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AronChupa - I'm an Albatraoz

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Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Kazuya
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015. szeptember 27. at 23:37:56

Artist: AronChupa
Title: I'm an Albatraoz
Tags: krfawy kazuya-sama single just dance 2016
BPM: 128
Filesize: 19505kb
Play Time: 02:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Difficult (3,05 stars, 277 notes)
  2. Easy (1,57 stars, 152 notes)
  3. Insane (4,26 stars, 330 notes)
  4. Krfawy's Hard (2,54 stars, 246 notes)
  5. Normal (1,96 stars, 195 notes)
Download: AronChupa - I'm an Albatraoz
Download: AronChupa - I'm an Albatraoz (no video)
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13. Hu3hu3hu3
Last edited by Kazuya , edited 52 times in total.
Nozhomi
Global Moderator
4,568 posts
Joined May 2013
Nozhomi
:3
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Kazuya
My diffs completed. C: Waiting for Krfawy.
ImZealot
11 posts
Joined January 2014
ImZealot
Here's a little story on how I now love you Kazuya:

About a week ago, I was on the car, listening to the radio, and this awesome song came on, I got really addicted to it, and won a 3 ranked games in a row on League of Legends listening to it. The day after those ranked games, I came to osu! searching for a good map of it, and I found this one! Playing ALL the diffs and thought they were put together very well! I came to the site to search for more maps by you, and I found out you also made one of my ultimate favorite maps: Jamaican Love. I downloaded your The Nights map and also loved it. I plan on playing ALL your maps! Really love your mapping!

Also, I never, ever used skins or liked to use skins in the past, until I saw the skin you used the The Nights map! Now I use it and can't play without it! Where did you get it from?

Keep up the good work man!
VTC
767 posts
Joined October 2010
VTC
hello from your m4m queue ^^

[Easy]

00:20:040 (3) - move to x:360 y:28 is better

00:22:501 (1) - this spinner move to 00:22:618 - more fit this diff

00:39:259 (3) - move to x:156 y:156

00:56:134 (1) - delete NC

00:56:602 (2) - NC

01:21:446 (6) - use Ctrl + h and position move to x:197 y:189

01:36:446 (5) - this slider need curve

01:51:446 (4) - ^
try this

02:06:915 - add circle? and add clap

02:22:384 (3) - this slider need curve


[Normal]

00:10:665 - need circle. reason : follow rhythm

01:02:227 (5) - this slider need little curve

02:06:915 - add circle

02:08:790 - add whistle



[krfawy's Hard]


00:16:290 (3) - check distance.

00:30:821 (3) - ^

00:31:290 (4) - weird style.
try this

00:33:634 (1) - stack with 00:32:696 (5) - 's tail

00:38:321 (3) - weird style. need curve

01:12:540 (4) - more make pretty.

01:15:977 (2) - remove repeat

01:17:696 (3) - more make pretty.

02:02:696 (1) - use Ctrl + H

02:05:509 (1) - delete NC

02:06:915 - add circle

02:13:946 (3) - weird slider. fix this

02:22:384 (1) - delete NC

02:22:462 (1) - move to 02:22:501 -



[Light]

00:52:227 (5) - delete circle

01:01:290 (4) - stack with 01:00:821 (3) - ' s tail



[Insane]

01:39:727 (4) - move to x:257 y:250

01:40:196 (5) - ^ x:391 y:317

02:04:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - use Ctrl + H?

02:08:790 - add whistle

02:24:102 (4) - delete clap and add finish.




Very nice map!

have fun mapping ~
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Kazuya
Thank you. Fixed some.
SoraAkatsuki
7 posts
Joined March 2015
SoraAkatsuki
I loved it :) :) :)
hent2222
395 posts
Joined April 2014
hent2222
OD10? XD
pies
205 posts
Joined January 2013
pies
Hi! I came from here: t/357834

I have some ideas, but remember it's only my opinion. If my mod didn't help you, don't give me cookies.

And yeah. Have fun mapping.

[General]

- I think that offset is bad a bit. Circles are showing too late.
- Did you try to make non-kiai parts a bit quieter? Also adding some *clap* sounds should be good.
- There are beats that IMO just need an epic sliders like:
(on Light)
01:26:154 (1) - http://prntscr.com/85bmam
01:33:654 (1) - http://prntscr.com/85bnc1
Think you know what I mean. I am not saying you must change it, but they sometimes can give an instant erection. So just do what you want. Those 2 above are just an example.

