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Fun Map! loved the use of long notes through out! Good job!
Topic Starter
Thanks : DShigitora wrote:
Fun Map! loved the use of long notes through out! Good job!
Ok there's something I'm gonna pointed out before I'm modding this. It seems this doesn't have a proper mapset. And also clearly state where is the Hard/HD and wheres the Insane/MX.
Just passing by here. You still need lower diffs like NM and/or EZ if you want to rank this. EZ is optional, but the lowest difficulty must be less than 2*.
First of all, as MEGA stated, you will need an EZ and NM diff in order for this to be ranked. Pointing it out here.
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HD
00:05:496 (5496|3) - this should extend to 00:06:052 -
00:06:607 (6607|3) - here to 00:07:163 -
ok these sliders tick me off so here I go
00:07:533 (7533|2) - extend to 00:08:089 -
00:08:459 (8459|1) - extend to 00:09:015 -
00:09:570 (9570|1) - extend to 00:10:126 -
00:11:422 - from this part on, apply the same extensions for the LNs
00:17:348 - same here
00:19:015 - missing an important LN here
00:21:977 - here too
00:49:107 (49107|2) - this starts at 00:49:015 -
00:57:348 (57348|2) - this should be a split LN. One LN at 00:57:348 - , another at 00:57:440 -
00:59:940 - missing piano note
01:02:903 - missing note here
01:02:903 - here too lol
01:04:385 - here too
01:05:866 - here toooooooooooo
01:07:348 - HERE TOO
01:08:829 - Tw T
01:33:459 (93459|3) - delete this note. also, you cannot have 3 of the same sound (whistle, finish, clap) on one note. It has to be on seperate notes. This part does not warrant a triple so just delete that and shift your whistle on 1 and clap on 2.
01:41:977 - add one note at 2
01:43:459 - add one note at 3
01:44:940 - add one note at 4
01:46:237 - LN problem here too, apply as before
00:06:607 (6607|3) - here to 00:07:163 -
ok these sliders tick me off so here I go
00:07:533 (7533|2) - extend to 00:08:089 -
00:08:459 (8459|1) - extend to 00:09:015 -
00:09:570 (9570|1) - extend to 00:10:126 -
00:11:422 - from this part on, apply the same extensions for the LNs
00:17:348 - same here
00:19:015 - missing an important LN here
00:21:977 - here too
00:49:107 (49107|2) - this starts at 00:49:015 -
00:57:348 (57348|2) - this should be a split LN. One LN at 00:57:348 - , another at 00:57:440 -
00:59:940 - missing piano note
01:02:903 - missing note here
01:02:903 - here too lol
01:04:385 - here too
01:05:866 - here toooooooooooo
01:07:348 - HERE TOO
01:08:829 - Tw T
01:33:459 (93459|3) - delete this note. also, you cannot have 3 of the same sound (whistle, finish, clap) on one note. It has to be on seperate notes. This part does not warrant a triple so just delete that and shift your whistle on 1 and clap on 2.
01:41:977 - add one note at 2
01:43:459 - add one note at 3
01:44:940 - add one note at 4
01:46:237 - LN problem here too, apply as before
MX
00:05:496 - LN problems, same as HD, check them.
00:15:866 (15866|2,16052|3,16052|0,16052|1,16237|2,16237|3,16329|0,16422|1,16422|2,16515|3,16607|0,16607|1,16700|2,16792|3,16792|1,16792|0) - so this part is very wrong here. do it smth like this
00:17:348 - same LN extension problems as HD
00:19:015 - missing an important LN here
00:21:977 - here too
00:28:089 (28089|2,28181|1,28181|2,28181|3,28366|1,28459|0,28459|3,28459|1) - no please. this is MX. 00:28:089 (28089|2) - move to 1. 00:28:366 (28366|1) - move to 3
00:39:570 (39570|1,39663|2) - ctrl+h this
00:45:866 (45866|1,45959|3) - ctrl+j this
00:49:200 - LN on 1 to 00:49:292 -
00:50:311 (50311|2,50403|3) - ew no. 00:50:403 (50403|3) - end this at 00:50:496 -
00:53:274 (53274|2) - to 4 plz
00:57:996 (57996|3) - end this at 00:58:089 -
Please do note you are making an MX, not an SC or an SHD etc.
00:59:940 - missing piano note
01:02:903 - missing note here
01:02:903 - here too lol
01:04:385 - here too
01:05:866 - here toooooooooooo
01:07:348 - HERE TOO
01:08:829 - Tw T
01:11:422 - this is a triple too
01:12:348 (72348|0,72348|2,72348|1,72626|1,72626|3,72626|0,72903|3,72903|1,73089|2,73089|0,73089|3) - where did the LNs come from?!?!
