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Prim - Koisuru*Uchuu Sensou!!

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Topic Starter
Abe Nana
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012년 5월 27일 일요일 at 오후 12:12:35

Artist: Prim
Title: Koisuru*Uchuu Sensou!!
Source: beatmania IIDX
Tags: L.E.D morinaga_mayumi reflec beat limelight mitsu gyu-tte babababa-n eieio- IIDX IIDX19 Lincle
BPM: 200
Filesize: 4574kb
Play Time: 02:01
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (5 stars, 597 notes)
  2. Beginner (2.2 stars, 110 notes)
  3. Hyper (4.99 stars, 451 notes)
  4. Standard (4.49 stars, 215 notes)
Download: Prim - Koisuru*Uchuu Sensou!!
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ぁぁ~初めまして!!!PRIMです!!!
今回初めてbeatmania IIDX 19 Lincle にて参加させていただいたPRIMと申します♪
ひらがなで「ぷりむ」カタカナで「プリム」です!!!
「恋する☆宇宙戦争っ!!」とはなんぞや?とPRIMなりに考えてみたのです!!!
ハテ、恋するとは!?ハテ、宇宙戦争とは!!?
答えは「コイスルウチュウセンソウ」
カタカナにしても逆さに読んでも、ぷりむには無理難題ものでした><!!!
グルグル~ハッ!
きっとこういうことね☆キラーん!!!


by L.E.D

mapset
Beginner - 100% by -Chata-
Standard - 100% by -Chata-
Hyper - 100% by -Chata-
Another - 100% by -Chata-
SB - 100% by -Chata-
(´;ω;`)



焦りは禁物~
rine1341
Hi~
Can I make a Taiko diff?
10nya
hello
can I make the normal diff ? :D
Topic Starter
Abe Nana
I'm sorry to say i can't rank this..

since I can't play game after April

so if possible i don't want to invite guests
rine1341

-Chata- wrote:

I'm sorry to say i can't rank this..

since I can't play game after April

so if possible i don't want to invite guests
I understand :(
10nya
SPOILER

-Chata- wrote:

I'm sorry to say i can't rank this..

since I can't play game after April

so if possible i don't want to invite guests

oh kk understood :D
- Rche -
hi chata~~

just telling you something about tags.

1. I've first played this song at reflec beat limelight arcade (though i'm sure this song first appears in IIDX 19).
I would suggest you adding tags "reflec beat limelight".

2. As i checked the reflec beat limelight arcade and BEMANIwiki i'm sure that the artist shouldn't be all capitalized.
so...artist: PRIM --> Prim
(i haven't checked if in IIDX the artist is all capitalized. checked.)

quite sorry to heard that this is not going to rank...
if it isn't the post before i would probably ask for a guest normal/hard.
well...if you need you're welcome to ask for mod and star (in forum pm) after you have finished the mapset.

EDIT: didn't expected kds here!
Topic Starter
Abe Nana

justnobody wrote:

hi chata~~

just telling you something about tags.

1. I've first played this song at reflec beat limelight arcade (though i'm sure this song first appears in IIDX 19).
I would suggest you adding tags "reflec beat limelight".

2. As i checked the reflec beat limelight arcade and BEMANIwiki i'm sure that the artist shouldn't be all capitalized.
so...artist: PRIM --> Prim
(i haven't checked if in IIDX the artist is all capitalized. checked.)

quite sorry to heard that this is not going to rank...
if it isn't the post before i would probably ask for a guest normal/hard.
well...if you need you're welcome to ask for mod and star (in forum pm) after you have finished the mapset.

I was in hospital for 4 days.. so it took bit of time dealing with it

I'm not looking forward to invite guests but for ranked it may be possible :<

thank you for your consideration :>
Sanjenin Nagi
태고를 만들어도 되겠능가?
Topic Starter
Abe Nana

Sanjenin Nagi -U wrote:

태고를 만들어도 되겠능가?
since I can't play game after April

so if possible i don't want to invite guests
게스트를 받지않을 생각임. 물론 이건 태고에도 포함됩니다
Bobo_old
Hi.
Try Fiya's offset, 373, dont forget to resnap everything after.

