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Hello, from my queue.
[Alone]
00:10:218 (1,2,4) - be a bit mindful when you place objects, the objects in the previous timeline can overlap with your new objects which make your maps look bad. You can space them away a bit so your map looks cleaner
00:14:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - visual spacing can make your maps look cleaner as well
http://i.imgur.com/KmBynNM.png here is what you have atm
You can infact, rearrange these circles without regards to their combo numbers just to make them look nice/cleaner. ( a good idea is using shape that's easily recognizable like triangles)
this is what I did, it's not perfect but at least it looks a little bit cleaner right? http://i.imgur.com/27XDK0o.png
00:17:983 (2,3,4) - stacks under slider tend to not go over 2 because anything higher than that will confuse the player. I suggest you simply make them spaced stream after the slider end
00:18:336 (1,2) - objects being too close to each other can look bad as well, space them up a little.
00:34:042 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this stream doesn't line up with the direction the previous stream was going. You should make it circular.
00:39:865 (5) - this slider is held for too long. If you notice at 00:40:218 - there are new sounds being played you should stop the slider a bit before that and map the new sounds instead. my suggestion on it http://i.imgur.com/ENQq7na.png
00:47:806 (8) - these sliders are simply unacceptable for the ranking criteria
Check your AiMod, one of your sliderend is not snapped. You can fix this by go to Timing panel on top of the editor then select Resnap All Notes .
You should apply what you think is better for your map to other parts of the map as well.
Good luck
[Alone]
00:10:218 (1,2,4) - be a bit mindful when you place objects, the objects in the previous timeline can overlap with your new objects which make your maps look bad. You can space them away a bit so your map looks cleaner
00:14:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - visual spacing can make your maps look cleaner as well
http://i.imgur.com/KmBynNM.png here is what you have atm
You can infact, rearrange these circles without regards to their combo numbers just to make them look nice/cleaner. ( a good idea is using shape that's easily recognizable like triangles)
this is what I did, it's not perfect but at least it looks a little bit cleaner right? http://i.imgur.com/27XDK0o.png
00:17:983 (2,3,4) - stacks under slider tend to not go over 2 because anything higher than that will confuse the player. I suggest you simply make them spaced stream after the slider end
00:18:336 (1,2) - objects being too close to each other can look bad as well, space them up a little.
00:34:042 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this stream doesn't line up with the direction the previous stream was going. You should make it circular.
00:39:865 (5) - this slider is held for too long. If you notice at 00:40:218 - there are new sounds being played you should stop the slider a bit before that and map the new sounds instead. my suggestion on it http://i.imgur.com/ENQq7na.png
00:47:806 (8) - these sliders are simply unacceptable for the ranking criteria
Check your AiMod, one of your sliderend is not snapped. You can fix this by go to Timing panel on top of the editor then select Resnap All Notes .
You should apply what you think is better for your map to other parts of the map as well.
Good luck
Topic Starter
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timemon wrote:
Hello, from my queue.
[Alone]
00:10:218 (1,2,4) - be a bit mindful when you place objects, the objects in the previous timeline can overlap with your new objects which make your maps look bad. You can space them away a bit so your map looks cleaner changed up the one at 4, I left the 1,2 there because it is 1/4 gap vs.
1/1
00:14:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - visual spacing can make your maps look cleaner as well
http://i.imgur.com/KmBynNM.png here is what you have atm
You can infact, rearrange these circles without regards to their combo numbers just to make them look nice/cleaner. ( a good idea is using shape that's easily recognizable like triangles)
this is what I did, it's not perfect but at least it looks a little bit cleaner right? http://i.imgur.com/27XDK0o.png changed, good choice
00:17:983 (2,3,4) - stacks under slider tend to not go over 2 because anything higher than that will confuse the player. I suggest you simply make them spaced stream after the slider end changed
00:18:336 (1,2) - objects being too close to each other can look bad as well, space them up a little.
00:34:042 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this stream doesn't line up with the direction the previous stream was going. You should make it circular. feels fine during gameplay. It follows the direction you are traveling as you exit the stream.
00:39:865 (5) - this slider is held for too long. If you notice at 00:40:218 - there are new sounds being played you should stop the slider a bit before that and map the new sounds instead. my suggestion on it http://i.imgur.com/ENQq7na.png changed, slightly different pattern used though
00:47:806 (8) - these sliders are simply unacceptable for the ranking criteria changed
Check your AiMod, one of your sliderend is not snapped. You can fix this by go to Timing panel on top of the editor then select Resnap All Notes .
