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Faylan - Dead END

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Topic Starter
rui
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年9月10日 at 0:10:37

Artist: Faylan
Title: Dead END
Source: Mirai Nikki
Tags: kayesara opening kanarin heatkai future diary gasai yuno
BPM: 183
Filesize: 2915kb
Play Time: 01:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.15 stars, 84 notes)
  2. Hard (4.9 stars, 223 notes)
  3. H's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 502 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 308 notes)
  5. Kana's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 600 notes)
  6. KS's Hard (5 stars, 245 notes)
  7. Normal (3.98 stars, 127 notes)
Download: Faylan - Dead END
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Insane... done
KS's Hard...done (create by KayeSara)
Hard...done
Normal... done
Easy...done
Kana's Taiko Oni...done (create by KanaRin)
H's Taiko Oni...done(create by HeatKai)

MP3 cut is Thite thank you :3
Insane > KS's Hard > Hard > Normal > Easy
Thite
はい、こんばんわ!!
Topic Starter
rui

Thite wrote:

はい、こんばんわ!!
(4 minutes ago)
(((((((( ;゚Д゚))))))))ガクガクブルブルガタガタブルブル
KayeSara
Finished
And I'll give you sound's effection later.

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (rui) [KS's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
rui
Thank you :3
Topic Starter
rui
Thite is Processing mp3 music :D
22:12 <rui> : MP3のカットとビットレート下げるのお願いできる?
22:12 <Thite> : うん
22:12 <rui> : 実は現状360でフルなんだよね
22:12 <rui> : 理由はアニメの使うと温室が絶望
22:12 <Thite> : 192でいいの?
22:12 <rui> : いいよ
22:15 <Thite> : どの辺できればいいの??
22:16 <rui> : 1:29:734ぐらいでフェイドアウトが終わりきるのが理想かな
22:17 <Thite> : それだったらtvsizeの音源探したほうがしっくりくることない?
22:17 <rui> : 音質がいいのがなかったのよ
22:17 <Thite> : そうなの?
22:17 <Thite> : 探したらすぐ見つけれそうなんだけど
22:17 <rui> : 高画質はあるけどOPの高音質ってない
22:18 <rui> : 後オフセットずれそうだからできれば避けたいかなぁ
22:18 <Thite> : weezyとかの
22:18 <Thite> : 音質ヨクナイの
22:18 <Thite> : よくないのな
22:18 <rui> : よくないでしょ?
22:20 <Thite> : 難しいなピンポイントできるの
22:20 <Thite> : 2番始ってしまう
22:21 <rui> : 2番が入るのだけは避けたいな
22:21 <rui> : 実際2番が入らなかったらフェイドアウト話でも平気レベル
22:21 <rui> : はなし
22:21 <Thite> : やってみるか
22:25 <Thite> : ttp://puu.sh/XXXXX←(This URLv is fake)
22:25 <Thite> : konnnakanzi?
22:26 <rui> : きいてみてる
22:27 <rui> : 完璧 
22:27 <rui> : ありがとう
KayeSara
Topic Starter
rui
Kanon thank you for your custom sound :)

ALL diff finished and start mod request
Muya
[General]:
コンボカラーのCombo 4だけ明るめの色なので、他のコンボカラーにあわせるために暗めの色に変えてください。
動画も入れましょう

Normal:
00:14:160 (1) - 始点とスライドの部分にwhistle?
00:28:587 (2) - 00:26:783 (2) - の判定で折り返しの部分が隠れてしまうので、隠れないように直してください


Insane:
00:46:455 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/232106 ?

[Hard]
00:54:980 (8,1) - (8) add new combo (1) remove new combo.
KayeSara
>Muya
Thx for your modding, fix it.

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (rui) [KS's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
rui
[quote="Muya"][General]:
コンボカラーのCombo 4だけ明るめの色なので、他のコンボカラーにあわせるために暗めの色に変えてください。ok
動画も入れましょう これフルのをカットしたmp3だから動画だとあわない

Normal:
00:14:160 (1) - 始点とスライドの部分にwhistle? no
00:28:587 (2) - 00:26:783 (2) - の判定で折り返しの部分が隠れてしまうので、隠れないように直してください ok


Insane:
00:46:455 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/232106 ? no

Muya thank you mod
Melophobia
hello, thank you for your request.
just suggestion, so you dont have to change them if you disagree.

here we go.

General

add "opening" to the tags.
nothing to point out else.

Easy

newcombo
00:58:914 (1) - remove
01:20:718 (1,1) - remove

hitsound
00:03:832 (1) - finish
00:06:455 (1) - finish
00:09:078 (1) - finish
00:11:701 (1) - finish
00:15:308 (1) - 終点finish
00:17:931 (1) - 終点finish
00:20:554 (1) - 終点finish
00:36:619 (1) - finish
00:39:242 (1) - finish
00:41:865 (1) - finish
01:10:554 (1) - finish
01:13:013 (1) - 終点finish

design/ rhythm
00:39:242 (1,2,3,4) - この赤線はEasyには難しい気がするからSliderに変えてみるとか。
00:44:488 (1,2,3) - ^
00:52:193 - add note
00:54:980 (1,2) - ここは大丈夫かな、たぶん
00:59:898 (1) - 赤線からSlider始めちゃって良いと思います
01:15:636 (1,2) - はじっこが重なるのでこのsliderはよくないかも
01:22:521 - add a note with a finish
//
僕だけかもしれないけど、序盤と中盤以降の難しさに差があるような・・・?
まぁ問題ない範囲だと思いますが...

Normal

newcombo
00:41:209 (1) - remove
00:59:078 (5) - remove

hitsound
00:03:832 (1) - 始点finish
00:17:931 (1) - 終点finish
00:36:619 (1) - 始点finish
00:36:619 (1) - 終点finish
01:00:062 (1) - 始点finish
01:05:472 (1) - 始点finish
01:10:554 (1) - 始点finish
01:13:013 (1) - 終点finish

design/ rhythm
00:19:570 (4,2) - こんな感じになっちゃうので少し4と2の間のSpacing広くした方がいいかな
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/232391
00:20:882 (2,3) - 上に同じ。
00:45:964 (4) - use this code~
358,208,45964,2,0,B|352:280|277:313|216:288|176:240|176:168|222:128|272:120,1,350,6|4
01:22:521 - add a note with a finish
//

KS's Hard

newcombo
not applicable. i couldnt find anything wrong, sorry.

hitsound
00:23:669 (2,4) - add finishes?
00:25:964 (3) - finish to the beginning
00:35:308 (1) - hmm, how about adding finish to this spinner? sounds good to me.


design/ rhythm
00:17:603 (1,2) - try this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/232380
00:30:390 (1,2) - it would be better to use the spacing which looks like same, i think.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/232384
01:02:029 (2) - hmm.. sounds better if this note is under the end of (5).
01:12:193 (1) - i think the slider is not suitable here, try this rhythm or something else.