[Another]

00:26:623 - Add a note to keep the flow.
00:44:473 (1) - Delete NC
01:16:198 (2,3,4,5) - No. Change this.
01:29:173 (1,2,3,4) - I mistook these for doubles, do something about this spacing :L
01:46:423 (4) - Stack with (1)
01:59:548 (2,3) - Just stack them with the endpoint..

[Hyper]

01:59:467 (2,3,4,5) - Confusing spacing..

[Standard]

00:51:817 (2) - This'll confuse the new players :L
01:36:667 (6,7) - Replace it with a slider.

[Beginner]

Seems fine :L
Topic Starter
Abe Nana
thanks : l fixed some
Copter-kun


Loginer wrote:

YOUTUBE TAG TUTORIAL
[youtube]12345678abc[/youtube]

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=12345678abc[/youtube]
Topic Starter
Abe Nana
ooooooooooooooooooo thanks :p
R a i n
nice map&song~ :)
Topic Starter
Abe Nana
' A ' thanks
Quilt
very cute!! >3</
-s u i r e n-
恋する宇宙戦争!


焦りは禁物~~!!


この歌好き! MOD出来るところなかった>~<

star~
Topic Starter
Abe Nana
ありがとう~(。♋‸♋。)
ertyukjh010


MOD ReQueues From IRC by suirenn05 :)
My poor English

Beginner

00:44:473 (1) - ReMove NC
00:52:873 (1) - Clap on the Slider's End
01:41:173 (1) - Too short, It is forbidden in EZ, May be Start at 01:39:973 & End at 01:41:771
01:42:373 (x) - add note

Standard

00:39:973 (x) - I strongly suggest Do not deceleration.The new players do not know to play.You can choose to reduce the rhythm.
00:44:473 (1) - ReMove NC ?
01:41:173 (1) - Hard for the newplayer, how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/273428

Hyper

00:18:373 (1) - Do not overlap
00:34:123 (1) - The Slider end in here?
01:50:473 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+R ?
01:59:923 (3,4,5) - Put it Farther ahead, It will read them like 01:55:123 (6,7)

Another

Sorry, I don't like play Another diff. So I don't know how to make a another diff.
But I feel good in this diff. :)

That all
Topic Starter
Abe Nana

ertyukjh010 wrote:



MOD ReQueues From IRC by suirenn05 :) hello :o
My poor English

Beginner

00:44:473 (1) - ReMove NC nope
00:52:873 (1) - Clap on the Slider's End done
01:41:173 (1) - Too short, It is forbidden in EZ, May be Start at 01:39:973 & End at 01:41:771 done
01:42:373 (x) - add notedone

Standard

00:39:973 (x) - I strongly suggest Do not deceleration.The new players do not know to play.You can choose to reduce the rhythm. : l.. nope
00:44:473 (1) - ReMove NC ? nope
01:41:173 (1) - Hard for the newplayer, how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/273428 done

Hyper

00:18:373 (1) - Do not overlap nope
00:34:123 (1) - The Slider end in here? done
01:50:473 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+R ? done
01:59:923 (3,4,5) - Put it Farther ahead, It will read them like 01:55:123 (6,7) fixed

Another

Sorry, I don't like play Another diff. So I don't know how to make a another diff.
But I feel good in this diff. :)

That all
thanks for mod :p
Melophobia
Nice
Topic Starter
Abe Nana
: d
Topic Starter
Abe Nana
:d:p:3:c
Melophobia様あああ!
ありがとうですー
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ -Chata- ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Change AudioLeadIn : 1500(1000 is too fast).
  2. 00:39:973 - Add finish.