You should apply what you think is better for your map to other parts of the map as well.
Good luck
Thank you very much for the mod!
M4M from my Queue
Insane
00:04:747 (1,2) - i would visually differentiate it from 00:01:395 (1,2) - to prevent rhythm missreads
00:10:218 (1) - this would look imo better if it was placed either a bit lower, less curved or rotate slightly clockwise.
00:14:277 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - keep the angles the same, looks messy like this. use copy paste and ctrl+shift+r to do that
00:15:336 (8,9,1) - this looks better then those more curved triples you had before imo, use this curving on other triples
00:22:394 (9,1) - triple here?
00:34:042 (2,3,4) - doesn't play well
00:38:100 (4,5) - make these longer
00:39:865 (3) - should end on white tick
00:40:747 (7,1) - bad overlap
00:42:689 (4) - circles here would work better
Alone
00:07:924 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - again angles not the same
00:43:747 (1,2) - try to not use the exact same pattern in different difficulties :-)¨
00:51:159 (5) - much more playable if you remove last repeat
01:07:836 (6) - start the slider on white tick
01:08:630 (4,5,6,1) - should definitely be in a different pattern from 01:08:100 (1,2,3) -
01:12:335 (5,1) - switching from mapping to the electronic stuff to beats?
01:14:806 (1,2,3) - huge disconnect between this and 01:16:041 (6,1,2,1,2,1) - switching from easy sliders to big jumps
01:19:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - a bit overspaced, the sound is really silent
01:25:394 (6,7,8,9) - the beast should be more intense than the circles without beats. No emphasis here
01:28:747 (3,4) - shouldn't be here, stream starts on 01:28:924 (1) - . You can't just slap NC here and no visual and rhythmical change
01:37:042 (7,8,1) - plays bad, you shouldn't end a stream into singletaps with same spacing and direction
The map looks really unpolished. you have few ok looking patterns like 00:34:747 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - but even those could use more polish. Your rhythm and spacing emphasis are ok but it'll be hard to get mods to improve them when you have glaring aesthetic issues stealing the attention of modders
Just for example, you could improve 01:19:218 - to 01:28:747 - a ton by putting 01:20:100 (9) - on a red anchor of the slider, 01:20:277 (10) - under 01:19:483 (4) - so it's kinda symmtetrical with both sides of the stream, blanket 01:21:336 (1) - into the last curve of the big slider, make 01:23:100 (7) - form a triangle with sliderhead of 01:22:747 (5) - and sliderend of 01:22:924 (6) - , maybe stack 01:23:806 (3) - on something in the previous pattern, making sure 01:23:806 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - has even spacing and is actually a perfect circle (by converting a slider into circles), putting 01:24:512 (1) - sliderend exactly in the middle of that circle, again putting 01:25:747 (8) - on a red anchor, same with 01:27:159 (3) - (blanket also possible), 01:26:983 (2) - improving the blanket, spacing these 01:27:336 (4,2) - from each other and finally 01:29:189 (4,5) - making the slider follow the direction of the stream or at least be consistent with the sliders after.
That wall of text are suggestions for 10 seconds of the map that don't change flow, emphasis or rhythm, just slight position changes that would make the map look better and play pretty much the same. It's not really feasible to do that for the whole thing.
You need more mapping experience. I really don't recommend trying to get serious GD's right now or going for rank. Take a look at some newer ranked maps to see how they make stuff look good and then look at your own map and try to fix these things. ofc getting mods is still helpful
GL with your future maps
Insane
00:04:747 (1,2) - i would visually differentiate it from 00:01:395 (1,2) - to prevent rhythm missreads
00:10:218 (1) - this would look imo better if it was placed either a bit lower, less curved or rotate slightly clockwise.
00:14:277 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - keep the angles the same, looks messy like this. use copy paste and ctrl+shift+r to do that
00:15:336 (8,9,1) - this looks better then those more curved triples you had before imo, use this curving on other triples
00:22:394 (9,1) - triple here?
