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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 20 lipca 2017 at 22:17:53

Artist: 55x55
Title: MRAZ' (feat. Larin)
Tags: A_r_M_i_N Armin M_a_r_v_o_l_l_o Marvollo Shmiklak russian русский Дмитрий YouTube
BPM: 120
Filesize: 1700kb
Play Time: 00:59
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Download: 55x55 - MRAZ' (feat. Larin)
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Ты ебанная чушка, полный пиздежь.
Мразь, мразь, мразь, мразь, мразь, мразь, мразь
<3 You may add "русский Дмитрий YouTube" to tags.
did irc mod
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13:25 Shmiklak: xd
13:25 Venix: mod dis shit
13:25 Shmiklak: sure
13:26 Shmiklak: lemme redownload it
13:26 Shmiklak: and make IRC mod
13:26 Venix: sorry for this but I had to change bg name :/
13:26 Shmiklak: lol
13:26 Shmiklak: rip venixgay
13:26 Venix: now it's better
13:26 Shmiklak: waoh
13:26 Shmiklak: I love you
13:26 Shmiklak: <3
13:26 Venix: XD
13:27 Shmiklak: add combocolours
13:28 Venix: ye
13:28 Shmiklak: sliders like 00:19:244 (5) - 00:23:244 (5) - feel questionable
13:29 Shmiklak: because I can hear a beat on 1/4
13:30 Shmiklak: 00:27:244 (3,4,5,6) - you can be increasing ds here because pitch gets more
13:30 Shmiklak: i mena 00:27:744 (5) - 
13:30 Shmiklak: this one isn't spaced right
13:30 Venix: im not sure about this will change if other mods will write it xd
13:30 Shmiklak: okay
13:30 Venix: Shmikpplak
13:31 Shmiklak: xd
13:31 Venix: rip blanket xd
13:31 Shmiklak: where
13:31 Venix: 00:26:744 (2,5) -
13:31 Venix: ?
13:32 Shmiklak: xd
13:32 Shmiklak: doesnt look as a blanket tbh
13:32 Shmiklak: 00:34:994 - this one should be clickable imo
13:32 Shmiklak: because it sounds similar to 00:32:994 - 
13:33 Venix: i did it to avoid circle spam
13:33 Shmiklak: okay
13:33 Shmiklak: 00:45:994 - uhm
13:33 Shmiklak: idk if it's useful
13:34 Venix: why not xd
13:34 Shmiklak: there are some beats
13:34 Shmiklak: you could map
13:34 Shmiklak: idk
13:34 Shmiklak: it's up to you
13:34 Venix: I like that
13:34 Venix: xd
13:34 Shmiklak: xd
13:35 Shmiklak: then
13:35 Shmiklak: 01:00:244 (1,2) - why you did this
13:35 Shmiklak: 01:00:994 - also place a circle here
13:35 Venix: if i don't do this
13:35 Venix: it will be not ppable
13:35 Venix: XDDDDD
13:35 Shmiklak: lol
13:35 Shmiklak: wtf
13:36 Shmiklak: okay lemme keep it for other modders xD
13:36 Venix: i like how it's now
13:36 Venix: xd
13:36 Shmiklak: xd
13:36 Venix: hey
13:36 Shmiklak: now hard
13:36 *Shmiklak is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1347840 55x55 - MRAZ' (feat. Larin) [Hard]]
13:36 Venix: you haven't mod hard yet ;^)
13:36 Venix: XD
13:36 Shmiklak: ikr
13:37 Shmiklak: 00:18:244 (1,2,3,4) - wtf is this
13:37 Shmiklak: it's okayish
13:37 Shmiklak: but looks ugly
13:37 Shmiklak: maybe it's just in editor idk
13:37 Shmiklak: but i would place 00:18:494 (2,3,4) - lower
13:37 Shmiklak: oh dude
13:37 Shmiklak: dissable countdown
13:37 Shmiklak: XD
13:37 Shmiklak: and widescreen
13:38 Venix: for me it's k for me lol
13:38 Venix: ok
13:38 Shmiklak: 00:20:244 (1) - shouldn't this be further?
13:38 Shmiklak: like
13:38 Shmiklak: you used 1.3 everywhere as I see
13:38 Shmiklak: but here it's 1.2
13:39 Venix: lol
13:39 Venix: XD
13:39 Shmiklak: wat
13:39 Venix: k fixed
13:40 Shmiklak: 00:27:744 (4) - why lower ds?
13:40 Shmiklak: 00:25:744 (4) - overlap with HP bar
13:40 Venix: lol
13:40 Venix: it should be 1.3 on rest of this pattern instead
13:40 Venix: xd
13:41 Venix: k fixed
13:41 Shmiklak: lmao
13:42 Shmiklak: rest is fine
13:42 Shmiklak: okay lemme update my post and add metadata

