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Artist: Equilibrium
Title: Waldschrein
Tags: folk black viking metal dämon damon german Erdentempel
BPM: 200
Filesize: 9372kb
Play Time: 05:16
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Taiko needs more Equilibrium (`・ω・´)

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http://www.nuclearblast.de/en/label/music/band/discography/details/3369920.71053.erdentempel.html

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La diff en si esta hermosa pero puedes agregar un poquito de tu ritmo para hacerla mas entretenida... En que sentido te preguntaras, Bueno un ejemplo puede ser esto 00:15:233 (14) - ahi puedes agregar una kat ( agregando esta nota, Puedes fingir estar siguiendo el platillo de fondo... Como un ritmo largo """""""""""LARGO""""""""" )
- por que no cambiar aqui a kkk 00:41:258 (7,8,9) - ? asi puedes marcar mas las siguientes notas un poquito y tambien el pequeño cambio que hay en el sonido o un kdk tambien funciona le da mas caracter a aquella zona ( nota... Si haces esto tendrias que cambiar uno o los dos en todos los tiplets que tienen el mismo sonido )

- DON 00:58:658 (1) - , por esto 01:03:458 (1) - xD consistencia (?)

- sigue los platillos aqui 01:28:658 (10,14,20,21) - puede ser bueno ( para no decir Fino y confundirte todo )

- cambiala a k 02:05:858 (1) - el sonido del timbre

- ^ 03:08:258 (1) -

- si me gustaria que el ultimo kiai no tenga tantas pausas como por ejemplo aqui 04:44:408 (24) - , 04:34:808 (24) - algo asi... aunque ya de por si es mas dificil que todos los demas..

el resto para mi esta demasiado bello... Alto map wn <3 keep working
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Hihi!


General

Tags: Add "Erdentempel", the album which this song appeared in?
Add "daemon" or "dämon" to the tags? Its the German ways to spell Demon as in your diffname (Tbh i caught myself typing dämon and wondering where your map was)


Versteckter Dämon

01:05:333 (8) - delete or make this a don:
Since this and previous sections are just dons, and occasional extra dons for the nondrum instruments, this kat stands out too much.
If the kat werent there, 01:05:558 (11) - (which is important sound to make a kat out of) would stand out even more from the rest of the section, and also signals the upcoming stream even better.

02:04:358 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) -
I dont really see where those patterns come from.
Especially 02:04:658 (12) - this k, that lands on a kick drum
02:04:808 (13,14,15,16,17) - and this entire 5let, that actually sounds more like a kkddk because of the snare and kick drums.
It just doesnt sound that right to me tbh, but maybe you have a reason for that, idk.

02:58:658 - This section:
02:58:658 (1) - Theres a Bell noise and strong guitar strum, Finish?
03:01:058 (11,12,13) - 2 strong guitar strums here, i dont see emphasis on it tho? Maybe finish it similar to what you did at 03:03:458 (2) -
03:08:258 (1,2,3) - again strums and bell sound not emphasized ;;
03:10:658 (12,13,14) - strums here, no emphasis D:
03:12:758 (22) - cymbal sound that was a finisher in the first half of section, but isnt here. Make it consistent by either finishing both or unfinishing both
03:13:058 (1) - same goes for this don

04:32:258 - In this kiai i find it weird that the strong guitar strums on every 2 downbeats are mostly avoided.
Cursor on 04:34:808 - (the not mapped strum)
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Maybe this (and everywhere else where the strum is avoided) can be turned into smth like
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this?

05:02:483 - add a d to make it more resemblant like the sections near the start of the song?


Hm, i guess that would be all i found.
Over all i like the SV in the kiais aswell as the general idea of the sections outside it.
Good luck with this Map!
(Have some stars for obvious german reasons)
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hi~~~


Vertecker Damon

La diff en si esta hermosa pero puedes agregar un poquito de tu ritmo para hacerla mas entretenida... En que sentido te preguntaras, Bueno un ejemplo puede ser esto 00:15:233 (14) - ahi puedes agregar una kat ( agregando esta nota, Puedes fingir estar siguiendo el platillo de fondo... Como un ritmo largo """""""""""LARGO""""""""" ) queda muy feo, en esta parte sólo sigo el 1/4 del keyboard
- por que no cambiar aqui a kkk 00:41:258 (7,8,9) - ? asi puedes marcar mas las siguientes notas un poquito y tambien el pequeño cambio que hay en el sonido o un kdk tambien funciona le da mas caracter a aquella zona ( nota... Si haces esto tendrias que cambiar uno o los dos en todos los tiplets que tienen el mismo sonido ) pero si tienen casi el mismo sonido

- DON 00:58:658 (1) - , por esto 01:03:458 (1) - xD consistencia (?) en serio?