00:34:042 (2,3,4) - doesn't play well
00:38:100 (4,5) - make these longer
00:39:865 (3) - should end on white tick
00:40:747 (7,1) - bad overlap
00:42:689 (4) - circles here would work better
Alone
00:07:924 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - again angles not the same
00:43:747 (1,2) - try to not use the exact same pattern in different difficulties :-)¨
00:51:159 (5) - much more playable if you remove last repeat
01:07:836 (6) - start the slider on white tick
01:08:630 (4,5,6,1) - should definitely be in a different pattern from 01:08:100 (1,2,3) -
01:12:335 (5,1) - switching from mapping to the electronic stuff to beats?
01:14:806 (1,2,3) - huge disconnect between this and 01:16:041 (6,1,2,1,2,1) - switching from easy sliders to big jumps
01:19:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - a bit overspaced, the sound is really silent
01:25:394 (6,7,8,9) - the beast should be more intense than the circles without beats. No emphasis here
01:28:747 (3,4) - shouldn't be here, stream starts on 01:28:924 (1) - . You can't just slap NC here and no visual and rhythmical change
01:37:042 (7,8,1) - plays bad, you shouldn't end a stream into singletaps with same spacing and direction
The map looks really unpolished. you have few ok looking patterns like 00:34:747 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - but even those could use more polish. Your rhythm and spacing emphasis are ok but it'll be hard to get mods to improve them when you have glaring aesthetic issues stealing the attention of modders
Just for example, you could improve 01:19:218 - to 01:28:747 - a ton by putting 01:20:100 (9) - on a red anchor of the slider, 01:20:277 (10) - under 01:19:483 (4) - so it's kinda symmtetrical with both sides of the stream, blanket 01:21:336 (1) - into the last curve of the big slider, make 01:23:100 (7) - form a triangle with sliderhead of 01:22:747 (5) - and sliderend of 01:22:924 (6) - , maybe stack 01:23:806 (3) - on something in the previous pattern, making sure 01:23:806 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - has even spacing and is actually a perfect circle (by converting a slider into circles), putting 01:24:512 (1) - sliderend exactly in the middle of that circle, again putting 01:25:747 (8) - on a red anchor, same with 01:27:159 (3) - (blanket also possible), 01:26:983 (2) - improving the blanket, spacing these 01:27:336 (4,2) - from each other and finally 01:29:189 (4,5) - making the slider follow the direction of the stream or at least be consistent with the sliders after.
That wall of text are suggestions for 10 seconds of the map that don't change flow, emphasis or rhythm, just slight position changes that would make the map look better and play pretty much the same. It's not really feasible to do that for the whole thing.
You need more mapping experience. I really don't recommend trying to get serious GD's right now or going for rank. Take a look at some newer ranked maps to see how they make stuff look good and then look at your own map and try to fix these things. ofc getting mods is still helpful
GL with your future maps
Topic Starter
Thanks for the very in depth mod
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hohol454 wrote:
M4M from my Queue
Insane
00:04:747 (1,2) - i would visually differentiate it from 00:01:395 (1,2) - to prevent rhythm missreads fixed
00:10:218 (1) - this would look imo better if it was placed either a bit lower, less curved or rotate slightly clockwise. fixed
00:14:277 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - keep the angles the same, looks messy like this. use copy paste and ctrl+shift+r to do that fixed
00:15:336 (8,9,1) - this looks better then those more curved triples you had before imo, use this curving on other triples fixed to fix above lol
00:22:394 (9,1) - triple here? good catch
00:34:042 (2,3,4) - doesn't play well changed
00:38:100 (4,5) - make these longer those match the notes fine
00:39:865 (3) - should end on white tick good catch
00:40:747 (7,1) - bad overlap fixed
00:42:689 (4) - circles here would work better changed
Alone
00:07:924 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - again angles not the same fixed
00:43:747 (1,2) - try to not use the exact same pattern in different difficulties :-)¨ lol changed in lower diff
00:51:159 (5) - much more playable if you remove last repeat yeah
01:07:836 (6) - start the slider on white tick wow didn't notice that
01:08:630 (4,5,6,1) - should definitely be in a different pattern from 01:08:100 (1,2,3) -
01:12:335 (5,1) - switching from mapping to the electronic stuff to beats? following more of the voice which overlaps the beats
01:14:806 (1,2,3) - huge disconnect between this and 01:16:041 (6,1,2,1,2,1) - switching from easy sliders to big jumps increased DS and changed the exit from the triple
01:19:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - a bit overspaced, the sound is really silent decreased DS, but mostly following voice here
01:25:394 (6,7,8,9) - the beast should be more intense than the circles without beats. No emphasis here yeah wow emphasis was totally wrong in this section
01:28:747 (3,4) - shouldn't be here, stream starts on 01:28:924 (1) - . You can't just slap NC here and no visual and rhythmical change lol gg me
01:37:042 (7,8,1) - plays bad, you shouldn't end a stream into singletaps with same spacing and direction think i fixed it
