1. Cristian's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 813 notes)
2. Easy (2.26 stars, 151 notes)
3. Hard (4.91 stars, 345 notes)
4. Lissette's Insane (5 stars, 434 notes)
5. Normal (3.39 stars, 186 notes)

My First Ranked Beatmap

eLtigreXXx wrote:

holai request from HydeSama & tigreXXx's Loli-nyan modding queue ~ ~

general

bien las dificultades tienen que ser iguales
tienen que empesar i terminar en el mismo sitio
tambien los descansos

kai time 1 empiezo 00:28:239 y fin 00:40:102
kai time 2 empiezo 00:41:585 y fin 00:53:447
kai time 3 empiezo 01:52:762 y fin 02:04:624
si quieres mantener eso tiene que estar en todas las dificultades y

varios inherited points estan fuera de lugar D: vuelve a travarlos es
en todas las dificultades

utiliza AImod (control+shift+A) te puede ayudar mucho en el espaciado
el nombre del fondo tiene que ser BG
en tag considera agregar "kratozfreak"
yo te sugiero que continúes la canción asta 02:52:450


hard
slider Tick Rate tiene que ser 1
00:29:536 (4) nuevo combo
00:32:502 (4) ^
00:35:653 (7) ^
00:43:067 (7) ^
00:44:180 (6) ^
00:45:292 (4) ^
00:50:482 (7) ^
00:56:413 (8) ^
01:38:860 (9) ^
01:53:874 (4) ^
01:16:802 siento que es mejor si quitas el descanso y continúes esa
parte así como en la normal i easy

normal
slider Tick 1
00:51:882 (6) nuevo combo
01:11:242 (4) ^
01:13:837 (5) ^
01:56:098 (6) ^

Easy
slider Tick 1
00:26:015 remueve el nuevo combo

pero va bien

1. Songfolder - mp3Length - You need to cut a song. ( about 02:16:861~end )
   
   this is the Rule

   You must cut your mp3 if you're using less than 80% of it. This doesn't count intro time, and thus only applies if more than 20% of the outro is unmapped. If you only plan to map a portion of your song, then including the full mp3 is a waste of file space. Many mp3 editing tools like this exist which make fading and cutting a song simple. However, if you have a legitimate reason for keeping your full mp3 (e.g. a storyboard after the map ends), then that is fine.
2. Songfolder - You have two osb.file. Nightcore - (xincrin32).osb - This does not have a meaning. It is better to remove it.
3. Song Setup - Tags - add kratozfreak , agussdg in all diff ( maybe hard,insane diff is guest diff? name of the guest has to put it )
4. Song Setup - combo colors - You should unify all diff. (They are similar in color using a diff of all. It is recommended that you use a color with a consistency) ↓code ( easy,normal used )
   
   SPOILER

   Combo1 : 128,255,0
   Combo2 : 255,255,0
   Combo3 : 255,128,64
   Combo4 : 128,255,255

5. Song Setup - Storyboarding - Enable countdown - Do you want this? You must unify all diff if you want it. or Please uncheck if you do not want it ( Now setting:easy,normal...checked. hard,insane...not checked )
6. Song Setup - audio Lead-in - Easy,Normal diff 3000ms is too long imo. change to 3000→2000ms. my suggestion
7. KIAI TIME - 00:41:585~00:53:447 - It looks like do not need.

1. Slider tick rate 3 o.o? I watch this for the first time. maybe unrankable ?
2. Since the map does not seem to have completed yet, so sorry, can not be mod

agussdg wrote:

no sabes lo que me paso >.< rebaje el map porque cambiaste el sb creo y perdi mis avances D: desp te paso para actualizar cuando lo rehaga

[Yue] wrote:

Animo Xin!! ya quiero ver este mapa rankeado x3

da lo mejor de ti n.n

1. Agrega lo siguiente a los tags :
   
   lissette agussdg
   
   - Son necesarios porque colaboraron con 2 guest diffs No kd y Espera mi Mod completo !!

[Te][Amo] wrote:

1. Agrega lo siguiente a los tags :
   
   lissette agussdg
   
   - Son necesarios porque colaboraron con 2 guest diffs No kd y Espera mi Mod completo !!

