Imai Asami - Asayake no Starmine (Anime Ver.) · forum

Crystal

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Joined June 2012

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Crystal 2015-06-28T06:51:07+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年7月17日 at 23:18:00

Artist: Imai Asami
Title: Asayake no Starmine (Anime Ver.)
Source: プラスティック・メモリーズ
Tags: Plastic Memories ed ending wcx19911123 IamKwaN -_E_n_j_u_- Enjoy Kawaiwkyik Rizia Kencho tv size anime
BPM: 130
Filesize: 15885kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

Beginner (0.9 stars, 45 notes)
Enjoy's Hard (2.84 stars, 215 notes)
Insane (3.56 stars, 274 notes)
Kencho's Easy (1.19 stars, 84 notes)
KwaN's Normal (1.64 stars, 118 notes)
wcx's Normal (1.56 stars, 115 notes)
wkyik's Memory (3.75 stars, 274 notes)

Download: Imai Asami - Asayake no Starmine (Anime Ver.)
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#9 Plastic Memories ED

OP: Eri Sasaki - Ring of Fortune

mapset

Beginner by me
Easy by Kencho
Normal by wcx19911123 & IamKwaN
Hard by Enjoy
Insane by Rizia & me
bg found by Euphoria
mp3 and video file from Kuo Kyoka's Mapset!

Last edited by Crystal 2015-07-25T00:49:28+00:00, edited 23 times in total.

zyoi

631 posts

Joined May 2014

zyoi 2015-06-28T07:25:42+00:00

Hitsounds
http://puu.sh/iFuEr/05743bf2b5.rar

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osu file format v14

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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Asayake no Starmine (Anime Ver.)
TitleUnicode:朝焼けのスターマイン (アニメVer.)
Artist:Imai Asami
ArtistUnicode:今井麻美
Creator:Crystal
Version:Enju's Hard
Source:プラスティック・メモリーズ
Tags:Plastic Memories ed ending
BeatmapID:0
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Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2015-06-29T14:48:40+00:00

Nice map

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-07-01T09:34:21+00:00

http://puu.sh/iJi6M/84559eb9f7.rar

pocket-Gao

275 posts

Joined August 2013

pocket-Gao 2015-07-01T12:08:50+00:00

=w=

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2015-07-01T12:56:19+00:00

From qq群 request

[General]

tag加上各個GDer的名字
這BG相片感覺壓過頭，畫質太差，我弄了個高清版的
SPOILER

[wcx's Easy]

感覺DS太大了，1.1或許比較好，N標的E感覺不太好
00:39:072 (3,4) - 沒blanket好
01:26:149 (5) - NC

[KwaN's Normal]

沒加影片
沒有大問題，nice diff

[Enju's Hard]

00:17:841 (5) - NC
00:43:918 (2) - NC
00:48:764 (4) - 放下一點點
01:11:610 (4) - NC

[Insane]

00:03:072 (1,2) - 這兩個弄彎，統一樣式，像這樣？
SPOILER
00:10:456 (1,2) - 還是覺得弄成微彎的感覺比較好
00:31:226 (2,3) - 沒blanket好
01:21:764 (6,1) - 可以blanket一下，當然改了樣式之後同樣複製到01:24:303 (3) - 吧
01:24:303 (3) - NC？
01:27:995 (5) - NC？

[wkyik's Insane]

00:26:149 (4,5,6) - 這個轉變有點大，6放近一點？
00:45:995 (2,3) - 2再弄彎一點
01:26:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個參考其他難度放個星形也不錯

都是神圖，快找BN吧

Wing My Way

186 posts

Joined September 2013

Wing My Way 2015-07-01T15:25:03+00:00

[General]
id=523251 这是原图

[wkyik's Insane]
00:14:841 (4,5,6) - 感觉叠起来会好点……
00:24:764 (5,6) - 建议拉开一点
00:43:456 (2) - 叠到00:44:149 (3) - 的位置然后00:43:918 (1,2,3) - Ctrl g做个反flow如何(可能会改变一些角度)
00:58:803 (2,3) - 不是很好看的说，而且打着也不是很舒服,或者00:59:149 (4,5,6) - 改变一下角度？
00:21:533 (1) - 像这种为什么不加clap呢感觉非kiai的部分音效有点空