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NM from my queue, as in rules - i mod only 3*+

insane
00:43:994 (9,1,2) - blanket this 3 objects with circle in the middle
00:43:994 (9,4) - weird overlap
00:45:994 (6) - you've skipped sound here
00:53:369 (3,4,5) - crooked pattern
01:00:994 (3,4) - there should be additional 2 sounds


Nothing special about this map
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NM from my queue, as in rules - i mod only 3*+

insane
00:43:994 (9,1,2) - blanket this 3 objects with circle in the middle nie, bo spacing
00:43:994 (9,4) - weird overlap tu miał być stack, racja
00:45:994 (6) - you've skipped sound here nie xd
00:53:369 (3,4,5) - crooked pattern dobry jest
01:00:994 (3,4) - there should be additional 2 sounds no ok


Nothing special about this map


Dzięki za moda, ale mogłeś po polsku XD
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Chciałeś IRC masz na forum xD
General:
00:38:244 - NI CHUJA HARASZO XD

Shmik's Normal:
00:19:244 (3) - Ayyy this slider doesn't really fit here, i prefer to make it smoothier like on 00:20:244 (1).
00:51:244 (3) - Same as above, cause it's really same xD

Hard:
00:21:244 (4,5) - DS pomiedzy tymi obiektami jest zbyt niski imo i brzydko to wyglada, lepiej zrob to jak w 00:17:244 (3,4) dla zachowania konsystencji xD
00:31:744 - Daj tu kółeczko jak masz w Normalu.
00:39:244 (3) - Po tym sliderze dałbym dwa kółka i zrobił triplet, dla podbicia tego HARASZO
00:45:744 - Usuń przerwe, bo nie ma jej w Normalu

Insane:
00:45:744 - To samo co w Hardzie (weź to dodaj na Normalu i tyle xD)

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Chciałeś IRC masz na forum xD
General:
00:38:244 - NI CHUJA HARASZO XD tak

Hard:
00:21:244 (4,5) - DS pomiedzy tymi obiektami jest zbyt niski imo i brzydko to wyglada, lepiej zrob to jak w 00:17:244 (3,4) dla zachowania konsystencji xD nwm czemu to zrobiłem xD
00:31:744 - Daj tu kółeczko jak masz w Normalu. k
00:39:244 (3) - Po tym sliderze dałbym dwa kółka i zrobił triplet, dla podbicia tego HARASZO nie dzięki XD
00:45:744 - Usuń przerwe, bo nie ma jej w Normalu narazie nwm

Insane:
00:45:744 - To samo co w Hardzie (weź to dodaj na Normalu i tyle xD) no nwm

