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Fish Leong - Ning Xia

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Karen
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年4月26日 at 15:37:02

Artist: Fish Leong
Title: Ning Xia
Tags: 梁静茹 宁夏 liang jing ru 燕尾蝶 下定愛的決心 liangv587
BPM: 82
Filesize: 5671kb
Play Time: 03:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.24 stars, 311 notes)
  2. liangv587's Insane (3.16 stars, 373 notes)
  3. Normal (1.64 stars, 227 notes)
Download: Fish Leong - Ning Xia
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insane & timing & hitsound by liangv587, 向宝烟同志学习
Last edited by Karen , edited 23 times in total.
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
liangv587
timing来了
神秘代码
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Sakaue Nachi
558 posts
Joined September 2012
Sakaue Nachi
这红线醉了

[liangv587's Insane]
01:39:009 (1,2,3) - 这样 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3026326
01:45:335 (2) - 前后ds一致
03:15:521 转盘这里开始

[Hard]
00:05:821 (1,2,3) - 不太建议重叠，ar太低容易以为后面的也是相同间隔
02:25:293 (1,5) - 弄对称好看点
03:15:521 转盘这里开始，因为声音这里开始的
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

这红线醉了


[Hard]
00:05:821 (1,2,3) - 不太建议重叠，ar太低容易以为后面的也是相同间隔 就这么点差距 没问题吧（ 再议 再议
02:25:293 (1,5) - 弄对称好看点 可
03:15:521 转盘这里开始，因为声音这里开始的 587说这个应该没事，后面再议
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
zj0924
IRC Mod with 587
liangv587‘s insane
2015-04-19 00:38 zj0924: 就看你的insane吗
2015-04-19 00:39 liangv587: 恩
2015-04-19 00:39 zj0924: 首先不得不佩服一下cs5
2015-04-19 00:39 zj0924: 这个我真不敢
2015-04-19 00:39 zj0924: flow还不错让我看完
2015-04-19 00:39 zj0924: 这红线
2015-04-19 00:39 liangv587: 平凡之路我不都rabk了吗
2015-04-19 00:41 zj0924: 这张宁夏我觉得就做得很好
2015-04-19 00:41 zj0924: 间距也很合理
2015-04-19 00:42 liangv587: 唔
2015-04-19 00:43 zj0924: 看上去你好像是在跟vocal？
2015-04-19 00:43 liangv587: 都在跟
2015-04-19 00:43 zj0924: 嗯
2015-04-19 00:43 zj0924: 但是有些地方你却以乐器为主
2015-04-19 00:43 zj0924: 了
2015-04-19 00:44 zj0924: 01:12:283 (2,3) - 这里太明显了
2015-04-19 00:44 zj0924: 把它换成滑条吧
2015-04-19 00:44 zj0924: 我可以 明显是长音
2015-04-19 00:44 zj0924: 你用单点那就是跟鼓
2015-04-19 00:44 zj0924: 而你前面都跟vocal会比较唐突
2015-04-19 00:45 zj0924: 类似这种滑条
2015-04-19 00:45 zj0924: http://puu.sh/hikau/8825ce566f.jpg
2015-04-19 00:45 zj0924: 具体方向你自己定
2015-04-19 00:45 liangv587: 不对，“我可以”那个“可”是发的两段音
2015-04-19 00:46 zj0924: 但是唱的是可
2015-04-19 00:46 zj0924: 只是连音
2015-04-19 00:46 zj0924: 连音更要用滑条了
2015-04-19 00:46 zj0924: 01:26:181 (4) - nc一下否则会读错