*

espiritur00 wrote:

No la modee pero ahi te lanze una estrella xD

Verdisphena wrote:

General

La resolucion de BGAGUSSDG.jpeg, BGLISSETTE.jpeg debe ser 1024 x 768
Tienes 2 BG de taiko en la carpeta el mapa, y solo usas uno, elimina el otro
Tienes varios kiais que estan desordenados en cada diff, se supone que todos los kias tienen que estar en el mismo lugar, en todas las diffs (menos en la de taiko)

Lissette's Insane
AR +1

00:26:941 (2,4) - Ctrl + R ?
01:13:466 (5,6) - No creo que esto sea rankeable
01:19:397 (5) - NC
01:22:363 (5) - ^
02:09:447 (6) - ^
02:15:378 (6) - ^
02:27:797 (1) - Quita ese NC

AB Style
No me gustan los whistles del comienzo, no siguen nada

00:40:287 (1) - Finaliza este slider en 00:41:214 -
02:02:771 (11,12,13) - Por que esos 1/8?, no siguen nada, mejor remplazarlos por otra cosa

Hard
Por que aqui no se ve el bg?

00:52:706 - ~ 00:53:447 - Mappea algo aqui
02:39:104 (7) - Esta nota toca la HP BAR

Normal

00:16:376 (1) - welp, este slider no es simetrico, si no sabes hacer sliders complejos te recomiendo no hacer cosas muy complejas
... no me gusto esta diff

Easy

02:46:518 (1,2) - Sliders feos, lo mismo que el normal


Bueno, este mapa necesita ayuda, no puse muchas cosas, solo las mas importantes, pero aun asi necesita ayuda. Podrias probar mas con los hitsounds y no repetir siempre el clap.
Suerte

1. 00:18:230 (9) - d
2. 00:21:195 (21) - d
3. 00:21:381 (22) - k
4. 00:21:566 (23) - Erase this note.
5. 00:23:605 (30) - d
6. 00:23:976 (32) - k
7. 00:24:161 (33) - d
8. 00:24:346 (34) - d
9. 00:24:532 (35) - k
10. 00:30:834 (70) - k
11. 00:32:131 (77) - d
12. 00:36:024 (102) - d
13. 00:39:916 (126) - d
14. 00:40:102 (127) - D
15. 00:48:535 (x) - Add a note (''k'').
16. 01:15:134 (291) - d
17. 01:16:432 (298) - D
18. 01:22:734 (337) - k
19. 01:53:503 (491) - d
20. 02:11:949 (x) - Add a note (''k'').
21. 02:35:397 (705) - d
22. 02:39:846 (732) - D
23. Crei ver unos Copy-paste por alli? o3o

winber1 wrote:

Lissette's

00:18:971 (1) - doesn't seem to be necessary there is a sort of chimey background, but nothing major happens here imo to provoke a new combo. (same goes for all the other times you use this type of new combo, but I guess that's just me) meh nvm. it seems to work fine, and you are seemingly consistent with it, so yea.
00:23:790 (1,2,3,4,5) - meh make symmetrical?
00:29:536 (6) - may work better to do something like this http://puu.sh/MTTb (where combo 6 has a new combo and is stacked on top of 00:30:463 (5) -) it just seems to fit better since this is where the vocals begin
00:32:502 (4) - ^? similar idea
00:46:033 (4) - new combo (for the echo?)
00:51:965 (4) - ^
01:06:978 - why no note here D:
01:09:944 - ^
02:41:885 (5) - similar to 00:29:536 (6) -
02:51:708 (6) - center it...? some reason it seems like a new combo would fit, but idk, up to you

AB Style

00:16:376 (1,2,3) - this really doesn't make sense to me if you are going to do this 00:19:342 (1,2,3) - I would rather they either be a different shapped pattern, or you make the spacing the same. (probably a good solution would be to make 00:17:674 (4,5,6,7) - those notes have the same spacing as 00:19:342 (1,2,3) - , or just change the spacing of the whole combo 00:16:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - )
00:22:307 (1,2,3) - move back 1/2 tick and add a note at 00:22:493 -
00:31:390 (2,3,4) - note straight
00:39:360 (7) - i'd add a new combo here. fits the stream more imo.
00:40:287 (1) - end on 00:41:214 -
00:43:994 (7,8,9) - not straight
01:53:132 (5,6,7) - consider how you made your patterns before, this just looks weird.
01:58:137 (6) - works better and is more readable imo if you removed two repeats and added a note at 01:58:508 -
01:59:064 (9) - new combo
01:59:991 (1) - remove combo
02:01:473 (9) - new combo
02:00:361 (7,8) - doesn't work very imo. the note at 02:00:547 - needs to be mapped, but that's just me
02:02:771 (6,7,8) - a little hard to read due to the fact these sliders are all the same length on the screen but different length in rhythm. I would also add a new combo on 02:02:771 (6) -
02:03:976 (1) - end at 02:04:624 -
02:05:369 (2) - end on the red tick
02:07:779 (10) - new combo
02:10:559 (5) - ^
02:12:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - you haven't really used jumps this big before, it's a little sudden (also it's not symmetrical D:)
02:28:724 (1,2,3) - move back 1/2 tick and add a note at 02:28:910 -
02:34:285 (9) - for consistency purposes, you should add a new combo here and remove the combo at 02:34:470 (1) - (or change the other place)
02:39:846 (7,1) - not the best use of a jump imo. I would move them closer

