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nano.RIPE - Omokage Warp (TV Size)

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EmPao
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年3月20日 at 下午 04:18:06

Artist: nano.RIPE
Title: Omokage Warp (TV Size)
Source: Hanasaku Iroha
Tags: GiNa DarknessAngel
BPM: 210.03
Filesize: 10870kb
Play Time: 01:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. D.N.Angel (5 stars, 265 notes)
  2. Easy (1.34 stars, 70 notes)
  3. GiNa's Normal (3.86 stars, 115 notes)
  4. Hard (4.83 stars, 174 notes)
Download: nano.RIPE - Omokage Warp (TV Size)
Download: nano.RIPE - Omokage Warp (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st Map! :P So I remap it 3 times!! lol
花咲くいろは / 花開物語 (HanaSaku Iroha) OP2

MapSet
Easy By Me
GiNa's Normal By GiNa
Hard By Me
D.N.Angel By DarknessAngel
D.N.Angel= Insane
GiNa
Oh YEAH, first one !
Discussed some big issues in game.
Just call me back after you fixed them.
IRC
09:06 <GiNa> : 你好你好:D
09:07 <ms0543724> : 安 =)
09:07 <GiNa> : 我正在看你的map呢...
09:07 <GiNa> : 那個,BG比例要4:3 (1024x768那種)
09:08 <ms0543724> : 摁 了解 是因為圖片被壓壞了嗎?
09:09 <GiNa> : rule規定的呢,壓壞倒也還好
09:09 <ms0543724> : 0.0" 謝謝提醒 我會去另找一張
09:13 <GiNa> : 歌的資料夾裡面
09:14 <GiNa> : 有個多出來的檔案
09:14 <GiNa> : nano.RIPE - Omokage Warp (ms0543724).osb <-這個要刪掉
09:15 <ms0543724> : 好
09:15 <GiNa> : 其實你一次改完再submit比較方便lol
09:16 <GiNa> : BG這個看看怎麼樣?
09:17 <ms0543724> : 謝謝 不過我已經挑另一張上傳了的說@@
09:18 <GiNa> : 嗯
09:18 <GiNa> : 你有用full submit嗎
09:18 <ms0543724> : 有
09:20 <GiNa> : 放完圖之後記得注意一下divisor,幾乎都會變成1/6
09:21 <ms0543724> : 真的=_=
09:22 <ms0543724> : 謝謝你啦 哈哈 你沒講我都沒看到
09:22 <GiNa> : 不會
09:23 <GiNa> : 00:08:351 (2) - 我覺得這個對新手來說應該比較難
09:23 <GiNa> : ^最簡單的diff
09:24 <GiNa> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/189900
09:24 <GiNa> : 換成這樣看看
09:25 <ms0543724> : 好
09:25 <ms0543724> : 我試試0.0
09:25 <GiNa> : 你這diff偏簡單,不要擔心星數會飆高
09:26 <GiNa> : spacing挺亂的
09:26 <GiNa> : distance snap統一用1.0x試試
09:28 <ms0543724> : 您的意思是整張map的距離都要再調整嗎
09:29 <GiNa> : 嗯
09:29 <GiNa> : 因為有些0.8 0.6 1.0很亂
09:30 <GiNa> : 還有一般人不建議在最簡單的diff裡做加速或減速的動作
09:31 <ms0543724> : 嗯.
09:31 <GiNa> : beginner這個diff名我覺得用Easy就好了
09:32 <GiNa> : Hard也有同樣的spacing問題呢(跳不算)
09:33 <ms0543724> : 恩 當初再做的時候沒考量距離
09:34 <GiNa> : 那果然還是整張都重調一下吧
09:35 <ms0543724> : ok

EDIT:
My Mod
[General]
-Tags記得加我的ID(全部diff)

