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Okui Masami - TREASURE BOX

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kunka
1,566 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
kunka
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年10月8日 at 2:04:08

Artist: Okui Masami
Title: TREASURE BOX
Source: SHIROBAKO
Tags: opening tv size zj0924 adol christin del05 white box takarabako p.a. works musashino animation musani exodus dai san hikou shoujo tai sanjo purun purun tengoku puruten
BPM: 162
Filesize: 18755kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Adol's Normal (2.08 stars, 155 notes)
  2. Del's Hard (3.18 stars, 255 notes)
  3. Insane (4.03 stars, 337 notes)
  4. ZJ's Easy (1.49 stars, 94 notes)
Download: Okui Masami - TREASURE BOX
Download: Okui Masami - TREASURE BOX (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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SHIROBAKO Opening Song 2

～ SHIROBAKO OP 1 ALL Mappers ～

Don Don Donuts, let's go nuts!!

ZJ's Easy by zj0924 OP 1
Adol's Normal by Adol Christin OP 1
Del's Hard by Del05 OP 1
Insane by me OP 1
Last edited by kunka , edited 73 times in total.
kunka
1,566 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
kunka
To a member of the GD

I deleted the "drum-hitclap".
I think that default matches music.

and,hit sound all change^^;;
I'm sorry :o
GiantZarz
183 posts
Joined January 2014
GiantZarz
From your M4M queue
OMG I immediately posted the mod when it's unfinished
[General]

Nothing :)

[Easy]

00:36:067 (2,3,1) - Make them more symmetry
01:16:067 (1) - The shape is not good imo. Try to drag the red dot down
Like this

[Normal]

00:21:252 (1) - Ctrl+G better imo
00:37:363 (1) - Better flip
Like this
00:42:549 - Do this
SPOILER
00:45:511 - Do this
SPOILER

[Hard]

Nothing imo :)

[Insane]

00:08:289 (6) - Better blanket with 00:08:660 (7)

Good Luck! :)
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin

giantzarz wrote:

From your M4M queue
OMG I immediately posted the mod when it's unfinished
[General]

Nothing :)

[Normal]

00:21:252 (1) - Ctrl+G better imo flow becomes juggling, declined.
00:37:363 (1) - Better flip i personally prefer current one, which is more interesting to play.
Like this
00:42:549 - Do this ok
SPOILER
00:45:511 - Do this ^
SPOILER

Good Luck! :)
Thanks for mod~


SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: TREASURE BOX.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 52363
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:TREASURE BOX
TitleUnicode:宝箱-TREASURE BOX-
Artist:Okui Masami
ArtistUnicode:奥井雅美
Creator:kunkakunkakunkakunka
Version:Adol's Normal
Source:SHIROBAKO
Tags:opening op tv size musashino animation musani exodus dai san hikou shoujo tai sanjo purun purun tengoku puruten
BeatmapID:715992
BeatmapSetID:319822

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"TREASURE BOX.avi"
0,0,"Adol.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
512,370.37037037037,4,2,1,50,1,0
2734,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
15326,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
52363,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
78845,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,255
Combo2 : 128,255,128
Combo3 : 128,255,255
Combo4 : 255,128,128
Combo5 : 255,255,128

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Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Milan-
m4m tyty

