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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年12月14日 at 16:01:35

Artist: Iris December Uncry (Hanazono Mei), Noel the Nextseason (Ameba Tsukasa)
Title: Crying Heart
Source: ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート2 -Nora, Princess, and Crying Cat.-
Tags: eroge to oujo noraneko noratoto Yasaija 714 Sekaii Sekai-nyan Momochikun
BPM: 178
Filesize: 3418kb
Play Time: 01:45
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Download: Iris December Uncry (Hanazono Mei), Noel the Nextseason (Ameba Tsukasa) - Crying Heart
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#6
Easy Yasaija 714
Normal Sekaii
Hard Momochikun
Insane me

vocal follow mapping


awesome mapset → Homura-'s set Check it out!!
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https://i.gyazo.com/278c05a0b36ac86811c ... a0b640.png (from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IP-OG3vm9h8)
http://harukaze-soft.com/nora2/
http://harukaze-soft.com/product/

Title: クライングハート
Romanised Title: Crying Heart
Artist: アイリス・ディセンバー・アンクライ(花園めい)、ノエル・ザ・ネクストシーズン(雨場つかさ)
Romanied Artist: Iris December Uncry (Hanazono Mei), Noel the Nextseason (Ameba Tsukasa)
Source: ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート2 -Nora, Princess, and Crying Cat.-


edit: added this link t/653303/start=31
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Easy pp
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makisokk wrote:
Easy pp


thanks checking!!
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Finished my Normal with 2.25 ></

Also I think this bg is kinda nsfw, maybe try to find better one? safer one at least o.o/

anyways my diff: http://puu.sh/xZoR1/7e43494f07.zip
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@Sekaii updated~ really thanks!!
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21:45 Asuka_-: hi can i ask for quick irc?
21:46 Dubturt: ye
21:46 *Asuka_- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1439840 Hanazono Mei, Ameba Tsukasa - Crying Heart]
21:46 Asuka_-: pls psl psl
21:46 Dubturt: wait lol
21:47 Asuka_-: ok lol
21:47 *Dubturt is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1439840 Hanazono Mei, Ameba Tsukasa - Crying Heart [Insane]]
21:47 Dubturt: noraneko 
21:47 Asuka_-: insane only pls-
21:47 Asuka_-: yes
21:48 Dubturt: it would be nice if this 00:10:005 (1,2,3) - had slighty bigger spacing than this 00:09:500 (1,2,3) - 
21:48 Dubturt: i mean like
21:49 Dubturt: the spacing gets gradually bigger for 00:09:500 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - the the 3 triangles
21:50 Dubturt: nice if it were blanketed 00:23:657 (3,1) - imo
21:52 Dubturt: idk 00:39:163 (1,2) - maybe your style lol
21:52 Dubturt: its ok if you dont do anything to it
21:52 Asuka_-: ok thanks! pls post to forum ><
21:53 Dubturt: ye
21:53 Dubturt: lol wait hehe
21:53 Dubturt: maybe a little too hard? 01:08:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 
21:54 Asuka_-: hm....
21:54 Asuka_-: i passed it,,,   hm... test play ok?
21:54 Dubturt: tomorrow lol
21:54 Dubturt: exams w
21:54 Asuka_-: okay
21:54 Asuka_-: ah
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@Dubturt all fixed! thanks
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meta updated
re-dl please!!
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As you requeste, m4m :D


Easy
well.. I suggest cs3, cause 2.5 is too big, so circles are too close for seeing, not so good to seeing for me.
01:13:039 (3) - unnecessary beat, drum is too weak, so playing can be weird imo.
for me, 1/1 was too many so playing was little bit boring and 2/3 makes hard reading for beginners, As you know, this is lowest diff in this set, so I suggest thinking about easier rhythm.


Normal
00:18:095 - I suggest adding a beat here since you added at 00:28:882 - , and you followed vocal at previous, I mean 00:13:208 (3,4) - here, but felt weird you followed drum at here.
00:44:387 - Unnecessary beat imo. deleting this beat can be easier rhythm for newbies.
00:57:702 - if you followed drum, this beat should be clickable, if you followed vocal. 00:57:365 - should be added. current beat looks just weird beats imo.
00:58:713 - I think strong beat is here, not 00:59:050 - , I sgueest ctrl G 00:58:545 (3,4) -
01:00:736 (1,4) - symmetrical pattern?
I think symmetrical pattern and downbeat notees made not so good rhythm. Just felt 1/1 map imo.


Hard
00:25:342 (1) - how about adding clickable beats at 00:25:679 - ? looks good for music and consistency with 00:14:556 (4,1) -
00:57:365 (4,5) - stacking made bad DS. check it ingame.
01:00:399 (3,2) - this linear overlap looks not so good imo.


