Garden wrote:

[General]

1. some other tag reference: laplacian kimiyume eroge visual novel added on all diffs
2. about whistles at the very first part, i feel this section 00:02:651 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - a bit weird (codes copied from the highest diff) cuz it's against ur previous whistle pattern. why not try sth similar as 00:00:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - ? which means add whistle on 00:02:651 (1) - 00:03:145 (3) - 00:03:970 (2) - 00:04:464 (4) - 00:04:959 (6) - and delete whistle on 00:02:981 (2) - 00:04:299 (3) - 00:04:794 (5) - , maybe u can have a try and see how it works might consider, but I think current fits pretty well with piano o:

[Easy]

1. 01:14:189 (1) - i feel it would be better if u apply same rhythm pattern as 01:03:310 (1,2) - to focus on the downbeat on the white tick cuz vocal isn't as clearly snapped to the red tick as 01:05:948 (1,2) - I feel like it works well to keep rhythm a bit diverse and less dense too

[Normal]

1. 00:12:706 (4) - 4->1 missing ds oh, right. fixed
2. 00:15:673 (5,1) -it looks a weird stack or u did it intentionally? well it seems to be ur aesthetics to make the visual flow better love manual stacks lol
3. 01:20:123 (1) - disable nc as previous nc patterns? yes

[Light In]

1. 01:12:706 (2,3,4,5,6) - can somewhat make a star shape not supposed to, as I want more spacing on 01:12:706 (2,3,6) -

[Wish]

1. 00:13:200 (1,2) - i think not overlapping fits ur generally clean design of this part true
2. 01:19:464 (1,2,1,2) - personally dont think the jump pattern really fits the song tho there are some quite strong beats here I think it fits really well with the sudden 1/2 snare-kick spam that is unique in this part

[C u r i] wrote:

[Normal]
00:15:673 (5,1) - ..? what happen about this stack perhaps it's your style? manual stacks are nice :d
00:19:629 (2) - curve like this?

dd

changed to sth simillar with a red node cause that fits the others better
00:34:299 (1) - move down? it's too close with hp bar it's close, but not touching so it looks fine to me. changing this would mess with other patterns here ; /



[Wish]
00:10:563 (1) - why 1/1 repeat slider? how about change rhythm like 00:11:882 (1,2) - this? 00:11:882 (1,2) - has a vocal on 2, while 00:10:563 (1) - is one singhle vocal, so I think current emphasizes vocal better with clicks
00:59:354 (1) - how about change two 1/1 silder? I might consider this, but I also think 1/1 repeats work so nice here
01:01:992 (1,2,1,2) - how about change jump like this?

jump!

i guarantee it will more fun
that's a nice pattern, but it keeps the same clockwise flow for 01:01:662 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - , I prefer to have more back and forth movement here as it feels like that gives more emphasis on single notes and fits better with how the triangles before play! (also you might notice I rarely use prolonged circular flow for such patterns :d)
GL!

Revialink wrote:

Hi!~ NM from queue!~

General

1. Difficulties end time is not consistent:
   01:50:123 - Easy
   01:50:123 - Normal
   01:50:123 - Kencho's Hard
   01:50:123 - Light Insane
   01:50:123 - Mochi's Insane
   01:48:228 - Karen's Insane
   01:50:123 - Wish

[notice] Easy

1. Changing SV's speed is unrankable in Easyit's only a minor change that fits really well with the song and doesn't make for confusing readability or weird gameplay. So I don't see any issues with this. I also can't find any actual rule (not guideline or recommendation) on this matter o:
2. 00:00:838 (2) - this slider can looks better
3. 00:09:079 (2) - ^ (what happened with that in the end?) made them both nicer/better to read
4. 00:52:761 - delete inherited point doesn't matter at all
5. 01:32:568 - ^
6. 01:32:651 - ^
7. 01:19:959 - ^
8. 01:20:948 - ^
9. 01:25:728 - ^
10. 01:42:706 - ^
11. 01:43:530 - ^
12. 01:44:519 - ^
13. 01:46:497 - ^

