1. Cruel (5 stars, 675 notes)
2. Hard (4.49 stars, 348 notes)
3. Normal (2.07 stars, 190 notes)

Hitomi May wrote:

SPOILER

tesy play
after this I can say: "You must change combo color. I can't play this map with video, it's very hard with this colors"
But it'c cool song, and nice map
good luck
If you want mod, pm me o.o

Hitomi May wrote:

SPOILER

tesy play
after this I can say: "You must change combo color. I can't play this map with video, it's very hard with this colors"
But it'c cool song, and nice map
good luck
If you want mod, pm me o.o

7odoa wrote:

這真的不难...我可以A了...

SPOILER

記得設定PreviewTime~

Bobo wrote:

[Cruel]

Hmm... Your new style seems to milk the slider start/end points as much as possible, try not to over do it though...
Also, this map can be a lot harder for a 220bpm song. nobody would doubt that, but i aimed for a 18m score

00:38:187 (1,2,3,4) - I don't see how these fit. listen. delete the notes and turn louder the speaker or your earpiece and LISTEN
00:45:277 (2) - Move it so it's not underneath (1). no
00:48:550 (2) - ^ no
00:56:323 (4) - Why the start point stack? Looks ugly. next time plz suggest something, i changed to a slider
00:57:687 (3) - Rotate 97 degrees clockwise. no
01:02:868 (6) - Don't place the start point under a slider. give a reason
01:17:459 (4) - Looks ugly.
01:17:732 (1,2) - ^
01:18:823 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Hard to read. um
01:23:732 (4,5,6,7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/256442 nah it will boost the score above 18m
01:31:368 (3,4,1) - Looks squashed against the bottom of the screen. editor is a bit difference than actual playing
01:32:187 (1,1,1,1) - Space these out. no
01:44:323 (4) - Don't put the start point under a slider.
01:45:414 (3) - Stack end point with end point of (2). this looks good though, if you notice, i try to map 1st kiai with flow, second kiai with some stops, and third kiai with little jumps
01:47:459 (2) - Move it. beat it
01:48:277 (1,2,1,2,1) - Be more creative. um, when i do some creative things, i get comments like ugly, unrankable, unreadable, why do you do this, move this away etc. what should i do?
01:58:096 (1,2) - Stack. ok
02:10:505 (5) - Move to white tick. listen
02:15:823 (2) - Move.
02:39:277 (1) - Hard to read. yeah...maybe will change it someday if players really feel disgusting about it, but what i want is hard to read
02:43:914 (1,2,1) - Hard to read. there is a NC there, and it is same as 02:53:732 (1,1,2) - etc
02:47:187 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing looks strange. ok
04:12:823 (1) - Delete NC. actually what i want is make nobody fail at last part...

Also. 01:33:482 - Preview point.

It's okay if I you don't want me to finish my diff... your loss... ;D i dont want a approval guest diff, but if you really wanna map it, i can place it in my creator's word after rank

Hitomi May wrote:

Hello :3
Sorry for waiting please

General
You must do a normal maybe, but the diff spread is 1m, 6m, and 18m, what i should do is a 2nd insane
set a preview point um..
Do hitsoundы more systematic in all the diffs nah, why? because it looks good?

[Easy]

00:38:732 (1) - it's strange, why not in the center? why is it strange not in the center
01:05:732 (1) - 1 gird up? ok, haha
01:33:550 (x) - add please ok
02:11:187 (1) - move to 02:11:050 ok
03:42:823 (4) - extended to 03:43:914 ok

[Hard]

00:53:732 (3) - too low
00:54:550 (1) - move to 00:54:414 did some changes
01:00:959 (4,5,6) - this will be better im sorry, did you copy the wrong thing?

01:09:005 (4) - slider should not touch circle this is not a rule, maybe you are misguided by some modders
01:18:277 (1) - it's hell for hidden players
01:20:459 (1) - ^
01:24:823 (1) - ^
01:34:641 (2) - ^ yeah, haha
01:38:323 (2,3,4,5) -
i can see the reason, but i think the way it is is also acceptable
01:39:959 (7,8,9,1) -

01:42:141 (x) - add ok
01:42:277 (x) - ^ no
02:08:187 (4,5) - too low
02:12:277 (4) - do this slide like a next ok
02:15:550 (3) - wtf! hahaha
02:36:141 (3,1,2) - nice

02:51:959 (2) - too low
03:23:187 (1) - make evenly ok
04:06:277 (5) - delete ok
04:06:414 (x) - add ok

[Cruel]

00:45:277 (2) - please, move to another place
00:48:550 (2) - ^
00:55:914 (3) - distance
00:56:323 (4) - move to another place
01:17:459 (4) - hard to see
01:18:005 (2) - ^
01:19:096 (2) - ^
01:19:641 (4) - ^
01:20:187 (2) - ^
fix all similar
03:01:096 (3,1) - hard to see
04:07:914 (4) - too low

Awesome song! Good luck with this

1. 00:38:732 (1) - 移到00:38:459開始
2. 01:25:368 (1) - finish(如果不要的話 把01:24:823 (3)的finish去掉 再加個finish在這~
3. 01:27:005 - ^ (或者whistle也ok :3)
4. 01:29:187 - ^
   (上面三個如果有加的話~ 後面有重複的地方記得也要加:3)
5. 01:29:732 (1,2,1) - 這樣疊對新手可能有些難.. 試著讓他們不要疊到?
6. 02:39:550 (3) - finish
7. 02:40:641 (5) - Remove finish
8. 03:03:550 (1,2) - 要不要跟vocal? 加個圈在03:04:368
9. 03:15:277 (2,3) - 重疊在E不是很好
10. 03:28:641 (2,3,1) - 間距不一 有損美觀度 fix it plz!!

1. 00:38:187 (1,2,3,4) - 這個anti-jump真的太小了些...不是很好看..用DS 0.1排排看 好看不少>w< (IMO)
2. 01:29:187 (2) - 讓這個slider的弧度跟之後那個大slider一樣好些:3 像這樣!! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/257653
3. 01:48:277 (3) - 減少一個折返 加個圈在01:49:232 (因為vocal這樣唱的._. 不然打起來好怪>_<)
4. 03:05:596 (1) - 最後要扭就要再大些~ 這樣有點像不小心拉醜的._.(不夠扭 試試這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/257657
5. 04:09:414 (2) - 跟vocal好些 ˋ折返點移到04:09:687 這slider結束在04:09:959 再在04:10:232 - 加個圈:3

1. 00:55:641 (1,2,3) - 間距拉大點~ 疊到了不好看的>_<
2. 01:02:868 (6) - 右移一格好些 這樣才有完全在(5)的下面:O
3. 01:06:277 (2,3,4) - 間距拉大些
4. 01:14:868 - 加個圈
5. 01:48:823 (1,2) - 要不要疊起來?
6. 02:31:368 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這邊應該比較適合加大間距唄:3 試試看這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/257670
   

   104,208,151368,5,0
   200,142,151504,1,0
   290,208,151641,1,2
   248,310,151777,1,0
   140,316,151913,5,4

7. 03:36:277 (1,2,3) - 排成一個3角形吧~ 這樣好看些:> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/257675
   

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