[Easy]
00:18:351 (1) - 換成有repeat的slider怎麼樣?我亂拉的。不要學XD(之後的都是亂拉,所以看看就好) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/190521
如果改了記得調spacing
00:25:208 (4,5) - 這種排法對新手可能有點難,還有我更建議把這兩個圈改成一個slider,然後加New Combo (NC) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/190524
00:32:636 (4) - NC
00:36:636 ~ 00:45:208 - 這段的clap好多,一般都是放這樣
00:50:351 (6) - NC
01:13:779 (1) - Finish
01:15:494 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 這一段可以算是非常難了,還有這類slider(01:15:494 (4) - )基本在最簡單的diff裡不要用
我試著把你的pattern改成了這樣(不會用code的話告訴我,我在教你)
336,88,75494,2,0,B|392:80|424:132,2,100
352,168,77208,1,0
300,228,77779,5,0
224,256,78351,1,0
144,260,78922,1,0
64,268,79494,2,0,B|56:220|108:160|164:176,1,150
256,192,80636,12,4,82922
啊,不mod自己的diff,下一個XD
記得把我diff的SV改成1

[Hard]
00:31:494 (1) - 不要NC
00:32:636 (9) - 這裡NC
00:36:636 ~ 00:45:208 - 跟Easy一樣
01:02:351 (8) - NC
01:03:494 - 這裡加個slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/190528
感覺這難度還可以,但是音效真的有點吵

[Insane]
我不常mod insane(因為不太會),請見諒
00:36:636 ~ 00:45:208 - 跟Easy一樣
00:40:637 - 加個slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/190529
00:43:779 (10) - 不建議用這個,因為repeat有點被擋住了
01:20:637 (1) - 延長到這裡 01:22:922 -
結論,比Hard還吵得diff(被打)
還有不是insane就一定要是連按連按連按,試著減少一些吧

Download: nano.RIPE - Omokage Warp(TV Size) (ms0543724) [GiNa's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
EmPao

GiNa wrote:

Oh YEAH, first one !
Discussed some big issues in game.
Just call me back after you fixed them.

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修正完畢

謝謝mod :)
Scorpiour
Hi there~ mod from queue


General:
一般来说在高难度下加倍bpm是建议使用的,除非是特殊情况。一般来说,这样做会导致你的图无法被rank

Easy:
AR-1, OD-1
00:50:351 (1) - 在折返点加个clap
00:53:208 (2) - 在第一个折返点以及结尾加clap
01:08:636 (3) - clap,从这里到后面的部分你好像都没加音效。。请补完全

01:19:494 (4) - 建议将slider延长到后面的白线01:20:636 ,然后spinner从01:21:208开始

Normal:
OD-1 通常来说OD值要比AR值小1

00:16:351 (2) - 这里的红线slider感觉很奇怪,建议使用slider+红线note+slider的方式把这里调整下

01:10:351 (3) - 建议NC从这里开始

Hard:
OD-1

00:36:636 - 感觉这里可以加一个note遮挡在前面slider的尾部

00:44:922 (1) - 这个spinner感觉太突兀了,我个人觉得在00:45:208放一个note即可。

00:53:351 (5) - 向后移动到红线。。。这里并没有二连的节奏

00:54:351 (7) - 去掉clap,延长到00:54:922

01:13:779 (1) - 从这里开始。。我觉得没有理由使用0.5x的SV。。。感觉上整个的节奏突然被粘住了。。很难受……


Insane:
很抱歉我没有深入mod这个难度,因为这个曲子确实是105的bpm,翻倍使用bpm导致了有大量1/8出现在难度中,这本身是unrankable的。

只是提几个概念性的建议:

1.少用白线起手的三连
2.在遇到1/4的stream的时候将ds适当缩小。。。

00:36:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 像类似这种的……我刚看到的时候脑子里真的只剩下OMG了……



抱歉可能说的直接了一点……还请原谅


差不多就这些了,加油吧!
GiNa

Scorpiour wrote:

Normal:
OD-1 通常来说OD值要比AR值小1

00:16:351 (2) - 这里的红线slider感觉很奇怪,建议使用slider+红线note+slider的方式把这里调整下

01:10:351 (3) - 建议NC从这里开始
都修改了,感謝 :D

Download: nano.RIPE - Omokage Warp(TV Size) (ms0543724) [GiNa's Normal].osu
H Kobato T Maria
General
- I personally do not like to put it hitsounds map.
- Try not to exaggerate to make a hard difficulty, I mean the Insane.

