1. 00:03:044 (1) - I think that this slider should end 00:03:200
2. 00:16:189 (4) - NC.
3. 00:16:344 (1) - delete NC.
4. 00:25:159 (4) - Maybe? https://puu.sh/sqN2D.png
5. 00:26:241 (2,3) - blanket.
6. 00:27:478 (1) - reverse head slider.
7. 00:33:973 (4) - make so? https://puu.sh/sqNeF.png
8. 00:42:014 (1) - move here https://puu.sh/sqNhn.png
9. 00:46:962 (3,1) - blanket
10. 01:01:963 (2,3) - Maybe? https://puu.sh/sqNqV.png
11. 01:03:354 (1,2) - make parallel
12. 01:07:065 (2) - I think it would be better https://puu.sh/sqNy0.png
13. 01:09:849 (2,3) - Maybe? https://puu.sh/sqNSp.png
14. 01:10:931 (2) - I think it's too sharp jump https://puu.sh/sqO5o.png
15. 01:14:333 (6) - overlap?
16. 01:14:488 (1) - I think it would be better https://puu.sh/sqOdq.png
17. 01:18:818 (3) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqOiU.png
18. 01:21:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqOqM.png
19. 01:41:551 (4,5,1) - Looks weird.
20. 01:45:417 (1,2,3,4) - I think it would be better https://puu.sh/sqOyW.png
21. 01:49:128 (1,2,3) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqODN.png
22. 01:50:210 (7,8,1) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqOGY.png
23. 01:51:757 (2) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqOM1.png
24. 01:52:994 (3,4,5) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqOQf.png
25. 01:53:767 (9) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqOVZ.png
26. 01:55:623 (2) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqP0p.png
27. 02:20:674 (3) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqP5c.png
28. 02:23:457 (2) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqP80.png
29. 02:25:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - overlap. NotLikeThis
30. 03:12:478 (5) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqPig.png
31. 03:54:540 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqPqI.png
32. 03:58:715 (5,6,7,1) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqPuz.png

Olegase wrote:

Hello

[It's a promise]

1. 00:03:044 (1) - I think that this slider should end 00:03:200 - Dont saw that thanks xD
2. 00:16:189 (4) - NC. - Fixed
3. 00:16:344 (1) - delete NC. - Fixed
4. 00:25:159 (4) - Maybe? https://puu.sh/sqN2D.png - Fixed
5. 00:26:241 (2,3) - blanket. - Done
6. 00:27:478 (1) - reverse head slider.
7. 00:33:973 (4) - make so? https://puu.sh/sqNeF.png - Fixed
8. 00:42:014 (1) - move here https://puu.sh/sqNhn.png - Fixed
9. 00:46:962 (3,1) - blanket - Done
10. 01:01:963 (2,3) - Maybe? https://puu.sh/sqNqV.png - I agree!
11. 01:03:354 (1,2) - make parallel
12. 01:07:065 (2) - I think it would be better https://puu.sh/sqNy0.png - Fixed
13. 01:09:849 (2,3) - Maybe? https://puu.sh/sqNSp.png - Like the idea i take it
14. 01:10:931 (2) - I think it's too sharp jump https://puu.sh/sqO5o.png - Fixed
15. 01:14:333 (6) - overlap? - Fixed xD
16. 01:14:488 (1) - I think it would be better https://puu.sh/sqOdq.png - Done
17. 01:18:818 (3) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqOiU.png - Done
18. 01:21:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqOqM.png - Done
19. 01:41:551 (4,5,1) - Looks weird. - i thinks its better now
20. 01:45:417 (1,2,3,4) - I think it would be better https://puu.sh/sqOyW.png - Done
21. 01:49:128 (1,2,3) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqODN.png - Done
22. 01:50:210 (7,8,1) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqOGY.png - Done
23. 01:51:757 (2) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqOM1.png - Done
24. 01:52:994 (3,4,5) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqOQf.png - Done
25. 01:53:767 (9) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqOVZ.png - Done
26. 01:55:623 (2) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqP0p.png - Done
27. 02:20:674 (3) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqP5c.png - Done
28. 02:23:457 (2) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqP80.png - Done
29. 02:25:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - overlap. NotLikeThis - Fixed
30. 03:12:478 (5) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqPig.png - Fixed
31. 03:54:540 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqPqI.png - Fixed
32. 03:58:715 (5,6,7,1) - ^ https://puu.sh/sqPuz.png - Fixed

Interesting mapping

Thanks!

