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IKU - Rimless ~Fuchinashi no Sekai~ (TV Size)

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remy11
309 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
remy11
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年7月5日 at 16:32:51

Artist: IKU
Title: Rimless ~Fuchinashi no Sekai~ (TV Size)
Source: Toaru Majutsu no Index
Tags: ending maaagic
BPM: 160
Filesize: 11314kb
Play Time: 01:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.97 stars, 69 notes)
  2. Insane (4.99 stars, 223 notes)
  3. maaagic's Hard (4.62 stars, 186 notes)
  4. Normal (3.05 stars, 99 notes)
Download: IKU - Rimless ~Fuchinashi no Sekai~ (TV Size)
Download: IKU - Rimless ~Fuchinashi no Sekai~ (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Index ED
Hard by maaagic
Last edited by remy11 , edited 41 times in total.
mercury2004
615 posts
Joined February 2010
mercury2004
Mod

Red: Means.You are breaking beatmapping rules or something that doesn't right. You should change it immediately.
Orange: Means. My Suggestion. It is okay whether you change it or not
Purple:Means. Highly Recommend you to change it.


IRC Mod
SPOILER
20:48 <remy11> : Hi
20:48 <remy11> : I was wondering if you could mod my map?
20:48 <mercury2004> : Hi
20:48 <mercury2004> : i can do it now
20:48 <mercury2004> : irc
20:48 <remy11> : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48214
20:48 <remy11> : thx!
20:49 <mercury2004> : ok let me finish this first
20:49 <remy11> : You are good modder
20:49 <remy11> : I am pooh at English
20:49 <remy11> : sorry
20:49 <remy11> : :D
20:49 <mercury2004> : its ok
20:50 <mercury2004> : I'm not that good though
20:50 <remy11> : no no, I know that you are good modder
20:50 <mercury2004> : why is that?
20:51 <remy11> : I look at your take other mod
20:51 <mercury2004> : lol
20:51 <remy11> : other map mod
20:51 <remy11> : easy understand
20:51 <remy11> : nide mod
20:51 <remy11> : nice
20:51 <mercury2004> : Thanks
20:51 <remy11> : English is very Hard
20:51 <mercury2004> : ok let me check the folder
20:51 <remy11> : Thank you!
20:52 <mercury2004> : do itashimashite
20:52 <remy11> : very well
20:53 <mercury2004> : First thing
20:53 <mercury2004> : maagic hard difficulty
20:53 <mercury2004> : remove countdown
20:53 <remy11> : okay
20:55 <mercury2004> : Folder ok
20:56 <mercury2004> : First of all Easy difficulty
20:57 <mercury2004> : 00:09:619 (1,1) - this is a bit too close
20:57 <mercury2004> : 00:11:494 end the spinner here. give some thime for beginner
20:57 <mercury2004> : *time
20:59 <mercury2004> : (nazi) 00:29:119 (1) - align this one to 00:27:619 (3) -
20:59 <mercury2004> : make the perfect triangle
21:00 <mercury2004> : 00:36:619 (1) - start the spinner here
21:00 <mercury2004> : 00:39:994 and end here
21:02 <mercury2004> : 00:50:194 (1,1) - a bit too close
21:02 <mercury2004> : ,but i think its ok
21:02 <mercury2004> : give something challenge for beginner
21:03 <mercury2004> : 01:13:444 (2) - can you move this somewhere?
21:04 <mercury2004> : its stack with 01:10:444 (4) - which is bad for Easy dif
21:05 <mercury2004> : 01:18:694 (7) - this note does not follow the song
21:05 <mercury2004> : 01:17:194 (5) - NC
21:06 <remy11> : ok
21:06 <mercury2004> : 01:18:747 (7) - move it here. seem to be the best
21:06 <mercury2004> : don't for get to fix the distance snap
21:07 <mercury2004> : *forget
21:07 <mercury2004> : thats all for easy dif
21:07 <mercury2004> : now normal
21:07 <remy11> : ok
21:08 <mercury2004> : I think AR-1 is better
21:09 <mercury2004> : 00:29:119 (5) - NC
21:10 <mercury2004> : 00:41:194 (1) - finish head?
21:10 <remy11> : Add finish?
21:10 <mercury2004> : yes
21:10 <remy11> : okay
21:12 <mercury2004> : 01:18:694 (1) - end this spinner here 01:18:694
21:12 <mercury2004> : 01:20:545 (1) - and start this spinner 01:20:638 here
21:14 <remy11> : ok
21:14 <mercury2004> : 01:20:551 (1) - end this spinner here 01:23:920
21:14 <mercury2004> : The previous one are off the music
21:15 <mercury2004> : Your Guest Dif I'll post in your forum
21:15 <mercury2004> : ok Insane dif
21:16 <remy11> : okay
21:16 <mercury2004> : (nazi) 00:17:119 (1,2) - can you fix this slider? its kinda ugly right now
21:17 <mercury2004> : 00:23:494 (4) - NC due to change in spacing
21:19 <mercury2004> : 00:30:994 (1,2,3,4,5) - It would be a lot better if you arrange like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/284351
21:21 <mercury2004> : 00:43:069 (1) - remove nc 00:43:444 (1) - this too
21:23 <mercury2004> : 01:10:819 (1) - remove NC
21:23 <mercury2004> : 01:11:194 (3) - and NC here
21:24 <mercury2004> : Overall look good already. Insane dif still need to clean some slider up
21:24 <mercury2004> : I mean make the slider looks beautiful
21:25 <mercury2004> : Ok Thats all. I'll post your guest dif mod in the forum.
21:26 <remy11> : okay
21:26 <remy11> : thanksA!
21:26 <remy11> : thanks!
21:26 <remy11> : nice mod

