Hashimoto Miyuki - Se-kirara (Short Ver.) · forum

Gamu

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Gamu 2011-07-08T23:56:58+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年9月30日 at 20:04:21

Artist: Hashimoto Miyuki
Title: Se-kirara (Short Ver.)
Source: Se-kirara
Tags: opening
BPM: 159
Filesize: 13220kb
Play Time: 01:22
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.93 stars, 107 notes)
Hard (4.9 stars, 200 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 296 notes)
Normal (3.88 stars, 118 notes)

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Se-kirara (Short Ver.)
Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Se-kirara (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st Ranked map.

Easy: Finished by me
Normal: Finished by me
Hard: Finished by me
Insane: Finished by me

Special Thanks
1: KSHR (Mod)
2: El1as (Timing Help)
3: kusano (Mod)
4: frost-b-spec (Mod)
5: merchat7 (Mod)
6: Aleks719 (Timing and Mod)
7: DarknessAngel (Mod)
8: hoLysoup (Mod)
9: Apricot (Mod)
10: Andruchon (Mod)
11: DragonSparta (Mod)
12: MoodyRPG (Mod)
13: Breeze (Mod)
14: whymeman (Audio and Video Mod)

Last edited by Gamu 2019-11-02T04:01:25+00:00, edited 56 times in total.

se-sukeEila

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se-sukeEila 2011-07-09T09:48:35+00:00

fight~

Gamu

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Gamu 2011-07-09T11:47:30+00:00

se-sukeEila wrote:
fight~

はやっ　ありがとー

kokono_tan

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kokono_tan 2011-07-09T14:14:37+00:00

みーつけたー

Gamu

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Gamu 2011-07-09T14:23:54+00:00

kokono_tan wrote:
みーつけたー

みつかってしもうた

ありりー

CuNha

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CuNha 2011-07-09T15:31:03+00:00

Gamu

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Gamu 2011-07-10T08:58:54+00:00

CuNha wrote:
8-)

ありがとー

Aeven

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Aeven 2011-07-10T11:53:55+00:00

nice map!

Gamu

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Gamu 2011-07-10T12:13:19+00:00

Avengersepia wrote:
nice map!

ありがとー

KSHR

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KSHR 2011-07-15T03:17:55+00:00

star~

IRC modding

Gamu

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Gamu 2011-07-15T10:28:25+00:00

KSHR wrote:
star~
IRC modding

ありがとうございます

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biwako 2011-07-19T13:53:48+00:00

Gamu

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Gamu 2011-07-19T14:00:38+00:00

biwako wrote:

Thank you~

Naichatta

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Naichatta 2011-07-20T00:41:27+00:00

<3 Aya

[General]
Please change a Tag：op → opening (opでは何も検索に引っかからなかったため)

スレッドのタイトルに(Short Ver.)が入ってないかも？
SBを入れないのならosbファイルは不要なので消してください

すべてのDiffのKiai timeが始まる位置を01:01:451にしてください (Insaneだけここから始まっているので

)

[Normal]
●00:49:560 (3) - add finish at beginning ?
●00:55:600 (1) - ^
●01:00:885 (5) - put the end of the slider on the red tick & add finish at slider end
●01:13:531 (3) - add finish at beginning ?
●01:19:760 (1) - new combo ?

[Hard]

●00:01:051 (3) - add finish at beginning ?
●00:02:561 (3) - ^
●00:10:300 (3) - ^
●00:29:364 (7) - add whistle at slider end
●00:42:198 (3) - add whistle at beginning
●00:43:520 (3) - add whistle at beginning ?
●01:01:451 (3) - add finish at beginning ?
●01:06:736 (1) - add whistle at beginning ?
●01:07:303 (2) - add finish at slider end ?
●01:09:190 (2) - add finish at beginning ?
●01:09:756 (4) - ^
●01:10:511 (1) - ^
●01:12:021 (4) - ^
●01:13:531 (3) - ^
●01:18:061 (2) - ^