01:12:903 - this is also a triple.
01:14:385 - this is ALSO a triple.
01:15:311 (75311|1,75403|3,75465|2,75527|1,75589|0) - this is wrong. it should be like this
01:30:866 (90866|0) - to 4 plz
01:33:459 (93459|2) - delete this
01:40:496 (100496|2) - delete this
01:45:311 (105311|2) - delete this
01:46:237 - same LN issues here
01:49:940 (109940|3,110033|1) - ctrl+j this
00:15:866 (15866|2,16052|3,16052|0,16052|1,16237|2,16237|3,16329|0,16422|1,16422|2,16515|3,16607|0,16607|1,16700|2,16792|3,16792|1,16792|0) - so this part is very wrong here. do it smth like this
00:17:348 - same LN extension problems as HD
00:19:015 - missing an important LN here
00:21:977 - here too
00:28:089 (28089|2,28181|1,28181|2,28181|3,28366|1,28459|0,28459|3,28459|1) - no please. this is MX. 00:28:089 (28089|2) - move to 1. 00:28:366 (28366|1) - move to 3
00:39:570 (39570|1,39663|2) - ctrl+h this
00:45:866 (45866|1,45959|3) - ctrl+j this
00:49:200 - LN on 1 to 00:49:292 -
00:50:311 (50311|2,50403|3) - ew no. 00:50:403 (50403|3) - end this at 00:50:496 -
00:53:274 (53274|2) - to 4 plz
00:57:996 (57996|3) - end this at 00:58:089 -
Please do note you are making an MX, not an SC or an SHD etc.
00:59:940 - missing piano note
01:02:903 - missing note here
01:02:903 - here too lol
01:04:385 - here too
01:05:866 - here toooooooooooo
01:07:348 - HERE TOO
01:08:829 - Tw T
01:11:422 - this is a triple too
01:12:348 (72348|0,72348|2,72348|1,72626|1,72626|3,72626|0,72903|3,72903|1,73089|2,73089|0,73089|3) - where did the LNs come from?!?!
01:12:903 - this is also a triple.
01:14:385 - this is ALSO a triple.
01:15:311 (75311|1,75403|3,75465|2,75527|1,75589|0) - this is wrong. it should be like this
01:30:866 (90866|0) - to 4 plz
01:33:459 (93459|2) - delete this
01:40:496 (100496|2) - delete this
01:45:311 (105311|2) - delete this
01:46:237 - same LN issues here
01:49:940 (109940|3,110033|1) - ctrl+j this
All the best for this. You will need to check your diffs a few more times and also make an EZ and NM.
you asked about NM GD, so here it is http://puu.sh/te6oh/c44fbf7d9e.rar
also, it's lower than 2*, so you don't need EZ diff
also, it's lower than 2*, so you don't need EZ diff
Topic Starter
Thank you ^^Mage wrote:
you asked about NM GD, so here it is http://puu.sh/te6oh/c44fbf7d9e.rar
also, it's lower than 2*, so you don't need EZ diff
hello
Mage's Dipping
00:17:903 - missing note i think
01:22:718 - wrong hitsound
01:22:718 - wrong hitsound
both suggestions accepted, thank youSuu is my waifu wrote:
helloMage's Dipping00:17:903 - missing note i think
01:22:718 - wrong hitsound
upd: http://puu.sh/tffFf/92f5bb011b.rar
Mod from my modding queue
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Atlantis
I like the difficulty names but I don't think they're rankable. I'll have to be fact checked on this though, just saying it because if it was allowed, I'm sure it'd be a lot more common than it currently is (can't think of any ranked examples).
00:06:237 (6237|1,6422|2,6607|0) - Consider changing these and similar patterns that match context to something like this? http://i.imgur.com/r53GNrn.png Matches the tone better
00:14:385 (14385|2) - Why does this end prematurely? No sound indicating that it should. I think it looks better shorter but it just doesn't make sense.
00:15:866 (15866|2,16052|3,16052|0,16052|1,16237|3,16329|0,16329|1,16422|2,16515|3,16607|0,16607|1,16700|2,16792|0,16792|3,16792|1) - No fix, this section is just sweet as hell
00:19:477 (19477|1,19477|3) - shouldn't be a triple
00:22:440 (22440|1) - ^
00:24:015 (24015|1,24015|3,24015|2,24015|0) - Only glaring red mark on this map imo. Delete and remap it with maybe a triple or something. It's not timed to anything. (If you're timing the ends of the LNs with the notes then don't do that. Ever.)