The map looks really unpolished. you have few ok looking patterns like 00:34:747 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - but even those could use more polish. Your rhythm and spacing emphasis are ok but it'll be hard to get mods to improve them when you have glaring aesthetic issues stealing the attention of modders
Just for example, you could improve 01:19:218 - to 01:28:747 - a ton by putting 01:20:100 (9) - on a red anchor of the slider, 01:20:277 (10) - under 01:19:483 (4) - so it's kinda symmtetrical with both sides of the stream, blanket 01:21:336 (1) - into the last curve of the big slider, make 01:23:100 (7) - form a triangle with sliderhead of 01:22:747 (5) - and sliderend of 01:22:924 (6) - , maybe stack 01:23:806 (3) - on something in the previous pattern, making sure 01:23:806 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - has even spacing and is actually a perfect circle (by converting a slider into circles), putting 01:24:512 (1) - sliderend exactly in the middle of that circle, again putting 01:25:747 (8) - on a red anchor, same with 01:27:159 (3) - (blanket also possible), 01:26:983 (2) - improving the blanket, spacing these 01:27:336 (4,2) - from each other and finally 01:29:189 (4,5) - making the slider follow the direction of the stream or at least be consistent with the sliders after.
That wall of text are suggestions for 10 seconds of the map that don't change flow, emphasis or rhythm, just slight position changes that would make the map look better and play pretty much the same. It's not really feasible to do that for the whole thing.
You need more mapping experience. I really don't recommend trying to get serious GD's right now or going for rank. Take a look at some newer ranked maps to see how they make stuff look good and then look at your own map and try to fix these things. ofc getting mods is still helpful
GL with your future maps
Yo o/ M4M
I'm sorry, i'm late af, personal stuff
Alone
00:01:395 (1,2) - if you switch these they could fit the song better, give it a try
00:02:630 (4,1) - these two as sliders could fit really well too
00:09:689 (8) - a slider too, like a different shape one to represent this sound
00:11:100 (4) - don't overlap these, looks bad
00:13:571 (5,6) - try stacking (5) into (1) tail and moving (6) a bit far to emphasize
00:14:806 (5) - this is not emphasized, try to make it the same distance as 00:14:453 (3) -
00:18:336 (1,2) - you can make this blanket prettier
00:26:100 (7,9) - ^
00:33:865 (1,2) - i think you should add a visual reset too, this looks consistent but it isn't on timeline, other angle for that 2nd stream should work
00:34:571 (1) - i recommend you to keep the player active making this a slider
00:34:923 (4,6) - i think these should be sliders instead a part of the stream itself, there isn't any sound on 00:35:011 (5,7) - these
00:37:394 (9,10,1) - i think these should have more spacing considering the stream before them
00:40:218 (6,7,8,9) - same thing but this time considering intensity
00:40:924 (1) - this could be really hard to follow for some people, maybe try to make it slower or a more comfortable shape
00:45:865 (9,10) - needs more distrance
01:06:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - this stream is pretty messy, you could try to add some sliders to make it more comfortable, it doesn't represent the song
01:38:806 - this stream should start here
Try to make your SV slower on slow parts like the beginning of this
Insane
00:01:395 (1,2) - same as Alone
00:02:277 (3,5) - don't overlap
00:02:983 (5) - i think a circle on slider start and a slider on this slider tail would work even better
00:03:689 (6) - ^
00:10:218 (1,2) - switching these should be better
00:12:159 (6,7) - i think you should use the same spacing here from (5) to (6) because of intensity
00:18:336 (1,2) - make it prettier
00:19:218 (6,7) - you can make them blanket too
00:20:806 (6,7) - try to switch these, 7 first, 6 second
00:23:983 (1) - this should have a lot more distance
00:39:512 (1,2) - switch these, same as above
00:39:865 (3) - i think you shouldn't put something like this on an Insane, the gap of not hitting this correctly is rrrrreally big
00:44:806 (1,2) - blanket
00:51:159 (3) - the same as above
00:51:600 (4) - this shouldn't be here, it should start on last white tick
00:54:512 - you need something here, maybe make last circle a 1/4 slider and put other here too
01:15:776 (4,5) - stack them properly
Scarlet's Hard
00:04:042 (7) - a slider should be fine here
00:04:747 (1,2) - if you make it two circles and a slider it should fit better
00:15:159 (8,9,1) - try to make their distance equal
00:47:806 (4,5,7,8) - make their blankets prettier
00:53:453 (4,5) - ^
01:39:071 (5) - you should start this on last red tick, it's not comfortable to play it on the blue tick
01:41:718 (2) - this is a ghost circle, don't put it, it doesn't represents any sound, try to change this pattern a bit with this
01:42:336 (6) - i think you should put a slider here, there's still some sound there
I'm bad at modding Hards as you should see, the rhythm you follow is ok considering this is a song with a lot of things to choose, many issues were blankets wich i think you can recognize by yourself
Cool song, great rhythm choice, some parts were a bit uncomfortable to follow but you lack experience so keep mapping to improve those things, try to focus on your object placement (spacing and when to put a slider or a circle) and making your streams and blankets pretty!