2015-04-19 00:47 zj0924: 01:39:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里音乐渐强了
2015-04-19 00:47 zj0924: 建议间距别那么近
2015-04-19 00:47 liangv587: 可
2015-04-19 00:47 liangv587: 打算表现在后面诶
2015-04-19 00:48 zj0924: 那随你便了
2015-04-19 00:48 liangv587: 01:41:901 (1) - 这Vai开始
2015-04-19 00:48 liangv587: 才*
2015-04-19 00:48 zj0924: 我是觉得单点有点怪
2015-04-19 00:49 zj0924: 你不觉得这部分相对于前后有点紧了吗
2015-04-19 00:49 zj0924: 01:41:901 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这些都离那么远了
2015-04-19 00:49 zj0924: 01:37:563 (4,5,6) - 
2015-04-19 00:49 liangv587: 有道理
2015-04-19 00:49 zj0924: 比这个远那么多
2015-04-19 00:50 zj0924: 但是却比他安静
2015-04-19 00:50 zj0924: 01:39:009 (1,2,3) - 所以打着就会有压抑感
2015-04-19 00:50 zj0924: 而且我建议你01:39:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 距离逐渐增大
2015-04-19 00:50 zj0924: 放弃复制粘贴
2015-04-19 00:50 zj0924: 不是复制粘贴
2015-04-19 00:50 zj0924: 放弃三个三个紧挨
2015-04-19 00:50 zj0924: 这样看不出节奏变化
2015-04-19 00:51 zj0924: 01:46:961 (6) - 这里你没有做错
2015-04-19 00:51 zj0924: 但是我会在这里托一根滑条
2015-04-19 00:52 zj0924: 速度比这个01:47:761 (1) - 快一点
2015-04-19 00:52 zj0924: 用来过渡
2015-04-19 00:52 liangv587: 长度呢
2015-04-19 00:52 liangv587: 1/2?
2015-04-19 00:53 zj0924: 嗯
2015-04-19 00:53 zj0924: 排列自己想吧，看你flow了
2015-04-19 00:53 zj0924: 不要太顺
2015-04-19 00:53 zj0924: 稍微别扭
2015-04-19 00:53 zj0924: 02:06:645 (2,3) - 其实我一直觉得很别扭
2015-04-19 00:54 zj0924: 不如去掉单点
2015-04-19 00:54 zj0924: 滑条延长我觉得更顺
2015-04-19 00:54 zj0924: 02:06:645 (2,3,4) - 打起来很怪突然变大间距
2015-04-19 00:54 liangv587: 这么慢不怕不顺的
2015-04-19 00:54 zj0924: 这种直角的最好坐等腰直角三角形
2015-04-19 00:55 zj0924: 当然不改也没问题
2015-04-19 00:55 zj0924: 玩多了就顺了
2015-04-19 00:55 liangv587: 诶说好的不用mo的呢
2015-04-19 00:55 zj0924: 02:13:342 (4,5) - 还是建议nc
2015-04-19 00:55 liangv587: 不是给你看下音效吗
2015-04-19 00:55 zj0924: 没办法写着写着就摸了
2015-04-19 00:55 zj0924: 我这个人有责任心
2015-04-19 00:56 zj0924: 02:23:848 (4,5,6,7) - 这里一下子间距又变小了
2015-04-19 00:56 zj0924: 不合适
2015-04-19 00:56 zj0924: 利用02:22:386 (1,2) - 来构造
2015-04-19 00:57 zj0924: 02:22:386 (1,2) - 之间的空间
2015-04-19 00:57 zj0924: 02:25:293 (1,5) - 这个就很好
2015-04-19 00:58 zj0924: 02:56:664 (4) - 提前减速这个滑条
2015-04-19 00:58 zj0924: 这里节奏已经慢下来了
2015-04-19 00:58 liangv587: 间距减小没什么问题吧
2015-04-19 00:58 zj0924: 这里是高潮我不觉得距离变小合适
2015-04-19 00:58 zj0924: 物件间距很关键啊
2015-04-19 00:58 liangv587: 减速提前吗
2015-04-19 00:58 zj0924: 是啊
2015-04-19 00:59 zj0924: 02:55:933 (3,4) - 你看这个那么慢间距比那四个还远
2015-04-19 00:59 zj0924: 显然那四个太近了
2015-04-19 00:59 zj0924: 03:09:014 (1,2,3,4) - 这里做的就很好啊
2015-04-19 00:59 zj0924:  ok 神图
2015-04-19 01:00 liangv587: 也就1.2到啊1.0的速度啊
2015-04-19 01:00 liangv587: 难熬还要加个1.1？