00:35:126 (35126|2) - Timed slightly too early. Changed to 1/8 and hit K and that sounded good to me.
00:35:496 (35496|0,35496|1) - Sound goes a little longer. Feels weird to change though, up to you.
00:47:163 (47163|3,47163|0,47163|2,47440|2,47440|0,47440|1,47718|3,47718|1,47718|2) - These are a nightmare to play. At least lengthen the shortest LNs to the length of the middle ones.
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Atlantis
I like the difficulty names but I don't think they're rankable. I'll have to be fact checked on this though, just saying it because if it was allowed, I'm sure it'd be a lot more common than it currently is (can't think of any ranked examples).
00:06:237 (6237|1,6422|2,6607|0) - Consider changing these and similar patterns that match context to something like this? http://i.imgur.com/r53GNrn.png Matches the tone better
00:14:385 (14385|2) - Why does this end prematurely? No sound indicating that it should. I think it looks better shorter but it just doesn't make sense.
00:15:866 (15866|2,16052|3,16052|0,16052|1,16237|3,16329|0,16329|1,16422|2,16515|3,16607|0,16607|1,16700|2,16792|0,16792|3,16792|1) - No fix, this section is just sweet as hell
00:19:477 (19477|1,19477|3) - shouldn't be a triple
00:22:440 (22440|1) - ^
00:24:015 (24015|1,24015|3,24015|2,24015|0) - Only glaring red mark on this map imo. Delete and remap it with maybe a triple or something. It's not timed to anything. (If you're timing the ends of the LNs with the notes then don't do that. Ever.)
00:35:126 (35126|2) - Timed slightly too early. Changed to 1/8 and hit K and that sounded good to me.
00:35:496 (35496|0,35496|1) - Sound goes a little longer. Feels weird to change though, up to you.
00:47:163 (47163|3,47163|0,47163|2,47440|2,47440|0,47440|1,47718|3,47718|1,47718|2) - These are a nightmare to play. At least lengthen the shortest LNs to the length of the middle ones.
Hey~ MD24 , from my queue
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Mage's Dipping
Diving
Atlantis
Nice song and I like the BG~
GOOD LUCK
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- 00:28:089 - I know it's NM but it's necessary to catch this cuz you catch same drum here 00:27:626 (27626|0) - why not there
- 00:28:366 - 00:28:552 - same
- 00:46:237 - this beat you should add a note cuz you basically catch drum beat this whole part
- 01:45:681 - delete a note cuz here is not so heavy with 01:45:496 -
- 00:06:052 - miss a note?
- 00:07:903 - here? I think it better to same rhythm with NM, check it
- 00:09:015 - 00:09:940 - 00:11:977 - 00:12:903 - 00:17:903 - 00:18:829 - and so on, the same
- 00:24:015 - you can hear that the drum is same heavy with 00:22:718 - ,so one is 3 notes, the other is 2?
- 00:37:163 (37163|3) - I suggest you to make this to note and make 00:37:255 (37255|1) - to LN cuz this note 00:37:255 (37255|1) - it's a noisy buzz than 00:37:163 (37163|3) -
- 00:39:848 - 00:39:940 - add a note to reflect the beat
- 00:54:940 (54940|1,55033|2,55126|0,55218|3) - I think there is 1/3 not 1/4
- 00:56:607 (56607|0) - this note position is different with NM, check it
- 01:21:329 (81329|0) - what is this note means? If it's drum, is not cuz there have no beat sound, if it's music you should catch all why only this one?
- 00:06:977 - same problem with HD
- 00:44:632 (44632|2,44694|0,44755|2,44817|1) - I do not sure if it's right position for these notes
- 01:20:311 (80311|1) - move to col [3] for batter comfort
- 01:21:237 - how about make a LN design here?
- 01:31:052 (91052|1) - move to col [1] for better balance
- 01:40:681 (100681|1) - move to col [3]
- 01:42:718 (102718|1,102718|2) - move this to col [34]
Nice song and I like the BG~
GOOD LUCK
Everything was fixed, thanks Stan_Stan wrote:
Hey~ MD24 , from my queue
|1|2|3|4|Nice song and I like the BG~Mage's Dipping
- 00:28:089 - I know it's NM but it's necessary to catch this cuz you catch same drum here 00:27:626 (27626|0) - why not there
- 00:28:366 - 00:28:552 - same
- 00:46:237 - this beat you should add a note cuz you basically catch drum beat this whole part
- 01:45:681 - delete a note cuz here is not so heavy with 01:45:496 -
GOOD LUCK
upd: http://puu.sh/tjMkl/90e45dc796.rar
Hola!
