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Hashimoto Miyuki - Yume miru mama ni Koi wo shite

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BL-Daisuki
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BL-Daisuki
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 2 de fevereiro de 2013 at 00:04:04

Artist: Hashimoto Miyuki
Title: Yume miru mama ni Koi wo shite
Source: Mashiro Iro Symphony *mutsu-no-hana
Tags: psp game palette Naryuga opening SoujiTheFox
BPM: 160
Filesize: 15326kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,11 stars, 71 notes)
  2. Naryuga's Hard (4,88 stars, 249 notes)
  3. Normal (3,05 stars, 122 notes)
  4. SoujiTheFox's Insane (5 stars, 319 notes)
Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Yume miru mama ni Koi wo shite
Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Yume miru mama ni Koi wo shite (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st Beatmap.
Mashiro Iro Symphony *mutsu-no-hana PSP Game OP - Yume miru mama ni Koi wo shite
Pending, someone mod my map!
Mapset:
Easy - Done
Normal - Done
Hard - Done by Naryuga
Insane - Done by SoujiTheFox
I hope you all enjoy my map! :D
Credits to:
SPOILER
Kei - Timing help.
Added custom hitsounds, need a help with this...
Last edited by BL-Daisuki , edited 25 times in total.
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
Hello! Uhm I saw you requested timing in the timing help thread. The timing doesn't sound bad.

I suggest you to try this offset. Sounds better to me:

Offset: 3.739.

That's all. Good luck!
BL-Daisuki
33 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
BL-Daisuki
Thx for timing help!
suzutsukikanade
653 posts
Joined July 2011
suzutsukikanade
-[o]-
Naryuga
782 posts
Joined October 2010
Naryuga
Hello \(:D)/

I've finished the Hard diff, and I found out some issues you should (or even you must) fix.

  • [General]
  1. The BG's size is 1087*767, which is unrankable. (BG's ratio must be 4:3, such as 1024*768 or 800*600) I'll suggest a new BG in my .zip file (though it's a bit less sexy Lol)
  2. Combo colour pattern suggestion: The combocolor 3 is [R:221, G:252, Blue:255], [/color]which looks very alike combocolor 4(white) for me. How about using another pattern like pink[R:255, G:128, B:255]?
  • [Easy]
  1. Offset is wrong, the right one is 3739 (while Normal's is correct :? )
  • [Normal]
  1. 00:28:864 (1) - add New combo to prevent error
  2. 01:19:301 (2,3) - distance issue
And, here is my diff including BG and custom hitsound :) 4.88 stars, 2.65m score.
Download: Hard+BG+CHS.zip
Please change tags of other diffs same as mine.

After changed BG, don't forget to Full Submit ;)

And, if you can't contact or see me online for long 7 days or more, fix my diff as you want.
Thankyou~
BL-Daisuki
33 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
BL-Daisuki

Naryuga wrote:

Hello \(:D)/

I've finished the Hard diff, and I found out some issues you should (or even you must) fix.

  • [General]
  1. The BG's size is 1087*767, which is unrankable. (BG's ratio must be 4:3, such as 1024*768 or 800*600) I'll suggest a new BG in my .zip file (though it's a bit less sexy Lol)
  2. Combo colour pattern suggestion: The combocolor 3 is [R:221, G:252, Blue:255], [/color]which looks very alike combocolor 4(white) for me. How about using another pattern like pink[R:255, G:128, B:255]?
  • [Easy]
  1. Offset is wrong, the right one is 3739 (while Normal's is correct :? )
  • [Normal]
  1. 00:28:864 (1) - add New combo to prevent error
  2. 01:19:301 (2,3) - distance issue
And, here is my diff including BG and custom hitsound :) 4.88 stars, 2.65m score.
[attachment=0:a6167]Hard+BG+CHS.zip[/attachment:a6167]
Please change tags of other diffs same as mine.

