1. Once Upon a Star (5.49 stars, 1203 notes)

1. 00:46:601 (7) - slider ends here 00:47:146 -
2. 00:24:208 (1,3) - blanket is off here
3. 00:32:956 (5) - ^
4. 00:37:138 - you may add a note here
5. 00:43:137 (1,2,1) - this doesn't flow good enough, for me. Oh and fix this blanket 00:43:137 (1) -
6. 00:51:124 (3,4,5) - these seems fine, but you may try fixing it a bit.
7. 00:52:759 (5) - fix this blanket
8. 00:52:759 (5,4) - to make this tidier, you may copy number 3 and then ctrl+shift+r and rotate by 180 degrees. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5619869
9. 01:09:668 (3,4,5) - fix these jumps.
10. 01:29:667 (3) - blanket's off.
11. 01:34:758 (4,1) - ^
12. 01:36:576 (7,8,1) - - you may try fixing these. It seems a bit awkward. Hmm.. maybe you can try making them like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5619895
13. 01:54:395 (1) - blanket's off.
14. 01:55:123 (1) - ^
15. 01:55:850 (1) - ^
16. 01:56:577 (1) - ^
17. 01:55:123 (1,1) - ^
18. 02:02:768 (5) - ^
19. 02:14:768 (1) - ^
20. 02:49:305 (4,5,1) - hmm you may try stacking 02:49:577 (5,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5619912 maybe like that? :3
21. 03:32:577 (1) - blanket's off.
22. 04:55:132 (9) - avoid semi-stacking here. move this note to the right :3
23. 05:03:768 (4,5) - fix these.

William K wrote:

Hi~ from #modreqs

1. 00:46:601 (7) - slider ends here 00:47:146 - Tried to fix
2. 00:24:208 (1,3) - blanket is off here I think I fixed it. LOL
3. 00:32:956 (5) - ^ ^
4. 00:37:138 - you may add a note here Added a note~
5. 00:43:137 (1,2,1) - this doesn't flow good enough, for me. Tried to fix Oh and fix this blanket 00:43:137 (1) - Tried to fix
6. 00:51:124 (3,4,5) - these seems fine, but you may try fixing it a bit. i think it's fine, but fix it how?
7. 00:52:759 (5) - fix this blanket Fixed
8. 00:52:759 (5,4) - to make this tidier, you may copy number 3 and then ctrl+shift+r and rotate by 180 degrees. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5619869 ^
9. 01:09:668 (3,4,5) - fix these jumps. Tried to fix by moving them a bit?
10. 01:29:667 (3) - blanket's off. Tried to fix
11. 01:34:758 (4,1) - ^ ^
12. 01:36:576 (7,8,1) - - you may try fixing these. It seems a bit awkward. Hmm.. maybe you can try making them like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5619895 Tried to fix by doing something similar?? I don't feel like stacking (7) on (1).. Maybe I'll consider it if more mods mention that..
13. 01:54:395 (1) - blanket's off. Blah, tried to fix, blankets are hard to fix for me xd
14. 01:55:123 (1) - ^ ^
15. 01:55:850 (1) - ^ ^
16. 01:56:577 (1) - ^ ^
17. 01:55:123 (1,1) - ^ ^
18. 02:02:768 (5) - ^ ^
19. 02:14:768 (1) - ^ ^
20. 02:49:305 (4,5,1) - hmm you may try stacking 02:49:577 (5,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5619912 maybe like that? :3 I like it the way it is~ (unless more mods mention it, then i'll consider changing it)
21. 03:32:577 (1) - blanket's off. Tried to fix
22. 04:55:132 (9) - avoid semi-stacking here. move this note to the right :3 Fixed
23. 05:03:768 (4,5) - fix these. ^

I think that's all . Good luck~

William K wrote:

Uhh... For the first point, I mean it's like this :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5620198 ~

Lilyanna wrote:

Hello NM from my Queue
Ihope i help little

Mod

Summer triangle
00:25:679 (1) - wierd flow ctrl-g maybe Fixed!
00:26:225 (3,4) - no reason for a big spacing here Lowered the spacing~
00:27:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i dont hear any needs for stream here Removed stream
00:28:406 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - same here i dont hear triplest u kinda ruining the rythm flow try this Remapped the part
00:42:439 (1,2) - fix blanket Tried to fix
00:52:577 (4) - move to x287 y202 Fixed!
00:53:668 (2,1) - stack the end with the head of 1 ^
00:57:668 (1,3) - why not stack these end/head 00:58:032 (2,4) - and same for this ? or make something like this idk just change if u want ^^ Made it like the picture you showed
01:00:033 (5,1) - can stack Fixed!
01:09:305 (1,2) - can change to 1/2 slider Hmm, maybe not. I feel like it'd ruin the flow of the jumps
01:11:840 (1,3) - stack thier ends and 01:12:589 (3) - nc since sv change u dont want it to be missreaded by the player Fixed!
01:11:840 (1,2) - btw can blanket Tried to blanket ^_^
01:47:850 (5,6,7,8) - looks random I like it though
01:54:395 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - blankets can be better :( Tried to improve, I might just get someone to fix it for me if this keeps going LOL
02:23:324 (6,1) - either make it bigger or same imo the spacing Made it the same spacing
04:07:486 (1) - remove nc Removed NC
04:42:951 (4,5) - fix blanket Tried to fix
04:49:678 (1) - make the first white node a red node like this it gives better flow Fixed!
05:19:132 (1,1,1,1,1) - why all these 1 i guess when u copy past u forgot to set one nc so fix combo Whoops! Fixed, xD
Idk why there is a lott of timing sections the red once without changing the bpm Timing was taken from another ranked set
anyway nice song thanksssss!!!!

Good luck

eclipselotus wrote:

M4M from my Q

irc

16:28 DivineEnigma: Hiya, I managed to catch you in-game again~ xD
16:29 eclipselotus: lets continue then
16:30 DivineEnigma: alright
16:31 eclipselotus: 00:26:042 (2) - stack with (4)
16:31 DivineEnigma: stacked
16:32 eclipselotus: 00:26:406 (4) - triplet instead imo
16:32 eclipselotus: a drum sound 
16:33 eclipselotus: 00:27:406 - add note here for the same reason
16:34 eclipselotus: 00:28:406 (1,2,3) - didnt flow well, maybe make a bit simmilar pattern as last  (3,4,5) 
16:35 DivineEnigma: got it
16:35 eclipselotus: 00:32:047 (2) - rhytm here is following piano tiles isnt it? those really unnecesary jump, the piano still at same beat
16:36 eclipselotus: blanket it with (1) instead
16:38 eclipselotus: 00:33:865 (3) - flow breaker here, stack it with red (1)
16:38 eclipselotus: ~
16:39 DivineEnigma: blanket'ed
16:39 eclipselotus: 00:33:865 (3) - flow breaker here, stack it with red (1)
16:39 eclipselotus: 00:36:411 - strong vocal here, add note stack with (2)
16:40 DivineEnigma: added a note
16:40 eclipselotus: 00:38:803 (2) - that 1/2 slider being fast for no reason, 1/1 instead 
16:41 eclipselotus: 00:45:310 (3) downcurve instead, so (1,2,3) will flow smothly
16:42 eclipselotus: 00:46:601 (7) - move this slider start at white tick and make it 1x reverse, then put a note here
16:43 eclipselotus: 00:47:328 - missing note 
16:43 eclipselotus: 00:50:214 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - need pattern improve
16:44 DivineEnigma: for 00:46:601 (7) -
16:45 DivineEnigma: would it be better to stack the new note with the (7) slider
16:45 eclipselotus: ofc no, x460 y176
16:46 eclipselotus: then use same flow for that missing note
16:47 eclipselotus: 00:53:668 (2) - since the distace with slider (1) it felt like the distace was shorter than (2,3)
16:50 eclipselotus: 01:00:941 (3) -stack with last (3)
16:51 eclipselotus: 01:01:123 (4) - stack this one with start of green slider (4)
16:52 eclipselotus: 01:01:305 (5) - keep increasing the jump until this point, move to x84 y100
16:53 eclipselotus: then for rest (5,6,7,8,1) use same ds for it to emph with slow downbeat
16:53 eclipselotus: 01:02:032 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - use same ds or quite consistent one for this
16:54 eclipselotus: the beat just wayy to stable to make jump pattern
16:54 eclipselotus: 01:04:850 - the triplet should be here instead of 01:05:032 -
16:55 eclipselotus: 01:07:487 - drum down beat here if you listen it carefully
16:55 eclipselotus: place a note 
16:56 eclipselotus: 01:10:395 (7,8) - simply ctrl +g 
16:57 DivineEnigma: done
16:58 eclipselotus: 01:11:668 (7) - this stack totally a nope
16:59 DivineEnigma: Where do you suggest putting (7) if not a stack?
16:59 eclipselotus: 01:12:771 this should be clickable fs
17:00 eclipselotus: try to find a better place, you dcd
17:01 eclipselotus: 01:12:589 - so i would reccomend to start this point with c followed by 3/4 slider
17:01 eclipselotus: 01:15:485 (5,6,7) - same ds
17:01 eclipselotus: 01:18:031 (2,3,4) - out of jump?
17:02 eclipselotus: 01:22:303 - move the triplet here
17:02 eclipselotus: 01:23:758 - make this point a triplet if you want
17:03 eclipselotus: 01:30:940 (1) - slider improve
17:03 eclipselotus: 01:31:849 (2,3,4) - same ds
17:04 eclipselotus: 01:48:214 (7,8) - ctrl +g
17:06 eclipselotus: 01:51:486 - use 4-4-6 for nc
17:07 eclipselotus: 02:07:856 (2,3) - dont you feel weird to catch that kind of flow?
17:08 eclipselotus: 02:15:950 - theres no clear enough beat to make this a triplet
17:08 eclipselotus: 02:24:759 (2,3) - ctrl + g
17:13 eclipselotus: 02:28:396 - patterns after this feel kinda sleepy
17:13 eclipselotus: where all those jumps gone lel
17:14 eclipselotus: 02:35:032 - move triplets here
17:15 eclipselotus: 02:35:123 (6,7) - change the rhytm, so the triplet end is a slider
17:16 eclipselotus: 02:50:396 (3,4) - ctrl + g
17:17 eclipselotus: 02:51:850 (7) - NC here, 02:52:396 (6) - then stack this with pale blue (3)
17:17 eclipselotus: 02:52:577 (1) - this meant to stack isnt it?
17:18 DivineEnigma: not meant to be stacked
17:18 eclipselotus: 02:56:428 (2) - repeating last (1,2) - is totally fine, move this (2) to x368 y2668
17:19 eclipselotus: 03:06:759 (1,3) - meant to blanket?
17:19 eclipselotus: 03:09:668 (4) - add light down curve
17:20 eclipselotus: 03:13:315 (2) - light down curve here?
17:20 eclipselotus: 03:14:042 (4,5) - ctrl + g
17:22 eclipselotus: 03:23:122 (7) - NC
17:23 eclipselotus: 03:26:758 (7) - ^
17:24 eclipselotus: 03:27:486 - this steram better like this http://puu.sh/q5EWM/4f2efceb67.jpg
17:25 eclipselotus: 03:30:032 (3) - why this one get back and stack whith (1)?
17:28 DivineEnigma: my bad, i should have stacked (1) and (4) because of the piano
17:30 eclipselotus: 03:39:126 - copy last (1,2) and just paste 
17:30 eclipselotus: 03:42:395 (3,4,5) - same ds
17:31 eclipselotus: 03:52:577 (7) - NC
17:34 eclipselotus: bak in 10
17:34 DivineEnigma: hopefully i don't get called to sleep, but alright :o
17:40 eclipselotus: 04:11:031 - move triplet here
17:41 eclipselotus: 04:20:213 - try this rhytm http://puu.sh/q5Fyp/9ddf53ddb7.jpg
17:41 DivineEnigma: done
17:42 eclipselotus: 04:23:395 - make this trip
17:42 eclipselotus: 04:26:668 - ^
17:42 eclipselotus: 04:27:213 - ^
17:43 DivineEnigma: trip?
17:43 eclipselotus: tips
17:43 eclipselotus: triplet*
17:46 DivineEnigma: 04:26:668 - 04:27:213 -
17:46 DivineEnigma: i made into a trip
17:46 eclipselotus: 04:31:147 (5) - circle followed with 1/1 slider, for better rhytm
17:46 DivineEnigma: 04:23:395 - i'll leave it empty for now
17:47 eclipselotus: 04:32:228 - 1/1 slider as well
17:48 eclipselotus: 04:43:678 (6) - try 1/2 slider with 1x reverse
17:48 eclipselotus: 04:51:678 (8) - NC
17:49 eclipselotus: 05:01:951 - triplet reccomend since this was last kiai
17:50 eclipselotus: 05:21:683 - end the kiai here imo
17:50 eclipselotus: 04:29:304 - ^
17:51 eclipselotus: 05:27:137 (2,3) - this just too much
17:52 DivineEnigma: what do you mean end the kiai at 04:29:304 - ?
17:52 DivineEnigma: oh
17:52 DivineEnigma: LOL nvm
17:52 eclipselotus: 05:40:985 - add timing point here with 25% volume
17:52 DivineEnigma: whoops, it was suppose to end there >.<
17:53 eclipselotus: 05:42:042 - 5% volume for this last bpm point
17:53 eclipselotus: thats it
17:54 DivineEnigma: thanks for the mod ^_^