M4M request
Bonito mapa... haré lo que pueda.
bueno... el mapa esta muy bueno... ahi te dejo sugerencias... tomarlas o dejarlas es cosa tuya :V
M4M request
Bonito mapa... haré lo que pueda.
Mage's Dipping NM
00:35:311 -
Sugerencia
01:34:200 -
Sugerencia
01:36:329 -
Sugerencia
01:37:811 -
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Sugerencia
01:34:200 -
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01:36:329 -
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01:37:811 -
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Diving HD
01:19:107 - que sean dobles
01:19:477 - ^
01:44:200 - ^
01:44:477 - ^
01:44:755 - ^
01:45:681 -
Sugerencia
01:19:477 - ^
01:44:200 - ^
01:44:477 - ^
01:44:755 - ^
01:45:681 -
Sugerencia
Atlantis MX
00:34:200 -
Sugerencia
00:37:255 -
Sugerencia | Cambia las posiciones
00:58:089 -
Sugerencia
01:09:940 - agrega una nota en la columna 2 o 3
01:50:403 -
Sugerencia
Sugerencia
00:37:255 -
Sugerencia | Cambia las posiciones
00:58:089 -
Sugerencia
01:09:940 - agrega una nota en la columna 2 o 3
01:50:403 -
Sugerencia
bueno... el mapa esta muy bueno... ahi te dejo sugerencias... tomarlas o dejarlas es cosa tuya :V
Topic Starter
OK, puede que aplique unas :sTakeshi Hiroshi wrote:
bueno... el mapa esta muy bueno... ahi te dejo sugerencias... tomarlas o dejarlas es cosa tuya :V
Everything accepted, thank youTakeshi Hiroshi wrote:
Hola! PrivetMage's Dipping NM00:35:311 -
Sugerencia
01:34:200 -
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01:36:329 -
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01:37:811 -
Sugerencia
upd: http://puu.sh/tkRYf/e15724ba1d.rar
From my NM/M4M queue.
Columns 4K 0|1|2|3
General
MP3: PASS
BG: PASS
Video: PASS
Diff.Spread: PASS?
HP & OD: MISS
Hitsound Volume: MISS
Metadata: PASS
Widescreen Support: MISS
AiMod Things: PASS
BG: PASS
Video: PASS
- Not needed.
Diff.Spread: PASS?
- Yeah i think is good. I have doubts about not having an Insane Difficulty, that's all.
HP & OD: MISS
- It could be better, MX isn't Insane diff. and his HP is too high...so:
- NM: OD=6 -> OD=6.5
- MX: HP=9 -> HP=8.5
Hitsound Volume: MISS
- There many parts that have 20% volume only, The hitsounds must to be audible. Fix these parts with 50% or even more. (except the calm part)
Metadata: PASS
Widescreen Support: MISS
- Uncheck Widescreen Support on Diving and Mage's Dipping.
AiMod Things: PASS
Mod!
[Mage's Dipping]
[Diving]
[Atlantis]
00:15:496 - Add a note in |3| for that whistle sound.
00:56:792 and 00:57:533 - Both sounds are almost identical, so: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7046685 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7046692
01:15:311 - Add a note in |2|. I think fits better that way.
01:51:237 (111237|3,111422|2) - I think that First Longnote doesn't reflect the sound very good... You can try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7046750 <- Fits better in my opinion.
00:56:792 and 00:57:533 - Both sounds are almost identical, so: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7046685 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7046692
01:15:311 - Add a note in |2|. I think fits better that way.
01:51:237 (111237|3,111422|2) - I think that First Longnote doesn't reflect the sound very good... You can try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7046750 <- Fits better in my opinion.
[Diving]
00:13:829 (13829|0,14015|2,14200|1) - No entiendo muy bien por que usas Longnotes aca. Reemplazalos con Notas.
00:15:496 - Agrega una nota por ese sonido whistle.
00:19:477 (19477|3,19477|0,19755|3,19755|1) - ...Proba esto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7046842
00:22:440 (22440|0,22440|3,22718|0,22718|2) - ^lo mismo que antes, pero para la izquierda. Y 00:22:903 (22903|1,23089|0) - Acomodalas mejor si es que cambias lo que dije.
00:36:792 (36792|0,36792|3,36977|0) - Los Longnotes del costado izquierdo estan bien para ese sonido, pero no entiendo muy bien porque es un Longnote: 00:36:792 (36792|3). Deberia ser nota simple para el drum.
00:39:755 (39755|0,39848|0) - Es un jack de repente... Deberias mover 00:39:848 (39848|0) - a la columna |2|.