Normal

1. 00:38:750 (5,6) - stack it all manual 3x3 stacks for visuals
2. 00:15:673 (5,1) - ^
3. 00:45:838 (3,4) - ^
4. 00:49:959 (6,1) - ^
5. 01:06:937 (3,4) - ^
6. 01:08:420 (6,1) - ^
7. 01:15:508 (4,5) - ^
8. 01:17:486 (3,4) - ^
9. 01:21:277 (5,6) - ^
10. 01:28:860 (4,5) - ^
11. 01:28:860 (4,5) - ^
12. 01:35:453 (2,3) - ^
13. 01:38:750 (2,3) - ^
14. 01:42:706 (5,1) - ^
15. 00:52:761 - delete inherited point
16. 01:32:568 - ^
17. 01:32:651 - ^
18. 01:19:629 - ^
19. 01:20:618 - ^
20. 01:43:530 - ^
21. 01:44:519 - ^
22. 01:44:849 - ^
23. 01:46:167 - ^

Good Luck!~

Lami wrote:

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00:40:893 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too noisy whistle... x_x..
because it's relax part.I get you, but piano is so highlighted there, using soft like before feels too weak :/
01:13:365 (6,7,2,3,4) - i don't feel good on this. for playing.
i wish 01:13:530 (1,2,3,4) - more up-placed on flow..
http://puu.sh/qu7Yv.jpg I changed 01:13:365 (6,7,1) - instead, for a bit similar effeect, but keeping visuals

skystar's ame to asphalt? feel a little..- _

Kalibe wrote:

Mod only your diffs now zzz.. will mod other diffs later ><

general*

- nothing here... aa uncheck widescreen in all diffs, it's useless here. it triggers people modding it, so it's not useless : v

[Easy]

- optionally OD and HP 2 works better in this case, when u have Normal with 4 / 4 hink current fits the spread better, not sure though
- 00:00:838 (2) - Probably add whistle on end, cause you add it 00:00:014 (1) - and they're the same piano sounds
- 00:02:651 (1) - Same here ^ on both head and end.
- 00:03:970 (2) - and here ^ on head only
added some
- 01:00:673 (1) - Where's finish on repeater? i clearly hear crash sounds, 01:01:992 (2) - on this head too. added on all (of my) diffs
- 01:21:772 (1) - Finish instead of Whistle sounds better for me. did whistle+finish
- 01:29:684 (1) - Make this symmetrically, now looks really weird in slider strucutre lol http://puu.sh/qxHJa/752528202f.jpg tried
- 01:43:695 (2) - How about this positioning? Transision from 01:43:695 (2,3) - will be more comfortable http://puu.sh/qxHNY/2bd2d67092.jpg rotated 2 a bit
- Btw, why the spinner does not end 01:50:783 - ?? After 01:50:123 (1) - there is still a sound to extend spinner >< sound gets really quiet, doesn't need such a long spinner

[Normal]

- Yee, as in Easy about hitsounding.
- I feel kinda confused now, because you sometimes auto stacked objects : 00:51:937 (4,5) - 00:53:750 (2,3) - sometimes not : 00:38:750 (5,6) - 00:45:838 (3,4) - You should probably pick : auto or manual stacked, pls don't do both on them. not noticable during gameplay anyways. manual is for when I need a different direction or anything, auto when it doesnt matter
- 00:24:739 (3) - Change this into 1/2 slider to fit with full vocal? want lower density for this part and works fine with instruments
- 00:32:321 (3,4) - Blanket kinda off in my eyes, try to move 00:32:981 (4) - a bit to left. looks fine to me?? http://i.imgur.com/mpz1MyD.jpg
- 01:10:563 (5,1) - Will looks better if you make those symmetry, so 01:11:222 (1) - move around 443/63 ? did something
- 01:17:651 (4,5) - Make paralell for aesthetic http://puu.sh/qxIFP/92f0eee5d7.jpg tried sth similar
- And same about spinner, i think this spinner concerns all diffs zzz.

[Light Insane]

- Kencho diff have AR 7,5 and Mochi 8,5 hmm.. How about AR 8 here? did 8.2 for now. 8 would make it too uncomfortable to read for many people with all the stacks/overlaps
- 01:10:398 (3,2) - If i'm not blind this isn't stacked well. should be fine now. blame the editor
- 01:11:717 (2) - Also here about this slider, why you slienced the end with Soft sampleset? I though on end is rather clap sound o.o fixed
- 01:15:508 (2) - The flow becomes harder to play here so try 157/343 - this helps flow not getting too hard to play aaaa plays fine for me, just a simple triangle?