[Insane]

00:10:685 (1,2,3,4) - Switch (2) with (4), and then (3) with (4). Square looks more decent for me.
00:21:310 (1,2) - Start from center. It looks nice.
00:32:560 (1,2) - Same
01:09:591 (2,3,4,5) - Move it a bit to the center.
01:17:247 (2,3) - Snap (3)'s start with (2)'s start
01:24:747 (2,3) - Did you try to put (2) on (3)'s start? Especially in Kiai time, it looks decent.
01:34:591 (1,2,3) - Put (2) on top
01:44:279 (5,6) - Suggestion: http://prntscr.com/85bdt6 Or do as in Light
01:45:372 (3) - Make this slider 2/3 and put a circle on 3/3
01:52:091 (8) - I dont know about this slider. I would prefer circles here.
02:11:622 (2,3) - Same as 01:24:747 (2,3) -
02:23:341 (3,4) - Suggestion: http://prntscr.com/85bhou

[Light]

00:15:372 (5,6,7) - Prefer something like this: http://prntscr.com/85bjs8
00:36:935 (5) - I dont know about this beat. It seems like slider is showing too late.
01:31:779 (1,2,3) - Suggestion: http://prntscr.com/85br72
02:23:810 (4,5) - Full slider here. Don't use 2 circles.

[Krwawy's Hard]

00:18:654 (1,2) - Put (2) lower.
00:29:904 (1) - Remove red dot on slider.
00:56:154 (1,2) - Make (1) parallel with (2). Also delete red dots on sliders... I mean something like this: http://prntscr.com/85bwoo
01:03:654 (1,2) - Same as ^. You can try blanket (2) to the end of (1)
01:11:622 (2,3,4) - Remove red dot on last slider. Try to make triangle.
01:27:560 (4) - This slider breaks the flow a bit. You can copy (2) and flip it horizontally. Next sliders can change aswell.
01:31:310 (4) - 2 sliders instead of 1.
01:40:685 (4) - Do slider as 3, or make slider + circle.
02:01:779 (1) - You can flip this slider horizontally. Remove NC.
02:02:716 (1) - Suggestion: http://prntscr.com/85c1l7 Remove NC.
02:22:521 (1) - Fix spinner.
-Some strange sliders you've got there sir!

[Normal]

00:22:247 (7) - Think you can delete this.
00:39:122 (4) - And this
00:57:872 (4) - And this
01:03:497 (7) - And... You know what i mean right? I just dont feel like this is right for this beat and Normal.
01:05:372 (4) - Here too.
- It's good one, but there are some circles that IMO won't fit in rythm (Examples above)

[Easy]

01:20:529 (5,6) - Suggestion: http://prntscr.com/85c6tr
01:56:154 (1,1,1) - Why so far away from each other?
- Another good diff. I like the flow and simple patterns.
Nozhomi
Global Moderator
4,568 posts
Joined May 2013
Nozhomi
From your request in-game~

- General :

  1. I'm not sure osb file is necessary here (if already removed, ignore this).
  2. OD curve between diffs is really akward and kinda break diffspread imo (2/3/6/8/10). The fact to have OD10 with this BPM / density is really strange and could be inadapted, but if you really want to keep it, at least put OD4 for Normal pls.

- Easy :

  1. 00:56:134 - NC should be here no ? Like 01:03:634 - .
  2. 01:18:634 - NC too, because that's too much different from the rest of the diff.
  3. 01:36:446 - Your custom hitsound don't work properly here, because there is no big bass to fit here. Use custom soft instead.
  4. 01:41:134 - Your whistles are too loud, I suggest you to reduce them around 40-50% volume until 01:44:884 - at least.

- Normal :

  1. 01:41:134 - Same as Easy for whistles.

- Krfawy's (perv) Hard :