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short irc
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22:14 *Venix is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1347841 55x55 - MRAZ' (feat. Larin) [Insane]]
22:14 Venix: xd
22:15 Alphabet: sec#
22:16 Alphabet: Oh god what is this xd
22:16 Venix: w8
22:16 Venix: I need to update map xd
22:16 Venix: XDDDD
22:17 Venix: I mapped this cuz shmik gimme timing bg and diff
22:17 Venix: XDDDD
22:19 Alphabet: ok gonna do your two highest diffs
22:19 Venix: ok mby this song is weird xD
22:20 Alphabet: I think you need to make the black combo colour lighter
22:20 Alphabet: i can barely see it without lots of brightness
22:21 Alphabet: Change luminosity to 50
22:21 *Alphabet is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1347840 55x55 - MRAZ' (feat. Larin) [Hard]]
22:22 Alphabet: I think this could do with AR6.5 since it then accounts for the density made by the higher CS
22:22 Alphabet: Also since you use quite a few stacks with Ncs
22:22 Venix: mby
22:23 Venix: k fixed
22:25 Alphabet: 00:22:244 (1,2,3,4) - I think you could something more interesting here to represent the other synth that's starting to play
22:25 Alphabet: Maybe a unique slider shape?
22:25 Venix: i don't have idea D:
22:26 Alphabet: 00:23:244 (5) - There's a triple here that you could also use to show the extra synth
22:27 Alphabet: You could make an achor point slider, it's more interesting than a straight one
22:27 Alphabet: I think it'd suit because of the "sharpness" you feel from the synth
22:28 Venix: wtf
22:28 Venix: i've changed colors
22:28 Venix: but in .osu it's the same code across diffs
22:28 Alphabet: Did you just change luminosity?
22:28 Venix: ya
22:29 Alphabet: yeah it doesn't seem to change the code
22:29 Venix: i think this triple is too silent to emphasise it ;p
22:29 Venix: wat
22:29 Venix: then how I can copy it xdx
22:30 Alphabet: wait luminosity just scales up the rgb numbers
22:31 Venix: ya
22:31 Venix: but it's not chane
22:31 Venix: change*
22:31 Venix: and it's light mindfuck for me
22:31 Alphabet: use 183, 183, 183 and 53, 53, 53
22:34 Venix: ok changed
22:35 Alphabet: 00:27:244 (3,4) - Maybe tilt these away from eachother like you did with the other sliders?
22:36 Venix: ok
22:38 Alphabet: 00:38:244 (1,2,3) - you're mapping vocals here so why not at 00:39:744 - 
22:39 Alphabet: That's all I really have to say tbh
22:39 Venix: i was focused on these 3 words xd
22:40 Venix: cuz these are stronger
22:40 Alphabet: last one is equally as strong since there's nothing playing in the background
22:40 Alphabet: and it doesnt make sense to map 3 words and ignore the rest
22:41 Venix: i like how it's now D:
22:41 Alphabet: ok ^^
22:41 Venix: if other mods will point this I will think about this
22:41 Venix: I'll do :thinking:
22:42 Alphabet:  00:27:244 (3,4,5,6) - idk but these jumps seem out of proportion since the last jumps were like 1.5x smaller
22:42 Alphabet: maybe its just me
22:43 Venix: 00:26:244 (1) - i used here cuz big tick
22:43 Venix: xdx
22:44 Alphabet: oh i meant insane
22:44 *Alphabet is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1347841 55x55 - MRAZ' (feat. Larin) [Insane]]
22:44 Alphabet: sorry xd
22:44 Venix: it's cuz here pitch is bigger
22:44 Alphabet: 00:30:494 (2,4,5) - space these out equally? (ocd)
22:45 Alphabet: If you think about it, it's not that much higher but *shrug*
22:45 Alphabet: It's probably just me tho
22:46 Venix: D:
22:47 Venix: i like this xd
22:47 Alphabet: 00:43:744 (8,9) - Spacing could be the other way around? Emphasizes that louder noise thingy on 9
22:48 Alphabet: 00:45:744 (5) - remove whistle cuz its not on the other diffs
22:48 Venix: kk
22:49 Alphabet: 01:01:119 - add note here? The vocals end here
22:50 Alphabet: Atm the map feels like it ends abruptly
22:50 Venix: i think it will be hard to feel
22:50 Alphabet: Not really, it's an insane
22:50 Venix: i was focuset on bg sounds
22:50 Venix: ok mby will change it if someone else will point this out :P
22:50 Alphabet: But you mapped vocals here tho 00:59:994 (9,10,1) - 
22:52 Venix: now post log on forum xd
22:53 Alphabet: 00:35:744 (8) - nazi blanket
22:53 Alphabet: 00:43:244 (5) - missing whistle here
22:54 Venix: ok fixed
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Chciałeś IRC masz na forum xD

Shmik's Normal:
00:19:244 (3) - Ayyy this slider doesn't really fit here, i prefer to make it smoothier like on 00:20:244 (1). it's consistent with 00:23:244 (3) - so it's okay
00:51:244 (3) - Same as above, cause it's really same xD ^


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how dare you not ask me for diff

Easy
Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 30244
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16244,24244
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:MRAZ' (feat. Larin)
TitleUnicode:МРАЗЬ (feat. Ларин)
Artist:55x55
ArtistUnicode:55x55
Creator:Venix
Version:Easy
Source:
Tags:M_a_r_v_o_l_l_o Marvollo Shmiklak russian
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2.5
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.95
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"shmiklakgay.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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48244,-100,4,2,1,75,0,1
60244,-100,4,2,1,75,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 53,53,53
Combo2 : 183,183,183
SliderBorder : 78,78,78
SliderTrackOverride : 218,218,218

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Since it's Russian song better to use "Xarasho" as diffname or maybe the best option would be "XOPOWO" because it looks like russian letters xd
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Добавьте в теги "Вы опустились на самое дно и мапаете такие сонги, хайпа не будет,До свидания"
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general
*in A r M i N's easy русский Дмитрий YouTube are missing from tags make sure to add them
*all difficulties end at different spots rip
*disable widescreen support since there's no any sb nor video
*from 00:00:244 - to 00:16:244 - you could've mapped this section because of the guitar and of the hihats so this section is mappable to be honest (it applies for all difficulties)


