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ZUN - Beloved Tomboyish Girl

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Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sonntag, 15. Juli 2012 at 13:37:18

Artist: ZUN
Title: Beloved Tomboyish Girl
Source: Touhou
Tags: eosd embodiment of scarlet devil cirno leorda lennox darkdunskin -Lennox-
BPM: 152
Filesize: 2756kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dunskin's Taiko Oni (4,83 stars, 512 notes)
  2. Hard (4,92 stars, 213 notes)
  3. Lennox' Easy (2,79 stars, 109 notes)
  4. Leo's Normal (3,59 stars, 122 notes)
  5. Lunatic (5 stars, 397 notes)
Download: ZUN - Beloved Tomboyish Girl
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Baka Cirno, stop freezing my Windows.

Easy - 100% by Lennox
Normal - 100% by Leorda
Hard - 100%
Lunatic - 100%
Taiko - 100% by DarkDunskin
Last edited by Tenshi-nyan , edited 24 times in total.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Leo-chan reporting from the lovely of heaven. I hope ya didn't forget about me?

General
* Your custom hitsound is barely to hear, try to raise the volume?

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Hard
* AR +1? A little bit slow for me......

00:52:023 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point
00:53:183 (4,1) - Spacing error or small jump?
01:04:655 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point
01:17:286 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point

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Lunatic
01:04:655 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point
01:27:536 (6) - Unsnapped note

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Um, can I make a normal diff? pleaseeeeeee?
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan

Leorda wrote:

Leo-chan reporting from the lovely of heaven. I hope ya didn't forget about me?

General
* Your custom hitsound is barely to hear, try to raise the volume? I can hear them just fine.

-------------------------------------------------------------------

Hard
* AR +1? A little bit slow for me...... AR7 is fine.

00:52:023 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point
00:53:183 (4,1) - Spacing error or small jump?
01:04:655 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point
01:17:286 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point fixed all, lol.

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Lunatic
01:04:655 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point
01:27:536 (6) - Unsnapped note fixed em.

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Um, can I make a normal diff? pleaseeeeeee?
Go on, make that normal. Try to make it between 3 and 4 stars, and take good care of the hitsounds, or I'll have to fix them myself.
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
-Lennox-
Here mah boy.

With instand mod by Rukarioman. ( only my diff ofc )

SPOILER
20:06 <-Lennox-> : los mi rotn die short kick slider san zu schwa xd
20:07 <Rukarioman> : a geh, glabst? xD
20:07 <-Lennox-> : Aber eh nur dei anan wo amol 4 und amol 3 und dan weiter geht
20:07 <-Lennox-> : sog ma jz net i kau olle weg moch n :v
20:08 <Rukarioman> : 00:06:407 (3,4) - so ane stacks sand bled für a easy
20:08 <Rukarioman> : moch dei zwa an slider
20:08 <-Lennox-> : n gleichen short wie da nächste?
20:08 <Rukarioman> : jo
20:08 <-Lennox-> : k
20:09 <Rukarioman> : 00:23:973 (1,2) - Moch do an längeren slider, onfänger sand schlecht im einschätzen von sulche timings
20:09 <Rukarioman> : 00:25:947 (5) - kick slider
20:09 <Rukarioman> : 00:39:762 (3) - kick slider
20:10 <Rukarioman> : 00:48:052 (1) - den konnst lossen weil gnua zeit bis zum nächsten beat is
20:11 <Rukarioman> : 00:49:236 - probier des so osu.ppy.sh/ss/198118
20:11 <Rukarioman> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/198118
20:11 <Rukarioman> : 00:52:394 (2,3) - and slider draus moch oder wos ähnliches, nur net so an stack
20:12 <Rukarioman> : 01:00:683 (1,2,3) - wos ähnliches wie vurher im screenshot
20:12 <Rukarioman> : 01:13:315 (1,2) - den stack los i ma noch einredn
20:12 <Rukarioman> : 01:17:657 (3,4) - ^
20:13 <Rukarioman> : des wärs
20:14 <-Lennox-> :    <3

U just need to do those hitsounds orz.