After changed BG, don't forget to Full Submit ;)

And, if you can't contact or see me online for long 7 days or more, fix my diff as you want.
Thankyou~
Updated! Thx for guest diff!
Mayonnaise Dad
106 posts
Joined October 2010
Mayonnaise Dad
Here's an attempt at an Insane difficulty.. glad to fix any problems if they occur~ <3

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Yume miru mama ni Koi wo shite (Short Ver.) (BL-Daisuki) [SoujiTheFox's Insane].osu.7z
BL-Daisuki
33 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
BL-Daisuki
Oh, thanks! Diff added, will put now in pending. Please someone mod my map!
spboxer3
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spboxer3

[general]


  • Settings
  1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime
  2. Inconsistency in Countdown
  3. Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks
  4. Add tag:SoujiTheFox or SoujiSeta
    23.7MB file size orz... It's rankable for under 25MB when you have video~ but I also suggest to lower your file size

[Easy]


  • Settings
  1. resnap all note in this diff
mapping
  1. 00:24:176 (3) - move to 00:23:989 - ? I think It's better rhythm for this song :( [IMO]
  2. 01:15:753 (3) - NC this. Because this combo It's too over for Easy diff
  3. 01:21:753 (1,2,3) - spacing~

[Normal]



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
    mapping
  1. 00:17:051 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
  2. 00:20:614 (6,7,8,1) - ^
  3. 00:43:489 (5,6,7,8) - ^
  4. 00:45:739 (1) - add finish at slider reverse. because it's inconsistent to the previous
  5. 00:48:739 (5) - awkward slider~you can make the layout better~
  6. 01:09:551 (7) - NC~Because this combo It's too over for Normal diff
  7. 01:15:551 (5) - ^
  8. 01:27:551 (1,2,3) - awkward pattern. you can make the layout better ;_;

[Naryuga's Hard]



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:17:614 (6,1) -
  2. 01:23:614 (6,1) -
mapping
  1. 00:46:489 (3,6) - you can make it stack~ It's looks like a bit depart off~

[SoujiTheFox's Insane]



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:05:801 (8,1) -
  2. 00:56:801 (4,1) -
  3. 01:11:614 (3,4) -
  4. 01:14:614 (3,4,1) -
mapping
  1. 00:05:801 (8) - awkward slider...
  2. 00:44:801 (4) - ^ well~I try to make this slider↓
  3. If you want to use this pattern:
    308,148,44801,2,0,B|368:112|356:16|264:-20|204:56,1,255,4|8
01:02:801 (4,1) - parallel it~
red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

good luck~
Mayonnaise Dad
106 posts
Joined October 2010
Mayonnaise Dad
[SoujiTheFox's Insane]


Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
00:05:801 (8,1) - Maybe, depends on other views
00:56:801 (4,1) - Fixed
01:11:614 (3,4) - Fixed~
01:14:614 (3,4,1) - Also <3

mapping
00:05:801 (8) - awkward slider... <- Hm, Ill think of something better if it becomes an issue
00:44:801 (4) - ^ well~I try to make this slider↓ Thank you so much for that slider. <3
(click to toggle)
If you want to use this pattern:
Code:
308,148,44801,2,0,B|368:112|356:16|264:-20|204:56,1,255,4|8
01:02:801 (4,1) - parallel it~ <- Not now.

Thanks, sp. My fixed .osu file is attached

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Yume miru mama ni Koi wo shite (Short Ver.) (BL-Daisuki) [SoujiTheFox's Insane].rar
Naryuga
782 posts
Joined October 2010
Naryuga

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]


  • Settings
  1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime I think the preview time of [Easy],[Normal] is not snapped.
  2. Inconsistency in Countdown Since this map has video, it shouldn't cheaked in [Easy], [Normal]. BL-Daisuki will fix >///<
  3. Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks same as above
  4. Add tag:SoujiTheFox or SoujiSeta added SoujiTheFox in tags

[Naryuga's Hard]



  • Overlaps

  1. 00:17:614 (6,1) -
  2. 01:23:614 (6,1) -


mapping
  1. 00:46:489 (3,6) - you can make it stack~ It's looks like a bit depart off~
All fixed

good luck~
Thank you sp3~! :)

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Yume miru mama ni Koi wo shite (Short Ver.) (BL-Daisuki) [Naryuga's Hard].osu
Mayonnaise Dad
106 posts
Joined October 2010
Mayonnaise Dad
This is an .flv replacement for the background video. It is roughly half the size (22 MB -> 12 MB) and just about the same quality.

http://puu.sh/lB0A
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ BL-Daisuki ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Video file size is too big,you can try recoding?
  2. Change same PreviewTime: 54739 in all diff.

