This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 27 มิถุนายน 2556 at 19:36:30

Artist: EGOIST
Title: Departures ~Anata ni Okuru Ai no Uta~ (TV Size)
Source: GUILTY CROWN
Tags: inori supercell ED chelly ryo bestz2541
BPM: 72
Filesize: 12147kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

1. bestz's Hard (4.6 stars, 170 notes)
2. Easy (1.02 stars, 70 notes)
3. Normal (2.82 stars, 98 notes)

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ED1 GUILTY CROWN Anime
pending again Please Re-Download 05/15/2012
EGOIST ,Inori (chelly) sing that's beautiful song.
[Easy] - Done
[Normal] - Done
[Bestz's Hard] - Done Thank you for your diff >~<

General
use hitsounds http://puu.sh/bW98

Hard
00:04:019 (5) - New Combo
00:10:686 (6) - ^

Normal
00:08:186 (1) - what? D: http://puu.sh/bW9n
00:16:103 (4) - http://puu.sh/bW9z

Easy
00:04:853 (5) - longer
00:14:853 (1) - ^
01:04:853 (5) - new combo
01:05:269 (1) - delete new combo

-Bakari- wrote:

General
use hitsounds http://puu.sh/bW98
^ all done maybe
Hard
00:04:019 (5) - New Combo
00:10:686 (6) - ^
^Fixed
Normal
00:08:186 (1) - what? D: http://puu.sh/bW9n
00:16:103 (4) - http://puu.sh/bW9z
^huh ??
Easy
00:04:853 (5) - longer < I'think It's fine
00:14:853 (1) - ^ < ^
01:04:853 (5) - new combo < Fixed
01:05:269 (1) - delete new combo< Fixed

thank for modding

Easy:
00:54:019 <-- add note + finish hitsound
01:00:686 <-- finish sound
01:06:519 <-- whistle sound
01:08:186 <-- whistle sound or finish sound
01:15:061 <-- remove break time
01:15:686 <-- add note
01:16:519 <-- add slider till 01:17:353
01:18:186 <-- add note
01:27:353 <-- whistle sound (makes the sound complete)

since it's an easy diff... consider reducing AR by 1 or 2 ticks

Normal:
00:04:853 <-- new combo
00:06:519 <-- whistle sound
00:11:519 <-- new combo
00:28:186 <-- new combo
00:34:835 <-- new combo
00:45:686 <-- add note w/out hitsound
00:46:936 <-- new combo if you done this ^ , if not... do it at 00:47:769
00:58:186 <-- new combo
01:00:686 <-- finish sound
01:08:186 <-- new combo

consider adding 1 tick on HP drain and reducing AR by 1 tick

Hard:
00:33:603 <-- new combo
00:40:269 <-- new combo


apart from that... I see no more problems

thenewearth wrote:

Easy:
00:54:019 <-- add note + finish hitsound < I'm not sure this note
01:00:686 <-- finish sound
01:06:519 <-- whistle sound
01:08:186 <-- whistle sound or finish sound
01:15:061 <-- remove break time
^ Fixed
01:15:686 <-- add note
01:16:519 <-- add slider till 01:17:353
01:18:186 <-- add note
^ last three am change in my style. thx for suggestion
01:27:353 <-- whistle sound (makes the sound complete)
^ Fixed
since it's an easy diff... consider reducing AR by 1 or 2 ticks
^ Fixed
Normal:
00:04:853 <-- new combo
00:06:519 <-- whistle sound
00:11:519 <-- new combo
00:28:186 <-- new combo
00:34:835 <-- new combo
00:45:686 <-- add note w/out hitsound
00:46:936 <-- new combo if you done this ^ , if not... do it at 00:47:769
00:58:186 <-- new combo
01:00:686 <-- finish sound
01:08:186 <-- new combo

consider adding 1 tick on HP drain and reducing AR by 1 tick
^ Fixed all
Hard:
00:33:603 <-- new combo
00:40:269 <-- new combo
^ Fixed all

apart from that... I see no more problems

There isn't much to suggest about this map, actually. No technical issues I could find.

Nature of the song is calm and paced, map follows as such. But I'll go over the aesthetics in any case.