A r M i N's Easy
*00:46:244 (3) - in this section you used 2/1 slider + note + 2 1/1 sliders and suddenly you're changing the rhythm structure, when the vocal is exactly stronger like the previous ones to be honest you can split this 2/1 slider into an 1/1 slider and an 1/1 note so you will follow much better the vocal and also you'll keep the consistency throughout the whole section before the song's chorus
*00:59:744 (4) - this should be a hitclap not a hitwhistle since here's a snare
*01:00:244 (1) - it would fit more with the song's final cymbal if you'll move the spinner's end to the 1/1 tick (i mean to 01:01:244 -) also you can add an inherited line there with 5% volume since the song is not really loud there imo

clean diff


M a r v o l l o's Normal
*it has the same HP as Easy do so better increase the hp to 4
*better change it to Shmiklak's Normal let's don't make dirty jokes pls
*00:23:244 (3) - missing hitclap on tail
*00:48:244 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - copypasta aaaaa
*01:00:244 (1) - missing hitwhistle plus you can change this note with an 1/2 slider and then add another 1/2 slider but with a reverse arrow like in this picture https://puu.sh/wD1JW/6af32c5e29.jpg i know it sounds a bit off but also you can not add a reverse arrow and add another 1/1 note after the 2nd 1/2 slider if you want

nice one


Hard
*00:36:244 (1,2)- maybe space them a bit more? just to look like they have their spacing increased visually speaking since they're supposed to emphasize the stronger vocal // 00:44:244 (1) - same goes here // 00:48:244 (1,2) - and so on
*00:39:744 - here's the a sound which is the vocal and is pretty prominent but you did not add anything here you can add a note here to give emphasis to that vocal instead of ignoring it, even if you wanted to leave a gap between the slider and the next note but not like this ignoring the prominent sound (i mean the vocal)
*00:45:994 - and 00:46:244 - even if you wanted to leave a gap here you can at least to add a note on that 1/2 tick and 1/1 tick to emphasize properly the vocal instead of ignoring it // 00:59:994 - and 01:00:244 - same here


Charasho
*00:25:244 (3,4,5) - i don't know why the spacing between (3)- and (4)- is bigger than (4)- and (5)- since there the vocal is more stronger than the first pair to be honest the spacing between (4)- and (5)- should be bigger than (3)- and (4)- in order to emphasis the stronger vocal // 00:27:244 (3,4,5) - same goes here
*00:39:744 - same as I said in Hard
*00:40:244 (1,2,3) - that's literally the same thing as I said for 00:25:244 (3,4,5) - // 00:43:744 (8,9) - and here aaa
*00:43:744 (8,9) - the same thing as I mentioned in Hard
*00:50:744 (4) - I don't think this angle slider would fit here speaking of flow and movement because right after this there's a curved one and it totally breaks the flow so having this a curved slider and placed like this https://puu.sh/wD2zp/8a05759565.jpg would improve the flow to be honest but also be careful at 00:49:744 (5) - there will be an overlap after and better avoid it
*00:54:244 (1,2,3) - that's the only rhythm structure you used for this section, basically for whole diff so why don't change the rhythm into this one as you did before? https://puu.sh/wD2Gg/e686c19879.jpg you'll keep the consistency of rhythm usage of this section (actually of the whole diff imo lol)
*00:59:244 (6,7,8) - i know that the song and the vocal are getting more and more intense but why did you make a screen jump so suddenly? i don't see any logic behind these high jumps even if the song itself is very intense decreasing them a bit would emphasize the song's intensity properly than these screen jumps

that's all for now! though i'm aware of the spread gap between Normal and Hard. The normal uses constant 1/2 and 1/1 while the Hard is pretty dense with 1/2s spam and fulfilled with triplets so that's what makes me worry. in rest everything is good and neat.
gl!
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*from 00:00:244 - to 00:16:244 - you could've mapped this section because of the guitar and of the hihats so this section is mappable to be honest (it applies for all difficulties) it's intro so no need to map it



M a r v o l l o's Normal
*it has the same HP as Easy do so better increase the hp to 4
*better change it to Shmiklak's Normal let's don't make dirty jokes pls it isn't a joke, come on. I use it for all my new GDs
*00:23:244 (3) - missing hitclap on tail
*00:48:244 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - copypasta aaaaa
*01:00:244 (1) - missing hitwhistle plus you can change this note with an 1/2 slider and then add another 1/2 slider but with a reverse arrow like in this picture https://puu.sh/wD1JW/6af32c5e29.jpg i know it sounds a bit off but also you can not add a reverse arrow and add another 1/1 note after the 2nd 1/2 slider if you want added hs

nice one

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Hello~


General
I read ByBy's mod so I don't repeat the same stuff besides the following here in general~
  • I agree with ByBy about the unmapped section. It has potential to be mapped; besides that, the song itself is already very short, so I really don't see why not to map it.