01:22:521 - add a note here with a finish. i suggest same thing as Insane, therefore you should change it too if rui changes it
//

really nice map, and enjoyable. i like your rhythm so much. xD
and, sorry for my poor english, please let me know via IRC if you dont understand.


Insane

newcombo
00:20:554 (1) - remove newcombo
00:20:882 (3) - add newcombo
00:22:849 (4) - remove
00:25:800 (1) - remove
00:25:964 (2) - add

hitsound
00:03:832 (1) - 始点finish
00:11:373 (5) - 始点にwhistle 終点にclap, whistle
00:18:259 (3) - 始点finish
00:36:619 (1) - 始点finish
00:41:701 (4) - clap
00:46:783 (3) - clap
01:00:062 (1) - 始点finish
01:05:472 (1) - 始点finish
01:06:619 (1) - 始点finish
01:10:554 (1) - 始点finish

design/ rhythm
00:34:652 (2,3,4) - 三角形にしてみるとか
00:37:275 (3,4,5,6,7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/232374 こんな感じだとカーソルに動き出て叩きやすいかな~
00:41:537 (3) - 5の終端にstack
00:43:013 (4) - 1grid 下
00:46:783 (3) - ここもstack
01:02:029 (1,2,3,4) - 2と4が重なるのでちょっと角度変えてみるとか。
01:09:242 (6) - 01:09:570 - にclapが欲しいので終点をそこに。
01:21:046 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - ちょっと左にずらして中心に持ってきた方がいいかな
01:22:521 - ここNoteあるといいかな もし置くならfinishも。
//

面白かったです、がんばってねー
Topic Starter
rui

Melophobia wrote:

hello, thank you for your request.
just suggestion, so you dont have to change them if you disagree.

here we go.

General

add "opening" to the tags. added
nothing to point out else.

Easy

newcombo
00:58:914 (1) - remove ok
01:20:718 (1,1) - remove ok

hitsound
00:03:832 (1) - finish ok
00:06:455 (1) - finish ok
00:09:078 (1) - finish ok
00:11:701 (1) - finish ok
00:15:308 (1) - 終点finish ok
00:17:931 (1) - 終点finish ok
00:20:554 (1) - 終点finish ok
00:36:619 (1) - finish no
00:39:242 (1) - finish
00:41:865 (1) - finish ok
01:10:554 (1) - finish ok
01:13:013 (1) - 終点finish ok

design/ rhythm
00:39:242 (1,2,3,4) - この赤線はEasyには難しい気がするからSliderに変えてみるとか。ok
00:44:488 (1,2,3) - ^ ok
00:52:193 - add note ok
00:54:980 (1,2) - ここは大丈夫かな、たぶん 外したくない音が赤線に多いからね大丈夫であることを願います
00:59:898 (1) - 赤線からSlider始めちゃって良いと思います ok
01:15:636 (1,2) - はじっこが重なるのでこのsliderはよくないかも ok
01:22:521 - add a note with a finish 伸ばしからスピン入れたいのでno
//
僕だけかもしれないけど、序盤と中盤以降の難しさに差があるような・・・?
まぁ問題ない範囲だと思いますが... Easyは音が限られてくるのでサビを盛り上げるように作るからだと思う

Normal

newcombo
00:41:209 (1) - remove 前の4つが映えなくなるのでno
00:59:078 (5) - remove ok

hitsound
00:03:832 (1) - 始点finish ok
00:17:931 (1) - 終点finish ok
00:36:619 (1) - 始点finish no
00:36:619 (1) - 終点finish no
01:00:062 (1) - 始点finish ok
01:05:472 (1) - 始点finish ok
01:10:554 (1) - 始点finish ok
01:13:013 (1) - 終点finish ok

design/ rhythm
00:19:570 (4,2) - こんな感じになっちゃうので少し4と2の間のSpacing広くした方がいいかな ok
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/232391
00:20:882 (2,3) - 上に同じ。ok
00:45:964 (4) - use this code~
358,208,45964,2,0,B|352:280|277:313|216:288|176:240|176:168|222:128|272:120,1,350,6|4
grid3できれいに作れるのすごいです ok
01:22:521 - add a note with a finish no
//

Insane

newcombo
00:20:554 (1) - remove newcombo ok
00:20:882 (3) - add newcombo ok
00:22:849 (4) - remove ok
00:25:800 (1) - remove ok
00:25:964 (2) - add ok

hitsound
00:03:832 (1) - 始点finish ok
00:11:373 (5) - 始点にwhistle 終点にclap, whistle ok
00:18:259 (3) - 始点finish ok
00:36:619 (1) - 始点finish ok
00:41:701 (4) - clap ok
00:46:783 (3) - clap ok
01:00:062 (1) - 始点finish ok
01:05:472 (1) - 始点finish ok
01:06:619 (1) - 始点finish ok
01:10:554 (1) - 始点finish ok

design/ rhythm
00:34:652 (2,3,4) - 三角形にしてみるとか no
00:37:275 (3,4,5,6,7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/232374 こんな感じだとカーソルに動き出て叩きやすいかな~ nice idea
00:41:537 (3) - 5の終端にstack ok
00:43:013 (4) - 1grid 下 ok
00:46:783 (3) - ここもstack ok
01:02:029 (1,2,3,4) - 2と4が重なるのでちょっと角度変えてみるとか。no
01:09:242 (6) - 01:09:570 - にclapが欲しいので終点をそこに。ok
01:21:046 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - ちょっと左にずらして中心に持ってきた方がいいかな ok
01:22:521 - ここNoteあるといいかな もし置くならfinishも。no
//

面白かったです、がんばってねー
丁寧に見てもらった上に星までありがとうございました。ヽ(・ω・`)ノ
KayeSara

Melophobia wrote:

KS's Hard

newcombo
not applicable. i couldnt find anything wrong, sorry.

hitsound
00:23:669 (2,4) - add finishes?
00:25:964 (3) - finish to the beginning
00:35:308 (1) - hmm, how about adding finish to this spinner? sounds good to me.
Fix all :3

design/ rhythm
00:17:603 (1,2) - try this Fix
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/232380
00:30:390 (1,2) - it would be better to use the spacing which looks like same, i think. Hmmm, shorten the distance
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/232384
01:02:029 (2) - hmm.. sounds better if this note is under the end of (5). Nope, it seems fine here
01:12:193 (1) - i think the slider is not suitable here, try this rhythm or something else.OK change it!

