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RADWIMPS - Yume Tourou [Osu|CatchTheBeat]

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Dizick
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年11月8日 at 19:54:29

Artist: RADWIMPS
Title: Yume Tourou
Source: 君の名は。
Tags: ki mi no na wa your name yojiro noda makoto shinkai opening op realsekai shavix YshadowXOP_ victorfernando
BPM: 172
Filesize: 5939kb
Play Time: 02:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Mikan's Easy (1.54 stars, 127 notes)
  2. Milar's Normal (2.17 stars, 198 notes)
  3. Nelly's Overdose (5.27 stars, 415 notes)
  4. RealSekai's Hard (3.75 stars, 331 notes)
  5. ShaVix's Insane (4.26 stars, 354 notes)
  6. What is your name? (5.42 stars, 426 notes)
  7. Xetopia's Rain (4.24 stars, 415 notes)
Download: RADWIMPS - Yume Tourou
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thanks Namki for hitsounds!

Easy by MikanTBG
Normal by Milar001
Hard by RealSekai
Insane by victorfernando and YshadowXOP_
Extra by me
Rain by Xetopia
Overdose by Nelly
RealSekai
Привет.
Небольшой мод, от небольшого маппера
Сначала стоит изменить "song setup" - ar 9 od 7 hp 7 ---> ar ~9.3 od хотя бы 8 hp 5-6 как хочешь. хп 7? какой сейча год?

01:03:001 (9,10,1,2,3,4) - идет закругленный флоу, а затем резко меняет направление http://i.imgur.com/fmHBsod.png . Удобнее будет играть , если сделать примерно так - http://i.imgur.com/Q9kKCuN.png ну ты понял

01:33:339 (2,3,4,5) - квадраты неудобно играть, предлагаю сделать что-нибудь такое http://i.imgur.com/4Lonk15.png

01:53:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 5,6,7,8 внезапно вокал. Лучше сделать так - http://i.imgur.com/OVmD7ab.png

Ну это все, что я могу сказать. Сорри за даунские объяснения. Мне легче передвать все через пикчи.

Отпишись ;-;
Topic Starter
Dizick

RealSekai wrote:

Привет.
Небольшой мод, от небольшого маппера
Сначала стоит изменить "song setup" - ar 9 od 7 hp 7 ---> ar ~9.3 od хотя бы 8 hp 5-6 как хочешь. хп 7? какой сейча год? испарвил

01:03:001 (9,10,1,2,3,4) - идет закругленный флоу, а затем резко меняет направление http://i.imgur.com/fmHBsod.png . Удобнее будет играть , если сделать примерно так - http://i.imgur.com/Q9kKCuN.png ну ты понял испарвил

01:33:339 (2,3,4,5) - квадраты неудобно играть, предлагаю сделать что-нибудь такое http://i.imgur.com/4Lonk15.png испарвил

01:53:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 5,6,7,8 внезапно вокал. Лучше сделать так - http://i.imgur.com/OVmD7ab.png испарвил

Ну это все, что я могу сказать. Сорри за даунские объяснения. Мне легче передвать все через пикчи.

Отпишись ;-;
Спасибо за мод!
Sharkie
[General]
Of course, I'm sure you realize since this is not a 5 minute drain time, you need a full set (Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane, Extra).
In addition, you'd also need hitsounding.
I think for Extras, you should use OD9 or 8.5, OD 8 works better for Insanes.