Hard

00:18:415 (5,6) - too many extra notes here imo :/
00:25:087 (8,9,1,3) - move to the center
00:31:575 (2,3,4) - small spacing discrepancy
00:33:429 (8) - move this note down a bit to make the spacing correct.
00:33:985 (1) - remove combo
00:44:365 (9) - new combo and remove combo at 00:44:550 (1) -
00:45:662 (2) - new combo (anti-spacing may be the best for this diff 1) because you immediately leave the new spacing, 2) slow AR 3) you've used consistent spacing pretty much through the song. It may be a little hard for not as experienced players to read this.)
01:27:553 (7) - lol so low
01:55:357 (3,4,5) - spacing
01:58:508 - add note
02:11:301 (3,4) - space further apart
02:38:733 (6,7) - spacing
02:39:475 (1) - remove combo for consistency purposes


Normal

--there seems to be a little difficulty gap between hard and normal

00:36:395 (4,1) - it's a small spacing discrepancy but in normal/easy diffs i just like it better if you were more exact with spacing
01:26:070 (5) - new combo
01:34:226 (5,1) - may be a little deceiving. newer players often panic on these long rhythmically stacked notes and play them too fast. Not a big problem if you keep it tho since it's a Normal diff.
02:06:852 (4,5,6) - spacing
02:20:383 (3,4,5) - this rhythm may be a little hard to read and unexpected... maybe use sliders. http://puu.sh/MUn9 <--just a really quickly done pattern that may work better
02:24:647 (3,4) - spacing

Easy

meh sorry getting tired lol just gonna really quickly look at this.

01:31:260 (4,5) - spacing
01:34:226 (6) - new combo
02:48:001 (2,3) - avoid stacking like this in easy

the mod for diff took legitamately 30 seconds just to quickly browse through so sorry. I usually don't mod that many anways when the map is this long. I usually stop at the 10 minute mark (as in 10 minute draining time, which would have been at the Normal difficulty approximately)

And sorry for taking so long for getting you this mod.

Hope this helps a bit. meh i might have some stupid things in there as I was kinda not paying as much attention as I could have probably.

ezek wrote:

De mi modding queue.

Se ve bien para mi, te dejare 2 estrellas!

kikones34 wrote:

No quiero ser un maníaco de la ortografía, pero las dos únicas frases de la SB tienen errores

01:30:333 Tu sentiràs el meu amor
01:36:079 La melodia del meu cor

Anyway, buen trabajo !

Lissette wrote:

http://puu.sh/MWr1

My fixes, thanks for modding guys~

• 
  00:23:790 (3) - add whistle to the end of slider? like in 00:19:342 (1,2,3,4) and 00:16:376 (1,2,3,4)
  00:33:429 (5,1) - this spacing do a troubles for me
  00:39:360 (3) - remove finish from the begin and repeat?
  01:14:207 (5) - nc?
  01:32:743 (1) - nc and remove nc from 01:34:226 (2) - ?
  02:51:708 (6) - nc and remove it from 02:52:450 (1) - ?

• 
  00:16:376 (1) - do it more pretty
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:19:342 (1) - maybe you can do it like this?
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:06:793 (3) - do it symmetrical, please
  01:26:070 (1,2) - delete whistles from the tales of this sliders

• 
  00:39:360 (5) -
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:50:482 (1,1) - no-symmetrical sliders in this symmetrical part looks bad
  00:51:965 (3) - nc?
  01:11:983 (2,3) - like in 00:50:482 (1,1)
  01:27:924 (8,9,10) - check spacing here
  01:57:025 (6) - nc?
  02:24:832 (4) - delete this beat?

