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Mariya Nishiuchi - Don't let me down

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Jonarwhal
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Jonarwhal
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, November 17, 2016 at 4:48:02 PM

Artist: Mariya Nishiuchi
Title: Don't let me down
Source: FAIRY TAIL
Tags: 2014 Tv Size フェアリーテイル Natsu Dragneel 7 wonders Celestial Spirits Ending 4 version 2 Hisui
BPM: 132
Filesize: 21028kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.28 stars, 85 notes)
  2. Hard (3.03 stars, 223 notes)
  3. Normal (1.95 stars, 129 notes)
Download: Mariya Nishiuchi - Don't let me down
Download: Mariya Nishiuchi - Don't let me down (no video)
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Changelog
  • Month . Day . Year
  1. 6.24.16- Moved to Pending.
  2. 6.25.16- Applied MARs mod.
  3. 6.27.16- Skin added. It is easier to ask for forgiveness than it is to ask for permission.
    Applied sonic8889's mod.
  4. 6.28.16- Applied FoxyGrandpa's mod.
  5. 6.29.16- Applied Lefia's mod.
  6. 7.9.16- Added ApplePie's Insane.
  7. 7/11.16- Redownload if downloaded before this date. Thank you.
    Applied Xayler's mod and UndeadCapulet's mod.
  8. 7.13.16- Applied Hobbes2's mod.
  9. 7.21.16- Applied MrSergio's mod.
  10. 7.22.16- Applied Narwhal Prime's mod.
  11. 7.23.16- Applied CaffeAmericano's mod.
    Applied Zyl's mod.
    Applied Arusamour's mod.
    Started looking for a BN.
  12. 7.25.16- Applied Underforest's mod.
  13. 7.26.16- Applied Fanteer's mod.
  14. 8.5.16- Applied 6th's mod.
  15. 8.12.16- Worked with BeatofIke in-game.
  16. 9.1.16- Applied Natsu's mod.
  17. 9.1.16- Applied Mako Sakata's mod and Log Off Now's mod.
Modders
Thank you guys~!!
My Angel RangE / sonic8889 / FoxyGrandpa / Lefia / Lilyanna / eclipselotus / Xayler / UndeadCapulet / Hobbes2 / MrSergio / Narwhal Prime / CaffeAmericano / Zyl / Arusamour / Underforest / Fanteer / 6th
BeatofIke
Natsu
UndeadCapulet / Mako Sakata / Log Off Now
Ayyri
Sonnyc
Sonnyc
Ayyri
IamKwaN
IamKwaN
Skin
The skin comes from this mapset. [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/u/1856463]
Last edited by Jonarwhal , edited 76 times in total.
My Angel RangE
1,055 posts
Joined April 2015
My Angel RangE
hii~

Easy
01:20:868 (5,6) - DS error


Normal
widescreen support cheek off please
beat very Instability Vocal ? beat ? (kiai time not.)

00:54:049 (3,4,5,6,7) - is that confusing

Darling
widescreen support cheek off please :)
3.1 star cs 4.4? i think cs 4..
Hard..? then..

00:05:185 (5,1,2) - DS different
00:08:822 (5,1,2) - ^
00:09:731 (3,4,5) -
00:26:095 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:32:004 (4,5,1) - ^
00:37:913 (6,1) - big DS
00:41:322 (4,5,1) - Owo..DS different
00:44:958 (5,6,1) - ^
00:49:049 (1,2,3) - ^

o good luck :)
Jonarwhal
1,216 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Jonarwhal

My Angel RangE wrote:

hii~

Easy
01:20:868 (5,6) - DS error Fixed~


Normal
widescreen support cheek off please Fixed~
beat very Instability Vocal ? beat ? (kiai time not.)

00:54:049 (3,4,5,6,7) - is that confusing Fixed~

Darling
widescreen support cheek off please :) Fixed~
3.1 star cs 4.4? i think cs 4.. Fixed~
Hard..? then..