Easy
00:14:922 (2) - Removes the circle and Replace it by a slider that ends in 00:15:494
00:18:351 (1) - Ending in 00:19:494
00:20:065 - Add a note
00:21:208 (2) - to start at 00:20:636 and end on: 00:21:779
00:22:351 - Add a note
00:25:779 (5) - Removes the circle and Replace it by a slider that ends in 00:26:922
00:33:779 (6) - The slider finished in 00:34:922
00:50:351 (6) - which ended in 00:51:494
00:52:065 - Add a slider to end in 00:52:636
01:15:494 (4) - Change for a long slider that ends in 01:17:208 - http://puu.sh/9Aee

GiNa 'Normal
00:25:779 (4) - The slider finished in 00:26:922
00:52:922 (5) - Remove the note
00:53:208 (1) - Move the slider to 00:52:922 and end on: 00:55:494
01:10:922 (4) - Changes the slider by a note
01:11:208 - I recommend you to add a spin to finish at: 01:13:208 (Deleting the remaining notes in the spin)

Hard
00:29:208 (1) - Removes the new combo
00:36:636 - Add a note (?
00:48:065 (4) - New Combo
00:48:636 (1) - Removes the new combo
00:50:351 (4) - NC (New Combo)
00:50:636 - Add a note
00:50:922 (1) - Removes the new combo that ends in slider: 00:52:065
01:03:208 (4) - Remove the note
01:03:494 (5) - Move the slider to 01:03:208
01:15:494 (4) - NC (?
01:17:779 (1) - Removes the NC (?
01:18:922 (3) - NC

Insane
*Try to make it more aesthetic, without exaggerating the notes*

Good Luck ~ I'm beautiful $:
Topic Starter
EmPao

H Kobato T Maria wrote:

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Scorpiour wrote:

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GiNa wrote:

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To :Scorpiour

非常謝謝你的mod
我剛學做map 還需要多練習 :P

我把所有的bpm都改成210
接著Easy , Hard 都修改過了
Shana Aisaka
Hi ~ >~<" A request from My Modding Queue ~ :)

Red - You really need to fix it.
Purple - Map seems okay~
Pink - Suggestion

[GiNa's Normal]
slider tick rate +1 ? >~<"

[Insane]
00:11:494(10) = NC
00:46:351(1) = I don't know if this is rankable =w=" http://puu.sh/9GIs ( how 'bout do a slider 1/2 or 1/3 ? >w<" )
00:49:779(1) = ^ http://puu.sh/9GII
01:17:779(1) = slider long till 01:18:351 ~


That's all ~ >~<"
H Kobato T Maria

ms0543724 wrote:

H Kobato T Maria wrote:

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Scorpiour wrote:

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GiNa wrote:

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To :Scorpiour

非常謝謝你的mod
我剛學做map 還需要多練習 :P

我把所有的bpm都改成210
接著Easy , Hard 都修改過了
Insane也做大幅度的修改了

To GiNa

Normal的diff還要再麻煩妳了~

To H Kobato T Maria

Sorry ,
I just reproduce it .

Could you mod it again? PlZ~ NO, sorry :3 Good Luck ~

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P.S : GiNa's Normal 尚未修改
GiNa

Shana Aisaka wrote:

[GiNa's Normal]
slider tick rate +1 ? >~<"

H Kobato T Maria wrote:

GiNa 'Normal
00:25:779 (4) - The slider finished in 00:26:922
00:52:922 (5) - Remove the note
00:53:208 (1) - Move the slider to 00:52:922 and end on: 00:55:494
01:10:922 (4) - Changes the slider by a note
01:11:208 - I recommend you to add a spin to finish at: 01:13:208 (Deleting the remaining notes in the spin)
No changed for both, sorry.
But thanks for your suggestions !