maaagic's Hard Difficulty
00:21:244 (1,2,3) - Please change this pattern
00:30:619 (5) - NC
00:36:244 (2,3) - Confusing hard to read. Try not to use this kind of note in hard dif. If this dif was insane then its ok
00:57:694 (5) - NC here due to change in slider speed

If this mod proved to be not helpful. Don't kudos
maaagic
433 posts
Joined October 2011
maaagic

mercury2004 wrote:

Mod

Red: Means.You are breaking beatmapping rules or something that doesn't right. You should change it immediately.
Orange: Means. My Suggestion. It is okay whether you change it or not
Purple:Means. Highly Recommend you to change it.

maaagic's Hard Difficulty
00:21:244 (1,2,3) - Please change this pattern fixed
00:30:619 (5) - NC fixed
00:36:244 (2,3) - Confusing hard to read. Try not to use this kind of note in hard dif. If this dif was insane then its ok fixed
00:57:694 (5) - NC here due to change in slider speed fixed
thanks for mod :)
remy11
309 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
remy11

mercury2004 wrote:

Mod

Red: Means.You are breaking beatmapping rules or something that doesn't right. You should change it immediately.
Orange: Means. My Suggestion. It is okay whether you change it or not
Purple:Means. Highly Recommend you to change it.


IRC Mod
SPOILER
20:48 <remy11> : Hi
20:48 <remy11> : I was wondering if you could mod my map?
20:48 <mercury2004> : Hi
20:48 <mercury2004> : i can do it now
20:48 <mercury2004> : irc
20:48 <remy11> : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48214
20:48 <remy11> : thx!
20:49 <mercury2004> : ok let me finish this first
20:49 <remy11> : You are good modder
20:49 <remy11> : I am pooh at English
20:49 <remy11> : sorry
20:49 <remy11> : :D
20:49 <mercury2004> : its ok
20:50 <mercury2004> : I'm not that good though
20:50 <remy11> : no no, I know that you are good modder
20:50 <mercury2004> : why is that?
20:51 <remy11> : I look at your take other mod
20:51 <mercury2004> : lol
20:51 <remy11> : other map mod
20:51 <remy11> : easy understand
20:51 <remy11> : nide mod
20:51 <remy11> : nice
20:51 <mercury2004> : Thanks
20:51 <remy11> : English is very Hard
20:51 <mercury2004> : ok let me check the folder
20:51 <remy11> : Thank you!
20:52 <mercury2004> : do itashimashite
20:52 <remy11> : very well
20:53 <mercury2004> : First thing
20:53 <mercury2004> : maagic hard difficulty
20:53 <mercury2004> : remove countdown
20:53 <remy11> : okay
20:55 <mercury2004> : Folder ok
20:56 <mercury2004> : First of all Easy difficulty
20:57 <mercury2004> : 00:09:619 (1,1) - this is a bit too close
20:57 <mercury2004> : 00:11:494 end the spinner here. give some thime for beginner
20:57 <mercury2004> : *time
20:59 <mercury2004> : (nazi) 00:29:119 (1) - align this one to 00:27:619 (3) -
