1. 5957 style (4.9 stars, 946 notes)

• ...pretty unmodable tbh

Jenny wrote:

...what...is...this... val made some korean gurl a sammich I guess...

• ...pretty unmodable tbh

1. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/3198 artist is ok?

1. 00:55:397 (3) - remove this note
2. 00:55:563 (4) - add here i think it's better
3. 00:56:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/285794
4. 01:00:730 (2) - this note is not needed
5. 01:22:480 (1) - 1/4 longer this slider like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/285796 it sounds better imo
6. 02:21:812 (5,6,7,8) - arrange them like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/285797
7. 02:27:145 (5,6) - ^
8. 02:57:146 (5,6) - ctrl+r?
9. 02:57:479 (7,8) - ^ feels better i think...
10. 03:03:145 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part is so crowded 0.0
11. 03:08:812 (2) - can't see this clearly
12. 03:23:145 (8) - new combo...
13. 03:53:478 - add note 0.0
14. 04:11:145 (1) - volume too low, how about this: http://up.ppy.sh/files/timing001.jpg

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue


General

1. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/3198 artist is ok?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rhapsody_of_Fire

5957 style

1. 00:55:397 (3) - remove this note
   
2. 00:55:563 (4) - add here i think it's better
3. 00:56:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/285794
4. 01:00:730 (2) - this note is not needed
5. 01:22:480 (1) - 1/4 longer this slider like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/285796 it sounds better imo
   
6. 02:21:812 (5,6,7,8) - arrange them like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/285797
7. 02:27:145 (5,6) - ^
8. 02:57:146 (5,6) - ctrl+r?
9. 02:57:479 (7,8) - ^ feels better i think
10. 03:03:145 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part is so crowded 0.0
11. 03:08:812 (2) - can't see this clearly
12. 03:23:145 (8) - new combo...
13. 03:53:478 - add note 0.0
14. 04:11:145 (1) - volume too low, how about this: http://up.ppy.sh/files/timing001.jpg

Also there is a very nice Emerald Sword ctb map, maybe you can take it for some reference = =... http://puu.sh/4euK

Good map overall, just some sliders don't fit to the music 0.0

Good luck~

• General

1. Please, capitalize Rhapsody of Fire. That's the correct name of the Artist/Band.
   
   
2. Remove from Tags "Rhapsody" because that word is already written at the Artist's name. (Source/Artist/Song's Name words count as tags). I suggest you to add to Tags: "sinfonic" "power" "metal", etc etc..you know.
   
   
3. Why did you choose that BG image? Looks like an screenshot of a game. Search for a better image. I'm feeling soooo lazy that I don't wanna search one for you, but I think that it is not difficult to find a better BG than this one.

• [5957 style]

1. 01:00:258 (1,1,1) - What's the point of adding New Combo to these 3 notes? It's unnecesary. I suggest you to remove them.
2. 01:37:812 (2) - Finish? Sounds good to me.
3. 00:54:730 (2) - Overmap. There's no "sound" so I find this note very unnecesary.
4. 01:31:146 (3,4,5,6) - I'm not sure of pointing out things about playability, because I'm not good playing Standard, but I'll say it anyways. I find this spacing way too.. ... big? .-.
5. 01:39:646 (4,5) - Overmap~ Delete this notes?
6. 02:01:146 (1) - Finish at the start of this slider?
7. 02:10:479 - Drag the start of the break here?
8. 02:21:146 (1) ~ 02:31:812 (1) - That's a really excessive overmap. This is impossible. Don't make so many streams to make everything harder and insane. They also end up covering the music.
9. 02:34:479 (1,2) - Impossible to click, to be honest.
10. 03:01:312 (6) - This note sounds off, and it doesn't seems like following something.
11. 03:07:062 (4,1) - This spacing is really.. troll. Seriously. It looks like it's placed at the next red tick instead of here. I think that it would be better if you delete this jump.
12. 03:12:312 (5) - This note isn't visible. Move it somewhere else..
    
    ..I don't want to desmotivate you in any way. I really like this song, and it would be nice if you rank this map but... uhm.. I feel a bit sad of what I'm going to say but well.. here I go: I highly recommend you a re-map. This is reaaaaaaally overmapped and that's not fun to play. Most of the sliders that you have done have really weird and ugly shapes (example: 00:55:647 (5).. 00:58:147 (1)). I have to admit that this is a really creative map. In some cases, you use those weird sliders in a more intuitive way (example: 01:23:813 (1,2)) and I like that. I like how you used the hitsounds. Sounds nice. Just try to avoid unnecessary streams.. they cover the music.
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Kei wrote:

Hello~ Uhm.. well.. I checked this map 'cause I like this song. Here's my "voluntary" mod.