00:42:718 (42718|0,42718|3,42903|0) - Lo mismo que antes, los Longnotes en |0| estan bien, pero el que esta en |3| debe ser nota.
00:54:570 (54570|0,54570|3,54755|0) - ^
01:15:589 (75589|0,75774|0,75959|0) - Movelas a |2|. Hay demasiado espacio libre en esa columna.
01:18:274 (78274|2) - a |3| y 01:18:552 (78552|1) - a |0|.
01:29:570 (89570|0,89755|0,89940|0) - No me gusta mucho este stack trata de acomodar mejor las notas.
01:41:977 (101977|3,101977|1,101977|0,102163|3) - Igual que 00:54:570 ...
01:45:311 (105311|0,105311|2,105311|3,105496|0,105496|3,105681|0,105681|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047021 Mucho mas facil y encaja mejor.
01:51:237 (111237|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047053
00:15:496 - Agrega una nota por ese sonido whistle.
00:19:477 (19477|3,19477|0,19755|3,19755|1) - ...Proba esto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7046842
00:22:440 (22440|0,22440|3,22718|0,22718|2) - ^lo mismo que antes, pero para la izquierda. Y 00:22:903 (22903|1,23089|0) - Acomodalas mejor si es que cambias lo que dije.
00:36:792 (36792|0,36792|3,36977|0) - Los Longnotes del costado izquierdo estan bien para ese sonido, pero no entiendo muy bien porque es un Longnote: 00:36:792 (36792|3). Deberia ser nota simple para el drum.
00:39:755 (39755|0,39848|0) - Es un jack de repente... Deberias mover 00:39:848 (39848|0) - a la columna |2|.
00:42:718 (42718|0,42718|3,42903|0) - Lo mismo que antes, los Longnotes en |0| estan bien, pero el que esta en |3| debe ser nota.
00:54:570 (54570|0,54570|3,54755|0) - ^
01:15:589 (75589|0,75774|0,75959|0) - Movelas a |2|. Hay demasiado espacio libre en esa columna.
01:18:274 (78274|2) - a |3| y 01:18:552 (78552|1) - a |0|.
01:29:570 (89570|0,89755|0,89940|0) - No me gusta mucho este stack trata de acomodar mejor las notas.
01:41:977 (101977|3,101977|1,101977|0,102163|3) - Igual que 00:54:570 ...
01:45:311 (105311|0,105311|2,105311|3,105496|0,105496|3,105681|0,105681|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047021 Mucho mas facil y encaja mejor.
01:51:237 (111237|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047053
[Atlantis]
Esta dificultad podria volverse mas dificil (y de hecho eso quiero :3), solo lo digo antes de empezar! xD
00:15:496 - Agregar nota por ese sonido whistle.
00:19:200 (19200|0,19200|1,19477|3,19477|0,19755|1,19755|3) - Podrias probar lo que dije en HD... |0|1| -> |1|2| -> |2|3|
00:22:163 (22163|2,22163|3,22440|3,22440|0,22718|0,22718|2) - ^
00:24:570 (24570|3,24755|1,24940|2,25126|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047094 A la derecha esta HD diff. No se repite? Deberia ser consistente.
00:36:792 (36792|1,36792|3,36792|0,36977|0,36977|3,37163|3) - A ver, Creo que ahora usas 2 LNs para ese sonido. Asi que 00:36:792 (36792|1) - Deberia ser una nota simple. Y 00:37:163 (37163|3) - Deberia acomodarse en otra columna ya que representa otro sonido distinto del anterior, movela a |2|...
00:37:163 (37163|3,37255|1,37348|2,37440|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047146 A la derecha esta HD diff. No se que sonido querias representar con ese LN (synth o vocal). Otra vez, consistencia.
00:39:015 (39015|2,39107|3) - No creo que esto sea bueno, es algo confuso, proba esto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047170
00:42:718 (42718|1,42718|2) - Borra una de estas notas, hay una de mas.
00:43:089 (43089|3) - Si podes movela a otra columna para que se vea distinta de los sonidos anteriores.
00:45:218 (45218|1) - Creo que para el vocal? pero no lo sigue por completo, ademas 00:45:126 (45126|0,45126|2,45126|3,45218|1,45496|2,45496|0,45681|1,45681|0,45681|3,45774|2,45866|3,45959|1,46052|2,46052|3,46052|0,46237|1,46237|3) - Hay algunas notas que no son del todo correctas, proba esto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047254
Para aclarar, tuve que borrar algunas notas para que no sea un jack-fest (lol). Pero los snares ahora si se destacan mejor, la LN es por el vocal.