20:59 <mercury2004> : make the perfect triangle
21:00 <mercury2004> : 00:36:619 (1) - start the spinner here
21:00 <mercury2004> : 00:39:994 and end here
21:02 <mercury2004> : 00:50:194 (1,1) - a bit too close
21:02 <mercury2004> : ,but i think its ok
21:02 <mercury2004> : give something challenge for beginner
21:03 <mercury2004> : 01:13:444 (2) - can you move this somewhere?
21:04 <mercury2004> : its stack with 01:10:444 (4) - which is bad for Easy dif
21:05 <mercury2004> : 01:18:694 (7) - this note does not follow the song
21:05 <mercury2004> : 01:17:194 (5) - NC
21:06 <remy11> : ok
21:06 <mercury2004> : 01:18:747 (7) - move it here. seem to be the best
21:06 <mercury2004> : don't for get to fix the distance snap
21:07 <mercury2004> : *forget
21:07 <mercury2004> : thats all for easy dif
21:07 <mercury2004> : now normal
21:07 <remy11> : ok
21:08 <mercury2004> : I think AR-1 is better
21:09 <mercury2004> : 00:29:119 (5) - NC
21:10 <mercury2004> : 00:41:194 (1) - finish head?
21:10 <remy11> : Add finish?
21:10 <mercury2004> : yes
21:10 <remy11> : okay
21:12 <mercury2004> : 01:18:694 (1) - end this spinner here 01:18:694
21:12 <mercury2004> : 01:20:545 (1) - and start this spinner 01:20:638 here
21:14 <remy11> : ok
21:14 <mercury2004> : 01:20:551 (1) - end this spinner here 01:23:920
21:14 <mercury2004> : The previous one are off the music
21:15 <mercury2004> : Your Guest Dif I'll post in your forum
21:15 <mercury2004> : ok Insane dif
21:16 <remy11> : okay
21:16 <mercury2004> : (nazi) 00:17:119 (1,2) - can you fix this slider? its kinda ugly right now
21:17 <mercury2004> : 00:23:494 (4) - NC due to change in spacing
21:19 <mercury2004> : 00:30:994 (1,2,3,4,5) - It would be a lot better if you arrange like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/284351
21:21 <mercury2004> : 00:43:069 (1) - remove nc 00:43:444 (1) - this too
21:23 <mercury2004> : 01:10:819 (1) - remove NC
21:23 <mercury2004> : 01:11:194 (3) - and NC here
21:24 <mercury2004> : Overall look good already. Insane dif still need to clean some slider up
21:24 <mercury2004> : I mean make the slider looks beautiful
21:25 <mercury2004> : Ok Thats all. I'll post your guest dif mod in the forum.
21:26 <remy11> : okay
21:26 <remy11> : thanksA!
21:26 <remy11> : thanks!
21:26 <remy11> : nice mod
thank you for mod and star!
I fixed it and up date now!
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
こんばんは。modさせて頂きます ;)
気に入らないmodは無視してください。


　　[General]

　　必要のない赤線や緑線があるので削除
　　resnapされていない場所があるのでresnapをする
　　

　　[Insane]

　　●　00:30:994 (1),(2),(3),(4),(5) - 星型にするならば、このような感じでどうでしょうか。
SPOILER
　　
　　●　00:40:369 (2) - resnap please
　　●　00:40:785 (3) - ^
　　●　00:40:972 (5) - ^
　　●　00:41:066 (6) - ^
　　●　00:45:506 (6) - delete clap?