Good Luck
I'm sorry, i'm late af, personal stuff
00:01:395 (1,2) - if you switch these they could fit the song better, give it a try
00:02:630 (4,1) - these two as sliders could fit really well too
00:09:689 (8) - a slider too, like a different shape one to represent this sound
00:11:100 (4) - don't overlap these, looks bad
00:13:571 (5,6) - try stacking (5) into (1) tail and moving (6) a bit far to emphasize
00:14:806 (5) - this is not emphasized, try to make it the same distance as 00:14:453 (3) -
00:18:336 (1,2) - you can make this blanket prettier
00:26:100 (7,9) - ^
00:33:865 (1,2) - i think you should add a visual reset too, this looks consistent but it isn't on timeline, other angle for that 2nd stream should work
00:34:571 (1) - i recommend you to keep the player active making this a slider
00:34:923 (4,6) - i think these should be sliders instead a part of the stream itself, there isn't any sound on 00:35:011 (5,7) - these
00:37:394 (9,10,1) - i think these should have more spacing considering the stream before them
00:40:218 (6,7,8,9) - same thing but this time considering intensity
00:40:924 (1) - this could be really hard to follow for some people, maybe try to make it slower or a more comfortable shape
00:45:865 (9,10) - needs more distrance
01:06:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - this stream is pretty messy, you could try to add some sliders to make it more comfortable, it doesn't represent the song
01:38:806 - this stream should start here
Try to make your SV slower on slow parts like the beginning of this
00:01:395 (1,2) - same as Alone
00:02:277 (3,5) - don't overlap
00:02:983 (5) - i think a circle on slider start and a slider on this slider tail would work even better
00:03:689 (6) - ^
00:10:218 (1,2) - switching these should be better
00:12:159 (6,7) - i think you should use the same spacing here from (5) to (6) because of intensity
00:18:336 (1,2) - make it prettier
00:19:218 (6,7) - you can make them blanket too
00:20:806 (6,7) - try to switch these, 7 first, 6 second
00:23:983 (1) - this should have a lot more distance
00:39:512 (1,2) - switch these, same as above
00:39:865 (3) - i think you shouldn't put something like this on an Insane, the gap of not hitting this correctly is rrrrreally big
00:44:806 (1,2) - blanket
00:51:159 (3) - the same as above
00:51:600 (4) - this shouldn't be here, it should start on last white tick
00:54:512 - you need something here, maybe make last circle a 1/4 slider and put other here too
01:15:776 (4,5) - stack them properly
00:04:042 (7) - a slider should be fine here
00:04:747 (1,2) - if you make it two circles and a slider it should fit better
00:15:159 (8,9,1) - try to make their distance equal
00:47:806 (4,5,7,8) - make their blankets prettier
00:53:453 (4,5) - ^
01:39:071 (5) - you should start this on last red tick, it's not comfortable to play it on the blue tick
01:41:718 (2) - this is a ghost circle, don't put it, it doesn't represents any sound, try to change this pattern a bit with this
01:42:336 (6) - i think you should put a slider here, there's still some sound there
I'm bad at modding Hards as you should see, the rhythm you follow is ok considering this is a song with a lot of things to choose, many issues were blankets wich i think you can recognize by yourself
Cool song, great rhythm choice, some parts were a bit uncomfortable to follow but you lack experience so keep mapping to improve those things, try to focus on your object placement (spacing and when to put a slider or a circle) and making your streams and blankets pretty!