- sigue los platillos aqui 01:28:658 (10,14,20,21) - puede ser bueno ( para no decir Fino y confundirte todo ) what

- cambiala a k 02:05:858 (1) - el sonido del timbre te parece a ti que estoy mapeando el sonido de las campanillas

- ^ 03:08:258 (1) - the

- si me gustaria que el ultimo kiai no tenga tantas pausas como por ejemplo aqui 04:44:408 (24) - , 04:34:808 (24) - algo asi... aunque ya de por si es mas dificil que todos los demas.. las pausas son rítmicas. Si te fijas no he seguido ciegamente la música sino que he improvisado un ritmo propio

el resto para mi esta demasiado bello... Alto map wn <3 keep working tyty


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Hihi!


General

Tags: Add "Erdentempel", the album which this song appeared in?
Add "daemon" or "dämon" to the tags? Its the German ways to spell Demon as in your diffname (Tbh i caught myself typing dämon and wondering where your map was) added erdentempel but dämon was already a tag lmao


Versteckter Dämon

01:05:333 (8) - delete or make this a don:
Since this and previous sections are just dons, and occasional extra dons for the nondrum instruments, this kat stands out too much.
If the kat werent there, 01:05:558 (11) - (which is important sound to make a kat out of) would stand out even more from the rest of the section, and also signals the upcoming stream even better. it contrasts from the previous and following note and there is no "fast snap" to base off a 1/6th pattern so dkddk works just fine

02:04:358 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) -
I dont really see where those patterns come from.
Especially 02:04:658 (12) - this k, that lands on a kick drum
02:04:808 (13,14,15,16,17) - and this entire 5let, that actually sounds more like a kkddk because of the snare and kick drums.
It just doesnt sound that right to me tbh, but maybe you have a reason for that, idk. listen to the vocalist, hear his crescendo starting at 02:04:358 (8) - which I made a don to further contrast with 02:04:508 (10,12) - as they are the peak of the pattern. The other pattern merely has a flow+connective purpose for the longer 9plet ahead.

02:58:658 - This section:
02:58:658 (1) - Theres a Bell noise and strong guitar strum, Finish? I don't care about the bell, and I can't really feel the guitar as strong as to warrant a finisher
03:01:058 (11,12,13) - 2 strong guitar strums here, i dont see emphasis on it tho? Maybe finish it similar to what you did at 03:03:458 (2) - the emphasis of the finishers you pointed out lies on the percussion there though, not on the guitar
03:08:258 (1,2,3) - again strums and bell sound not emphasized ;;
03:10:658 (12,13,14) - strums here, no emphasis D: similar responses to all ^
03:12:758 (22) - cymbal sound that was a finisher in the first half of section, but isnt here. Make it consistent by either finishing both or unfinishing both
03:13:058 (1) - same goes for this don

04:32:258 - In this kiai i find it weird that the strong guitar strums on every 2 downbeats are mostly avoided.
Cursor on 04:34:808 - (the not mapped strum)
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Maybe this (and everywhere else where the strum is avoided) can be turned into smth like
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this?
I thought consistently skipping the beat would actually give the signal that the rhythm I created was intentional lol. Think about the vocal pauses, I try to emphasize all of them with these gaps.
05:02:483 - add a d to make it more resemblant like the sections near the start of the song? too much d k ddk already


Hm, i guess that would be all i found.
Over all i like the SV in the kiais aswell as the general idea of the sections outside it.
Good luck with this Map!
(Have some stars for obvious german reasons) whoa ty

danke schön!!!