　　[Hard]

　　● OD+1 ?
　　
　　他は特に問題ありませんでした。


　　[Normal]


　　● 00:00:430 (1) resnap please
　　
　　Normalも特に問題ありません。


　　[Easy]

　　● 00:00:432 - 緑線削除? いらないような気がします。
　　● 00:00:432 (1) - resnap please

短いですが以上です。
とても良い譜面だと思います！
頑張ってください :)
★
maaagic
433 posts
Joined October 2011
maaagic

Guy wrote:

こんばんは。modさせて頂きます ;)
気に入らないmodは無視してください。


　　[General]

　　必要のない赤線や緑線があるので削除 fixed
　　resnapされていない場所があるのでresnapをする

　　[Hard]

　　● OD+1 ? ok
　　
　　他は特に問題ありませんでした。

短いですが以上です。
とても良い譜面だと思います！
頑張ってください :)
★
modありがとうございます！
remy11
309 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
remy11

Guy wrote:

こんばんは。modさせて頂きます ;)
気に入らないmodは無視してください。


　　[General]

　　必要のない赤線や緑線があるので削除
　　resnapされていない場所があるのでresnapをする
　　

　　[Insane]

　　●　00:30:994 (1),(2),(3),(4),(5) - 星型にするならば、このような感じでどうでしょうか。
SPOILER
　　
　　●　00:40:369 (2) - resnap please
　　●　00:40:785 (3) - ^
　　●　00:40:972 (5) - ^
　　●　00:41:066 (6) - ^
　　●　00:45:506 (6) - delete clap?


　　[Hard]

　　● OD+1 ?
　　
　　他は特に問題ありませんでした。


　　[Normal]


　　● 00:00:430 (1) resnap please
　　
　　Normalも特に問題ありません。


　　[Easy]

　　● 00:00:432 - 緑線削除? いらないような気がします。
　　● 00:00:432 (1) - resnap please

短いですが以上です。
とても良い譜面だと思います！
頑張ってください :)
★

全て修正させてもらいました！
starもありがとうございます！
Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Sonico Makaron
Hello

[General]
use the appropriate Hitsounds of the music

[Easy]
00:09:619 (1) - add finish end spinner 00:12:619 (1) - and add finith and remove whistle i think its better
00:24:619 (3) - add finish
00:50:194 (1) - ^ end spinner 00:53:194 (1) - and add finish

[Insane]
00:00:432 (1) - add whistle
00:00:525 (2) - ^
00:00:619 (3) - add finish
00:01:182 (4) - remove clap
00:01:369 (5) - add clap and whistle beginer slider
00:01:932 (6) - remove clap
00:02:119 (1) - add clap and whistle beginer slider
00:02:494 (2) - ^
00:02:869 (3) - ^ and whistle
00:03:244 (1) - add whistle
00:03:431 (2) - ^
00:03:431 (2) - add clap beginer slider
00:03:619 (3) - add clap end slider
00:04:744 (1) - remove clap
00:05:119 (3) - add clap beginer slider and 00:05:306 (3) - remove whistle add clap 00:05:494 (3) - add clap
00:05:681 (4) - add clap end slider
00:06:244 (5) - remove clap
00:06:431 (1) - add clap and whistle
00:06:619 (3) - ^
00:07:181 (4) - remove clap
00:07:369 (5) - add clap
00:08:494 (2,4) - stack this now its look not good
00:13:931 (4) - maybe remove combo and 00:14:119 (1) - add combo?
00:14:869 (2) - if you fix ^ remove combo?
00:15:431 (1) - add combo?
00:17:119 (1) - maybe make this slider more beatiful? :D
00:37:744 (4) - 4 grid right Simmetric

just my opinion
Sry little mod :x
good luck
Thite
1,043 posts
Joined April 2010
Thite
Easy
00:00:619 (1) - finish追加
00:09:619 (1) - 00:11:869 - スピンをここまで伸ばしては？
00:16:369 (2,3) - すぺーしんぐ
00:47:194 (5) - add new combo ?
00:53:194 (1,2,3,4,1) - 左右対称におきませんか？
SPOILER
01:08:194 (1) - finish追加