01:22:521 - add a note here with a finish. i suggest same thing as Insane, therefore you should change it too if rui changes itKeep it in mind :3
//

really nice map, and enjoyable. i like your rhythm so much. xD Really? Oh...my first time to make a high BPM hard, thank you!
and, sorry for my poor english, please let me know via IRC if you dont understand.
Thanks for your modding!

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (rui) [KS's Hard].osu
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ rui ~ :)

Random mod for this ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. I think not need read in time,Remove pls.(too long)
  2. Oh,this Mp3 end point a bit strange,cut ver?
    Try find other.

[Insane]


  1. OD-1,because Insane diff need moved to last diff.
  2. 00:09:078 - Remove clap and Add finish.
  3. 00:11:701 - ^
  4. 00:15:636 - Remove clap.
  5. 00:25:964 - ^
  6. 00:28:587 - ^
  7. 00:49:734 - Add note and finish.
  8. 00:50:062 - Add finish.
  9. 01:05:472 - Remove clap and Add finish.
  10. 01:05:800 (2,3,4) - This may sound strange, I think 1/2 it's ok.

[KS's Hard]


  1. 00:09:078 - Add finish.
  2. 00:25:144 (7) - Change 1/4 will be better with me.
  3. 00:25:964 - Add finish.
  4. 00:28:587 - ^
  5. 00:36:619 - ^
  6. 00:41:865 - ^
  7. 01:06:128 - ^
  8. 01:13:341 - ^
  9. 01:15:964 - ^
  10. 01:17:111 - ^

[Normal]


  1. 00:09:078 - Remove clap and Add finish.
  2. 00:11:701 - Remove clap.
  3. 00:15:636 - ^
  4. 00:36:619 - Remove clap and Add finish.
  5. 00:41:865 - ^

That's all ~ I like this fight ranked ~

Good luck ~ ;)
Topic Starter
rui

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ rui ~ :)

Random mod for this ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. I think not need read in time,Remove pls.(too long) Removed
  2. Oh,this Mp3 end point a bit strange,cut ver? Yes this mp3 is cut ver. Because opening's mp3 is low quality. so no change :(
    Try find other.

[Insane]


  1. OD-1,because Insane diff need moved to last diff. I want to use OD8. no changed
  2. 00:09:078 - Remove clap and Add finish. ok
  3. 00:11:701 - ^ ok
  4. 00:15:636 - Remove clap. ok
  5. 00:25:964 - ^ ok
  6. 00:28:587 - ^ ok
  7. 00:49:734 - Add note and finish. no
  8. 00:50:062 - Add finish. ok
  9. 01:05:472 - Remove clap and Add finish. ok
  10. 01:05:800 (2,3,4) - This may sound strange, I think 1/2 it's ok. ok

[Normal]


  1. 00:09:078 - Remove clap and Add finish. ok
  2. 00:11:701 - Remove clap. ok
  3. 00:15:636 - ^ ok
  4. 00:36:619 - Remove clap and Add finish. ok
  5. 00:41:865 - ^ ok


That's all ~ I like this fight ranked ~ I will do my best :)

Good luck ~ ;)
Kawayi Rika thank you mod :33
manten
HI :) :) :)

提案しかできません!
音取りの参考程度にしてください...
全部無視してもいいです :3

[Easy]

00:13:013 (3) - このスライダーを00:15:308 - ここまで伸ばす 00:15:636 - ここにノート
00:17:931 (1) - 削除 →00:18:259 - に 終点を00:19:242 - までのスライダー追加
00:20:554 (1) - 削除 →00:20:882 - ノート追加
00:25:800 (1) - 始点を00:25:964 - にして 00:27:111 - を終点 →00:27:439 - にスライダー追加 00:28:259 - 終点
⇒00:28:423 (1) を 00:28:587 - に始点移動して往復消しの00:29:898 - 終点
00:32:029 (2) - 終点を 00:32:521
00:33:669 (1) - 00:33:832 - ここに移動
01:08:095 (1) - 終点を01:08:587 →01:08:750 (2) - 削除 01:08:914 - と 01:09:242 - にノート追加
01:10:062 (1) - ノートに変更
01:13:669 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Normalみたいな単発?→ 01:13:996 (3) - スライダーに変更 終点 01:14:488 - ⇒01:14:816 - スライダー追加 01:15:144 - 終点
01:15:636 (1) - 始点を01:15:964 - ここに移動 01:16:455 - 終点
01:16:947 (2) - ここも始点を01:17:111 - に移動 01:17:767 - 終点
01:18:259 (1) - ここも01:18:587 - に始点移動 01:19:406 - 終点 →01:19:734 - にスライダー 01:21:209 - 終点 (途中のノートは削除)

[Normal]

01:08:095 (1) - もう一回往復? → 01:08:750 (2) - 削除 01:08:914 - にノート or スライダー? (01:09:242 - ノートならここにもノート スライダーならここで終点)
01:18:259 (1) - ノートに変更 →01:18:587 - スライダー追加 01:18:914 - 終点  01:19:242 (6) - を01:19:078 - に移動

[Insane]

00:16:619 (6) - 逆方向に向けたほうがいい?
00:20:800 - ノート追加?
00:31:865 (4) - ここの往復スライダーは音と合ってない?
00:49:898 - ここから3連打の形になったほうがいいかも

[KS's Hard]

00:57:111 - Maybe...add note?

I love mapper use Grid Lv.1 :3


以上!
頑張ってください! :)
KayeSara

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[KS's Hard]


  1. 00:09:078 - Add finish.
  2. 00:25:144 (7) - Change 1/4 will be better with me.
  3. 00:25:964 - Add finish.
  4. 00:28:587 - ^
  5. 00:36:619 - ^
  6. 00:41:865 - ^
  7. 01:06:128 - ^
  8. 01:13:341 - ^
  9. 01:15:964 - ^
  10. 01:17:111 - ^

Fix the hitsound, thanks for your modding :3

manten wrote:

[KS's Hard]

00:57:111 - Maybe...add note?
Sure!