Star ofc~

Download: ZUN - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Tenshi-nyan) [Lennox' Easy].osu
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
It's done~

Download: ZUN - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Tenshi-nyan) [Leo's Normal].osu
DarkDunskin
1,876 posts
Joined April 2009
DarkDunskin
Mah booooi~

Download: ZUN - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Tenshi-nyan) [Dunskin's Taiko Oni].osu


YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,149 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

Lennox' Easy:
the name is intentional right? if not add the "s"
00:04:433(2) - Ctrl+J
00:21:012(6) - NC. if u ignore this make the next note a NC
00:27:131(1) - extend it by 1 tick like at (3,4)
00:42:328(7) - NC. if u ignore this make the previous mote a NC
01:18:644(1) - move it down because its touching the Hp bar

Leo's Normal:
i thought there would be timing points but i guess i was wrong
01:24:960(3) - this slider could be symmetrical
other than that i like this diff.

Hard:
00:06:407(3,4) - the spacing is intentional right?

Lunatic:
no problems here

this is the best i can do. Star because i love how more and more Touhou songs r in osu. GL :D
Niva
Global Moderator
3,196 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Mod request via Mini Maya Queue ~

[General]
-> [Lunatic] and [Lennox' Easy] both starts on 00:01:276, but [Lunatic] has 500ms lead-in time but [Lennox' Easy] has 0ms lead-in time. Set lead-in on [Lennox' Easy] too 500?

[Lennox' Easy]
-> I think, it would be nice if the star rating could be altered to 2.75 or lower so in-game it will be shown as 2.5 star (imo it's more balanced this way)
  • 00:07:591 (1,2,3) - It would be nice if you could arrange these three somehow so (2) is placed in the center. Not something you have to do though :3
    00:19:631 (4,5) - I understand you want to make a flow here by slightly curving the path from (1) to (4), but the stack between these two made (4) slightly higher though. Place them down a bit?
    00:36:802 (4) - Maybe make this encircle (3) also? xD
    00:48:052 (1) - A circle + 1/1 slider, or a circle + a repeating slider here, plays better imo than this 2x repeating slider
    01:06:407 (4,5) - Try a repeating slider here? It sounds better imo, also it won't stack weirdly like these two
    01:20:223 (3,4) - Slightly curve these two also? Most of your sliders in this diff are curved orz >_<
[Leo's Normal]
-> Allow me to mod this diff in Indonesian please :3
  • 00:06:210 (2) - Whistle di sini dihilangkan aja, supaya lebih menekankan clap di (3)
    00:11:539 (3,4,1) - Geser ketiga-tiganya 1 grid ke kiri supaya jarak (2,3,4) ke awal (1) sama
    00:19:631 (4) - Sama seperti 00:06:210
    00:22:789 (5) - ^
    00:26:539 (1,2,3,1) - Kenapa nggak buat formasi berlian (diamond) aja dari empat objek ini? Lebih bagus imo :3
    00:39:170 (1) - Coba rubah ini jadi slider wave, buat membangun flow?
    00:47:065 (4) - Geser kedua waypoint yang di tengah 1 grid ke bawah, supaya dia melingkari (1) lebih sempurna
    00:54:368 (6) - Hilangkan whistle?
    01:00:289 (5,6) - Kesalahan spacing di sini, (6) terlalu dekat ke (5) orz
[Hard]
  • 00:14:104 (2) - This slider is way too curved to the top orz, at least make the midpoint lower :3
    00:22:986 (4,5,6) - I think, a repeating slider is better here because it can emphasize the next 00:23:973 (2)'s direction
    00:34:039 (4) and other parts like this - This is... Repeating 1/8 with 1/4 after it I suppose? o.o (will be hard to map this rhythm though)
    00:41:144 (2,3,4) - Move these three one grid right, so (4) will be covered better by (1) and (3)'s curve
    01:03:447 (11) - New combo here perhaps?
    01:04:039 (1) - If you do above, remove new combo?
    01:12:920 (7) - Move it a bit to the right might build up more flow imo
[Lunatic]
  • 00:03:940 (4) - Move one grid right and down for a better curve
    00:06:604 (4) - Maybe you could try extending this slider by 1/4 and remove (6) >_<
    00:33:249 (1,2,3,4,5) - Star-shaped jump here? :3
    00:35:026 (4,5,6,7) - Perhaps create a "fan" shape between these doubles?
    00:42:920 (2) - CTRL + R this would play more naturally imo
    00:53:381 (1,2,3,4) - Try to create a better square here? (If you're creating a diamond pattern instead, (3) should be moved a bit to the bottom-left to equalize it's spacing to (1))
That's it from me, good luck Tenshi-nyan :3
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan

Niva wrote:

Really long mod here

Thanks,
Fixed some stuff. Gee, don't post mods in other languages then English please, I want to understand them, too :<
Niva
Global Moderator
3,196 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
...orz

It's Leorda's diff, idk why I prefer Indonesian there ):

btw this is the translation, if you're curious:

SPOILER
  • 00:06:210 (2) - Delete the whistle here to emphasize the clap in (3)
    00:11:539 (3,4,1) - Move these three one grid left, so (2,3,4)'s distance to the beginning of (1) is equal
    00:19:631 (4) - Same like 00:06:210
    00:22:789 (5) - ^
    00:26:539 (1,2,3,1) - Why don't you make a diamond formation here? Better imo :3
    00:39:170 (1) - Try to change this into slider wave, to build up more flow?
    00:47:065 (4) - Move the two waypoints in the center one grid down, to encircle (1) more perfectly
    00:54:368 (6) - Remove whistle?
    01:00:289 (5,6) - Spacing mistake here, (6) is closer to (5) orz
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
[Lennox's Easy]
00:04:039 (1,2) - Blanket?
SPOILER
00:11:341 (5) - This doesn't follow music wisely, Delete and add an 1/2 Slider in 00:11:144 (5) to make it better
No problem minus some not perfect blanket I won't say...

[Leo's Normal]
Convert some linear slider in fuzzy curvy one like :
00:12:328 (1) -
SPOILER
00:14:302 (2,4) -
SPOILER
00:21:407 -
SPOILER
and some others i won't say :3
00:43:907 (5) - this is more consistent with the mapping style and the music

SPOILER
00:59:697 (4,5,6,1) - Suggesting this pattern
SPOILER

[Hard]
There are places that could use a blanket ( as they are some similiar to it... ) like 00:04:631 (2,3) -
SPOILER
00:10:749 (1,2,3,4) - While playing it doesn't look so much like a diamond... so... move (4)?
SPOILER
00:21:999 (1,2,3) - Move (2) so it look like more a curve
SPOILER
00:24:565 (3,4,5,6) - Zigzag?
SPOILER

[Insane]
00:35:026 (4,5,6,7) - Streams like this seems overmapped... control the other streams and see if they REALLY follow music...

It's the 5th mod you ask in my queues conting the old one too... so.... say it, you somewhat ... oh, nothing >.<
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Cygnus
Hi there. Here's my Mod. Btw, Oh love Touhou <3
GENERAL
  1. Weird Ending. Did you do the Mp3 yourself?
LUNATIC
  1. 01:16:177 - (5,7) Move 3 grids to the right.

  2. 01:16:374 - (6,7) CTRL + R.
HARD
  1. Overall Difficulty -1 (But you can keep it.)

  2. 00:06:012 - 1 grid up.

  3. 00:36:012 - Is this jump necessary? Move it closer from the previous note.

  4. 00:50:223 - Weird spacing. Try this: http://puu.sh/ejG2

  5. 00:53:183 - One grid right, one grid up.

  6. 01:24:960 - Weird curve slider. Try this: http://puu.sh/ejGz (I used Grid Level 4 for the center point.)
LEO'S NORMAL
  1. 00:50:618 - Ugly slider.Just replace this with a curve slider.

  2. 01:04:433 - Add whistle.
LENNOX'S EASY
  1. 00:04:433 - Weird slider curve. See the point in the middle?: http://puu.sh/ejHz. Move it 1 grid to the right.

  2. 00:11:341 - This note looks lost. I don't have suggestions for this, but I hope you're aware of it.

  3. 01:04:433 - Add whistle.

  4. 01:28:181 - Add finish.
That's all. Good luck getting it ranked. <3
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
rEdo
[Lennox' Easy]
the difficulty's name is incorrect. it should be Lennox's Easy, because you're not obliged to use the particle 's ONLY when the noun ends with s letter as well.
0:27:131 (1,2,3,4) - this part plays pretty weird, I'd try something like this.

[Leo's Normal]
you're adding way off too many new combos, consider deleting some.
0:29:697 (1) - this spinner looks like you put it in because you were too lazy to map next 2 seconds, or that's at least how I feel it... anyway, this part plays pretty null.

[Dunskin's Taiko
1:22:591 (75,76,77,78,79,80) - maybe try oo oo o (starting from 75's place), instead of this (ooo ooo)?

[Hard]
man, boost the volume a bit. those hitsounds can't be audible at all.
0:21:407 (3,1,2,3) - what's up with that sudden distance snap increase?
1:02:460 (7,8,9) - move those notes by a grid lower, or so. looks a lot better like that. the same goes with 1:15:091 (6,7,8).