[Beginner]


  1. AR-1 (4 is too hard for beginner).

That's all ~ crazy map ~

Good luck ~
Topic Starter
Abe Nana
all fixed

thanks
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue

great map!!

Beginner

  1. 00:05:173 (2) - move last point to (236,212)
Standard

  1. nice
Hard

  1. 01:50:023 (2) - here http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot291.jpgg i think is better
Insane

  1. 00:01:873 (2) - move the 2nd slider point to (236,16)
  2. 00:31:273 (7) - move the first sliderpoint to (376,308) 2nd (340,340) looks better ..
  3. 01:15:973 (1,5) - this ? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot290-0.jpg i think it fits the music ..
that's all

Good luck~

edit: ...?
Topic Starter
Abe Nana
thanks for mod and star :p

fixed some.
Sekai
申し訳ありませんが、私はまだ良いマップを何かを見つけることができません〜 (* >ω<)
Topic Starter
Abe Nana
(´・ω・`)…
Mythol
Mod request from our queue.

[General]
meow.

Beginner
01:09:073 (1) - Maybe a clap on the end?
01:34:573 (2) - ^
01:49:573 (1) - Remove clap on repeat.

[Standard]
Very hard for a normal T_T maybe drain -1..
00:09:373 (2,5) - Maybe remove these? They don't seem to fit in my opinion.
00:37:423 (1) - A note on 00:37:573 instead of the small slider is better I think...
01:00:223 (3) - Over here! :3 http://puu.sh/mlJQ
02:00:673 (3) - Remove?

[Hyper]
I think alot of finishes can be added.
These are all suggestions, please don't use if some don't fit.
00:06:373 (1) - Finish on start of slider.
00:15:973 (1) - ^
00:17:173 (1) - ^
00:59:173 (1) - ^
01:03:973 (6) - ^
01:08:773 (1) - ^
01:32:773 (1) - ^
01:42:373 (3) - ^ also I think NC should start here instead.
01:51:973 (3) - NC here instead
01:56:773 (1) - Finish on beginning.
01:59:173 (1) - Finish.

[Another]
00:59:173 (1) - Finish on start.

Very nice mapset! :)
Topic Starter
Abe Nana
fixed some

thanks :3
Melophobia
As requested

[General]
PRIM - KoisuruUchuu Sensou!! (-Chata-).osb
なぜ大文字・・?

[Another]
00:01:573 (1) - 始点finish
00:06:373 (1) - ^
00:15:973 (1) - ^
00:20:773 (1) - ^
00:20:773 - reduce the volume by 10%
00:28:273 (4,5,6) - 一直線だとちょっと叩きにくいかも
00:30:373 (1) - finish
00:39:973 - reduce the volume by 10%
00:44:773 (1) - 始点finish
00:47:173 (1) - ^
00:53:173 (7,1) - switch newcombos
00:57:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how about increasing the volume gradually?
00:59:023 (8) - 1grid左
01:02:773 (5,1) - switch newcombos
01:03:973 (3,1) - ^
01:03:973 (3) - 始点finish
01:07:573 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:57:973
01:08:773 (1) - finish
01:13:573 (1) - finish
01:15:973 (1) - 始点finish remove clap
01:18:373 - backの音が急に下がるから音量下げないとfinishがうるさいかも
01:32:623 (6,1) - spacingが急に下がって変
01:36:373 (12,1) - switch newcombos
01:37:573 (3) - newcombo
01:39:973 (1) - 始点finish
01:47:173 (1) - finish
01:51:673 (2) - ^
01:56:773 (1) - 始点finish

lazy to do a full-mod :;(∩´﹏`∩);:

do that the others diffs as well if you follow my suggestion

[Hyper]
00:41:473 (4) - newcombo
00:55:423 (6) - ^
01:06:373 (8,1) - switch newcombos
01:09:973 (6) - newcombo
01:12:373 (4) - ^
01:17:173 (6) - ^
01:38:623 (5) - ^
01:43:423 (7) - ^
01:51:973 (3) - ^
01:55:573 (8) - ^
01:58:123 (6) - ^
02:00:373 (4) - ^ もしくは02:01:123 (6) -