00:47:163 (47163|3) - Para que sea mas comodo, tiene que terminar en 00:47:440.
00:49:015 (49015|3,49107|2) - En HD estas dos notas eran una sola Longnote. Cambialas por LN.
00:51:607 (51607|0,51607|1,51700|3,51700|2) - Estas notas podrian ser Doublejacks. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047302
00:53:644 (53644|0) - Reemplaza esta LN por una nota simple.
00:54:570 (54570|2,54570|1) - Borra una, hay una nota de mas.
00:54:940 (54940|3) - Lo mismo sobre cambiar de columna por que es otro sonido.
00:55:064 (55064|2,55187|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047340
00:56:052 (56052|2,56052|3,56052|1,56329|3,56329|1,56329|0,56607|3,56607|2,56607|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047348 Las Longnotes son algo inconsistentes con la dificultad anterior...
Para el kiai, cuando usas las 4 Longnotes trata de usar rolls/escaleras quedan mucho mejor.
01:24:848 (84848|2,84940|1) - Intercambialas de posicion. (LN a |1| y nota a |2|)
01:45:681 (105681|3,105681|0) - No son Longnotes, cambialas por notas a ambas.
01:51:237 (111237|1,111329|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047436 J a c k
Hay varias diferencias de snaps entre esta dificultad y HD. Deberias arreglar eso.
00:15:496 - Agregar nota por ese sonido whistle.
00:19:200 (19200|0,19200|1,19477|3,19477|0,19755|1,19755|3) - Podrias probar lo que dije en HD... |0|1| -> |1|2| -> |2|3|
00:22:163 (22163|2,22163|3,22440|3,22440|0,22718|0,22718|2) - ^
00:24:570 (24570|3,24755|1,24940|2,25126|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047094 A la derecha esta HD diff. No se repite? Deberia ser consistente.
00:36:792 (36792|1,36792|3,36792|0,36977|0,36977|3,37163|3) - A ver, Creo que ahora usas 2 LNs para ese sonido. Asi que 00:36:792 (36792|1) - Deberia ser una nota simple. Y 00:37:163 (37163|3) - Deberia acomodarse en otra columna ya que representa otro sonido distinto del anterior, movela a |2|...
00:37:163 (37163|3,37255|1,37348|2,37440|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047146 A la derecha esta HD diff. No se que sonido querias representar con ese LN (synth o vocal). Otra vez, consistencia.
00:39:015 (39015|2,39107|3) - No creo que esto sea bueno, es algo confuso, proba esto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047170
00:42:718 (42718|1,42718|2) - Borra una de estas notas, hay una de mas.
00:43:089 (43089|3) - Si podes movela a otra columna para que se vea distinta de los sonidos anteriores.
00:45:218 (45218|1) - Creo que para el vocal? pero no lo sigue por completo, ademas 00:45:126 (45126|0,45126|2,45126|3,45218|1,45496|2,45496|0,45681|1,45681|0,45681|3,45774|2,45866|3,45959|1,46052|2,46052|3,46052|0,46237|1,46237|3) - Hay algunas notas que no son del todo correctas, proba esto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047254
Para aclarar, tuve que borrar algunas notas para que no sea un jack-fest (lol). Pero los snares ahora si se destacan mejor, la LN es por el vocal.
00:47:163 (47163|3) - Para que sea mas comodo, tiene que terminar en 00:47:440.
00:49:015 (49015|3,49107|2) - En HD estas dos notas eran una sola Longnote. Cambialas por LN.
00:51:607 (51607|0,51607|1,51700|3,51700|2) - Estas notas podrian ser Doublejacks. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047302
00:53:644 (53644|0) - Reemplaza esta LN por una nota simple.
00:54:570 (54570|2,54570|1) - Borra una, hay una nota de mas.
00:54:940 (54940|3) - Lo mismo sobre cambiar de columna por que es otro sonido.
00:55:064 (55064|2,55187|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047340
00:56:052 (56052|2,56052|3,56052|1,56329|3,56329|1,56329|0,56607|3,56607|2,56607|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047348 Las Longnotes son algo inconsistentes con la dificultad anterior...
Para el kiai, cuando usas las 4 Longnotes trata de usar rolls/escaleras quedan mucho mejor.
01:24:848 (84848|2,84940|1) - Intercambialas de posicion. (LN a |1| y nota a |2|)
01:45:681 (105681|3,105681|0) - No son Longnotes, cambialas por notas a ambas.
01:51:237 (111237|1,111329|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047436 J a c k
Hay varias diferencias de snaps entre esta dificultad y HD. Deberias arreglar eso.
That's all.
Good luck to both!
