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t e l e p a t h Terepashii Nouryoku Sha - Mugen TEARDROPS Na

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Auxent
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Auxent
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 7. listopadu 2015 at 10:19:58

Artist: t e l e p a t h Terepashii Nouryoku Sha
Title: Mugen TEARDROPS Namida no Umi de
Tags: telepath ゲートウェイ vaporwave ambient sad wafu
BPM: 51,5
Filesize: 9980kb
Play Time: 00:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0,77 stars, 26 notes)
  2. Hard (2,31 stars, 79 notes)
  3. Normal (1,41 stars, 57 notes)
  4. Wafu's Beginner (0,5 stars, 13 notes)
Download: t e l e p a t h Terepashii Nouryoku Sha - Mugen TEARDROPS Namida no Umi de
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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雨わ離れて私の多摩市がかかります．．．


#1


Diffset:
Beginner: Wafu
Easy: Auxent
Normal: Auxent
Hard: Auxent
Storyboard: Auxent
Last edited by Auxent , edited 23 times in total.
YellowManul
429 posts
Joined December 2010
YellowManul
C o o l d ud de
Auxent
Topic Starter
Auxent

YellowManul wrote:

C o o l d ud de
T h a n k s d u d e .
Gordon123
1,038 posts
Joined June 2013
Gordon123
One big world, so gray and so lonely. Somewhere in a hurry, we do not notice the beauty around you, but just killing ourselves from within, not realizing that you lived every minute of it something more valuable and what daily life. Forget about everything and immerse yourself in my world!

[General]
[Wafu's Beginner]

  • volume make 30%
    00:02:576 (1) - second part of slider add clap
    00:13:061 (1) - second part of slider add finish(wav)
    00:30:537 (1) - ^ too(wav)
    00:35:197 (2) - clap
    00:39:857 (2) - first part of slider add clap
    00:48:011 (2) - second part of slider add finish(wav)
[Easy]

  • volume make 30%
    00:04:906 (2) - first part - clap
    00:14:226 (2) - second part - finish(wav)
    00:21:216 (2) - secong part - clap
    00:32:867 (1) - first part - finish(wav)
    00:39:857 (2) - fisrt part - clap
    00:50:342 (1) - first part - finish(wav)
[Normal]

  • volume make 30%
    00:04:323 (3) - second part - clap
    00:11:896 (1) - first part - clap
    00:14:226 (1) - second part - finish(wav)
    00:21:799 (4) - second part - clap
    00:29:372 (3) - clap
    00:31:702 (2) - second part - finish(wav)
    00:39:857 (4) - first part - clap
    00:46:847 (3) - clap
    00:50:342 (2) - first part - finish(wav)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

star for you >.O
nice song <3
Good Luck ;)
Auxent
Topic Starter
Auxent

Gordon123 wrote:

One big world, so gray and so lonely. Somewhere in a hurry, we do not notice the beauty around you, but just killing ourselves from within, not realizing that you lived every minute of it something more valuable and what daily life. Forget about everything and immerse yourself in my world!
♥

Applied hitsounds. Thank you. (:
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
We did a short run through the set and everything looks good.

Changes are minor.

IRC log
20:52 Bakari:  looking at the set now
20:52 Bakari: Wafu's diff is good to go
20:53 Auxent: heh, classic :D
20:53 Bakari: somethumbs.db can be removed 
20:54 *Bakari is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/815208 t e l e p a t h Terepashii Nouryoku Sha - Mugen TEARDROPS Namida no Umi de [Easy]]
20:55 Bakari: 00:14:226 (2) - I'd replace with two circles in order to stress the beats on the white ticks better
20:55 Auxent: ok
20:55 Auxent: fixed
20:56 *Bakari is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/814676 t e l e p a t h Terepashii Nouryoku Sha - Mugen TEARDROPS Namida no Umi de [Hard]]
20:57 Bakari: 00:12:478 - I'd love if the piano beats were clickable 
20:58 Auxent: Not fixing it here...sorry.
20:58 Bakari:   00:15:391 - and same
20:59 Auxent: replaced with a circle
20:59 Bakari: 00:35:197 (1,2) - this would fit better if it was a slider
21:02 *Bakari is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/815209 t e l e p a t h Terepashii Nouryoku Sha - Mugen TEARDROPS Namida no Umi de [Normal]]
21:02 Bakari: 00:20:925 (2) - not sure if making the downbeat mapped with a slidertail is a good idea
21:03 Bakari: it sort of lacks emphasis
21:03 Bakari: 00:24:711 - peoplewill demand more clickable stuff. something like [http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/Lc9qgKZG.png this maybe]
21:05 Auxent: ok i fix it