[Lunatic]
once again, the hitsounds are way off too quiet.
0:12:131 (9,1,2,3,4) - come on, you can come up with something a lot better. 0:20:223 (1,2,3,4) is a perfect example how you could map this pattern. you can also try this.
0:51:407 (1) - this slider is ugly.
0:59:697 (1,2) - you could try to fix those two, too.


[General]
those red timing sections sounds fishy to me... I mean, the BPM ain't right. I'd suggest taking a closer look at them.
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan

rEdo wrote:

[Hard]
man, boost the volume a bit. those hitsounds can't be audible at all. I can hear them perfectly. Maybe you got some very crappy speakers/headphones?
0:21:407 (3,1,2,3) - what's up with that sudden distance snap increase? nothing at all.
1:02:460 (7,8,9) - move those notes by a grid lower, or so. looks a lot better like that. the same goes with 1:15:091 (6,7,8). nazi... but fine.

[Lunatic]
once again, the hitsounds are way off too quiet. ^_^
0:12:131 (9,1,2,3,4) - come on, you can come up with something a lot better. 0:20:223 (1,2,3,4) is a perfect example how you could map this pattern. you can also try this. hmm I like it this way.
0:51:407 (1) - this slider is ugly. how come?
0:59:697 (1,2) - you could try to fix those two, too.


[General]
those red timing sections sounds fishy to me... I mean, the BPM ain't right. I'd suggest taking a closer look at them. they look ok to me.
Derp need update from guest mappers.
Neptunus
463 posts
Joined April 2010
Neptunus
Nice background~

General: I noticed that the Slider Velocity in Lennox's Easy is longer than that of Leo's Normal, I am not sure if this is an unrankable error, please check the rules or ask MATs and BATs since they know better.


additionally, isn't there a "Insane" between Hard and Lunatic?

Lennox's Easy:
Fine

Leo's Normal:
00:24:960 (1,2) - why not try this

my accordance is 00:23:381 (1,2) -

00:58:512 (1) - why not delete this note, first because this note too close to the previous spinner, second because this is not a discernible rhythme

Hard:
Fine

Lunatic:
Fine

should call a MAT rather than further mods I think , good luck on ranking :!:
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
sorry for long delay, Tenshi-nyan. I was busy modding for defeating someone

Thx for all to mod my map

@rEdo

rEdo wrote:

you're adding way off too many new combos, consider deleting some
I don't know how to fix this. can you help me? :(

EDIT :
@Neptunus : look the discussion between me and naraku-chan
SPOILER
20:29 <Leorda> : hi there
20:29 <narakucrimson> : hi!
20:29 <Leorda> : um, can I talk you about slider velocity?
20:30 <narakucrimson> : yeah sure
20:30 <Leorda> : if slider velocity in Easy is high than Normal diff, is that fine?
20:31 <narakucrimson> : depends
20:31 <Leorda> : depends of what?
20:31 <narakucrimson> : if both difficulties are done by the same mapper, it would be kinda weird
20:31 <narakucrimson> : if it is a guest then maybe no
20:31 <narakucrimson> : you should evaluate how difficult both maps are
20:32 <narakucrimson> : and compare them
20:32 <narakucrimson> : sometimes the SV doesn't really make the map much harder
20:32 <Leorda> : um, if you have time can you check this map?
20:32 *Leorda is listening to (ZUN - Beloved Tomboyish Girl)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/40987]
20:32 <Leorda> : Lennox's Easy SV is high than my diff
20:34 <narakucrimson> : let's see
20:34 <narakucrimson> : dling
20:41 <Leorda> : sooo? did you already check it?
20:41 <narakucrimson> : no, no
20:41 <narakucrimson> : sorry, I was watching a video
20:41 <Leorda> : lol
20:41 <Leorda> : did you dling?
20:42 <narakucrimson> : yep
20:42 <narakucrimson> : well yeah, you can raise the SV if you want
20:42 <narakucrimson> : also
20:43 <narakucrimson> : Lennox's diff is kinda not easy for noobs if you ask me
20:43 <narakucrimson> : they will get confused with so many 1/2s
20:43 <narakucrimson> : but meh
20:43 <Leorda> : so? it's fine for my diff?
20:43 <narakucrimson> : your difficulty is fine
20:44 <narakucrimson> : I'd rather ask lennox to make his difficulty easier anyway
20:44 <Leorda> : ok thank you <3333

Download: ZUN - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Tenshi-nyan) [Leo's Normal].osu
Roddie
osu! Alumni
1,468 posts
Joined June 2009
Roddie
Hi.