[Insane]

●00:01:051 (1) - add finish at beginning ?
●00:02:561 (3) - ^
●00:10:300 (4) - ^
●00:36:914 (4) - add whistle at beginning
●01:07:303 (5) - remove finish, add whistle at beginning
●01:07:680 (6) - add finish at beginning
●01:09:190 (5) - add finish at beginning ?
●01:12:021 (8) - ^
●01:13:531 (1) - ^
●01:15:041 (1) - ^
●01:18:061 (4) - ^
●01:18:628 (6) - remove finish, add clap at beginning
●01:19:760 (1) - add clap at beginning
●01:26:158 (2) - remove finish, add clap at beginning
●01:26:536 (3) - remove finish, add whistle at beginning
●01:27:102 (4) - add finish at beginning ?

finishの音が大好きな人種なので気に入らなければばっさり切り捨ててください(・ω・)
star~

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Gamu 2011-07-20T03:41:48+00:00

kusano wrote:
<3 Aya

[General]
Please change a Tag：op → opening (opでは何も検索に引っかからなかったため) Fixed!

スレッドのタイトルに(Short Ver.)が入ってないかも？Fixed!　つけるの忘れてたｗ
SBを入れないのならosbファイルは不要なので消してくださいFixed!

すべてのDiffのKiai timeが始まる位置を01:01:451にしてください (Insaneだけここから始まっているので )　Fixed!　なんかずれてたｗ

[Normal]
●00:49:560 (3) - add finish at beginning ?　finish[/color] at beginning ?　Fixed!
●00:55:600 (1) - ^　Fixed!
●01:00:885 (5) - put the end of the slider on the red tick & add finish at slider end　Fixed! 　
●01:13:531 (3) - add finish at beginning ?　Fixed!
●01:19:760 (1) - new combo ?　Fixed!

[Hard]

●00:01:051 (3) - add finish at beginning ?　Fixed!
●00:02:561 (3) - ^　Fixed!
●00:10:300 (3) - ^　Fixed!
●00:29:364 (7) - add whistle at slider end　Fixed!　　
●00:42:198 (3) - add whistle at beginning　Fixed!
●00:43:520 (3) - add whistle at beginning ?　No Fix. sorry
●01:01:451 (3) - add finish at beginning ? Fixed!
●01:06:736 (1) - add whistle at beginning ? Fixed!
●01:07:303 (2) - add finish at slider end ? Fixed!
●01:09:190 (2) - add finish at beginning ? Fixed!
●01:09:756 (4) - ^ Fixed!
●01:10:511 (1) - ^ Fixed!
●01:12:021 (4) - ^ Fixed!
●01:13:531 (3) - ^ Fixed!
●01:18:061 (2) - ^ Fixed!

[Insane]

●00:01:051 (1) - add finish at beginning ? Fixed!
●00:02:561 (3) - ^ Fixed!
●00:10:300 (4) - ^ Fixed!
●00:36:914 (4) - add whistle at beginning Fixed!
●01:07:303 (5) - remove finish, add whistle at beginning Fixed!
●01:07:680 (6) - add finish at beginning Fixed!
●01:09:190 (5) - add finish at beginning ? Fixed!
●01:12:021 (8) - ^ Fixed!
●01:13:531 (1) - ^ Fixed!
●01:15:041 (1) - ^ Fixed!
●01:18:061 (4) - ^ Fixed!
●01:18:628 (6) - remove finish, add clap at beginning Fixed!
●01:19:760 (1) - add clap at beginning Fixed!
●01:26:158 (2) - remove finish, add clap at beginning Fixed!
●01:26:536 (3) - remove finish, add whistle at beginning Fixed!
●01:27:102 (4) - add finish at beginning ? Fixed!