2015-04-19 01:01 zj0924: 用1.0啊
2015-04-19 01:01 zj0924: 你要用1.1最好
2015-04-19 01:01 zj0924: 你可以拉近距离来表现
2015-04-19 01:02 zj0924: 01:30:335 (1) - 对了这个减速我建议你把滑条拉完否则会冲的太猛了
2015-04-19 01:02 zj0924: 你看看是不是有些改观
2015-04-19 01:04 liangv587: 什么意思
2015-04-19 01:04 zj0924: 滑条拉弯一点
2015-04-19 01:04 zj0924: 往右边弯一点
2015-04-19 01:04 liangv587: 弯***
2015-04-19 01:04 liangv587: 好吧
2015-04-19 01:04 zj0924: 是不是好一点
2015-04-19 01:04 liangv587: 这个不影响的
2015-04-19 01:05 zj0924: 是吗我觉得好多了
2015-04-19 01:05 zj0924: 有影响的
2015-04-19 01:05 zj0924: 和flow角度有很大关系
2015-04-19 01:05 zj0924: 直角flow减速
2015-04-19 01:05 liangv587: 我觉得没啥影响
2015-04-19 01:05 zj0924: 拉弯了距离还一样那就是减速
2015-04-19 01:05 zj0924: 那是因为你作图的
2015-04-19 01:05 zj0924: 知道这里会减速
2015-04-19 01:06 zj0924: 人家不知道减速的肯定会冲太快
2015-04-19 01:06 zj0924: 02:23:848 (4,5,6,7) - 这样我觉得距离就稍微远一点了
2015-04-19 01:06 zj0924: http://puu.sh/hilkn/f21ce75f0f.jpg
2015-04-19 01:06 zj0924: 你觉得呢
2015-04-19 01:07 zj0924: 物件间距不显得远了
2015-04-19 01:07 zj0924: 打错：近
2015-04-19 01:07 liangv587: 这样不好
2015-04-19 01:07 zj0924: flow会受一点影响
2015-04-19 01:07 liangv587: 02:24:209 (5) - 只需要把这个拉上去就行了
2015-04-19 01:08 zj0924: 对对
2015-04-19 01:08 zj0924: 差不多
2015-04-19 01:08 zj0924: 我只是给个方向上的建议
2015-04-19 01:08 zj0924: 你这样改基本不改动原图
2015-04-19 01:08 zj0924: 我也是没想到
2015-04-19 01:09 zj0924: 6最好往右边一点
2015-04-19 01:09 zj0924: 否则6会太近
2015-04-19 01:09 liangv587: 因为懒所以想最简单的解决
2015-04-19 01:09 zj0924: 02:28:907 (3,4,5) - 
2015-04-19 01:09 zj0924: 这flow
2015-04-19 01:09 zj0924: 哦不对
2015-04-19 01:09 zj0924: 看错
2015-04-19 01:09 zj0924: 这里中间没节奏
2015-04-19 01:10 zj0924: 用来减速正好
2015-04-19 01:10 zj0924: 02:41:715 (5) - 252 176
2015-04-19 01:10 zj0924: 02:40:111 (1) - 由于这个02:40:111 (1) - 
2015-04-19 01:11 zj0924: 之前出现过会形成印象
2015-04-19 01:11 zj0924: 半叠一下会觉得空间更加开阔一点
2015-04-19 01:11 zj0924: 原来的位置就有些近了
2015-04-19 01:12 liangv587: 故意避开的诶
2015-04-19 01:12 zj0924: 小问题
2015-04-19 01:12 zj0924: 无所谓也行
2015-04-19 01:12 zj0924: 有些时候我觉得叠一下挺好
2015-04-19 01:12 liangv587: 贪吃蛇风格吧，尽量避开自身
2015-04-19 01:12 zj0924: 这个只是半叠
2015-04-19 01:12 zj0924: 好吧
2015-04-19 01:12 zj0924: 我不喜欢贪吃蛇……
2015-04-19 01:13 liangv587: 我比较喜欢
2015-04-19 01:13 zj0924: 差不多就这些了
2015-04-19 01:13 zj0924: 没啥大问题了
2015-04-19 01:13 liangv587: 音效啊怎样
2015-04-19 01:13 zj0924: 可以啊
2015-04-19 01:13 zj0924: 没啥违和感
2015-04-19 01:13 liangv587: 能听不
2015-04-19 01:13 zj0924: 虽然我更喜欢莫音效
2015-04-19 01:13 liangv587: 那就好
2015-04-19 01:13 zj0924: 但是莫音效很累的
2015-04-19 01:14 liangv587: 那就懒摸了
2015-04-19 01:14 zj0924: 随便一听
2015-04-19 01:14 zj0924: 03:09:745 (2,4) - 