Good Luck
why does everyone only mod hardest diff lol---->Is that I finish the other 2 diffs recently :v
[Hard]
00:40:924 (1,2) - Blanket l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8380296 <----Something like this
Apart from that, I did not find anything else that is relevant (I am not very good finding faults in low diffs x.x)
[Insane]
00:24:336 (2) - to 00:34:747 (3) - I think there are many straight sliders >.<
00:36:689 (1,2,3,4) - Blankets between the sliders l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379846 <----something like this
00:39:865 (3) - I don't think it's very necessary =.=
00:42:689 (4,5,6) - It reminded me of the 0108 style :v
00:43:747 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - overlapping it´s super effective l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379961 (I hope the image is understandable >.<)
00:51:159 (3) - The same as 00:39:865 (3) -
00:55:042 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - overlap it´s a drug ;_; l try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8380049 (again, i hope the image is understandable >.<)
00:56:630 (1) - You have missed a note here (the spinner can not replace it), put a circle here, then put the spinner
01:06:336 (1,2,3) - Blanket beetween the sliders
01:07:394 (1,2,3) - here too
01:29:277 (2,2,2) - Try overlap these 3 kicksliders(Okay, i think i have a problem with the overlapping x.x) l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8380143 <----something like this
01:37:394 (1,2,3) - Blanket beetween the sliders
01:41:806 (1) - I love this effect xD
01:43:042 (1) - You have missed a note here (the spinner can not replace it), put a circle here, then put the spinner
[Alone]
00:01:395 (1) - to 00:12:159 (7) - I think this section is simplistic, instead of just putting hitcircles on the red ticks, try this:Replaces circles with 1/3 sliders (which start at the red ticks and end in the blues) while forming pretty patterns with either blankets or overlapping l Basic Example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379050
00:15:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379368
00:19:218 (6,1) - I see both sliders a bit weird (taking into account the flow) l Possible solution: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379438
00:33:865 (1,2) - NC (The stream ends in object 1, and starts a new stream in object 2)
00:34:571 (1,2) - here too =w=
00:55:042 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - overlapped is more cool :3 l Try it :v ---> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379535
00:56:630 (1) - You have missed a note here (the spinner can not replace it), put a circle here, then put the spinnercopy/paste
00:59:453 (1,2,3) - Blankets beetween the sliders l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379605 <----something like this
01:06:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I think it is very easy to lose the combo here, you don´t need to remove the zigzags streams, but I think you should reduce the distance
01:20:453 (1) - blanket l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379750 <----something like this
01:41:806 (1) - here too =.=
I hope it helps you n.n, good luck !!!
00:40:924 (1,2) - Blanket l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8380296 <----Something like this
Apart from that, I did not find anything else that is relevant (I am not very good finding faults in low diffs x.x)
[Insane]
00:24:336 (2) - to 00:34:747 (3) - I think there are many straight sliders >.<
00:36:689 (1,2,3,4) - Blankets between the sliders l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379846 <----something like this
00:39:865 (3) - I don't think it's very necessary =.=
00:42:689 (4,5,6) - It reminded me of the 0108 style :v
00:43:747 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - overlapping it´s super effective l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379961 (I hope the image is understandable >.<)
00:51:159 (3) - The same as 00:39:865 (3) -
00:55:042 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - overlap it´s a drug ;_; l try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8380049 (again, i hope the image is understandable >.<)
00:56:630 (1) - You have missed a note here (the spinner can not replace it), put a circle here, then put the spinner
01:06:336 (1,2,3) - Blanket beetween the sliders
01:07:394 (1,2,3) - here too
01:29:277 (2,2,2) - Try overlap these 3 kicksliders
01:37:394 (1,2,3) - Blanket beetween the sliders
01:41:806 (1) - I love this effect xD
01:43:042 (1) - You have missed a note here (the spinner can not replace it), put a circle here, then put the spinner
[Alone]
00:01:395 (1) - to 00:12:159 (7) - I think this section is simplistic, instead of just putting hitcircles on the red ticks, try this:Replaces circles with 1/3 sliders (which start at the red ticks and end in the blues) while forming pretty patterns with either blankets or overlapping l Basic Example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379050
00:15:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379368
00:19:218 (6,1) - I see both sliders a bit weird (taking into account the flow) l Possible solution: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379438
00:33:865 (1,2) - NC (The stream ends in object 1, and starts a new stream in object 2)
00:34:571 (1,2) - here too =w=
00:55:042 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - overlapped is more cool :3 l Try it :v ---> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379535
00:56:630 (1) - You have missed a note here (the spinner can not replace it), put a circle here, then put the spinner
00:59:453 (1,2,3) - Blankets beetween the sliders l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379605 <----something like this
01:06:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I think it is very easy to lose the combo here, you don´t need to remove the zigzags streams, but I think you should reduce the distance
01:20:453 (1) - blanket l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379750 <----something like this
01:41:806 (1) - here too =.=
I hope it helps you n.n, good luck !!!
