Just a random mod
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General]
- Move to pending if this beatmap is done.
- Since it seem you want to go for approval, add (Approval) in
forum thread (don't change anything in game). So something like these maps
viewtopic.php?t=50521 viewtopic.php?t=53791 Nicer for MATs/BATs/modder when they check it as some people may be curious at why there is only one diff and to make it easier to get more MATs/BATs to check this once bubbled.
- Add
asuseka to tags
http://vndb.org/v420- Why 128kbs mp3? Some of the guitar cymbal sound doesn't sound very clear to me. I would prefer if you use 192kbs. Here's one I encode
http://puu.sh/ihsZ. Maximum beatmap size is 24mb so it should be fine.Timing.... you need a timing check from here
viewtopic.php?f=60&t=13795 I'm sure you need more than 2 red timing poitns.
1st red timing point: 00:00:591
2nd red timing point: 00:15:023
3rd red timing point: 00:18:156
4th red timing point: 01:06:796
5th red timing point: 01:14:018
6th red timing point: 02:15:072
7th red timing point: 02:22:293
, this are just rough timing, you need an experienced timer to time this. New video offset -120 (edit via notepad).
I will be modding to this timing and mp3, so if you decide not to change the mp3, some timing will be off.
That should be all, I don't think you should silent the slider slide for all parts through, but I guess it's fine
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Insane]
00:05:504 (3) - I think you should stack on the begin of (4). Since (2) is following instrument and (3) & (4) is following vocals, this will represent this and I feel there should be a jump here.
00:26:432 (2,3,4) - This part plays a bit weird for me, maybe you should add jumps. Something like this (1.5x distant snap, 4 is stacked on begin of 00:25:139 (2).
http://puu.sh/ihIO00:27:208 (6) - Snap this to 1.5x distant snap if you follow above suggestion.
00:32:251 (4,5,6) - Similar reason to 00:26:432, feel like you should add jump. Something like this
http://puu.sh/ihK7. (5 and 6 are stack on each other, 4 is stack on begin of 00:31:087 (1)
00:47:639 (1,2,3,4) - This is hard to read especially if you use default skin, consider changing it. I always miss this the first few times I play it, but once I manage to get it, it feel really nice so you don't have to change if you don't want to, but if you can come up with something else, would be great.
00:53:199 (6) - Stack this on the begin of 00:52:035 (4), the jump feel great. Adjust (4) & (5) a bit afterward so like this
http://puu.sh/ihNh00:56:820 (2) - Feel like there should be a jump, stack this at end of 00:56:173 (9)?
00:57:208 (4) - Should do jump here as well if you follow above suggestion.
01:00:828 (3,4) - I think you should stack 3 at end of 01:00:052 (5) and move (4) to x:408 y:296
http://puu.sh/ihMl01:16:863 (4) - Should change to like this
http://puu.sh/ihOT so that the distant snap between this and next note is 2.8x. Don't see why there's no jump here, makes it play bad for me.
01:18:932 (7) - Should do a slider instead to follow vocal and remove pause. The pause really break the flow for me.
01:30:570 (3) - Why is this slider the only one not curved? Should be curved as well.
01:24:621 (5) - I think it's better to do jump then to do this. Perhaps stack on 01:23:069 (2).
01:27:725 (3,4) - Feel like you should do jump, feel a bit unnatural to song feel for distant snap to be kept equal for me. Something like this
http://puu.sh/ihQ4 01:42:466 (2) - Nazi:Would look better if you do 1 grid left (grid 4) for me.
01:46:863 (3) - Would be more natural to play if you move this more to the left, but you will have to adjust following notes, your choice.
01:46:992 (4) - Use 2.0x distant snap for this note as well, see no reason to go back to 1.5x.
01:49:578 (2,3,4,5,6) - I always miss this. I try to make it better and got something like this
http://puu.sh/ihUC.
01:56:949 (5) - Jump for this note would make this pattern better for me (1.2x distant snap)
01:59:665 (2) - Lead nicer to next jump if you snap this to 1.5x distant snap.
02:00:311 (6) - If you follow above suggestion, stack it on (2) and place it like this
http://puu.sh/ihXn so that it points to (7).
02:00:570 (7,8,9) - if you follow previous two suggestions. Stack (7) at begin of 01:59:277 (4), and stack (9) on top of (2). Snap (8) so that the distant to and from previous note is 1.8x.
http://puu.sh/ihXR02:07:294 (4) - You did jump for 02:05:225 (4) so why not here?
02:09:363 (1) - You should stack this at end of 02:08:846 (1) instead of the begin / at x:324 y:144. Current spacing of this note feel like an anti jump to me. This made it feel a lot more natural for me.
02:16:623 (4) - Jump perhaps, but fine if you don't want to.
02:21:796 (6,7) - I think you should place like this for more smoother feel
http://puu.sh/ihZk02:37:293 (3,4,5) - Should do jumps for all of these notes, after the 3.0x jump, this note feel really bad to play. If you don't have an idea, try something like this
http://puu.sh/ii15.
02:40:915 (1) - Should be a jump on this note, ctrl select 02:40:915 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and snap it to 1.5x distant snap. No need to fix the spacing afterward as the jump make sense.
02:42:208 (2) - Similar here, should be a jump here, snap this to 1.5x distant snap like the rest in this combo.
02:46:087 (1) - Ctrl+R and place at x:256:108. This jump feel too big
http://puu.sh/ii1V03:10:139 (3) - Easier to read if you stack it with (4) for me.
03:10:656 (6) - Jump for this? You did jump for 03:11:173 (2).
03:11:432 (3,4,5) - I see why you did anti jump, but it doesn't flow well with how you map here. You should consider changing this.
03:16:087 (1,2,3) - ^ This one feel a lot better through.
03:19:708 (3,4,5) - ^ This one not really, due to upcoming jumps and how you place it.
03:35:484 (6) - I think it's better if you snap this to 1.5x distant nsap.
03:43:759 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe you can try placing this in another way? Fine if not through.
03:48:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Considering repeating sliders since you did this at 01:21:518 & 02:42:208 and not nice to see this pattern at the end of the song.
04:03:932 (2) - Try placing at x:268 y:16. Jumps flow better for me when this is done.
03:50:096 (5,6) - Better to stack this stream on the slider 03:50:225 (1). Don't fix spacing, jump makes sense.
03:53:846 (3,4) - Imo, would be better if you change this to a slider and do jump on it.
04:01:087 (2) - Ctrl+H, you have lot of big jumps here, so I think you should do one here as well.
04:08:328 (5,6) - Use 1.5x or higher distant snapping for both of these sliders, really flow breaking at current spacing.
04:09:363 (3,4,5) - Don't like this anti jump much, similar reason to 03:19:708.
04:25:915 (3,5) - Jump should really be on (3) & (5), but it doesn't play that bad so I guess it's fine. If you can change so that there is jump on these 2 notes, would be great.
Long mod, but song is 4 mins anyways. Everything is just suggestions through, but I highly recommend to follow some. The map is quite fun, but there is a few weird bits, atleast for me.
Hopefully I didn't miss anything I want to mention and have a star for a very fun map!
Good luck
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