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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 05 de julio de 2017 at 12:31:24 p.m.

Artist: The 4th
Title: As One feat.Yukacco (Original Mix)
Tags: The 4th EP Happy Hardcore Kors k Ryu☆ Electronic Dance Music
BPM: 175
Filesize: 6084kb
Play Time: 05:34
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Download: The 4th - As One feat.Yukacco (Original Mix)
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Image Together: 100% By: Me


Image Bubble by: Surono

Image Approval by: tasuke912

Image Desqualified by: alacat

Image Re-Bubble by: Surono

Image Re-Approval by: tasuke912



Thanks to:

Cosmolade For help in the diff name.
xfraczynho For Mod and 1 Star!
Surono For IRC Mod and 2 Stars!
Akemi_Homura For Mod and 1 Star!
DarkVortex For Mod!
Hitsu For Mod and 1 Star!
JessiChan For Mod!
Ulqui For Mod!
yuzu__rinrin
komasy For Mod!
-Sh1n1- For Mod and 2 Stars!
R For Mod!
Surono For BN Check!
tasuke912 for BN Check!
alacat For Check The Metadata!
qoot8123 For Check The Offset and the Kiai Settings!
Skylish For Check and Support to qoot8123 about The Offset and The Kiai Settings!
Surono For BN Re-Check!
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Holah o/, disculpa la tardanza, te expliqué eso :(, espero que te sirva, son todos consejos y opiniones (como todos) así que espero que alguno pueda ayudarte :D

k = kat = azul
d = don = rojo


General
  • Sugiero un HP=5 o 4, al ser maratón
  • El fondo es 1365x768, podrías intentar agrandarlo a 1366x768 (no tengo mucha experiencia con esto la verdad), como la mayoría de los maps ranked
  • Yukacco no va en tags? También me enredo un poquito con esto


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Eso sería todo, espero que esto te sirve mucho y espero verla rankeada! el mapa está entretenido y me gustan este tipo de mapas, goodluck!
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Holah o/, disculpa la tardanza, te expliqué eso :(, espero que te sirva, son todos consejos y opiniones (como todos) así que espero que alguno pueda ayudarte :D Hola! tranquilo >w<

k = kat = azul
d = don = rojo


General
  • Sugiero un HP=5 o 4, al ser maratón Lo cambién a 5
  • El fondo es 1365x768, podrías intentar agrandarlo a 1366x768 (no tengo mucha experiencia con esto la verdad), como la mayoría de los maps ranked Lo tenía en 1920x1080 y se redució a 1365x768 lol gracias por avisarme, lo cambié a 1366x768
  • Yukacco no va en tags? También me enredo un poquito con esto Puede ser, pero la tengo en el título así que no sería muy necesario, cualquier cosa contactaré con un BN o QAT para que me aconseje sobre eso.