[-Crissaegrim-] wrote:
00:04:042 (7) - a slider should be fine here Fixed!
00:04:747 (1,2) - if you make it two circles and a slider it should fit better Personally I'd like to keep my current rhythm choice, thanks anyway.
00:15:159 (8,9,1) - try to make their distance equal Ouch they were a bit off. Thank you.
00:47:806 (4,5,7,8) - make their blankets prettier Tried my best here, thanks!
00:53:453 (4,5) - ^ Fixed
01:39:071 (5) - you should start this on last red tick, it's not comfortable to play it on the blue tick Fixed
01:41:718 (2) - this is a ghost circle, don't put it, it doesn't represents any sound, try to change this pattern a bit with this I actually kept the pattern mainly the same and simply removed the circle. It actually feels nice like this personally.
01:42:336 (6) - i think you should put a slider here, there's still some sound there Done!
I'm bad at modding Hards as you should see, the rhythm you follow is ok considering this is a song with a lot of things to choose, many issues were blankets wich i think you can recognize by yourself
Miutrex wrote:
[Hard]
00:40:924 (1,2) - Blanket l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8380296 <----Something like this I think I know what you mean. Fixed!
Apart from that, I did not find anything else that is relevant (I am not very good finding faults in low diffs x.x) I'm not very good at mapping them so I know how you feel xD Thanks so much for the mod!
Topic Starter
Hello thanks for the mod!
[-Crissaegrim-] wrote:
Yo o/ M4M
I'm sorry, i'm late af, personal stuff
00:01:395 (1,2) - if you switch these they could fit the song better, give it a try sure, did a bunch of changes here
00:02:630 (4,1) - these two as sliders could fit really well too heart was only one syllable so I made it a circle
00:09:689 (8) - a slider too, like a different shape one to represent this sound same as above
00:11:100 (4) - don't overlap these, looks bad fixed and modified
00:13:571 (5,6) - try stacking (5) into (1) tail and moving (6) a bit far to emphasize
00:14:806 (5) - this is not emphasized, try to make it the same distance as 00:14:453 (3) - fixed both
00:18:336 (1,2) - you can make this blanket prettier tried to?
00:26:100 (7,9) - ^
00:33:865 (1,2) - i think you should add a visual reset too, this looks consistent but it isn't on timeline, other angle for that 2nd stream should work not sure what you mean here.
00:34:571 (1) - i recommend you to keep the player active making this a slider don't see a need for it
00:34:923 (4,6) - i think these should be sliders instead a part of the stream itself, there isn't any sound on 00:35:011 (5,7) - these I see what you mean here but I think this pattern is ok considering how it continues a pattern the player is used to
00:37:394 (9,10,1) - i think these should have more spacing considering the stream before them increased DS
00:40:218 (6,7,8,9) - same thing but this time considering intensity increased DS
00:40:924 (1) - this could be really hard to follow for some people, maybe try to make it slower or a more comfortable shape modified it slightly, made the start of the slider less sharp. It's not terribly hard to follow though and I've nerfed it once before
00:45:865 (9,10) - needs more distrance fixed
01:06:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - this stream is pretty messy, you could try to add some sliders to make it more comfortable, it doesn't represent the song yeah i've been looking at this for a while and I was never happy with it, tried something new
01:38:806 - this stream should start here good catch
Try to make your SV slower on slow parts like the beginning of this
00:01:395 (1,2) - same as Alone changed
00:02:277 (3,5) - don't overlap changed
00:02:983 (5) - i think a circle on slider start and a slider on this slider tail would work even better following lyrics so i grouped them into pairs with the slider
00:03:689 (6) - ^
00:10:218 (1,2) - switching these should be better changed to two circles
00:12:159 (6,7) - i think you should use the same spacing here from (5) to (6) because of intensity DS matches the note gap here, I had it like what you suggested before but it makes it hard to read the note since they are not as far apart in the timeline
00:18:336 (1,2) - make it prettier done
00:19:218 (6,7) - you can make them blanket too done
00:20:806 (6,7) - try to switch these, 7 first, 6 second good call
00:23:983 (1) - this should have a lot more distance changed a ton here to make it work lol
00:39:512 (1,2) - switch these, same as above fixed
00:39:865 (3) - i think you shouldn't put something like this on an Insane, the gap of not hitting this correctly is rrrrreally big I don't see how that is?