2015-04-19 01:14 zj0924: 这里我觉得还是加个whistle比较好
2015-04-19 01:15 zj0924: 宁静的夏天我觉得 都很重要
2015-04-19 01:15 zj0924: 高潮部分几个鼓都不错
2015-04-19 01:15 zj0924: 我是没听出啥
2015-04-19 01:15 zj0924: 不仔细听的话
2015-04-19 01:15 liangv587: 诶用normal whistle就行了啊
2015-04-19 01:16 zj0924: 反正和135一直
2015-04-19 01:16 zj0924: 一致
2015-04-19 01:16 liangv587: 会轻一些
2015-04-19 01:16 zj0924: 03:06:837 (3) - 这里whistle
2015-04-19 01:16 zj0924: 有个吉他
2015-04-19 01:17 zj0924: 03:08:291 (6) - 这里虽然也很响但是就不适合加whistle
2015-04-19 01:17 zj0924: 要看音调的
2015-04-19 01:17 zj0924: 03:13:540 (2) - 就像这个滑条尾不适合一个道理
2015-04-19 01:17 zj0924: 音调太低了
2015-04-19 01:17 liangv587: nw呢
2015-04-19 01:18 zj0924: 那个磁的一下？
2015-04-19 01:18 liangv587: 啊
2015-04-19 01:18 liangv587: 是不是要换个隐身
2015-04-19 01:18 liangv587: 音色*
2015-04-19 01:18 zj0924: 我觉得那个ci的一下
2015-04-19 01:19 zj0924: 不好
2015-04-19 01:19 zj0924: 根本不适合吉他
2015-04-19 01:19 zj0924: 我刚才提到的whistle 都不适合normalwhistle
2015-04-19 01:19 liangv587: 用默认组里面那个tick声怎样
2015-04-19 01:20 zj0924: 哪个
2015-04-19 01:20 zj0924: tick不是只有滑条身体才有用》
2015-04-19 01:20 liangv587: 取出来改个名不就有了
2015-04-19 01:20 zj0924: 你去拉克丝音效包找几个
2015-04-19 01:21 zj0924: 就那个滴滴的声音？
2015-04-19 01:21 zj0924: 挺好啊
2015-04-19 01:21 zj0924: 比这个hitat要好
2015-04-19 01:22 liangv587: 好们那就爱换这个
2015-04-19 01:23 liangv587: 但是要加点音量
2015-04-19 01:24 zj0924: 嗯
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
zj真是pro，我都不敢一下说这么多话，怕被禁言
Hyasalia
89 posts
Joined October 2013
Hyasalia
M4M
[notice]
  1. Sth. just unimportant （you can always ignore it）
  2. My personal opinion and suggest
  3. Highly recommended (plz think over it)
[Normal]
  1. 00:46:253 (6) - 这里后面的红线音挺明显地，改成1/2 slider怎么样
  2. 02:00:701 (1) - DS
  3. 02:47:277 (3) - stack better
  4. 02:57:396 (4) - 感觉这里whistle的声音有点大，建议改小点
[Hard]
  1. 01:20:234 (3,4,5,6) - 这里感觉改成相同间距比较好，比起stack感觉还是间距比较重要
  2. 01:15:536 (1) - 这里滑条尾的音比较重，更适合note一点，把前面的8改成1/2 slider怎么样
  3. 02:35:413 (3,4,5) - 这里4前后在一条直线上，而3和5是横着的，感觉flow不太好，把4往右移一点比较好
[liangv587's Insane]
  1. 00:44:816 (5,6) - ctrl G一下怎么样？这里音从高到低，所以让4到5间距大些，6到1间距减小再缓下来。
  2. 01:23:840 (5,6,7) - 感觉有点卡手，456角度稍微大一点
  3. 02:09:349 (1,2) - 这里间距略大，容易错读成1/2，稍微减小点比较好
  4. 02:32:521 (1) - 加个NC怎么样，这里1/2到1/4转变，间距差得不大比较容易造成误读
摸不出啥了;w;
Good Luck :)
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia
来M4M了
昨天下午有点事没摸晚了点QWQ先POST一个
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia
[ NORMAL ]
02:00:335 (4) - 这个间距调整下
02:36:859 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这里变速稍微间距变动之后的波动略大QWQ
02:57:396 (4) - 我觉得这里可以去掉