• 
  00:39:360 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - i think that this sream needn`t here, cuz it is overmap
  01:25:885 (12) - nc?
  02:00:361 (4) - delete whistle from the tale?
  02:02:771 (11,12,13) - 1\6 sliders o_O

• 
  00:18:971 (6) - nc?
  00:21:937 (6) - ^
  00:24:902 (6) - ^
  00:27:868 (6) - ^
  02:25:388 (7) - ^
  02:36:880 (1) - it touches HP Bar

tiper wrote:

[Easy]

• 
  00:23:790 (3) - add whistle to the end of slider? like in 00:19:342 (1,2,3,4) and 00:16:376 (1,2,3,4)
  00:33:429 (5,1) - this spacing do a troubles for me
  00:39:360 (3) - remove finish from the begin and repeat?
  01:14:207 (5) - nc?
  01:32:743 (1) - nc and remove nc from 01:34:226 (2) - ?
  02:51:708 (6) - nc and remove it from 02:52:450 (1) - ?

[Normal]

• 
  00:16:376 (1) - do it more pretty
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:19:342 (1) - maybe you can do it like this?
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:06:793 (3) - do it symmetrical, please
  01:26:070 (1,2) - delete whistles from the tales of this sliders

[Hard]

• 
  00:39:360 (5) -
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:50:482 (1,1) - no-symmetrical sliders in this symmetrical part looks bad
  00:51:965 (3) - nc?
  01:11:983 (2,3) - like in 00:50:482 (1,1)
  01:27:924 (8,9,10) - check spacing here
  01:57:025 (6) - nc?
  02:24:832 (4) - delete this beat?

[AB]

• 
  00:39:360 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - i think that this sream needn`t here, cuz it is overmap
  01:25:885 (12) - nc?
  02:00:361 (4) - delete whistle from the tale?
  02:02:771 (11,12,13) - 1\6 sliders o_O

[Lissette]

• 
  00:18:971 (6) - nc?
  00:21:937 (6) - ^
  00:24:902 (6) - ^
  00:27:868 (6) - ^
  02:25:388 (7) - ^
  02:36:880 (1) - it touches HP Bar

Katty Pie wrote:

hi from my mod Q.

• If you use circle skin add sliderborder aftercolors in file .osu http://puu.sh/x2Oe
• In skin you should add file sliderfollowcircle.png for slider skin
• all BGs should be 1024x768
• will be better if on all diff's will be identikal kiai times

AB Style

00:22:122 - http://puu.sh/NBO5 sounds better
00:25:088 - start spinner here
00:39:360 - NC
00:40:287 - better remove this spinner not sound here ot end on white tick
00:48:257(4) - make more symmetric http://puu.sh/NBPX
00:52:984 - add note
01:46:367 - remove unused green line

Hard

01:20:324 - better remove this note, will be sounds good
01:59:434(1,2,3) - correct spacing plz ;w;
02:24:276 - 1 grid up for symmetry with slider 2

Normal

00:56:413 - remove unused green line
01:32:002 - http://puu.sh/NC2V i t' will be sounds better and betterfollow the music
02:04:624 - remove unused green line

Good luck~~

Guy wrote:

request via in-game
you can ignore my suggestion


　

Lissette's Insane

　●　00:17:859 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - all note 1grid left? (You make it even with the center line)
　
　Good.

　

AB Style

　
　●　00:22:307 (1,2,3) - It doesn't not match song. move 00:22:122 all note?
　●　00:19:527 (2) - remove note? or change slider biginning 00:19:342 , end 00:19:712.
　●　00:21:381 (9) - remove note, and 00:21:566 (10) move 00:21:381.
　●　00:24:161 (10) - move 00:24:346. and slider end is 00:24:532.
　●　00:24:161 - If you use the suggestion mentioned above, add note here.
　●　00:30:463 (1) - remove NC
　●　00:31:390 (2) - NC
　●　00:35:282 (4) - more curve.↓

SPOILER

　●　00:39:360 (1) - NC?
　●　00:40:287 (1) - spinner end is 00:41:214.
　●　00:57:803 - what this green line? lol　 remove it.
　●　01:03:056 - ^
　●　01:05:032 - SV:x1.00 and resnap green line.
　●　01:05:564 - remove green line.
　●　01:07:720 (1) - remove NC
　●　01:08:461 (3) - NC
　●　01:10:871 (1) - remove NC
　●　01:11:056 (2) - NC
　●　01:19:768 (1) - remove NC
　●　01:19:953 (2) - NC
　●　01:26:070 (13) - ^
　●　01:27:553 (1) - remove NC
　●　01:29:036 - remove green line.
　●　01:46:372 - ^
　●　02:07:964 (11) - NC
　●　02:08:891 (1) - remove NC