Normal
00:00:432 (1,2) - スタックさせない方がいいと思います
00:00:619 (2) - スライダーのあたまにfinish追加
00:06:431 (1) - このノート消しませんか？
00:41:194 (1) - 他の難易度みたいにホイッスル追加
01:01:444 (4) - ここからnew combo
01:08:006 (1,2) - スタックさせない方がいいかな
01:08:194 (2) - スライダーのあたまにfinish追加


maaagic's Hard
00:04:181 (4) - スペーシング変えない方がいいかなって思います
SPOILER
00:05:119 (6,7,8) - ^
00:30:431 (4) - こういう風にして(1,3)みたいにしませんか
SPOILER
00:50:756 (3,4) - 少し近すぎる
00:53:194 (1,2,3) - 00:56:006 (1,2,3,4) - ここと同じような音とりした方が叩きやすいとおもいます


Insane
00:00:619 (3) - finish追加
00:03:431 (2,3) - すぺーしんぐ
00:09:244 (4) - 左に１上に１移動させて２のスライダーの終点に重ねませんか
00:37:556 (3,4,5) - new comboいれて3と4の位置入れ替えませんか
01:08:194 (3) - finish追加

がんばれー :)
maaagic
433 posts
Joined October 2011
maaagic

Thite wrote:

maaagic's Hard
00:04:181 (4) - スペーシング変えない方がいいかなって思います
SPOILER
00:05:119 (6,7,8) - ^
00:30:431 (4) - こういう風にして(1,3)みたいにしませんか
SPOILER
00:50:756 (3,4) - 少し近すぎる
00:53:194 (1,2,3) - 00:56:006 (1,2,3,4) - ここと同じような音とりした方が叩きやすいとおもいます

がんばれー :)
全部修正しました～modありがとうございます><;
remy11
309 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
remy11

AcceleratorRUS wrote:

Hello

[General]
use the appropriate Hitsounds of the music

[Easy]
00:09:619 (1) - add finish end spinner 00:12:619 (1) - and add finith and remove whistle i think its better
00:24:619 (3) - add finish
00:50:194 (1) - ^ end spinner 00:53:194 (1) - and add finish

[Insane]
00:00:432 (1) - add whistle
00:00:525 (2) - ^
00:00:619 (3) - add finish
00:01:182 (4) - remove clap
00:01:369 (5) - add clap and whistle beginer slider
00:01:932 (6) - remove clap
00:02:119 (1) - add clap and whistle beginer slider
00:02:494 (2) - ^
00:02:869 (3) - ^ and whistle
00:03:244 (1) - add whistle
00:03:431 (2) - ^
00:03:431 (2) - add clap beginer slider
00:03:619 (3) - add clap end slider
00:04:744 (1) - remove clap
00:05:119 (3) - add clap beginer slider and 00:05:306 (3) - remove whistle add clap 00:05:494 (3) - add clap
00:05:681 (4) - add clap end slider
00:06:244 (5) - remove clap
00:06:431 (1) - add clap and whistle
00:06:619 (3) - ^
00:07:181 (4) - remove clap
00:07:369 (5) - add clap
00:08:494 (2,4) - stack this now its look not good
00:13:931 (4) - maybe remove combo and 00:14:119 (1) - add combo?
00:14:869 (2) - if you fix ^ remove combo?
00:15:431 (1) - add combo?
00:17:119 (1) - maybe make this slider more beatiful? :D
00:37:744 (4) - 4 grid right Simmetric

just my opinion
Sry little mod :x
good luck
thank you for mod
I fixed all
remy11
309 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
remy11

Thite wrote:

Easy
00:00:619 (1) - finish追加 (修正)
00:09:619 (1) - 00:11:869 - スピンをここまで伸ばしては？ (修正)
00:16:369 (2,3) - すぺーしんぐ (修正)
00:47:194 (5) - add new combo ? (修正)
00:53:194 (1,2,3,4,1) - 左右対称におきませんか？
SPOILER
01:08:194 (1) - finish追加 (修正)


Normal
00:00:432 (1,2) - スタックさせない方がいいと思います (修正)
00:00:619 (2) - スライダーのあたまにfinish追加 (修正)
00:06:431 (1) - このノート消しませんか？ (修正)
00:41:194 (1) - 他の難易度みたいにホイッスル追加 (修正)
01:01:444 (4) - ここからnew combo (修正)
01:08:006 (1,2) - スタックさせない方がいいかな (修正)
01:08:194 (2) - スライダーのあたまにfinish追加 (修正)


Insane
00:00:619 (3) - finish追加 (修正)
00:03:431 (2,3) - すぺーしんぐ
00:09:244 (4) - 左に１上に１移動させて２のスライダーの終点に重ねませんか (修正)
00:37:556 (3,4,5) - new comboいれて3と4の位置入れ替えませんか (修正)
01:08:194 (3) - finish追加 (修正)

がんばれー :)
いつもありがとうございます！
助かりますー
K i R a
152 posts
Joined May 2010
K i R a
~K i R a's mod request~

Hi :D, your map at first is awesome ;), continue and you will rank it :D

NC = New Combo

General
(watched on insane):
00:41:178 - This inherit timing point changes the offset, it is very away from the song, change it for make the offset the same than before.

00:20:551 - Same ^^

Insane

00:00:432 (1,2,3) - That's incorrect, the song start 2 beat before and where you put the inherit point needed to be the white line, you dont need that inherit point, but anyway, your song haven't any place for start. Look at hard, that's what I mean.

00:02:119 (1) - Remove NC
00:02:494 (2) - NC
00:03:244 (1) - Remove NC
00:03:619 (3) - NC
00:04:744 (1) - Remove NC
00:05:119 (3) - NC
00:13:931 (1) - Remove NC
00:14:119 (2) - NC
00:17:119 (1,2) - I think this part is not following the song :( Specially (2)
00:20:869 (1) - Remove NC
00:21:431 (3) - NC
00:22:744 (1) - Remove NC
00:23:494 (4) - NC
00:25:369 (1) - Remove NC
00:26:119 (3) - NC
00:27:244 (1) - Remove NC
00:30:431 (4) - NC
00:30:994 (1) - Remove NC
00:36:431 (2) - This is 1/3, not 1/4
00:41:194 (1) - Weird spacing between stream and slider
00:43:444 (1) - Remove NC
00:43:819 (1) - Remove NC
00:44:194 (2) - NC
00:46:444 (1) - Remove NC
00:47:194 (3) - NC
00:56:006 (1) - Remove NC
00:56:194 (2) - NC
01:02:381 (3) - Stack
01:18:694 (6) - Out of rythm (cause of the song), its on blue. The song is getting slower at the end.
00:22:744 (1,2,3,4) - It misleads because you are making the player stop on a continued jump, use antijumps for that or change the beats.
00:24:431 (8) - You forgot one beat D:

maaagic's Hard
Revise your spacing, I think all the spacing is incorrect ._., use distance snap.
I cant mod more of it if you have bad spacing, sorry :(

Normal
01:11:194 (6) - NC
01:17:194 (6) - NC

Easy
00:18:619 (1,2,3) - hmm, it is a bit up than the slider, I think is a great idea moving it a bit to make it linear.
01:14:194 (3) - NC
01:18:694 (3) - Bad rythm with the offset, this slider is incorrect :(

Nothing more, the bpm is ok, the offset is ok at the start but the inherit points changes it and make it so far than the real offset. By the way, this is a good map, good luck in it ;)

Staaar :D
remy11
309 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
remy11

K i R a wrote:

~K i R a's mod request~

Hi :D, your map at first is awesome ;), continue and you will rank it :D

NC = New Combo

General
(watched on insane):
00:41:178 - This inherit timing point changes the offset, it is very away from the song, change it for make the offset the same than before.