[ HARD ]
00:35:068 - 空着听起来不太舒服QWQ
01:22:403 (2) - 稍微下来一点？感觉FLOW看着舒服些
01:30:155 (6,1) - 前面三连都跟在一起的，这里跳开感觉不太好
01:44:792 (1) - 这里BLANKET调整下啊
02:12:258 (3,4) - ↑
02:28:003 (8,1) - 跳的太远了吧？
02:41:539 (3,4) - 和02:44:395 (4,5) - 我觉得这两连听着不大和谐啊QWQ
03:07:569 (5,6,7) - 这里不要继续叠了吧？

[ INSANE ]
00:57:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这段来点绿线改下音量大小啊
01:39:009 (1,2,3) - 稍微有点扭。。。调整下姿势♂
01:59:238 (4,5,6,7) - 首先4开始NC然后加绿线调下音量啊
02:27:823 (9,10) - 这里间距我认为应该和02:27:461 (7,8) - 保持一致

就这些吧，顺便。。人哥求个MU啊QWQ
pandorawindy
312 posts
Joined December 2013
pandorawindy
M4M req

[insane]
  1. 00:13:683 (3) - 这里还是稍微有点困扰我..不是红线的原因 , 而是滑条的速度和离上一个滑条之间的时间间隔.
  2. 00:32:538 (1) - 这里不做成 00:29:657 (1,2) - ？
  3. 02:31:076 - 这里比较适合加一个短时间的kiai .
  4. 02:36:859 - ^
[hard]
  1. 没什么不妥的地方。
[normal]
  1. 02:45:832 (1,3) - y轴对好。
  2. 02:53:042 (3,4) - 包的不太好看。
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

Hyasalia wrote:

M4M
[notice]
  1. Sth. just unimportant （you can always ignore it）
  2. My personal opinion and suggest
  3. Highly recommended (plz think over it)
[Normal]
  1. 00:46:253 (6) - 这里后面的红线音挺明显地，改成1/2 slider怎么样
  2. 02:00:701 (1) - DS
  3. 02:47:277 (3) - stack better
  4. 02:57:396 (4) - 感觉这里whistle的声音有点大，建议改小点 keep
[Hard]
  1. 01:20:234 (3,4,5,6) - 这里感觉改成相同间距比较好，比起stack感觉还是间距比较重要
  2. 01:15:536 (1) - 这里滑条尾的音比较重，更适合note一点，把前面的8改成1/2 slider怎么样 唔，似乎没什么意义
  3. 02:35:413 (3,4,5) - 这里4前后在一条直线上，而3和5是横着的，感觉flow不太好，把4往右移一点比较好 改了后面的flow
摸不出啥了;w;
Good Luck :)
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