Download: nano.RIPE - Omokage Warp(TV Size) (ms0543724) [GiNa's Normal].osu
No_Gu
request from my queue

[rasy]
00:14:922 (5) - NC
00:24:636 (3) - NC 下一个note删NC
00:36:637 (1) - 开头whistle
00:49:779 (5) - clap换finish。NC、下个note删NC
01:17:779 (1,2,3) - 往左下一格
kiai部分clap全都不对。不应该在长白线上

[gina]
00:08:636 (1,2,3,4,1) - 摆正点
00:30:065 (4) - clap
00:57:208 (3) - 中间的clap去掉
01:06:636 (5) - 去掉clap

[hard]
01:08:065 (8) - NC 下一个note删NC

[insane]
00:37:208 (1) - 开头加finish
01:04:708 (1) - ^
Topic Starter
EmPao

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[rasy]
00:14:922 (5) - NC
00:24:636 (3) - NC 下一个note删NC
00:36:637 (1) - 开头whistle
00:49:779 (5) - clap换finish。NC、下个note删NC
01:17:779 (1,2,3) - 往左下一格
kiai部分clap全都不对。不应该在长白线上

[gina]
00:08:636 (1,2,3,4,1) - 摆正点
00:30:065 (4) - clap
00:57:208 (3) - 中间的clap去掉
01:06:636 (5) - 去掉clap

[hard]
01:08:065 (8) - NC 下一个note删NC

[insane]
00:37:208 (1) - 开头加finish
01:04:708 (1) - ^
我做修改了
Thanks~
Evil_Twilight
Inasne
00:08:922 (7) - 加clap
00:09:494 (1) - 取消NC
00:09:779 (1) - 加NC
00:09:779 (1) - 頭加finish、尾加clap
00:10:637 (4) - 加clap
00:10:922 (6) - 尾加clap
00:11:494 (1) - 取消NC、尾加clap
00:12:065 (2) - 加NC、拿掉clap
00:12:637 (3) - ^
00:13:208 (5) - ^
00:15:208 (5) - 尾加clap
00:17:779 (5) - clap移到尾
00:18:351 (1) - 取消NC、頭加calp
00:18:922 (3) - 加NC、頭加finish
00:30:637 (4) - clap移到頭
00:38:351 (3) - 拿掉clap
00:39:494 (7) - ^
00:40:637 (11) - ^
00:41:779 (3) - ^
00:41:779 (3) - ^
00:44:065 (11) - ^、尾加finish
00:45:494 (1) - 取消NC
00:46:351 (3) - 加NC
00:55:351 (11) - 拿掉finish
00:55:494 (1) - 加finish
00:56:351 (4) - 拿掉clap
00:56:637 (5) - 加clap
00:58:065 (3) - 拿掉clap
01:02:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 轉個方向比較好看
01:03:779 (6) - 加clap
01:16:351 (3) - 拿掉clap
01:20:922 (1) - 從 01:20:637開始

Hard
00:10:351 (2) - 拿掉clap
00:11:494 (4) - ^
00:13:779 (7) - 加clap
00:15:208 (3) - 第三和最後一個clap拿掉
00:16:351 (x) - 加note、加clap
00:16:637 (5) - clap移到尾
00:17:208 (6) - 拿掉頭的clap
00:18:351 (1) - ^、中間的clap改finish、clap放第二和第四條白線比較好聽
00:22:351 (1) - 取消NC
00:22:922 (2) - 頭加clap
00:23:494 (3) - 加NC
00:24:351 (1) - 取消NC
00:27:494 (1) - ^
00:36:065 (6) - 拿掉clap
00:36:636 (7) - 拿掉finish、把綠線移到 00:37:208
00:37:208 (1) - 加finish
00:39:494 (5) - 拿掉clap
00:41:208 (1) - 加clap
00:41:779 (2) - 拿掉clap
00:42:922 (4) - ^
00:43:494 (5) - 頭加clap
00:50:351 (4) - 拿掉clap
00:54:351 (7) - 第三個加clap
00:55:494 (1) - 頭加finish