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!
Auxent
Topic Starter
Auxent
Thank you Bakari. Updated.
Lethargy
159 posts
Joined December 2013
Lethargy
Yo

[General]
  1. k
[Hard]
  1. 00:21:216 (3,4,5) - Blankety?
  2. 00:38:110 (2) - Co tohle? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3895623
  3. 00:46:848 (1) - ?? http://puu.sh/l4vpJ/6132267ce9.jpg
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:488 (4,5) - ?? http://puu.sh/l4vvX/e49f1da935.jpg
  2. 00:07:236 (1,2,3) - Co dat tohle vic do oblouku - http://puu.sh/l4vxT/f6a1a8a9fc.jpg
  3. 00:14:226 (1,2) - Blanket? http://puu.sh/l4vzA/2449ca12c1.jpg
  4. 00:21:799 (4,5) - ^
  5. 00:25:003 (1) - http://puu.sh/l4vCf/2688497466.jpg
  6. 00:50:342 (2,3,4) - ?? http://puu.sh/l4vGQ/c13a0fa22e.jpg
[Easy]
  1. Easy je k, ale ty hitsoundy jsou docela rusivy element, kdyz je tam slysis kazdy druhy kolecko
peknej mapset

PS: zase ty zasrany animace
Auxent
Topic Starter
Auxent

Lethargy wrote:

Yo

[General]
  1. k
[Hard]
  1. 00:21:216 (3,4,5) - Blankety? - Opraveno.
  2. 00:38:110 (2) - Co tohle? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3895623 - Opraveno.
  3. 00:46:848 (1) - ?? http://puu.sh/l4vpJ/6132267ce9.jpg
- Opraveno.

[Normal]
  1. 00:05:488 (4,5) - ?? http://puu.sh/l4vvX/e49f1da935.jpg - Nope. Nechávám tak.
  2. 00:07:236 (1,2,3) - Co dat tohle vic do oblouku - http://puu.sh/l4vxT/f6a1a8a9fc.jpg - Opraveno.
  3. 00:14:226 (1,2) - Blanket? http://puu.sh/l4vzA/2449ca12c1.jpg - Opraveno.
  4. 00:21:799 (4,5) - ^ - Opraveno.
  5. 00:25:003 (1) - http://puu.sh/l4vCf/2688497466.jpg - Opraveno.
  6. 00:50:342 (2,3,4) - ?? http://puu.sh/l4vGQ/c13a0fa22e.jpg
- Opraveno.

[Easy]
[list][*]Easy je k, ale ty hitsoundy jsou docela rusivy element, kdyz je tam slysis kazdy druhy kolecko[/list

peknej mapset - Děkuji.

PS: zase ty zasrany animace
Díky moc.
Euny
2,274 posts
Joined January 2014
Euny
as your request!♥


  • General
  1. Hs really nice. just fiinish sound feels bit loud for this song. could you change? i'll give you fixed one its 30% less ver. : http://puu.sh/l5qmE/a8ad8a8e0e.zip
  • Easy
  1. 00:48:012 (5,1) - swap new combo please. since you did it normal too.
  • Normal
  1. 00:29:954 (4) - i recommend to you ctrl H. flow become better.
  2. 00:50:342 (2) - add finish on this head seems you missed
  • Hard
  1. 00:19:760 (6) - move it bit right for better ds with 00:19:469 (5,1) - their.
  2. 00:22:381 (5) - this object is bit close with previous stuff. move it to around 320l164 and rotate this slider with -4 degrees(with selection centre) then will help avoid overap with 00:21:216 (3) - this too.
  3. 00:34:906 - seems dont need to ignore this beat. cause its final diff. hope you add note here
wafu's cant found..;;;
so..that's it :)
hope this is helpful... ;)
Auxent
Topic Starter
Auxent