[SoujiTheFox's Insane]


  1. 00:20:051 (9) - Add new combo,confused with play.
  2. 00:31:676 (6) - ^
  3. 00:53:239 (1) - Remove finish.
  4. 00:54:739 - Add finish.
  5. 01:00:551 - ^
  6. 01:12:551 - ^

[Naryuga's Hard]


  1. 00:44:239 (6) - Add new combo,confused with play.
  2. 00:50:239 (7) - ^
  3. 01:02:239 (6) - ^
  4. 01:08:239 (7) - ^
  5. 01:11:239 (5) - ^
  6. 01:00:551 (1,2) - Change a 1/1 slider.

[Normal]


  1. Remove Enable countdown and Letterbox during breaks in this diff.
  2. 00:48:739 (5) - Add new combo,don't using long combo.
  3. 00:57:551 (5) - ^
  4. 01:03:551 (5) - ^
  5. 01:09:551 (7) - ^
  6. 01:15:551 (5) - ^

[Easy]


  1. Remove Enable countdown and Letterbox during breaks in this diff.
  2. Resnap all notes pls.

That's all ~

Good luck ~
Naryuga
782 posts
Joined October 2010
Naryuga

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Naryuga's Hard]


  1. 00:44:239 (6) - Add new combo,confused with play.
  2. 00:50:239 (7) - ^
  3. 01:02:239 (6) - ^
  4. 01:08:239 (7) - ^
  5. 01:11:239 (5) - ^
  6. 01:00:551 (1,2) - Change a 1/1 slider.

    --> All fixed~ This way you showed is much better than the previous :)
Thank you Kawayi Rika~! :)

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Yume miru mama ni Koi wo shite (Short Ver.) (BL-Daisuki) [Naryuga's Hard].osu
Mayonnaise Dad
106 posts
Joined October 2010
Mayonnaise Dad

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[SoujiTheFox's Insane]


  1. 00:20:051 (9) - Add new combo,confused with play.
  2. 00:31:676 (6) - ^
  3. 00:53:239 (1) - Remove finish.
  4. 00:54:739 - Add finish.
  5. 01:00:551 - ^
  6. 01:12:551 - ^
Thanks, Rika. All changed~

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Yume miru mama ni Koi wo shite (Short Ver.) (BL-Daisuki) [SoujiTheFox's Insane].osu
BL-Daisuki
33 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
BL-Daisuki
Fixed some, thanks for mods spboxer and Kawayi Rika~
Sync
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Sync
[General]
-- The preview-times need to be consistent (unless you have a good reason for them not to). Since the preview time is snapped on the Insane and the Hard, it'd make sense to use theirs. With that being said, Easy and Normal's preview point needs to be changed to 54739. You can either go to 00:54:739 in the editor and set it there or edit the .osu files.

-- The tags are inconsistent. Normal and Insane are missing "SoujiTheFox".

-- The light-blue and white look really similar to each other. Consider removing one of them or changing the blue to stand out more.

-- There is almost 15 seconds of blank space at the end of the MP3. You need to cut it. (I realize that this is a VBR .mp3, and any issues concerning unnecessary file sizes are irrelevant; however, for the sake of having a clean .mp3, you should cut it.)

[SoujiTheFox's Insane]
00:08:989 (9) - Ending sliders on downbeats like this are generally bad and should be avoided unless it fits the music. In this case, it does not. It doesn't stress the downbeat and it messes up your combo pattern. It doesn't affect gameplay that much but it should probably be changed. I think it'd be better off ending at 00:09:364. (In it's place, add a hit circle at 00:09:739 a long with a new combo)

01:18:739 (1) - The music definitely calls for a hit circle here. I know you're following the vocals but whether you intended to or not, you've established a beat and you need to keep it going.