[Wish]

- Well.. I really prefer to decrease OD to 8,5 cause even spread tells this { 7,5 -> 8 -> 8,5 } will keep 9 for now, would rather increase on lower diffs lol
- 00:41:387 (4,5,6,7,8) - That star strucutre looks really off.. You should check this duh. not supposed to be a star, mainly focuses on fitting spacing while keeping the overlap structure 00:40:068 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
- After looking at this kiai I came to the conclusion this part is mapped really similar to Skystar Asphalt lol
- 01:46:332 (1,2) - Swap NC, then 01:46:662 (1) - delete this NC. // 01:46:003 (1,2,1) - This rhythm is still 1 - 2 - 3 like before 01:45:508 (1,2,3) - so i don't see much sense with diffirent nc'ing it. current follows piano better
- that's cool diff dude!

Ok, will mod rest diffs tomorrow zzz, have a star!!

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

ok m4m from ur queue

Wish

1. 01:06:442 (3,4) - tbh they look really ugly like the way they are , to me atleast ... consider moving red node to the middle so they would look something like http://puu.sh/qAO8E/d4ca4e38d2.jpg they are exactly like I want them to be lol
2. 01:12:541 (1,5) - this stack might be intentional but its easily noticable in gameplay and looks kinda meh wh, it's the same overlap used for the whole map
3. 01:29:684 (1,2) - please uncurve them a bit , they look a bit too curved curved just as they should be..

Karen's Insane

1. why are the combo colors of this diff different than the rest of the diffs GDs are free to use different colors. and they fit well with the bg so why not
   

Light Insane

1. 00:03:970 (4) - please finish this at 00:04:299 - and add another circle at red tick too dense and it's rather weak anyways, the whole part is pretty undermapped lol
2. 00:46:992 (5,6,7) - 00:51:277 (6,7,1) - the only stacks like this in the whole diff ... i would recommend normal stacks here aswell manual stacks are cute

FoxyGrandpa wrote:

• [Wish]

1. 00:01:332 (4) - You can NC here since there is a noticeable change in pitch, and delete the NC on 00:00:838 (1) - i know it's one pattern but the NCs could help for emphasis on the higher notes. whole intro uses pattern based nc for this diff ; /
   
2. 00:13:200 (1) - You could flip this horizontally and it would flow better imo, kind of more for aesthetic purposes. would ruin 00:11:882 (1,1) - being mirrored (just with different anchors)
   
3. 00:16:332 (3) - CTRL + G for a more natural lead in to 4 that's really weird and messes up spacing
   
4. 00:36:607 (6,2) - This is completely my own opinion, and not really a mod I mean, you have 00:35:948 (3,5) - and 00:35:783 (2,1) - perfectly overlapping but not these two? Seems a bit strange but feel free to leave as is. mainly for spacing reasons
   
5. 00:37:926 (5) - Ctrl + G ruins spacing/emphasis
   
6. 01:05:948 (1) - Finish to the sliderhead? feels too much for me, can't even hear a cymbal here and if it is there it's much weaker than others
   
7. 01:00:673 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 01:19:464 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - holy difficulty spike, if you take both of these out the map goes from 5.8 stars to to 5.15, sudden difficulty spikes aren't fun to play, especially without warning. When i tried this diff the first spike threw my off a lot, and the second spike killed me. It's fine to have big jumps like this, just make sure the player knows they're coming instead of throwing it at them out of nowhere. uh the jumps have a proper buildup/scaling spacing, not like it's starting with the huge spacing and those are by far the most intense parts of the song to me ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
   also sr gets broken by exactly those type of jumps/spikes and drastically overrates their difficulty, so don't use that to judge those patterns.
   Now combine that with patterns like 01:28:695 (2,3,4) - being underrated and gg
   made some spots like 01:24:904 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - slightly harder though

Kisses wrote:

Easy

1. 00:40:893 (3) - Is the normal whistle really needed? Sounds awful and doesn't compliment the song imo piano is so much stronger here, soft like other spots is not enough

Normal

1. 00:28:035 (4,1) - Do these touch the hp bar to you? Because I use a skin I don't know if it would do for others but yh https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5843369 .. I recommend moving it a bit further away regardless so it looks prettier
2. 00:34:299 (1) - This one definitely touches xdd they actually both don't when using default http://i.imgur.com/31c8deL.jpg

The rhythm in the 2 diffs seems a bit awkward at some places. blame the song having weird emphasis/vocal and me disliking plain 2/1 and 1/1 spam for lower diffs :d The rest of the diffs look good. GL!