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riunosk
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, 24 July 2017 at 7:04:05 PM

Artist: xi
Title: FREEDOM DiVE
Tags: parousia
BPM: 222.22
Filesize: 5052kb
Play Time: 04:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Opportunity Leap - 4Key (5.73 stars, 5043 notes)
Download: xi - FREEDOM DiVE
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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stamina chart u wu

progressive difficulty

thank Knif3rism for bg edit
and dem modders and playtesters
Shima Rin
Hi

1|2|3|4

[Opportunity Leap]
  1. Source and tags plz.take a look at the std ranked freedom dive metadate to check
  2. 00:05:067 (5067|1,5067|0,5202|3,5202|2,5337|0,5337|1,5472|1,5472|3) - maybe u may wanna remake this in response to 00:02:907 (2907|1,2907|2,3042|3,3042|2,3177|0,3177|1,3312|0,3312|3) -
  3. 00:06:552 (6552|3) - move to 2 and 00:06:619 (6619|1) - to 3 for better flow
  4. 00:08:982 (8982|0,9049|1,9117|0,9184|1,9252|0,9319|1,9387|0) - it will be really exhausting for such pattern to exist
  5. 00:38:412 (38412|0,38412|1) - according to pitch this should be put on 23
  6. 01:06:897 (66897|2,66897|3) - u suddenly catch the double notes for the melody. It is inconsistent with your double note use in this part
  7. 01:14:592 (74592|0,74592|1,74659|3,74659|2,74727|1,74727|0,74794|3,74794|2,74862|0,74862|1) - i dont really hear sounds that they are for. If they are for the melody then the snap is wrong
  8. 02:15:072 (135072|2,135072|0,135139|3,135139|1,135207|2,135207|0,135274|1,135274|3,135342|0,135342|2) - ^
  9. 02:27:492 (147492|0,148032|0,148572|0) - imo double are better for these sounds
  10. 02:32:892 - 02:42:342 - 02:42:882 - these should be doubles
  11. 03:36:477 (216477|3,216612|3,216747|3,216882|3,217017|3,217152|3) - whether u noticed such (uhh anyway if u wanna keep for difficulty then it is still ok. But i'd like to change this cuz the overall diff is enough for me)
  12. 03:47:952 (227952|0,227952|2,228019|1,228019|3,228087|0,228087|2,228154|3,228154|1,228222|0,228222|2) - same as before
  13. 04:05:232 (245232|3,245232|1,245299|2,245299|0,245367|1,245367|3,245434|2,245434|0,245502|1,245502|3) - ^
  14. 04:10:902 (250902|1,250902|3,250902|0) - this should be a double cuz the drum sound disappear from this bar
  15. 04:17:112 - two LNs would be better ;)
I guess that's all. I see through that there are anchors made in kiai parts and i believe you intend to make this for diffculty and that's fine. But for the rest part especially some parts that need to give players a rest, i suggest to avoid anchors as much as possible! Anyway good luck on loved ;)
Arzenvald
not sure if Loved state requires mod at all but, lets see what can i find here
mostly opinion tho so feel free to reject

00:06:417 (6417|2) - i'd remove this and add 00:06:552 - 1 more note to emphasize that downbeat

00:08:577 (8577|1,8644|2,8712|1,8779|2,8847|1,8914|2) - intended trill?

00:55:962 (55962|2) - i'd move this to 2 or 1 to avoid distracting 1/4 jack (and rather right biased pattern)

01:14:659 (74659|3,74659|2,74727|0,74727|1,74794|2,74794|3) - 1/3

01:22:152 (82152|1) - its okay to add 1 more at 4?