[Extra]
  1. 00:24:488 (1,2,3) - I think this is kinda poorly structured. I would suggest something like this:
    Suggestion 1
  2. 00:27:278 (3,4,5) - For this, I would use a different rhythm in order to follow the acoustic guitar.
    Suggestion 2
  3. 00:28:499 (1) - There's no note here, I wouldn't use this rhythm. I would use something like this instead:
    Suggestion 3
  4. 00:54:406 (3,4,5,6) - In this pattern, I would make 00:54:575 (4,5) - the largest jumps because of the loud claps that happen on these notes. They're very sudden and I think you should map those accordingly. Although they do have the largest spacing in this pattern, the jumps look too visually similar.
  5. 01:00:642 (2) - This note doesn't exist, there is a note 01:00:726 - here, however.
  6. 01:02:159 (2,3,4) - This flow is really strange and linear. Maybe move 01:02:159 (2) - to x:472 y:67? I think that emphasizes 2 well and plays better as well.
  7. 01:07:889 (4,5,6) - You could make this a stream. This is because there is a closed hi-hat played on these notes.
    Suggestion 4
  8. 01:12:608 (1,2,3,4,5) - All of this too can be a stream, there's lots of hi-hat in this section.
  9. 01:19:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - For a calm section like this, these jumps are way too big.
  10. 01:34:687 (4) - Starting here, I would use this rhythm to match the drum fills.
    Suggestion 5
  11. 01:37:721 (3,4,5) - Here, I would emphasize the offbeat snare. On 01:37:721 (3,5) - there are snare hits. Therefore, I would make the jump from 01:37:215 (2,3) - larger than 01:37:721 (3,4) - and the jump 01:37:889 (4,5) - larger than 01:37:721 (3,4) -
Topic Starter
Dizick

Sharkie wrote:

[General]
Of course, I'm sure you realize since this is not a 5 minute drain time, you need a full set (Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane, Extra).
In addition, you'd also need hitsounding.
I think for Extras, you should use OD9 or 8.5, OD 8 works better for Insanes.

[Extra]
  1. 00:24:488 (1,2,3) - I think this is kinda poorly structured. I would suggest something like this:
    Suggestion 1 fix
  2. 00:27:278 (3,4,5) - For this, I would use a different rhythm in order to follow the acoustic guitar.
    Suggestion 2 fix
  3. 00:28:499 (1) - There's no note here, I wouldn't use this rhythm. I would use something like this instead:
    Suggestion 3 fix
  4. 00:54:406 (3,4,5,6) - In this pattern, I would make 00:54:575 (4,5) - the largest jumps because of the loud claps that happen on these notes. They're very sudden and I think you should map those accordingly. Although they do have the largest spacing in this pattern, the jumps look too visually similar. fix
  5. 01:00:642 (2) - This note doesn't exist, there is a note 01:00:726 - here, however. fix
  6. 01:02:159 (2,3,4) - This flow is really strange and linear. Maybe move 01:02:159 (2) - to x:472 y:67? I think that emphasizes 2 well and plays better as well. fix
  7. 01:07:889 (4,5,6) - You could make this a stream. This is because there is a closed hi-hat played on these notes.
    Suggestion 4 -----
  8. 01:12:608 (1,2,3,4,5) - All of this too can be a stream, there's lots of hi-hat in this section.-----
  9. 01:19:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - For a calm section like this, these jumps are way too big. fix
  10. 01:34:687 (4) - Starting here, I would use this rhythm to match the drum fills.
    Suggestion 5 fix
  11. 01:37:721 (3,4,5) - Here, I would emphasize the offbeat snare. On 01:37:721 (3,5) - there are snare hits. Therefore, I would make the jump from 01:37:215 (2,3) - larger than 01:37:721 (3,4) - and the jump 01:37:889 (4,5) - larger than 01:37:721 (3,4) -
fix
Thanks you very much for mod!
-Mikan
Особых ошибок кроме кривоватого спейсинга я не нашел.Сори,что коротко.
[Дженирал]
Оффсет первой красной линии(172бпм) 00:24:473 имхо.
Добавь соус,теги,цвета нот и хитсаунды.
Сделай аудио не 100% везде, здесь.
Ты точно хочешь оставить отчет до начала карты?По-моему выглядит не очень.
[Extra]
00:25:185 (3,4,1) - растяни ,чтоб по спейсингу было как здесь 00:24:488 (1,2,3) и нк с 4 поставь.
00:26:929 (2) - нк
00:28:325 (6) - нк (и с этого не забудь убрать 00:28:499 (1) )
00:33:557 (3) - нк
00:35:650 (1,2,3,4) - тут лучше сделать так,это следует вокалу
00:41:057 (4,1) - а здесь так
00:51:522 (1) - нк и поставь 00:51:871 (2) подальше
00:56:091 (6) - нк (убери с 00:56:428 (1) )
00:58:788 (6) - нк (убери нк 00:59:125 (1) )
01:00:473 (1,5) - стакни
01:01:485 (7) - нк (убери нк 01:01:822 (1) )
01:05:530 (1) - убери нк
01:35:530 (1) - убери нк
[RealSekai's Hard]
Убери Widescreen Support.
Сделай спейсинг попросторнее ,с ар8 это немного сложновато читать для харда.
00:26:406 (6,7) - нк на 6 и стакни с началом 3 слайдера
00:28:325 (11) - поставь подальше
00:31:290 (4) - нк и стакни со второй нотой(соответственно и все что за ней сдвинь)
01:02:496 (2) - убери один реверс
01:05:024 (6) - нк
01:07:552 (5) - нк
01:12:440 (5) - нк
01:15:979 (7) - нк
Petal
HI o////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