Easy:

- 00:44:853 (1) - Pretty sure you can do better than this.

- 00:46:519 (2) - Looks better like this:
- 00:59:019 (1) - Minor fix:
- 01:01:519 (3) - Just copy and paste the previous slider I mentioned.

- 01:03:186 (4) - ^

- 01:19:436 (2,3) - Actually, these two can be centralized.
-01:27:353 (3) - This just looks sloppish. It's in the middle of nowhere.

Use grid-size 3 and re-make it to this:
Normal:

Pretty fine, really.

- 00:11:519 (1) - I am unsure if the uneven-ness of the zig-zag is intentional, but if not you could make it appear so.

- 00:28:186 (1) - Slider-points look awry.

- 00:53:603 (1) - Move this to - 00:53:811 -

- 01:11:103 (6) - Rather you delete this and paste the previous slider, flipped vertically and horizontally.

Hard:

Pretty clean, just a few suggestions here and there to make it prettier. A good majority of your sliders either look awkward or have terribly extended slider-ends or points. It's worth going over them and re-making.

It's strange, because the previous difficulties expressed some certain experience in slider-art.
But here it just looks amateurish.

- 00:11:519 (5) - Here's a fix for your slider:
- 00:28:186 (4) - Here as well:
- 00:48:186 (5) - Think you might want to re-make this slider. It's got unnecessary slider points.

- 00:49:019 (6) - Little fix for the slider:
Do the same for the other half of the blanket.

- 01:08:186 (1) - Probably should have a finish hitsound.

That's it. Not a bad map at all.

I'm happy about the song choice as well. All the best.

Faust wrote:

There isn't much to suggest about this map, actually. No technical issues I could find.

Nature of the song is calm and paced, map follows as such. But I'll go over the aesthetics in any case.

Easy: << Fixed all

- 00:44:853 (1) - Pretty sure you can do better than this.

- 00:46:519 (2) - Looks better like this:

SPOILER

- 00:59:019 (1) - Minor fix:

SPOILER

- 01:01:519 (3) - Just copy and paste the previous slider I mentioned.

- 01:03:186 (4) - ^

- 01:19:436 (2,3) - Actually, these two can be centralized.

SPOILER

-01:27:353 (3) - This just looks sloppish. It's in the middle of nowhere.

Use grid-size 3 and re-make it to this:

SPOILER

Normal: << Fixed

Pretty fine, really.

- 00:11:519 (1) - I am unsure if the uneven-ness of the zig-zag is intentional, but if not you could make it appear so.

- 00:28:186 (1) - Slider-points look awry. << oh sorry I havn't idea now.I re-make it later.

- 00:53:603 (1) - Move this to - 00:53:811 -

- 01:11:103 (6) - Rather you delete this and paste the previous slider, flipped vertically and horizontally.

Hard: << Fixed all XD

Pretty clean, just a few suggestions here and there to make it prettier. A good majority of your sliders either look awkward or have terribly extended slider-ends or points. It's worth going over them and re-making.

It's strange, because the previous difficulties expressed some certain experience in slider-art.
But here it just looks amateurish.

- 00:11:519 (5) - Here's a fix for your slider:

SPOILER

- 00:28:186 (4) - Here as well:

SPOILER

- 00:48:186 (5) - Think you might want to re-make this slider. It's got unnecessary slider points.

- 00:49:019 (6) - Little fix for the slider:

SPOILER

Do the same for the other half of the blanket.

- 01:08:186 (1) - Probably should have a finish hitsound.

That's it. Not a bad map at all.

I'm happy about the song choice as well. All the best.

Mostly Fixed
thank you a lot for your help
that's map so pretty better

Hi, from my queue

nice song choice...

[Easy]

1. 00:21:103 (3) - delete this note?
2. 00:29:853 (7,8) - change to a reverse slider?
3. 00:49:019 (1) - why new combo here? = =
4. 00:50:686 (1) - and this, not necessary.
5. 00:58:186 (2) - spacing too close...

[Normal]

1. 00:04:853 (1) - move the 4th point to (280,64), 5th point to (336,88), last (360,152). looks better
2. 00:09:436 (4) - spacing too far...
3. 00:14:436 (1) - delete this note?
4. 00:33:186 (3) - try to grid snap off and make this stack perfect
5. 00:37:769 (1,2) - just 1 reverse slider at 00:38:186
6. 01:19:853 (6) - move the 2nd point to (256,96)
7. 01:21:103 (7) - delete this note?