Good luck

morninkill wrote:

04:52:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - fix this lol

Whirl wrote:

morninkill wrote:

04:52:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - fix this lol

that isn't kudosu worthy, and it's actually a good pattern, please don't give kudosu for this post

Whirl wrote:

morninkill wrote:

04:52:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - fix this lol

that isn't kudosu worthy, and it's actually a good pattern, please don't give kudosu for this post

CraEZy wrote:

ok

00:10:416 (3,4) - blanket?

00:16:598 (4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - these jumps look like the have no logic in them, what pattern are they following? and why arent 00:16:598 (4,3) - ncs? I wanted to do a back and forth pattern where the DS would increase for each 1-2 jump since the drum was getting a bit louder. I did NC the ones you mentioned though.

00:19:143 (3,5) - avoid overlap pls intended, i can't place it more top as it would touch hp bar nor do i want to move (3) down and i'd move (5) more to the right but it'd increase DS too much

00:19:325 (4,1) - ^

00:20:416 (3) - why not place between 00:19:143 (3,4) -

00:23:766 (2) - maybe place under tail of 00:23:494 (1) - like wtih 00:22:779 (1,2) - ? this is same for every other pattern no thanks, I prefer the way it is right now

00:41:712 (1,2) - blanket? it's actually blanketed, if you move the y axis up to y: 228 you can see that it is, but it might not look like it is from y: 277

01:39:849 (1) - emphasize more cuz pretty strong sound

03:50:213 (2,3,4) - spacing between these 2 are too close imo i think it's fine, image, also this way it created a blanket with the tail of 03:51:122 (5) -

04:23:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ugly stream plz fix ahhh i think it's fine xd

04:52:769 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - wtf are these? why are you introducing a new type of 1/2 beat spam 5 mins into a marathon

05:34:076 (1) - plz fix ugly slider wtf it's just a triangle, it's not that bad anyways : (

maybe add some flashes in story board for kiaia times? i'll consider it

ok map