[Insane]
00:08:149 (5,6) - 很容易出100 要不要NC提示一下
00:32:380 (3) - 这种drum真的很难听后面几个建议改掉
00:49:456 (2) - 改成whistle
01:02:841 (2) - ^ 不然会觉得吵
01:06:533 (2) - 加whistle
01:26:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - 星星星星星星星星星星星星！！

[Enju's Hard]
00:28:918 (5,1) - 交换NC
00:40:687 (2) - 加whistle
00:51:072 (1) - 这个音太吵了
00:54:533 (5) - finish放的不是很好
01:05:841 (1) - ^
01:07:456 (4,5,1) - http://puu.sh/iJwhL/17dacad44f.jpg没叠好
01:11:610 (4) - NC

Gordon123

1,038 posts

Joined June 2013

Gordon123 2015-07-01T16:09:29+00:00

helloooo~
[General]

Add in tags : 朝焼けのスターマイン

[Combo]

1st combo ->
2nd combo ->
4th combo ->

[wcx's Easy]

00:29:380 - 38% (It stands out the first beat)
00:51:995 - 45%
01:21:533 (5) - second part slider - delete clap and make whistle
01:27:995 (7) - add Finish

[KwaN's Normal]

00:09:303 - add circle
and that's all~ really

[Enju's Hard]

00:14:610 (3) - maybe little reduce
01:00:187 (5) - little unstack pls
01:05:726 (5) - ^
01:07:687 (1) - first part slider delete Finish
01:27:995 (5) - add Finish

[Insane]

00:15:303 (4) - add clap
00:59:149 (5) - ctrl-h
01:07:226 (6) - ctrl-g
01:27:995 (5) - add finish

[wkyik's Insane]

00:16:456 (2) - ctrl-h
00:54:995 (2) - ctrl-g
01:27:995 (5) - add finish

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[b]Good Luck[/b]

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Hakurei Yoru 2015-07-01T16:11:43+00:00

[Insane]
00:52:687 (1,2,3) - 这个滑条弧度的话，位置是可以调整到x128 y256的
00:54:764 (1) - 这个flow相对前面折得有点大，试试移到x440 y24的位置
00:23:380 (1) - x392 y196然后00:23:610 (2) - x464 y72

[wkyik's Insane]
00:18:995 (2) - x288 y28

[Enju's Hard]
00:11:610 (2) - 这个就不必要去stack了呀，保持前后间距相同好看又好玩w
00:15:995 (1) - ctrl+H然后放过来呢
00:23:380 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3329331
00:39:995 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3329337 呃……这一条其实应该是把下面的那个白点给删掉会好看一些..
00:42:533 (1,2) - 在同一直线上会好看，也好打一些

[Kwan's Normal]
00:04:918 (1) - 红点可以分开一点吗？弧度有点大看起来有点奇怪http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3329361

都好厉害1111111
不过ez和nm的难度差..没问题？
good luck!

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

KaedekaShizuru 2015-07-02T11:18:20+00:00

饶命我真摸不出啥挑几个点说一下

[wkyik's Insane]
00:24:995 (6) - try this：http://puu.sh/iKxHa/477eab582c.jpg
或者任意你喜欢的样子总之不要叠

[Insane]
00:03:072 (1,2) - 平行一下吧
00:53:380 (4) - 漏了whistle+clap似乎？

[Enju's Hard]
00:42:533 (1,2) - 我建议用和00:41:841 (1,2)旋转180°的方向排列即：http://puu.sh/iKye9/7e52dd01ea.jpg 然后照顾一下对00:43:226 (1)的间距

美丽最后我想吐槽一下clap存在感真的太高了

Last edited by IamKwaN 2015-07-02T11:25:13+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

zyoi

631 posts

Joined May 2014

zyoi 2015-07-02T14:44:21+00:00

Kencho wrote:
[Enju's Hard]
00:17:841 (5) - NC ok
00:43:918 (2) - NC 00:44:149 (1) - 改這
00:48:764 (4) - 放下一點點現在這樣就好
01:11:610 (4) - NC ok

