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Suzumu - Sekishinsei: Kamatoto Araryouji [OsuMania]

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AnkhPH
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, May 22, 2018 at 3:28:02 AM

Artist: Suzumu
Title: Sekishinsei: Kamatoto Araryouji
Tags: kagamine rin len 鏡音リン レン Sincerity: Drastic Treatment for Pretended Innocence
BPM: 205
Filesize: 5809kb
Play Time: 03:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Drastic - 4Key (3.8 stars, 1784 notes)
  2. Normal - 4Key (2.36 stars, 1168 notes)
Download: Suzumu - Sekishinsei: Kamatoto Araryouji
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DrawdeX
Yo me amigo haha mod ko lang nang kunti toh

[General]
• may isang diff ka na 5K. pede bang maging 4K ang hard diff? or mag map ka lng ng bagong 5K maps para sa Normal at Advanced diffs? the choice is yours haha

[All diffs]
• 01:16:274 - to 01:24:469 - lagyan mo ng single notes or long notes d2, dapat kase walang break time sa mania beatmaps
• 02:53:738 - to 03:01:640 - same ^

[Overall]
> para saken, okay yung note pattern mo :D tas yung timing din okay :D
Topic Starter
AnkhPH
Sge pre ung sa 5k diff pagiisipan ko pa dati ko kasi ung ginawa nung medyo nagsisimula pa lng ako sa osu mania. ngayon kasi d na ko naglalaro ng 5k or higher pero as much as possible tatry ko dagdagan ng 5k diffs :D

yung mga kulang na notes sasabayan ko nlng update pag nakagawa na ko ulet ng isa pang diff :) As always maraming salamat :D
lenpai
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lenpai
ok quick mod #2 for Advanced diff

general
yo HP/OD 8 ulit

metadata
gotta love metadata
title should be
赤心性:カマトト荒療治
romanized title would be
Sekishinsei: Kamatoto Araryouji
Artist should be:
スズム
romanized
Suzumu

add to tags:
kagamine
rin
len
鏡音リン
レン
Sincerity: Drastic Treatment for Pretended Innocence

"but why is the title now different?" refer to http://vocaloid.wikia.com/wiki/%E8%B5%A ... Araryouji)
"Note: This song is known as "Sincerity Nature: Drastic Measures of Ignorance" in the Western fandom, but "Sincerity: Drastic Treatment for Pretended Innocence" is more suitable. This tradition comes from ThisEndlessForest's mistranslated title."

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owo

00:48:177 - sv value of x1.05!!! should be x1 only
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00:00:000 - you should really chart then intro :<
00:15:030 - missed note
00:12:762 (12762|3,13055|3,13347|3,13494|2,13640|3,13933|2,14226|2,14518|2,14811|2,15104|2,15104|3,15396|3,15689|3,15982|3,16128|2) - just take a moment to look at this. Now you should spread out your to maximum 4 stacks alternating on different sides (left hand and right hand)
00:16:787 - missed note
00:17:738 - if anything this should be a double
00:18:177 - missed sound
00:19:787 - out of place triple though you can move 00:19:787 (19787|2) - 1/4 down
00:19:787 (19787|2,22421|1,22567|2,22713|1,22860|0) - this should be a 4242 to indicate a different layer also for that nice disconnect from the previous section
00:23:445 (23445|1,23738|1) - to 1
00:29:152 (29152|3,29152|2,29299|2,29445|3,29591|2) - avoid patterns like these at all costs these are very awkward to play
00:30:030 - why not have a note here
00:32:372 - here too
00:35:372 - need a note here for the most part because you have this 00:34:713 (34713|0,34787|2,34860|1) -
00:35:884 - you might want to use this pattern when that yada yada thing comes around again at a later section: https://puu.sh/xd0aq/9574ad8c5a.png
00:36:543 - same as previous as coupled with 00:37:055 (37055|3,37128|1,37201|2) -
00:42:323 - instead of going for that sudden difficulty drop try to chart the vocals here
00:43:640 - this makes no sense in the slightest. Chart the drums instead.
00:45:689 - this must also be a double so you might want to change up that patterning

I think that's all im doing for now. The concepts i threw at the miku song are also very applicable here. Make it to a point to stay consistent with your layers so that the chart would be technically better.

Good luck! owo)b
Topic Starter
AnkhPH
Oki doki thank you very much for looking into both of the maps very meticulously :D including the metadata of the maps. I'll get onto it asap.
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