we've met before


EXTREA
SPOILER
00:24:488 - the hitsounds Vol here could be lowered , you can hear that it is over powering the song

00:25:185 (3) - turn this slider end into a circle , if you slow down the song u hear that there is strong sound there :D

00:30:069 (6) - NC

00:31:290 (2) - turn Slider head into circle and slider end into slider head


00:53:732 (1,2) - these 2 sliders are different from 00:52:721 (3,4) - these 2 , so maybe replace with triples or reverse

00:54:575 (4,5) - Here these 2 sounds is highlighted claps , so maybe NC this 00:54:575 (4) - try to make it stand out from the other notes.

00:59:125 (1) - this deserves a triple ^.^

00:59:631 (11,12,13) - take away the note on the blue tick , sound way better

00:59:799 (13,14) - this time the highlighted clap is on the slider end and 14 , which you don't really want it to be on slider ends

01:01:822 (1) - Triplezzz

01:05:867 (1) - no need NC

01:06:541 (4) - NC here instead

01:35:024 (1) - Just leave this not NCed

01:35:361 (1) - ^

01:37:215 (2) - can separate this into 2 sliders , so the strong beat don't need to be on slider end

01:55:754 (1,2) - make this a triple

01:58:451 (1,2) - ^

02:01:148 (1,2) - ^

02:03:844 (8,9) - ^

01:57:945 (5,6,7) - no need triple

xd Good luck

teahc meh h0w 2 mep ded 2 me
Topic Starter
Dizick

MikanTBG wrote:

Особых ошибок кроме кривоватого спейсинга я не нашел.Сори,что коротко.
[Дженирал]
Оффсет первой красной линии(172бпм) 00:24:473 имхо.
Добавь соус,теги,цвета нот и хитсаунды.
Сделай аудио не 100% везде, здесь.
Ты точно хочешь оставить отчет до начала карты?По-моему выглядит не очень.
[Extra]
00:25:185 (3,4,1) - растяни ,чтоб по спейсингу было как здесь 00:24:488 (1,2,3) и нк с 4 поставь. исправил
00:26:929 (2) - нк исправил
00:28:325 (6) - нк (и с этого не забудь убрать 00:28:499 (1) ) исправил
00:33:557 (3) - нк исправил
00:35:650 (1,2,3,4) - тут лучше сделать так,это следует вокалу исправил
00:41:057 (4,1) - а здесь так исправил
00:51:522 (1) - нк и поставь 00:51:871 (2) подальше исправил
00:56:091 (6) - нк (убери с 00:56:428 (1) )исправил
00:58:788 (6) - нк (убери нк 00:59:125 (1) ) исправил
01:00:473 (1,5) - стакни исправил
01:01:485 (7) - нк (убери нк 01:01:822 (1) )исправил
01:05:530 (1) - убери нк исправил
01:35:530 (1) - убери нк исправил
[RealSekai's Hard]
Убери Widescreen Support.
Сделай спейсинг попросторнее ,с ар8 это немного сложновато читать для харда.
00:26:406 (6,7) - нк на 6 и стакни с началом 3 слайдера Не вижу смысла стакать со слайдером
00:28:325 (11) - поставь подальше исправил
00:31:290 (4) - нк и стакни со второй нотой(соответственно и все что за ней сдвинь) исправил
01:02:496 (2) - убери один реверс -----
01:05:024 (6) - нк исправил
01:07:552 (5) - нк исправил
01:12:440 (5) - нк исправил
01:15:979 (7) - нк исправил
Спасибо большое за мод!!
Topic Starter
Dizick