[ Pennek ] wrote:

00:26:241 (2,3) - remap - flow is out of sync with the rest of the map - i dont think that. So i dont change this sorry
02:21:911 (1) - no velchange. the subtle sound doesn't give a reason for speedup in slow section (use additions) - Yeah... you dont saw that xD i forgot to make the slider so long like the other in this section! xD
02:22:839 (1) - this is correct - Yeah yeah xD
03:06:138 (2) - slider on this tick to follow the guitar sound like you do on surrounding notes - The slider is on the vocal so i dont change this


enjoyable map!

Thanks for the mod dude!

Arutsuki wrote:

nm from q

promise

00:03:044 (1) - I think just a single circle would go with the music better
00:03:973 (2,1) - no real reason to have those, maybe change the first note into a slider ending on a blue tick
00:13:560 (1,2) - ^
00:04:746 (4) - put a circle instead and put a long slider on 00:04:901 -
00:31:035 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - use this instead of 00:33:664 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - these
00:48:045 (4,5) - ctrl+g these, flows better imo
00:52:143 (6) - no sound, delete
00:56:395 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:03:277 (5,1) - make this gap somewhat smaller, seems too hard compared to the rest of the map
01:20:674 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I like this part, try using it on the same parts after as well
01:31:498 (7,8) - no real reason for kicksliders here, put just normal circles
02:00:880 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - again no sound to put a stream on
03:25:004 (3,4) - space these more
03:37:684 (8,9,10,11) - overmapped again

gl

thanks

My Angel RangE wrote:

Hello~
[It's a promise]


Cheek remove ' count down'

00:03:354 (1) - remove Nc
00:03:973 (2) - add Nc
00:06:138 (1) - same color NC..? why?
00:26:859 (3) - add Nc
00:43:560 (5) - Beat emphasis NC
00:44:179 (1) - remove Nc
00:46:653 (1) - ^
00:57:169 (1) - ^
01:02:968 (1) - ^
01:29:952 (1) - ^
03:18:664 (2) - over lap
03:18:664 (2,3,4) - add Nc
03:23:612 (3) - ^
03:42:632 (3,4,5) - stack?
03:44:952 (3) - ^

well.
good luck!

All Done!
Yeah thanks!

ChronoNig wrote:

trying to learn how to mod xd mercy on my soul

:d

Pretty nice map with cool storyboard but there's some NC and structure issues that I have to point out.