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    Kiais:
  • Si bien 00:44:970 - suena bonito para un kiai, encuentro que es demasiado pronto, podrías deletearlo y dejar los otros :3
  • 02:34:599 Sacaste el kiai repentinamente, actívalo!
  • 04:25:685 - ^
    No apliqué ninguna, los kiais que tengo me gustan mucho ;w; pero si otro modder me manda a quitarlo te agradeceré por esa sugerencia.
    Compose:
  • movería 00:03:656 (11) - a 00:04:685 (14) - sólamente por consistencia en el inicio Consistencia es que dos secciones iguales tenga notas iguales o similares, en este caso su sugerencia corta la consistencia, por esa razón no lo aplico.
  • 00:06:570 (21) - K no suena mejor? Hecho
  • lo mismo que te mencioné en lo primero para 00:09:142 (31) - Lo que expliqué primero de consistencia
  • 00:11:542 (41) - remove? prueba ese quiebre, tal vez te guste :3 Nop
  • lo mismo que lo primero para la parte que viene Lo que expliqué primero de consistencia
  • no te gusta este patrón en 00:20:114 (81) - ? Hermoso, hecho
  • 00:27:056 (141) - borraría esa nota para no quitarle consistencia (los dobles fillean bien al menos) No me gusta mucho, ya que no quiero repetir el mismo ritmo anterior y quierod ejarlo proque hace un buen ritmo con 00:26:885 (139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152) -
  • 00:33:999 (197,198) - ctrl+g y el kat con finisher (sacarle al otro) Hecho
  • 00:38:028 (232) - lo mismo que la otra No, misma razón en la parte similar.
  • 00:44:970 (291) - siento que esta parte podría ser un poco recorregida, suena bien como a harto uso de dobles especialmente borrar notas como esta: 00:45:313 (294) - , pruébalo :D (por ejemplo estas: 00:51:142 (347,348,349,350) - ) Tienes razón, a parte otra razón para cambiarlo (personal) la canción en esta parte tiene menos intensidad de ritmo comparada con las demás, así que reducirla un poco me parece bien.
  • 01:32:970 (26,27,28) - hazlos d d k, le das un mejor énfasis a la nota más fuerte (la tercera) Hecho
  • 01:38:456 (31,32,33) - ^ Hecho
  • 01:43:942 (36,37,38) - k d k suggest Hecho
  • el mismo comentario del primer kiai para el segundo, el mapa da para eso, igual es tu estilo de mappeo así que lo dejo para ti! En este caso quiero dejarlo así, el sonido y el ritmo son altos, se escuchan variedades de sonidos y de gran intensidad y quiero reflejar eso.
  • 02:53:885 (550,551,552,553,554,555,556,557,558,559,560,561,562,563,564,565,566) - sugiero k k k k d d d d k k d d k k d d k (pruébalo al 25%, suena bien) Hecho
  • 03:01:770 (584) - le agregaría un d, siguiendo la línea anterior Hecho
  • 03:17:542 (679,680,681,682,683,684,685,686,687) - no sé que pensar de eso, suena bien y todo, pero es muy repentino quizás? te la dejo como comentario :3 Lo veo bien, me gusta como está
  • mismos comentarios para los kiai, pero en estos quedan mejor los triplets, ni idea el por qué, sólo pasa xD La misma explicación en los anteriores kiais xD
  • 03:59:285 (977,978) - ctrl+g Hecho
  • 04:58:685 (1508,1509) - K d Hecho
  • 05:14:970 (1621) - delete y 05:14:799 (1620) - d Nop, cortaría un tono agudo que se escucha claramente.
  • 05:31:770 (1) - para el último spinner podrías hacer un descenso de volumen, si no el último golpe suena muy fuerte Vale

Eso sería todo, espero que esto te sirve mucho y espero verla rankeada! el mapa está entretenido y me gustan este tipo de mapas, goodluck!



Muchas gracias por su mod! se lo agradezco mucho >w<

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though this song are good for 2016 mapping style such X.u ( Nishizumi please ) but this map is really good and fun to play!