  1. AR7.4 makes a gap with Normal too huge imo, reduce it for 7 pls :c
  2. 00:17:696 (6) - The curve of your slider make just the movement really forced. If it was just rotated by 45°, flow would works, but not atm. Change slider or keep it but change rotation of it or change pattern.
  3. 00:18:165 (7) - DOn't use a curved one, you harly catch the next slider with movement from it.s
  4. 00:22:384 (1,2) - Musical pattern ends here, but you continue it, and don't fit at all the piano. Do a 1/1 slider, or remove them and add a circle at 00:22:384 - and start spinner just after.
  5. 00:45:352 (2) - If you really want to catch the movement from 00:44:884 (1) - (beautiful pattern btw), move this one to 260:228 nya.
  6. 00:53:790 (4,6) - I don't know if this overlap is really good, it could be a little hard to read for some players (maybe ?).
  7. 01:26:134 (1,2) - Rip flow ;w; also I think a good triangle could work instead for 01:25:665 (4,1,2) - . But minimum, improve flow and change 01:26:134 (1) - pls.
  8. 01:41:134 - Why ? Why skip this beat when you don't just before ??? That makes no sens at all.
  9. 02:09:727 (2,3,4,1) - Why spacing is so different from all other kiai ??? I don't think this is a good idea to break consistency of your diff here for no real reason dear. Just use your 1.60x spacing like all other.
  10. 02:17:227 (2,3) - Overlap is not really aesthetic :/ it looks a little better if you move it like 320:40.

- Light :

  1. Should not be like Light Insane ? Light sounds like a custom diffname for the higest diff.
  2. 00:36:290 (3,4) - If I follow your logic from music, they should be stacked (ok this is not really important, still...).
  3. 01:24:571 - So I wonder why you skip this beat when you don't on the 3rd kiai, that's really strange and is inconsistent nya (and other in same section ofc).
  4. 01:14:884 (1,2) - They are not exactly parallel and make them too close. 01:14:884 (1) - should end at 92:322.
  5. 01:41:134 - Same as other diffs for whistles volume.
  6. 01:52:852 (2,3) - Pls don't make them touch each other, it looks really bad :c

- Insane :

  1. 00:22:227 (2,1) - Why not unstack them like all other before ? :3
  2. 01:10:665 (7) - I don't know why but CTRL+G it feel more flow friendly and make a better movement to play with 01:10:509 (6) - imo.
  3. 01:36:915 - This hitnormal don't fit at all here, use soft hitsound instead.
  4. 01:41:134 - Same as other diffs (whistles).

Good like everytimes.
Mukyu~
ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache
You forgot to apply the video to fawy's diff.
-Nice mapset
-I like the song
-Take a star
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
Me too I like the song :3

You have my star
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Kazuya
Thank you stars and mod. I check soon. Unfortunately i work a lot, i don't have free time now. :( Please be patient.
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Kazuya
Hi

Fixed list:

HKrecords_

Insane:

01:09:591 (2,3,4,5) - Move it a bit to the center.
01:34:591 (1,2,3) - Put (2) on top
02:23:341 (3,4) - Suggestion: http://prntscr.com/85bhou

Light:

00:36:935 (5) - I dont know about this beat. It seems like slider is showing too late. (Remocved slider!)
01:31:779 (1,2,3) - Suggestion: http://prntscr.com/85br72 I use similar
02:23:810 (4,5) - Full slider here. Don't use 2 circles.

Nozhomi:


Ahh i forgot.. x'D Changed normal OD to 4

Easy, Normal:

Fixed all

Hard:

Renamed to Hardsane XD

So I wonder why you skip this beat when you don't on the 3rd kiai, that's really strange and is inconsistent nya (and other in same section ofc). Because need some variety : p

01:14:884 (1,2) - They are not exactly parallel and make them too close. 01:14:884 (1) - should end at 92:322. okay
01:52:852 (2,3) - Pls don't make them touch each other, it looks really bad :c Fixed

Insane:

Fixed all. Thanks. C:
Skubi
841 posts
Joined December 2013
Skubi
Storyboard! Yaaay! :D

:arrow: :arrow: Click me!

Sorry if it is bad, I tried my best ;-;
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Kazuya
I didn't ask for storyboard. o_o
Skubi
841 posts
Joined December 2013
Skubi
I've made it for fun, you can use it or not. Weird, cuz people usually are happy if they are having gifts for free ._.
Krfawy
1,374 posts
Joined March 2012
Krfawy
Yay, thanks for checking my diff guys! To be honest I didn't like those design suggestions (which were suggestions only) because I find my design very well-made so I didn't take them to be honest, sorry. :C However, @Nozhomoe I took your suggestion except those I am listing now:
  1. AR7.4 is OK in my opinion and doesn't really make any huge diff gap. I even use AR5 -> AR8 gap and it seems to be acceptable if I use my brain while mapping and I believe that is the case. ;_;
  2. 00:53:790 (4,6) - So I find this moment flowing totally ok so I am not changing it. However, if I see more people complaining about it, I would take serious actions and change it. xD
  3. 01:26:134 (1,2) - As above.
  4. 01:41:134 - At 01:40:685 (4) - this note: well, I wanted to stress it with a slider tick because I find it fitting and I believe it is not skipping the beat. Yes, I am not using any kicks here like at the previous note, but that tick gives enough feedback in my opinion.
  5. 02:09:727 (2,3,4,1) - I've been using it a few times through the map and I find it cool and flowy. =3= Examples: 00:52:404 (1,2) - or 01:01:310 (4,1) -
Thank you guys for checking my stuff, I'm including the update down below!