[insane]
  1. 00:03:289 (1) - 00:13:660 (1) - soft finish on head sounds better
  2. 00:07:734 (4) - 00:34:586 (4) - nc
  3. 00:12:549 (2,3,4) - the back and forth here doesn't play very well imo. Maybe stack 00:12:919 (4) - on 00:12:363 (1) -
  4. 00:15:326 (1) - i expected it to be further away from 00:15:141 (8) - . Try moving (1) around x84y156 maybe? just somewhere more away
  5. 00:26:993 (1,2) - i'd start the cymbal with a slider, instead of its tail. I mean, ctrl+g the rhythm, it sounds much better.
  6. 00:40:141 (6) - try a 1/2 slider from here? it makes more sense imo. It's the same rhythm as 00:43:104 (7) -
  7. 00:50:697 (1) - i'd extend this slider till 00:51:160 (2) - . There's no sound at 00:51:067 - , it just make the pattern a bit awkward to play
  8. 01:08:474 (5) - try this. Like you did on 01:11:252 (5,1) - 00:59:586 (1,2) - etc.
  9. 01:09:863 (6,8) - there's no drums on these beats, thus they are pretty much overmap on my eyes. consider removing them
  10. there are some cymbals that don't have finish, reconsider adding soft finish on these 00:25:141 (4) - head; 00:35:141 (6) - head; 00:36:623 (3) - head; 00:37:363 (1) - head; 00:58:289 (1) - head; 01:01:067 (1) - repeater
  11. nice bg xd
[hard]
  1. 00:04:771 (1,2) - try this http://puu.sh/ipajx/abebae7596.jpg it fits the music a lot better imo
  2. 00:08:474 (2,3) - not sure what you're trying to map here... it makes more sense if you ctrl+g this rhythm. so the slider starts on vocals at 00:08:660 - .
  3. 00:40:511 (1,2,3) - i'd keep a constant spacing between these, they have the same intensity imo.(use 1.6x between the 3 notes). same here 00:43:474 (1,2,3) -
  4. 00:45:326 (2,3) - this spacing change looks pretty random, there's nothing in the music that calls for it. you could do that on 00:46:252 (5,1) - instead...
  5. 01:26:993 (3,4) - ctrl+g this rhythm too? the music is more prominent from 01:27:178 - rather than 01:26:993 -
[normal]
  1. od +2 pls, od 2 is way too easy for a normal (and spreed stuff too)
  2. 00:17:363 (2,3,1,2) - this part is quite confusing cuz the overlaps you can see in-game. I'd really suggest you to rotate 00:18:845 (2) - like 90° or something so it doesn't overlap with 00:17:363 (2) - at all.
  3. spacing is pretty big, 1.1x would've been much better for speed and stuff. besides that, it's fine
[easy]
  1. 00:10:882 (3) - red tick doesn't have much impact. I'd be better to finish the slider at 00:11:623 - . like this http://puu.sh/ipbnR/27c01910ce.jpg
  2. 00:43:474 (1) - make it 2 circles instead? kinda constant with 00:40:511 (1,2) -
  3. 00:59:400 - 01:00:882 - vocals are very prominent here. i think adding circles there would sounds a lot better (00:57:919 - this sounds cool without note tho o:)
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin

Milan- wrote:

m4m tyty

[normal]
  1. od +2 pls, od 2 is way too easy for a normal (and spreed stuff too) Changed to AR5, OD4 for now.
  2. 00:17:363 (2,3,1,2) - this part is quite confusing cuz the overlaps you can see in-game. I'd really suggest you to rotate 00:18:845 (2) - like 90° or something so it doesn't overlap with 00:17:363 (2) - at all.Massive change has done here.
  3. spacing is pretty big, 1.1x would've been much better for speed and stuff. besides that, it's fine I feel 1.4 is totally fine cuz there is an Easy diff for spread. 1.1 would cause massive overlap.
Cheers Milan~

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Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Del05
Hi
thanks for the mod

Milan- wrote:

[hard]
  1. 00:04:771 (1,2) - try this http://puu.sh/ipajx/abebae7596.jpg it fits the music a lot better imo Will consider it
  2. 00:08:474 (2,3) - not sure what you're trying to map here... it makes more sense if you ctrl+g this rhythm. so the slider starts on vocals at 00:08:660 - . Will consider it
  3. 00:40:511 (1,2,3) - i'd keep a constant spacing between these, they have the same intensity imo.(use 1.6x between the 3 notes). same here 00:43:474 (1,2,3) - Fixed
  4. 00:45:326 (2,3) - this spacing change looks pretty random, there's nothing in the music that calls for it. you could do that on 00:46:252 (5,1) - instead... Fixed
  5. 01:26:993 (3,4) - ctrl+g this rhythm too? the music is more prominent from 01:27:178 - rather than 01:26:993 - Will consider it
My update
kunka
1,566 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
kunka
Green : change
Red : no change
Orange : change a little.

giantzarz wrote:

From your M4M queue
OMG I immediately posted the mod when it's unfinished
[General]

Nothing :)

[Insane]

00:08:289 (6) - Better blanket with 00:08:660 (7) Blanket came to have bad flow to 00:09:215 (8,9,1) - when I did it. Therefore I performed placement change for from 00:07:734 (4,5,6,7,8,9)

Good Luck! :) Thank you :)