- Matha - wrote:

HI o////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

we've met before


EXTREA
SPOILER
00:24:488 - the hitsounds Vol here could be lowered , you can hear that it is over powering the song fix

00:25:185 (3) - turn this slider end into a circle , if you slow down the song u hear that there is strong sound there :D fix

00:30:069 (6) - NC -----

00:31:290 (2) - turn Slider head into circle and slider end into slider head
-----

00:53:732 (1,2) - these 2 sliders are different from 00:52:721 (3,4) - these 2 , so maybe replace with triples or reverse fix

00:54:575 (4,5) - Here these 2 sounds is highlighted claps , so maybe NC this 00:54:575 (4) - try to make it stand out from the other notes. fix


00:59:125 (1) - this deserves a triple ^.^ -----

00:59:631 (11,12,13) - take away the note on the blue tick , sound way better fix

00:59:799 (13,14) - this time the highlighted clap is on the slider end and 14 , which you don't really want it to be on slider ends fix

01:01:822 (1) - Triplezzz -----

01:05:867 (1) - no need NC -----

01:06:541 (4) - NC here instead fix

01:35:024 (1) - Just leave this not NCed -----

01:35:361 (1) - ^ -----

01:37:215 (2) - can separate this into 2 sliders , so the strong beat don't need to be on slider end -----

01:55:754 (1,2) - make this a triple -----

01:58:451 (1,2) - ^ -----

02:01:148 (1,2) - ^ -----

02:03:844 (8,9) - ^ -----

01:57:945 (5,6,7) - no need triple -----

xd Good luck

teahc meh h0w 2 mep ded 2 me
Thanks for mod
EijiKuinbii
Добавь сурс и теги, чекни аимод в обеих диффах
RealSekai's Hard
00:25:011 (2,5) - будет красивее если стакнуть
00:33:906 (2) - удали, 00:33:557 (1) - этот слайдер сделай длиннее, чтобы ритм был как 00:30:069 (1,2) - тут
00:36:871 (5,8) - стак
00:39:488 (3,3) - оверлап лучше убрать
00:45:941 (1,3) - лучше стакнуть или убрать оверлап
02:04:181 (8,9,10) - тут 1/4
В целом проблем с ритмом почти нет, зато вот с эстетикой дохуя: куча оверлапов, типа тех что я указал, которые делают карту сложночитаемой, также часто не стакаются объекты, которые можно стакнуть
Extra
00:28:659 - слайдер должен начинаться здесь
00:34:938 - пропущен бит
00:30:054 (7) - нк
00:31:100 (1) - убери нк
00:39:124 (3) - тут нет бита
00:40:170 - здесь должно быть кликабельно
00:48:019 (4,1) - бланкет кривой
00:49:589 (1,3) - ^
00:51:682 - опять бит пропустил
00:52:205 - тут 1/6
00:52:384 (1) - сюда лучше слайдер подойдет
00:53:732 (1) - тут 1/4
00:59:125 (2) - ^
00:59:968 (6,7) - выдели эти хлопки как-нибудь, через спейсинг например
01:03:169 (1) - слайдер лучше зашел бы
01:05:867 (1) - убери нк
01:07:215 (1) - ^
01:13:957 (1,4) - оверлапа можно избежать
01:24:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - разбавь слайдерами лучше
01:32:664 - тут кликабельно должно быть
01:56:597 (5,6) - опять же выдели хлопки через увеличение спейсинга
01:58:451 (1,2) - 1/4 трипл тут не помешает
02:01:148 (1,2) - ^
02:03:844 (8,9) - ^
02:01:822 (5,6) - тут ты кликабельность хлопков вообще заигнорил, лучше переделай
гл
Topic Starter
Dizick