irc mod ( yeah, irc is the best ever to improve map! X"D )
21:21 Surono: my connection hate me.
21:21 *Surono is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1247509 The 4th ft.Yukacco - As One [Together]]
21:23 game rock: I see the message don't worry :3
21:26 Surono: 00:10:856 (37) - better to emphasize this as don for 00:10:685 (36,37,38) - similar vocal? and 00:11:713 (42) - don this bcus dkd are enough such this sounds. kkd are for high drum in next pattern right?
21:27 Surono: 00:20:971 (91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99) - kdkkddkdk to emphasize vocal effects, yeah in here are just monotone drum.. but your current pattern are monotone too..
21:28 game rock: ok, fixed all
21:30 Surono: 00:42:056 (265,266,267) - kdk, 00:42:485 (270,271) - swap,00:42:742 - kat because 00:42:056 (265,267,270,273) - these sounds are accurate to follow
21:31 Surono: monotone drum, more accurate to follow instrumen
21:34 Surono: 01:01:427 - from here, follow instrument like before and 01:02:456 (447,448,449,450,451) - kkddk these then 01:02:799 - from here follow instrument again until 01:03:570 -
21:36 Surono: 01:50:370 (46) - just kat this to emphasize other dons, for 01:50:285 (45,47) - these drum.
21:36 game rock: Fixed
21:37 game rock: right, fixed
21:38 Surono: 02:08:456 (132,133,134) - not ddk? because in this part are many kats XD 02:08:627 (134) - this should be kat for reason lol
21:38 game rock: hahahaha xDD sure sure
21:39 Surono: 02:40:856 - lol this loooong stream, this fun XDDD
21:39 game rock: 02:09:827 (141,142) - I change these too to d xD
21:39 Surono: good ~w~)b
21:39 game rock: hahahahaha thank you <ww<
21:41 Surono: 02:55:342 - too pity if this sounds are skipped, maybe spinner?
21:42 game rock: ok :3
21:44 Surono: 03:17:713 (682,683,684) - will hurts non-kddk player ;w; kat these for instrument emphasize, thats why taiko mapping is special lol ( also for good playable )
21:45 game rock: So is better put kats?
21:45 Surono: yes, dddkkkd
21:45 Surono: more easier to play
21:45 game rock: 1/4 or 1/6?
21:45 Surono: 1/6 not problem
21:46 game rock: Ok, fixed >w<
21:47 Surono: 03:49:770 - 03:50:456 - 03:51:142 - add notes? since 03:49:770 - in here have new synth sounds
21:47 Surono: 03:54:056 (928,929,930) - like before
21:47 Surono: 03:58:342 - ;w; this pattern are mindblow... I cant hit these lol
21:48 Surono: wait, I will think for good pattern..
21:49 game rock: Fixed owo
21:49 game rock: the pattern is fine?
21:49 Surono: wait.. because it just monotone drum, I will give ScreenShot of unique pattern
21:50 Surono: from 03:58:342 - here change like this http://puu.sh/v7X8F/ca73500f1c.jpg
21:50 Surono: wait, wrong ScreenShot.. ;w;
21:51 Surono: *bad screenshot
21:51 game rock: ok don't worry xD :3
21:51 Surono: https://puu.sh/v7XdF/cc5044f838.jpg oke it just same, but more detail from begining until end XD
21:52 Surono: 02:55:427 - spinner?
21:52 Surono: wrong link XDDDd
21:53 Surono: 03:59:885 - here
21:53 game rock: XDDD
21:54 Surono: 04:02:456 (985,986,987,988,989,990,991,992,993,994,995,996,997) - wrong emphasize, change http://puu.sh/v7Xkj/ceec556e5f.jpg like it
21:54 game rock: fixed
21:55 game rock: amazing!!!
21:55 game rock: fixed *-*
21:55 Surono: 04:43:427 (1385,1386,1387,1388,1389,1390,1391,1392,1393,1394,1395) - kkddkddkddk more accurate and ez to read and hit for me :3
21:56 Surono: 05:09:485 - kat this? I dont hear different 05:09:313 (1591,1592) - with these XD
21:57 game rock: ok :3
21:57 Surono: done to mod your map. I just lazy and do irc is better to improve map. ;3 Posting, Good Map =w=)b


the problem just about emphasizing sounds in long pattern but overall really good map esspesially in kiai, I love it. :3

Good Luck
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Surono wrote:
though this song are good for 2016 mapping style such X.u ( Nishizumi please ) but this map is really good and fun to play!