Milan- wrote:

m4m tyty

[insane]
  1. 00:03:289 (1) - 00:13:660 (1) - soft finish on head sounds better ok.
  2. 00:07:734 (4) - 00:34:586 (4) - nc ok.
  3. 00:12:549 (2,3,4) - the back and forth here doesn't play very well imo. Maybe stack 00:12:919 (4) - on 00:12:363 (1) - good!
  4. 00:15:326 (1) - i expected it to be further away from 00:15:141 (8) - . Try moving (1) around x84y156 maybe? just somewhere more away ok.
  5. 00:26:993 (1,2) - i'd start the cymbal with a slider, instead of its tail. I mean, ctrl+g the rhythm, it sounds much better. hmm,,ok.but i changed it a little.00:26:993 (1) - remove it.changed 1 circle and 1/2 slider.00:27:363 (2) - remove.
  6. 00:40:141 (6) - try a 1/2 slider from here? it makes more sense imo. It's the same rhythm as 00:43:104 (7) - ok.
  7. 00:50:697 (1) - i'd extend this slider till 00:51:160 (2) - . There's no sound at 00:51:067 - , it just make the pattern a bit awkward to play ok.
  8. 01:08:474 (5) - try this. Like you did on 01:11:252 (5,1) - 00:59:586 (1,2) - etc. ok.
  9. 01:09:863 (6,8) - there's no drums on these beats, thus they are pretty much overmap on my eyes. consider removing them hmm,,ok.
  10. there are some cymbals that don't have finish, reconsider adding soft finish on these 00:25:141 (4) - head; 00:35:141 (6) - head; 00:36:623 (3) - head; 00:37:363 (1) - head; 00:58:289 (1) - head; 01:01:067 (1) - repeater
    head; 00:58:289 (1) - head; 01:01:067 (1) - repeater ok.but i can't hear cymbal sound in the other.I keep it.
  11. nice bg xd Thank you lol
Sc4v4ng3r
1,232 posts
Joined August 2014
Sc4v4ng3r
Hello~ Returning mod for M4M~

ZJ's Easy
  1. Using CS of 2.4 is way too big IMO, I think you can still use CS 3.
  2. 00:00:512 (1) - Generally speaking, a slider like this should be symmetrical. What that means is that, the first and the last anchor points (grey points) should be on the same x or y axis. For this, the last point should be on y:68. (Do this by pressing shift, the grid size is too big)
  3. 00:08:660 (3) - This note should be curving, as the flow from the previous notes were all "curving".
  4. 00:30:141 (1,2) - For this pattern, try to place the red anchor points (red points) on the same x axis, to make it symmetrical again. (Set the first slider's red anchor point to x:253 y:231, and the last anchor point(grey point) to x:328 y:238. Copy and paste this slider into (2)'s position in the timeline, flip is vertically, and place it right under (1).)
  5. 00:40:511 (1,2,3) - Beginners can get confused on these circles, because between (2) and (3) has unequal spacing than (1) and (2). I suggest you to use a 1/1 slider for (1) and (2).

Adol's Normal
  1. You are using too much of sharp-curve sliders, and some of them even can be improved into blankets; Example : 01:01:993 (3,1).
  2. Generally speaking, DS of 1.4x in Normal is really high, consider reducing it. You get awkward flows because of the high DS.
  3. Your BG is 1365 x 768. This MUST be 1366 x 768.
  4. 00:04:215 (4,1,2) - You were originally following the drums, but then you changed to follow the harmonicas? (I don't know that instrument) I suggest you follow the drum beat until the vocals enter.
  5. 00:07:919 (1,2,3) - ^^
  6. 00:10:882 (1,2,3) - ^^
  7. 00:16:808 (1,2) - It is ok to use these kind of sliders, but this flow can be improved using a smooth-curved slider.
  8. 01:29:771 (5) - Why is this here? There is no sound here anyway.

Del's Hard
  1. 00:04:771 (1) - The harmonica's sound is landing on the blue ticks; consider adding triplets.
  2. 00:27:086 (7) - I feel that this note fits into anything.
  3. 00:39:863 (2,3) - Don't use 1/4 sliders without repeats in Hard, it is a lot better to use 1/4 sliders WITH repeats to express this.
  4. 00:44:400 (5,6,1) - Check the DS, it is not consistent. (DS is too small)
  5. 01:06:067 (2,3) - It would be better to follow the vocals here, so start (3) at 01:06:067 and move (2) to 01:06:623.