[Hard]

1. 00:15:478 (3) - spacing? maybe move 2 end
2. 00:34:228 (4,5) - too much stack here, make a slider?
3. 00:43:811 (2,4) - not symmetrical orz
4. 00:49:853 (8) - 2grid left
5. 00:57:561 (10) - kind of hard to read this one, don't stack?

Good luck~

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from my queue

nice song choice...

[Easy]

1. 00:21:103 (3) - delete this note? nope,It's ok
2. 00:29:853 (7,8) - change to a reverse slider?^ But I change in my style
3. 00:49:019 (1) - why new combo here? = = oh, Fix now
4. 00:50:686 (1) - and this, not necessary. ^
5. 00:58:186 (2) - spacing too close... ^

[Normal]

1. 00:04:853 (1) - move the 4th point to (280,64), 5th point to (336,88), last (360,152). looks better great,Fixed
2. 00:09:436 (4) - spacing too far... Fixed
3. 00:14:436 (1) - delete this note? nope,srry
4. 00:33:186 (3) - try to grid snap off and make this stack perfect I'll tihink other style
5. 00:37:769 (1,2) - just 1 reverse slider at 00:38:186 It's confused I think
6. 01:19:853 (6) - move the 2nd point to (256,96) Fixed
7. 01:21:103 (7) - delete this note?

nope

[Hard]

1. 00:15:478 (3) - spacing? maybe move 2 end done
2. 00:34:228 (4,5) - too much stack here, make a slider? 'll Do it
3. 00:43:811 (2,4) - not symmetrical orz Fixed
4. 00:49:853 (8) - 2grid left ^
5. 00:57:561 (10) - kind of hard to read this one, don't stack?^

Good luck~

Thx for your modding

Hai, from my queue ~

General

• Offset 1.517, it's better to me
  Add offset 84780
  Add offset 86516
  Don't forget to resnap all elements/green lines.
  Remove letterbox during breaks. There aren't breaks in your maps.

Easy

1. 00:07:353 (6) - Move it to x368 y224
2. 00:14:019 (6) - Distance snap it
3. 00:17:353 (3) - ^
4. 00:21:103 (3) - This circle is unnecessary, remove it
5. 00:27:769 (4) - Move to x368 y336
6. 00:28:186 (5) - New combo and move it to x464 y304 so it's simmetric with 00:26:519 (3)
7. 00:31:519 (1) - Improve the shape of this slider please :\
   
8. 00:33:186 (2,3) - Improve this slider's shape and this blanked with (3). Make in this way:
   
9. 00:34:853 (4) - If you follow above, make this slider in this way moving it to x256 y288 and add new combo:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:48:186 (1) - Don't overlap with the slider. Move to x304 y112
11. 00:56:519 (1) - Remove NC
12. 00:58:186 (2) - Add NC
13. 01:19:436 (2,3) - These sliders don't follow the music. Move the (2) to 01:19:853 and delete the (3)
    
14. 01:26:519 (2) - This circle touches the HP bar, please move it.

Normal

1. 00:11:519 (6) - New combo
2. 00:33:186 (3,4) - 1 grid up, so the slider (3) overlaps with the previous slider 00:32:353 (2)
3. 00:34:853 (5) - New combo
4. 00:43:603 (5,1) - Well, I suggest you to remove the (1) and add a repeat on the slider (5). It follows better the song and so you also can set NC on the beat 00:44:853 (2):
   
5. 01:08:186 (1) - Add finish

Hard

1. 00:24:019 (1) - Remove finish, it doesn't sound good
2. 00:24:853 (3) - New combo
3. 00:27:561 (1) - Remove new combo
4. 00:28:186 (4) - Add new combo
5. 00:49:853 (8) - Move it to x184 y200 for a better blanket
6. 00:54:853 (6) - New combo
7. 00:57:769 (1,2) - Exchange new combo

Patterns are good but you need to improve the style of them (:
Good luck then \:D/

Chewin wrote:

Hai, from my queue ~

General <<mostly Fixed

• Offset 1.517, it's better to me
  Add offset 84780
  Add offset 86516
  Don't forget to resnap all elements/green lines.
  Remove letterbox during breaks. There aren't breaks in your maps.