Wing My Way wrote:
[Enju's Hard]
00:28:918 (5,1) - 交换NC ok
00:40:687 (2) - 加whistle ok
00:51:072 (1) - 这个音太吵了 fixed
00:54:533 (5) - finish放的不是很好 fixed
01:05:841 (1) - ^ ^
01:07:456 (4,5,1) - http://puu.sh/iJwhL/17dacad44f.jpg没叠好這個沒事啊o.o
01:11:610 (4) - NC ok

Gordon123 wrote:
[Enju's Hard]

00:14:610 (3) - maybe little reduce reduce what?
01:00:187 (5) - little unstack pls keep:3
01:05:726 (5) - ^ ^
01:07:687 (1) - first part slider delete Finish no need
01:27:995 (5) - add Finish no need to add

Hakurei Yoru wrote:
[Enju's Hard]
00:11:610 (2) - 这个就不必要去stack了呀，保持前后间距相同好看又好玩w ok w
00:15:995 (1) - ctrl+H然后放过来呢 ok
00:23:380 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3329331 改了
00:39:995 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3329337 呃……这一条其实应该是把下面的那个白点给删掉会好看一些.. 。。沒必要吧
00:42:533 (1,2) - 在同一直线上会好看，也好打一些好

KaedekaShizuru wrote:
[Enju's Hard]
00:42:533 (1,2) - 我建议用和00:41:841 (1,2)旋转180°的方向排列即：http://puu.sh/iKye9/7e52dd01ea.jpg 然后照顾一下对00:43:226 (1)的间距先改成這樣了https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3333172

thanks for modding :33

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Adol Christin

875 posts

Joined October 2012

Adol Christin 2015-07-07T06:39:45+00:00

星星我来了，不知不觉就拖了一个星期。。

General

把gder们的id加到tag里去。

Kawaiwkyik

00:09:072 - 如果这个音clickable就更好了。比如前一根滑条用3/4的，然后后面滑条+1/4圈圈+滑条这样的节奏。
00:20:841 (5,6) - 试试把这两个叠在（33,242）？因为主旋律里这俩音相同，可以考虑叠一下。
01:09:303 (4,1) - 可以考虑拉远，或者叠起来。

Crystal

00:24:764 (5) - （62,204）？
00:36:072 (3) - 相比滑条包裹，感觉如果在类似于（408,371）之类的位置的话flow会好一些。
01:24:303 (3) - NC？

- E n j u -

Widescreen Support关了。
00:04:456 (3) - 建议弄成直的（或者接近直的）。这样的话00:03:072 (1,2,3) - 这个整体看起来更美观
00:24:533 (2) - 我觉得可以直接用00:22:918 (4) - 的复制，因为现在这样倒包好没包好的感觉不好看。

你们都太厉害，感觉摸不太动。。。这些建议随便看看就好了。

祝你好运~

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 2015-07-08T11:34:26+00:00

Kencho wrote:
From qq群 request
[General]
tag加上各個GDer的名字 fixed

這BG相片感覺壓過頭，畫質太差，我弄了個高清版的多谢
SPOILER
[Insane]
00:03:072 (1,2) - 這兩個弄彎，統一樣式，像這樣？好耶
SPOILER
00:10:456 (1,2) - 還是覺得弄成微彎的感覺比較好好
00:31:226 (2,3) - 沒blanket好本来就不是blanket
01:21:764 (6,1) - 可以blanket一下，當然改了樣式之後同樣複製到01:24:303 (3) - 吧好呀
01:24:303 (3) - NC？
01:27:995 (5) - NC？都改了
都是神圖，快找BN吧

Wing My Way wrote:
[General]
id=523251 这是原图肯哥给了个高清版
[Insane]
00:08:149 (5,6) - 很容易出100 要不要NC提示一下好
00:32:380 (3) - 这种drum真的很难听后面几个建议改掉
00:49:456 (2) - 改成whistle
01:02:841 (2) - ^ 不然会觉得吵
01:06:533 (2) - 加whistle 音效都改了
01:26:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - 星星星星星星星星星星星星！！嘿嘿w

Gordon123 wrote:
helloooo~
[General]

Add in tags : 朝焼けのスターマイン this is the title, no need to add this into tags
[Combo]