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IRC SV change
18:43 Raiden: did you see anything glaringly stupid tho
18:43 Kin: nothing out of ordinary
18:43 Raiden: i already got 2 mods it's not a speedrank!
18:44 Kin: could icon it the way it is lol
18:45 Raiden: :D
18:46 Raiden: want me to drop 12 sp'
18:46 Raiden: LUL
18:47 Kin: lemme just check if nothing is broken
18:47 Raiden: kiai is toggled very frequently
18:47 Kin: xdxdxdxdxdxd
18:48 Kin: pls fix
18:48 Raiden: idk how many mods i owe already
18:48 Raiden: fuck me
18:49 Kin: eh
18:49 Kin: wait
18:49 Kin: 16:9 overlap
18:49 Kin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8761769
18:49 Raiden: i feel like house lannister
18:50 Raiden: getting in debt with the iron bank
18:50 Kin: 00:48:758 (4,1) -
18:50 Raiden: it kinda overlaps on 4:3 too
18:50 Raiden: but it's a 1/1 gap come on
18:50 Raiden: :(((((((((((((((((((
18:50 Kin: yeah, but not this much on 16:9 D:
18:51 Kin: in 16:9 the D appear slightly before the K
18:51 Kin: I always do my SV en 16:9 to avoid those issues D:
18:51 Kin: on*
18:51 Raiden: and what do you want me to do
18:51 Raiden: :(
18:51 Raiden: progressively slow down?
18:52 Kin: hm, how about 1,25 here 00:49:058 - to slow down at x1 here 00:49:358 -
18:53 Raiden: looks ugly
18:53 Kin: I don't think it's good to slow down on K note so, seems like the best option to me
18:53 Raiden: but oh well
18:54 Kin: Or maybe you want to use slower SV for the K ? xdxdxd
18:54 Raiden: applied
18:54 Raiden: this will be 1 more kd
18:54 Raiden: nah
18:54 Raiden: i did the first
18:54 Kin: ye, I pretty much guessed
18:54 Raiden: :V
18:55 Kin: I was liken there's 2~3 ways to fix it, but are really shit, while one is less horrible
18:55 Raiden: lmao
18:55 Raiden: 01:17:858 -
18:55 Raiden: does this also overlap
18:55 Kin: also, similar one : 00:58:658 (1,2) -
18:56 Raiden: zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
18:56 Raiden: fuck this game
18:57 Raiden: fixed
18:58 Kin: okay you can update
18:58 Raiden: you are not my mom
18:58 Kin: sure
18:59 Kin: I don't have vagina :c
18:59 Raiden: that's hot
19:00 Kin: eh, this one is missing 01:17:858 -
19:00 Raiden: i asked
19:00 Raiden: you said nothing
19:00 Raiden: bitch
19:00 Kin: it's exactly the same as the other
19:00 Kin: :(
19:01 Kin: same gap with same SV change :(
19:01 Raiden: PF FFF
19:01 Raiden: fixed
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12:38 Nwolf: ok the post so far is
12:38 Raiden: question #1
12:38 Nwolf: WHY ARE THE HITSOUNDS SO QUIET
12:38 Nwolf: 00:58:958 - seems unnecessary to me. Pace of small dons feels off with this being 1.25 and doesn't make it easier to read. Deleting this would also make 00:59:258 - unnecessary.
12:38 Raiden: really
12:38 Nwolf: 01:12:458 - Instead of making small - big - small steps in reducing SV you could try having these be 1.5, 1.35, 1.2, 1.1. With this the slowdown is more consistent and the higher gaps are on higher SV which is less noticeable and, to me, feels less odd.
12:38 Nwolf: 01:23:933 - Missing a note. How dare you.
12:38 Raiden: hitsounds are quiet?
12:38 Nwolf: 02:16:658 - Barline with 1.3 instead of 1.1 on purpose?
12:38 Raiden: but 100%
12:38 Nwolf: 02:17:258 - Might look cooler with 1.2 SV added on this note
12:38 Nwolf: 80% is not loud
12:38 Nwolf: pls
12:38 Raiden: nigga just post
12:38 Raiden: joy
12:38 Nwolf: :V
12:39 Raiden: most of the map is 100%
12:39 Nwolf: WELL OK THEN