00:05:185 (5,1,2) - DS different I made it smaller.
00:08:822 (5,1,2) - ^ I want to keep the emphasis on downbeat.
00:09:731 (3,4,5) - I made it smaller.
00:26:095 (3,4,5,6) - ^ I made it smaller.
00:32:004 (4,5,1) - ^ I want to keep the emphasis on downbeat.
00:37:913 (6,1) - big DS I made it smaller.
00:41:322 (4,5,1) - Owo..DS different I removed the anti-jump.
00:44:958 (5,6,1) - ^ It's not that bad here.
00:49:049 (1,2,3) - ^ I lowered it.

o good luck :)
Thank you for modding~!!
cisphobia
136 posts
Joined July 2012
cisphobia
my mod from my queue

Darling

tbh i can barely find anything in the diff. it's really good ;'(

00:03:595 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Cant hear hitsounds ;'{ you should bump up the volume

01:03:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - All these straight sliders made it feel too repetitive when I was playing, even though its only 5 notes. Maybe the one all the way on the top ( 01:04:731 (4) ) can be changed into a curve?

01:21:322 (6) - I'd take off the repeat, as it doesn't fit the vocals which is the only sound playing in this section.

00:49:049 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I think this section should be doing something alike to this section: 00:45:413 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) because the vocals + background instruments sound the same in both. Not exactly the same, but same pattern of hitcircle/slider.

00:57:231 (3,4,1,2,3) - I feel there are too many sliders here for a normal part of the song. Like, the rest of the song has hit-circles in between every 1 to 3 sliders. Or you can keep it because spinner recovery, up to you.

that's it for this diff. I feel like it's already really good and you'll probably need someone with much more experience than me to catch anything in this diff, if there is anything to catch. ;o

Normal


00:03:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - I can't hear any hitsounds here ;oo either that or it's barely audible. You should bump up the volume. Same as Darling

00:29:504 (4) - You might want to have this stacked under the other note, to do the same thing you did in Darling.

01:21:322 (7) - Same as Darling, you might wanna remove repeat.

00:37:231 (7,8) - For sections like this, where the drum is being hit 4 time in the background, you should have 2 1/2 sliders instead of a slider and a hitcircle. Adds more emphasis on the drums, which is what you want.

00:30:867 (1) - You should blanket this closer to the next slider.

I played this diff with ar 10 and noticed the map literally has you going in circles, which I think is a great strategy and makes it easier to follow the notes.
again, really good diff. I probably skipped over some things :o :o :o oh yeah, also, this diff (in star rating) is a hard. might want to tone it down some way to be normal rather than hard. Normal is 2.25 and below to 1.50 stars, this is 2.30 stars.

Easy


00:03:595 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Cant hear hitsounds, bump it up ;o

00:45:413 (1) - Move it a bit down to align better with the hitcircle before it.

00:41:777 (1) - You might wanna curve this up rather than down, so that 1. it doesn't look like the same slider twice and 2. it creates a better-looking pattern ;o. When I say curve up i mean the middle point, move it up instead of down.

00:59:959 (1) - Same ^^

01:01:777 (3) - Same ^^

01:11:322 (2) - Might wanna change this slider into a simple curve, because the repeat arrow direction can confuse an easy player.

Sorry for short mods xd
I think all 3 diffs. are already really good. The way the repeating patterns are make it easy to play but the overlapping notes make it a bit tricky in normal and Darling, which is perfect for people playing this range of diff.
im 100% sure that i'm skipping over some stuff, but other modders should be able to catch anything I didn't/couldn't ;o
good luck ranking ;) ;)
Jonarwhal
1,216 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Jonarwhal

sonic8889 wrote:

my mod from my queue

Darling

tbh i can barely find anything in the diff. it's really good ;'(

00:03:595 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Cant hear hitsounds ;'{ you should bump up the volume That would be because there are no hitsounds. I added a few whistles in every difficulty.

01:03:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - All these straight sliders made it feel too repetitive when I was playing, even though its only 5 notes. Maybe the one all the way on the top ( 01:04:731 (4) ) can be changed into a curve? I've seen worse.