I love mapper use Grid Lv.1 :3
Hmmm, because I nerver use grid XD and the Gril Lv1 makes it nicer to see.
Thanks for your modding:3

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (rui) [KS's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
rui

manten wrote:

HI :) :) :)

提案しかできません!
音取りの参考程度にしてください...
全部無視してもいいです :3

[Easy]

00:13:013 (3) - このスライダーを00:15:308 - ここまで伸ばす 00:15:636 - ここにノート no
00:17:931 (1) - 削除 →00:18:259 - に 終点を00:19:242 - までのスライダー追加 no
00:20:554 (1) - 削除 →00:20:882 - ノート追加 no
00:25:800 (1) - 始点を00:25:964 - にして 00:27:111 - を終点 →00:27:439 - にスライダー追加 00:28:259 - 終点 no
⇒00:28:423 (1) を 00:28:587 - に始点移動して往復消しの00:29:898 - 終点 ok
00:32:029 (2) - 終点を 00:32:521 no
00:33:669 (1) - 00:33:832 - ここに移動 ok
01:08:095 (1) - 終点を01:08:587 →01:08:750 (2) - 削除 01:08:914 - と 01:09:242 - にノート追加 no
01:10:062 (1) - ノートに変更 no
01:13:669 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Normalみたいな単発?→ 01:13:996 (3) - スライダーに変更 終点 01:14:488 - ⇒01:14:816 - スライダー追加 01:15:144 - 終点 ok changed
01:15:636 (1) - 始点を01:15:964 - ここに移動 01:16:455 - 終点 no
01:16:947 (2) - ここも始点を01:17:111 - に移動 01:17:767 - 終点 no
01:18:259 (1) - ここも01:18:587 - に始点移動 01:19:406 - 終点 →01:19:734 - にスライダー 01:21:209 - 終点 (途中のノートは削除) no

[Normal]

01:08:095 (1) - もう一回往復? → 01:08:750 (2) - 削除 01:08:914 - にノート or スライダー? (01:09:242 - ノートならここにもノート スライダーならここで終点) no
01:18:259 (1) - ノートに変更 →01:18:587 - スライダー追加 01:18:914 - 終点  01:19:242 (6) - を01:19:078 - に移動 ok

[Insane]

00:16:619 (6) - 逆方向に向けたほうがいい? no
00:20:800 - ノート追加? no
00:31:865 (4) - ここの往復スライダーは音と合ってない? 色々試したけれどスライダー2つに分けたりしても変だったのでこのままで
00:49:898 - ここから3連打の形になったほうがいいかも ok

以上!
頑張ってください! :)
ありがとうmantenさん \(・ω・`)
thank you mod
Thite
すべて提案ですー

Easy
00:42:521 (2) - 1gridさげる?
00:44:488 (5) - リピート1回減らして00:46:291 (1) を 00:45:964 - ここに移動

Normal
00:25:144 (1,2) - 両方とも1個前の赤線に置いた方が叩きやすいと思います
00:33:669 (1) - remove new combo
01:08:750 (2) - 1個前の赤線に移動

他はなにもいうことなかったです、がんばってください :)
Topic Starter
rui

Thite wrote:

すべて提案ですー

Easy
00:42:521 (2) - 1gridさげる? ok
00:44:488 (5) - リピート1回減らして00:46:291 (1) を 00:45:964 - ここに移動 ok

Normal
00:25:144 (1,2) - 両方とも1個前の赤線に置いた方が叩きやすいと思います no
00:33:669 (1) - remove new combo ok
01:08:750 (2) - 1個前の赤線に移動 ok

他はなにもいうことなかったです、がんばってください :)
modとstarありがとうThiteさん :)
SakiK
どうもーhere my mod from modque

very nice map,so All of suggestion

最初のヒットサウンドですが00:09:078 から音が増えるのでそこまでを少し音を控えめにしてみてはどうでしょうか?

[Easy]

00:44:488 (5) - 1grid 右(わざとならすみません
01:01:865 (1) - NC削除

[Normal]

00:20:554 (1) - Whistel
00:34:324 (1,2,3) - ここのHS少し音量下げてみてはどうでしょう
01:21:865 (2) - スライダーの終わり01:22:357

[KS's Hard]

00:43:996 (8) - NC

[Insane]

00:27:767 (6) - NC
00:31:046 (1,2) - 少し叩きづらい気がしました リズムの提案or音取り変えたくないならこうとか
01:03:669 (7) - NC

たいしたこと書けずすみません 変更なしならkds投げないでくれると嬉しいです 
fight~
KayeSara
>SakiK
Fix it , thanks for your modding :3
By the way, you're interesting ava XD

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (rui) [KS's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
rui

SakiK wrote:

どうもーhere my mod from modque

very nice map,so All of suggestion

最初のヒットサウンドですが00:09:078 から音が増えるのでそこまでを少し音を控えめにしてみてはどうでしょうか?

[Easy]

00:44:488 (5) - 1grid 右(わざとならすみません わざとじゃないですミスです(゚Д゚;)
01:01:865 (1) - NC削除 ok

[Normal]

00:20:554 (1) - Whistel ok
00:34:324 (1,2,3) - ここのHS少し音量下げてみてはどうでしょう 10下げた
01:21:865 (2) - スライダーの終わり01:22:357 ok

[Insane]
 
00:27:767 (6) - NC no
00:31:046 (1,2) - 少し叩きづらい気がしました リズムの提案 だいぶ捻くれたリズムの取り方してるのは自覚してます、ごめんなさいnoで
or音取り変えたくないならこうとか
01:03:669 (7) - NC ok

たいしたこと書けずすみません 変更なしならkds投げないでくれると嬉しいです 
fight~
SakiKさんmodと星ありがとうございました
SakiK thank you mod & star ;)
KayeSara
Fix two uncomfortable playing parts.

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (rui) [KS's Hard].osu
wring
ganbaren
Topic Starter
rui
wring's Irc mod