Insane
  1. Don't you feel that DS of 1.6x is WAY TOO big? If with 1.2x SV, the spacing would be way too big.
  2. 00:06:437 (1) - Make this somehow stack on 00:05:697 (3)'s head, will be more cleaner.
  3. 00:07:178 (3) - After applying the above ^^, stack this on top of 00:06:437 (1)'s tail.
  4. 00:18:289 (1,2,3) - These are going way too straight; make them a curve.
  5. 00:40:882 (3,4,5) - Well... In my opinion, this can be more cleaner if you made (5) stack on (3), and moving (4) respectively.
  6. 00:45:882 (5,6,7) - The flow here is getting weird. (5) to (6) you are turning to the right, but suddenly at (7) the slider shape breaks the flow. Would be nice if you made the slider's shape to follow the direction of (5) and (6).
  7. 00:53:660 (1,2,3) - If you are intending to make this pattern, stack (2) on (3), will play out nicer. Will have to move these notes due to the DS though. A;so, the hitsounds can be improved if you added whistle with drum samplesets on all these notes, which are : (1)'s tail, (2) and (3)'s head.
  8. 00:56:623 (1,2,3) - ^^
  9. 01:11:993 (2,3,4) - For this, I would go for an "extended slider" pattern. Something like this :


    (Temporarily removed BG because my younger brothers were watching me, can't show them this...)
  10. 01:12:734 (4,5,6,7) - For streams like this, you can add whistle with drum sampleset to not make it sound empty.
  11. 01:13:104 (1) - Follow the flow from the stream before, so flip it vertically and place it back at the right position.
  12. 01:26:808 (2) - This can be lesser curvy, make it almost look like a straight slider, but with a bit of curve, like 5 degrees?

That is all from me. GL!
kunka
1,566 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
kunka

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change

Hello~ Returning mod for M4M~

Insane
  1. Don't you feel that DS of 1.6x is WAY TOO big? If with 1.2x SV, the spacing would be way too big. I think that this is most suitable.When there is indication from other modder again, I examine it.I keep it now.
  2. 00:06:437 (1) - Make this somehow stack on 00:05:697 (3)'s head, will be more cleaner. This shift is with on purpose.but,,,ok.
  3. 00:07:178 (3) - After applying the above ^^, stack this on top of 00:06:437 (1)'s tail. tail!? DS becomes narrow suddenly,The appearance (look and feel) with the 00:06:437 (1) - which did stack is bad.It's stacked on head.
  4. 00:18:289 (1,2,3) - These are going way too straight; make them a curve. ok.I performed big placement change.
  5. 00:40:882 (3,4,5) - Well... In my opinion, this can be more cleaner if you made (5) stack on (3), and moving (4) respectively. hmm,,I keep it now.The need of the change is not felt.
  6. 00:45:882 (5,6,7) - The flow here is getting weird. (5) to (6) you are turning to the right, but suddenly at (7) the slider shape breaks the flow. Would be nice if you made the slider's shape to follow the direction of (5) and (6). ok.I performed big placement change.
  7. 00:53:660 (1,2,3) - If you are intending to make this pattern, stack (2) on (3), will play out nicer. Will have to move these notes due to the DS though. A;so, the hitsounds can be improved if you added whistle with drum samplesets on all these notes, which are : (1)'s tail, (2) and (3)'s head. hmm,,I keep it now.The need of the change is not felt all,,sorry.
  8. 00:56:623 (1,2,3) - ^^ There is no change for a reason same as the above.
  9. 01:11:993 (2,3,4) - For this, I would go for an "extended slider" pattern. Something like this :
    ok.

    (Temporarily removed BG because my younger brothers were watching me, can't show them this...) lol "Cute is Justice" no problem speaking.
  10. 01:12:734 (4,5,6,7) - For streams like this, you can add whistle with drum sampleset to not make it sound empty. hm,,,ok.
  11. 01:13:104 (1) - Follow the flow from the stream before, so flip it vertically and place it back at the right position. I like this flow personally.I keep it.
  12. 01:26:808 (2) - This can be lesser curvy, make it almost look like a straight slider, but with a bit of curve, like 5 degrees? It's form that I consider a flow to the next 01:27:178 (3,4,5) - I keep it.