01:32:239 (1) - Treat this as more of a light suggestion, but end the slider at 01:33:364 (that clap sound) and add a hit circle at the spinner's old end-point, 01:33:739.

[Naryuga's Hard]
01:17:051 (1) - I'd unstack this note for 2 reasons: first off, it's pretty hard to read considering the difficulty. Secondly, and for the sake of consistency, there were two stack notes of the same likelihood just a second or two earlier.


[Normal]
00:05:614 (2) - I'd definitely consider adding a note here. The abnormal beat placement would be hard to read for Normal players and would likely result in a mistiming of the hit. Besides, it follows the vocals more clearly if you did add a hit circle here.

00:42:739 (4) - Add a new combo here to be consistent and because of the vooooooocals.

[Easy]
Contact me in-game so I can talk to you about how awkward the beat placement on this difficulty is and what all needs changing.

01:18:739 (5) - Add another repeat here. it'd be easier for a new player to read instead of that odd hit circle.
Naryuga
782 posts
Joined October 2010
Naryuga

Sync wrote:

[General]
-- The light-blue and white look really similar to each other. Consider removing one of them or changing the blue to stand out more.

-- There is almost 15 seconds of blank space at the end of the MP3. You need to cut it. (I realize that this is a VBR .mp3, and any issues concerning unnecessary file sizes are irrelevant; however, for the sake of having a clean .mp3, you should cut it.)

- depending on BL-Daisuki :D

[Naryuga's Hard]
01:17:051 (1) - I'd unstack this note for 2 reasons: first off, it's pretty hard to read considering the difficulty. Secondly, and for the sake of consistency, there were two stack notes of the same likelihood just a second or two earlier. - that's true. moved the notes.
Thank you, Sync~! :)
Last edited by Naryuga , edited 1 time in total.
Suzully
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Suzully
From my modding queue.

[General]

  • Please set same preview time on all diffs.

    Add "SoujiTheFox" to tags on Normal and Insane too.
[Easy]
  1. 00:20:614 (4,5) - Confusing pattern for newbie. Try to change them to a slider.
  2. 00:21:551 (1) - Add finish to the top.
  3. 00:27:739 (1) - ^
  4. 00:54:739 (1) - ^ Add more finishes in KIAI.
  5. 00:56:239 (2,1,2) - Newbie cannot read this timing.
  6. 01:21:739 (1) - Add finish.
[Normal]

  • There is a big gap of difficulty setting between Normal and Hard. At least HP+1, AR+1 please.
  1. 00:05:801 (2,3) - Yes, actually there is a sound of the vocal here. But I think following white line here is easier to normal-player so try to change like below.
  2. 00:33:739 (2) - This finish sounds kinda noisy to me. Turn the volume down a bit?
  3. 00:57:551 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing.
  4. 01:00:551 (1,2) - Normal-player cannot read this stack because the slider don't follow the sound correctly. And generally speaking, it's better not to use stacking on normal diff.
  5. 01:08:239 (3,4,5,6,1) - These notes are...confusing for normal-player imo.
  6. 01:11:989 (6) - Move it to 01:11:801.
  7. 01:29:051 (3) - The end finish doesn't fit the sound.
  8. 01:34:676 (2,3) - I think custom soft-normal sound doesn't fit here.
[Hard]

  • Speaking of KIAI, how about adding clap at not only 4th white line but also 2nd white line?
  1. 01:15:551 (1) - Add finish to the top.
  2. 01:17:051 (1) - ^ to the end.
  3. 01:17:989 (5) - ^
[Insane]

