  4. 01:09:686 (2) - The clap sound at the slider end is really makes the drum sound at the bg very loud. It's awkward since it suddenly the volume goes very high and then decrease very low too. Better to remove it. yeah a little. removed.
  5. 01:17:101 (5) - Hmm, since i hear a cymbal sound at this slider end spot, so it's better to change whistle into finish to fit with the cymbal sound. yeah seems better. changed.
  6. 01:18:113 (2) - If you do suggestion above, it's good to have another finish sound here at slider end. nah this sounds a little loud for me.
  7. 01:24:180 (3) - It's good to add another finish sound here at slider start like wcx easy diff.ok
  8. 01:23:169 (1) - Hmm, since you don't have any 1/4 stack before. This stack is kind of awkward imo. Find another pattern? yeah I always thinking of changing this. changed.
  9. 01:25:529 (1) - Hmm, same as easy,maybe this slider is too short and can be extended to 01:27:551- . actually current sounds better to follow the music. if another modder mentioned this I will consider change it though.

Aleks719 wrote:

Nymph's Normal
00:23:506 (1,2) - add whistles to the reverses of these sliders please sry but this part I don't want whistles so I think I am gonna keep this.
thanks you guys for mod!

Download: Satou Satomi & Kayano Ai - Madoromi no Yakusoku (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [Nymph's Normal].osu
Megurine Luka
/QQ

我又来打酱油了OvO/

[General]

Clear
就是错觉还不是什么,觉得音质好差啊/w\,00:42:383 (1) - 这里附近的高音都会有杂音

[Easy]

00:27:551 (2) - 感觉没拉好,不过有可能是错觉
01:09:349 (1) - SB clap么?应该是没做好还是啥的?超级突兀OTL

[Nymph]

00:47:776 (1) - 中间摆个fin?

[Hard]
00:53:843 (3) - 把这个去掉然后前面的circle与后面的slider放在同一个位置或者做个跳啥的感觉更好一些
01:09:854 (2) - T_T SB clap吓死我了

没了
Low
General

  1. The storyboarded hitsounds were really confusing and annoying to me. One of them were really loud and distracting. I think that you should just remove them.
Easy

  1. 00:07:326 (1,2,3,4,1) - Symmetry in this star is off just a bit. Here's the code for a perfectly symmetrical one.
    SPOILER
    104,176,7326,5,2
    41,269,8001,1,8
    100,356,8675,1,0
    208,324,9349,1,2
    212,216,10023,6,0,B|216:156|272:124,1,112,2|8
  2. 00:16:765 (2) - Add a whistle to the beginning of this slider.
Nymph's Normal

  1. 00:09:349 (3) - Add a whistle to the beginning of this slider.
  2. 01:17:775 (1) - Remove the whistle here.
Hard

  1. Fine.
Good luck!
BeatofIke
Still didn't find anything wrong. :( Your map is so good, it's hard to mod. Sorry for being a useless modder.

STAR~ AGAIN!

That makes 8+ Priority now. Good Luck!

PS: Your map is so easy to Flashlight.
mancuso_JM_
Ok, Let's do this. From my Queue (11 days without any kind of mods xD)

[General:]

- Nothing to poke at in here.

[Easy:]

Settings:
--> Increase the Overall Difficulty by 1 Tick, it's a bit low at the moment (OD+1)

00:01:933 (1): Remove this New Combo, because you have another (1) on a previous note and this cause confusion in New Players. I know that these notes are in 1/1 distance, but anyways cause confusion because the AR and BPM are low.
00:12:045 (3): This note is under to the Score Bar and this is uncomfortable at the hour to play the map. Try to move this note some grids down
00:19:461 (3): Add a Whistle at the beginning of this Slider, because sounds empty and the Whistle plays fine following your hitsounds patterns
00:20:810 (1): And add a Finish here, same reason as above
00:33:619 (3): Move this note 1 or 2 grids down because I don't like the little overlap by the previous Slider (1)

[Nymph's Normal:]

Settings:
--> Increase the Approach Rate by 1 Tick because plays better with the low BPM (AR+1)

00:22:158 (3): Clap on Reverse Arrow, fit perfect with music the double - Clap
01:15:922 (3): Looks weird when you play the map since this Slider is touching the HP BAR, so try to move this Slider some grids down

[Hard:]

00:16:428 (x): It's better if you add a Note here on a Red Tick. It's more predictable and plays better because your previous patterns are in 1/1, 1/2, 1/4 (where you don't have Violet Ticks). In my opinion have a better flow
01:05:641 (6): Add a Clap at Slider beginning, plays fine with the Instrumental

And, That's it.
Nice Map in General.
Good Luck ;)
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
我觉的offset可以+5~7

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
00:50:472 (1) - 00:51:484 (2) - 改成这样? http://puu.sh/urn2
00:55:866 (1,2) - ^

[Hard]
00:04:461 (7) - 00:07:158 (7) - spacing差的有点多,grid4调一下吧
00:24:012 (2,3) - 00:25:360 (5,6) - 我觉得先滑条再圈比较好,毕竟这里节奏有变化,这样也更跟音乐
01:01:765 (2) - 这里不摆的错开一些吗?和后面一样

GL~
Kawayi Rika
Recheck ~ everything fine now ~

take you my first bubble ~ >w<


Sure
Hi ;D
Here are just some hitsound mods.


[General]
Leave only Chitanda Eru(CV. Satou Satomi) and Ibara Mayaka(CV. Kayano Ai) as tags, and remove other characters' name.
There is no reason to add every characters' name except singers.


[Hard]
00:30:248 (2) - Add whistle
00:35:304 (3) - Add whistle to tail


[Normal]
Fine


[Easy]
00:30:248 (2) - Add whistle to head
00:35:641 (3) - ^
00:41:034 (2) - ^
00:46:428 (3) - ^


Good luck~

EDIT : Am I late?
HeatKai
can I ask, why the preview picture didn't show up?
Aleks719
asked some another users. Seems some of them can't see preview picture, better make full submit again~
pop before :D /grabs Rika's 1st bubble/
Kawayi Rika
But some people can see img
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