• 00:02:687 (9) - You haven't put NC over here but here you did 00:08:173 (1) - same melody plus its a red tick and i think red ticks are not for NC so remove this one 00:08:173 (1)
  
  00:28:916 (5,6,8) - Fix blankets it looks ugly :S
  
  00:37:144 (7) - NC
  
  00:37:830 (8) - ^ (but here you can also add a triple) better flow
  
  00:39:201 (5) - NC cause u are changing the rhythm
  
  00:41:087 (1) - Remove combo
  
  00:41:258 (2) - NC
  
  01:02:173 (8) - Maybe remove this slider and put 1/2 slider like u did in first 3 and Put a circle on 01:02:516 (1) and 01:02:687 (2)
  
  01:42:630 (6,8) - Since you stacked these why not to stack these too 01:42:287 (5,9) - but don't stack it with slider tail
  
  01:44:687 (4) - Maybe instead of circle put 3/4 slider so you emphasize that voice and you can blanket it with 01:45:030 (5)
  
  01:59:430 (9) - NC
  
  01:59:773 (1) - Remove combo
  
  02:28:230 (3) - I think NC should star on this one not on 02:28:058 (1) but that is just me
  
  03:13:487 (7) - NC
  
  03:14:859 (3) - ^
  
  03:14:687 (1) - Remove combo
  
  04:04:916 (3,5) - Weird overlap
  
  05:05:258 (3) - Ctrl+G ?

20:32 Nyu-chan: you know someone currently online who could mod japanese stuff? :(
20:33 Bakari: Secretpipe?
20:33 Bakari: Don't know, I can't really get any mods myself :D
20:34 Nyu-chan: xD okay
20:34 Nyu-chan: i just asked because i already know you don't like japanese stuff
20:35 Bakari: surprise surprise
20:35 Bakari: link it and we'll do a quick IRC
20:35 Nyu-chan: owo
20:35 *Nyu-chan is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1148834 Kana Nishino - Distance (TANUKI's Christmas Remix)]
20:35 Nyu-chan: hitsounds are missing yet
20:36 Nyu-chan: 05:07:316 - i'm not good with creative sliders
20:36 Nyu-chan: :D
20:37 Bakari: shall I convert the mp3 for you? 
20:37 Nyu-chan: probably :( i hope it doesn't change anything of my map...
20:37 Nyu-chan: like offset etc
20:38 Bakari: 00:00:116 - make sure the volume level is the same
20:38 Bakari: it does change the offset
20:38 Bakari: luckily, you can fix it in like 5 seconds.
20:38 Nyu-chan: ;_;
20:39 Nyu-chan: well :c
20:39 Nyu-chan: i will do it then
20:39 Nyu-chan: i should have checked it before
20:40 Bakari: Is there a problem with offsets? 
20:40 Bakari: You know you can mass move them, right? http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/Dp5ZuIGx.jpg
20:41 Nyu-chan: yes
20:41 Nyu-chan: don't worry xD
20:41 Nyu-chan: i just feel baka now :D
20:42 Bakari: http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/6LsHkTdu.mp3
20:43 Nyu-chan: ty :>
20:44 Bakari: 00:15:887 (8) - is there a way to make a jump between (7) and (8) to stress the kick? 
20:45 Nyu-chan: probably, i tried and it does not touch scorebar
20:45 Nyu-chan: so i think it looks good
20:46 Bakari: 00:25:144 - feels pretty weird because you don't give this clap a clickable object
20:46 Nyu-chan: so i should change it by two circles?
20:46 Bakari: yeah
20:46 Bakari: just one thing
20:46 Bakari: there's a plenty of 1/1 sliders you'll probably have to change
20:46 Bakari: make sure that you really want it
20:47 Nyu-chan: hm...
20:47 Nyu-chan: we will see, some rhythms are intentional
20:51 Bakari: 01:18:287 - how about you snap the break here? 
20:52 Nyu-chan: imo it's a bit weird D:
20:52 Bakari: I just thought that snapping it to the strong beat is cool 
20:52 Nyu-chan: i put break because playing everytime 5 min drain it's tiring, however it couldn't be longer if i wanted it for approval
20:53 Nyu-chan: i will keep this break at least for now owo
20:53 Bakari: a'rite 
20:54 Bakari: 01:25:144 (1) - how about some jump to emphasise the instruments? from 9 to 1, I mean
20:54 Bakari: then could use a jump to (2) as well
20:56 Bakari: 01:49:830 (1,2) - pretty sure this feels a bit random here, you don't use these often
20:56 Nyu-chan: i did jump from 9 to 1 but pref not to abusive in calm parts
20:56 Nyu-chan: yeah i use them sometimes xD
20:57 Bakari: 02:03:373 (9,1) - stack in such a dynamic part? feels a bit flow-breaking to me.
20:58 Nyu-chan: fixed i guess
20:58 Nyu-chan: i always try to stack perfectly
20:58 Nyu-chan: but this editor triggers me
21:00 Bakari: 02:11:087 (7) - eiter do a fancy curve here or kill it here 02:05:601 (7) - 
21:00 Bakari: consistency and stuff
21:00 Bakari: 02:20:001 (1) - 2010 called
21:00 Bakari: they want their sliders back
21:00 Nyu-chan: xDDDD
21:01 Nyu-chan: are they bad?
21:01 Nyu-chan: wanted to do something different
21:01 Nyu-chan: ;w;
21:01 Bakari: they're 2010
21:01 Bakari: it's neither bad nor good
21:01 Bakari: it's just feels out of style you follow
21:02 Nyu-chan: just asking :(
21:02 Nyu-chan: kinda xD
21:02 Nyu-chan: i try always to do different stuff
21:02 Nyu-chan: but its hard
21:04 Bakari: 04:04:059 (9,1) - ctrlc ctrlv
21:04 Bakari: 04:20:687 (1,3) - ^
21:05 Bakari: mixed feelings about this, since it kind of davalues the entire 5 minute thing
21:05 Bakari: making it feel monotonous
21:05 Bakari: but apart from that it's alrighty
21:05 Nyu-chan: hm
21:05 Nyu-chan: if i can change it i will do it owo/
21:05 Nyu-chan: you know, it's kinda hard to rearrange patterns xD
21:06 Bakari: and that's about it