00:20:551 - Same ^^ (Fixed)

Insane

00:00:432 (1,2,3) - That's incorrect, the song start 2 beat before and where you put the inherit point needed to be the white line, you dont need that inherit point, but anyway, your song haven't any place for start. Look at hard, that's what I mean.

00:02:119 (1) - Remove NC (Fixed)
00:02:494 (2) - NC
00:03:244 (1) - Remove NC (Fixed)
00:03:619 (3) - NC (Fixed)
00:04:744 (1) - Remove NC (Fixed)
00:05:119 (3) - NC (Fixed)
00:13:931 (1) - Remove NC (Fixed)
00:14:119 (2) - NC (Fixed)
00:17:119 (1,2) - I think this part is not following the song :( Specially (2)
00:20:869 (1) - Remove NC (Fixed)
00:21:431 (3) - NC (Fixed)
00:22:744 (1) - Remove NC (Fixed)
00:23:494 (4) - NC (Fixed)
00:25:369 (1) - Remove NC (Fixed)
00:26:119 (3) - NC (Fixed)
00:27:244 (1) - Remove NC (Fixed)
00:30:431 (4) - NC (Fixed)
00:30:994 (1) - Remove NC (Fixed)
00:36:431 (2) - This is 1/3, not 1/4
00:41:194 (1) - Weird spacing between stream and slider
00:43:444 (1) - Remove NC
00:43:819 (1) - Remove NC
00:44:194 (2) - NC (Fixed)
00:46:444 (1) - Remove NC (Fixed)
00:47:194 (3) - NC (Fixed)
00:56:006 (1) - Remove NC (Fixed)
00:56:194 (2) - NC (Fixed)
01:02:381 (3) - Stack (Fixed)
01:18:694 (6) - Out of rythm (cause of the song), its on blue. The song is getting slower at the end.
00:22:744 (1,2,3,4) - It misleads because you are making the player stop on a continued jump, use antijumps for that or change the beats.
00:24:431 (8) - You forgot one beat D: (Fixed)

maaagic's Hard
Revise your spacing, I think all the spacing is incorrect ._., use distance snap.
I cant mod more of it if you have bad spacing, sorry :(

Normal
01:11:194 (6) - NC (Fixed)
01:17:194 (6) - NC (Fixed)

Easy
00:18:619 (1,2,3) - hmm, it is a bit up than the slider, I think is a great idea moving it a bit to make it linear. (Fixed)
01:14:194 (3) - NC (Fixed)
01:18:694 (3) - Bad rythm with the offset, this slider is incorrect :( (Fixed)

Nothing more, the bpm is ok, the offset is ok at the start but the inherit points changes it and make it so far than the real offset. By the way, this is a good map, good luck in it ;)

Staaar :D
thanks for mod and star!
Jupiter
335 posts
Joined December 2010
Jupiter
Mod

[Normal]
00:06:619 (5) - NC
00:13:744 - Add Note
00:33:244 - ^
01:07:819 - ^
01:13:819 - ^

[maaagic's Hard]
00:52:819 (7) - NC
00:53:006 (1) - RNC
00:55:819 (4) - NC
00:56:006 (1) - RNC

[Insane]
00:03:244 (4) - NC
00:03:619 (1) - RNC
00:09:244 (4) - NC
00:09:619 (1) - RNC
00:30:994 (2,3,4,5,6) - 綺麗に配置
remy11
309 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
remy11

Jupiter wrote:

Mod

[Normal]
00:06:619 (5) - NC (修正)
00:13:744 - Add Note (修正)
00:33:244 - ^
01:07:819 - ^
01:13:819 - ^

[Insane]
00:03:244 (4) - NC
00:03:619 (1) - RNC
00:09:244 (4) - NC
00:09:619 (1) - RNC
00:30:994 (2,3,4,5,6) - 綺麗に配置 (修正)
ありがとうございます！
maaagic
433 posts
Joined October 2011
maaagic

Jupiter wrote:

Mod

[maaagic's Hard]
00:52:819 (7) - NC fixed
00:53:006 (1) - RNC ^
00:55:819 (4) - NC ^
00:56:006 (1) - RNC ^
modありがとうございます！！
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
yo~

General


Insane
00:01:369 (5) - x292 y380
00:02:494 (2) - x188 y40/x228 y208
00:04:181 (2) - shape of this slider can follow (1)'s shape
00:05:119 (1) - x152 y204
00:12:431 (4) - jump? you want it here?
00:12:619 (1) - delete (2) / make reverse/ use this shape
00:14:119 (1,2,3) - symmetrical somehow?
00:17:119 (1) - dafuq shape :< use 2 waypoints for each slider! it can helps!
00:17:119 (1) - fix shape as on 00:12:619 (1)
00:24:994 (1,2,2) - avoid overlap!
00:25:369 (1,2,2) - ^
00:26:119 (3) - boring shape
00:27:619 (7) - 2 waypoints (like this
00:29:119 (1) - ^
00:29:869 (3) - stack with (1)
00:31:931 (1) - shape
00:33:056 (3) - stack with (1)'s end-point
00:35:494 (1,2) - symmetrical?
00:42:694 (1,1,1) - stack them
00:53:006 (1,2,3,4) - this looks better?
00:55:069 (2,3) - symmetrical?
00:56:756 (3,4,5) - try to make them follow their shapes
01:07:069 (1) - NC here? delete new combo
01:14:756 (4) - x356 y140
01:16:256 (2,3,4) - put it in the center somehow?

Easy
more symmetrical moe things
00:06:619 (1,2,3,4) - put them in the center. and make square! :D
pretty clear rythm! try to work on shape

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

SORRY!
My school starts tomorrow. Have to go and sleep now :<
Map is nice overall. :<
I'm so sooory ;_; i can;t finish my modding

Don't eat me, please! >3<
HopaOoo
55 posts
Joined July 2009
HopaOoo
[Normal]
00:00:619 (2) - たしかのーまるはスページングは全部一緒にしないといけなかったような気するんでスページング調整（少し感覚を広げる）
01:08:006 (1) - ^
01:09:319 (3) - 01:08:006 (1)の変更にあわせてスページング調整
01:14:194 (2) - たしかのーまるはスページングは全部一緒にしないといけなかったような気するんでスページング調整（少し感覚を広げる）
01:15:319 (3) - 01:14:194 (2)の変更にあわせてスページング調整
01:18:694 (1) - スピンの終点を01:19:801にしたほうがいいかと

[maaagic's Hard]
00:17:119 (5) - NC
01:12:694 (1) - NC?

[Insane]
00:24:244 (3) - 個人的な問題かもしれませんが僕はhttp://puu.sh/pJXKこういう音取りの仕方の方がたたきやすいと思いました。
※配置は適当です
01:20:551 (1) - スピンの始点を01:20:658 (1) に。終点を01:23:979に

NoobMODです。自分は実際なにも分かっていないので全部直す必要ないと思います。
Good map!

応援してます:D
remy11
309 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
remy11

BeatHopper wrote:

[Normal]
00:00:619 (2) - たしかのーまるはスページングは全部一緒にしないといけなかったような気するんでスページング調整（少し感覚を広げる）
01:08:006 (1) - ^
01:09:319 (3) - 01:08:006 (1)の変更にあわせてスページング調整
01:14:194 (2) - たしかのーまるはスページングは全部一緒にしないといけなかったような気するんでスページング調整（少し感覚を広げる）
01:15:319 (3) - 01:14:194 (2)の変更にあわせてスページング調整
01:18:694 (1) - スピンの終点を01:19:801にしたほうがいいかと　　no changeです...

[Insane]
00:24:244 (3) - 個人的な問題かもしれませんが僕はhttp://puu.sh/pJXKこういう音取りの仕方の方がたたきやすいと思いました。 （修正）
※配置は適当です
01:20:551 (1) - スピンの始点を01:20:658 (1) に。終点を01:23:979に (修正)
ありがとうございます！
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