01:32:884 (92884|0) - move to 01:32:952 - ?
01:35:044 (95044|0) - ^ (might want to flip the whole thing tho)


01:34:842 (94842|0) - add

01:38:352 (98352|1) - kinda empty without those stream tbh, even its only a transition part

01:57:859 (117859|3,117859|0,117927|1,117927|2,117994|3,117994|0) - 1/3
02:15:139 (135139|1,135139|3,135207|2,135207|0,135274|1,135274|3) - ^

02:45:177 (165177|2) - add 1 more for that loud piano

02:46:122 (166122|1,166122|0,166189|2,166189|3) - ctrl + H

02:51:454 (171454|0,171522|3,171522|2) - i'd ctrl + J this to emphasize the piano beat for consistency

03:19:602 (199602|2) - don't think the JS should starts here but 03:19:872 -?
04:15:762 (255762|0) - ^

03:48:019 (228019|3,228019|1,228087|0,228087|2,228154|3,228154|1) - 1/3
04:05:299 (245299|2,245299|0,245367|3,245367|1,245434|0,245434|2) -

03:53:892 (233892|2,233959|3) - 03:54:297 (234297|0,234364|1) - i'd ctrl+J all these for pitch (and stream direction)

that's it, good luck!
Topic Starter
riunosk

Tofu1222 wrote:

Hi

1|2|3|4

[Opportunity Leap]
  1. Source and tags plz.take a look at the std ranked freedom dive metadate to check gonna steal taggy
  2. 00:05:067 (5067|1,5067|0,5202|3,5202|2,5337|0,5337|1,5472|1,5472|3) - maybe u may wanna remake this in response to 00:02:907 (2907|1,2907|2,3042|3,3042|2,3177|0,3177|1,3312|0,3312|3) - not sure what your hinting at, but its more for variety
  3. 00:06:552 (6552|3) - move to 2 and 00:06:619 (6619|1) - to 3 for better flow applied
  4. 00:08:982 (8982|0,9049|1,9117|0,9184|1,9252|0,9319|1,9387|0) - it will be really exhausting for such pattern to exist intended as stamina chart
  5. 00:38:412 (38412|0,38412|1) - according to pitch this should be put on 23 it is to make way for the other notes to be more pitch relevant
  6. 01:06:897 (66897|2,66897|3) - u suddenly catch the double notes for the melody. It is inconsistent with your double note use in this part there's a kick there lol
  7. 01:14:592 (74592|0,74592|1,74659|3,74659|2,74727|1,74727|0,74794|3,74794|2,74862|0,74862|1) - i dont really hear sounds that they are for. If they are for the melody then the snap is wrong after hearing at 25%, your right, applied
  8. 02:15:072 (135072|2,135072|0,135139|3,135139|1,135207|2,135207|0,135274|1,135274|3,135342|0,135342|2) - ^ ^
  9. 02:27:492 (147492|0,148032|0,148572|0) - imo double are better for these sounds tru, applied
  10. 02:32:892 - 02:42:342 - 02:42:882 - these should be doubles aren't they already doubles?
  11. 03:36:477 (216477|3,216612|3,216747|3,216882|3,217017|3,217152|3) - whether u noticed such (uhh anyway if u wanna keep for difficulty then it is still ok. But i'd like to change this cuz the overall diff is enough for me) rearranged some notes
  12. 03:47:952 (227952|0,227952|2,228019|1,228019|3,228087|0,228087|2,228154|3,228154|1,228222|0,228222|2) - same as before woops
  13. 04:05:232 (245232|3,245232|1,245299|2,245299|0,245367|1,245367|3,245434|2,245434|0,245502|1,245502|3) - ^ ^
  14. 04:10:902 (250902|1,250902|3,250902|0) - this should be a double cuz the drum sound disappear from this bar true, applied
  15. 04:17:112 - two LNs would be better ;) fffffrrrrreeeeee cccccoooommmmbbboooo
I guess that's all. I see through that there are anchors made in kiai parts and i believe you intend to make this for diffculty and that's fine. But for the rest part especially some parts that need to give players a rest, i suggest to avoid anchors as much as possible! Anyway good luck on loved ;)
thank mod for
Topic Starter
riunosk

Arzenvald wrote:

not sure if Loved state requires mod at all but, lets see what can i find here i'd prefer not adding a junk map to the loved section
mostly opinion tho so feel free to reject

00:06:417 (6417|2) - i'd remove this and add 00:06:552 - 1 more note to emphasize that downbeat made an extra double and added a note instead since i heard an extra sound

00:08:577 (8577|1,8644|2,8712|1,8779|2,8847|1,8914|2) - intended trill? removed

00:55:962 (55962|2) - i'd move this to 2 or 1 to avoid distracting 1/4 jack (and rather right biased pattern) intended for difficulty