That is all from me. GL! Thank you!!
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hello~ Returning mod for M4M~

Adol's Normal
  1. You are using too much of sharp-curve sliders, and some of them even can be improved into blankets; Example : 01:01:993 (3,1). The usage of red-tick slider is my choice. Blanket is fixed.
  2. Generally speaking, DS of 1.4x in Normal is really high, consider reducing it. You get awkward flows because of the high DS. However, there are many perpendicular patterns that need this distance. Reducing it would ruin the whole map. I personally don't think it will be too hard with this DS in a Normal diff, cuz there is an Easy diff for spread balance.
  3. Your BG is 1365 x 768. This MUST be 1366 x 768. fixed ----by kunka
  4. 00:04:215 (4,1,2) - You were originally following the drums, but then you changed to follow the harmonicas? (I don't know that instrument) I suggest you follow the drum beat until the vocals enter. remove my stuffs, turn the playback rate into 25%, and listen to the drum carefully. Then you would understand. (if you still don't understand, check it in Del's Hard. )
  5. 00:07:919 (1,2,3) - ^^ ^
  6. 00:10:882 (1,2,3) - ^^ ^
  7. 00:16:808 (1,2) - It is ok to use these kind of sliders, but this flow can be improved using a smooth-curved slider. That would be the same.
  8. 01:29:771 (5) - Why is this here? There is no sound here anyway. Removed

That is all from me. GL!
Not fixed so much, but still thanks for your attentive mod.

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-Atri-
3,047 posts
Joined March 2013
-Atri-
#Modreqs

General
  1. The tag "purun" is repeated
Insane

  1. 00:02:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - Turn into short stream? I want to give it a flow
  2. 00:13:660 (7) - Turn the note into slider, i think it's will play a little bit better
  3. 00:25:511 (9) - ^
  4. 00:30:148 (2,3) - Consider shorten the jumps there
  5. 00:46:437 (3,4) - Turn into 1 slider so it could follow 00:46:437 (1) & 00:46:437 (4)
  6. 01:10:141 (1) - Remove clap on the tail?
  7. 01:10:141 (3) - ^
  8. 01:13:104 (1) - ^
  9. 01:13:104 (3) - ^
  10. 01:27:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wow, det jumps
  11. 01:29:400 - add spinner to 01:29:956
kunka
1,566 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
kunka
Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change

KuranteMelodii wrote:

#Modreqs

General
  1. The tag "purun" is repeated This is an animated cartoon during the dramas of the "SHIROBAKO".The TAG registration does not have any problem.My ranked map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/244028
Insane

  1. 00:02:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - Turn into short stream? I want to give it a flow I think that the stream after the start does not match this music.In addition, I think that stack is most suitable because it is all the same sound.I keep it.
  2. 00:13:660 (7) - Turn the note into slider, i think it's will play a little bit better I think that it is most suitable now because it is a slider from the 00:12:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - which is a one-shot flow.I keep it.
  3. 00:25:511 (9) - ^ A slider is suitable here because I follow in vocal.If there is indication from other modder, I examine it again.
  4. 00:30:148 (2,3) - Consider shorten the jumps there Because some flows were bad, I change it.Jump has remained.('A`)sorry..
  5. 00:46:437 (3,4) - Turn into 1 slider so it could follow 00:46:437 (1) & 00:46:437 (4) ok.I changed it.
  6. 01:10:141 (1) - Remove clap on the tail? ok.
  7. 01:10:141 (3) - ^ 01:10:697 (3) -here?? ok.
  8. 01:13:104 (1) - ^ ok.
  9. 01:13:104 (3) - ^ 01:13:660 (3) - here?? I hear a snare clearly here.I can't remove it.I keep it.
  10. 01:27:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wow, det jumps lol I brought jump in the last close.I think that this is most suitable.However,I might narrow it a little...
  11. 01:29:400 - add spinner to 01:29:956 It is too short for a spinner.Probably it becomes the cause that it is pointed out.
Thank you :)
Yamicchi
1,175 posts
Joined May 2015
Yamicchi
I love the anime :3
Anyway...
[General]
-If you can, please use the program to turn the volume of the whistle file down, it's a little bit loud
-Is the background of Insane diff, you know, ecchi? :D this game is also for children at age 12-15
[Easy]
00:01:808 (3) - Change this return slider into a slider then add a circle at 00:02:734
01:17:919 (2) - Slider end at 01:18:289 instead of 01:18:474
[Normal]
I see no mistakes here, so i think it's ok :3
[Hard]
00:04:771 (1) - change this slider into a triplet and a 1/2 slider
01:20:326 (1) - there should be a triplet here? where is it? :D
[Insane]
-OD should be 8 than 7
-Distance too far, reduce it and add more triplet instead.
Good luck with ranking :D
kunka
1,566 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
kunka
Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change