GiNa's Normal
00:08:351 (x) - 加note
00:08:636 (1) - 取消NC
00:12:065 (1) - ^
00:20:636 (1) - 拿掉clap
00:22:636 (2) - ^
00:23:208 (1) - 取消NC
00:30:351 (1) - ^
00:37:208 (5) - 加NC
00:37:494 (1) - 取消NC
01:04:065 (1) - 加clap
01:18:351 (1) - 取消NC

Easy
00:16:636 (4) - 尾加clap
00:25:208 (2) - 拿掉尾的clap
00:27:494 (1) - ^
00:29:779 (2) - 頭加clap、中間clap拿掉
00:36:637 (1) - 綠線移到 00:37:779
01:21:208 (1) - 從 01:20:992開始

我音效弱
NC也是看心情放的
看看就好
Dino99
From my queue~

[Easy]

  1. 00:33:208 (2) - 往右一格
  2. 00:42:922 (3) - 往下一格
  3. 00:44:065 (5) - ^
  4. 00:46:351 (1) - Finish
  5. 00:47:494 (2) - ^
  6. 00:48:637 - ^
  7. 00:49:779 (1) - ^
  8. 01:19:494 (4) - 縮到01:20:065就好 然後Spinner加在01:20:637
[GiNa's Normal]

Fine~

[Hard]

  1. 00:16:351 - Add a note
  2. 00:42:351 (3) - 往右一格
  3. 00:42:922 (4) - 往右兩格,往下一格
  4. 00:54:351 (7) - 加到9連音? 然後後面那個Slider00:55:494 (1) - 頭尾對調? 在Edit裡的Reverse Selection~
  5. 01:20:065 (6,7) - 各往上一格
:arrow: Clap的位置在2.4拍會比較好~ 不是1.3拍!!

[Insane]

  1. 00:16:922 (2) - 頭尾對調?
  2. 00:17:494 (4) - ^
  3. 00:55:065 (6) - 刪掉
  4. 00:55:422 - Add a note(做成7連)
  5. 00:59:494 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 換些造型吧><
  6. 01:11:494 (1) - 拉到01:13:208
  7. 01:20:637 - Spinner從這開始比較好吧~
That's all~

Good Luck!! :D :D :D
Topic Starter
EmPao

Evil_Twilight wrote:

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12BARRY21 wrote:

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謝謝你們的mod :)

關於音效的部分,

我已經將所有難度 clap的點都做修改~

也對note做了些調整
GiNa
Mods

No_Gu wrote:

[gina]
00:08:636 (1,2,3,4,1) - 摆正点 這裡是故意這樣的
00:30:065 (4) - clap Fixed
00:57:208 (3) - 中间的clap去掉 Fixed
01:06:636 (5) - 去掉clap Fixed

Evil_Twilight wrote:

00:08:351 (x) - 加note No thank you
00:08:636 (1) - 取消NC ^
00:12:065 (1) - ^ ^
00:20:636 (1) - 拿掉clap ^
00:22:636 (2) - ^ ^
00:23:208 (1) - 取消NC ^
00:30:351 (1) - ^ ^
00:37:208 (5) - 加NC ^
00:37:494 (1) - 取消NC ^
01:04:065 (1) - 加clap ^
01:18:351 (1) - 取消NC ^

12BARRY21 wrote:

[GiNa's Normal]
Fine~ Thanks :D
Thanks for the mods !

Download: nano.RIPE - Omokage Warp(TV Size) (ms0543724) [GiNa's Normal].osu
GiNa
Sorry for double post.
抱歉我更新了一下

EDIT:
你資料夾裡是不是用到什麼了(要不就是上傳時用到什麼)
我的diff的檔名變成"nano.RIPE - Omokage Warp(TV Size) (ms0543724) [GiNa's Normal].osu.osu"
我有開顯示副檔名那個
載下我附加的,然後把舊的那個刪掉,再用full submit就好了。

EDIT2:
My Mod
[General]
-拿掉"Letterbox during breaks" (在Song Setup -> Stroyboarding裡)