EijiKuinbii wrote:

Добавь сурс и теги, чекни аимод в обеих диффах
RealSekai's Hard
00:25:011 (2,5) - будет красивее если стакнуть
00:33:906 (2) - удали, 00:33:557 (1) - этот слайдер сделай длиннее, чтобы ритм был как 00:30:069 (1,2) - тут исправил
00:36:871 (5,8) - стак исправил
00:39:488 (3,3) - оверлап лучше убрать исправил
00:45:941 (1,3) - лучше стакнуть или убрать оверлап исправил
02:04:181 (8,9,10) - тут 1/4
В целом проблем с ритмом почти нет, зато вот с эстетикой дохуя: куча оверлапов, типа тех что я указал, которые делают карту сложночитаемой, также часто не стакаются объекты, которые можно стакнуть
Extra
00:28:659 - слайдер должен начинаться здесь исправил
00:34:938 - пропущен бит исправил
00:30:054 (7) - нк исправил
00:31:100 (1) - убери нк исправил
00:39:124 (3) - тут нет бита исправил
00:40:170 - здесь должно быть кликабельно исправил
00:48:019 (4,1) - бланкет кривой исправил
00:49:589 (1,3) - ^ исправил
00:51:682 - опять бит пропустил исправил
00:52:205 - тут 1/6
00:52:384 (1) - сюда лучше слайдер подойдет исправил
00:53:732 (1) - тут 1/4
00:59:125 (2) - ^
00:59:968 (6,7) - выдели эти хлопки как-нибудь, через спейсинг например исправил
01:03:169 (1) - слайдер лучше зашел бы исправил
01:05:867 (1) - убери нк исправил
01:07:215 (1) - ^ исправил
01:13:957 (1,4) - оверлапа можно избежать исправил
01:24:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - разбавь слайдерами лучше исправил
01:32:664 - тут кликабельно должно быть исправил
01:56:597 (5,6) - опять же выдели хлопки через увеличение спейсинга исправил
01:58:451 (1,2) - 1/4 трипл тут не помешает исправил
02:01:148 (1,2) - ^ исправил
02:03:844 (8,9) - ^ исправил
02:01:822 (5,6) - тут ты кликабельность хлопков вообще заигнорил, лучше переделай исправил
гл
Спасибо большое за мод!
victorfernando
GENERAL

Hard is really bad for beginner's the flow is No sense , bad blankets , to many overlapps .

Hard

  1. 00:24:487 Until 00:52:394 REMAKE ALL
  2. 01:30:136 REMAKE WITH 0.75 SLIDER SPEED
    DO LIKE THIS >
suggest remake all *3*

Extra

  1. The flows are better than the other diff, But overlaps and bad blankets still the same
  2. 00:52:384 Here start bad flows and NC's (new combo)
  3. 00:54:575 Cancel NC (new combo)
  4. 00:54:406 make this jump better (Try A triangle, square Or low angle)
  5. 00:55:417 ^
  6. 00:57:440 (1) (1) (1) CANCEL NC'S (new combo)
  7. 01:02:496 NC (new combo)
I made hitsounds and fixed that part i mentioned on hard if you wanna add me on discord : victorfernando#8438
Topic Starter
Dizick

victorfernando wrote:

GENERAL

Hard is really bad for beginner's the flow is No sense , bad blankets , to many overlapps .