1. 00:25:219 (2,3) - ctrl+g so the flow to the slider is better and more spacing between 00:24:876 (1) - and 00:25:219 (2) - adds to the gap emphasize
2. 01:15:448 (8,9,1) - Id prefer this to be a jump like so 01:15:448 (8,9,1) - for a better emphasize on the kick on 01:15:619 -
3. 01:16:305 - start reducing volume every 1/4 tick by 5% and set it back to 60% at 01:16:991 -
4. 01:38:419 - this is actually 1/8
5. 01:57:962 (8,1,2,3,4) - maybe nerf this jump a bit, took me by surprise while playing it
6. 03:23:162 (1) - stack with 03:22:476 (6) - and stack 03:23:333 (2) - with 03:22:819 (7) - to flow better into the slider, might need to reduce stack leniency to 5 though
7. 03:39:105 (7) - same as 01:38:419 -
8. 03:50:248 (2) - ^ and it should end at 03:50:419 -

1. 00:01:905 (7) - sliderend stack could be a bit more clean
2. 00:29:505 (6) - use 1,5x distance snap to make blanket more clean or if you want to keep the gap, move 00:29:848 (7,8) - a bit further away to make it even with the other gap
3. 01:54:876 (9) - make it the same angle as 01:54:876 (9) - so it stacks properly. If you did this intentionally for readiblity though then nvm

Vell wrote:

[Daisuki]

1. 00:25:219 (2,3) - ctrl+g so the flow to the slider is better and more spacing between 00:24:876 (1) - and 00:25:219 (2) - adds to the gap emphasize
2. 01:15:448 (8,9,1) - Id prefer this to be a jump like so 01:15:448 (8,9,1) - for a better emphasize on the kick on 01:15:619 - Maybe, but not sure if I will miss a triplet there.
3. 01:16:305 - start reducing volume every 1/4 tick by 5% and set it back to 60% at 01:16:991 -
4. 01:38:419 - this is actually 1/8 I tested and I'm not sure about it. I will check properly with other BNs.
5. 01:57:962 (8,1,2,3,4) - maybe nerf this jump a bit, took me by surprise while playing it
6. 03:23:162 (1) - stack with 03:22:476 (6) - and stack 03:23:333 (2) - with 03:22:819 (7) - to flow better into the slider, might need to reduce stack leniency to 5 though It is good indeed, but wanna keep this symmetric pattern.
7. 03:39:105 (7) - same as 01:38:419 - Same as before.
8. 03:50:248 (2) - ^ and it should end at 03:50:419 -

[nazi stuff]

1. 00:01:905 (7) - sliderend stack could be a bit more clean
2. 00:29:505 (6) - use 1,5x distance snap to make blanket more clean or if you want to keep the gap, move 00:29:848 (7,8) - a bit further away to make it even with the other gap
3. 01:54:876 (9) - make it the same angle as 01:54:876 (9) - so it stacks properly. If you did this intentionally for readiblity though then nvm

Luna- wrote:

aaa symmetry
m4m from ur queue
en español porque lazy

me meti mas con el ritmo porque no quise mover la simetria, el como acomodes lo dejo mas a tu gusto

[General]
bg con mejor resolucion, ya que 1920x1200 ya esta permitido hay que aprovecharlo https://puu.sh/sV3AS.png

[Daisuki]