[ Abhor ] wrote:

[ NORMAL ]
02:00:335 (4) - 这个间距调整下
02:36:859 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这里变速稍微间距变动之后的波动略大QWQ 还行吧
02:57:396 (4) - 我觉得这里可以去掉 不想漏

[ HARD ]
00:35:068 - 空着听起来不太舒服QWQ
01:22:403 (2) - 稍微下来一点？感觉FLOW看着舒服些
01:30:155 (6,1) - 前面三连都跟在一起的，这里跳开感觉不太好 挺好的呀，keep
01:44:792 (1) - 这里BLANKET调整下啊
02:12:258 (3,4) - ↑
02:28:003 (8,1) - 跳的太远了吧？
02:41:539 (3,4) - 和02:44:395 (4,5) - 我觉得这两连听着不大和谐啊QWQ 没办法 人声在蓝tick
03:07:569 (5,6,7) - 这里不要继续叠了吧？


就这些吧，顺便。。人哥求个MU啊QWQ 好
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

pandorawindy wrote:

M4M req

[hard]
  1. 没什么不妥的地方。
[normal]
  1. 02:45:832 (1,3) - y轴对好。
  2. 02:53:042 (3,4) - 包的不太好看。
all fix :)
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
怎么还没翻页？
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
oops double post
Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu

Random mod

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion
General


  1. 燕尾蝶 tag seems to be a bit wrong, because the real album name is 燕尾蝶 下定愛的決心, so 下定愛的決心 should be added so the title is complete.
  2. Maybe the background should be more related to the song. If I am right, 寧夏 is a region in China, so maybe you might put a nice picture from this area as a background more than stars? I don't know the lyrics however, so you should be able to judge I think :)
  3. 00:51:285 - Add a red timing point here with 83 BPM to fix the metronome, that's because if someone plays nightcore, it will mess up there, because downbeat is on 00:51:285. It is also inappropriate for Taiko players, it makes the downbeat line go wrong there.
  4. 00:14:044 - You can notice this note is slightly off on 25% speed, it might be like on 00:14:090 - or something. That means 00:13:683 has wrong BPM, try to decrease it a little bit so everything there fits well.

Normal


  1. These inherited points have no function and don't afflict any note (mostly red point did its job, there were SV changes, but no sliders were in these parts), please remove them:
    00:00:746
    00:02:209
    00:06:519
    00:07:200
    00:09:377
    01:25:999
    01:28:890
    01:47:761
    01:58:541
    02:00:518
    02:05:745
    02:23:108
    02:45:118
    02:54:488
    02:55:933
    03:07:569
    03:09:745
    03:11:448
    Check them on other diffs too, I saw them on those too, they're most likely unrankable.
  2. 00:46:610 - It seems you used Additions Drum concidently instead of Sampleset Drum, it feels pretty well with music and you followed this sound in song with Drum sampleset just everytime. (You also have it on other diffs here)
  3. 00:42:647 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend to lower the volume a bit as the snares, rims or whatever it is is slightly lower on volume in song, thus these are a bit loud. It feels pretty fine on 40%. On 00:45:539 - 60% fits well again, so I think keeping this one would be good.
  4. 01:26:364 - Snap the end of slider properly, it currently ends on 01:26:356
  5. 01:29:251 - Same as above, slider's end is now incorrectly on 01:29:247