　

Hard

　●　00:28:054 - remove green line.
　●　00:56:413 - move 00:53:447.
　●　01:20:510 (2) - spacing
　●　02:03:142 (3) - 1grid right
　●　02:25:017 (1) - spacing..
　●　02:32:061 (2) - ^

That's all~
GL

OtakuRock95 wrote:

Hola Xin-kun!
Aquí Esta Mi Mod!

Esto es en la easy:


　●　01:15:605 (3) Este slider arreglalo un poco http://puu.sh/NLFv OK
　●　00:26:756 (4) Lo mismo solo dale forma http://puu.sh/NLMg OK
　●　00:24:104 (4) porque no subes un poco este circle es solo una sugerencia vale. http://puu.sh/NLQg NO
　● 02:20:568 (2) Agrega Aquí un circle quedaría bien http://puu.sh/NM08 NO
　●　02:07:964 (1) Dale forma a tus sliders http://puu.sh/NM9u OK
　
-Una pequeña sugerencia en los Hitsounds combinalos y no uses mucho el aplauso.

Todo Lo Demas Lo Veo Muy Bien :3!

Exelente Mapa , Te Deseo Mucha Suerte! ~
Pronto Estara RANKEADO Ya Lo Veraz

ikari_kyon wrote:

sdfasdfasf bueno

[Easy]

1. 00:26:756 (4) - me encantaria que el inicio del slider tuviera un soundset normal, va muy bien con el bajo de la cancion, vuelve al soft soundset para que el slider no suene muy raro, ah no espera tienes el slider body silenciado, tons no hay mucho lio
2. 00:28:239 (1) - mas adelante usas casi todos los sliders de 1/1, tal vez acortar este y agregarle un repeat
3. 00:33:429 (5) - el finish marca una seccion de vocales, lo se, pero no estas usando finish en notas similares mas adelante, usalas mas frecuentemente o simplemente quita este finish para que no quede tan fuera de lugar
4. 01:29:036 - perv e.e
5. 01:53:874 (2,3,4) - la formacion simetrica esta muy bien, pero los espacios vacios que quedan se sienten muy mal, rellenalos con algunos sliders, se que haras una linda formacion
6. 02:10:559 (4) - no slider? suena muy solitario
7. 02:46:518 (1) - clap al final?
8. 02:48:743 (3) - spacing error

[Normal]

1. 01:17:173 (1) - ahm stackea el final de este slider al inicio de 01:15:320 (3)?
2. 01:14:207 (1) - porque cambiaste a x1,0 de spacing o:?
3. 01:18:285 (2) - error de spacing
4. 01:19:768 (4) - ahora x0,9 de spacing x:
5. 01:35:709 (2,3) - creo que los finales de estos sliders suenan mejor sin hitsounds, queda mas limpio
6. 02:47:259 (2) - queda un poco chueco comparado al anterior, revisa la direccion que tiene

[Taiko]

1. 00:33:244 (85,86,87,88,89,90) - creo que el 4 - 2 no se ajusta muy bien aca, no me suena que acompañe a nada y no es una buena opcion de variacion de ritmo en esta parte, tal vez solo borrar 00:33:336 (86) - para dejar 2 dobles aqui y alla, o mover 00:33:522 (88) - al siguiente tick rojo para dos triplets

y no hay mucho que decir, no me gusta mucho la manera en que estan los katsu, debido a mi estilo de juego (color por mano) la mano con la que tapeo los katsu siempre se mueve igual y meh

[Hard]

x; bg

1. 00:42:326 (3) - tal vez hacer una copia de 00:41:585 (1), la curva no se ve demasiado bien con el arco de arriba
2. 00:53:077 (2) - hmm, tal vez un 40%~ de volumen? no esta tan lindo el 1/4 aca y cambiar el timeline soft a normal en 00:53:447 y un finish al final soporta esta parte
3. 01:11:983 (2,3) - bajalos 1 grid para que no se topen con 01:11:242 (1)
4. 01:53:503 (5) - no finish, el exceso en esta parte no suena muy bien
5. 01:58:693 (3) - ~ obviamente las canciones naicor tienen estas partes en las que puedes empezar un patron de claps :s