01:14:659 (74659|3,74659|2,74727|0,74727|1,74794|2,74794|3) - 1/3 fixed from tofu's mod

01:22:152 (82152|1) - its okay to add 1 more at 4? going full evil mode // will apply this for the rest of the chart for consistency

01:32:884 (92884|0) - move to 01:32:952 - ? forced a 2-2-3 minijack
01:35:044 (95044|0) - ^ (might want to flip the whole thing tho) flepped


01:34:842 (94842|0) - add not sure why you would want to add a note here

01:38:352 (98352|1) - kinda empty without those stream tbh, even its only a transition part added 1/2s so the section doesn't feel lonely

01:57:859 (117859|3,117859|0,117927|1,117927|2,117994|3,117994|0) - 1/3 not sure how tofu missed this
02:15:139 (135139|1,135139|3,135207|2,135207|0,135274|1,135274|3) - ^ but he did see this

02:45:177 (165177|2) - add 1 more for that loud piano sure

02:46:122 (166122|1,166122|0,166189|2,166189|3) - ctrl + H ok

02:51:454 (171454|0,171522|3,171522|2) - i'd ctrl + J this to emphasize the piano beat for consistency seems good

03:19:602 (199602|2) - don't think the JS should starts here but 03:19:872 -? followed the kicks
04:15:762 (255762|0) - ^ ^

03:48:019 (228019|3,228019|1,228087|0,228087|2,228154|3,228154|1) - 1/3 tofu saw this
04:05:299 (245299|2,245299|0,245367|3,245367|1,245434|0,245434|2) - and this too

03:53:892 (233892|2,233959|3) - 03:54:297 (234297|0,234364|1) - i'd ctrl+J all these for pitch (and stream direction)

that's it, good luck!
thanky for moddy
Raveille
quick irc

lel
22:58 Raveille: thats the way we can get things done
22:58 Raveille: anyways hows heaven fall
22:58 riunosk: oya
22:58 riunosk: are u free now
22:58 Raveille: how free
22:58 riunosk: hfall seems good
22:58 riunosk: free for a moddu
22:58 Raveille: what map
22:59 *riunosk is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1328870 xi - FREEDOM DiVE]
22:59 Raveille: omg
22:59 riunosk: loved mappu
22:59 riunosk: i think i told you about this
22:59 Raveille: well
22:59 Raveille: you didnt lol
23:00 riunosk: yes !
23:00 Raveille: uhm ill see what I can do
23:00 Raveille: cause im not good with hard diff modding
23:00 *Raveille is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1328870 xi - FREEDOM DiVE [Opportunity Leap]]
23:00 riunosk: o
23:01 riunosk: okei
23:01 Raveille: 00:28:084 (28084|2,28118|3,28152|2) - is this supposed to be a thing
23:01 riunosk: intendededed
23:01 Raveille: jeez
23:01 riunosk: meant to be a stamina/difficult chart
23:01 riunosk: its loved !
23:01 riunosk: not ranked !
23:01 riunosk: :D
23:01 Raveille: still
23:01 riunosk: exploit the rools
23:01 riunosk: tilt chart
23:01 Raveille: you arent gonna get a lot of ppl like it if you make smth like this
23:02 Raveille: 00:36:252 - make this a double
23:02 riunosk: wat for
23:02 riunosk: no sound for it?
23:02 Raveille: also default hs plz qwq
23:02 Raveille: i mean
23:02 Raveille: its to signify the drop in the tone
23:03 riunosk: the extra note in the doubles
23:03 riunosk: is to follow the bass
23:04 riunosk: though if more ppl talk about the minijack after jtrill ( most likely ) i'll consider removing it
23:04 Raveille: o
23:05 riunosk: till then
23:05 riunosk: its staying there !
23:05 riunosk: bcos i am mapper of cancer
23:05 riunosk: hohho
23:07 Raveille: eh
23:07 Raveille: idk what else to say lol
23:08 riunosk: probably mixed with bad stuff
23:08 riunosk: and decent stuff
23:08 riunosk: a terrible concoction
23:09 Raveille: lol
23:10 riunosk: 00:55:894 (55894|2,55928|3,55962|2) -
23:10 riunosk: cancer
23:10 Raveille: wew
23:13 Raveille: welp
23:13 Raveille: idrk what else to comment on xd
23:13 Raveille: its mostly the same thing
23:14 riunosk: not sure if thats a good or bad thing
23:14 Raveille: can be both xd
Topic Starter
riunosk