Hard

  1. 00:24:487 Until 00:52:394 REMAKE ALL Well, I'll tell mapper what he would remake
  2. 01:30:136 REMAKE WITH 0.75 SLIDER SPEED[/color]
    DO LIKE THIS >
suggest remake all *3*

Extra

  1. The flows are better than the other diff, But overlaps and bad blankets still the same
  2. 00:52:384 Here start bad flows and NC's (new combo) Fix
  3. 00:54:575 Cancel NC (new combo) Fix
  4. 00:54:406 make this jump better (Try A triangle, square Or low angle) Fix
  5. 00:55:417 ^ Fix
  6. 00:57:440 (1) (1) (1) CANCEL NC'S (new combo) These NC's are needed to emphasize that this triple is in 1/3
  7. 01:02:496 NC (new combo)
Fix

I made hitsounds and fixed that part i mentioned on hard if you wanna add me on discord : victorfernando#8438
Thanks for mod ^^
Kyouren
Can I make a diff? :3
Topic Starter
Dizick

KittyAdventure wrote:

Can I make a diff? :3
SURE!
Kanzaki H Aria
Hi from my queue. ヾ(。╹ω╹。)

General

Title: 夢灯籠
Source: 君の名は
Background: kimi_no_na_wa_by_airiartworks00-daixmh3.png is 1023x551, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
Inconsistency in combo colours: ShaVix's Insane
Inconsistency in Countdown: RealSekai's Hard
Tags:
You can type something like it.
ki mi no na wa your name yojiro noda makoto shinkai opening op reaksekai shavix
Inconsistency in uninherited timing sections
[Extra]
Red timing sections at:
00:24:473, BPM of 172.000
00:52:384, BPM of 178.000

[RealSekai's Hard]
Red timing sections at:
00:24:488, BPM of 172.000
00:52:384, BPM of 178.000

[ShaVix's Insane]
Red timing sections at:
00:24:473, BPM of 172.000
00:52:384, BPM of 178.000

Which one is correct?
RealSekai's Hard

00:27:104 (3) - X: 336, Y: 192
00:31:464 (5) - X: 144, Y: 64
00:32:162 (7) - X: 40, Y: 204
00:32:511 (8) - X: 108, Y: 252
00:43:499 (2) - X: 232, Y: 296
00:51:435 (1) - I don't know why place a spinner on there.
01:59:462 (1) - Why use 1/3 slider on here?
From 01:42:777 (1) - to 02:04:855 (10) -, you must use hitsounds.
Extra