Insane
00:31:073 (1,2,3,4) - How about make similar flow with 00:20:286 (1,2,3,4) - ? can be good for consistency.
00:58:039 (1,3) - stacking can be hard to read, I suggest overlapping. can be good for reading and emphasizing,
01:08:826 (1,3) - ^
01:18:769 (4,5) - well,, this stack looks little bit hard?

Really good mapset, GL with rank :D
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take 2 stars
Okay 12spBN when
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As you requeste, m4m :D


Easy
well.. I suggest cs3, cause 2.5 is too big, so circles are too close for seeing, not so good to seeing for me. ok
01:13:039 (3) - unnecessary beat, drum is too weak, so playing can be weird imo. I am taking rhythm according to vocals
for me, 1/1 was too many so playing was little bit boring and 2/3 makes hard reading for beginners, As you know, this is lowest diff in this set, so I suggest thinking about easier rhythm. However, since there are many 1/2 sounds in this song, there are many uncomfortable feeling if it is 1/1 slider


Really good mapset, GL with rank :D


Thank you~

@Asuka_-さん CS3にしてください >:(
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@Sekaii talked with Doyak about BG and i decided to change~ thanks!!
@Neoskylove thanks star~ i'll reply!
@Yasaija 714 ok~ updated

Mochi's Hard updated, so spread is fine.
BG changed. (i could not find good one, so i chose it randomly. but it's fine lul)
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As requested suuper quick mod ^^

Easy
00:43:882 (3) - This slidershape feels really underwhelming for the loud drumroll in the background, maybe change it to a edgy slider (with red anchors)?

Clean ^^

Normal
Just noticed the jump in SV from Easy to Normal is pretty big compared to the rest. Something noteworthy but probably not that bad
00:01:410 (1,4) - Why not make them have the same slidershape? The edgy slider kinda sticks out in this part unnecessarily so making it have a curve would feel more
00:12:196 - This part seems to be a bit inconsistent in the rhythms used imo, for example:
00:59:387 (1) - Why the NC? I thought it was only used every second downbeat

Really don't like how it uses rhythm like that in general, but I guess it's fine

Hard
AIMod problems? At least on my side
00:17:253 (5,1) - 00:18:601 (3,1) - Tbh, the first one feels stronger in the song but the second one is emphasized noticeably more, maybe reduce spacing on the second one?
00:25:342 (1) - Kinda confused about why the rather strong vocal is on the repeat, 00:14:556 (4,1) - is essentially the same, yet it has the vocal clickable
00:26:859 (1) - It feels like it deserves more emphasis but it's fine I guess, you choose
00:57:028 (2,3,4,5) - Really don't like the fact that the continuous 1/2 hitcircles kinda overshadow how the instruments go away here 00:57:365 (4) - but again, up to you
01:20:286 (3) - No emphasis? Again, it's your choice but the ways of emphasis feel kinda weird to me
01:39:163 (3,4,5,6,1) - Really nazi but it triggers me that 01:39:163 (3) - kinda ruins the pentagon a bit xd

Fun diff

Insane
00:03:264 (1,2,3,4) - Rather nazi but maybe for tidiness make these overlap more like 00:00:904 (1,2,3) - or the other way around , your choice though xd
00:58:039 (1,3) - 01:08:826 (1,3) - Don't know if this is allowed because: (RC outtake)
"When perfectly overlapping two slider bodies, the first slider must be fully faded out before the second slider is fully faded in."
But might wanna ask for more opinions

Haven't looked closer, but looks really clean, gj!

Sorry for the bad mod, don't have much time though uwu
GL!
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Hello. So here I am. Super quick mod.
Insane
00:23:657 (3,1) - blanket looks weird, try moving 00:23:657 (3) - closer or just correcting the slider a little
00:36:129 (4) - my personal look, however, I think you could make this slider longer like 00:44:219 (10,1) - because the vocal is not changing a would make sense to emphasize it like that
00:46:915 (5,1) - same here ^ (or just ignore these two suggestions)
00:47:253 (1,2) - also weird blankets again
00:56:522 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this part could have some more emphasis e.g increase spacing 00:56:859 (2,3,4) -
01:04:612 (1,2,3) - hmm check this out http://puu.sh/y1cBw/7eb09e9eaa.jpg small details but worth fixing them
01:15:399 (1,2) - blanket ?
01:22:140 (5,4) - check stacks here
01:30:736 (2,3,4) - same as above ^^^
01:35:792 (1,2,3,4) - spacing a little off
01:41:017 - would love to see a circle here


Mochi's Hard
00:08:826 (2) - i think i would be better to rotate this slider https://puu.sh/y1cOK/bb20db0bb1.jpg
00:08:657 (1,1) - too close
00:35:455 (5,1) - and 00:36:466 (1,2,3) - spacing between 5th and 1st - fix it
01:39:163 (3,4,5,6,1) - you should use something ctrl+shift+d to create a perfect shaped pentagon
01:39:837 (1,2) - and 01:40:679 (3,4) - spacing could be better like put 01:41:017 (4) - a little closer


other diffs are cool

good luck! :D
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