General
  1. You should add -Lennox- in the tags, man. I guess it's fine to have Lennox in the tags but I see most of his ranked map under -Lennox-.
Lennox's Easy
  1. 00:44:499 (4)-Not a good idea leaving this note stacked. Considering this is an Easy difficulty, this would throw newbies off. I suggest spacing this slider out by using the distance snap.
  2. 00:57:131 (6)-^
  3. 01:09:762 (5)-^
  4. 01:28:181 (4)-Perhaps add a finish here?
Leo's Normal
  1. Well, I'm not a big fan of seeing Normal difficulties having lower slider velocity but I guess a slider velocity of 0.90 is okay.
Other than that, nothing has popped up.

Dunskin's Taiko Oni
  1. 01:00:881 (19, 20, 21)-kdd for this pattern?
  2. 01:14:695 (27)-This note is not snapped. Resnap it.
  3. 01:27:547 (19, 20, 21)-ddk for this pattern?
Hard
  1. 01:24:960 (5)-The slider shape on this is a bit off... Here's a snapshot of how it can be improved. http://puu.sh/gy7j

    If you're having a problem, here's the code for it.

    196,117,84960,2,0,B|128:104|71:192|128:280|196:268,1,240,0|2
  2. 01:27:969 (3)-Perhaps add a finish on the end?
Lunatic
  1. 01:27:758 (7)-Add a finish on the end?
And that's about it. Here, have a star.

Good luck to you, man.
Last edited by Roddie , edited 1 time in total.
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
Thanks Roddie, fixed most of your suggestions. Just waitin for Dunskin to give me an update.
Roddie
osu! Alumni
1,468 posts
Joined June 2009
Roddie
Hold up!

I should have noticed this before. It should Lennox's Easy not Lennox' Easy. I checked the grammar on that and and having an s after the apostrophe is the correct way to go.

No need to kudosu this post.
DarkDunskin
1,876 posts
Joined April 2009
DarkDunskin
Okay I added redo's suggestions, that actually sounded quiet good.
The note should be resnapped already and yeah thats it~

Download: ZUN - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Tenshi-nyan) [Dunskin's Taiko Oni].osu

Here you go and good luck with that bubble D:
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
Upped Dunskin's update.

About that 's for Lennox diff, I don't think that's necessary, because it looks kinda stupid. No need to be a grammar nazi imo.
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Upped Dunskin's update.

About that 's for Lennox diff, I don't think that's necessary, because it looks kinda stupid. No need to be a grammar nazi imo.
that's not being grammar nazi. that's just speaking correct english. does it cost that much to change a simple 's on a diff title? i don't think so.
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,858 posts
Joined February 2010
-kevincela-
Hai

[Lennox' Easy]


  1. Shouldn't the name of the diff be "Lennox's Easy"? I'm not a grammar nazi,but this should be fixed. :U
    Really good diff. Nothing found here.

[Leo's Normal]


  1. 00:59:302 (3) - Spacing
  2. 01:17:065 (1) - 2 grids down just to make the blanket look better?

[Hard]


  1. 00:06:604 (4) - 1 grid down?
  2. 00:48:052 (1) - 1 grid up?
  3. 01:26:739 (1) - I would allign this with the end of the slider 01:25:749 (6) -

[Lunatic]


  • Pretty good diff,nothing found

Pretty good map,good luck for getting your map ranked! :D
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,236 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
Request from my modding queue.