  • HP+1.
  1. 00:14:239 (1,2,3,4) - Not bad. But it'll be easier to read if stacking (4) with 00:13:864 (5), so how about changing the formation like below?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:18:176 (7) - Add finish to the end.
  3. 00:24:176 (8) - ^
  4. 00:37:489 (5,6) - Too near.
  5. 00:44:801 (4) - The flow between (3) and this is kinda bad. This shape is pretty nice, so try to flip and rotate.
    SPOILER
  6. 00:48:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Umm...the shapes of streams are not so good, and the flow of 00:49:301 (6,7) is also bad...try to re-place them.
  7. 01:03:551 (1) - Add finish to the top instead of whistle.
  8. 01:05:801 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm sounds weird to me...If you want to follow the sound here like this, please don't stack notes. Then it'll be easier to read.
  9. 01:09:551 (1) - Since this slider touches (4), it doesn't look beautiful. How about like below?
    SPOILER
  10. 01:15:551 (1) - Add finish to the top.
  11. 01:16:676 (5) - ^ to the end.
  12. 01:24:176 (8) - ^
  13. 01:30:176 (8) - ^
  14. 01:34:676 (1,2,1,2) - I think here's not a place making the pattern hard, so move them a bit nearer from the center please.
Not bad Easy and Normal as your first map.
And Hard is very well mapped. Insane is also creative, there are still some patterns which need more works though.
Good luck! :3 Star for a new mapper.
Naryuga
782 posts
Joined October 2010
Naryuga

Suzully wrote:

[Hard]

  • Speaking of KIAI, how about adding clap at not only 4th white line but also 2nd white line?
  1. 01:15:551 (1) - Add finish to the top.
  2. 01:17:051 (1) - ^ to the end.
  3. 01:17:989 (5) - ^
All done!
Thank you very much~! :)


Please update ><

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Yume miru mama ni Koi wo shite (Short Ver.) (BL-Daisuki) [Naryuga's Hard].osu
Mayonnaise Dad
106 posts
Joined October 2010
Mayonnaise Dad

Suzully wrote:

From my modding queue.


[Insane]

  • HP+1.
  1. 00:14:239 (1,2,3,4) - Not bad. But it'll be easier to read if stacking (4) with 00:13:864 (5), so how about changing the formation like below?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:18:176 (7) - Add finish to the end.
  3. 00:24:176 (8) - ^
  4. 00:37:489 (5,6) - Too near.
  5. 00:44:801 (4) - The flow between (3) and this is kinda bad. This shape is pretty nice, so try to flip and rotate.
    SPOILER
  6. 00:48:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Umm...the shapes of streams are not so good, and the flow of 00:49:301 (6,7) is also bad...try to re-place them.
  7. 01:03:551 (1) - Add finish to the top instead of whistle.
  8. 01:09:551 (1) - Since this slider touches (4), it doesn't look beautiful. How about like below?
    SPOILER
  9. 01:15:551 (1) - Add finish to the top.
  10. 01:16:676 (5) - ^ to the end.
  11. 01:24:176 (8) - ^
  12. 01:30:176 (8) - ^
  13. 01:34:676 (1,2,1,2) - I think here's not a place making the pattern hard, so move them a bit nearer from the center please.

Fixed these.. or tried to. Also Fixed a couple of Sync's.

Thanks you two!

http://puu.sh/q2Bc Puushed.
popner
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popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Normal]

There is 1/1 stack like 00:08:239 (2,3,4), and 1/2 stack like 00:17:989 (2,3). I prefer not using both of them in Normal.

[Hard]

00:56:989 (5) - this is a triple start on white tick which sounds weird, change it to 5 or move it to red tick?

[Insane]

00:08:801 (8,9) - change to a slider? to be consistent with 00:05:801 (8)
00:09:832 (1) - move it to 00:10:020, also remove NC
00:10:582 (5) - move it to 00:10:770?
00:12:739 (1,4) - ^
00:23:051 (6) - ctrl+j?
01:09:551 (1) - why not http://puu.sh/qc2d ?

That's all I can find. GL~
Naryuga
782 posts
Joined October 2010
Naryuga

popner wrote:

[Hard]

00:56:989 (5) - this is a triple start on white tick which sounds weird, change it to 5 or move it to red tick? - 5 repeats slider is good idea :D
Thank you~ :)