SPOILER
00:47 <rui> : やぁヽ(・ω・`)ノ
00:48 <wring> : ういっす
00:48 <rui> : modおねがいできる~?
00:48 <wring> : どれどれ
00:49 *rui is listening to (Faylan - Dead END (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43864]
00:49 <rui> : これです
00:50 <wring> : irc?
00:51 <rui> : どっちでも~
00:51 <wring> : hardもしたほうがいい?
00:51 <rui> : してくれたほうがうれしいかな
00:51 <wring> : ほいほい
00:55 <wring> : offset+5?
00:56 <rui> : ずれてるか
00:57 <wring> : EasyとNormalしかしてないけど
00:57 <wring> : 基本的にlateって出るから・・
00:57 <wring> : まぁただのsuggesttionです
00:57 <rui> : たしかにでるなぁw
00:57 <rui> : lateばかりだね
00:59 <wring> : まぁするなら大体+5
00:59 <rui> : おk
01:00 <rui> : +5してみるわ
01:02 <wring> : イージーからね
01:02 <wring> : http://puu.sh/fFYT
01:02 <wring> : 00:23:669 (1) - ここから
01:02 <wring> : こんな感じのほうがわかりやすい
01:02 <wring> : 00:31:046 (1,2) - ここもそこみたいに
01:04 <wring> : 00:34:980 (3) - remove
01:04 <wring> : 00:35:308 (4) - 始点を1個前の赤線から
01:05 <rui> : Easyで白紅って平気なの?
01:05 <rui> : ああみす
01:05 <rui> : (3)消すのか
01:06 <wring> : それと
01:06 <wring> : 00:34:324 (1,2) - 2消して
01:06 <wring> : ちゃう
01:06 <wring> : 2を右の赤線に
01:08 <wring> : 00:57:111 (1) - nazi 白赤分短くして始点を右の赤線に、まぁそれでもちょっと違和感あるから、何も言えません
01:08 <wring> : nn
01:09 <wring> : 右の白線でした
01:11 <wring> : 01:18:259 (1) -
01:11 <wring> : http://puu.sh/fG1F
01:11 <wring> : こんな感じはどうでしょ
01:13 <rui> : そこはやりやすさ重視でnoかなぁ・・・
01:13 <rui> : 違和感があるのはわかります
01:13 <wring> : そかそかw
01:13 <wring> : 01:21:537 (1) - 終点一緒で始点を右の赤線へ
01:14 <wring> : 配置は特に言うことないです
01:16 <wring> : 00:25:144 (1,2) - すごい違和感あります
01:16 <wring> : あ、ノーマルね
01:16 <rui> : うん
01:17 <wring> : 正直消しちゃったほうがいい気がする
01:18 <rui> : Normalでここ音は作れそうにないしね 了解
01:19 <wring> : 00:25:800 (1) -
01:20 <wring> : http://puu.sh/fG4f
01:20 <wring> : みたいな感じはどうでしょう
01:20 <rui> : 採用ですヽ(´ー`)ノ
01:21 <wring> : 00:31:046 (1) -
01:21 <wring> : http://puu.sh/fG4M
01:21 <wring> : もこんな感じ
01:23 <wring> : 00:34:324 (1) -
01:23 <wring> : http://puu.sh/fG5l
01:23 <wring> : どうでしょう
01:24 <rui> : いいと思います
01:28 <wring> : さびむずー
01:29 <rui> : 難しすぎる?
01:30 <wring> : 違和感の正し方がむずくてw
01:30 <wring> : suggesttion
01:30 <wring> : http://puu.sh/fG7i
01:30 <wring> : http://puu.sh/fG7o
01:30 <wring> : 気合始まりからね
01:30 <wring> : 後白長にwhistleあったけど、合ってないから消した方が無難です
01:31 <wring> : そのあとは問題ありませんでした
01:33 <rui> : Easy Normalは なるべき白→白 or
01:33 <rui> : 赤→赤で置かないといけないからずいぶん無茶なことしてるんだよね 音取り的な意味で
01:33 <wring> : ぶっちゃけイージーがあるからノーマルはちょっと無茶していいと思ってます
01:34 <rui> : だな~
01:34 <wring> : まぁこの二つは時間あるときにね・・
01:34 <wring> : 次Insaneします
01:34 <rui> : あい
01:35 <wring> : 00:16:619 (6) - nazi 俺はctrl+rのほうが好き
01:38 <wring> : 00:31:291 (2) - 後ろの白長スタートにするか、前の赤線にスタートにしたほうがいい
01:39 <wring> : 00:43:669 (7) - もっと下にずらしてみては、窮屈に感じて戸惑う
01:39 <rui> : だめかなこういうのやっぱり
01:41 <wring> : 俺はこういう感じの6がスライダーの真ん中に来られるとどっちが先か一瞬迷っちゃうんだよね
01:42 <rui> : ほうほう
01:42 <wring> : 戻ってくる?パターンもあるし、先に進む?パターンもあるし
01:42 <wring> : 分かりやすいに越したことはない
01:42 <rui> : らじゃ
01:43 <wring> : 01:13:013 (1) - ここは普通に手前の赤線終わりでいいと思う
01:43 <wring> : それで1と2のNC入れ替え
01:44 <rui> : 確かにそうだな
01:45 <wring> : 01:16:455 (4) - 短くして青線終わりにしよう
01:45 <wring> : 01:17:766 (4) - ^
01:46 <wring> : 01:16:783 - nazi add note
01:46 <wring> : 01:18:095 - ^
01:46 <wring> : 01:19:570 - add note
01:47 <wring> : こんな感じ
01:47 <wring> : hitsoundだけど、サビ前はうるさく感じました
01:47 <rui> : ああ・・・
01:47 <wring> : 音量を下げるか、消すかした方がいいかもしれない
01:47 <wring> : サビはちょうどよかった
01:48 <rui> : 音量下げるかなぁ
01:49 <wring> : oh hard grid2
01:49 <rui> : なんだよねw
01:49 <rui> : まさかまさかの
01:50 <rui> : ヒットサウンドの音量はこのぐらいにすべきかもなぁ
01:50 <wring> : 参考にはなると思う
01:52 <wring> : 00:31:537 - add note?
01:54 <wring> : 00:33:832 (1,2) - replace NC from 1 to 2
01:56 <wring> : 01:11:701 (4) - remove?
01:56 <wring> : だけかな
KayeSara
>wring
00:31:537 - add note
00:33:832 (6,1) - changing the NC position
Thanks for your modding :3

Something I have changed by myself :3

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (rui) [KS's Hard].osu
DarknessAngel
request from #modreq ~ :)

General

  1. (TV Size) but no vedio ? Maybe change it to "Short Ver." ?

Easy

  1. 00:53:341 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - The song's BPM is 183,I am worried about this part is too hard for beginer
    I think you can add a slider in order to make it easier
  2. So hard Easy diff...

Normal

  1. 00:08:095 (4) - remove this whistle ?
  2. 00:16:947 (4,6) - I think remove this claps would be better than now
  3. 00:19:570 (4) - why you add finish on the slider's tail ? move it to [00:20:882 (2)]
  4. 00:24:160 (2) - clap instead ?
  5. 00:51:046 (4) - remove clap on the slider's tail
  6. 01:21:865 (2) - change clap to finish on the slider's tail
  7. full of hitsound,but there are something stange...

