Hello
TaikocalypseYou should probably lower your HP to something less than 5 as this is a rather difficult marathon map.
00:39:050 (20,21,22,23) - I personally think that this is too brief a sound to have a 1/6 rhythm here.
kkkd wouldn't be a good option here because the sound isn't loud enough for that amount of
ks. Perhaps some alternatives could include changing it to match 05:07:850 (8,9,10,11) or
kddd, or even removing the 1/6 entirely and reducing it to 1/2.
00:43:475 (69) and 00:43:700 (71) - These could be changed to
d. I thought that rather than matching to the drum pitch you could just have this matched to the general low drums and really emphasize the sound at 00:44:150 (75).
Another option might be to Ctrl + G 00:43:400 (68,69,70,71) - if you want to match to the pitch of the drums more accurately (it seemed like it was going down to me). Same at 05:12:200 (52,53,54,55).
00:47:075 (106) - Could be changed to
k to match the sound (Whatever that instrument is lel) that you matched at 00:46:775 (102,103). Ctrl + G on 00:47:000 (105,106) - is also a possibility.
00:48:350 (122) - ^
00:49:175 (129,130) - Ctrl + G? The way the instrumentals went sounds pretty similar to 00:49:100 (128,129,130,142,143,144).
00:58:175 (6) - I didn't feel like this was necessary. 00:58:100 (5) could be emphasized more if it was a lone 1/2 hit rather than having it connected to a stream.
01:05:450 (54,55,56,57,58,59,60) - I couldn't really tell why you made the pattern like this. Specifically, I thought you should change 01:05:450 (54,55,56) by deleting 01:05:525 (55) as it doesn't really sound like there's a sound there.
01:09:050 (95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103) - ^ Similar thing here, I couldn't tell what the beginning 01:09:050 (95,96,97,98,99) was matched to and a
k at 01:09:425 (100) sounds a bit weird imo. I'd perhaps revise it a bit.
01:15:600 - Maybe you could add a hit here, but not necessary.
01:26:600 (273,274) - Ctrl + G? This is the only place where 01:26:750 (274) isn't matched to the high snare drum whatever sound that is. If you're worried that there's too many 1/2
ks in a row, I thought you could just switch the colours on 01:26:900 (275,276,277,278,279).
01:36:050 - Very nice kiai
01:52:325 (64) - I don't think this hit needs to be here, similar to how you had it at 01:53:150 (74,75).
02:14:450 - Idk, I just found this section hard to follow with all these triplets and 5-plets. Just a comment, but maybe you could make it neater somehow. Also, I thought you could reduce the SV to 1.0x since you've used quite a bit of SV that's >1.0x already.
02:29:000 (431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463) - Does there need to be this many triplets in a row
Thought that maybe you could move 02:29:975 (441) to 02:30:125 and delete 02:30:275 (444) since the background instrumentals allowed for it.
02:39:650 - Didn't really see any reason to miss the hit here. Similarly, I didn't see a reason for 02:42:050 (509) - to be a
d while places like 02:37:250 (490) - were
ks. idk tho
02:44:450 - Adding a hit here would also work; it sounds similar enough to 02:49:250 (544) imo.
03:51:875 (30) - Just thought that this would sound better as
d for no specific reason lel Maybe cuz it's similar sounding to 03:51:800 (29).
04:03:350 (151,152,153,154,155) - This would sound so much better as
kdkkd imo. Same at 04:30:650 (155,156,157,158,159).
04:07:850 (199,200) - Also thought that these could both be changed to
d to emphasize the
ks at 04:08:000 (201) and 04:08:150 (203).
04:26:600 (120,121,122) - I don't think it'd be bad to have a
k at the end of this triplet, however you wanna make it.
04:38:225 (220,221) - Ctrl + G? The triplet here is the same as 04:39:500 (229,230,231) but you can clearly tell that they're different instrumentally.
05:15:050 (84) - I'd change this to
d since there's not really a sound like there is at 05:15:350 (87).
05:26:450 (1) - Idk, but I personally felt like it'd be really effective if you deleted the spinner and cut off the kiai at 05:26:375 (214). The ending was really abrupt, so adding a finisher kind of ruins it imo.
Other than that, I found that there were some other minor spots throughout the map that could have a colour change to match the high pitched drum sound or whatever it is, aka the sound matched at 00:40:700 (37) for example. Maybe you had other intentions in some parts, but I thought that matching to that sound would make the map sound the best imo.
That's all, call me back for a recheck~