01:21:322 (6) - I'd take off the repeat, as it doesn't fit the vocals which is the only sound playing in this section. Fixed~

00:49:049 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I think this section should be doing something alike to this section: 00:45:413 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) because the vocals + background instruments sound the same in both. Not exactly the same, but same pattern of hitcircle/slider. Fixed, slightly~

00:57:231 (3,4,1,2,3) - I feel there are too many sliders here for a normal part of the song. Like, the rest of the song has hit-circles in between every 1 to 3 sliders. Or you can keep it because spinner recovery, up to you. I changed 00:58:595 - this into circles.

that's it for this diff. I feel like it's already really good and you'll probably need someone with much more experience than me to catch anything in this diff, if there is anything to catch. ;o Yay (ﾉ^∇^)ﾉﾟ

Normal


00:03:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - I can't hear any hitsounds here ;oo either that or it's barely audible. You should bump up the volume. Same as Darling ^ Fixed~

00:29:504 (4) - You might want to have this stacked under the other note, to do the same thing you did in Darling. It's not necessary. I did it in Darling for spacing. In Normal, I'm using stacks mostly to indicate 1/2 rhythms and I want to keep that consistent.

01:21:322 (7) - Same as Darling, you might wanna remove repeat. ^ Fixed~

00:37:231 (7,8) - For sections like this, where the drum is being hit 4 time in the background, you should have 2 1/2 sliders instead of a slider and a hitcircle. Adds more emphasis on the drums, which is what you want. That's too much for a Normal difficulty which already goes over the recommended star difficulty (2.25*).

00:30:867 (1) - You should blanket this closer to the next slider. That's not a blanket. I'll change it.

I played this diff with ar 10 and noticed the map literally has you going in circles, which I think is a great strategy and makes it easier to follow the notes. True, it does flow well this way, but I have to be careful it doesn't become dull. For example, from 00:34:958 - here to 00:44:049 - here, almost 10 seconds, the player only has to move clockwise. It's boring to play. I switched it up a bit. The same thing also happened 01:06:322 - from here to 01:17:231 - here, but I changed it.
again, really good diff. I probably skipped over some things :o :o :o oh yeah, also, this diff (in star rating) is a hard. might want to tone it down some way to be normal rather than hard. Normal is 2.25 and below to 1.50 stars, this is 2.30 stars. As long as the spread is good it doesn't matter.

Easy


00:03:595 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Cant hear hitsounds, bump it up ;o ^ Fixed~

00:45:413 (1) - Move it a bit down to align better with the hitcircle before it. It's a straight slider, so the ideal flow would be a straight line.

00:41:777 (1) - You might wanna curve this up rather than down, so that 1. it doesn't look like the same slider twice and 2. it creates a better-looking pattern ;o. When I say curve up i mean the middle point, move it up instead of down. Fixed~

00:59:959 (1) - Same ^^ ^ Fixed~

01:01:777 (3) - Same ^^ ^ Fixed~

01:11:322 (2) - Might wanna change this slider into a simple curve, because the repeat arrow direction can confuse an easy player. I don't see what's so confusing about a bend. >> I changed the shape slightly.

Sorry for short mods xd
I think all 3 diffs. are already really good. The way the repeating patterns are make it easy to play but the overlapping notes make it a bit tricky in normal and Darling, which is perfect for people playing this range of diff.
im 100% sure that i'm skipping over some stuff, but other modders should be able to catch anything I didn't/couldn't ;o
good luck ranking ;) ;)
Thank you for modding~!! :D
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Jonarwhal
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Jonarwhal
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Foxy Grandpa
709 posts
Joined January 2015
Foxy Grandpa
Hiya! from my queue~


Sorry for the delay >_> been really busy.

Hard
Theres a lot more you can do with this, because you used 1/2 divisor just listening to it, it sounds like you could add triplets in places, etc. Because you used 1/2 also, it's A LOT cleaner, and just generally easier to mod. So there isn't a whole lot i could say

00:14:049 (5,1) - Put these on the same y axis

00:37:685 (5,6,1) - I would make this a stream, It'll fit the music, add some more challenge to your map

00:44:958 (5,6,1) - Something like this

01:02:685 (3,4,5,6,1) - Just add a note after 6 leading into the next slider

Sorry i couldn't find a whole bunch... It looks really clean though so, good luck!! :D
Jonarwhal
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Topic Starter
Jonarwhal

FoxyGrandpa wrote:

Hiya! from my queue~


Sorry for the delay >_> been really busy. 2 days is nothing. I've kept people waiting for 2 weeks sometimes.

Hard
Theres a lot more you can do with this, because you used 1/2 divisor just listening to it, it sounds like you could add triplets in places, etc. Because you used 1/2 also, it's A LOT cleaner, and just generally easier to mod. So there isn't a whole lot i could say SYMMETRY

00:14:049 (5,1) - Put these on the same y axis I'm going for Ctrl+j and Ctrl+h here.