00:02:117 (5) - you could position 5 so it blankets better with the slider end of 3 like so https://gyazo.com/b117d085e07f469b1c1b56d5a9e49ef6
00:03:973 (2,1,2) - here's a suggestion to make it look cleaner https://gyazo.com/c5757ad7ae04893feed59d251d292db8
00:03:354 (1) - remove NC
00:03:973 (2) - add NC
00:04:283 (1) - remove NC
I wont really mention similar stuff like this further cuz im not an expert but generally u want to add NC on big white ticks. So if you do decide to change the above u may want to check ur other NCs to keep it consistent
00:04:746 (3,4) - you stacked 00:04:283 (1,2) - so it'd make sense you'd do the same for this
00:09:385 (3) - I think extending this slider to red tick follows the volcals a lot better
00:11:087 (1,2,3) - spacing here could just be the same DS instead of random. Also the 3 is too close to the 1 imo.
00:08:612 (1) - u could extend slider to blue tick and remove whistle. There isn't really any music at the red tick, just the long vocals so long sliders I think are a good way to represent that.
00:16:808 (3) - shape suggestion https://gyazo.com/4eff81b60eb5b4abd76d3c3f28b35310
00:18:818 (2) - yea this is what i meant for 00:08:612 (1)
00:19:746 (6) - the downward curve is too harsh. try and make it lead into the circle.
00:24:386 (3) - I think this should be a circle and a silder https://gyazo.com/e39f80728d800dc0a62794507eef38fe
00:27:478 (1) - why dont you do the same like the other 2 sliders before? It sounds basically the same.
00:29:643 (5,1) - there's a pretty important big white tick note here that I think should be mapped
00:42:014 (1,2,3,4,5) - these can be NCs since the svs change
00:42:787 (3) - could also be blanketed better with 1
00:46:189 (2) - not a fan of this stacking but to make it better you could shift it a bit down to match the slider
00:46:962 (3,1) - also blanket here
00:50:056 (2,3) - I think there should be 2 sliders on the white ticks instead
00:52:220 (1,2,3,4) - just a suggestion but I think it'd be cool if the svs graduually got lower since the vocals also gets weaker
01:01:963 (2) - 2 circles instead stacked on 01:02:118 (3) - ?
01:30:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this doesnt look very nice to me imo. May wanna consider remaking the pattern
01:42:633 (5) - slider here fits better
01:51:911 (3) - not properly stacked with 5
02:09:540 (1) - I think the svs here could be like x0.7 but thats imo
02:19:746 (6) - stacking error? i think
02:23:457 (2) - can be NC also 02:23:457 (2,1) - is too sharp bring them closer together
02:33:045 (3,4) - would be cool if u ctrl+g these
03:18:200 (1,2) - i dont like how these overlap a bit
03:22:143 (6) - note: my eyes QAQ that story board also NC can go here
03:44:952 (3) - also another stacking error?
03:48:818 (4,5) - I think this plays better https://gyazo.com/b76a4e9f75c4e7a7363759ce904a79ba
03:49:437 (2) - this would look better https://gyazo.com/d9c22881b568bd733f1a79ddc89d0091
03:52:839 (1) - the spacing here is too large
04:22:529 (1) - lift higher so it blankets with 4
I know it's a lot to change but don't get discouraged! This map is pretty good and it'll only get better

Yeah thanks for the mod!!

• 
  It's a promise
  
  00:01:963 (4,5) - move these to 264/240? so they look better with 00:01:189 (1,2) -
  00:09:540 (3) - y no use a slider here just like before? for consistency and I think fits with the vocals too
  00:09:849 (4) - imo this slider could look better like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6917284
  00:11:859 (2,3) - ctrl+g ??
  00:16:653 (2) - move this to 296/20 so you have to move more and the next slider with more velocity plays better
  00:38:612 - should add a circle here
  00:42:323 (1) - ctrl+g?
  00:51:911 (6,1) - spacing between these its too much imo, should move 00:52:221 (1) - closer to the other slider end, suggestion: http://prntscr.com/doxm24
  01:12:324 (3,4,5) - suggestion for these 3 that looks a bit messed before: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6917337 after: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6917327
  01:17:891 (6,7) - this jump shouldnt be this longer since the song here isnt really intense or anything so this jump isnt emphatizing anything (just this one)
  01:23:458 (2,3) - should ctrl+g each individual and move to its original position like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6917351 so it flows better!
  02:17:272 (3,4) - should change these for a slider imo
  02:50:211 (1) - the current shape of this slider doesnt look.. the best imo, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6917391 <this would play better and still looks good.. I guess, but ofc you can use another shape or just "fix" the current shape because.. I doesnt look.. the best..
  02:58:870 (4) - this should be split into 2 circles
  03:22:530 (1) - move to 232/256
  03:27:788 (1,2,3) - small suggestion for these 3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6917414
  03:35:211 (5) - move this to 200/268 so it looks better with the rest 03:35:365 (6,1,2,3,4) -
  03:54:541 (2) - hmm im not 100% sure but I think this is the ONLY kickslider you used in this whole kiai.. inconsistent, and should be a triplet
  03:59:025 (1) - make this a good slider shape :p (I mean.. http://prntscr.com/doxv6p something like that idk.. not just a simply stright line slider.. idk xdd)
  04:01:654 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - do ctrl+g on these? you already used the clockwise flow before so.. a change in the flow direction here would be better..
  04:05:828 (4,5) - should not stack these, I suggest something like this, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6917453 the reason why not stack these its because.. you didnt stack any of these > 04:04:591 (3,4,1,2,1,2) -
  04:43:560 (9) - uhh nice! (if this slidershape you got here is totally on porpuse, ignore my suggestion *or fix?*) I just think it could look better like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6917495 or you can make a perfect heart idk its on you to change or not :p