finishの音が大好きな人種なので気に入らなければばっさり切り捨ててください(・ω・)　自分もfinishは結構好きですので　ほぼ全て修正しました:)
star~

Star and Mod Thank you~

frost-b-spec

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frost-b-spec 2011-07-21T04:56:11+00:00

hi XD

[Insane]
1.28.801(1) - more long end:1.35.218

[Normal]
0.00.108(x) - try this

0.40.123(3) - spacing
0.41.444(x) - try this

0.51.070(4) - more long end:0.51.448

[Easy]
0.15.963(x) - add note
0.24.456(1~3) - no good idea...change or delete.
0.55.034(1) - more long start:0.54.845
1.01.451(1,2) - delete and (2) slider start
1.14.664(2) - more long start:1.14.475

+star

Gamu

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Gamu 2011-07-22T10:12:12+00:00

frost-b-spec wrote:
hi XD

[Insane]
1.28.801(1) - more long end:1.35.218 Fixed!

[Normal]
0.00.108(x) - try this Fixed!

0.40.123(3) - spacing new combo add!
0.41.444(x) - try this Fixed!

0.51.070(4) - more long end:0.51.448 Fixed!

[Easy]
0.15.963(x) - add note Fixed!
0.24.456(1~3) - no good idea...change or delete. delete...
0.55.034(1) - more long start:0.54.845
this change
1.01.451(1,2) - delete and (2) slider start no. 1:02:018 - のClapがならないからです。
あと、tickを２にすればいいと思ったんですが　
それだとNomalよりもEasyのほうがコンボ数が多くなってしまいますので、これにしました。
1.14.664(2) - more long start:1.14.475　Fixed!
+star

Star and Mod Thank you~

merchat7

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merchat7 2011-07-25T07:04:25+00:00

Good map! Some suggestions...

[General]
- Disable letterbox during breaks (Song Setup > Storyboard > Misc toggles). Always disable when you have a video. Do this for all difficulties.
- Check AImod (ctrl+shift+a) and make sure all errors are intentional. There is a lot of spacing errors in Insane, make sure that they are either jumps or note that you moved so that it look better.

Almost perfect map, need some more modding from more experience modders and this should be ready for ranking. Starred!

Gamu

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Gamu 2011-07-25T08:25:40+00:00

merchat7 wrote:
Good map! Some suggestions...

[General]
- Disable letterbox during breaks (Song Setup > Storyboard > Misc toggles). Always disable when you have a video. Do this for all difficulties.
- Check AImod (ctrl+shift+a) and make sure all errors are intentional. There is a lot of spacing errors in Insane, make sure that they are either jumps or note that you moved so that it look better.

Almost perfect map, need some more modding from more experience modders and this should be ready for ranking. Starred!

Star and Mod Thank you~

Fixed!

Aleks719

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Aleks719 2011-07-27T10:04:51+00:00

Timing
Only one red section and imo :
BPM 159
Offset 126
fix green timing points after that too (especially kiai)

General
waw, fine

Insane
00:21:446 (5) - clap to the end?
00:48:805 (1) - whistle to the start
00:49:182 (2) - ^
00:49:559 (1) - add finish to the start

Hard
00:23:701 (1) - add finish
00:37:480 (1) - add finish to the start
00:48:616 (3,1) - i suggest to make that :

(3,4) - whistles

00:49:560 (1) - add finish
00:53:335 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it better without distance snap?

figure

01:04:471 (1) - remove nc

Normal
AR +1, OD -1
00:45:031 (3,4,5) - imo, will be better (or make slider instead of 2 notes) :

timeline

01:01:824 (1,2,3) - imo, will be better :

timeline

Easy
00:23:135 (2) - add reverse?
00:48:805 (6,1) - why you changed clap rhythm here? Middle + high ticks sounds good in this diff
01:01:829 (2) - imo, make slider (2) from 01:01:829 till 01:02:018 (short 1/2 slider)

Very good, star'd~

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