Thanks! upd: http://puu.sh/tl6gf/0d534795de.rarNo_sync wrote:
NM: OD=6 -> OD=6.5 sure00:15:496 - Add a note in |3| for that whistle sound. Added LN
00:56:792 and 00:57:533 - Both sounds are almost identical, so: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7046685 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7046692 true
01:15:311 - Add a note in |2|. I think fits better that way. Added
01:51:237 (111237|3,111422|2) - I think that First Longnote doesn't reflect the sound very good... You can try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7046750 <- Fits better in my opinion. Accepted, but made a little different
That's all.
Good luck to both!
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No_sync wrote:
hi! Mod[Diving]00:13:829 (13829|0,14015|2,14200|1) - No entiendo muy bien por que usas Longnotes aca. Reemplazalos con Notas. Aplicado
00:15:496 - Agrega una nota por ese sonido whistle. X
00:19:477 (19477|3,19477|0,19755|3,19755|1) - ...Proba esto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7046842 Queda Bien pero trato de seguir a MX
00:22:440 (22440|0,22440|3,22718|0,22718|2) - ^lo mismo que antes, pero para la izquierda. Y 00:22:903 (22903|1,23089|0) - Acomodalas mejor si es que cambias lo que dije. X
00:36:792 (36792|0,36792|3,36977|0) - Los Longnotes del costado izquierdo estan bien para ese sonido, pero no entiendo muy bien porque es un Longnote: 00:36:792 (36792|3). Deberia ser nota simple para el drum. Mmm ok
00:39:755 (39755|0,39848|0) - Es un jack de repente... Deberias mover 00:39:848 (39848|0) - a la columna |2|. La verdad queda bien hay >u<
00:42:718 (42718|0,42718|3,42903|0) - Lo mismo que antes, los Longnotes en |0| estan bien, pero el que esta en |3| debe ser nota. OK
00:54:570 (54570|0,54570|3,54755|0) - ^ V
01:15:589 (75589|0,75774|0,75959|0) - Movelas a |2|. Hay demasiado espacio libre en esa columna. Lo mas similar a MX :s
01:18:274 (78274|2) - a |3| y 01:18:552 (78552|1) - a |0|. X
01:29:570 (89570|0,89755|0,89940|0) - No me gusta mucho este stack trata de acomodar mejor las notas. OK
01:41:977 (101977|3,101977|1,101977|0,102163|3) - Igual que 00:54:570 ... OK
01:45:311 (105311|0,105311|2,105311|3,105496|0,105496|3,105681|0,105681|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047021 Mucho mas facil y encaja mejor. ¿?
01:51:237 (111237|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047053 Mientras Mas Fácil Mejor xd
[Atlantis]Esta dificultad podria volverse mas dificil (y de hecho eso quiero :3), solo lo digo antes de empezar! xD LOL
00:15:496 - Agregar nota por ese sonido whistle. Mmmm Podría Ser, no estoy seguro
00:19:200 (19200|0,19200|1,19477|3,19477|0,19755|1,19755|3) - Podrias probar lo que dije en HD... |0|1| -> |1|2| -> |2|3| Mmmm Me gusta mas como esta :p
00:22:163 (22163|2,22163|3,22440|3,22440|0,22718|0,22718|2) - ^ X
00:24:570 (24570|3,24755|1,24940|2,25126|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047094 A la derecha esta HD diff. No se repite? Deberia ser consistente. Nop
00:36:792 (36792|1,36792|3,36792|0,36977|0,36977|3,37163|3) - A ver, Creo que ahora usas 2 LNs para ese sonido. Asi que 00:36:792 (36792|1) - Deberia ser una nota simple. Y 00:37:163 (37163|3) - Deberia acomodarse en otra columna ya que representa otro sonido distinto del anterior, movela a |2|... OK
00:37:163 (37163|3,37255|1,37348|2,37440|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047146 A la derecha esta HD diff. No se que sonido querias representar con ese LN (synth o vocal). Otra vez, consistencia. No me había percatado de esa parte, OK
00:39:015 (39015|2,39107|3) - No creo que esto sea bueno, es algo confuso, proba esto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047170 Mmmm La verdad me suena mas como estaba, pero modificare algo para que sea un poco mas fácil
00:42:718 (42718|1,42718|2) - Borra una de estas notas, hay una de mas. OK
00:43:089 (43089|3) - Si podes movela a otra columna para que se vea distinta de los sonidos anteriores. OK
00:45:218 (45218|1) - Creo que para el vocal? pero no lo sigue por completo (NOP), ademas 00:45:126 (45126|0,45126|2,45126|3,45218|1,45496|2,45496|0,45681|1,45681|0,45681|3,45774|2,45866|3,45959|1,46052|2,46052|3,46052|0,46237|1,46237|3) - Hay algunas notas que no son del todo correctas, proba esto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047254