1st combo ->
2nd combo ->
4th combo -> unnecessary maybe?
[Insane]

00:15:303 (4) - add clap ok
00:59:149 (5) - ctrl-h this feels weird for me
01:07:226 (6) - ctrl-g ^
01:27:995 (5) - add finish hmm no need here, there isn't a strong beat here
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good Luck[

Hakurei Yoru wrote:
[Insane]
00:52:687 (1,2,3) - 这个滑条弧度的话，位置是可以调整到x128 y256的好
00:54:764 (1) - 这个flow相对前面折得有点大，试试移到x440 y24的位置这个没必要的感觉这里的2个circle和后面的滑条是呼应的因为旋律相近
00:23:380 (1) - x392 y196然后00:23:610 (2) - x464 y72 好

都好厉害1111111
不过ez和nm的难度差..没问题？要有问题就打爆长喜
good luck!

KaedekaShizuru wrote:
饶命我真摸不出啥挑几个点说一下

[Insane]
00:03:072 (1,2) - 平行一下吧前面改了样式
00:53:380 (4) - 漏了whistle+clap似乎？改了

美丽最后我想吐槽一下clap存在感真的太高了 233

Adol Christin wrote:
星星我来了，不知不觉就拖了一个星期。。也没什么关系之前都没在家

General
把gder们的id加到tag里去。好

Crystal
00:24:764 (5) - （62,204）？好
00:36:072 (3) - 相比滑条包裹，感觉如果在类似于（408,371）之类的位置的话flow会好一些。改到了一个类似的地方
01:24:303 (3) - NC？好

你们都太厉害，感觉摸不太动。。。这些建议随便看看就好了。

祝你好运~

thanks for modding!

- N a g i -

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

43 posts

Joined July 2013

- N a g i - 2015-07-08T13:26:43+00:00

laopo

Vert

424 posts

Joined October 2013

Vert 2015-07-10T01:19:58+00:00

应援，水个摸

wkyik's Insane

00:08:610 (1) - 改成1/2滑条+一个单点吧
00:10:687 (2,3) - 2往下点，3往左点，感觉3和1有点近
00:18:995 (2) - 放远一点比较好吧
00:20:610 (4) - 和00:21:533 (1) - 没叠好吧？还是我眼花了
00:24:764 (5,6) - 这个不建议叠
01:09:995 (2,3) - 往左上挪一点吧

insane

00:08:610 (1) - 把nc放前面00:08:380 (2) -
01:20:841 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 为啥要都加clap

Enju's Hard

00:57:533 (3) - ctrl+g
01:15:072 (1,2,3) - 间距不统一么

低难度不会摸
~~做得好，我认输~~

GL

xiyangOvO

106 posts

Joined June 2013

xiyangOvO 2015-07-10T05:11:46+00:00

哇摸了这么久总算摸完了：
以下是内容：
请输入密码查看内容：_______________________ 确定

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2015-07-10T11:20:11+00:00

水水水！
[废话]
offset-10
长喜的easy不够easy啊。。他和骏马的NM有啥差别么。。。一个1.5 一个1.6
[hard]
00:47:149 (5) - 放到上面感觉flow更顺像这样而且都是ds好无聊啊又不是normal难度
其实感觉hard难度还是适当放一点点小跳比较好比如加finish的长白线就间距大一点点感觉会好的多
[小柚子]
00:53:380- 这节奏不是漏个finish音效么可以用个折返啊

Lami

1,756 posts

Joined June 2011

Lami 2015-07-10T12:02:30+00:00

hi

[General]

1. yea, offset - 10ms. plz

2. soft-hitclap62.wav - 10ms delayed hitsound. fix plz.

111

3. i suppose that BG can improve good size (16:9).

4. little worried about diff gab in Normal-Hard
Beasuse, Easy and Normal have so smiliar basic distance and rhythm.
yea.. Easy~Normal gap is tiny. but Normal-Hard gap is too big than Easy-Normal gap.

[Enju]

01:26:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - uncompleted pentagon

[Insane]

00:36:764 (2) - clap?
01:15:072 (1,2) - little bored,, recommend to use this rhythm (01:16:918 (1,2,3) - )
01:18:764 (1,2) - same above
01:26:149 (1,4) - 01:26:149 (1) - x345 01:27:533 (4) - x344 different.. lol

[wkyik]

00:36:533 (2) - clap?