[Beginner]
00:57:973 (1,1) - http://puu.sh/mnqj
Topic Starter
Abe Nana
(・へ・)ほとんどdone

ありがとうございまーす
Revengexsoyah
i dont find nothing error but in
Another : 01:55:873 fix this spacing
xDDD

okay star and good luck NICE MAP :D
Topic Starter
Abe Nana
thank you :D
Leorda
Hello

General
* Some lyric has a unecessary transparent space. You need to cut down


Beginner
00:44:473 (1) - Remove new combo, it doesn't make sense if you using a single combo in single object
00:59:773 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. It makes hidden at gameplay for players, especially for beginners
01:09:073 (1) - ^


Standard
00:44:473 (1) - Remove new combo, it doesn't make sense if you using a single combo in single object
00:49:573 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. It makes hidden at gameplay for players
01:33:073 (1,2,3) - ^ (also, hitbursts that makes more hidden)


Hyper

00:18:373 (1) - Some players expecting that this snap at red tick, but it's not. I suggest you to unstack it to preventing of confusion during gameplay


Good luck~
Topic Starter
Abe Nana
(´;ω;`) rework SB? ; A ;
Topic Starter
Abe Nana

Leorda wrote:

Hello

General
* Some lyric has a unecessary transparent space. You need to cut down
( ;∀;)done. rework finish


Beginner
00:44:473 (1) - Remove new combo, it doesn't make sense if you using a single combo in single object ok
00:59:773 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. It makes hidden at gameplay for players, especially for beginners fixed
01:09:073 (1) - ^ ^


Standard
00:44:473 (1) - Remove new combo, it doesn't make sense if you using a single combo in single objectok
00:49:573 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. It makes hidden at gameplay for players fixed
01:33:073 (1,2,3) - ^ (also, hitbursts that makes more hidden) ^


Hyper

00:18:373 (1) - Some players expecting that this snap at red tick, but it's not. I suggest you to unstack it to preventing of confusion during gameplay okay


Good luck~
thank you Leorda
Ryafuka
こんばんは :D
以下はすべて提案です~


[Bigginer]
00:06:373 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加?
00:20:173 (3) - 終端にfinishを追加?
00:29:773 (3) - 終端にfinishを追加?
00:44:773 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加?
00:47:173 (1,1) - sppiner後のspacingが低難易度にしては離れすぎています。
00:54:373 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加?
00:57:973 (1,1) - sppiner後のspacingが低難易度にしては離れすぎています。
01:06:373 (1,1) - ^
01:39:973 (1,1) - ^
01:56:773 - こんな音取りはどうでしょう? http://puu.sh/mDqC
02:01:573 - ここにあるInherited pointはこのdiffでは不必要なので削除し、02:01:648 - のものを削除した位置に移動させましょう。


[Standard]
OD +1
00:20:773 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加?
00:53:773 (1) - 終端にfinishを追加?
00:59:173 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加?
01:03:973 (1) - ^
01:08:773 (1) - finishを追加?
01:13:573 (1) - ^
01:42:373 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加?
01:47:173 (2) - ^
02:01:573 - [Bigginer]の指摘と同様。


[Hyper]
OD,HP +1
00:09:973 (1,2) - こっちのほうが合ってるかな? http://puu.sh/mDyN
00:20:773 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加?
00:30:373 (6) - finishを追加?
00:44:473 (1) - このfinishを削除して、00:44:773 (1) - この始端にfinishを追加?
00:54:373 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加?
01:03:973 (6) - NCを追加?
01:42:373 (3) - finishを追加?
01:49:573 (1,2) - こんな音取りはどうでしょうか? http://puu.sh/mDBA