Hard


  1. 00:42:647 (1,2,3,4) - Same suggestion as on normal. I think 40% volume fits better here and then 60% on 00:45:539.
  2. 01:23:126 - I don't know whether it is intended, but I think SV decrease was not really fitting there, but that's just minor.
  3. 02:57:396 - You should maybe map a note there becuase you did on both other diffs, while one of those is easier than this and it feels quite insensible to keep it empty when easier diff has mapped more in some parts than hard.

liangv587's Insane


  1. You should decrease AR by 1 because the song is quite chilling, and it doesn't really feel like it needs higher AR. Also it feels better when you compare difficulty between this and hard, it is not that big, so settings also don't have to be much higher.
  2. 00:38:285 (5) - Hitsounding on this slider is pretty off. If you want to put notes which are not really even in a song, at least don't put hitsounds on them, that would be fine.
  3. 01:14:451 (5) - As I think about it, you didn't at least put hitsounds there, but it seems like lacking creativity when there are such sliders on empty places, I recommend to remove them completelly. There are already pretty nice patterns like this, where it fits and they are enough to make this map fun and nice. For example 01:39:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7), but these are just random sliders based on your mind.
  4. 01:47:761 (1) - Just a little suggestion, but in my opinion, if there is a simple circle on 01:47:761 stacked with 01:49:130 (1) - it actually makes the gap in song being pretty well emphasized. Nevertheless, 01:48:445 - wasn't really needed for mapping as there is no sound anyway.
  5. 02:57:396 (1) - Same as above.

Conclusion: Rankable

Pretty nice style choice (and also I love the song) and map overally. I think if this gets a little cure, it can be qualified soon. In my opinion, there is no need to look at details like grid down grid up, because these were not really visible and main problems were with rhythm and some hitsounding, so yeah, it is really fine. Good luck and have my star~! :3
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
liangv587

Hyasalia wrote:

M4M
[liangv587's Insane]
  1. 00:44:816 (5,6) - ctrl G一下怎么样？这里音从高到低，所以让4到5间距大些，6到1间距减小再缓下来。
  2. 01:23:840 (5,6,7) - 感觉有点卡手，456角度稍微大一点
  3. 02:09:349 (1,2) - 这里间距略大，容易错读成1/2，稍微减小点比较好前面有小间距对应的
  4. 02:32:521 (1) - 加个NC怎么样，这里1/2到1/4转变，间距差得不大比较容易造成误读
摸不出啥了;w;
Good Luck :)
thanks for modding

Abhor wrote:

[ INSANE ]
00:57:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这段来点绿线改下音量大小啊ok，红线音量就行了，变化没那么大
01:39:009 (1,2,3) - 稍微有点扭。。。调整下姿势♂ok
01:59:238 (4,5,6,7) - 首先4开始NC然后加绿线调下音量啊
02:27:823 (9,10) - 这里间距我认为应该和02:27:461 (7,8) - 保持一致
thanks for modding

pandorawindy wrote:

M4M req
[insane]
  1. 00:13:683 (3) - 这里还是稍微有点困扰我..不是红线的原因 , 而是滑条的速度和离上一个滑条之间的时间间隔.
  2. 00:32:538 (1) - 这里不做成 00:29:657 (1,2) - ？这里vocal没对到节奏上，而且有个扫弦的声音，一根滑条带过
  3. 02:31:076 - 这里比较适合加一个短时间的kiai .
  4. 02:36:859 - ^
thanks for modding