12:40 Raiden: or not
12:41 Nwolf: ?
12:41 Raiden: "just post"
12:41 Nwolf: yes I'm writing the post
12:41 Nwolf: already added two more points there
12:41 Nwolf: c:
12:42 Raiden: OwO
12:43 Raiden: no to the 1st one i can't really ignore that bass drum
12:43 Raiden: :((
12:43 Nwolf:  what does bassdrum have to do with SV
12:43 Nwolf: I want the 1.25 SV line gone
12:44 Raiden: Kin made me 1.25
12:44 Raiden: because it overlaps on 16.9
12:44 Nwolf: zzzzzzzzz
12:44 Nwolf: 16:9 sucks
12:44 Raiden: i was lik
12:44 Raiden: hold the fuck up
12:44 Nwolf: 1.25 looks shit :(
12:45 Raiden: want me to remove it
12:45 Raiden: no one will notice
12:45 Raiden: shh
12:45 Nwolf: that overlap is so minor
12:45 Nwolf: holy crap
12:45 Raiden: yeah
12:45 Raiden: removing it
12:45 Raiden: removd
12:46 Nwolf: :3
12:46 Raiden: 00:48:983 -  ?
12:46 Raiden: this one too?
12:46 Raiden: orr it looks good
12:46 Nwolf: that one is different imo
12:46 Raiden: oki
12:46 Nwolf: I mean what you could also do at :58
12:46 Nwolf: is smooth SV slowdown
12:46 Nwolf: so 1.4 1.3 1.2 1.1 etc
12:46 Raiden: uwu
12:47 Nwolf: like 01:27:758 - 
12:48 Nwolf: tho it looks bad
12:48 Nwolf: ok so IRC now instead of post?
12:48 Raiden: your face
12:48 Raiden: looks bad
12:48 Raiden: sure
12:50 Raiden: rearranged a bit the svs
12:50 Raiden: in 1st kiai
12:50 Raiden: for more epicness
12:51 Nwolf: :ok_hand:
12:51 Nwolf: 2nd kiai as well?
12:51 Raiden: 2nd kiai had it already
12:52 Raiden: for some reason i didn't copy the exact SV patterning
12:52 Nwolf: so nothing for 03:38:858 - 
12:52 Raiden: but yes i can add more
12:52 Raiden: nop
12:52 Nwolf: kk
12:52 Raiden: but let me think of something
12:52 Nwolf: so 02:17:858 - 02:18:458 - being both 1.3 is also fixed?
12:53 Raiden: done
12:54 Nwolf: and one more thing I had in post
12:54 Nwolf: 02:58:658 (1) - 03:01:058 (11) - 03:07:958 (23,1) - etc. not finishers on purpose? Dem crashes
12:54 Raiden: wait whaddya mean
12:54 Nwolf: ?
12:54 Nwolf: what what do I mean
12:54 Raiden: o yea
12:54 Raiden: the 2nd
12:54 Raiden: is now 1.20
12:54 Nwolf: a
12:56 Raiden: there is no crash
12:56 Raiden: just strong guitar note
12:56 Raiden: L:L(
12:57 Raiden: made last one finishers for consistency tho
12:58 Nwolf: k
12:58 Nwolf: 80% volume increased? :3
12:59 Raiden: 01:32:258 - here?
12:59 Nwolf: ye
12:59 Nwolf: should be 90% at least
13:00 Raiden: changd to 90
13:00 Nwolf: k
13:00 Nwolf: hm I think it's safer to rebuble
13:00 Nwolf: *rebubble
13:00 Raiden: oki
13:00 Nwolf: updatu
13:00 Nwolf: psu
13:00 Nwolf: *plsu
13:00 Raiden: sekunden
13:00 Nwolf: wew
13:04 Raiden: hier wir gehen
13:04 Raiden: done
13:04 Nwolf: pls stop


rebubbled due to some changes and additions to kiai SVs
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Just a finisher consistency fix
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TRITT EIN

UND SPRICH

WALDSCHREIN

HÖRT DICH

REICH MIR

DIE HAND

KOMM IN

MEIN LAND
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shouldn't diffname be Versteckter Daemon?

since Ä = AE

correct me if i am wrong about this romanisation i am not an expert on that topic ^^

but gz on qual!
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yes you are the 2nd guy to tell me that so i'm gonna change it right away
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Disqualifying this real quick for a quick diff name and tags change.
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