Para aclarar, tuve que borrar algunas notas para que no sea un jack-fest (lol). Pero los snares ahora si se destacan mejor, la LN es por el vocal. Pues LA LN no va pero lo otro si C:, cambio el patrón pero como tal es el concepto
00:47:163 (47163|3) - Para que sea mas comodo, tiene que terminar en 00:47:440. OK
00:49:015 (49015|3,49107|2) - En HD estas dos notas eran una sola Longnote. Cambialas por LN. Nop, en HD es así solo para bajar la dificultad
00:51:607 (51607|0,51607|1,51700|3,51700|2) - Estas notas podrian ser Doublejacks. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047302 Podría ser
00:53:644 (53644|0) - Reemplaza esta LN por una nota simple. NOP, esa es una de las pocas partes que conserve de la versión original
00:54:570 (54570|2,54570|1) - Borra una, hay una nota de mas. OK
00:54:940 (54940|3) - Lo mismo sobre cambiar de columna por que es otro sonido. OK
00:55:064 (55064|2,55187|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047340 Me suena mejor como esta
00:56:052 (56052|2,56052|3,56052|1,56329|3,56329|1,56329|0,56607|3,56607|2,56607|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047348 Las Longnotes son algo inconsistentes con la dificultad anterior... Eso es porque la otra diff es mas facil xD
Para el kiai, cuando usas las 4 Longnotes trata de usar rolls/escaleras quedan mucho mejor. Podría hacerlo
01:24:848 (84848|2,84940|1) - Intercambialas de posicion. (LN a |1| y nota a |2|) OK
01:45:681 (105681|3,105681|0) - No son Longnotes, cambialas por notas a ambas. OK
01:51:237 (111237|1,111329|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7047436 J a c k Me suena mas Como estaba
Hay varias diferencias de snaps entre esta dificultad y HD. Deberias arreglar eso.
That's all.
Good luck to both!
man I would LOVE to make an I or X GD if this were to be 7k :c
hardest diff is too easy for my tastes. Suggesting to add a harder diff because this song has much potential. I could make one but it will take me 10 years to dish out one and my 4k mapping is reallllllly rusty
im not really picky when it comes to diffs below Insane so this what i can do :c
hope it helps!
hardest diff is too easy for my tastes. Suggesting to add a harder diff because this song has much potential. I could make one but it will take me 10 years to dish out one and my 4k mapping is reallllllly rusty
Atlantis
For starters, HP 9 is pretty high for such an easy map. 8.5 should work
00:54:940 - https://puu.sh/toY61/1d9a9e8fd0.png jack is pretty much roughly 121 1/4ths so it shouldnt hurt and is actually more fun!
01:16:144 - kinda hate how this bit is much easier than the previous section with triples. When dealing with buildups, difficulty must be progressively harder (ignoring jumptrilling) so two things:
01:16:607 (76607|0,76885|1,76977|0) - double stuff like these
or
map less noticeable sounds like 01:16:422 - 01:16:700 - 01:16:792 -
or a mix of the two
01:19:848 - not a fan of the broken stair at 01:20:126 - so i made this screenshot https://puu.sh/toYMh/915ba26147.png (just noticed the quad stack at 01:20:866 (80866|0,81052|0,81237|0,81422|0) - in the screenshot. Feel free to edit the js section to your liking my main issue is the non-js part
Might as well chart the 1/2 sounds starting at 01:42:903 - until 01:44:385 -
00:54:940 - https://puu.sh/toY61/1d9a9e8fd0.png jack is pretty much roughly 121 1/4ths so it shouldnt hurt and is actually more fun!
01:16:144 - kinda hate how this bit is much easier than the previous section with triples. When dealing with buildups, difficulty must be progressively harder (ignoring jumptrilling) so two things:
01:16:607 (76607|0,76885|1,76977|0) - double stuff like these
or
map less noticeable sounds like 01:16:422 - 01:16:700 - 01:16:792 -
or a mix of the two
01:19:848 - not a fan of the broken stair at 01:20:126 - so i made this screenshot https://puu.sh/toYMh/915ba26147.png (just noticed the quad stack at 01:20:866 (80866|0,81052|0,81237|0,81422|0) - in the screenshot. Feel free to edit the js section to your liking my main issue is the non-js part
Might as well chart the 1/2 sounds starting at 01:42:903 - until 01:44:385 -
im not really picky when it comes to diffs below Insane so this what i can do :c
hope it helps!