[Easy]
00:27:494 (1,2) - 這兩個中間的repeat都加上clap
00:44:065 (5) - 建議NC
00:46:351 (1) - 尾上clap
00:48:065 (3) - 頭上clap
00:50:351 (2) - 頭跟尾都上clap,repeat的clap去掉
01:08:065 (3) - 建議NC
01:10:351 (1) - 這個spinner有點長,沒跟到vocal,所以把它縮短到01:12:922
01:19:494 (4) - slider中間的點移右一格

[Hard]
00:37:208 (2) - NC,這個看你,只是建議
00:39:494 (8) - NC,這個一定要NC,不然combo太長有點難看
00:41:208 (1) - 沒用好,0.07x
00:45:779 (6) - 這個spacing變得太突然(尤其是沒有任何NC提醒的情況下),建議NC,不然就是跟前面一樣都是0.80x
00:47:637 (3,4,5) - 這太坑,刪掉4,不然把這三個都移到x:48 y:180(Grid Level 4),這樣比較好讀 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/210315
00:49:922 (3,4,5,6,7) - 這串在hard裡好像太多,把5,6,7換成slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/210314
00:50:351 (1) - 改的話這個要調spacing,有必要的話可能後面幾個都要
00:52:065 (4) - NC
00:54:351 (6) - ^
00:54:637 (8) - 移到x:178 y:350(先不要開Grid Snap,移完後再開)

[Insane]
-在同一個combo裡的跳幾乎都有點亂,統一用一個spacing當跳就行了(Ex: 00:37:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9))
00:45:494 (3) - clap不太好聽,換成whistle
00:45:779 (4) - 離前一個太遠,建議移到x:308 y:284(Grid Level 4)
00:50:065 (6) - x:352 y:188(Grid Level 4)
00:50:637 (8) - 這spacing錯的,會跟下一個形成很彆扭的anti-jump,建議你直接把它跟x:424 y:120(就是跟下一個stack再一起) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/210323
00:53:779 (4) - 離前一個太近
00:54:065 (6) - 離前一個太遠
00:54:779 (2) - ^
01:04:494 (7) - 擋住了,不容易辨識
01:17:779 (1) - 移到x:140 y:80(Grid Level 4)
01:15:494 (1) - 其實我不太懂為什麼這裡開始要縮小距離,一直保持在0.80x不就好了?
01:19:779 (6) - 跟下一個形成跳的話,01:19:494 (5) - 加上NC
不錯我覺得,如果你能在更考慮一下spacing就好了(不要再remap了真的,現在這樣已經很好了)。

Download: nano.RIPE - Omokage Warp(TV Size) (ms0543724) [GiNa's Normal].osu
Kanari
Haii~
You requested in my queue ;3

General
-In my opinion the hit sounds sound louder and over power the music, lower it down?

[GiNa's Normal]
-00:42:065 (1) - Remove combo?

[Hard]
-00:36:922 (x) - Add a note here.
-00:40:637 (11) - Make the slider end at 00:40:922.
-00:42:922 (6) - Make the slider end at 00:43:208.
-00:52:351 (x) - Add a note?

Hope this helped~ ;3
GiNa

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

[GiNa's Normal]
-00:42:065 (1) - Remove combo? Nope, but thanks for your suggestion.
Thanks for your mod too :D .
SUBSTAC9
Hello your map was so pretty and hard BGM
:D
This all is my suggesttion to some diff

[Easy]
00:36:065 - Add note here
00:41:208 - ^
01:09:779 (6) - move to x:256 y:232


[GiNa's Normal]
00:06:065 (2) - Move to 00:06:723 your AR now slow I think a newbie can try it
00:06:922 (3) - ^ 00:06:351
00:07:779 (4) - ^ 00:06:922
00:06:922 - Add Slider till 00:07:779 revert to 00:08:351
00:12:065 - long Slider ?
00:18:351 (1) - Add Finish Hitsound
00:20:636 (1) - long slider ?
00:45:779 (1) - Add Whiste
00:47:208 (5) - ^
00:49:779 (4) - ^
00:53:208 (1) - ^
00:53:208 (1) - ^ and in kiai time could you try Whistle to note in Long white line until to end kiai
01:19:779 - Add Note Here

That all It's ok not problem

Good luck :)
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