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in audioleadin in Lunatci and Taiko.Please unify them!
[Lennox' Easy]
  1. Difficulty setting
    (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
    1. AR and OD +1?
  2. Issue/unrankable stuff
    (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
    1. 00:52:394 (2,3,4) - (Bad gameplay) Sorry but I found a inconsistent spacing here.Ensure that close the grid snap before fix them.
    2. 01:26:539 (3) - (unrankable) Unsnapped slider here at the end.In this way. It is quite hard to fix, so change this to notes might be the best way.
  3. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:23:775 (x) - I would add a note here if I were you because of the drum sound.However,you need to adjust the spacing after change.
    2. 00:26:933 (x) - ^Same
    3. 01:07:197 (1) - The reverse of the slider touch the hp bar.I highly change a position or change to note to fix this problem.Some bats are recognise this as a unrankable stuff.
      .
  4. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:17:065 (4) - Probably rise the volume up to 70%? It sounds much better then 60% imo
[Leo'S Normal]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:31:275 (x) - I think the spinner can stop at 00:32:262 - and then add a note at 00:32:854 - .I think that would be much better.
    2. 01:08:775 (4) - Probably move this right a bit? To make this pattern more symmetry.
  2. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:35:025 (4) - Change the whistle to clap sound at the beginning of the slider?
[Hard]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:04:039 (1) - I would make this slider more curve(hence more beautiful?) if I were you.Probably try this one?You might need to adjust the spacing after change.
      Suggestion
    2. 00:14:499 (3,4) - (design) Another design stuff.I would make this 2 slider to be more smooth.You can try this,again, you ,might need to adjust the spacing.
      Suggestion
      312,120,14499,2,0,B|259:80|180:115|180:176,1,160
      257,187,15091,2,0,B|256:241|179:272|125:224,1,160,8|0
    3. 00:17:262 (1,2,3) - May I adk why you want to put the triplet here?I can hear the music and feel weird and it don't fit the music.I highly suggest removing it or using a 1/2 note instead of it.
    4. 00:19:236 (7) - I would add a new combo here because this chain of combo is much longer than others, so just add a new combo here for consistency.
    5. 00:31:275 (x) - I would stop this spinner at 00:32:262 - and then add some note at 00:32:460 - ,00:32:657 - ,00:32:854 - (with finish)
    6. 01:14:894 (5) - New combo here?The reason same as 00:19:236.
  2. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:10:157 (3) - Probably add a clap at the beginning of the slider?
    2. 01:27:969 (3) - Add a whistle at the beginning of the slider?
[Lunatic]
  1. Difficulty setting
    (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
    1. HP -1?
  2. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:14:697 (6) - I think here should be a new combo because of the jump
    2. 00:15:486 (1,2,3,4) - Meaningless jump here.I can't see any reason that it needs a huge jump.A small jump is okay for me.But the big jump here make me feel uncomfortable.
    3. 00:31:276 (x) - Same as Hard.
    4. 01:24:368 (5,6,7) - Would you make this symmetry with 01:23:578 (1,2,3) - properly?
[Dunskin's Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:02:460 (9,10,11) - kdd here?I feel it fit the drum sound more properly.
  2. 00:04:039 (20) - k here.The reason same as above.
  3. 00:10:256 (40,41,42,43) - The 4-plet sounds weird here.I prefer( x xx xx x) here.2-plets sounds better then 4 plet here.
  4. 00:38:775 (25,26) - I would change to kat here due to the high pitch of music.
Tenshi-nyan
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Tenshi-nyan
Let's get this stuff going again. Gonna spend a bit more time for osu again.
Urlangce
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Joined October 2010
Urlangce
Wooooooo!
That's nice map~ :)
theplayerbeta
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Joined February 2012
theplayerbeta
This is a very nice map
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wmfchris
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wmfchris
- Try to add 500 lead-in more?
- tag baka

[Lunatic]
00:11:144 (3) - just curious why this note went so far...(56,360) forms a good shape with the rest.
00:12:920 (4) - curve the next note properly 
160,96,12920,2,0,B|72:80|0:152|40:240,1,200
01:01:078 (4) - again positions like (120,150) is well curved by previous (2)
01:23:381 (9) - the new sentence starts here so swap NC with next note
01:27:547 (6,7) - the jump is a bit nonsense, you can actually rotate (2,3,4,5,6) so that the spacing is correct

[Hard]
00:30:289 (2,3,4) - for the sake of symmetricity 
88,72,30289,2,0,B|8:136|88:232,1,160,4|0
73,212,30782,1,0
73,212,30881,1,0
00:37:789 (7,1,2) - how about adding 1 more tick on (7)and delete (1) (delay NC)? It's odd to end the slider at red tick.

For H/I, sometimes I feel like the notes are not precisely put, like hard 01:10:157 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/371587 curving stuffs properly looks better.

Also, I think that the S:C1 hitsound fits with the beginning where drum dominates, but in the middle part the melody should be highlighted not the drum, and I believe that there could be better solution than using S:C1 there, like using the deafult soft whistle.

[Easy]
OD1 HP1 is really too low...and this is not a super easy diff. Try +1 each
00:11:341 (1) - the 1.5 beats break sounds a bit odd, and a bit difficult for newbies. Just start it 1/2 eariler?
00:48:052 (1) - avoid 1/2 sliders with multiple reversing ticks
This diff has quite a lot of 1/2 beats and not really easy comparing with the entire normal. It's better if you make it ever easier~

[Taiko]
why OD4? It doesn't sound like that easy.
Tenshi-nyan
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Tenshi-nyan
Thanks, chris.
Fixed everything except for the Easy HP/OD +1.
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