Euny wrote:

as your request!♥


  • General
  1. Hs really nice. just fiinish sound feels bit loud for this song. could you change? i'll give you fixed one its 30% less ver. : http://puu.sh/l5qmE/a8ad8a8e0e.zip - Alright.
  • Easy
  1. 00:48:012 (5,1) - swap new combo please. since you did it normal too. - Fixed.
  • Normal
  1. 00:29:954 (4) - i recommend to you ctrl H. flow become better. - Fixed.
  2. 00:50:342 (2) - add finish on this head seems you missed - Fixed.
  • Hard
  1. 00:19:760 (6) - move it bit right for better ds with 00:19:469 (5,1) - their. - Fixed.
  2. 00:22:381 (5) - this object is bit close with previous stuff. move it to around 320l164 and rotate this slider with -4 degrees(with selection centre) then will help avoid overap with 00:21:216 (3) - this too. - Fixed.
  3. 00:34:906 - seems dont need to ignore this beat. cause its final diff. hope you add note here - Fixed.
wafu's cant found..;;;
so..that's it :)
hope this is helpful... ;)
- It was helpful. Thank you Euny ♥
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
Welcome back! (:


Metadata confirmation: https://telepathtelepath.bandcamp.com/album/--9 http://puu.sh/l5Osy/0b96a43506.png

[Wafu's Beginner]
  1. 00:25:876(2)- On the tail of the slider it shouldn't be whistle instead of the clap?As you did at 00:07:236(2)-,you can do that here too I mean you have to replace the clap with whistle.It seems the instruments are fading out here and a whistle would be good plus as you did at 00:07:236(2)- where are the instruments which are fading out as well
  2. 00:44:516(1)- Seems the instruments are going to fade out here like 00:07:236(2)- and 00:25:876(2)-and replacing the clap with whistle would be good to have something 'not louder' for fading out of the instruments + having consistency with 00:07:236(2)- and 00:25:876(2)- (in case that you fixed it)
  3. 00:48:011(2)- Missing finish on tail.There's clearly a cymbal but you forgot to put finish there so putting the finish on the tail of the slider would emphasize the cymbal from the tail of the slider
[Easy]
  1. 00:15:391(3,1)- Considering swapping these combos since on this note there are the reset of the vocals and not on the next object
  2. 00:48:012(1,2)- The NC mustn't be on the next note I mean on 00:50:342(2)-? Because there are the reset of the instruments as I can see so I suggest to swap the combos since the reset of the instruments are on 00:50:342(2)-,not here on 00:48:012(1)-
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:226(1,2)- I guess the NC must be on the next object I mean on 00:15:974(2)- because there are the rest of the instruments and not here on 00:14:226(1)- so I suggest to swap the combos since the reset of the vocals are on 00:15:974(2)-
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:741(3,4)- I see that you made a jump here but I don't hear nothing stronger to emphasize increasing the spacing and making a jump.I suggest to decrease the spacing here since there's nothing stronger to emphasize having a jump
That must be all! Good map but it needs some work on NCs on Normal and Hard in my opinion :D
Good Luck!
Auxent
Topic Starter
Auxent

ByBy13 wrote:

Welcome back! (:


Metadata confirmation: https://telepathtelepath.bandcamp.com/album/--9 http://puu.sh/l5Osy/0b96a43506.png

[Wafu's Beginner]
  1. 00:25:876(2)- On the tail of the slider it shouldn't be whistle instead of the clap?As you did at 00:07:236(2)-,you can do that here too I mean you have to replace the clap with whistle.It seems the instruments are fading out here and a whistle would be good plus as you did at 00:07:236(2)- where are the instruments which are fading out as well
  2. 00:44:516(1)- Seems the instruments are going to fade out here like 00:07:236(2)- and 00:25:876(2)-and replacing the clap with whistle would be good to have something 'not louder' for fading out of the instruments + having consistency with 00:07:236(2)- and 00:25:876(2)- (in case that you fixed it)
  3. 00:48:011(2)- Missing finish on tail.There's clearly a cymbal but you forgot to put finish there so putting the finish on the tail of the slider would emphasize the cymbal from the tail of the slider
[Easy]
  1. 00:15:391(3,1)- Considering swapping these combos since on this note there are the reset of the vocals and not on the next object https://osu.ppy.sh/s/371924 - Fixed.
  2. 00:48:012(1,2)- The NC mustn't be on the next note I mean on 00:50:342(2)-? Because there are the reset of the instruments as I can see so I suggest to swap the combos since the reset of the instruments are on 00:50:342(2)-,not here on 00:48:012(1)- - Players may find this confusing so I'm not fixing this.
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:226(1,2)- I guess the NC must be on the next object I mean on 00:15:974(2)- because there are the rest of the instruments and not here on 00:14:226(1)- so I suggest to swap the combos since the reset of the vocals are on 00:15:974(2)- - Fixed.
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:741(3,4)- I see that you made a jump here but I don't hear nothing stronger to emphasize increasing the spacing and making a jump.I suggest to decrease the spacing here since there's nothing stronger to emphasize having a jump - Not fixed.
That must be all! Good map but it needs some work on NCs on Normal and Hard in my opinion :D
Good Luck! - Thank you!
YellowManul
429 posts
Joined December 2010
YellowManul
yay irc mod.