KS's Hard

  1. 00:10:390 (3,4) - spacing between (3) & (4) may make confusing..
  2. 00:31:701 (1) - change whistle to clap on the slider's head
  3. 00:33:669 (5) - remove clap
  4. 00:36:619 (1) - add whistle and clap on the slider's head can make an intence effect
  5. 00:38:587 (7) - add clap on the slider's head
  6. 00:46:455 (5,7) - maybe remove those claps ? I think it would be better
  7. best diff in the map

Insane

  1. 00:08:751 (5) - remove whistle on the slider's tail
  2. 00:54:980 (1,2,3) - add whistles on those sliders' head
  3. 01:10:062 (1,2) - I think all of the ideas like this is not good enough,maybe change them to 2 notes and jumps ?
  4. 01:22:193 (5) - add finish on the slider's tail
  5. It is not hard enough xD


good luck ~
kosiga
ruiさん こんにちは~ :)

from my queue~

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. Song Setup - combo color - カラー1,4が同系色なので、順番を入れ替えてみてはいかがですか? ↓code(順番を入れ替えただけです)
    SPOILER
    Combo1 : 102,0,0
    Combo2 : 0,0,102
    Combo3 : 0,40,0
    Combo4 : 44,0,87
[Easy]
  1. AR +1 ( Normalが5なので差がありすぎかなと)
  2. 00:13:013 (3) - 強調音ないのでスライダーendのfinish削除した方がよいかもです
  3. 00:19:570 (4) - ^
  4. 00:34:324 (1,2,3,4) - リズムの提案: http://puu.sh/fKuN ( 4のスライダー始まりが少し合ってないように思いました&noteが減るのでこっちの方が初心者にはやさしいかと。)
  5. 00:35:308 (4) - スライダーendのfinish削除して00:36:619 (1) - にfinishの方が合うと思います。
  6. 00:53:341 (1,2,3,4,5) - DS揃えてきれいに。 ↓try ?
    SPOILER
    496,32,53341,5,8
    448,80,53669,1,0
    400,32,53996,1,8
    352,80,54324,1,0
    304,32,54652,1,8
    256,80,54980,5,12
  7. 00:58:587 (3,4) - リズムの提案: http://puu.sh/fKCA
  8. 01:13:013 (1) - スライダー頭のfinish削除してendにfinish追加?
  9. 01:13:996 (3) - vocalをフォローするならendは01:14:488の方がよいと思いました。
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:160 (1) - 強調音ないのでスライダーendのfinish削除した方がよいかもです
  2. 00:17:931 (1) - スライダー頭のfinish削除、endにfinish追加
  3. 00:19:570 (4) - スライダーendのfinish削除
  4. 00:20:882 (2) - スライダー頭にfinish追加
  5. 00:35:144 (3) - スライダーendのfinish削除。代わりにclap
  6. 00:37:931 (3,4) - リズムの提案:4を削除して3スライダーにリピート追加
  7. 00:43:177 (3,4) - ^ 同じリズム
  8. 00:49:160 - 不要な緑線は削除した方がよいかと。
  9. 00:49:980 - ^
  10. 00:51:865 (1) - スライダーendにfinish
  11. 00:52:521 (2) - スライダーstart 00:52:685 , end 00:53:013の方が合うかなと
  12. 00:54:898 - 不要な緑線
  13. 00:57:111 (1) - remove NC and 00:57:603 (2) - add NC ?
  14. 00:58:914 - note追加 vocal 合わせるとリズム取りづらい気がしたので >:(
  15. 00:58:996 - 不要な緑線
  16. 01:21:865 (2) - スライダーendのclap削除
[Insane]
  1. 00:22:193 (5) - add NC and 00:22:849 (1) - remove NC
  2. 00:31:046 (1,2,3) - DSが広すぎるのと少し合ってないように思います。><;; スライダー赤線までの長さの方が良いと思います
  3. 00:38:914 (1) - remove NC and 00:39:242 (2) - add NC
  4. 00:57:521 - 不要な緑線
[KS's Hard]
  1. 00:11:046 (4) - spacing too close >< ( 00:10:390 (3,4) and 00:11:046 (4,5) is same spacing but rhythm is different :( )
  2. 00:11:701 (1) - add finish to start of the slider ?
  3. 00:13:013 (5) - add NC ? ( change DS point ?)
  4. 00:21:537 (2) - use 00:20:882 (1) copy( Ctrl+v,h,j) slider
  5. 01:22:521 (1) - spinner start 01:22:357 is better or 01:22:357 - add note
長くて申し訳ない :? 気になるところだけ拾ってください。 nice map~ Star☆~ :oops:

頑張ってください~ :)
KayeSara

DarknessAngel wrote:

KS's Hard

  1. 00:10:390 (3,4) - spacing between (3) & (4) may make confusing.. Fix
  2. 00:31:701 (1) - change whistle to clap on the slider's head Fix
  3. 00:33:669 (5) - remove clap Fix
  4. 00:36:619 (1) - add whistle and clap on the slider's head can make an intence effect nope :3
  5. 00:38:587 (7) - add clap on the slider's head nope :3
  6. 00:46:455 (5,7) - maybe remove those claps ? I think it would be better Changing the way
  7. best diff in the map
Thx :3
>kosiga
Fix all of them, thanks for your modding :3

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (rui) [KS's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
rui

DarknessAngel wrote:

request from #modreq ~ :)

General

  1. (TV Size) but no vedio ? Maybe change it to "Short Ver." ? ok changed

Easy

  1. 00:53:341 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - The song's BPM is 183,I am worried about this part is too hard for beginer changed to two slider
    I think you can add a slider in order to make it easier
  2. So hard Easy diff...

Normal

  1. 00:08:095 (4) - remove this whistle ? changed to clap
  2. 00:16:947 (4,6) - I think remove this claps would be better than now ok
  3. 00:19:570 (4) - why you add finish on the slider's tail ? move it to [00:20:882 (2)] ok
  4. 00:24:160 (2) - clap instead ? no
  5. 00:51:046 (4) - remove clap on the slider's tail ok
  6. 01:21:865 (2) - change clap to finish on the slider's tail remove clap
  7. full of hitsound,but there are something stange...

Insane

  1. 00:08:751 (5) - remove whistle on the slider's tail ok
  2. 00:54:980 (1,2,3) - add whistles on those sliders' head ok
  3. 01:10:062 (1,2) - I think all of the ideas like this is not good enough,maybe change them to 2 notes and jumps ? no
  4. 01:22:193 (5) - add finish on the slider's tail no
  5. It is not hard enough xD


good luck ~
DarknessAnge lthank you mod :)

kosiga wrote:

ruiさん こんにちは~ :)