Raveille wrote:

quick irc

lel
22:58 Raveille: thats the way we can get things done
22:58 Raveille: anyways hows heaven fall
22:58 riunosk: oya
22:58 riunosk: are u free now
22:58 Raveille: how free
22:58 riunosk: hfall seems good
22:58 riunosk: free for a moddu
22:58 Raveille: what map
22:59 *riunosk is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1328870 xi - FREEDOM DiVE]
22:59 Raveille: omg
22:59 riunosk: loved mappu
22:59 riunosk: i think i told you about this
22:59 Raveille: well
22:59 Raveille: you didnt lol
23:00 riunosk: yes !
23:00 Raveille: uhm ill see what I can do
23:00 Raveille: cause im not good with hard diff modding
23:00 *Raveille is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1328870 xi - FREEDOM DiVE [Opportunity Leap]]
23:00 riunosk: o
23:01 riunosk: okei
23:01 Raveille: 00:28:084 (28084|2,28118|3,28152|2) - is this supposed to be a thing
23:01 riunosk: intendededed
23:01 Raveille: jeez
23:01 riunosk: meant to be a stamina/difficult chart
23:01 riunosk: its loved !
23:01 riunosk: not ranked !
23:01 riunosk: :D
23:01 Raveille: still
23:01 riunosk: exploit the rools
23:01 riunosk: tilt chart
23:01 Raveille: you arent gonna get a lot of ppl like it if you make smth like this
23:02 Raveille: 00:36:252 - make this a double
23:02 riunosk: wat for
23:02 riunosk: no sound for it?
23:02 Raveille: also default hs plz qwq
23:02 Raveille: i mean
23:02 Raveille: its to signify the drop in the tone
23:03 riunosk: the extra note in the doubles
23:03 riunosk: is to follow the bass
23:04 riunosk: though if more ppl talk about the minijack after jtrill ( most likely ) i'll consider removing it
23:04 Raveille: o
23:05 riunosk: till then
23:05 riunosk: its staying there !
23:05 riunosk: bcos i am mapper of cancer
23:05 riunosk: hohho
23:07 Raveille: eh
23:07 Raveille: idk what else to say lol
23:08 riunosk: probably mixed with bad stuff
23:08 riunosk: and decent stuff
23:08 riunosk: a terrible concoction
23:09 Raveille: lol
23:10 riunosk: 00:55:894 (55894|2,55928|3,55962|2) -
23:10 riunosk: cancer
23:10 Raveille: wew
23:13 Raveille: welp
23:13 Raveille: idrk what else to comment on xd
23:13 Raveille: its mostly the same thing
23:14 riunosk: not sure if thats a good or bad thing
23:14 Raveille: can be both xd
no kds becos bad irc !!
Emperor of Time
hello
m4m here..
1|2|3|4
Opportunity Leap
00:03:447 - add 2 note
00:04:257 - ^
00:04:527 - add 1 note
00:05:607 - add 2 note
00:07:767 - add 1 note
00:13:032 - quadstream better xD
00:14:382 - ^
00:14:652 - ^
00:14:854 - ^
00:15:057 - ^
00:19:782 - delete 1 note
01:13:242 (73242|3) - move to 3
01:13:275 (73275|2) - move to 4
01:13:309 (73309|1) - move to 1
01:13:343 (73343|0) - move to 2
01:38:352 (98352|3) - this pattern best for me xD
01:56:307 (116307|0) - move to 2
01:56:340 - move to 1
01:56:374 - move to 4
01:56:408 - move to 3
02:37:752 - add 1 note
02:39:102 - 02:39:372 - 02:39:574 - 02:39:777 - 02:39:912 - add 1 note
03:29:592 - add 1 note because it's finishing sound

good luck :D
Topic Starter
riunosk

Emperor of Time wrote:

hello
m4m here..
1|2|3|4
Opportunity Leap
00:03:447 - add 2 note am mapping for kicks and snares only for this part
00:04:257 - ^ ^
00:04:527 - add 1 note ^
00:05:607 - add 2 note ^
00:07:767 - add 1 note the kick is on the blue line so no change
00:13:032 - quadstream better xD qs is trash
00:14:382 - ^ ^
00:14:652 - ^ ^
00:14:854 - ^ ^
00:15:057 - ^ ^
00:19:782 - delete 1 note why? its a snare
01:13:242 (73242|3) - move to 3 i see the reason why you did this, applied
01:13:275 (73275|2) - move to 4 ^
01:13:309 (73309|1) - move to 1 ^
01:13:343 (73343|0) - move to 2 ^
01:38:352 (98352|3) - this pattern best for me xD seems fine for me as it is
01:56:307 (116307|0) - move to 2 buffing difficulties 101
01:56:340 - move to 1 ^
01:56:374 - move to 4 ^
01:56:408 - move to 3 ^
02:37:752 - add 1 note the additional note is already in there, since its a kick and cymbal
02:39:102 - 02:39:372 - 02:39:574 - 02:39:777 - 02:39:912 - add 1 note that would make it all quads and it'll be boring
03:29:592 - add 1 note because it's finishing sound disgusting minijack, applied

good luck :D
thanky for moddy
BrokenGale
From your modding queue
New to modding so hope this helps :)
For reference |1|2|3|4|

SPOILER
00:04:257 Note in song unrepresented in map
00:31:932 There are some major notes in the background not represented, recommend holds.
00:45:432 Same as above
01:12:702 Consider adding a note here to represent cymbal crash.
01:42:672 - 01:45:844 The background notes here sounds more like 1/8th rolls/stream rather than 1/4th jump stream maybe consider adding density here.
01:51:987 Consider moving the note in lane |3| to lane |4| to accentuate the pitch difference.
01:52:122 Consider moving the note in lane |2| to lane |1| to accentuate the pitch difference.
02:06:972 The accented note is 1/4th after the double
02:09:132 - 02:09:672 Similar problem to 01:51:987 in accentuating pitch difference.
02:20:134 Emphasize note here.
02:46:122 Overmapping?
03:07:384 Emphasize here instead of 03:07:452
03:35:384 Emphasize note here because of the note in the melody.
03:57:119 Same as above.
04:00:439 Same as above.
04:09:552 Same as above.
04:09:889 Same as above.
Topic Starter
riunosk

BrokenGale wrote:

From your modding queue
New to modding so hope this helps :)
For reference |1|2|3|4|

SPOILER
00:04:257 Note in song unrepresented in map mapping only the kicks here
00:31:932 There are some major notes in the background not represented, recommend holds. charting only the main melody and bass
00:45:432 Same as above no space to add anymore notes
01:12:702 Consider adding a note here to represent cymbal crash. not going to force a minijack
01:42:672 - 01:45:844 The background notes here sounds more like 1/8th rolls/stream rather than 1/4th jump stream maybe consider adding density here. its consistently 1/4 throughout
01:51:987 Consider moving the note in lane |3| to lane |4| to accentuate the pitch difference. intended patterning, patterning for this sound always changes
01:52:122 Consider moving the note in lane |2| to lane |1| to accentuate the pitch difference. moving this to 1 will only lengthen the already long anchor on that column
02:06:972 The accented note is 1/4th after the double charting standard kick|snare streams only
02:09:132 - 02:09:672 Similar problem to 01:51:987 in accentuating pitch difference. refer to above
02:20:134 Emphasize note here. there isnt any space left
02:46:122 Overmapping? how is this overmapping
03:07:384 Emphasize here instead of 03:07:452 piano notes will only be singles
03:35:384 Emphasize note here because of the note in the melody. i have no idea how you got that snap, and only following k|s stream with bass
03:57:119 Same as above. ^
04:00:439 Same as above. ^
04:09:552 Same as above. ^
04:09:889 Same as above. ^ and theres no space for it
thanks for modding but none were applied :c

fixed some missing notes
Aoki Inoue
M4M

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