log
19:37 YellowManul: hey, dom...
19:37 YellowManul: do you know what time is it?...
19:38 YellowManul: irc modding time o w o
19:38 Auxent: yay.
19:39 YellowManul: омг
19:39 YellowManul: красивое сб :33
19:40 Auxent: спасибо
19:40 YellowManul: не за что
19:40 Auxent: wait what?
19:40 Auxent: oh
19:41 YellowManul: not at all
19:41 YellowManul: ok
19:41 Auxent: i get it x|D
19:41 YellowManul: 00:52:673 (1) - i recommend you to set spinner volume on 5% in the end
19:41 YellowManul: owo
19:42 Auxent: ok
19:43 Auxent: done~
19:44 *YellowManul is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/815209 t e l e p a t h Terepashii Nouryoku Sha - Mugen TEARDROPS Namida no Umi de [Normal]]
19:44 YellowManul: 00:22:964 (5,6) -
19:44 YellowManul: spacing!
19:45 Auxent: fixed~
19:45 YellowManul: 00:34:032 (5) -
19:45 YellowManul: maybe you should do blanket
19:45 YellowManul: with 00:35:197 (1) -
19:46 YellowManul: also
19:46 Auxent: nah.
19:46 YellowManul: fix that spinner thing on every map
19:46 YellowManul: diff*
19:46 Auxent: yea ok.
19:46 YellowManul: owo
19:47 *YellowManul is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/814676 t e l e p a t h Terepashii Nouryoku Sha - Mugen TEARDROPS Namida no Umi de [Hard]]
19:47 YellowManul: 00:04:323 (4) -
19:47 YellowManul: why jump is here
19:47 Auxent: because why not...
19:48 Auxent: i ran out of ideas ;w;
19:48 YellowManul: like
19:48 YellowManul: one sec
19:48 YellowManul: 00:03:741 (3) -
19:48 YellowManul: x:332 y:84 for better flow? owo
19:49 Auxent: no, sorry, i'd like to keep it.
19:49 Auxent: also it's quite huge jump already...
19:49 YellowManul: oki
19:50 YellowManul: 00:20:051 (1) -
19:50 YellowManul: x:448 y: 192
19:50 YellowManul: like, triangle pattern
19:51 YellowManul: that's all tbh
Auxent
Topic Starter
Auxent

YellowManul wrote:

yay irc mod.