[Another]
OD HP +1
00:06:373 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加?
00:54:373 (1) - ^
01:36:073 (10) - NCを追加?
01:38:473 (1,2) - この配置は少しやりづらいかも・・こんな感じはどうでしょうか? http://puu.sh/mDEt または、http://puu.sh/mDFH

awesome diff <3


なんかhitsoundだらけになってしまった・・ごめんなさい・・
Topic Starter
Abe Nana

Ryafuka wrote:

こんばんは :D
以下はすべて提案です~


[Bigginer]
00:06:373 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加? おk
00:20:173 (3) - 終端にfinishを追加? おk
00:29:773 (3) - 終端にfinishを追加? (・へ・)
00:44:773 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加?
00:47:173 (1,1) - sppiner後のspacingが低難易度にしては離れすぎています。う~ん
00:54:373 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加? おk
00:57:973 (1,1) - sppiner後のspacingが低難易度にしては離れすぎています。(´・ω・`)
01:06:373 (1,1) - ^ おk
01:39:973 (1,1) - ^ おk
01:56:773 - こんな音取りはどうでしょう? http://puu.sh/mDqC nope
02:01:573 - ここにあるInherited pointはこのdiffでは不必要なので削除し、02:01:648 - のものを削除した位置に移動させましょう。 done


[Standard]
OD +1
00:20:773 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加?
00:53:773 (1) - 終端にfinishを追加?
00:59:173 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加?
01:03:973 (1) - ^
01:08:773 (1) - finishを追加?
01:13:573 (1) - ^
01:42:373 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加?
01:47:173 (2) - ^
02:01:573 - [Bigginer]の指摘と同様。


[Hyper]
OD,HP +1
00:09:973 (1,2) - こっちのほうが合ってるかな? http://puu.sh/mDyN nope
00:20:773 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加?
00:30:373 (6) - finishを追加?
00:44:473 (1) - このfinishを削除して、00:44:773 (1) - この始端にfinishを追加?
00:54:373 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加?
01:03:973 (6) - NCを追加?
01:42:373 (3) - finishを追加?
01:49:573 (1,2) - こんな音取りはどうでしょうか? http://puu.sh/mDBA よい!


[Another]
OD HP +1
00:06:373 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加?
00:54:373 (1) - ^
01:36:073 (10) - NCを追加?
(1,2) - この配置は少しやりづらいかも・・こんな感じはどうでしょうか? http://puu.sh/mDEt または、http://puu.sh/mDFH

awesome diff <3


なんかhitsoundだらけになってしまった・・ごめんなさい・・ いいですよ(*´Д`)
なんかめんどくさくなって…赤字以外全部修正しました

ありがとうございます(*゚∀゚)
Hinacle
ぱぱぱぱーん(`・ω★)┳━‥…----------☆


<Beginner>
  1. 00:15:673 (3) - clap wo keshimasho~(´∀`)
<Standard>
  1. 00:18:373 (1,2,3,4) - kore normal ni shite ha muzukashii(〒_〒)
  2. 00:48:373 (1) - spin mijikai desu (`・ω・´) kono spin keshite note oitahouga iidesu (`・ω・´) tabun (´・ω・`)wwww
<Hyper>
  1. HP+1
いいね!(*´ω`*)

<Insane>
  1. 01:01:423 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kokono renda ga kyoku ni attenaito omouyo!!(´;ェ;`)
mirutokoro nai!!
map tukuruno umakunattane!!(`・ω・´)
yamani komotte shugyou shitakaiga(ry


1kaime http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/276441 orz...
2kaime http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/276442 orz.......
3kaime http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/276443 orz................