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Yume miru mama ni Koi wo shite (Short Ver.) (BL-Daisuki) [Naryuga's Hard].osu
BL-Daisuki
33 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
BL-Daisuki
Revived!
Meru
1,615 posts
Joined March 2012
Meru
hello sorry for the late mod >w<
from Its just a tiny Modding Team

hope my mod can be useful

[General]
  1. I have title issue, you can see it Stop using Short, Full, Cut ver. in song titles.
  2. oh you had inconsistency of combo colours in normal diff, in combo 4, it's 221,238,255 while the others is 221,252,255 please fix it
  3. the Preview Time between your diff and your GD are different, I don't know if it allowed or not but yeah...
  4. You forgot to put SoujiTheFox in SoujiTheFox's Insane :D
[Easy]
  1. 00:57:739 (1) - I suggest to put this object early in redtick (00:57:551) as you can see you put the next NC in here 01:00:551 (1) I think it would break the flow for newbie they're confused want to follow the rhythm or the vocal, moreover you add 'finish' there so it would be nice, try it!
  2. 01:02:239 (2) - try add finish here it sounds better, and then please shorten the slider so the slider tail would end at 01:03:551 it land on beat and also, please add finish
  3. 01:08:239 (3) - I guess you miss the finish again here
  4. 01:09:739 (5) - move the slider early to 01:09:551 and extend the slider so it would end 01:11:239
  5. 01:11:989 (6) - Move this early to 01:11:801 also add finish
  6. 01:12:551 (1) - I think you should add finish in the head and tail of slider it follow the song at all
  7. 01:30:551 (1) - This spinner is too short for newbie IMO, maybe you can extend it a little
  8. 01:25:489 (4) - move the current NC here?
  9. 01:06:739 (1,2,3) - Actually I do not recommend this pattern, too hard for newbie I think, it would be easier if you just make it into a slider from (1) to (3) yeah something liek this
  10. I know Easy diff would be nice if you put in objects in white tick but if it do not follow the song at all I think it's actually break the flow, and yeah sorry once again I don't know you map this diff follow the rhythym or the vocal at all >W<
[Normal]
  1. I can't say too much about this diff, I mean the placement of hitsound (if it possible) should same with Easy diff which already modded, this diff are fine IMO
  2. I think you should consider about the placement but this only my thought so you may can ignore it
  3. I see you had good clap hitsound here why you don't use it on Easy?
  4. But I would suggest some pattern here, in this normal it seems like you had some... umm.. how should I say it... example here 01:15:364 it would be nice set the pattern like this
    SPOILER


    well yeah the first object appear on 01:15:739
[Naryuga's Hard]
  1. Maybe a better curve in this diff? it's up to you since it was your style
  2. 00:57:551 (1) - perhaps you want to change the colour of new combo here, maybe change it to blue because when I playtest it, it's hard to realize that there was an object here
  3. I'm sorry I couldn't find much problems here >,<
[SoujiTheFox's Insane]
  1. 00:41:051 (4) - please consider move the NC here it would be easier to see the object here
  2. 01:18:739 ~ 01:20:051 - the placement here is quite confusing I think you need [(1) more space (2)(3)(4) more space (5)(6)(7) more space (8)] also NC at (8) the reason are same :3
that's all sorry if can find too much
Naryuga
782 posts
Joined October 2010
Naryuga
I've been looking forward to having this revived .w.

Matoryoshika wrote:

[Naryuga's Hard]
  1. Maybe a better curve in this diff? it's up to you since it was your style - fixed some. I'll be happy if I can know which curves should be fixed :lol:
  2. 00:57:551 (1) - perhaps you want to change the colour of new combo here, maybe change it to blue because when I playtest it, it's hard to realize that there was an object here - done
  3. I'm sorry I couldn't find much problems here >,< - no problem ;)
Thank you for modding~ >w<
http://puu.sh/XZUZ.osu
BL-Daisuki
33 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
BL-Daisuki