Easy << Fixed

1. 00:07:353 (6) - Move it to x368 y224
2. 00:14:019 (6) - Distance snap it
3. 00:17:353 (3) - ^
4. 00:21:103 (3) - This circle is unnecessary, remove it
5. 00:27:769 (4) - Move to x368 y336
6. 00:28:186 (5) - New combo and move it to x464 y304 so it's simmetric with 00:26:519 (3)
7. 00:31:519 (1) - Improve the shape of this slider please :\
   
8. 00:33:186 (2,3) - Improve this slider's shape and this blanked with (3). Make in this way:
   
9. 00:34:853 (4) - If you follow above, make this slider in this way moving it to x256 y288 and add new combo:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:48:186 (1) - Don't overlap with the slider. Move to x304 y112
11. 00:56:519 (1) - Remove NC
12. 00:58:186 (2) - Add NC
13. 01:19:436 (2,3) - These sliders don't follow the music. Move the (2) to 01:19:853 and delete the (3) << I'm not sure this pattern
    
14. 01:26:519 (2) - This circle touches the HP bar, please move it.

Normal<< All Fixed

1. 00:11:519 (6) - New combo
2. 00:33:186 (3,4) - 1 grid up, so the slider (3) overlaps with the previous slider 00:32:353 (2)
3. 00:34:853 (5) - New combo
4. 00:43:603 (5,1) - Well, I suggest you to remove the (1) and add a repeat on the slider (5). It follows better the song and so you also can set NC on the beat 00:44:853 (2):
   
5. 01:08:186 (1) - Add finish

Hard<< All Fixed

1. 00:24:019 (1) - Remove finish, it doesn't sound good
2. 00:24:853 (3) - New combo
3. 00:27:561 (1) - Remove new combo
4. 00:28:186 (4) - Add new combo
5. 00:49:853 (8) - Move it to x184 y200 for a better blanket
6. 00:54:853 (6) - New combo
7. 00:57:769 (1,2) - Exchange new combo

Patterns are good but you need to improve the style of them (:
Good luck then \:D/

I'll prepare new style soon. Thank you for your advance \XD/

sorry for late reply

Hard

00:10:686 (1,2,3,4,5) - *nazi* could be a little more perfect. THe star is a litte off :/
00:12:769 (6) - *more nazi* could be position in the exact middle of 00:11:519 (5) -
00:27:561 (7,8,9,1) - *even more nazi* make into a perfect diamond
00:32:353 (3) - you could remap this into something like http://puu.sh/cwHo to match the vocals more. THe endpoint of combo 5 is directly above 00:33:811 (2)
00:38:603 (5) - you can just delete this note, copy paste 00:37:769 (4) - , then Ctrl+h
00:44:853 (6) - perfectly stack under combo 3
00:47:978 - add note? to follow vocals

Normal

00:03:603 (5) - it would just look more clean if you followed the same spacing instead of having this jump
00:08:186 (1) - this note is almost offscreen ._. There shouldn't be a need to place this note so low.
00:53:811 (1,2) - the notes look better like this, and is probably a little easier to read for beginners. http://puu.sh/cwMN4
01:08:603 (2,3) - spacing

Easy

--delete the red timing sections at the end as they seem useless
--you need to resnap these notes.
01:08:183 - the kiai time here is off by 3 ms

00:14:853 (1,2,3,1) - there is no need for such spacing. I would use more equal and consistent spacing here.
00:48:186 (1,2,3,4) - make a diamond shape
00:59:019 (1) - remove combo
01:24:853 (1) - there's really no need to place the note that low, move up a few grids?