Hardewettie
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: track.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52384
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0
SamplesMatchPlaybackRate: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.6
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:I'm an Albatraoz
TitleUnicode:I'm an Albatraoz
Artist:AronChupa
ArtistUnicode:AronChupa
Creator:Kazuya
Version:Krfawy's Hard
Source:
Tags:krfawy kazuya-sama
BeatmapID:696112
BeatmapSetID:310680

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.4
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Kazuya
Ok ok, i'm sorry if I hurt you, but i was suprised. ^^ but thank you. : )

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meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
Hello!

  • Easy
  1. 01:18:185- Maybe add a note here? Because there's clearly a beat and adding a note here would make this beat clickable
  2. 01:38:341(2)- In my opinion,you can make this slider curved instead keeping it straight to make a better transition between this slider and next note ( 01:39:279(3)- )
  3. 01:45:372(2)- And here too.Curving this slider will give a better transition between the slider and the next note ( 01:46:310(3)- )
    Nice diff!
  • Normal
  1. 00:58:666(6,1)- As I can see,you completely covered 00:59:904(1)-'s sliderbody and I think you could polish a bit this intentional overlap do avoid the completely covering of the 00:59:904(1)-'s sliderbody like here for example
    Nothing to complain more.Great job!
  • Krfawy's Hard
  1. 00:58:966(3)- Unreadable slider.When I testplayed your difficulty,I became confused and I made 100 here.Also it could be confusing for other players and they can make 100 or 50 or worst a miss.I highly suggest to unstack this slider from 00:58:029(1)- and finding another placement of 00:58:966(3)- or replacing the slider with a note for a better readability like here
  2. 01:07:872(2,3)- Suddenly increasing of spacing? It seems to be because the vocal/instruments are not really stronger here and increasing the spacing here suddenly you doesn't emphasize nothing.I suggest to use the same spacing here (1.6x) I mean to decrease the spacing since you have nothing stronger to emphasize here
  3. 01:09:747(2,3)- Here too seems to be suddenly increasing of the spacing but as I said on previous point,the vocal/instruments are not really stronger here so I suggest to use the same spacing (1.6x) since you have nothing stronger to emphasize
  4. 01:40:685(4)- Here an 2/1 slider sounds weird and unnatural to me in my opinion.Snapping this slider to an 1/1 slider would sounds more better and it will feel more natural.Moreover,you can add a note on 01:41:622- to make the sound from there clickable instead leaving it empty
  5. 02:09:747(2,3)- You don't need to make a big jump here because in my opinion the vocal/instruments are not too stronger.I suggest to use the same spacing here (1.6x) since you have nothing stronger to emphasize here
  • Heavier
  1. Why you not name it to Light Insane ? It will be more suitable
  2. 01:16:466(1,2,3,4)- nazi* Seems this blanket is really off.I suggest to move 01:16:466(1,2,3)- to 216|243 for a better blanket.It should be like here
    Great job here!
  • Insane
  1. 00:33:966(2,3)- Maybe reduce the spacing here? Seems to be nearly a huge jump and there's nothing stronger to emphasize using a 'huge' jump here and it would be better if you will decrease the spacing because seems this part is more 'relaxing' in my opinion :P
  2. 02:03:654(1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1)- Mind re-shapping the pattern? After you aim 02:03:654(1,2,3,1,2,3)-,you'll be confused in my opinion because 02:04:592(1,2,3)- seems like a suddenly decreasing of spacing which can confuse the players.My suggestion is to find another placement of 02:04:592(1,2,3,1,2,3,1)- for a better readability I mean to unstack them from 02:04:592(1,2,3,1,2,3)-
  3. 02:07:872(2,3)- Suddenly increasing of spacing?As I can see there's nothing strong to emphasize increasing the spacing here.I suggest to decrease the spacing here since you have nothing stronger to emphasize
That's all from me.By the way we made some fixing at hitsounds via IRC.Also the metadata seems right https://itunes.apple.com/ro/album/im-an-albatraoz/id907071258?i=907071271&app=itunes&ign-mpt=uo%3D4

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