irc mod ( yeah, irc is the best ever to improve map! X"D )
21:21 Surono: my connection hate me.
21:21 *Surono is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1247509 The 4th ft.Yukacco - As One [Together]]
21:23 game rock: I see the message don't worry :3
21:26 Surono: 00:10:856 (37) - better to emphasize this as don for 00:10:685 (36,37,38) - similar vocal? and 00:11:713 (42) - don this bcus dkd are enough such this sounds. kkd are for high drum in next pattern right?
21:27 Surono: 00:20:971 (91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99) - kdkkddkdk to emphasize vocal effects, yeah in here are just monotone drum.. but your current pattern are monotone too..
21:28 game rock: ok, fixed all
21:30 Surono: 00:42:056 (265,266,267) - kdk, 00:42:485 (270,271) - swap,00:42:742 - kat because 00:42:056 (265,267,270,273) - these sounds are accurate to follow
21:31 Surono: monotone drum, more accurate to follow instrumen
21:34 Surono: 01:01:427 - from here, follow instrument like before and 01:02:456 (447,448,449,450,451) - kkddk these then 01:02:799 - from here follow instrument again until 01:03:570 -
21:36 Surono: 01:50:370 (46) - just kat this to emphasize other dons, for 01:50:285 (45,47) - these drum.
21:36 game rock: Fixed
21:37 game rock: right, fixed
21:38 Surono: 02:08:456 (132,133,134) - not ddk? because in this part are many kats XD 02:08:627 (134) - this should be kat for reason lol
21:38 game rock: hahahaha xDD sure sure
21:39 Surono: 02:40:856 - lol this loooong stream, this fun XDDD
21:39 game rock: 02:09:827 (141,142) - I change these too to d xD
21:39 Surono: good ~w~)b
21:39 game rock: hahahahaha thank you <ww<
21:41 Surono: 02:55:342 - too pity if this sounds are skipped, maybe spinner?
21:42 game rock: ok :3
21:44 Surono: 03:17:713 (682,683,684) - will hurts non-kddk player ;w; kat these for instrument emphasize, thats why taiko mapping is special lol ( also for good playable )
21:45 game rock: So is better put kats?
21:45 Surono: yes, dddkkkd
21:45 Surono: more easier to play
21:45 game rock: 1/4 or 1/6?
21:45 Surono: 1/6 not problem
21:46 game rock: Ok, fixed >w<
21:47 Surono: 03:49:770 - 03:50:456 - 03:51:142 - add notes? since 03:49:770 - in here have new synth sounds
21:47 Surono: 03:54:056 (928,929,930) - like before
21:47 Surono: 03:58:342 - ;w; this pattern are mindblow... I cant hit these lol
21:48 Surono: wait, I will think for good pattern..
21:49 game rock: Fixed owo
21:49 game rock: the pattern is fine?
21:49 Surono: wait.. because it just monotone drum, I will give ScreenShot of unique pattern
21:50 Surono: from 03:58:342 - here change like this http://puu.sh/v7X8F/ca73500f1c.jpg
21:50 Surono: wait, wrong ScreenShot.. ;w;
21:51 Surono: *bad screenshot
21:51 game rock: ok don't worry xD :3
21:51 Surono: https://puu.sh/v7XdF/cc5044f838.jpg oke it just same, but more detail from begining until end XD
21:52 Surono: 02:55:427 - spinner?
21:52 Surono: wrong link XDDDd
21:53 Surono: 03:59:885 - here
21:53 game rock: XDDD
21:54 Surono: 04:02:456 (985,986,987,988,989,990,991,992,993,994,995,996,997) - wrong emphasize, change http://puu.sh/v7Xkj/ceec556e5f.jpg like it
21:54 game rock: fixed
21:55 game rock: amazing!!!
21:55 game rock: fixed *-*
21:55 Surono: 04:43:427 (1385,1386,1387,1388,1389,1390,1391,1392,1393,1394,1395) - kkddkddkddk more accurate and ez to read and hit for me :3
21:56 Surono: 05:09:485 - kat this? I dont hear different 05:09:313 (1591,1592) - with these XD
21:57 game rock: ok :3
21:57 Surono: done to mod your map. I just lazy and do irc is better to improve map. ;3 Posting, Good Map =w=)b


the problem just about emphasizing sounds in long pattern but overall really good map esspesially in kiai, I love it. :3

Good Luck



Thank you so much Surono >w< You're pro <3

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Hi~!! ><

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat



sorry for short mod. I can't find problem anymore.
It's really Nice map already.
I hope this ranked soon. GL~~~! >w</
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Hi~!! ><

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat



sorry for short mod. I can't find problem anymore.
It's really Nice map already.
I hope this ranked soon. GL~~~! >w</


Thank you very much for your nice mod and your star! >w<


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Heyho o/


General
You could make better use of the volume settings. The intro and the calm parts between the kiais should be much quieter imo to give the kiais more impact.


Together
00:11:370 (40) - Here's not a clicking sound so a don fits better
00:17:542 (67) - kat instead to match the upcoming kat-only part?
00:28:342 (153,154,155) - A kkd pattern for the high pitch here?
00:42:913 (275) - This kat should be 1/4 later imo
01:55:770 (67,68,69) - Actually I hear a k k k d (1/2) pattern
02:01:256 (88,89,90) - ^

Nice variations and fun patterns during the kiai times. Nothing to say there, good luck with your map! :)
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Heyho o/


General
You could make better use of the volume settings. The intro and the calm parts between the kiais should be much quieter imo to give the kiais more impact.


