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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 9월 21일 목요일 at 오후 11:33:56

Artist: Narae
Title: Horangpungnyuga
Source: 나와 호랑이님
Tags: 상록수 SQUARE MUSIQ MVZ Production My Tiger's O2Jam Light Novel Underflow Genocide PatZar
BPM: 160
Filesize: 27979kb
Play Time: 01:47
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Image Futsuu

Seems fine.


Image Inner Oni

00:00:264 - dd kd k
00:01:014 - ^
00:01:764 - ddkddkkdk
00:06:639 - kdk
00:14:514 - ddddk
00:15:264 - dd dk
00:16:014 - ddddk
00:18:264 - dd kd
00:19:014 - ddddk
00:19:764 - kdddk
00:21:264 - dd dk
00:22:014 - ddddk
00:24:357 - Delete
00:24:826 - d
00:25:014 - kdddk
00:26:326 - d
00:27:264 - dd kd

00:27:826-00:38:514 - seems unnatural, not matched song

00:39:264-00:50:514 - like this, make more to match song

00:51:264-01:01:576 - recommend to match vocal
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From Queue : t/372575


Image Futsuu

Seems fine.


Image Inner Oni

00:00:264 - dd kd k Now is better to hear imo.
00:01:014 - ^ Same as above.
00:01:764 - ddkddkkdk I'll consider about this.
00:06:639 - kdk It is lower pitch than around imo.
00:14:514 - ddddk I followed some drum sound on here. but i'll consider about this.
00:15:264 - dd dk No. although i didn't follow vocal but it is fit the music now.
00:16:014 - ddddk Same as above.
00:18:264 - dd kd ^
00:19:014 - ddddk ^
00:19:764 - kdddk ^
00:21:264 - dd dk ^
00:22:014 - ddddk ^
00:24:357 - Delete Not bad but i'll consider more about this.
00:24:826 - d Same reason as 00:15:264. No change.
00:25:014 - kdddk Same as above.
00:26:326 - d ^
00:27:264 - dd kd ^

00:27:826-00:38:514 - seems unnatural, not matched song There is sound surely.

00:39:264-00:50:514 - like this, make more to match song

00:51:264-01:01:576 - recommend to match vocal No change for now. i will try to other pattern.

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이너오니만 모딩해달라고 하셔서 이너오니만 할게요

Inner Oni
초반에 나오는 패턴들이 박자가 다 똑같아서 솔직히 좀 별로네요.. 00:05:514 (35,36,37,38,39) - 이부분이나 00:07:014 (45,46,47,48,49) - 이부분을 ㅇ ㅇㅇㅇ ㅇ 이런식으로 약간 박자를 다르게 해주는게 좋을것 같아요

00:11:514 (75,76,77,78,79) - ^

00:12:264 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - 노트 밀집도가 높다가 갑자기 줄어드는건 좀 어색하다 생각해요 저기에 노트를 더 넣기보다는 초반이기도 하고 밀집도를 줄여보는것도?

00:57:264 (380,381,382) ~ 01:01:389 (413,414,415) - 음... 뒤부분 소리에 맞춘거 같은데 이렇게 길게 같은패턴이 나오는건 좀... 이부분엔 노트를 빼기는 좀 그렇고 몇개 추가해서 5연타라던지를 넣어보는건 어떨까요

01:38:514 (654,655,656,657,658) - 처음과 동일

01:40:014 (664,665,666,667,668) - ^

01:44:514 (694,695,696,697,698) - ^

3초부터 조용해지기 전까지(51초) 밀집이 너무 심해보여요 난이도를 좀 낮추는게 좋을듯
패턴에는 딱히 지적할게 없네요


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혹시나 해서 모딩 요청해봤는데 역시 문제가 꽤 있네요. 모딩 수정 내역은 마우스 오는대로 올릴게요.
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이너오니만 모딩해달라고 하셔서 이너오니만 할게요