• General

1. Please, capitalize Rhapsody of Fire. That's the correct name of the Artist/Band.
   
   
2. Remove from Tags "Rhapsody" because that word is already written at the Artist's name. (Source/Artist/Song's Name words count as tags). I suggest you to add to Tags: "sinfonic" "power" "metal", etc etc..you know.
   
   
3. Why did you choose that BG image? Looks like an screenshot of a game. Search for a better image. I'm feeling soooo lazy that I don't wanna search one for you, but I think that it is not difficult to find a better BG than this one.

• [5957 style]

1. 01:00:258 (1,1,1) - What's the point of adding New Combo to these 3 notes? It's unnecesary. I suggest you to remove them.
2. 01:37:812 (2) - Finish? Sounds good to me.
   
3. 00:54:730 (2) - Overmap. There's no "sound" so I find this note very unnecesary.
4. 01:31:146 (3,4,5,6) - I'm not sure of pointing out things about playability, because I'm not good playing Standard, but I'll say it anyways. I find this spacing way too.. ... big? .-.
5. 01:39:646 (4,5) - Overmap~ Delete this notes?
6. 02:01:146 (1) - Finish at the start of this slider?
7. 02:10:479 - Drag the start of the break here?
8. 02:21:146 (1) ~ 02:31:812 (1) - That's a really excessive overmap. This is impossible. Don't make so many streams to make everything harder and insane. They also end up covering the music.
9. 02:34:479 (1,2) - Impossible to click, to be honest.
10. 03:01:312 (6) - This note sounds off, and it doesn't seems like following something.
11. 03:07:062 (4,1) - This spacing is really.. troll. Seriously. It looks like it's placed at the next red tick instead of here. I think that it would be better if you delete this jump.
12. 03:12:312 (5) - This note isn't visible. Move it somewhere else..
    
    ..I don't want to desmotivate you in any way. I really like this song, and it would be nice if you rank this map but... uhm.. I feel a bit sad of what I'm going to say but well.. here I go: I highly recommend you a re-map. This is reaaaaaaally overmapped and that's not fun to play. Most of the sliders that you have done have really weird and ugly shapes (example: 00:55:647 (5).. 00:58:147 (1)). I have to admit that this is a really creative map. In some cases, you use those weird sliders in a more intuitive way (example: 01:23:813 (1,2)) and I like that. I like how you used the hitsounds. Sounds nice. Just try to avoid unnecessary streams.. they cover the music.
    _________________________________

That's all. I wish you good luck ranking this map. Keep going and improving :3

Regou wrote:

I can't download the autio file. Maybe you should do a full upload? :O

CXu wrote:

Well, yeah the map is probably overmapped. Doesn't mean the map can't be fun anyway \o\ A lot of the map is actually fairly fun to play, so yeah, good luck with the map, and here's my random kinda bad and fast ircmod thing:

SPOILER

12:51 <CXu> : 00:01:813 - this silence made think I missed the first time I played ;_;
12:52 <CXu> : 00:05:480 (4) - 1 less repeat? just because xD
12:52 <haha5957> : (looking at the editor with smile face)
12:53 <CXu> : \:D/
12:53 <haha5957> : eh, so......
12:53 <haha5957> : did the map looked likt haha0108's map?
12:53 <haha5957> : lol
12:54 <CXu> : 00:29:480 (12) - these sliders xD
12:54 <haha5957> : actually i'm fan of val
12:54 <haha5957> : so my maps must look like his
12:54 <CXu> : yeah thought so from the look of this map :p
12:54 <haha5957> : except that i'm not good as 0108 T.T
12:55 <haha5957> : btw, someone suggested me AR10 on this
12:55 <haha5957> : how do you think of it ;o;?
12:55 <CXu> : 00:22:397 (2,3) - these are very close and for me it kinda breaks the flow a bit (since the map itself is pretty fast
12:55 <CXu> : paced, having to almost stop for a triple feels a bit weird). Maybe try 0.6x?
12:55 <CXu> : also I think the AR right now is fine :p I'm not too much a fan of AR10 anyway xD
12:56 <haha5957> : same, i don't like AR10
12:56 <haha5957> : therefore i'm not fan of BD
12:56 <haha5957> : (..)
12:56 <CXu> : + it's easier to spot shapes and patterns with lower AR, making the map look prettier \:D/
12:56 <CXu> : haha BD maps are way overmapped
12:57 <haha5957> : first 3 people looked at my map and told me to remap due to it's overmapity(?)
12:57 <haha5957> : btw, post on the thread so i can kudos you
12:58 <CXu> : 00:34:147 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this part feels a bit slow compared to the rest. maybe add a note at 00:34:063 -
12:58 <CXu> : 00:35:063 - 00:35:730 - ?
12:58 <CXu> : well I dont really mind if I dont get kudos
12:58 <CXu> : :p
12:59 <CXu> : well or I can just post the chatlog later
12:59 <haha5957> : ok O.O it's just i wanna give kudos to you ;o;
12:59 <CXu> : 00:42:147 (4) - maybe new combo? since it's kind of an anti-jump
13:00 <CXu> : 00:55:647 (5) - should probably start at 00:55:480 -
13:00 <CXu> : 01:03:147 (6) - move this away? It's hard to read because it's not really a stack here
13:01 <CXu> : oh right I forgot to say, but everything I say now are random suggestions
13:01 <CXu> : feel free to ignore whatever xD
13:02 <CXu> : 01:40:479 (5,6,7,8) - this feels overmapped
13:03 <haha5957> : O.O!!
13:03 <CXu> : 02:54:396 (5) - Kinda unecessary, remove?
13:03 <haha5957> : all fixed, O.O/
13:04 <CXu> : 03:20:478 (1) - this slider with the compressed stream and shortsliders <3
13:04 <CXu> : 03:25:812 - add a note here, and make the spinner begin a bit later
13:05 <CXu> : 03:41:812 - ^
13:06 <CXu> : 03:47:812 (5) - you have a lot of these sliders with 2 repeats. Maybe make some of them sliders with 1 repeat
13:06 <CXu> : and a note?
13:06 <CXu> : the last part is overmapped and I kinda can't play it so idk what to say about it xD

iroseka wrote:

modding advice:

SPOILER

00:55:147 (1,2) - Distancing error (maybe put the #2 just beneath #1?) (these are spaced properly)
01:16:313 (4,5,6,7) - Doesn't sound too cool here. well just personal feeling :p
01:53:812 (5) - new combo? looks better
03:10:479 (1,2,3) - here. i hear a strong rapid hit in this one second. may be a series of circles can represent the feeling better. ( O.O? I don't understand T.T)

the notes separate too much that the screen is full of notes. please consider change some note's place to make it more compact and aggresive. => big spacing is concept of the map


btw, I did not actually finish the song but could only pass with no fail + half time...

Kanon wrote:

IRC MOD

12:43 <haha5957> : um, hello 'o'...?
12:44 <Kanon> : hi
12:44 <haha5957> : uh, i wish this doesnt bother you..
12:44 <haha5957> : may i ask for a test-play if possible?
12:44 <Kanon> : sure
12:44 <Kanon> : link
12:44 *haha5957 is listening to (Rhapsody of Fire - Emerald Sword)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48207]
12:44 <haha5957> : 'o';;
12:44 <Kanon> : wow
12:44 <Kanon> : old song
12:44 <Kanon> : dling
12:44 <haha5957> : O.O/
12:48 <haha5957> : you can just tell me the honest feeling of the map 'o'; if it sucked a lot, or was ok, etc..
12:49 <Kanon> : um
12:50 <Kanon> : the slider is pretty nice
12:50 <haha5957> : i need honest feelings of advanced players
12:50 <Kanon> : but spacing is not very comfortable
12:50 <haha5957> : like, streams?
12:50 <Kanon> : rhthym is a little overmapped but i think is fine
12:51 <Kanon> : w8 a sec
12:52 <Kanon> : 00:11:647 (2,3,4) -
12:52 <Kanon> : i dont quite like this kind of stack
12:52 <haha5957> : oh~~
12:53 <Kanon> : especially in mid of the stream
12:54 <haha5957> : so you don't like anti-jumps in stream?
12:54 <Kanon> : i just dont like the stack of this kind
12:54 <Kanon> : and
12:54 <Kanon> : 00:56:813 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) -
12:54 <Kanon> : i think this is very insane
12:55 <Kanon> : even for skilled player
12:55 <haha5957> : ok/
12:55 <Kanon> : 01:16:313 (4,5,6,7) -
12:55 <Kanon> : the double here imo is overmapped
12:56 <haha5957> : (works on it)
12:57 <haha5957> : btw, thanks for doing this, do you want to post this? I wanna give kudosu for this
12:57 <Kanon> : nah i am not active on mapping anymore
12:57 <Kanon> : so i dont need kudoso now..
12:58 <haha5957> : T.T
12:58 <Kanon> : if you need posted mod to reach MAT 's standard
12:58 <Kanon> : i can post for you
12:59 <haha5957> : you don't have to do it if it bothers you
12:59 <haha5957> : I just wanted give you kudosu O.O/
12:59 <Kanon> : fine
12:59 <haha5957> : to*
12:59 <Kanon> : i ll post irc mod later
12:59 <haha5957> : ok O.O/
13:00 <Kanon> : 02:22:146 (7,8) -
13:01 <Kanon> : i think this two note shouldn't be normal spaced
13:01 <Kanon> : should be stress
13:01 <Kanon> : ed
13:01 <haha5957> : stress..ed?
13:01 <haha5957> : like, almost stacked?
13:01 <haha5957> : sorry for my poor english xD
13:02 <Kanon> : yes
13:02 <Kanon> : 02:27:479 (7,8) -
13:02 <Kanon> : ……
13:02 <Kanon> : ^
13:02 <haha5957> : ...?
13:03 <Kanon> : ^ represent for same with last mod
13:03 <haha5957> : oh/
13:04 <Kanon> : 03:00:479 (1,2,3,4,5) -
13:04 <Kanon> : at least you should make 03:01:145 (5) - not stacked
13:05 <Kanon> : anyway i don't quite like this kind of slider stack
13:05 <haha5957> : (works on it)
13:05 <Kanon> : 03:21:478 (7,8) -
13:06 <Kanon> : it's very hard to read which come first
13:07 <Kanon> : so maybe you should make it more easy to read here?
13:07 <haha5957> : hm.....
13:08 <haha5957> : just keep doing 1/4 on there will give you all 300
13:08 <haha5957> : so i guess that doesnt matter O.O/
13:09 <Kanon> : 04:05:395 (7,8,9) -
13:10 <Kanon> : maybe unstack the note with the slider?
13:11 <haha5957> : O.O//
13:12 <Kanon> : ok i think that's all
13:12 <haha5957> : thanks very much <3
13:12 <Kanon> : i'll post this irc log in your map thread :3

IRC modded

Frostmourne wrote:

:D

SPOILER

21:37 <Frostmourne> : 00:07:647 (4) -
21:37 <Frostmourne> : this seems to be confused
21:38 <Frostmourne> : from its speed but repeat more than 1 time
21:38 <Frostmourne> : do you mind me If i want to mod :3 ?
21:38 <haha5957> : I would even thanks a lot xD
21:38 <Frostmourne> : no kd just some point
21:38 <haha5957> : but if you mod me, you MUST have your kudosu from me :3
21:38 <haha5957> : xD
21:39 <Frostmourne> : haha If it useful enough
21:39 <Frostmourne> : 00:16:147 (7) -
21:39 <Frostmourne> : end this at 16 480
21:39 <Frostmourne> : no need to make a repeat more than this if it has no sound
21:40 <haha5957> : ok O.O/
21:40 <Frostmourne> : 00:18:813 (5) - nc here ? looks better for me >.>
21:40 <haha5957> : also ok O.O/
21:40 <haha5957> : the first one (the 00:07:647 (4) , i will keep this //)
21:40 <Frostmourne> : oh ok you can
21:41 <Frostmourne> : if i were you I will nc here too 00:24:147 (1) -
21:41 <Frostmourne> : because it changed form of playing
21:41 <Frostmourne> : to 4 slider
21:41 <haha5957> : (works on it)
21:42 <Frostmourne> : 00:25:480 (5) - I'm kinda get trouble from this repeat slider
21:42 <Frostmourne> : over 1 time
21:42 <Frostmourne> : may be you end at 25 813 and add note after that
21:42 <Frostmourne> : might be better
21:43 <haha5957> : good idea
21:44 <Frostmourne> : 00:52:813 (5) - here too
21:44 <Frostmourne> : it cuts its flow
21:44 <Frostmourne> : and can get miss slider
21:45 <Frostmourne> : slider end at the top
21:45 <Frostmourne> : but jumping swap to down suddenly
21:45 <Frostmourne> : it is not good run for me nah =_=''
21:46 <haha5957> : ya actually i don't like repeating sliders
21:46 <haha5957> : if it repeats more then once....
21:46 <Frostmourne> : ahh yes
21:46 <haha5957> : but i used those kinds for kind of...rest for your finger?
21:46 <haha5957> : xD
21:46 <Frostmourne> : it's better if just 1 repeat and add next note instead
21:47 <Frostmourne> : oh I think not =_=
21:47 <Frostmourne> : finger will get rest but you will get annoy from that unusual slider
21:47 <Frostmourne> : I judge it as player not mapper for now haha
21:48 <haha5957> : yeah, what i need is player's opinion...
21:48 <Frostmourne> : hehe
21:48 <Frostmourne> : ok
21:48 <haha5957> : because most mappers comes to this map and REMAP!!
21:48 <Frostmourne> : 01:02:730 (1) -
21:48 <haha5957> : (saids*)
21:48 <Frostmourne> : no need to remap
21:48 <haha5957> : (says*)
21:48 <Frostmourne> : I think this can improve more
21:48 <Frostmourne> : 01:02:730 (1) - < new combo here
21:49 <haha5957> : oh yeah
21:49 <Frostmourne> : distance between (3) and (4) doesn't match
21:49 <Frostmourne> : if compared with (1) (2)
21:49 <Frostmourne> : 01:19:396 (3) - add note here
21:50 <Frostmourne> : people can get miss from this stack that looks like on blue tick
21:51 <haha5957> : um?
21:51 <haha5957> : already is a note there i think
21:51 <Frostmourne> : ohwait me
21:51 <Frostmourne> : 01:19:396 (3) - I mean this point ya
21:51 <Frostmourne> : emm
21:51 <haha5957> : oh~
21:51 <Frostmourne> : add on blue tick also keep red tick too
21:51 <Frostmourne> : will be 3 stream here
21:52 <Frostmourne> : 01:23:147 (3) - this slider again =_= sorry
21:52 <haha5957> : haha xD 2 repeats
21:52 <haha5957> : i will change some, and keep some about those
21:53 <Frostmourne> : haha it depends on you
21:53 <Frostmourne> : oh I forgot it
21:53 <Frostmourne> : 00:28:147 (4) -
21:53 <Frostmourne> : new combo here
21:53 <Frostmourne> : 00:28:647 (1) - here too
21:53 <Frostmourne> : 1 2 3 1 2 3 looks better so much
21:53 <Frostmourne> : 00:29:147 (1) - same
21:54 <Frostmourne> : 01:31:146 (1) - same because of this note is the first note to run 1 2 3 4 different from last (1) (2)
21:56 <Frostmourne> : add here too 01:58:479 (5) - for notice this is not 1/4 note this is anti jump
21:56 <Frostmourne> : 02:04:479 (3) - same reason
21:56 <haha5957> : all excepted :O
21:58 <Frostmourne> : 03:12:312 (5) -
21:58 <Frostmourne> : look hard from that hiding
21:58 <Frostmourne> : try move 3 a bit
21:58 <Frostmourne> : move up
21:59 <haha5957> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/287962
21:59 <haha5957> : would this be better?
21:59 <Frostmourne> : actually , it's ok for insane
22:00 <Frostmourne> : and that's better too
22:00 <Frostmourne> : oh i feel it
22:00 <Frostmourne> : while playing that
22:00 <Frostmourne> : 03:55:145 (1) - after this note
22:00 <Frostmourne> : you quite overmapped it
22:00 <Frostmourne> : imo
22:01 <Frostmourne> : it doesn't follow its sound much
22:01 <Frostmourne> : only this part that notice me
22:01 <Frostmourne> : rest note more than this would be good :3
22:01 <haha5957> : ah ..that last part
22:01 <Frostmourne> : but , you want last part to be kiai part
22:02 <Frostmourne> : I think it's ok for now
22:02 <haha5957> : everyone agreed about the last kiai's overmap
22:02 <haha5957> : but I would like to keep that untill any BAT comes and calls it unapprovable or something
22:02 <Frostmourne> : hmm I think because that isn't follow music much
22:02 <haha5957> : cuz i usually map last parts much harder then rest of the parts

Jenny wrote:

...what...is...this... val made some korean gurl a sammich I guess...

• ...pretty unmodable tbh