from my queue~

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. Song Setup - combo color - カラー1,4が同系色なので、順番を入れ替えてみてはいかがですか? ↓code(順番を入れ替えただけです) okです
    SPOILER
    Combo1 : 102,0,0
    Combo2 : 0,0,102
    Combo3 : 0,40,0
    Combo4 : 44,0,87
[Easy]
  1. AR +1 ( Normalが5なので差がありすぎかなと) ok
  2. 00:13:013 (3) - 強調音ないのでスライダーendのfinish削除した方がよいかもです no
  3. 00:19:570 (4) - ^ no
  4. 00:34:324 (1,2,3,4) - リズムの提案: http://puu.sh/fKuN ( 4のスライダー始まりが少し合ってないように思いました&noteが減るのでこっちの方が初心者にはやさしいかと。) 少しいじりました
  5. 00:35:308 (4) - スライダーendのfinish削除して00:36:619 (1) - にfinishの方が合うと思います。no
  6. 00:53:341 (1,2,3,4,5) - DS揃えてきれいに。 ↓try ? スライダーに変わりました
    SPOILER
    496,32,53341,5,8
    448,80,53669,1,0
    400,32,53996,1,8
    352,80,54324,1,0
    304,32,54652,1,8
    256,80,54980,5,12
  7. 00:58:587 (3,4) - リズムの提案: http://puu.sh/fKCA (4)のスライダーを削除
  8. 01:13:013 (1) - スライダー頭のfinish削除してendにfinish追加? finishをremove
  9. 01:13:996 (3) - vocalをフォローするならendは01:14:488の方がよいと思いました。ok
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:160 (1) - 強調音ないのでスライダーendのfinish削除した方がよいかもです no
  2. 00:17:931 (1) - スライダー頭のfinish削除、endにfinish追加 finishをremove
  3. 00:19:570 (4) - スライダーendのfinish削除 ok
  4. 00:20:882 (2) - スライダー頭にfinish追加 ok
  5. 00:35:144 (3) - スライダーendのfinish削除。代わりにclap ok
  6. 00:37:931 (3,4) - リズムの提案:4を削除して3スライダーにリピート追加 ok
  7. 00:43:177 (3,4) - ^ 同じリズム ok
  8. 00:49:160 - 不要な緑線は削除した方がよいかと。ok
  9. 00:49:980 - ^ ok
  10. 00:51:865 (1) - スライダーendにfinish ok
  11. 00:52:521 (2) - スライダーstart 00:52:685 , end 00:53:013の方が合うかなと ok
  12. 00:54:898 - 不要な緑線 ok
  13. 00:57:111 (1) - remove NC and 00:57:603 (2) - add NC ? no
  14. 00:58:914 - note追加 vocal 合わせるとリズム取りづらい気がしたので >:( no
  15. 00:58:996 - 不要な緑線 ok
  16. 01:21:865 (2) - スライダーendのclap削除 ok
[Insane]
  1. 00:22:193 (5) - add NC and 00:22:849 (1) - remove NC no
  2. 00:31:046 (1,2,3) - DSが広すぎるのと少し合ってないように思います。><;; スライダー赤線までの長さの方が良いと思います ok
  3. 00:38:914 (1) - remove NC and 00:39:242 (2) - add NC no
  4. 00:57:521 - 不要な緑線 ok


長くて申し訳ない :? 気になるところだけ拾ってください。 nice map~ Star☆~ :oops:

頑張ってください~ :)
kosiga thank you mod & star ;)
Asgard
[Insane]
00:15:964 (4,6) - remove and copy paste 00:15:636 (3,5) because.. http://puu.sh/fUfv look not symmetry XD
00:31:865 (4) - end : 00:32:193
00:32:357 - add note
00:35:718 (1) - remove NC
00:35:964 (1) - ^
00:39:242 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - move to 312,128 so.. stack with 00:38:423 (8)

[KS's Hard]
00:08:750 (7,8) - distance
01:13:341 (4) - reverse?

[Normal]
Fine

[Easyl]
Fine

すみません
内容が少なくて  :(
Topic Starter
rui

A s g a r d wrote:

[Insane]
00:15:964 (4,6) - remove and copy paste 00:15:636 (3,5) because.. http://puu.sh/fUfv look not symmetry XD ok fixed
00:31:865 (4) - end : 00:32:193 no
00:32:357 - add note no
00:35:718 (1) - remove NC no
00:35:964 (1) - ^ no
00:39:242 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - move to 312,128 so.. stack with 00:38:423 (8) ok

[Normal]
Fine

[Easyl]
Fine

すみません
内容が少なくて  :(
いえいえ問題ないです :)
A s g a r d Thank you mod & star
KayeSara
>A s g a r d
Thanks for your modding :3
But actually I feel fine with those two parts.
lovhin456
Hello

General:
- This isn't Short Ver. even if it doesn't have the video it's hardly a Short Ver. because it is exactly like the TV Size (except maybe for the end which is different from the TV Size) but everything else is the same so it would make more sense to change the title to TV Size
- The BG looks a bit weird, it looks squished ><

Easy:
- 00:47:767 >> There are many notes in a row maybe delete this one ?
- 00:50:390 >> ^
- 00:54:980 (1,2,3) >> Uh, is not good to change from white ticks to red and then white again in Easy diffs, so try something else ... maybe a repeting slider
- 00:57:603 (1,2,3) >> ^
- 00:59:898 >> Useless section
- 01:01:865 >> Remove a repeat and move it to 01:02:193 also add new combo to this slider and remove new combo on the next one
- 01:07:439 >> Many notes in a row, consider deleting this one ?
- 01:20:226 >> Changing from white to red then white ticks, not good ... try something else
- lol with this kind of song you can't do an Easy ...

Normal:
- AR -1 ? The current AR gives me the feeling that the objects come faster and to be honest it feels better with AR4
- 00:22:193 >> New combo ?
- 01:20:062 >> These one combos don't seem so necessary ...
- Uh ... I think is good yup

KS's Hard:
- This is harder than Insane ? Mmmm :/ -After test playing- Uh ... some jumps are not "necessary" that means that I think you can omit some of the current jumps you have without taking out all the fun
- 00:13:013 (1,2,3,4) >> I don't feel like the jumps here are really that necessary or feel that good so my suggestion is to keep regular spacing
- 00:27:767 (1,2,3,4,5,1) >> ^
- 00:33:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6) >> ^
- 00:44:488 >> Remove new combo ?
- 01:01:865 (1,2,3,4,5) >> Uh, not your regular star formation I see ... it may be better to make the regular one

Insane:
- Fine

* That's all, I think you could use some more mods
Topic Starter
rui

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello hi

General:
- This isn't Short Ver. even if it doesn't have the video it's hardly a Short Ver. because it is exactly like the TV Size (except maybe for the end which is different from the TV Size) but everything else is the same so it would make more sense to change the title to TV Size ok changed
- The BG looks a bit weird, it looks squished >< changed cute BG><

Easy:
- 00:47:767 >> There are many notes in a row maybe delete this one ? second note delete
- 00:50:390 >> ^ second note delete
- 00:54:980 (1,2,3) >> Uh, is not good to change from white ticks to red and then white again in Easy diffs, so try something else ... maybe a repeting slider changed revers slider
- 00:57:603 (1,2,3) >> ^ changed revers slider
- 00:59:898 >> Useless section this section is difficult to add note. because sound end is 00:59:898. next sound start is 01:00:062. so space is 1/2 :X
- 01:01:865 >> Remove a repeat and move it to 01:02:193 also add new combo to this slider and remove new combo on the next one nice idea
- 01:07:439 >> Many notes in a row, consider deleting this one ? second note delete
- 01:20:226 >> Changing from white to red then white ticks, not good ... try something else changed revers slider
- lol with this kind of song you can't do an Easy ... yes, I am making while worry :X