Inner Oni
초반에 나오는 패턴들이 박자가 다 똑같아서 솔직히 좀 별로네요.. 00:05:514 (35,36,37,38,39) - 이부분이나 00:07:014 (45,46,47,48,49) - 이부분을 ㅇ ㅇㅇㅇ ㅇ 이런식으로 약간 박자를 다르게 해주는게 좋을것 같아요

00:11:514 (75,76,77,78,79) - ^

00:12:264 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - 노트 밀집도가 높다가 갑자기 줄어드는건 좀 어색하다 생각해요 저기에 노트를 더 넣기보다는 초반이기도 하고 밀집도를 줄여보는것도? 위의 내용 포함해서 일단 보류, 갈아엎는거라 시간이 좀 걸릴것 같아요.

00:57:264 (380,381,382) ~ 01:01:389 (413,414,415) - 음... 뒤부분 소리에 맞춘거 같은데 이렇게 길게 같은패턴이 나오는건 좀... 이부분엔 노트를 빼기는 좀 그렇고 몇개 추가해서 5연타라던지를 넣어보는건 어떨까요 Changed

01:38:514 (654,655,656,657,658) - 처음과 동일

01:40:014 (664,665,666,667,668) - ^

01:44:514 (694,695,696,697,698) - ^ 마찬가지로 시간이 좀 걸림

3초부터 조용해지기 전까지(51초) 밀집이 너무 심해보여요 난이도를 좀 낮추는게 좋을듯
패턴에는 딱히 지적할게 없네요


GL

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hi from my queu

>General
  • OD HP on Kantan and Futsuu.. is wrong, why thats swapped ww? Kantan is OD 4, Futsuu is 3?, fix this XD

>Inner Oni
  • 00:26:326 - over? change to don.. bcus is low then 00:26:514 - this high drum.. and this well fit with vocal too
  • 00:38:326 - same above, but if want variety is fine. but i guess u like consistentcy stuff
  • 01:35:889 (636) - change don? for consistent with other diff? yep
  • wuw nice mapped

>Oni
  • 00:26:326 - nah u did it, so maybe u fix this for consistent hitsounding on Inner
  • 00:38:326 - same above like Inner, and 00:37:764 - kkddk 1/2 is well nice for flow Vocal
  • ww well emphasize mapping on vocal, and music too

>Muzukashii

>Futsuu
  • well many 1/1 n less 1/2 mapped. but looks good. nice get rest,
  • okay.. 01:04:389 (113,114,115) - dkd 1/2 looks harsh for futsuu players, so u want make ddd 1/2? and 01:10:389 (129,130,131) - kkk 1/2? this nice variety and easir to play.. just it Futsuu.. well u did it~

>Kantan
  • well, maybe I cant say somethink? thats Righd!1!

GLuck! :lol:
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hi from my queu

>General
  • OD HP on Kantan and Futsuu.. is wrong, why thats swapped ww? Kantan is OD 4, Futsuu is 3?, fix this XD lol cuz i am stupid. thanks.

>Inner Oni
  • 00:26:326 - over? change to don.. bcus is low then 00:26:514 - this high drum.. and this well fit with vocal too Fixed!
  • 00:38:326 - same above, but if want variety is fine. but i guess u like consistentcy stuff Fixed.
  • 01:35:889 (636) - change don? for consistent with other diff? yep Changed.
  • wuw nice mapped >w<

>Oni
  • 00:26:326 - nah u did it, so maybe u fix this for consistent hitsounding on Inner Yeap!
  • 00:38:326 - same above like Inner, and 00:37:764 - kkddk 1/2 is well nice for flow Vocal Fixed.
  • ww well emphasize mapping on vocal, and music too

>Muzukashii

>Futsuu
  • well many 1/1 n less 1/2 mapped. but looks good. nice get rest,
  • okay.. 01:04:389 (113,114,115) - dkd 1/2 looks harsh for futsuu players, so u want make ddd 1/2? and 01:10:389 (129,130,131) - kkk 1/2? this nice variety and easir to play.. just it Futsuu.. well u did it~ Changed to other way.