00:37:685 (5,6,1) - I would make this a stream, It'll fit the music, add some more challenge to your map I made a doublet in some places for difficulty.

00:44:958 (5,6,1) - Something like this ^

01:02:685 (3,4,5,6,1) - Just add a note after 6 leading into the next slider ^

Sorry i couldn't find a whole bunch... It looks really clean though so, good luck!! :D
Thank u for modding~!! :D
Lefia
674 posts
Joined August 2014
Lefia
Hi from M4M queue (i'm late?)

mod
[general]

- Video's audio needs to removed in order for mapset to be ranked
- Audio's volume is low, set it into 100% with mp3gain
- About metadata:
- Change the artist to 西内まりや
- Change the song title into Don't Let Me Down (TV SIZE)
- You can check it here

[Easy]

- 00:14:049 (4,1,2) how about like this?
SPOILER

- 00:24:049 (2) ctrl + > 2 times and ctrl + g or try smth like this at 00:22:685 (4,1,2) (blanket 2 with (1) before)

- 00:37:231 (5,1,2) how about like this?

- 00:52:685 will better if like this

- 01:18:140 ^
- 01:21:322 i think you should 1/2 slider because is the last you use the slider or cirlce

[Normal]

- You can reduce the star rating with set the CS into 3
- Set AR into 5 or 5,5 because 4 is too low

- 00:05:18 (3,4,5,6) looks bad, because there is a strong beat at 00:05:867 how about like this?

- 00:08:140 (2) make this slider have reverse
- 00:08:822 (3,4,5,6) again... it looks bad, try like this

- 00:12:458 (3,4,5,6) how about like this?

- 00:30:867 (1,2) ctrl + h and make it blanket with (2)
- 00:47:685 strong beat here, don't ignore it
- 00:49:049 (1,4) overlap, i recommend you to change the AR
- 00:51:322 strong beat again, don't ignore it
- 01:13:140 ^
- 01:16:776 ^

[Hard]

- HP 7? Change it into 6 or 5 because 7 is for insane and extra
- Set OD into 6 or 5

00:04:504 (3,4) for better rhytm, it'll better if like this

00:05:413 (1,2) for better rhytm, how about like this?

00:08:140 (3,4) again... how about like this?

00:09:049 (1,2) .....

00:11:776 (3,4) if you still not understand what i mean, find out it with yourself. (sorry)

Nice diff, you should focus to the rhytm too

Good luck~
Jonarwhal
1,216 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Jonarwhal

Lefia wrote:

Hi from M4M queue (i'm late? No you're not.)

mod
[general]

- Video's audio needs to removed in order for mapset to be ranked
- Audio's volume is low, set it into 100% with mp3gain
- About metadata:
- Change the artist to 西内まりや
- Change the song title into Don't Let Me Down (TV SIZE)
- You can check it here
All fixed~

[Easy]

- 00:14:049 (4,1,2) how about like this? I did something similar.
SPOILER

- 00:24:049 (2) ctrl + > 2 times and ctrl + g or try smth like this at 00:22:685 (4,1,2) (blanket 2 with (1) before) I prefer the current pattern, it feels more structured.

- 00:37:231 (5,1,2) how about like this? I dislike the flow and the stacking in that pattern.

- 00:52:685 will better if like this Fixed~

- 01:18:140 ^ Fixed~
- 01:21:322 i think you should 1/2 slider because is the last you use the slider or circle Fixed~

[Normal]

- You can reduce the star rating with set the CS into 3 Fixed~
- Set AR into 5 or 5,5 because 4 is too low Fixed~

- 00:05:18 (3,4,5,6) looks bad, because there is a strong beat at 00:05:867 how about like this? Fixed~

- 00:08:140 (2) make this slider have reverse How? It's unnecessary.
- 00:08:822 (3,4,5,6) again... it looks bad, try like this Fixed~

- 00:12:458 (3,4,5,6) how about like this? Fixed~

- 00:30:867 (1,2) ctrl + h and make it blanket with (2) Fixed~
- 00:47:685 strong beat here, don't ignore it Fixed~
- 00:49:049 (1,4) overlap, i recommend you to change the AR 5.7
- 00:51:322 strong beat again, don't ignore it Fixed~
- 01:13:140 ^ Fixed~
- 01:16:776 ^ Fixed~

[Hard]

- HP 7? Change it into 6 or 5 because 7 is for insane and extra Fixed~
- Set OD into 6 or 5 Fixed~

00:04:504 (3,4) for better rhytm, it'll better if like this

00:05:413 (1,2) for better rhytm, how about like this?

