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UNDEAD CORPORATION - A Land Resplendent With Nature's Beauty

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Izzywing
Mod from my queue for Ayyri's Easy

combo stuff

00:05:031 (4) - NC
00:09:940 (4) - NC
00:16:485 (4) - NC
00:24:667 (5) - NC
00:31:212 (4) - NC
00:37:758 (5) - NC
00:42:667 (4) - NC

map itself is good tbh, I guess here's some nitpicky stuff

According to aimod you have some distance errors but it doesn't really look like it to me. I'd go over them just to be safe though.

00:13:212 (1,2) - its a strong sound effect it sounds weird when you use it on all 4 notes

^That happens somewhere else in the map too and it sounds weird there as well. I'd just consider changing it, but if you like it how it is now that's fine.

That's all I've got. Neat map!
Ayyri

Hobbes2 wrote:

Mod from my queue for Ayyri's Easy

combo stuff applied all of these

00:05:031 (4) - NC
00:09:940 (4) - NC
00:16:485 (4) - NC
00:24:667 (5) - NC
00:31:212 (4) - NC
00:37:758 (5) - NC
00:42:667 (4) - NC

map itself is good tbh, I guess here's some nitpicky stuff

According to aimod you have some distance errors but it doesn't really look like it to me. I'd go over them just to be safe though.

00:13:212 (1,2) - its a strong sound effect it sounds weird when you use it on all 4 notes changed it to be on only 4 notes, since the deeper piano at the end already happens in the song, I had it emphasizing the not-as-often sound.

^That happens somewhere else in the map too and it sounds weird there as well. I'd just consider changing it, but if you like it how it is now that's fine.

That's all I've got. Neat map! thank you
update
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the name should be in japanese, and my name as well as vulkin's should be in the tags.
just click
Hey, M4M from my queue requested by Ayyri for the Easy and Normal.


Ayyri's Easy


00:00:667 (1,2) - Slightly uneven blanket if you look at the approach circle.

00:03:394 (3,4,5) - Shouldn't the spacing be more consistent for an Easy difficulty? I suggest you use DS and fix any spacing issues, so I won't point out anything else spacing related unless it's easily noticeable.

Nothing else I can really find, just make sure the spacing is consistent throughout the map if you haven't already done so.

Vulkin's Normal


SV seems to be too fast for this type of song, along with the high spacing. I would consult a BN because I don't want to suggest changing it if it ends up being fine. Some of the spacing also is random, so I would try to make it more consistent.

00:01:758 (3,1) - Make these the same curvature? They are the same piano noise.

00:12:122 (2) - I think a more unique slider shape would look better, it looks kind of bland currently.

00:14:303 (2,4) - Uneven blanket judging by the approach circle.

00:17:576 (2,4) - (2) is kind of too close in my opinion, I suggest spacing it the same as the previous blanket.

00:31:758 (9) - More unique slider shape? Kind of bland to me.

00:37:212 (6,2) - Uneven blanket.

Not sure how I feel about this difficulty, many notes look randomly placed and don't really form any interesting patterns. I would suggest using more interesting slider shapes and patterns. I think it mainly looks randomly placed because of the large spacing.

Good luck with this mapset!
Ayyri

Breezy wrote:

Hey, M4M from my queue requested by Ayyri for the Easy and Normal.


Ayyri's Easy


00:00:667 (1,2) - Slightly uneven blanket if you look at the approach circle.

00:03:394 (3,4,5) - Shouldn't the spacing be more consistent for an Easy difficulty? I suggest you use DS and fix any spacing issues, so I won't point out anything else spacing related unless it's easily noticeable.

Nothing else I can really find, just make sure the spacing is consistent throughout the map if you haven't already done so.
tfw



Also the blanket was fixed before. But I might as well post the update /again/ until the mapset owner notices it.

notice me pls
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Vulkin
I really hope i did it a bit better ;w;
Thanks for the mod Breezy!

Update ^^
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DeletedUser_6181859
Hey from my queue, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
And yep, I am just learning. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate.
Song and beatmaps
Add "Vulkin" and "Ayyri" because they're GD-makers
Ayyri's Easy
Fix all mistakes with Distance Spacing: Ctrl+Shift+A -> Check distance snap :!:
00:02:031 (2) - mistake? This slider should be in 00:02:303
Glaceon's Slidders
It's unrankable diffname. Remove "Glaceon's" because makers of mapset never make sign in their diffs. Also rename "Slidders" to anything like "Normal" or "Easy".
00:05:031 (1) - move to x=268 y=212 for better blanket.
00:09:940 (1,2) - don't overlap
00:12:122 (1) - end in 00:13:758 because you should have at least 2 white ticks after spinner in Easy-diff for continue mapping
00:19:758 (1,1) - don't make overlap
00:33:394 (2,1) - so far from each other
00:32:849 (1,1) - try to stack
Vulkin's Normal
00:09:940 (5) - nc
00:14:849 (3) - ^
00:15:394 (4,2) - stack
00:25:758 (2,4) - ^
00:26:849 (4) - move a bit down for good blanket
00:30:122 (6) - nc
00:30:667 (7,9) - stack :!:
00:41:576 (2) - it's vrong slider. Make like in %image (it's from my mapset xd)
00:43:758 (4,6) - try to avoid overlap
00:44:849 (6,2) - stack
00:48:122 (4) - it's wrong slider, make like in %image%
It's very strange mapset because you have two diffs with nearly identical star rating. Well, if I were you I'll remove Ayyri's Easy because it's useless.
Good luck!
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Flufinn
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should be done in my opinion

possible change

just suggestions

^ = mod only needed if mod above is used

Ayyri's Easy

check distance snap issues found in AI mod -> Check distance snap

00:02:031 (2) should be at 00:02:303


00:49:21 (1, 1, 1) could be more spaced apart based on their place in the timeline



Glaceon's Slidders


Rename to just Easy or Normal as your name is not needed here and custom diff names should only appear on the hardest difficulty

00:01:758 (1,2) remove overlap or overlap better

00:07:212 place a note here to fit the piano and remove the break time as well

00:11:576 (2) move this note away from the slider

00:08:303 (1,1) change positions of these sliders so they line up better or just look nicer in general


00:21:394 (1) Neaten this slider up a bit and rotate it (Cntl + Shift + R) perhaps like this : http://imgur.com/df84F8t

00:23:031 (1,1,1) ^ copy look of slider to match my previous example on these next three sliders.

00:39:394 (1) move to (x=111, y=96) to line up with next slider

Vulkin's Normal

00:20:303 (5) new combo

00:21:394 (1) ^ remove new combo

00:26:849 (4) new combo

00:38:303 (2) re-design slider like this to curve it better: http://imgur.com/U3LIRYs

00:41:576 (2) same here to something like: http://imgur.com/pDHZceV

00:48:122 (4) same here - you don't need so many points! : http://imgur.com/ZhYFIAE

00:51:940 (1) strange slider but ok
Vulkin
Thanks for mods
Imgur hates me nowdays :D

EDIT: here
http://puu.sh/ppwXY/f74bfd53b9.zip
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