>Kantan
  • well, maybe I cant say somethink? thats Righd!1!

GLuck! :lol:

Thanks for modding XD
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마더뻐킹 불도저


내면의 악마

00:17:326 - 이부분을 지금처럼하면 뭔가 뛰어가다가 돌뿌리에 걸려 넘어져 발목삐는 느낌이라 hoxy./ dk k dk 이런식으로 바꿔뽀씨는꼐어떤까요
00:20:326 - 등등 ok
00:27:264 - 요르케 노트 많아지는건 비선호지만 그건 제 개취니 느머가고
00:29:326 - 이 부분을 dkkddkd 으로하면 더 치기도 편하고 (언더)플로우도 좋아질거라고 썡깎하ㅃ니따
00:32:326 - 내가 무슨말을 할지 알겠지 bro
00:43:764 - 이것도 느무 길어서 다른부분이랑 안어울리기도하고 치기힘드렁서 블케. 00:49:576 - 이부분 도입부라 생각하고 바꾸ㅃ씨따
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00:57:264 - 여기도 좀만 주려줍시다.
01:07:951 (453,454,455,456,457) - 이것도 kkddk으로
01:19:951 (538,539,540,541,542,543,544) - 요것도 위에거랑 맞춰서 kkddkdk 하면 좋겠지만 별로면 놔두셔도되고. 아 근데 위에건 진짜 바꾸셔야함

개귀찮다
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마더뻐킹 불도저


내면의 악마

00:17:326 - 이부분을 지금처럼하면 뭔가 뛰어가다가 돌뿌리에 걸려 넘어져 발목삐는 느낌이라 hoxy./ dk k dk 이런식으로 바꿔뽀씨는꼐어떤까요 확실이 그 편이 좀더 하기 편할지도 모르겠는데, 일단은 보류할게요. 왜냐하면 백그라운드쪽 음악이 저런식으로 들려요.
00:20:326 - 등등 ok 비슷한 이유로 보류
00:27:264 - 요르케 노트 많아지는건 비선호지만 그건 제 개취니 느머가고 일단 이전하곤 좀 다르게 하려고 노트를 늘리긴 했습니다만, 다음에도 모딩 오면 고려를 해봐야겠네요.
00:29:326 - 이 부분을 dkkddkd 으로하면 더 치기도 편하고 (언더)플로우도 좋아질거라고 썡깎하ㅃ니따 백그라운드 음악이 저런느낌이기에 마찬가지로 보류
00:32:326 - 내가 무슨말을 할지 알겠지 bro 위와 동일
00:43:764 - 이것도 느무 길어서 다른부분이랑 안어울리기도하고 치기힘드렁서 블케. 00:49:576 - 이부분 도입부라 생각하고 바꾸ㅃ씨따 다른 패턴으로 변경
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00:57:264 - 여기도 좀만 주려줍시다. 여긴 점점 노트가 늘어난다는걸 3연타로 이전에 표현을 해놨으니 괜찮을것 같아요.
01:07:951 (453,454,455,456,457) - 이것도 kkddk으로 자세히 들어보면 dkkdk 맞긴 한데, kkddk이 현 상황에선 더 잘맞을것 같으니 변경
01:19:951 (538,539,540,541,542,543,544) - 요것도 위에거랑 맞춰서 kkddkdk 하면 좋겠지만 별로면 놔두셔도되고. 아 근데 위에건 진짜 바꾸셔야함 Fixed

개귀찮다 시간내주셔서 감사합니다.

Thanks for modding :3
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General
00:51:264 - SV x0.9 because the song is slow down a bit here.
01:03:264 - If applied ^ , SV x1.0 or x1.1 here.


Muzu
00:15:076 - delete?
00:44:889 - ^
01:31:107 - add k
01:25:107 - ^


Oni
01:47:326 - add d
01:46:951 - add d

Sorry for bad mod because your map is quite good enough
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General
00:51:264 - SV x0.9 because the song is slow down a bit here.
01:03:264 - If applied ^ , SV x1.0 or x1.1 here. I don't want to change velocity.


