人生00:16:645 (4) - might be just me really, but wanna try shortening the slider to 00:17:045 - ? im not really sure why its this song and imo keeping it long enough for a slider tick to appear makes the song sound weird with that {chic} sound.
aight00:19:045 (3) - its just how i map things really, but imo sharp sliders are reserved for songs with enough energy. this song, does not. turn it curve please? it looks a lot more gentle
http://puu.sh/tGRyF/bed0f7f45d.jpg be gentle with a sick girl, okay.00:21:445 (2,3) - ctrl g, coz of pitch relevance. (2) is a lower pitch, and (3) is of a higher one. thus, i think its more appropriate.
kk00:23:845 (1) - i recommend you to place this at x290 y191, coz its right between the two notes. +pitch relevance. +looks cleaner.
http://puu.sh/tGREP/c7e4b24d4a.jpg idk why that coordinate but sure00:23:978 (1) - end the spinner here. its where the strings end. 00:28:445 -
sure00:33:445 (1,2,3) - i dont really understand why the DS is different. maybe coz of vocal emphasis on 3, but i recommend you to make the DS the same. like, sumin' like this?
http://puu.sh/tGRMw/8eb27a15db.jpg aight, let's see00:46:245 (1,2) - use the same slider/ copy paste either one. it looks cleaner that way. i recommend 00:46:245 (1) - this one coz its less angled.
oki doki00:50:645 (4) - 3 and 4 have louder piano sounds, so maybe youd wanna emphasize that? try x416 y130. its a perfect triangle with 00:49:845 (2,3,4) -
http://puu.sh/tGRWE/bffafa6c52.jpg sedap maz00:54:645 (4) - NC?
naah, it still in 1 section from the previos part.01:09:445 (2) - press ctrl+h and place it on 3's original location. imo its better looking when a section isnt so angle heavy.
http://puu.sh/tGS3G/b9fc89fe56.jpg sedap01:17:445 (4,5,1) - try to make this a perfect triangle.
naaah, ga pengen segitiga di sini01:19:845 (3,4,5) - either you make this the same DS, or you play with jumps. i recommend the jumps coz theres enough drums for it. try this:
http://puu.sh/tGSaQ/5e7376d8f4.jpg 01:20:245 (4) - is stacked with 01:21:445 (1) - sliderstart, and 01:20:645 (5) - is in 276:318
sedap maz01:28:645 (3) - give more DS? this is a emphasized note.
aight01:32:645 (4) - NC this to help indicate change of rhythm.
mm hmm01:51:845 (4,5,6) - imo its awkward to drop a 1/4 so suddenly. maybe its better to do this instead?
http://puu.sh/tGSpL/3742dcc5b8.jpg sure 02:13:845 (3,4,5) - make it a perfect triangle. i mean, 02:14:645 (5,6,7) - this is (kinda) one right? just follow 02:17:045 (4,5,6) - this one.
aye02:34:645 (5) - stack this? idk why its not on stacked with 4. is it for the vocals? :p
tau aja :p heehe03:02:245 (3,4,5,6) - try a perfect triangle/hexa whatever. itll look better i bet
udah ok ya bukannya? :thinking:03:03:045 (5,1) - +blanket fix pls
i can't blanket help03:15:845 (6) - try to center this more. 105:245
mm hmm03:25:845 (7,8) - yeah i think its too out of place for a stream. try doing this instead? more suitable imo
http://puu.sh/tGSPq/5af64cc65e.jpg noice03:40:645 (5) - NC, coz new section. plus, try placing it on x204 y164 instead. more sense of emphasis.
alright aight03:55:845 (3,5,7) - wanna try to NC? coz its basically the same piano keys repeating.
noice03:59:845 (3,5) - same here
kawaii04:06:645 (6) - NC coz of new sound. so its less of a surprise.
ah ha04:09:245 (5) - because of emphasized note, try stacking this in 04:09:445 (6) - imo more suitable than a regular stream. feels suppressed and thats no good w
ya04:13:045 - there is a strong beat here. emphasize it with a clickable object pls. try doing this w
http://puu.sh/tGT7P/ffbf2dc69d.jpg gg04:15:845 (6) - NC coz new vocals section
aight04:18:645 (3) - NC to indicate new jump section
sure04:23:045 (5,6,7) - its up to you to decide, but i suggest you do this. because its the end of the strong part of the song. and its a good way to end it. plus, 5 has an emphasized note so giving it a same DS stream would make it seem lackluster. also, NC it for aesthetic issues ;p
yhanks for da buff04:39:845 - :O
04:44:645 (4) - slightly bothers me coz its not facing upwards coz of pitch relevance.
there you go.04:47:445 (2) - NC coz new piano.
aight04:51:445 (5) - first up, extend this to a 1/2. idk why its 1/4 but its not pretty :p and NC this to indicate new section of the song. plus combo feels too long maybe?
sure but not nc04:52:045 (6,7) - second up, this has emphasized notes. so while HLing these two, place em on 272:164. itll give these two more impact.
uh huh, sure sure04:52:645 (1) - plus the new flow would make hitting this feel more good.
there you go05:03:845 (4) - NC, the combo feels too long imo
naah, it's fine05:10:245 (5) - this should be a 1/4. i suggest you try changing it to this. i HL'd the other notes so itll be easier for you to identify which part am i talking about.
http://puu.sh/tGTEd/2692a3ddda.jpg nice buff05:16:645 (5) - NC coz hard section incoming; need a indicator.
uh huh, sure.05:30:245 (8) - NC coz finish. +combo feels long? NC can be used to emphasize imo. (which is why my map is NC clusterfk)
okiii06:10:245 (1) - theres a piano note here. you should make it clickable.
http://puu.sh/tGTMN/019aedd0c9.jpg weeeee