First, you must use hitsounds, I've check all of the notes twice, only normal-hitsound. (ÒωÓױ)
Secondly, use new combos often and intelligently, from 00:24:473 (1,2,3) - to 00:25:693 (1,2) -, using a NC every few notes doesn't make any sense.
New Combo
00:25:693 (1) - NC
00:25:868 (2) - NC
00:26:914 (1) - NC
00:27:263 (3) - NC
00:28:310 (1) - NC
00:28:659 (1) - NC
00:32:496 (1) - NC
00:32:845 (4) - NC
00:33:542 (1) - NC
00:34:240 (1) - NC
00:42:612 (5) - NC
00:53:058 (1) - NC
00:56:091 (1) - NC
00:56:091 (1) - NC
00:56:428 (7) - NC
00:58:788 (1) - NC
00:59:125 (7) - NC
01:01:485 (1) - NC
01:01:822 (8) - NC
01:05:867 (6) - NC
01:06:541 (1) - NC
01:28:788 (1) - NC
02:03:844 (8) - NC
00:35:635 (1,2,3) - why uses such a high distance snap on here.
00:38:077 (4) - try to move to X: 16, Y: 136, looks better.
00:40:170 (2,3,4) -
Place those notes like this one would be great
200,120,40170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,68,40345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,168,40519,2,0,L|152:248,2,67.5000025749208
52,104,41042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,204,41217,6,0,P|64:292|116:312,1,135.000005149842
188,264,41740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
00:51:507 (2,3,4) - Inconsistency DS.
From 00:54:406 (3) - to 00:55:923 (5) -
place them like it would be great.
359,80,54406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,256,54575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,52,54743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,152,54912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,154,55080,6,0,P|343:121|360:80,1,90
192,40,55417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,232,55586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,40,55754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,156,55923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
.
00:59:462 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I suggest you remake those notes.
01:07:889 (4) - Copy 01:07:552 (3) - , uses Ctrl + H and move to X: 368, Y: 60.
01:08:226 (5) - X: 280, Y: 220, 01:08:395 (6) - X: 376, Y: 288, 01:08:563 (1) - X: 284, 360
01:08:900 (2) - X: 48, Y: 292, 01:09:069 (3) - X: 196, Y: 216, 01:09:237 (4) - X: 48, Y: 152, 01:09:406 (5) - X: 196, Y: 72
01:09:912 (1) - X: 368, 316, 01:10:080 (2) - X: 264, Y:180, 01:10:586 (4) - X: 308, Y: 52, 01:10:754 (5) - X:256, Y: 192
01:11:766 (4) - X: 140, Y: 160. 01:11:934 (5) - X: 224, Y: 80
01:41:428 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - The angle was uncomfortable.
01:42:777 (2,3,4,5,6) - maybe you can try to uses polygonal circles?
02:04:939 (4) - delete it and this one 02:05:024 (5) -, the music should ends on 02:05:024 not 02:05:192

That it, good luck with your map and have a good day. (´・ω・`)ノシ
Topic Starter
Dizick

KanpanRin wrote:

Hi from my queue. ヾ(。╹ω╹。)

General

Title: 夢灯籠
Source: 君の名は
Background: kimi_no_na_wa_by_airiartworks00-daixmh3.png is 1023x551, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
Inconsistency in combo colours: ShaVix's Insane
Inconsistency in Countdown: RealSekai's Hard
Tags:
You can type something like it.
ki mi no na wa your name yojiro noda makoto shinkai opening op reaksekai shavix
Inconsistency in uninherited timing sections
[Extra]
Red timing sections at:
00:24:473, BPM of 172.000
00:52:384, BPM of 178.000

[RealSekai's Hard]
Red timing sections at:
00:24:488, BPM of 172.000
00:52:384, BPM of 178.000

[ShaVix's Insane]
Red timing sections at:
00:24:473, BPM of 172.000
00:52:384, BPM of 178.000

Which one is correct?
RealSekai's Hard

00:27:104 (3) - X: 336, Y: 192 fix
00:31:464 (5) - X: 144, Y: 64 fix
00:32:162 (7) - X: 40, Y: 204 fix
00:32:511 (8) - X: 108, Y: 252 fix
00:43:499 (2) - X: 232, Y: 296 fix
00:51:435 (1) - I don't know why place a spinner on there.
01:59:462 (1) - Why use 1/3 slider on here?
From 01:42:777 (1) - to 02:04:855 (10) -, you must use hitsounds.
Extra