Muzu
00:15:076 - delete? I'll consider about this.
00:44:889 - ^ Same as above.
01:31:107 - add k ^
01:25:107 - ^ ^


Oni
01:47:326 - add d Now is better imo.
01:46:951 - add d Same as above.

Sorry for bad mod because your map is quite good enough Thanks XD

Thanks for modding :3
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Hi, from my queue~

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)


Image Kantan

01:47:514 - Change to K to follow the finish of the song.


Image Futsuu

01:20:701 (155,156) - Change to k to follow the consistency with 01:08:514 (124,125,126,127) -
01:46:764 (210,211,212) - Change to K to follow the finish of the song.


Image Muzukashii

01:47:514 - Change to K to follow the finish of the song.


Image Oni

01:47:514 - Change to K to follow the finish of the song.


Image Inner Oni

01:47:514 - Change to K to follow the finish of the song.

Excelent Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~
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Hi, from my queue~

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)


Image Kantan

01:47:514 - Change to K to follow the finish of the song. No change for consistency with 00:13:764


Image Futsuu

01:20:701 (155,156) - Change to k to follow the consistency with 01:08:514 (124,125,126,127) - Changed both to kkd.
01:46:764 (210,211,212) - Change to K to follow the finish of the song. Same as Kantan


Image Muzukashii

01:47:514 - Change to K to follow the finish of the song. Same as Kantan


Image Oni

01:47:514 - Change to K to follow the finish of the song. Same as Kantan


Image Inner Oni

01:47:514 - Change to K to follow the finish of the song. Same as Kantan

Excelent Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~ Thanks

Thanks for modding XD
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you remind me of ploenar. wait. you ARE ploenar!!

from my queue~


Kantan
it's good.

00:35:514 (36) - change to d to make stronger feels at 00:36:264 (37) - ?

00:40:576 () - note in red tick is rarely used in kantan. change to other pattern? like move it to 00:40:764 - and add k at 00:41:139 -
00:46:576 () - same with above, move to 00:46:764 - and add k at 00:47:139 -

00:54:264 () - k is better to emphashize the low pitch at 00:55:764 ()
00:57:264 () - change to d for consistency with 00:51:264 -
01:00:264 () - d, the instument's pitch seems going down

actually you can add more notes in the kiai like below:
01:17:889 () - move to 01:17:139 -
01:17:514 - add k
01:23:889 () - move to 01:23:139 -
01:23:514 - add k


Futsuu
00:02:514 (5) - D sounds better here

00:04:014 ~ 00:13:764 - the triple 1/1 notes sequence might be very long and boring.
00:05:889 () - delete
00:08:889 () - ^
00:11:889 () - ^

00:41:889 () - move to 00:41:139 - ?
00:47:889 () - move to 00:47:139 -

00:57:264 () - d? refer to 00:51:264 -
00:58:389 () - move to 00:59:139 -
00:59:889 () - delete

01:35:514 (184,185) - maybe delete for longer break?
01:38:889 () - delete
01:41:889 () - ^
01:44:889 () - ^


Muzukashii
00:02:514 (10) - D
00:46:951 (168,169,170,171) - kdkk fits vocal better
00:40:951 (145,146,147,148) - kdkd
00:52:764 (188,189) - swap

00:02:326 () - can be deleted
00:53:889 () - ^ for little break in calm part
00:56:889 () - ^

00:56:514 () - change to d
01:08:514 () - change to d
01:20:514 () - ^

very good. but maybe you need to remove some notes (like 20 or so) for better spread with futsuu and Oni.


Oni
00:02:514 (13) - D
perfect, but maybe can make a little harder?


Inner Oni
00:17:701 - add note? the duplets here not sounds nice to me
00:20:701 - ^
00:23:701 - ^
other than that is good.


thats all from me. Good luck!
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