1. 00:19:283 (4) - try stacking the slidertail on the starting note of the first slider, like that https://puu.sh/t45Y1/4de39bd08d.png
2. 00:26:859 (1) - stack it on this note 00:25:932 (1) - , because it feels weird here + give a better rounded shape
3. 01:34:900 (4,5) - i feel like it should be clickable
4. 01:35:519 (1,2,3) - the flow between those notes feel very weird here. consider doing something more like that https://puu.sh/t46nO/539079e0ba.png
5. 04:43:560 (1,1) - the end is sooooo long
6. overall, the map is very nice, there is good rhythm use, but sometimes, there is lack of flow, i mean, there sometimes that the movement of the player will not be fluid because of the pattern, and it will probably lead 90% of the player into a failure, so patterns like this: 01:53:303 (6,7,8,9,1) - i dont feel comfortable while playing this pattern. because there is a sudden side change and it's very disturbing in my opinion. so mind changing some patterns like that.

Pachiru wrote:

1. 00:19:283 (4) - try stacking the slidertail on the starting note of the first slider, like that https://puu.sh/t45Y1/4de39bd08d.png
2. 00:26:859 (1) - stack it on this note 00:25:932 (1) - , because it feels weird here + give a better rounded shape
3. 01:34:900 (4,5) - i feel like it should be clickable
4. 01:35:519 (1,2,3) - the flow between those notes feel very weird here. consider doing something more like that https://puu.sh/t46nO/539079e0ba.png
5. 04:43:560 (1,1) - the end is sooooo long
6. overall, the map is very nice, there is good rhythm use, but sometimes, there is lack of flow, i mean, there sometimes that the movement of the player will not be fluid because of the pattern, and it will probably lead 90% of the player into a failure, so patterns like this: 01:53:303 (6,7,8,9,1) - i dont feel comfortable while playing this pattern. because there is a sudden side change and it's very disturbing in my opinion. so mind changing some patterns like that.

that's all for me
good luck for ranking

very nice storyboard!

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KrastrovLap wrote:

From your req ( ^ = same as above, Imo = In my opinion)

General

1. Only 2 combo colors? can you add more one? no problem if you disagree - I took 3 Colors from the background

It's a promise

1. 00:03:973 (8) - NC this - Fixed
2. 00:05:519 (1) - remove NC - Fixed
3. 00:06:448 (3) - Ctrl+J would be nice Imo - I take it
4. 00:07:993 (1) - remove NC - Fixed
5. 00:12:941 (1) - ^ - Fixed
6. 00:26:859 (1,1) - look so far, make it closer little bit - Fixed
7. 00:30:262 (1) - remove NC - Fixed
8. 00:31:035 (2) - NC this - Fixed
9. 00:32:736 (7) - make it closer to previous slider would be nice - I take it
10. 00:35:210 (1) - remove NC - Fixed
11. 00:35:829 (2) - NC this - Fixed
12. 01:36:524 (7) - remove this circle coz this interrupted when jumping - I take it
13. 01:40:082 (8) - remove this circle and arrange it like this (below) no problem if you disagree - I take it
    
    
    
14. 01:45:726 (3,4) - Ctrl+J arrange it like this (below) no problem if you disagree - I take it
    
    
    
15. 01:53:071 (4) - remove this circle coz this interrupted when jumping (Imo) - I take it
16. 02:14:179 (6) - stack to previous circle 02:14:024 (5) would be nice Imo - I take it
17. 02:44:489 (7,1) - look weird here
18. 03:34:514 (2) - remove this circle would be nice Imo - Fixed
19. 03:35:364 (6,7,8) - arrange it like this (below) would be nice, no problem if you disagree - I take it
    
    
    
20. 03:46:344 (6) - move this circle to left a bit (below) - I take it
    
    

P.S #1 Beautiful SB, Last slider part so pretty amazing, Osu! need moar cillia
P.S #2 Hope this will be ranked soon
WITH LOVE

KrastrovLap wrote:

P.S #1 Beautiful SB, Last slider part so pretty amazing, Osu! need moar cillia
P.S #2 Hope this will be ranked soon
WITH LOVE

THANKS for the mod!!