Matoryoshika wrote:

hello sorry for the late mod >w<
from Its just a tiny Modding Team

hope my mod can be useful

[General]
  1. I have title issue, you can see it Stop using Short, Full, Cut ver. in song titles. Ah, so we can't use Short Ver more...ok fixed!
  2. oh you had inconsistency of combo colours in normal diff, in combo 4, it's 221,238,255 while the others is 221,252,255 please fix it Okay
  3. the Preview Time between your diff and your GD are different, I don't know if it allowed or not but yeah... Fixed
  4. You forgot to put SoujiTheFox in SoujiTheFox's Insane :D Oh...fixed
[Easy]
  1. 00:57:739 (1) - I suggest to put this object early in redtick (00:57:551) as you can see you put the next NC in here 01:00:551 (1) I think it would break the flow for newbie they're confused want to follow the rhythm or the vocal, moreover you add 'finish' there so it would be nice, try it! I Tried and sounds good! Nice idea :D
  2. 01:02:239 (2) - try add finish here it sounds better, and then please shorten the slider so the slider tail would end at 01:03:551 it land on beat and also, please add finish No, added finish only. I Don't touched the slider because i think sounds bad.
  3. 01:08:239 (3) - I guess you miss the finish again here Oh my mistake >< Fixed
  4. 01:09:739 (5) - move the slider early to 01:09:551 and extend the slider so it would end 01:11:239 Okay.
  5. 01:11:989 (6) - Move this early to 01:11:801 also add finish Okay
  6. 01:12:551 (1) - I think you should add finish in the head and tail of slider it follow the song at all Added
  7. 01:30:551 (1) - This spinner is too short for newbie IMO, maybe you can extend it a little Nope
  8. 01:25:489 (4) - move the current NC here? Okay
  9. 01:06:739 (1,2,3) - Actually I do not recommend this pattern, too hard for newbie I think, it would be easier if you just make it into a slider from (1) to (3) yeah something liek this Okay
  10. I know Easy diff would be nice if you put in objects in white tick but if it do not follow the song at all I think it's actually break the flow, and yeah sorry once again I don't know you map this diff follow the rhythym or the vocal at all >W< I'm trying to follow the two >W<
[Normal]
  1. I can't say too much about this diff, I mean the placement of hitsound (if it possible) should same with Easy diff which already modded, this diff are fine IMO Okay
  2. I think you should consider about the placement but this only my thought so you may can ignore it Ok will consider but will not fix now
  3. I see you had good clap hitsound here why you don't use it on Easy? Okay, but don't now how place them here
  4. But I would suggest some pattern here, in this normal it seems like you had some... umm.. how should I say it... example here 01:15:364 it would be nice set the pattern like this Made similar
    SPOILER


    well yeah the first object appear on 01:15:739
CTB Fia
CTB Fia
Easy
Try to use distance snap to re-arrange your beats
change slider tick rate to 2

Normal & Hard & Insane
i don't see any mistakes
you are great beatmapper,aren't you? :o

That's all i can mod
i hope your beatmap will be ranked soon!!! :D
Mayonnaise Dad
106 posts
Joined October 2010
Mayonnaise Dad
Mods applied. I wasn't sure this was still active! Thanks for the notice, BL. :3

This instead: http://puu.sh/11z6U
BL-Daisuki
33 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
BL-Daisuki
updated
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,466 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
Request from my queue

[General]
  1. Tag "SoujiTheFox" in Insane diff
[Easy]
  1. AR+1 OD+1 please
  2. 00:03:739 (1) - finish
  3. 00:09:739 (1) - ^
  4. 00:21:551 (1) - ^
  5. 00:23:614 (2) - spacing
  6. 00:47:989 - remove finish
  7. 00:50:239 (4) - spacing (with 3)
  8. 01:12:551 (1) - I prefer to do like this
    SPOILER
  9. 01:18:739 (5) - finish
  10. 01:19:489 - ^
  11. 01:20:239 - ^
  12. 01:20:989 (6) - ^
  13. 01:30:551 (1) - finish
  14. 01:33:739 (1) - whistle (nazi)
  15. This diff needs more hitsound mod
[Normal]
  1. OD-1
  2. 00:24:551 (6) - nc
  3. 00:26:051 (1,1) - Too close imo. That's hard
  4. 00:48:739 (1) - finish
  5. 01:14:989 (4) - Spacing
  6. 01:33:739 (1) - whistle (nazi)
[Naryuga]
  1. 00:26:239 (1) - Why clap D:?
  2. 01:12:176 - ^
  3. 01:29:051 (4) - finish
  4. 01:34:770 - no whistle? D:
    Good I like this :3!!!
[SoujiTheFox]
  1. diff name so long lolll
  2. 00:09:739 (1) - finish
  3. 00:44:239 (1,2,3,4) - all change to whistle, finish is not fit here and so loudly here :\
  4. 00:44:239 (1,2,3,4) - I'll use this kind of rhythm to map here
    SPOILER
  5. 00:50:989 (3,4,5,6,1) - Use stream? Like:
    SPOILER
  6. 01:06:739 (1) - you forget finish lol
  7. 01:09:551 (5) - Try to make like this
    SPOILER
    not bad :3
GL
Naryuga
782 posts
Joined October 2010
Naryuga