Easy
I feel there's a spread issue between Easy and Normal.
Ignoring sr, the spacing chosen on Easy make notes closer on 1/1 than it is at 1/2 spacing on Normal. Also, while on Easy there is absolutely 0 usage of 1/2 rhythm, there's many of it in Normal (1/2 should be acceptable at this BPM on repeat sliders on Easy diffs). These two factors I mentioned make the spread between the two diffs very unbalanced.
Easy is more like Beginner, which as you may already know, it's a difficulty below Easy (at least in my opinion). To fix this you would have to add some 1/2 rhythms on it + increase the main spacing from 0.9x to 1.1x. This may be a pain in the butt, so you could also rename this diff to Beginner and create something between this diff and Normal. The diff by itself is fine, but the spread doesn't feel good.
  • 01:00:244 (1) - You should ask for opinions about this spinner (especially to other BNs). Personally, I believe it's too short for beginners. Besides that,
    seems you were the only one who decided to add this spinner at the end :eyes:


M a r v o l l o's Normal
I got the updated version after ByBy's mod so dw :v
  • 00:26:244 - You should use 1/2 sliders starting here (before the spinner) to represent more the vocal loop the song. 00:24:244 (1,2) - Should be fine since they provide a break from the previosu 1/2 usage.


Hard
  • 00:25:744 (4) - This slider overlaps a bit with the life bar on the default skin, as you can see here


Charasho
  • 00:30:244 (1,2,3,4) - This isn't even mapped in Hard and where the spinner is in every other diff, you have a 1/4 stream. I suggest to at least make these 4 circles into 1/2 sliders so players feel a more balanced rest after the 1/4 stream + using sliders could be used to represent the change in the music anyway.

@Venix Since this wasn't a regular sized mod, you don't have to check my whole set, I'm fine with just 2-3 diffs of your choice https://osu.ppy.sh/s/550956

Good luck Chalwa!
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*00:46:244 (3) - in this section you used 2/1 slider + note + 2 1/1 sliders and suddenly you're changing the rhythm structure, when the vocal is exactly stronger like the previous ones to be honest you can split this 2/1 slider into an 1/1 slider and an 1/1 note so you will follow much better the vocal and also you'll keep the consistency throughout the whole section before the song's chorus Since this part is different than the others why should I leave the same patterning? Here you have that guy scream: 00:40:244 - But suddenly here: he says a phrase 00:46:244 - wich in my opinion is better represented by a 2/1
*00:59:744 (4) - this should be a hitclap not a hitwhistle since here's a snare
*01:00:244 (1) - it would fit more with the song's final cymbal if you'll move the spinner's end to the 1/1 tick (i mean to 01:01:244 -) also you can add an inherited line there with 5% volume since the song is not really loud there imo removed spinner completely

clean diff

gl!


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Easy
I feel there's a spread issue between Easy and Normal.
Ignoring sr, the spacing chosen on Easy make notes closer on 1/1 than it is at 1/2 spacing on Normal. Also, while on Easy there is absolutely 0 usage of 1/2 rhythm, there's many of it in Normal (1/2 should be acceptable at this BPM on repeat sliders on Easy diffs). These two factors I mentioned make the spread between the two diffs very unbalanced. See, there are people who like using 1/2 rhythm on Easy and there are people that dont. Me personally i've experienced spread issues in the past where the SR was way too high since i was using too many 1/2 rhythms. Constantly remapping the diff so that it fits the spread pissed me off so i decided to keep it simple in the future. Also Easy is for beginners right? So why is it so bad that my Easy is actually Easy? I dont want to offend you but isnt this a bit picky (really no offense i just dont know how to express it differently) because of course from a mapper / BN side this is maybe a thing worth mentioning but.. Is a beginning player really going to notice this? They just want a nice song (wich of course depends) and an Easy map to pass nothing more.
Easy is more like Beginner, which as you may already know, it's a difficulty below Easy (at least in my opinion). To fix this you would have to add some 1/2 rhythms on it + increase the main spacing from 0.9x to 1.1x. This may be a pain in the butt, so you could also rename this diff to Beginner and create something between this diff and Normal. The diff by itself is fine, but the spread doesn't feel good. See above
  • 01:00:244 (1) - You should ask for opinions about this spinner (especially to other BNs). Personally, I believe it's too short for beginners. Besides that,
    seems you were the only one who decided to add this spinner at the end :eyes: removed that spinner

Good luck Chalwa!


thanks a lot to you two :D

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