[ Shana Yami ] wrote:

I love the anime :3 me,too :)
Anyway...
[General]
-If you can, please use the program to turn the volume of the whistle file down, it's a little bit loud drum whistle? (soft-whistle = default) I think that the volume isn't big.I make a conversion if pointed out in other modder again.
-Is the background of Insane diff, you know, ecchi? :D this game is also for children at age 12-15 I had edit this BG by QAT.no problem.When it is pointed out in other QAT,I'll think about it.

[Insane]
-OD should be 8 than 7 This diff constitutes difficulty by Jump.There is no plan of the change.
-Distance too far, reduce it and add more triplet instead. ok.Because there was indication with former MOD, I change it.All the points of SV x1.2 changed it.(DS 1.6 → 1.4).Because the place of SVx1.0 is too small, I don't change it.In addition, I greatly moved placement because I made DS small.The note doesn't add it.I think that it becomes overmapped further.
Good luck with ranking :D Thank you^^
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Del05
Hi
Thanks for the mod

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

[Del's Hard]
  1. 00:04:771 (1) - The harmonica's sound is landing on the blue ticks; consider adding triplets. Will consider it cause i map the drum sound
  2. 00:27:086 (7) - I feel that this note fits into anything. Fixed
  3. 00:39:863 (2,3) - Don't use 1/4 sliders without repeats in Hard, it is a lot better to use 1/4 sliders WITH repeats to express this. Will ask BN about this
  4. 00:44:400 (5,6,1) - Check the DS, it is not consistent. (DS is too small) Fixed
  5. 01:06:067 (2,3) - It would be better to follow the vocals here, so start (3) at 01:06:067 and move (2) to 01:06:623. Nope

[ Shana Yami ] wrote:

[Hard]
00:04:771 (1) - change this slider into a triplet and a 1/2 slider Will consider it cause i map the drum sound
01:20:326 (1) - there should be a triplet here? where is it? :D Fixed
My Update
P o M u T a
2,284 posts
Joined December 2010
P o M u T a
[General]
  1. tagの'op'は必要ないです。すでに'opening'というtagが存在していますので。
  2. 宝箱っていう題名が付いてるので、roma字として、'takarabako'というtagも追加してあげると優しいかもです。
  3. TREASURE BOX.jpgの大きさだけが1024x768なのが気になりました。どうせなら全部1366x768でも良いのかなと思いました。
[ZJ's Easy]
  1. 00:33:104 (3,1) - switch NC. because your NC pettern. (NC is 2 big white line)
  2. 00:36:067 (2,1) - ^
  3. 00:42:734 (5) - add finish slider end. cymbal sound.
  4. 00:47:919 (3) - add finish slider end. cymbal sound.
  5. 01:08:660 (3) - ^ and remove clap.
  6. 01:27:919 (1) -
[Adol's Normal]
  1. 01:25:697 (2,1) - parallel better. so, (2) slider reverse point y:343 grid please.
  2. 01:26:437 (1,2) - (1) y:259 (2) y:260. so, same better.
[Del's Hard]
  1. 00:35:697 (4) - add finish slider head.
  2. 00:43:104 (5) - add finish.
  3. 00:58:289 (1) - more beautiful blanket please. 2nd point (x:371 y:187) last point (x:347 y:249)
  4. 01:01:252 (1) - add finish slider head.
  5. 01:09:400 (3) - add finish.
  6. 01:20:141 (4,5,1) - doesn't fit music. so, try this. http://puu.sh/iykGi/f51b6b243d.jpg
[Insane]
  1. 00:17:363 (4) - (x:400 y:154)に移動するとスライダーエンドと(2)がピッタリきます。
  2. 00:07:734 (1,3) - シンメトリーかなと思ったら微妙に違ったので違和感を持ったのですが、意図したものであれば問題ないです。
以上。 good luck everyone :)
kunka
1,566 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
kunka
Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change


