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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sonntag, 29. Oktober 2017 at 22:37:13

Artist: cYsmix
Title: pumpkins!
Source: osu!
Tags: featured halloween spooky creepy spook ghosts ghost pumpkin taikonator3000 taikonator
BPM: 120
Filesize: 4762kb
Play Time: 01:42
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Download: cYsmix - pumpkins!
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VERY LATE HALLOWEEN MAP

Or very early?
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ok, let's give it a try

spoopiest spoop this year :^)
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BG size is too high as 2134x1200, I've resized it to 1920x1080 for you: click

The mp3 has a bitrate of 320kbps. I'm not sure whether or not you need to lower it to 192kbps in this case, as cYsmix is a featured artist, however the song isn't shown in the featured songs list. Therefore, you might also need to leave the source blank. I really don't know how non-featured songs by featured artist are treated, though, so I'll leave this to you.



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00:50:617 (29) - I think D finish could work better, as it keeps the bell pattern consistent. alternatively, you could change 00:41:617 (12) - to kat; which would make all strong bell sounds stand out as kat finish like you did in the other diffs during the kiai

00:53:617 (35) - not sure why you mapped this tick in futsuu while you left it out in muzu and mapped 00:53:867 - instead, generally I feel the latter one sounds better being mapped compared to the former



muzu!

00:28:117 (39,40) - considering the pitch of the violin, ctrl+g would make the pattern sound better



oni!

00:07:867 (10,11) - this could be ctrl+g'd to capture the background noise as kat and the contrast in violin pitch as don

00:28:867 (56,57) - ctrl+g, same deal as above regarding pitch

01:13:023 (10) - I feel like this note sounds and plays better as a don, introducing 01:28:786 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - more smoothly, which is also dkkddk, excluding the 1/8 note

01:21:159 (37) - if you apply above suggestion, then change this to kat too to maintain the abekobe effect


Not much to say, very solid set. Hope you can get it qual'd on Halloween.

Good luck!
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Image Dimensions exceed the maximum! Im not sure whether its allowed because its an official osu song or not. If its not allowed you should scale it down :3

Although cysmix is a featured artist, this is not a featured song per se, and i believe the song should have a smaller bitrate in accordance to it.

Also why is "anakin" and "skypumpkin" in the tags. Shouldnt be really needed, as its not directly related to halloween as this map is. I suggest to remove them.


Futsuu
00:31:117 (32,33,34) - 00:34:867 (39,40,41,42) - I praise how you are foreshadowing the kiai starting by focussing on something different from the entire section!

00:47:367 (22) - Id suggest this note to be at 00:47:867 - instead, theres a much more audible sound to be heard there. Additionally, it would lead into the finisher giving it more emphasis.

01:30:184 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Here the violins are mapped completely as kat ; whereas at 01:13:913 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - the violins are only mapped after the 2nd 2-let for some reason. Id make them both consistent OR if you like to have some difficulty progression, atleast make 01:17:218 (12) - a kat to keep the violins all as k c:


Muzukashii

01:05:867 (92) - shift this note over to 01:05:617 - ? Theres a rather strong snare here, and considering that you follow the drums really hard in upcoming patterns, it would be a better idea to take the snare over the trumpet here imo.


Oni

00:07:867 (10,11) - invert colors to match plucking to a kat and the violins pitch as a don? Same goes for 00:28:867 (56,57) -

Love the Progression post-kiai, especially the near-abekobe c:


Pretty solid mapset you got there!
Wish you the best of luck!
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shit did I not post the reply

I applied most things
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hey you've got +12sp now, if you don't get this qualified on halloween I'll be disappointed in you :^)
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I think the first offset should be a bit earlier, the notes seem coming a bit late for me, maybe you should move the first offset back to 5-6 ms.


oni!



muzukashii!

  • 00:07:367 (6) - How about moving this to 00:06:867 - here? It will match up based on rhythm with the other sections until the kiai.

Couldn't find anything on futsuu!, you may call me back.
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futsuu!

00:58:617 (45) - d instead? The crescendo snare rising up, set it apart from 00:59:117 (46)

muzukashii!

01:00:992 - add a note for the snare triplets?
01:07:992 (102) - since 01:06:742 (96) is the triplet for the start of the drumroll then this note should be at 01:07:742 where the next drumroll begins. I mean while you could have ended that section with that triplet, I think it also makes sense for the triplet to be earlier
01:11:625 (2,3,4) - d k k instead of d d k? Also given how 01:11:879 (3) is the highest pitch of them all
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frukoyurdakul wrote:
Hi there.


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I think the first offset should be a bit earlier, the notes seem coming a bit late for me, maybe you should move the first offset back to 5-6 ms. sounds fine to me right now?


oni!

  • 00:18:117 (32,34) - The bell sounds are the same, I recommend don finishers on both. changed
  • 00:50:617 (58,59,60,61,62) - I recommend a kkkkk here. On this section you emphasized the 1/8 snare with that pattern, referring to 00:42:617 - 00:58:617 - 01:06:617 - these sections. I think the bells stand out more anyway, and highlighting them by not having this kkkkk but kdddk (kats for the bells) makes more sense


muzukashii!

  • 00:07:367 (6) - How about moving this to 00:06:867 - here? It will match up based on rhythm with the other sections until the kiai. removed instead

Couldn't find anything on futsuu!, you may call me back.


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futsuu!

00:58:617 (45) - d instead? The crescendo snare rising up, set it apart from 00:59:117 (46) changed all versions of this

muzukashii!

01:00:992 - add a note for the snare triplets? doesn't fit structure imo
01:07:992 (102) - since 01:06:742 (96) is the triplet for the start of the drumroll then this note should be at 01:07:742 where the next drumroll begins. I mean while you could have ended that section with that triplet, I think it also makes sense for the triplet to be earlier other instruments do 1/4 on this spot as well, but not before. I think this ends the kiai in a nicer way.
01:11:625 (2,3,4) - d k k instead of d d k? Also given how 01:11:879 (3) is the highest pitch of them all changed


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spooky 😨 creepy 💀 spook 😱 ghosts 👻👻 ghost 👻 pumpkin 🎃
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