。・゜゜ '゜(*/□\*) '゜゜゜・。
chata no ba~ka
Topic Starter
Abe Nana

Hinacle wrote:

ぱぱぱぱーん(`・ω★)┳━‥…----------☆


<Beginner>
  1. 00:15:673 (3) - clap wo keshimasho~(´∀`) ok


<Standard>
  1. 00:18:373 (1,2,3,4) - kore normal ni shite ha muzukashii(〒_〒) Standardだから大丈夫!
  2. 00:48:373 (1) - spin mijikai desu (`・ω・´) kono spin keshite note oitahouga iidesu (`・ω・´) tabun (´・ω・`)wwww ok
<Hyper>
  1. HP+1 done
いいね!(*´ω`*)

<Insane>
  1. 01:01:423 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kokono renda ga kyoku ni attenaito omouyo!!(´;ェ;`)
mirutokoro nai!!
map tukuruno umakunattane!!(`・ω・´)
yamani komotte shugyou shitakaiga(ry


1kaime http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/276441 orz...
2kaime http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/276442 orz.......
3kaime http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/276443 orz................

。・゜゜ '゜(*/□\*) '゜゜゜・。
chata no ba~ka
(。♋‸♋。)
rui
from Irc mod reqs
全部提案、気に入らなければ無視して
[Beginner]
  1. 00:18:373 (1,2,3) - こういうのはどう?赤→白になるけど http://puu.sh/mV77
  2. 01:15:073 (X) - 全力的撤退のボーカルをなるべくフォローするため add note
  3. 01:34:723 (2,1) - (2)add newcombo (1)remove newcombo
  4. 01:39:373 (3) - 一つ前の白線へ
[Standard]
  1. 00:48:373 (3,4) - ボーカルに合わせてこのようにするのはどう? http://puu.sh/mVta
  2. 01:34:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ここの音取りに違和感を感じます、ボーカルフォローに徹してもいいんじゃないかな http://puu.sh/mVDr
  3. 01:41:173 (1,2) - (1)remove newcombo (2)add newcombo
  4. 01:47:173 (2) - add newcombo
  5. 01:48:373 (1) - 上を直したならremove newcombo
  6. 01:49:573 (6,1) - (6)add newcombo (1)remove newcombo
  7. 01:49:573 (3) - 01:49:873は叩きたいからこんな風にするのはどう? http://puu.sh/mVz1
[Hyper]
  1. 00:51:223 (7,1) - 逆な気がします、最初に折り返しスライダーで次が単発のほうがあってると思う
[Another]
  1. 00:42:823 (X) - add note
  2. 00:44:023 (X) - ^
以上です
特に指摘するところ無いです Nice mapヽ(・ω・`)ノ
Topic Starter
Abe Nana

rui wrote:

from Irc mod reqs
全部提案、気に入らなければ無視して
[Beginner]
  1. 00:18:373 (1,2,3) - こういうのはどう?赤→白になるけど http://puu.sh/mV77 ok
  2. 01:15:073 (X) - 全力的撤退のボーカルをなるべくフォローするため add note done
  3. 01:34:723 (2,1) - (2)add newcombo (1)remove newcombo nope
  4. 01:39:373 (3) - 一つ前の白線へ nope
[Standard]
  1. 00:48:373 (3,4) - ボーカルに合わせてこのようにするのはどう? http://puu.sh/mVta イイネ(*゚∀゚)ノ
  2. 01:34:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ここの音取りに違和感を感じます、ボーカルフォローに徹してもいいんじゃないかな http://puu.sh/mVDr すこしおk
  3. 01:41:173 (1,2) - (1)remove newcombo (2)add newcombo ok
  4. 01:47:173 (2) - add newcombo ok
  5. 01:48:373 (1) - 上を直したならremove newcombo ok
  6. 01:49:573 (6,1) - (6)add newcombo (1)remove newcombo
  7. 01:49:573 (3) - 01:49:873は叩きたいからこんな風にするのはどう? http://puu.sh/mVz1 ok
[Hyper]
  1. 00:51:223 (7,1) - 逆な気がします、最初に折り返しスライダーで次が単発のほうがあってると思う done
[Another]
  1. 00:42:823 (X) - add note 入れる
  2. 00:44:023 (X) - ^ 入れた
以上です
特に指摘するところ無いです Nice mapヽ(・ω・`)ノ
mod&★ありがとうです( ゚∀゚ )
716 Girl
I think sometimes sounds sooo loud