Good luck :3

um...need more hard work,so I'll just do a quick check

1. Keep timing in same with all diff.and maybe you should fix offset.check this->http://osu.ppy.sh/s/39784
2. hitsound in your mapset are too loud,especially finish sound.try to use green line to reduce the volume.
3. Take good use of custom hitsound sample.
4. You have use custom hitsound sample but not sample file in your folder.At least use a silence soft-sliderbody.wav
5. I don't think use SV 2.7(Hard) is a good idea for this song.And more difficult not means high SV
6. Your Easy & Normal feels better than your Hard in my opinion.

oh man
I havn't anytime to fix my map srry
let's fix it soon XD

winber1 wrote:

sorry for late reply

Hard

00:10:686 (1,2,3,4,5) - *nazi* could be a little more perfect. THe star is a litte off :/
00:12:769 (6) - *more nazi* could be position in the exact middle of 00:11:519 (5) -
00:27:561 (7,8,9,1) - *even more nazi* make into a perfect diamond
00:32:353 (3) - you could remap this into something like http://puu.sh/cwHo to match the vocals more. THe endpoint of combo 5 is directly above 00:33:811 (2)
00:38:603 (5) - you can just delete this note, copy paste 00:37:769 (4) - , then Ctrl+h
00:44:853 (6) - perfectly stack under combo 3
00:47:978 - add note? to follow vocals

Normal

00:03:603 (5) - it would just look more clean if you followed the same spacing instead of having this jump
00:08:186 (1) - this note is almost offscreen ._. There shouldn't be a need to place this note so low.
00:53:811 (1,2) - the notes look better like this, and is probably a little easier to read for beginners. http://puu.sh/cwMN4
01:08:603 (2,3) - spacing

Easy

--delete the red timing sections at the end as they seem useless
--you need to resnap these notes.
01:08:183 - the kiai time here is off by 3 ms

00:14:853 (1,2,3,1) - there is no need for such spacing. I would use more equal and consistent spacing here.
00:48:186 (1,2,3,4) - make a diamond shape
00:59:019 (1) - remove combo
01:24:853 (1) - there's really no need to place the note that low, move up a few grids?

Good luck :3

and

AoiX wrote:

um...need more hard work,so I'll just do a quick check

Keep timing in same with all diff.and maybe you should fix offset.check this->http://osu.ppy.sh/s/39784
hitsound in your mapset are too loud,especially finish sound.try to use green line to reduce the volume.
Take good use of custom hitsound sample.
You have use custom hitsound sample but not sample file in your folder.At least use a silence soft-sliderbody.wav
I don't think use SV 2.7(Hard) is a good idea for this song.And more difficult not means high SV
Your Easy & Normal feels better than your Hard in my opinion.

Try hard to fix hard diff for my new mapper

Mostly fixed Thank you

request from queue~

[General]
lol high SV + low BPM~ reminds me about ouendan 2 level lol~
Slider Tick 2 feels like 1 for me lol~ it's ok~

[Timing]
> add 300ms to AudioLeadIn, to make around 2000ms delay for player before clicking the first object
{ 2nd red timing } hmmm i don't sure about this, it feels a little off
{ new red timing} 01:26:501 , 71bpm

[Easy]
> whoa high settings, CS -1
00:17:353 (3) - surprise jump for me lol~
01:19:415 (2) - unsnapped note?

[Normal]
> hmmm Drain lower by 1?
00:53:811 (1,2) - overlapped? i think this is not really good... maybe..
01:26:501 (3) - try this http://up.ppy.sh/files/temp-12.png

[Hard]
> i know you like star pattern in this diff
00:03:186 (4) - make it further.. 0.1x
00:04:228 (2) - (nazi) 1 grid (smallest size) left, to make it symmetrical star pattern,
i hope 00:04:019 (1,2,3,4,5) - is crossing star pattern lol
00:12:769 (6) - did you follow the piano? if you follow the vocal , then shrink this slider by 1/4 and add 1 repeat~
01:11:067 (9) - distance 0.0x (turn off grid snap, then lower distance snap to 0.0x)
01:12:543 (5) - holding mouse part ? remove this slider and add 4 circles with jump?

nice map~ here star~

Really a nice song, I like it
Here just some suggestion on your map

[Easy]

00:17:353(3) Too far from the previous object
00:37:769(1) Don't stack
01:19:415(2) Not snapped

[Normal]

HP Drain Rate is too high, better 2 level less
Overall Difficulty better 1 level less
You should test this diff on AIMod, there're some spacing warnings in this diff

00:59:418 These three notes are too difficult as a normal diff


[Hard]

00:58:168 A new combo here
01:11:293 This jump is a little bit strange during playing


Anyway, I like this map. Good luck!