Together
00:11:370 (40) - Here's not a clicking sound so a don fits better Fixed
00:17:542 (67) - kat instead to match the upcoming kat-only part? No because many k can cause confusing and tt can be annoying.
00:28:342 (153,154,155) - A kkd pattern for the high pitch here? Very nice! Fixed
00:42:913 (275) - This kat should be 1/4 later imo No, is better the stream to make very fun the song and to variate a bit.
01:55:770 (67,68,69) - Actually I hear a k k k d (1/2) pattern Fixed
02:01:256 (88,89,90) - ^ No because the note 90 have a low drum.

Nice variations and fun patterns during the kiai times. Nothing to say there, good luck with your map! :)



Thank you so much for you mod! Wait for my mod please ;;


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hi there
here's my m4m part
hope it will help

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00:29:113 (160) - imo this note should be k since it's similar to 00:29:027 (159). And 00:29:799 (166) should be d since pitch is decreased on it.
00:30:999 - if i were you i'd actually added a note here to fill a bit strange imo gap.
00:37:599 (229,230,231,232,233,234) - this seems to be inconsistent with all of the previous patterns you've used in this part. If this is for variety it still is really strange because it's the only one throughout all this part.
00:48:142 (318,319) - ctrl+g to follow the pitch correctly? In other reasons i don't understand why this should be a kd. Same for 00:49:513 (329,330). And this 00:50:885 (343,344) too for the same reason.
00:52:342 (356) - pitch is increased on this note, set is as k. Also on 00:53:113 (362) pitch is decreased so d is better.
00:59:114 (414,415) - ctrl+g for the same i've written before.
02:01:256 (88,89,90) - rhythm on these is not right. It should be smth like this.
Just a comment but i like this 02:40:856 (420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444) part since it reminds me of climbb's taiko maps :cries:

Dunno but all other seems to be fine i think.
Random lul. Actually i wanna your tokyo soda to be approved so do it pls :DDD
I will sprinkle it with starssssssss ImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImage
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hi there
here's my m4m part
hope it will help

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00:29:113 (160) - imo this note should be k since it's similar to 00:29:027 (159). And 00:29:799 (166) should be d since pitch is decreased on it. Fixed
00:30:999 - if i were you i'd actually added a note here to fill a bit strange imo gap. No. It's better as it is
00:37:599 (229,230,231,232,233,234) - this seems to be inconsistent with all of the previous patterns you've used in this part. If this is for variety it still is really strange because it's the only one throughout all this part. I really like it, sounds very nice with the song
00:48:142 (318,319) - ctrl+g to follow the pitch correctly? In other reasons i don't understand why this should be a kd. Same for 00:49:513 (329,330). And this 00:50:885 (343,344) too for the same reason. Fixed
00:52:342 (356) - pitch is increased on this note, set is as k. Also on 00:53:113 (362) pitch is decreased so d is better. Fixed
00:59:114 (414,415) - ctrl+g for the same i've written before. Fixed
02:01:256 (88,89,90) - rhythm on these is not right. It should be smth like this. No. It's better as it is
Just a comment but i like this 02:40:856 (420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444) part since it reminds me of climbb's taiko maps :cries: EDIT: I really like that part *O* This streamis really amazing and surprising! Thanks :3


Dunno but all other seems to be fine i think.
Random lul. Actually i wanna your tokyo soda to be approved so do it pls :DDD Thanks! I will try owo
I will sprinkle it with starssssssss ImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImage



Thank you so much for your mod Hitsu! >w<
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I really like that part ;www; This streamis really amazing and surprising! I will not change it sorry ;uu;


i said that i like it too xDDDD
don't worry

< random kudosu smbd please deny :DDD
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I really like that part ;www; This streamis really amazing and surprising! I will not change it sorry ;uu;


i said that i like it too xDDDD
don't worry


Wrong color XDDD Thanks :D


My knowledge in English is really bad sorry ;w;
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game rock wrote:

Wrong color XDDD Thanks :D


My knowledge in English is really bad sorry ;w;

aaa, np with that
i have to deal with many people irl with the same problem :x
can't say my knowledge is really good or smth, i make a lot of mistakes too
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Hola gemu, mi corazón. uwu ♥

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