First, you must use hitsounds, I've check all of the notes twice, only normal-hitsound. (ÒωÓױ)
Secondly, use new combos often and intelligently, from 00:24:473 (1,2,3) - to 00:25:693 (1,2) -, using a NC every few notes doesn't make any sense. Fix all NC's
New Combo
00:25:693 (1) - NC
00:25:868 (2) - NC
00:26:914 (1) - NC
00:27:263 (3) - NC
00:28:310 (1) - NC
00:28:659 (1) - NC
00:32:496 (1) - NC
00:32:845 (4) - NC
00:33:542 (1) - NC
00:34:240 (1) - NC
00:42:612 (5) - NC
00:53:058 (1) - NC
00:56:091 (1) - NC
00:56:091 (1) - NC
00:56:428 (7) - NC
00:58:788 (1) - NC
00:59:125 (7) - NC
01:01:485 (1) - NC
01:01:822 (8) - NC
01:05:867 (6) - NC
01:06:541 (1) - NC
01:28:788 (1) - NC
02:03:844 (8) - NC
00:35:635 (1,2,3) - why uses such a high distance snap on here. fix
00:38:077 (4) - try to move to X: 16, Y: 136, looks better. fix
00:40:170 (2,3,4) ------
Place those notes like this one would be great
200,120,40170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,68,40345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,168,40519,2,0,L|152:248,2,67.5000025749208
52,104,41042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,204,41217,6,0,P|64:292|116:312,1,135.000005149842
188,264,41740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
00:51:507 (2,3,4) - Inconsistency DS.-----
From 00:54:406 (3) - to 00:55:923 (5) - -----
place them like it would be great.
359,80,54406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,256,54575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,52,54743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,152,54912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,154,55080,6,0,P|343:121|360:80,1,90
192,40,55417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,232,55586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,40,55754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,156,55923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
.
00:59:462 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I suggest you remake those notes. -----
01:07:889 (4) - Copy 01:07:552 (3) - , uses Ctrl + H and move to X: 368, Y: 60.
01:08:226 (5) - X: 280, Y: 220, 01:08:395 (6) - X: 376, Y: 288, 01:08:563 (1) - X: 284, 360
01:08:900 (2) - X: 48, Y: 292, 01:09:069 (3) - X: 196, Y: 216, 01:09:237 (4) - X: 48, Y: 152, 01:09:406 (5) - X: 196, Y: 72
01:09:912 (1) - X: 368, 316, 01:10:080 (2) - X: 264, Y:180, 01:10:586 (4) - X: 308, Y: 52, 01:10:754 (5) - X:256, Y: 192
01:11:766 (4) - X: 140, Y: 160. 01:11:934 (5) - X: 224, Y: 80 fix, but not all
01:41:428 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - The angle was uncomfortable. fix
01:42:777 (2,3,4,5,6) - maybe you can try to uses polygonal circles? -----
02:04:939 (4) - delete it and this one 02:05:024 (5) -, the music should ends on 02:05:024 not 02:05:192
fix

That it, good luck with your map and have a good day. (´・ω・`)ノシ
Thanks for correct BPM and Metadata, and thanks for mod <3
Kanzaki H Aria
Hi, you forgot add "General" on other diffs, you only type it on "Extra" diff.
Source and tags must be the same throughout the mapset
That it. (・ω・)
ShinodaYuu
Hi, there's my diff
If you have any comment let me know :)

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 90146
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 122169
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:Yume Tourou
TitleUnicode:夢灯籠
Artist:RADWIMPS
ArtistUnicode:RADWIMPS
Creator:My Angel DanyL
Version:Milar's Normal
Source:君の名は。
Tags:ki mi no na wa your name yojiro noda makoto shinkai opening op reaksekai shavix YshadowXOP_ victorfernando
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"kimi_no_na_wa_by_airiartworks00-daixmh3.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
24488,348.837209302326,4,3,1,30,1,0
52394,337.078651685393,4,3,1,100,1,0
63180,-100,4,2,3,60,0,0
83742,-100,4,3,1,60,0,0
90146,-100,4,3,1,80,0,1
114416,-100,4,3,1,100,0,0


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334,176,26581,2,0,P|320:108|293:82,1,99.9999999999999
202,67,27278,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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-Mikan
Вот и гд, как просил, ток я немного в ср не попал, сори)
Mikan's Easy
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Source:君の名は。
Tags:ki mi no na wa your name yojiro noda makoto shinkai opening op reaksekai shavix YshadowXOP_ victorfernando
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