Beginner
01:06:373 (1) - spinner will be start 01:06:673 (1) - here and end - 08:473
01:49:573 (1) - delete repeat after that make longer on the next white tick and set repeat if you make it delete note 2 - 01:50:773 (2) -

Standart
00:05:773 (5) - set whistle on end (delete clap)
00:09:373 (2,3) - whistle(delete clap)
00:10:573 (5,6) - ^(delete clap)
00:15:673 (5) - ^(but delete clap)
00:40:873 (2) - 1grid right and down
00:42:973 (2) - i think whistle here
00:45:973 (3,4) - whistle
00:54:673 (2) - whistle
00:55:873 (3) - ^
01:01:273 (5) - whistle
01:01:573 (1) - whistle on start
01:05:173 (3) - make that -> http://puu.sh/ndtw
01:12:973 (5) - make shorter and set repeat(and whistle)
(whistles looks nice in ths song)

Hyper
01:56:173 (3) - make this -> slider http://puu.sh/ndvA and set repeat

ANOTHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEER!
Very good
ax_pokl
[From ax_pokl's modding queue]
only suggestion
[General]
good map~, well done. no spacing problem~.
[Standard]
00:00:973 (2,3) - (reverse?.)
00:05:773 (5) - the shape seems a little strange.
00:22:723 (5,1) - better not put too many red-line-objects.
01:00:523 (4) - the slider like this one doesn't fit the music.
00:52:873 (4) - it seems there are no lyric here? (same 00:55:573 (2) - )
01:01:573 (1) - same. 01:01:273 (5,1) - there should be a note here.
01:50:773 (3,4) - doesn't fit the music?
[Hyper]
no problem.
00:15:073 (2) - (change it to 1-return-slider?)
00:44:473 (1) - (no NC?)
01:01:423 (2,3) - reverse?
[Another]
perfect!
[Beginner]
00:14:773 (2) - (the shape seems a little strange.)
no problem.
[From ax_pokl's modding queue]
R a i n
初心者が思ったことしか書いてませんが;
全部提案です

Begginer
00:26:773 (3) - 始点ではなく終点にClap?
01:15:373 (3) - 終点のClap消去?
01:37:573 (1) - 終点ではなく始点にFinish?
01:01:573 (1,2) - こんなのとか? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/281613
でも配置は別に変えなくてもいいと思います!

Another
01:24:973~01:25:273 他の難易度はノート置いてあるのにAnotherだけ置いてないのが気になりました

こんだけ!
全然指摘できてなくて申し訳ない(´・ω・`)
Topic Starter
Abe Nana

R a i n wrote:

初心者が思ったことしか書いてませんが;
全部提案です

Begginer
00:26:773 (3) - 始点ではなく終点にClap? OK
01:15:373 (3) - 終点のClap消去? うんーnope
01:37:573 (1) - 終点ではなく始点にFinish? ok
01:01:573 (1,2) - こんなのとか? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/281613 ok
でも配置は別に変えなくてもいいと思います!

Another
01:24:973~01:25:273 他の難易度はノート置いてあるのにAnotherだけ置いてないのが気になりました え( ゚д゚ )…今気づいた!

こんだけ!
全然指摘できてなくて申し訳ない(´・ω・`)
ありがとう~
Mystica
Here comes my mod.

[Standard]
00:29:773 (4) - a little grid up seems more fit
00:45:973 (3) - some grid left

[Hyper]
a little hard for a hard diff XD.Where is the diff I can play >w<.

other seems fine.just nazi mod
Cute song and map.I love it...
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