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2015-07-10T13:13:59+00:00

Kencho wrote:
[wkyik's Insane]
00:26:149 (4,5,6) - 這個轉變有點大，6放近一點？ 還好吧
00:45:995 (2,3) - 2再弄彎一點 STYLE
01:26:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個參考其他難度放個星形也不錯 喜歡隨機圖形
都是神圖，快找BN吧

Wing My Way wrote:
[General]
id=523251 这是原图

[wkyik's Insane]
00:14:841 (4,5,6) - 感觉叠起来会好点……
00:24:764 (5,6) - 建议拉开一点
00:43:456 (2) - 叠到00:44:149 (3) - 的位置然后00:43:918 (1,2,3) - Ctrl g做个反flow如何(可能会改变一些角度) 想漸大間距
00:58:803 (2,3) - 不是很好看的说，而且打着也不是很舒服,或者00:59:149 (4,5,6) - 改变一下角度？ 還可以吧
00:21:533 (1) - 像这种为什么不加clap呢感觉非kiai的部分音效有点空 所以加了不少whistle

Adol Christin wrote:
Kawaiwkyik
00:09:072 - 如果这个音clickable就更好了。比如前一根滑条用3/4的，然后后面滑条+1/4圈圈+滑条这样的节奏。 想拉一拉音
00:20:841 (5,6) - 试试把这两个叠在（33,242）？因为主旋律里这俩音相同，可以考虑叠一下。 我覺得跳會好點
01:09:303 (4,1) - 可以考虑拉远，或者叠起来。

祝你好运~

Euphoria wrote:
应援，水个摸

wkyik's Insane
00:08:610 (1) - 改成1/2滑条+一个单点吧 想拉一拉音
00:10:687 (2,3) - 2往下点，3往左点，感觉3和1有点近
00:18:995 (2) - 放远一点比较好吧
00:20:610 (4) - 和00:21:533 (1) - 没叠好吧？还是我眼花了
00:24:764 (5,6) - 这个不建议叠
01:09:995 (2,3) - 往左上挪一点吧

GL

thanks fro mod!

7556

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Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2015-07-10T13:30:52+00:00

in-game request
一波水摸，接好;w;

[General]

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[wkyik's Insane]

00:00:649 (1,2,3) - 这三个伴奏不一样吧，后两个改成短滑条怎么样
00:17:380 (5,1) - 感觉有点近了
00:22:918 (3) - 往左移点？
00:36:533 (2) - ctrl+J？
00:46:456 (3,4,5,6,1) - 感觉这个接滑条的flow有点别扭
01:02:149 (1) - (265,28)？感觉离6近了点
[Insane]

00:00:649 (1,2,3) - 这三个伴奏不一样吧，后两个改成短滑条怎么样
00:02:149 (3,4) - 往下一点点
00:07:687 (4,1) - 同flow感觉有点不好，4稍微斜点？
00:10:918 (2) - ctrl+G
00:15:764 (7) - 往下点 (196,248)之类的
00:19:226 (5,6) - 这个vocal的话感觉stack不是太好
00:22:918 (5,6) - ^
00:33:072 (2,3,1) - 感觉有点近了
00:36:303 (1) - (224,256)感觉flow顺点...
00:44:380 (4) - 这个滑条再斜点吧
[Enju's Hard]

00:03:072 (1,2) - 视觉效果上(我知道应该开了DS)，感觉近了
00:07:456 (3,4,5,6) - 打的时候感觉这块有点吵
00:55:687 -

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01:03:533 (4) - ctrl+G
01:03:995 (1,2) - 节奏上ctrl+G
01:11:841 - 直接这样不好么

01:20:610 (1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉有点紧 01:21:533 (3) - (212,116) 01:21:995 (4) - (312,132)
[KwaN's Normal]

00:15:072 (5) - 这个note和前面那点下个滑条不好么
01:17:841 (5,6) - 为什么不都弯着呢...呃有自己的想法吧
01:20:610 (3,4) - ^
01:20:610 (3,4) - (40,336)左右的位置好点，接前面的flow
01:27:072 (2) -

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