00:08:140 (3,4) again... how about like this?

00:09:049 (1,2) .....

00:11:776 (3,4) if you still not understand what i mean, find out it with yourself. (sorry) No change. I understand that starting sliders on red ticks is usually frowned upon, but I think it's okay here. It's being used to emphasize the guitar notes that start on the red ticks. And, it's fun for me to play.

Nice diff, you should focus to the rhythm too

Good luck~
Lilyanna
1,918 posts
Joined March 2016
Lilyanna
Hi m4m from my queue

I hope this helps (ᵔᴥᵔ)

MOD
Normal
00:05:185 (3) - i hear no beat there maybe move this to the downbeat white tick here 00:04:958 -
00:08:822 (3) - same for this
00:12:458 (3) - ^
01:22:004 (1) - i think spinner ends here 01:27:231 - will be better
hard
00:04:504 (3,4,1,2,3) - its better if the rythem be like this
because these sliders 00:04:731 (4,2,3) - starts from red and end at white tick which is the main beat that i think its better to start from white tick
to be more clickable and emphasize the beat on white tick it will flow better so make the sliders start from white tick and place these 00:04:731 (4,2,3) - after the sliders like in the picture ( i hope u get what i mean D:)
00:08:140 (3,4,1,2,3,3,4) - same here and u can go through the map and see for urself if u want and agree
01:22:004 (1) - idk why u keep ending the spinner here when everything stoppes here 01:27:231 - maybe extend the spinner to white tick

Good luck with your map its well mapped :D
Jonarwhal
1,216 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Jonarwhal

Lilyanna wrote:

Hi m4m from my queue Heyyyy :)

I hope this helps (ᵔᴥᵔ)

MOD
Normal
00:05:185 (3) - i hear no beat there maybe move this to the downbeat white tick here 00:04:958 - There's a guitar tick there. There's a vocal there. Moving it would ruin the polarity. ask me what polarity is if you don't know
00:08:822 (3) - same for this A guitar tick is there.
00:12:458 (3) - ^ ^
01:22:004 (1) - i think spinner ends here 01:27:231 - will be better The spinner should reflect where the song ends, 01:27:004 - here.
hard
00:04:504 (3,4,1,2,3) - its better if the rhythm be like this
because these sliders 00:04:731 (4,2,3) - starts from red and end at white tick which is the main beat that i think its better to start from white tick
to be more clickable and emphasize the beat on white tick it will flow better so make the sliders start from white tick and place these 00:04:731 (4,2,3) - after the sliders like in the picture ( i hope u get what i mean D:) Yes, it is usually better to give the downbeat emphasis, but if you do it too often, it will subtract from the rhythm. I am following the guitar, and some of the emphasized guitar ticks are on red ticks, so no change.
00:08:140 (3,4,1,2,3,3,4) - same here and u can go through the map and see for urself if u want and agree ^
01:22:004 (1) - idk why u keep ending the spinner here when everything stops here 01:27:231 - maybe extend the spinner to white tick because it's where the song ends

Good luck with your map its well mapped :D
I didn't correct anything from your mod, but this is nothing to be ashamed of. You still deserve KD for these reasons:
1) Your mod demonstrates that you have knowledge of modding, and that you looked through my whole map.
2) I could be wrong! I am not an accurate and trustworthy source, so your mod may be right and I may be wrong.
Thank you so much for your time~!! ^^
I'll get to your mod ASAP. :D
Chihara Minori
1,235 posts
Joined December 2013
Chihara Minori
well i dont find stuff that really annoying me here
kds shoot instead .w.
goodluck on this
does the insane diff open slot .w.? i could do a gd if you want
Jonarwhal
1,216 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Jonarwhal

eclipselotus wrote:

well i dont find stuff that really annoying me here
kds shoot instead .w.
goodluck on this
does the insane diff open slot .w.? i could do a gd if you want
Someone just took it, but you can do another Insane or an extra if you want. ^^
Xayler
628 posts
Joined November 2013
Xayler
Heya, song's cool, you better would've better just told me to mod, but here the M4M comes. :)
Idk if I find anything that much, but I'll give my best opinions!
Quick clickbait to my map