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

request from queue~

[General]
lol high SV + low BPM~ reminds me about ouendan 2 level lol~
Slider Tick 2 feels like 1 for me lol~ it's ok~ < lol It's same 1 tick

[Timing]
> add 300ms to AudioLeadIn, to make around 2000ms delay for player before clicking the first object
{ 2nd red timing } hmmm i don't sure about this, it feels a little off
{ new red timing} 01:26:501 , 71bpm < added

[Easy]
> whoa high settings, CS -1
00:17:353 (3) - surprise jump for me lol~
01:19:415 (2) - unsnapped note?
^ All Fixed
[Normal]
> hmmm Drain lower by 1?
00:53:811 (1,2) - overlapped? i think this is not really good... maybe..
01:26:501 (3) - try this http://up.ppy.sh/files/temp-12.png << Try hard for symmetrical orz

[Hard]
> i know you like star pattern in this diff << in concept
00:03:186 (4) - make it further.. 0.1x
00:04:228 (2) - (nazi) 1 grid (smallest size) left, to make it symmetrical star pattern,
i hope 00:04:019 (1,2,3,4,5) - is crossing star pattern lol
00:12:769 (6) - did you follow the piano? if you follow the vocal , then shrink this slider by 1/4 and add 1 repeat~ <<follow by piano, do you think ? lol ,, Fixed it
01:11:067 (9) - distance 0.0x (turn off grid snap, then lower distance snap to 0.0x)<<minimum distance I try is 0.1x
01:12:543 (5) - holding mouse part ? remove this slider and add 4 circles with jump?<< Fixed

nice map~ here star~

Heming James wrote:

Really a nice song, I like it
Here just some suggestion on your map

[Easy]

00:17:353(3) Too far from the previous object
00:37:769(1) Don't stack
01:19:415(2) Not snapped
^All Fixed
[Normal]

HP Drain Rate is too high, better 2 level less
Overall Difficulty better 1 level less
You should test this diff on AIMod, there're some spacing warnings in this diff
^Fixed
00:59:418 These three notes are too difficult as a normal diff < nope, It's ok I think


[Hard]

00:58:168 A new combo here
01:11:293 This jump is a little bit strange during playing
^Fixed all

Anyway, I like this map. Good luck!

Thank you very much for you suggestion It's better than

Hi~Mod from Scorpiour's Queue.

[General]
Offset: -1813
Add 1s lead in time.

[Hard]
00:01:311 (x) - add a note
00:01:520 (1,2) - change to a slider
00:02:353 (3) - move to 00:02:145 (x)
00:04:020 (1,2) - delete, then add a slider from 00:03:811 - 00:04:228
00:05:895 (6,7) - change to a hit circle at 00:05:895, a slider from 00:06:103 to 3:06.311, a slider from 00:06:519 to 00:07:353
00:07:978 (x) - add a note.
00:08:186 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:15:478 (3,4) - change to a slider
00:15:895 (5,6,7) - change to a slider from 00:15:895 to 00:16:103(or two hit circles)and a slider from 00:16:311 to 00:16:936
00:17:770 (1) - change to a hit circle
00:18:603 (2,3,4,5) - move to 00:18:186
00:21:728 (1) - start from 00:21:520 to 00:24:020
00:24:020 (1) to 00:37:353 (3) - like 00:01:311 to 00:14:020
00:37:770 (4) - change to a repeating slider
00:38:603 (5) - change to a 1/4 slider and make it a symmetry of 00:37:770 (4)
00:39:436 (6,1,2,3,4) - change to a circle at 00:39:228 and a slider from 00:39:645 to 00:40:686
00:41:936 (2) - 1/4 tick shorter
00:44:853 (7) - 1/4 tick shorter
00:57:960 (x) - add a note
00:59:001 (2) - move to 00:58:793 and 1/4 tick longer
01:01:501 (1,2) - I'd like to make them 1/4 tick longer

It's seem like confused for HARD Mode

re-WIP Again

Sorry popner for skipping

Gj <3
Good luck for the map ^_^)//