P o M u T a wrote:

[General]

  1. tagの'op'は必要ないです。すでに'opening'というtagが存在していますので。 前にrankedしたtagを持ってきたのであっても問題ないかなと、、再度、他のmodderに言われたら検討します。
  2. 宝箱っていう題名が付いてるので、roma字として、'takarabako'というtagも追加してあげると優しいかもです。 ok.
  3. TREASURE BOX.jpgの大きさだけが1024x768なのが気になりました。どうせなら全部1366x768でも良いのかなと思いました。 まずこの.jpegが使いたいのと、わざわざ知り合いに高画質で編集していただいたもの（このjpegで1366*768は無理ぽい）なので変更予定はないです。このjpegで1366*768あれば完璧ですが('A`)
[Insane]
  1. 00:17:363 (4) - (x:400 y:154)に移動するとスライダーエンドと(2)がピッタリきます。 ok.
  2. 00:07:734 (1,3) - シンメトリーかなと思ったら微妙に違ったので違和感を持ったのですが、意図したものであれば問題ないです。 前に編集してわかっていながらもスルーしてたとこｗ直します
以上。 good luck everyone :) Thank you.ありがとでした :)
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
No comment = 100% accepted.
Blue = Fixed in my way (if you didn't mention particular method).
Orange = In consideration or just some comment.
Red = Declined.

P o M u T a wrote:

[Adol's Normal]
  1. 01:25:697 (2,1) - parallel better. so, (2) slider reverse point y:343 grid please.
  2. 01:26:437 (1,2) - (1) y:259 (2) y:260. so, same better.
以上。 good luck everyone :)
All fixed. (both are really tiny issues, lol)

Thank you for modding pomuta~

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Lumael
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Lumael


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  • General

  1. General as ever 8-)

  • ZJ's Easy

    00:00:512 (1,2,3) - The flow here is a bit unconfortable for unexperienced players, I suggest Ctrl H to 00:01:808 (3) -
    00:09:400 (1,2,3) - ^ I would blanket 00:09:400 (1,2) - and Ctrl H 00:10:882 (3) -
    00:22:734 (4,1) - Improve blanket
    00:34:586 (1,2) - ^
    00:36:067 (2,3,1) - Make it symmetrical ?, looks better imo
    00:37:363 (1,3) - dunno if it's a problem but looks like an overlap for 0.000000001ms :p
    00:41:437 (3,4) - This blanket looks fine with the approach circle but getting back to the reality it doesn't, maybe it's just me
    00:43:474 (1) - Ctrl H this? It will improve the flow
    00:44:215 (2,3,4) - This can be a little hard to get, you go to the right, them you go back to the left in a quick period of time, think of that
    00:47:919 (3) - Ctrl J this? looks better imo :3
    01:03:845 (4,1) - DS 1,16 there's a considerable difference to the main 1,2x

  • Adol's Normal

  1. What do you think of mixing some curved sliders with the straight ones? o.O You just used straight sliders
    00:16:808 (1,2) - Make a straight blanket? :3 http://puu.sh/iDWBx/0891f0c3c5.jpg
    00:19:771 (1,2) - Almost an overlap, try to fix it ?
    01:01:993 (3,1) - ^
  2. Good map! I can't see more problems, sorry :L

  • Del's Hard

    00:06:067 (4,1) - Well not sure about this but I think this stack can confuse players at a Hard, this is more commonly used at Insane
    00:10:511 (4,2) - This would be a good stack if (2) didn't touch (4)
    00:10:141 (3) - ^
    00:25:511 (1,5) - I think this isn't a good overlap because it's not just a stack, there's the reverse arrow that doesn't fits the overlap imo
    00:26:067 (2,6) - Are these stacked properly?
    00:52:919 (2,3) - Fail overlap? Make like this: http://puu.sh/iDYOV/d7f25679dd.jpg
    00:57:919 (5,1) - Improve blanket, it's tinely off http://puu.sh/iDYSJ/9aa6235332.jpg
    01:15:697 (4,1) - Same as 00:06:067 (4,1) -
  1. Good map! I could just mod some patterns because the time placing is fine and it's a very good hard overall, most of these are just personal opinions

That's it :) Not really a big mod but that's the best I could say about this mapset for sure :/ Good luck with ranking, hope to see this soon at approved section!
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