Wafu wrote:

liangv587's Insane

  1. You should decrease AR by 1 because the song is quite chilling, and it doesn't really feel like it needs higher AR. Also it feels better when you compare difficulty between this and hard, it is not that big, so settings also don't have to be much higher.ok
  2. 00:38:285 (5) - Hitsounding on this slider is pretty off. If you want to put notes which are not really even in a song, at least don't put hitsounds on them, that would be fine.add drum-sampleset on the head
  3. 01:14:451 (5) - As I think about it, you didn't at least put hitsounds there, but it seems like lacking creativity when there are such sliders on empty places, I recommend to remove them completelly. There are already pretty nice patterns like this, where it fits and they are enough to make this map fun and nice. For example 01:39:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7), but these are just random sliders based on your mind.add normalwhistle-addition on the head
  4. 01:47:761 (1) - Just a little suggestion, but in my opinion, if there is a simple circle on 01:47:761 stacked with 01:49:130 (1) - it actually makes the gap in song being pretty well emphasized. Nevertheless, 01:48:445 - wasn't really needed for mapping as there is no sound anyway.no
  5. 02:57:396 (1) - Same as above.

Conclusion: Rankable
thanks for modding
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

Wafu wrote:


Random mod

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion
General


  1. 燕尾蝶 tag seems to be a bit wrong, because the real album name is 燕尾蝶 下定愛的決心, so 下定愛的決心 should be added so the title is complete. added
  2. Maybe the background should be more related to the song. If I am right, 寧夏 is a region in China, so maybe you might put a nice picture from this area as a background more than stars? I don't know the lyrics however, so you should be able to judge I think :) i'll change the bg but.... '寧夏' means Peaceful Summer here ^^,not a region in China.
  3. 00:51:285 - Add a red timing point here with 83 BPM to fix the metronome, that's because if someone plays nightcore, it will mess up there, because downbeat is on 00:51:285. It is also inappropriate for Taiko players, it makes the downbeat line go wrong there.
  4. 00:14:044 - You can notice this note is slightly off on 25% speed, it might be like on 00:14:090 - or something. That means 00:13:683 has wrong BPM, try to decrease it a little bit so everything there fits well. all fixed

Normal


  1. These inherited points have no function and don't afflict any note (mostly red point did its job, there were SV changes, but no sliders were in these parts), please remove them:
    00:00:746
    00:02:209
    00:06:519
    00:07:200
    00:09:377
    01:25:999
    01:28:890
    01:47:761
    01:58:541
    02:00:518
    02:05:745
    02:23:108
    02:45:118
    02:54:488
    02:55:933
    03:07:569
    03:09:745
    03:11:448
    Check them on other diffs too, I saw them on those too, they're most likely unrankable.     all fixed. Really thank you dor the big help.i was too lazy to check it
  2. 00:46:610 - It seems you used Additions Drum concidently instead of Sampleset Drum, it feels pretty well with music and you followed this sound in song with Drum sampleset just everytime. (You also have it on other diffs here) okk
  3. 00:42:647 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend to lower the volume a bit as the snares, rims or whatever it is is slightly lower on volume in song, thus these are a bit loud. It feels pretty fine on 40%. On 00:45:539 - 60% fits well again, so I think keeping this one would be good. okk
  4. 01:26:364 - Snap the end of slider properly, it currently ends on 01:26:356 fixed
  5. 01:29:251 - Same as above, slider's end is now incorrectly on 01:29:247 fixed

Hard


  1. 00:42:647 (1,2,3,4) - Same suggestion as on normal. I think 40% volume fits better here and then 60% on 00:45:539. ^
  2. 01:23:126 - I don't know whether it is intended, but I think SV decrease was not really fitting there, but that's just minor. ok added a *1.25SV inherited point.
  3. 02:57:396 - You should maybe map a note there becuase you did on both other diffs, while one of those is easier than this and it feels quite insensible to keep it empty when easier diff has mapped more in some parts than hard. ok
Conclusion: Rankable

Pretty nice style choice (and also I love the song) and map overally. I think if this gets a little cure, it can be qualified soon. In my opinion, there is no need to look at details like grid down grid up, because these were not really visible and main problems were with rhythm and some hitsounding, so yeah, it is really fine. Good luck and have my star~! :3 Thank you very much but Where is your star?,jk.^^
Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu
I didn't give star previously, because I had 0kd, so I had to wait :3
Karen
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Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
wow thank you so much :D
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