1. 00:15:619 - si dejas este tick en blanco el ritmo se siente raro, ya que no lo estas ignorando y haciendo clickeable en 00:12:876 - , eliminando 00:15:791 (7) - y agregando un slider en 00:15:619 - es mas apropiado Bueno, si te fijas estoy siguiendo un ritmo concreto que se nota mucho más, así que es lo único que veo que se puede clickear.
2. 00:24:876 (1,2) - Pienso que en vez de estos dos circles seria mejor un slider, como lo haces en 00:30:362 (1) - , algo asi quiza https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6847823
3. 00:33:276 - este es el unico que estas ignorando, en partes similares estas usando un slider end en este punto, como 00:22:133 (1) - 00:27:619 (1) - , aparte aqui como que empieza a agarrar mas intensidad asi que entre menos ignores mejor Creo que precisamente ignoré poco x) Hay un cambio considerable, de todas formas como ves no deja de ser un Insane, no cualquier otra cosa.
4. 01:01:905 (7,8) - La voz suena mas importante aqui asi que si usas un 1/1 slider representa mejor el ritmo, recomiendo seguir algo como esto https://puu.sh/sV9oV.png Lo entiendo, para empezar me gusta mantener la simetría siempre y cuando encaje lo suficientemente bien, luego es que en el 1/1 slider que puse debería haber un triple que ignoré precisamente por seguir el decrecimiento en ese momento de la vocal, así que prefiero mantenerlo y no cambiar por completo el patrón.
5. 03:02:591 (7,8) - ^ Lo mismo.
6. 01:26:591 (5,8) - no estan bien stackeados estos dos (no se si es a proposito lel)
7. 01:28:476 - pausas random, un circle se siente mejor
8. 01:58:305 (2,3) - este jump es muy grande para mi gusto, tampoco hay algo similar en todo el map,seria mejor si lo reduces
9. 02:29:162 (5) - en vez de esto, un circle y un slider queda mejor, representa mejor el clap en 02:29:333 - https://puu.sh/sVbMY.png Puede, pero pierde el flow con el siguiente patrón imo.
10. 04:29:848 (5) - ^ Lo mismo.
11. 02:43:048 (9) - que tal dos 1/4 sliders aqui en vez de este repeat slider? No uso eso salvo a mitad del kiai debido al sonido fuerte que se escucha eventualmente, por lo demás prefiero no usarlos.
12. 02:45:962 (4) - un triple quedaria mejor aqui, un copypasta de 02:46:476 (6,7,8) - Creo que es el mismo ritmo que el principio, entonces no veo que encaje.
13. 02:48:791 - lo mismo, triple Es una parte suave, no uso muchos triples ni siquiera al principio.
14. 02:50:848 - ^ Lo mismo.
15. 02:53:505 - ^ ^
16. 03:20:333 (9,1) - Se te fue un circle o random double? un triple para mantener la consistencia Hay mucha distancia para un triple, creo que está bien pero si veo que hace falta lo quitaré.

espero sea de ayuda
gl!

2016-12-21 19:27 Chaoslitz: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1148834 Kana Nishino - Distance (TANUKI's Christmas Remix) [Addicted]]
2016-12-21 19:28 Chaoslitz: 00:32:419 (7) - i think you can place a note on 00:32:762 - for the clap like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6859325 
2016-12-21 19:28 Chaoslitz: still keeps the symmetric pattern
2016-12-21 19:29 Nyu-chan: uh...
2016-12-21 19:29 Nyu-chan: let's see
2016-12-21 19:30 Nyu-chan: done
2016-12-21 19:33 Chaoslitz: 01:38:419 (2,3) - 01:00:191 (10,1) - i think pattern like this should have different spacing
2016-12-21 19:34 Nyu-chan: more or less spacing?
2016-12-21 19:34 Chaoslitz: 01:38:419 (2) - this is 1/6 so the interval between next slider is smaller
2016-12-21 19:34 Chaoslitz: less spacing for 01:38:419 (2,3) - 
2016-12-21 19:35 Nyu-chan: okay, fixed
2016-12-21 19:35 Chaoslitz: 04:00:191 (1,1) - stack pls xD
2016-12-21 19:35 Nyu-chan: this editor
2016-12-21 19:35 Nyu-chan: tilts me a lot
2016-12-21 19:35 Chaoslitz: yea :v
2016-12-21 19:35 Nyu-chan: xDD
2016-12-21 19:36 Chaoslitz: i think thats all from me... lol
2016-12-21 19:36 Chaoslitz: cant really point out things
2016-12-21 19:37 Nyu-chan: i changed diffname to "Addicted to you", i thought it's better oAo
2016-12-21 19:37 Chaoslitz: oh okay
2016-12-21 19:37 Chaoslitz: did you confirm the metadata btw
2016-12-21 19:37 Nyu-chan: i couldn't find anything else more than in youtube and soundcloud
2016-12-21 19:37 Nyu-chan: the title should be fine, like artist
2016-12-21 19:38 Chaoslitz: hmm let me see
2016-12-21 19:38 Nyu-chan: okay, I wait
2016-12-21 19:39 Chaoslitz: well yea should be fine
2016-12-21 19:39 Chaoslitz: k just upload xd
2016-12-21 19:39 Nyu-chan: see, can't find anything better xD
2016-12-21 19:39 Nyu-chan: okay
2016-12-21 19:40 Nyu-chan: updated
2016-12-21 19:41 Nyu-chan: you move it to pending or how it works?
2016-12-21 19:41 Nyu-chan: o.o
2016-12-21 19:41 Chaoslitz: nah
2016-12-21 19:41 Chaoslitz: you can rank it from wip
2016-12-21 19:41 Chaoslitz: it is okay