[ABwut]

1. 00:14:801 - revisa que las timelines verdes esten snapeadas correctamente y no puedo entender el porque del speed up :s
2. 00:22:307 (1,2,3) - el 1/4 deberia estar en el anterior vocal o.o porque esta aqui?
3. 00:39:360 (7) - nuevo combo? queda muy largo esto x:
4. 01:55:913 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - se que los naicor tienen streams aleatorios, pero esto es demasiado x.x
5. 01:57:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ↑~
6. 02:00:361 (4) - el whistle en el cuerpo del slider suena ahm, no tan bien, me agradaria que no usaras whistles aqui
7. 02:02:771 (11,12,13) - de nuevo, no entiendo el porque del 1/8, ademas (11) deberi empezar en 02:02:956, suena mucho mejor, agrega una nota donde este comenzaba y quita un repeat a 02:03:698 (13), creo que podras sentir la diferencia
8. 02:11:857 (9) - whistles~ =w=
9. 02:28:539 - comienza el stream con los vocales porfavor, es mas razonable que el actual, 02:34:470 (1,2,3) - asi

[Lissete]

1. 02:03:142 (4) - ahm, tal vez bajar el volumen del inicio del slider a 40%~ el finish esta un poco alto

1. Song filder - BG.jpg - File size is too big(2.25MB) Please reduce it. http://puu.sh/OfTt
2. Song folder - soft-sliderslide.wav - file size 0byte. this is unrankable. you are using normal-sliderslide.wax(44byte) so copy this, and please change the name
3. Song folder - spinnerskin - It is necessary to prepare a set. ( need: spinner-clear.png and spinner-spin.png and spinner-osu.png ) If you do not have a material, please add the default
4. Song Setup - colors - Why does only hard diff have sliderborder color? Also added to the other diff or remove this
5. Song Setup - Tags - Please make all it the same. (It is also the difference of the order.)
   maybe Lissette's Insane tags - Kurisuchianu Lissette Agussdg⇒ change to agussdg lissette Kurisuchianu
6. KIAI TIME - 00:41:585~00:52:706 - I think this is not necessary. I suggest addition instead: 01:05:310~01:16:432. and 01:17:173~01:29:036.

1. AR,OD +1 balance between the normal diff
2. 01:31:260 (4) - add NC and 01:32:743 (1) - remove NC and 01:34:226 (2) - add NC
3. 01:55:727 (5) - add NC i think too log NC in easy x.x
4. 02:01:659 (5) - ^
5. 02:10:559 (4) - add clap instead to whistle
6. 02:14:637 (3,1) - spacing too close. better to use DS1.0x
7. 02:22:793 (3) - add NC and 02:24:276 (1) - remove NC
8. 02:32:061 (1,2,3,4,1) - better to using the same DS
9. 02:37:992 (2,3) - remove whistle to repeat of the slider. I think If you want to use the whistle, and you should put in more constant. I thought it will come suddenly whistle, and I do not need
10. 02:41:328 (3,4) - spacing too close. better to use DS1.0x
11. 02:45:036 (4,1) - ^ far
12. 02:48:743 (3,4) - spacing too close. For beginners, this is very confusing. plz use DS1.0x
13. 02:49:484 (4) - add NC and 02:51:708 (1) - remove NC
    
    rhythm is good. However, I think that it is slightly difficult for easy x.x DS probably is too wide. I thought that 0.8 was enough

1. Slider velocity same as easydiff It is still acceptable. but DS is narrower than easydiff.(easy:1.0x, normal:0.9x) This is not recommended
   I recommend to up more than 1.0 slider velocity (1.1 or 1.2)
2. OD -1 (and HD-1) balance between the easy diff
3. 00:16:376 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. (It is easy to have)
4. 00:28:239 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
5. 00:50:482 (2) - remove whistle to repeat of the slider
6. 01:23:104 (1) - remove whistle to end of the slider
7. 01:42:382 - http://puu.sh/OoGS this break time start move to 01:41:084. ( same as other diff )
8. 01:55:727 (5) - add NC
9. 02:02:585 (1) - i think too short spinner in normal. It is recommended that you change to something
10. 02:04:624 - 3rd kiai end here ( same as easy,hard diff )
11. 02:04:999 - Overlapping red and greenline. plz remove green line.
12. 02:17:047~ - remove this break time. is unnecessary because it is too short
13. 02:21:310 (4,1) - dose not match a little. my suggest: http://puu.sh/OoQI
14. 02:37:621 (4) - add NC
15. 02:43:552 (5) - ^
16. 02:49:484 (5) - ^
17. 02:50:410 (1) - spinner start 02:50:967. and 02:50:596 - add note. is better
    