00:44:806 (1,2) - blanket lol blankets are hard
00:51:159 (3) - the same as above
00:51:600 (4) - this shouldn't be here, it should start on last white tick moved it to red tick to follow the instrument, good catch
00:54:512 - you need something here, maybe make last circle a 1/4 slider and put other here too added a slider before the second stream
01:15:776 (4,5) - stack them properlyye
Cool song, great rhythm choice, some parts were a bit uncomfortable to follow but you lack experience so keep mapping to improve those things, try to focus on your object placement (spacing and when to put a slider or a circle) and making your streams and blankets pretty!
Good Luck
mod numero dos
Miutrex wrote:
[box=why does everyone only mod hardest diff lol---->Is that I finish the other 2 diffs recently :v]
[Insane]
00:24:336 (2) - to 00:34:747 (3) - I think there are many straight sliders >.< I think this pattern is nice. Why do people hate straight sliders?
00:36:689 (1,2,3,4) - Blankets between the sliders l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379846 <----something like this I like that
00:39:865 (3) - I don't think it's very necessary =.= follows the hi-hat instrument
00:42:689 (4,5,6) - It reminded me of the 0108 style :v
00:43:747 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - overlapping it´s super effective l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379961 (I hope the image is understandable >.<) I really don't like that, it is also hard to read
00:51:159 (3) - The same as 00:39:865 (3) -
00:55:042 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - overlap it´s a drug ;_; l try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8380049 (again, i hope the image is understandable >.<) again overlap is not pretty or friendly to read
00:56:630 (1) - You have missed a note here (the spinner can not replace it), put a circle here, then put the spinner mapping to the long note during that part
01:06:336 (1,2,3) - Blanket beetween the sliders matching style here, this is the idea i am going for here
01:07:394 (1,2,3) - here too
01:29:277 (2,2,2) - Try overlap these 3 kicksliders(Okay, i think i have a problem with the overlapping x.x)l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8380143 <----something like this again readability of overlaps is low
01:37:394 (1,2,3) - Blanket beetween the sliders sliders lead into each other here
01:41:806 (1) - I love this effect xD thanks!
01:43:042 (1) - You have missed a note here (the spinner can not replace it), put a circle here, then put the spinner
[Alone]
00:01:395 (1) - to 00:12:159 (7) - I think this section is simplistic, instead of just putting hitcircles on the red ticks, try this:Replaces circles with 1/3 sliders (which start at the red ticks and end in the blues) while forming pretty patterns with either blankets or overlapping l Basic Example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379050 simplicity matches the intensity of the song, and I'm not sure what you're trying to go for here
00:15:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379368 slider won't be consistent with how I'm mapping the instrument if I do this
00:19:218 (6,1) - I see both sliders a bit weird (taking into account the flow) l Possible solution: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379438 flow feels ok here
00:33:865 (1,2) - NC (The stream ends in object 1, and starts a new stream in object 2) I did this to guide the player through the streams
00:34:571 (1,2) - here too =w=
00:55:042 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - overlapped is more cool :3 l Try it :v ---> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379535
00:56:630 (1) - You have missed a note here (the spinner can not replace it), put a circle here, then put the spinnercopy/paste
00:59:453 (1,2,3) - Blankets beetween the sliders l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379605 <----something like this sure
01:06:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I think it is very easy to lose the combo here, you don´t need to remove the zigzags streams, but I think you should reduce the distance changed in previous mod
01:20:453 (1) - blanket l https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8379750 <----something like this good idea but it makes the slider too sharp
01:41:806 (1) - here too =.=
I hope it helps you n.n, good luck !!!
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