General
Do you have 192 kbit/s of the song? I think that the quality would be even better, although doesn't really matter
01:21:777 (1) - listen to it in 25% ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Easy
00:14:504 (1) - I would rotate it by -60 and move the next circle, I think that you don't need to move the next slider with this change
00:36:322 (3) - move this to x:264 y:140 , better to click that way
00:50:868 (3,4) - idk I'm not blanket hunter usually, but I think that you can fix it quickly, or my eyes suck
01:00:868 (2) - copy this from 00:59:959 (1) ?

Normal
00:07:231 (1) - rotate this -30 , flows better I think
00:11:549 (2) - add a circle here and place it on top of 00:11:776 (3)
00:12:913 (6) - I would end it on white tick instead and add a circle 00:13:367 (7) - here, plays better
00:23:140 (6) - rotate this by -30 again, flowy flowz
00:34:504 (1) - move this to left, near 00:34:049 (8) - sliderend
01:13:822 (8) - move this on top of 01:14:049 (9)

Hard
SV is quite high I think, especially in kiai's
00:07:231 (1) - make this as a long slider to the white tick
00:21:776 (1) - CTRL+H
00:22:458 (3) - ^
00:44:958 (5) - hmm, make this circle as a slider to the red tick, and then place the circle in blue tick between those sliders, seems to flow well
01:01:549 (6) - move this to x:352 y:192

ApplePie's Insane
Use same kiai's as Jonawaga does?
00:05:640 (2,3) - too high spacing I think for start (others after that play well)
00:14:504 (1,2) - would higher the spacing here like previously
00:15:640 (4) - this fits as a single circle better I think, the previous kickslider may fit
00:25:867 (3) - make this also as a kickslider like the previous two
00:28:595 (5,6) - make this as normal spacing, doesn't fit I think
00:52:004 (3,4) - this is very weird for me as the previous kicksliders have tremendous distance and this circle doesn't have it
00:57:686 (6,7) - you can make the spacing higher here
00:59:504 (5) - make this also as a kickslider
01:08:368 (4,5,6) - I would have same spacing here as like 01:04:731 (4,5)
01:15:413 (3) - not sure about this one, but maybe a kickslider would fit better again
01:27:004 (3) - I would change this to a bit more spacing as the previous have that increase

Well I hope that'll be helpful, message me in game if you want me to explain or smth. Good luck with the set, I would also do a GD, but I see that the slots are kinda taken. :D
_IxApplePie_
246 posts
Joined November 2013
_IxApplePie_

Jonawaga wrote:

eclipselotus wrote:

well i dont find stuff that really annoying me here
kds shoot instead .w.
goodluck on this
does the insane diff open slot .w.? i could do a gd if you want
Someone just took it, but you can do another Insane or an extra if you want. ^^

Xayler wrote:

I would also do a GD, but I see that the slots are kinda taken. :D
Pls do another Insane if he permits AHAHAHA mine sucks :c
_IxApplePie_
246 posts
Joined November 2013
_IxApplePie_

Xayler wrote:

Heya, song's cool, you better would've better just told me to mod, but here the M4M comes. :)
Idk if I find anything that much, but I'll give my best opinions!
Quick clickbait to my map //clickbait indeed

ApplePie's Insane
Use same kiai's as Jonawaga does? // I don't really think the other two parts are suppose to be kiai, and quite abusing it for a 1 min + map
00:05:640 (2,3) - too high spacing I think for start (others after that play well) //decreased
00:14:504 (1,2) - would higher the spacing here like previously // just a little bit .-.
00:15:640 (4) - this fits as a single circle better I think, the previous kickslider may fit //sure
00:25:867 (3) - make this also as a kickslider like the previous two //ye
00:28:595 (5,6) - make this as normal spacing, doesn't fit I think // didn't make it into a "normal spacing" but something else
00:52:004 (3,4) - this is very weird for me as the previous kicksliders have tremendous distance and this circle doesn't have it //the previous one had a big distance cause after that is a stream which you can regain hp (?) .-. after the two kick slider which people might get 100. this one had a smaller distance cause no streams after that~
00:57:686 (6,7) - you can make the spacing higher here //yeaa
00:59:504 (5) - make this also as a kickslider // yea
01:08:368 (4,5,6) - I would have same spacing here as like 01:04:731 (4,5) //not sure about this but changed
01:15:413 (3) - not sure about this one, but maybe a kickslider would fit better again // i think it fits perfectly ^^
01:27:004 (3) - I would change this to a bit more spacing as the previous have that increase //i guess this spacing isn't too much .-.