    DS is a little bad. 0.9x and 1.0x have been mixed. it is better aligned~

1. 00:16:376 (1) - remove NC i think no need NC
2. 00:19:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - In the same way as here (00:16:191 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) -. 00:22:122 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ) Try to match the vocal? for ex: http://puu.sh/OP6R
3. 00:22:122 (8) - Placement of the NC, look is not good add NC here and 00:25:273 (1) - remove NC is better
4. 00:25:087 (8) - ^ add NC and 00:25:273 (1) - remove NC
5. 00:33:985 (9) - ^ add NC and 00:34:170 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:39:175(x) - Because there is a vocal here, 00:39:360 (5) people might mistake the timing this. so i suggest: http://puu.sh/OPeR
7. 00:44:550 (2,1) - I think that DS is close
8. 00:50:111 (6) - add NC and 00:50:482 (1) - remove Nc and 00:51:779 (3) - add NC and 00:51:965 (1) - add NC
9. 00:53:077 (2) - Does not match rhythm. try like this: http://puu.sh/OPiX
10. 01:22:919 (6) - add NC and 01:23:104 (1) - remove NC
11. 01:27:553 (7) - add NC ?
12. 01:31:631 (5) - change to repeat slider? vocal follow
13. 01:32:928 (6) - add NC and 01:33:114 (1) - remove NC
14. 02:02:956(x) - i want to put note here x.x
15. 02:06:111 (7) - add NC and 02:06:296 (1) - remove NC
16. 02:31:504 (9) - add NC and 02:31:690 (1) - remove NC
17. 02:34:470 (6) - add NC and 02:34:655 (1) - remove NC
18. 02:46:333 (6) - add NC and 02:46:889 (1) - remove NC
19. 02:49:299 (5) - add NC and 02:49:484 (1) - remove NC
    
    to put NC have sense of incongruity You do not need to necessarily put it to downbeat(1/1 long white line ).
    It is necessary to sometimes match it with a song and rhythm

1. 00:16:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think too close DS. 00:19:342~ Difference between the DS of from here is very confusing.
2. 00:27:961 - green line. KIAI TIME start - I can hardly recommend that you put it on a blue line. 00:28:239 - You should move here
3. 00:30:463 (1) - remove NC and 00:31:390 (2) - add NC ( same as 00:36:395 (9). and also fit the vocal )
4. 00:38:341 - green line. KIAI TIME end - same as 00:27:961. 00:40:102 - You should move here
5. 00:38:619 (5) - add NC
6. 00:40:287 (1) - I cannot recommend the too short spinner. and I think that this does not match. If you want to use the spinner, suggest1: start 00:40:194, end 00:41:214. suggest2: start 00:40:194, end 00:41:585.
7. 00:41:585 (1) - add NC
8. 01:03:457 (1) - spinner start 01:02:901 is better ?
9. 01:26:070 (13) - add NC and 01:27:553 (1) - remove NC and 01:28:480 (5) - add NC ( same as 02:49:484 (1) ~ )
10. 02:02:771 (11) - ^
11. 02:04:995 (1) - You must put it on a red line. this slider move to 02:04:999.
12. 02:51:894 (7) - add NC
    
    your random whistle is very sudden I recommend that you put it constantly if you want to put a whistle. or otherwise, I think that it is not necessary to put the whistle.

1. 01:15:505 (5) - add NC and 01:15:690 (1) - remove NC. jump point here. It is easy to play the one that you put here and also matches rhythm.
2. 01:35:709 (6) - remove whistle to start of the slider. I think there is no need to increase the sound. melody is approximately constant =x=
3. 01:36:450 (1) - ^
4. 01:37:192 (3) - ^
5. 01:37:933 (1) - ^
6. 02:04:995 (3) - Unsnapped slider. plz move to 02:04:999
7. 02:10:559 (10) - add NC and 02:10:930 (1) - remove NC. this rhythm seems to have put the NC according to the vocal to me .
8. 02:51:801 (1) - too short spinner. 1000score at AutoPlay. this is unrankable x.x;