00:04:884 (4,5) - blanket
00:05:068 (5) - btw why not using 3 control points?
00:08:727 (1) - make straight placement - move to x230 y89
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/733781100:09:092 (2,5) - blanket
00:09:733 - missing note here? i guess you were mapping main lead here? so why not using something like this rhythm wise:
or
if you choose second option, then maybe stack 6 and 7
00:12:568 (2,3) - same here, you could add one more circle or just replace 00:12:568 (2) - with a slider because melody line starts 00:12:568 (2) - and ends 00:13:117 (1) -
00:14:580 - then 00:17:507 (1) - , 00:20:434 (1) - what's the idea of using different ds here? music doesn't change here, i would keep ds the same. on the other hand 00:26:288 (1) - this section brings more intensive pulse so making ds bigger is fine tho
00:07:263 (1) - and 00:22:629 (7) - overall usage of different shapes is fine, but i personally prefer second slider shape to be used previously (just looks better imo)
00:25:556 (4) - you should change ds here, maybe reduce 00:25:373 (2,3,4) - and from 00:25:556 (4) - keep the same? because you can clearly hear that percussion sixteenth notes start 00:25:556 (4) - also nc then
00:33:970 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - sorry but this visually looks bad, make it straight please
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/733788400:39:092 (3) - i suggest replacing with slider even tho she sings the same syllable, melody rises
00:48:605 (2) - could be better spaced according to 00:47:507 (2) - tail and 00:47:873 (3) -
00:49:336 (6) - this could be stacked with 00:47:873 (3) - then also you'll have to tweak other objects
(but this is less important, you maybe ignore this)00:53:727 (5,6,1) - spacing could be equal because she stars singing at 00:53:727 (5) -
00:54:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - could be better spaced according to 00:53:909 (6) -
00:58:300 (1,2) - blanket? i would move 00:58:849 (2) - to x487 y8
01:33:422 (9,1) - blanket
01:34:336 (3) - i would add a circle on sliders end, just like 00:14:580 (1,2) - because 01:34:702 - strong sound
01:39:092 (4,1) - blanket
01:40:007 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - same ^ already mentioned
02:04:337 (1,2,3) - why not perfect triangle here?▲
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/733797702:42:019 (8) - moving down a little would help i think (visually)
02:43:849 (1,2,3) - following 02:44:123 (2,3) - could be better placed to kind of continue the slider
02:50:434 (1) - not sure but maybe try replacing with linear slider? because guitar doesn't stop playing here
03:16:044 (1) - slider's end is offscreen