log
19:37 YellowManul: hey, dom...
19:37 YellowManul: do you know what time is it?...
19:38 YellowManul: irc modding time o w o
19:38 Auxent: yay.
19:39 YellowManul: омг
19:39 YellowManul: красивое сб :33
19:40 Auxent: спасибо
19:40 YellowManul: не за что
19:40 Auxent: wait what?
19:40 Auxent: oh
19:41 YellowManul: not at all
19:41 YellowManul: ok
19:41 Auxent: i get it x|D
19:41 YellowManul: 00:52:673 (1) - i recommend you to set spinner volume on 5% in the end
19:41 YellowManul: owo
19:42 Auxent: ok
19:43 Auxent: done~
19:44 *YellowManul is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/815209 t e l e p a t h Terepashii Nouryoku Sha - Mugen TEARDROPS Namida no Umi de [Normal]]
19:44 YellowManul: 00:22:964 (5,6) -
19:44 YellowManul: spacing!
19:45 Auxent: fixed~
19:45 YellowManul: 00:34:032 (5) -
19:45 YellowManul: maybe you should do blanket
19:45 YellowManul: with 00:35:197 (1) -
19:46 YellowManul: also
19:46 Auxent: nah.
19:46 YellowManul: fix that spinner thing on every map
19:46 YellowManul: diff*
19:46 Auxent: yea ok.
19:46 YellowManul: owo
19:47 *YellowManul is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/814676 t e l e p a t h Terepashii Nouryoku Sha - Mugen TEARDROPS Namida no Umi de [Hard]]
19:47 YellowManul: 00:04:323 (4) -
19:47 YellowManul: why jump is here
19:47 Auxent: because why not...
19:48 Auxent: i ran out of ideas ;w;
19:48 YellowManul: like
19:48 YellowManul: one sec
19:48 YellowManul: 00:03:741 (3) -
19:48 YellowManul: x:332 y:84 for better flow? owo
19:49 Auxent: no, sorry, i'd like to keep it.
19:49 Auxent: also it's quite huge jump already...
19:49 YellowManul: oki
19:50 YellowManul: 00:20:051 (1) -
19:50 YellowManul: x:448 y: 192
19:50 YellowManul: like, triangle pattern
19:51 YellowManul: that's all tbh
*throws a kudosu at your face* - thank you~
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
Rechecked and fixed a missing finish on Wafu's Beginner.Everything is fine now!

Bubbled!
Krfawy
1,374 posts
Joined March 2012
Krfawy
W naszym domu zamieszkał kapitalny sąsiad
23:19 Auxent: Nice play~
23:19 Krfawy: thanks \w/
23:19 Krfawy: XD
23:19 Auxent: btw. it's not my fault that Byby stole your chmure.
23:20 Auxent: She told me that she wrote you, that she's going to bubble it.
23:20 Auxent: Which i believe is a bullshit.
23:20 Auxent: xD
23:20 Krfawy: no, she did :D
23:20 Auxent: oh ok :D
23:20 Krfawy: me and ByBy know each other at osu XD
23:20 Krfawy: and we chat quite often :3
23:21 Auxent: i see.
23:21 Auxent: because I asked her, if she's going to qualify this after you will bubble it.
23:21 Krfawy: yeah she was very excited that she could put a bubble on it \w/
23:21 Krfawy: and still I can put my 'serduszko' on it XD
23:21 Auxent: oh
23:21 Auxent: <3
23:22 Auxent: Srdíčko - Serduszko.
23:22 Auxent: That's so sweet.
23:22 Krfawy: don't be offended but I believe AR6.6 would be better ;V
23:22 *Krfawy is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/814676 t e l e p a t h Terepashii Nouryoku Sha - Mugen TEARDROPS Namida no Umi de [Hard]]
23:22 Krfawy: in this diffu
23:22 Krfawy: ooo
23:22 Krfawy: Srdicko XD
23:22 Krfawy: I can't make that 'c' D:
23:22 Auxent: xD
23:22 Auxent: you read it as "cz"
23:22 Auxent: č
23:22 Krfawy: o
23:23 Auxent: 6,8 pls ;ww
23:23 Krfawy: I think I would say it 'serdyczko' XD
23:23 Krfawy: okay, AR6.8 is okay \w/
23:23 Auxent: i have everything set on -0,2
23:23 Auxent: ok :)
23:23 Krfawy: XD
23:23 Krfawy: the fetish of 2
23:23 Krfawy: .3.
23:23 Auxent: :D
23:25 Auxent: ok tell me when i should update (:
23:26 Krfawy: yeah, update
23:28 Auxent: updating~
23:28 Krfawy: okie \o/
23:28 Krfawy: I see the change \w/
23:28 Auxent: jest to tam.
23:28 Krfawy: tak, jest \o3o/
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Mao
Grats!
Yuii-
2,503 posts
Joined July 2013
Yuii-
Hi, there!

There's a thumbs.db file on your storyboard folder! You want to delete that \:D/
Also on 00:10:148 (2) - (Hard) can you make that a slider, please? There's a clear extended sound instead of a hit, so that circle seems to be quite random.

Good luck!
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
2,881 posts
Joined March 2009
Charles445
Hi. Saved some space on the PNG files in the storyboard.

14.1 mb -> 7.6mb

Image pack -> http://puu.sh/lcpRo/d638357506.rar
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