Well I hope that'll be helpful, message me in game if you want me to explain or smth. Good luck with the set, I would also do a GD, but I see that the slots are kinda taken. :D

Thanks for the mod!

O-PiePiePiePiePie just jk xD
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UndeadCapulet
1,100 posts
Joined April 2013
UndeadCapulet
At your req:

General

bg is really low quality, it looks like a youtube screenshot
and tbh probably counts as nsfw orz

Is the song supposed to cut out at the end like that? Seems kinda weird o.O

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ApplePie's Insane

Kiai doesn't really make sense to me, 00:42:004 (2,3,4,5,6) - is just as intense as what comes before it. I think you should extend the kiai to 00:45:413 (1) - , or even all the way to 00:52:685 (1) - . And then extend the second kiai to 01:10:867 (1) - or 01:19:959 (1) - for similar reasons.

You use a lot of additive triplets/quints throughout the map. This is okay I suppose (maybe pushing it w/ quints), but you also skip a lot of the song's actual triplets, like at 00:26:095 (4) - . I think you should try to focus more on the song's true rhythms instead of adding so many of your own.

Also, long additive sections like 01:09:049 (1,2,3) - aren't really acceptable for ranking, since it's too far from the actual song. And adding extra notes to 1/4 drum stuff like 01:10:413 (5,6,7,8,1) - takes away from the song's rhythming :<

You should make sure that the rhythms you use are consistent for similar sounding parts of the song. See 00:49:049 (1,2,3) - vs 01:14:504 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . It's the same part of the chorus, so you should express it with the same rhythms (or at least close to the same). Rhythm structuring like this is what separates ranked maps from unranked maps.

Rhythmic consistency is especially true for your additive notes, if you put an extra triplet down somewhere, you should also put it down for any similar-sounding part of the song. Otherwise the triplet seems out of place, and may as well be removed.

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Hard

Same thing about kiai as Insane diff, cutting it off at 00:41:776 (1) - and 01:07:231 (1) - is weird to me, the song doesn't change intensity here. If you just want another fountain you can turn it off around 00:45:185 (6) - and then back on again, that's perfectly rankable. Applies to all diffs.

01:19:958 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern seems too hard for such a quiet part of the song, it's much more singletappy than the rest of the map. Maybe just do some 1/2 stacks pattern if you really want the clicking rhythm.

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Easy

01:10:868 (1,2,3,4) - Weird how different in rhythming this is from before, such a long sliderhold. tbh it fits well, maybe you should do that for this vocal every time :P

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gl!
_IxApplePie_
246 posts
Joined November 2013
_IxApplePie_

UndeadCapulet wrote:

At your req:

General

bg is really low quality, it looks like a youtube screenshot
and tbh probably counts as nsfw orz

Is the song supposed to cut out at the end like that? Seems kinda weird o.O

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ApplePie's Insane

Kiai doesn't really make sense to me, 00:42:004 (2,3,4,5,6) - is just as intense as what comes before it. I think you should extend the kiai to 00:45:413 (1) - , or even all the way to 00:52:685 (1) - . And then extend the second kiai to 01:10:867 (1) - or 01:19:959 (1) - for similar reasons.
//I second this!

You use a lot of additive triplets/quints throughout the map. This is okay I suppose (maybe pushing it w/ quints), but you also skip a lot of the song's actual triplets, like at 00:26:095 (4) - . I think you should try to focus more on the song's true rhythms instead of adding so many of your own.
// I'm actually following vocal, when there is, and rhythm when there's no vocal.