Normal:
- AR -1 ? The current AR gives me the feeling that the objects come faster and to be honest it feels better with AR4 ok
- 00:22:193 >> New combo ? ok
- 01:20:062 >> These one combos don't seem so necessary ... ok
- Uh ... I think is good yup

Insane:
- Fine >w<

* That's all, I think you could use some more mods
ok I request the more mod :3
Your mod is useful to easy diff
lovhin456 Thank you mod :33
lovhin456

rui wrote:

this section is difficult to add note. because sound end is 00:59:898. next sound start is 01:00:062. so space is 1/2 :X
>< I meant that the green timing section is useless because there are no notes between it and the next green timing section, not anything about notes ... I should be more careful orz sorry ;w;
Topic Starter
rui

lovhin456 wrote:

rui wrote:

this section is difficult to add note. because sound end is 00:59:898. next sound start is 01:00:062. so space is 1/2 :X
>< I meant that the green timing section is useless because there are no notes between it and the next green timing section, not anything about notes ... I should be more careful orz sorry ;w;
I see. I had to regard ... orz
delete green line, thank you :)
KayeSara

lovhin456 wrote:

KS's Hard:
- This is harder than Insane ? Mmmm :/ -After test playing- Uh ... some jumps are not "necessary" that means that I think you can omit some of the current jumps you have without taking out all the fun
What???A little jumps in my diff makes it harder than Insane?????
- 00:13:013 (1,2,3,4) >> I don't feel like the jumps here are really that necessary or feel that good so my suggestion is to keep regular spacing
- 00:27:767 (1,2,3,4,5,1) >> ^
- 00:33:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6) >> ^
I'm fine with my jumps here, so nothing change.
Actually it's not smooth playing in such jump, I'll fix that part by myself, but I'll keep those jumps.
- 00:44:488 >> Remove new combo ?
Sure
- 01:01:865 (1,2,3,4,5) >> Uh, not your regular star formation I see ... it may be better to make the regular one
Sure
[Fix by myself]
00:49:242 (5,6,7) - Making a smooth playing here.

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (rui) [KS's Hard].osu
lovhin456

KayeSara wrote:

What???A little jumps in my diff makes it harder than Insane?????
Is not that the jumps make your difficulty harder but I thought that with less jumps it might make the player feel that the difficulty is not that high. Anyways to "fix" the difficulties order and make KayeSara's diff before Insane either you KayeSara has to lower HP and OD -1 and after that lower once one either HP or OD -1 again OR rui has to add +1 either to HP or OD. I only mention HP Drain and OD because they affect the star rating the most. But all of this isn't really that necessary because I mean is only the order and because the difficulties are properly named there won't be any trouble in telling what diff is easier or which is harder ... Is just that it looks weird but it isn't a problem at all, so I guess feel free to not change any of what I mentioned.
KayeSara
Fix some rhythm and DS
00:03:832 - 00:14:160 part for DS 1, other is 1.2

Still some notes are hard to recognize
  1. 00:20:718 (6) - miss part
  2. 00:29:898 (2) - well, it's easy to make a 100 here
  3. 00:57:111 (1) - 100 here
  4. 00:59:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - miss part
  5. 01:01:865 (1,2,3,4,5) - miss part
  6. 01:12:849 (1,2,3) - miss part
Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (rui) [KS's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
rui
Insane was +1 HP drain. it became star rate 5
hillaryzx
Hi,
About Modding...

I think this map already good to me for modding....
but a star will do, right?

Well then, good luck to make this map ranked. :)
Topic Starter
rui

hillaryzx wrote:

Hi,
About Modding...

I think this map already good to me for modding....
but a star will do, right?

Well then, good luck to make this map ranked. :)
I think do not get caught by star rate. Hard and Insane are the same star rate. but Hard and Insane are not same degree of difficulty.
so I think no problem this. I aim of ranked.

hillaryzx Thank you star :)
Leorda
Konnichiwa

Easy
00:39:242 (5) - New combo?
00:41:209 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:44:488 (5) - New combo?
00:45:964 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:48:423 (3) - Move to 00:48:750 for following vocal


Insane

00:18:259 (3,4,5) - Drum sound in blue tick is makes worse. Please snap the tail slider at red tick for each slider
00:31:046 (1,2) - Bad rhythm for me. Remove (1), add a note at 00:31:046 and move (2) to 00:31:209. Try consider to do that


KS's Hard
* This diff is seems more harder than Insane, but the score is small than Insane diff. Please tune down the difficulties for making a difficulties and score consecutive
* In diff name, rename into "KS' Hard" due to grammar. But I'm not sure about this one

00:11:373 (6,7) - Reverse this place for better flow?


Well, good work
Topic Starter
rui

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa hi :3

Easy
00:39:242 (5) - New combo? fixed
00:41:209 (1) - Remove new combo? fixed
00:44:488 (5) - New combo? fixed
00:45:964 (1) - Remove new combo? fixed
00:48:423 (3) - Move to 00:48:750 for following vocal fixed


Insane

00:18:259 (3,4,5) - Drum sound in blue tick is makes worse. Please snap the tail slider at red tick for each slider sorry I like this rhythm. no changed
00:31:046 (1,2) - Bad rhythm for me. Remove (1), add a note at 00:31:046 and move (2) to 00:31:209. Try consider to do that fixed


Well, good work Thank you :D

Leorda wrote:

* This diff is seems more harder than Insane, but the score is small than Insane diff. Please tune down the difficulties for making a difficulties and score consecutive Unn...This Hard difficult in Hard difficulty. I can agree. but This diff is seems more harder than Insane I can't agree. Because "Insane" have wide distance, fast slider velocity and some stream than "Hard"
Leorda Thank you mod :)
KayeSara
>Leodora
  1. This diff is seems more harder than Insane, but the score is small than Insane diff. Please tune down the difficulties for making a difficulties and score consecutive
Actually, it's fine, you can find same condition like that.
  1. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43005
  2. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33651
  1. In diff name, rename into "KS' Hard" due to grammar. But I'm not sure about this one

Garven wrote:

Technically both KS' and KS's are correct. It's all about your consistency of use, so if you use KS', don't use KS's later on.
I always use ks's to call my diff name, so that's fine with it.

  1. 00:11:373 (6,7) - Reverse this place for better flow?
sure

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (rui) [KS's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
rui
Insane's drain changed 7. because this diff's HR is one miss equal Dead End (Fail). That's too bad :(
KanaRin
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