Flask wrote:

[Naryuga]
  1. 00:26:239 (1) - Why clap D:? - I hear clap sound here, don't you? ;3
  2. 01:12:176 - ^ Why here... D: ? lol put on 01:12:364 (6) - instead
  3. 01:29:051 (4) - finish - sounds loud here, whistle is enough imo
  4. 01:34:770 - no whistle? D: - ...? remained it put
    Good I like this :3!!! - Thaaaank you!!! :)
yey ;) http://puu.sh/17wr7
BL-Daisuki
33 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
BL-Daisuki

Flask wrote:

Request from my queue

[General]
  1. Tag "SoujiTheFox" in Insane diff
[Easy]
  1. AR+1 OD+1 please Done
  2. 00:03:739 (1) - finish Done
  3. 00:09:739 (1) - ^ Done
  4. 00:21:551 (1) - ^ Done
  5. 00:23:614 (2) - spacing Done
  6. 00:47:989 - remove finish Done
  7. 00:50:239 (4) - spacing (with 3) Done
  8. 01:12:551 (1) - I prefer to do like this If you give me the code will be more easier to fix...
    SPOILER
  9. 01:18:739 (5) - finish Done
  10. 01:19:489 - ^ Done
  11. 01:20:239 - ^ Done
  12. 01:20:989 (6) - ^ Done
  13. 01:30:551 (1) - finish
  14. 01:33:739 (1) - whistle (nazi) Done
  15. This diff needs more hitsound mod
[Normal]
  1. OD-1 Ok
  2. 00:24:551 (6) - nc Ok
  3. 00:26:051 (1,1) - Too close imo. That's hard Don't see any problem with this.
  4. 00:48:739 (1) - finish Done
  5. 01:14:989 (4) - Spacing Done
  6. 01:33:739 (1) - whistle (nazi) Done
woduq414
235 posts
Joined November 2011
woduq414
[SoujiTheFox's Insane]

00:26:051 (1) - Remove Spin, Add Circle
00:26:426 - Add Slider


SPOILER
Like this.
pimp
1,417 posts
Joined April 2010
pimp
SoujiTheFox's Insane

00:05:801 (8) - not perfectly symmetryc, try this code
180,128,5801,2,0,B|180:240|256:192|332:240|332:128,1,255,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:08:239 (5,6,7,8,9) - the current shape looks unfiting and random because you use alot of symmetry in this diff, you should consider making it symetric because you did that at 00:14:239
00:08:239 (5) - missing nc
00:09:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 8 and 9 are placed to fit the next notes. but the previous notes could be placed better.
00:22:489 (5) - this note is 1/6
00:23:051 (6) - ctrl j?
00:50:989 (3,4,5,6,1) - this part calls for a 1/4 stream
01:28:489 (5) same as 00:22:489 (5)

the other diffs looks fine to me
good luck :)
BL-Daisuki
33 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
BL-Daisuki
I'll resurrect this map as soon as possible
Cloudchaser
2,327 posts
Joined May 2012
Cloudchaser


You're free to ignore ~ ^^

[General]
  1. Good enough

[Hard]
  1. 00:06:176 (3) - i don't like this slider because starts before the music.
  2. 01:33:739 (1,2) - ^ same as above.
[Normal]
  1. 00:30:739 (4,5,6,7) - try not to make stacks of notes followed.
  2. 00:36:739 (3,4,5,6) - ^
[Easy]
  1. AR 4? maybe
Good Luck ~
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