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Also, long additive sections like 01:09:049 (1,2,3) - aren't really acceptable for ranking, since it's too far from the actual song.
//erm, I don't get what you meant here but if you say it's not following the song, it actually is? the "Oahhhhhhh part"

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And adding extra notes to 1/4 drum stuff like 01:10:413 (5,6,7,8,1) - takes away from the song's rhythming :<
//What. HOW!? maybe i'm just dumb

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You should make sure that the rhythms you use are consistent for similar sounding parts of the song. See 00:49:049 (1,2,3) - vs 01:14:504 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . It's the same part of the chorus, so you should express it with the same rhythms (or at least close to the same). Rhythm structuring like this is what separates ranked maps from unranked maps.
// I agree about this. But one thing is, I found this two different beats, and I'm still wondering which is better .-.

Suggestions on which is better is appreciated c:

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Rhythmic consistency is especially true for your additive notes, //are they really addictive lol .-.

if you put an extra triplet down somewhere, you should also put it down for any similar-sounding part of the song. Otherwise the triplet seems out of place, and may as well be removed.
// Yes, I do know about this lol. But for some parts I feel like it needs an extra triplet here but not the front part as sometimes the front part will not have that beat while the back part has it.
And THIS IS WHY we have modders to actually pick out those extra triplets as mappers like me *pew pew* are actually very blur and mapped an extra beat there. If they find it weird/un-normal with a reason of course i'll change [if it's reasonable lah]
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gl! // thanks!

Omg, forgot to write this....
THANKS FOR THE MOD! <3

Changes:
00:59:504 (5,6,7,1) - I changed something here, so I decided not to follow Xayler's previous mod for this one, AS CONSISTENCY occurs pew pew.

Halp me hitsound it pls. :D

App's Up
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Jonarwhal
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Jonarwhal

Xayler wrote:

Heya, song's cool, you better would've better just told me to mod, but here the M4M comes. :)
Idk if I find anything that much, but I'll give my best opinions!
Quick clickbait to my map

General
Do you have 192 kbit/s of the song? I think that the quality would be even better, although doesn't really matter if it doesn't matter then no change
01:21:777 (1) - listen to it in 25% ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) aaaa

Easy
00:14:504 (1) - I would rotate it by -60 and move the next circle, I think that you don't need to move the next slider with this change Ruins symmetry
00:36:322 (3) - move this to x:264 y:140 , better to click that way The sound changes, so the flow break is good.
00:50:868 (3,4) - idk I'm not blanket hunter usually, but I think that you can fix it quickly, or my eyes suck Fixed, your eyesight is fine...
01:00:868 (2) - copy this from 00:59:959 (1) ? That is how it originally was lol. I think the current pattern looks nicer and flows better.

Normal
00:07:231 (1) - rotate this -30 , flows better I think Fixed~
00:11:549 (2) - add a circle here and place it on top of 00:11:776 (3) There is a circle there, and if I added another circle, it wouldn't follow the guitar.
00:12:913 (6) - I would end it on white tick instead and add a circle 00:13:367 (7) - here, plays better I dislike that rhythm
00:23:140 (6) - rotate this by -30 again, flowy flowz The flow is good enough, and your suggestion breaks symmetry.
00:34:504 (1) - move this to left, near 00:34:049 (8) - sliderend I am not messing up the symmetrical blankets there. Also, the flow change is fine because NC.
01:13:822 (8) - move this on top of 01:14:049 (9) I did something similar.

Hard
SV is quite high I think, especially in kiai's I chose a high SV because of the lower bpm and to get good-looking 1/2 sliders.
00:07:231 (1) - make this as a long slider to the white tick 00:07:685 - this neeeeds to be clickable
00:21:776 (1) - CTRL+H that makes a huge jump
00:22:458 (3) - ^ ^
00:44:958 (5) - hmm, make this circle as a slider to the red tick, and then place the circle in blue tick between those sliders, seems to flow well the flow is fine though
01:01:549 (6) - move this to x:352 y:192 there's nothing wrong with auto stacks

Well I hope that'll be helpful, message me in game if you want me to explain or smth. Good luck with the set, I would also do a GD, but I see that the slots are kinda taken. :D

_IxApplePie_ wrote:

Xayler wrote:

I would also do a GD, but I see that the slots are kinda taken. :D
Pls do another Insane if he permits AHAHAHA No thanks. mine sucks :c Your map is fine. Please be a bit more confident about it.
Thanks so much for modding~!! :) I'll get to your map asap. :D
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