Hi again~ :3
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Timing]
The first kiai should be end on 02:29:746. Just like 03:38:922 / 05:33:275
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Interstellar]
00:20:040 (68,69) - Ctrl+G , for the consistency of 00:18:804 - 00:19:510 pitch
00:20:746 (72,73,74) - I think that this point should be
ddk , to make 00:20:922 as k for the consistency of the pitch as I've talked on above.
00:23:393 (100,101,102,103) - How about
d for the variation here?
01:19:510 - I would like to suggest to rearrange the pattern like
this. For the consistency of the 01:13:863 (219,220,221,222,223,224) part.
01:48:098 -
d might be good since the pitch here and 01:47:922 is different. And it's similar to 01:52:127 (77,78) imo.
01:56:216 (93,94,95) -
kdk would be good in order to follow the piano pitch. Just the same thing that you've do on 01:57:628 (99,100,101) I guess~.
01:59:040 - ^
02:06:098 - How about this one? In order to have a note on 02:06:804 which it's similar to 03:15:981 somehow~
02:12:010 (202,203) - Ctrl+G , in order to follow the drum pitch by using d on 02:12:098 (203) . Like 02:12:451 (207)
02:13:863 -
d , for the consistency of the drums sound on 02:12:451 - 02:12:804 - 02:13:157 - 02:13:510
02:53:304 moves to 02:53:216 - Tbh, I didn't understand the doublet here. uwu
02:55:334 - How about this one? , in order to make 02:56:216 as
k for the consistency of 02:54:098 - 02:54:804 - 02:55:510 - 02:56:216 pitch (If agree, change 02:54:804 to
k too.)
02:58:157 (581,582) - Ctrl+G , for the consistency of 02:58:334 (582) and on the above suggestion pitch.
04:11:393 (24,25,26,27,28) -
k d k k d would be nice in my opinion. As 04:12:451 (27) is similar to 04:12:098 (26) uwu
04:19:863 - Change to
d , seems similar to 04:18:451 more than 04:19:157
04:47:657 moves to 04:47:746 - Same as 02:06:098 suggestion.
Hope this can help some.
Good luck!