Hey, mod for adlol's diff :3
Adlol's Universe (btw you might want to make the "a" small since its "adlol")00:20:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Put this to 1,3 slider velocity, make a round slider and then convert to stream. Right now this stream looks.. weird xD. might be a bit harder because youll have to do it perfectly round and, well there you dont have enough space but idk i think you should change it somehow and make something with a slider here and then converting.
00:18:879 (2,5) - Stack these under 00:18:349 (8) - ?
00:23:997 (6,8) - Weird overlaps you still got them often in your maps
00:19:408 (4) - 00:32:644 (6,7) - 00:37:349 (2,3) - 00:38:997 (4,5) - 00:46:232 (4,6,1) - 00:50:997 (5,2) - and so on
01:05:644 (3,6) - blankets could be a bit better 00:51:173 (1,2,3) - here too
from 00:11:644 (1) - until 00:15:702 (6) - i dont really understand your rhythm choice here. these .. uhh.. strong sounds? like on 00:11:820 (2) - 00:12:349 (4,5,6) - and so on idk maybe they should all be clickable or just make something thats kinda the same there but atm the rhythm on this seems a bit random for me, unless you did something and i dont see/hear it ^^
00:53:997 (3) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8402133 that blanket though xD
01:16:938 (2) - This should be copy pasted from the other straight sliders here and ctrl+h
01:17:997 (6,8,10) - These should be the same too
01:19:938 (4,5,6) - Overlaps make this look weird/bad
01:20:820 (1,3) - Should be copied
01:28:938 (1,2,3,4,5) - This should be done as slider again and converted into stream
01:41:644 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:42:702 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:44:114 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ (yea you got this often lol)
02:10:055 (6,2) - bad overlap
02:10:231 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - About this pattern. 1 and 3 should be the same as 2 and 4. copy 1 and 3 and then ctrl h and you have your 2 and 4 on this pattern.
02:19:761 (1,1,2,3,4) - Clumped together pattern. idk xD
02:43:761 (6,2) - Make blanket
02:46:585 (6,7) - ^
03:11:820 - could do such a rhythm
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8404483 if you make 2 3 4 a slider its gonna be easy to play
03:41:644 (3,4,5,6,1) - This stream into slider looks weird, converting a slider here makes it look better again. Maybe make nice blankets with next slider or something like that
04:02:467 (5,6) - Should be copy-pasted
04:03:526 (3,3) - ^+ next "3" (slider 3)
04:30:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Redo stream
So yea. Overall most of your ideas are already nice but you still have to work on your patterning. some stuff still seems kinda randomly placed and without any system and stuff.. hope you get what i mean here ^^
Otherwise i think this will be a nice map if you fix some stuff/work a bit on it
gl on it!