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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年5月2日 at 4:09:19

Artist: ClariS
Title: Drawing
Tags: Party Time クラリス Clara クララ Aris Alice アリス Karen カレン
BPM: 132
Filesize: 4033kb
Play Time: 01:48
Difficulties Available:
  • Hard (2.78 stars, 260 notes)
  • Insane (3.68 stars, 358 notes)
  • Normal (1.53 stars, 114 notes)

Download: ClariS - Drawing
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Last edited by [Twinkle] on , edited 37 times in total.
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这排版比我工整多了


General
  • 所有的diff里的Countdown, widescreen support, letterbox全部取消
  • NH的gap有点大,可能 肯定会被挑,因为hard下的节奏已经和insane差不多了
  • 默认sliderslide好吵啊啊啊啊啊,其实现在我听默认音效都会觉得吵,还是建议找一组好音效


Normal


Hard


Insane
  • 没什么好说的了,节奏和hard差不多啊,排版比我好
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M4M

Normal



Hard



Insane

没了 :)
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Normal
  • nc略凌乱,最好是等拍数大白线,有些bn比较在意这个,后面不再提
  • 00:27:676 - 转盘结束这里,另外需要注意下间歇时间,00:28:585 (1,2) - 不是太必要的话建议减去
  • 01:09:494 (1,2) - 低难度还是建议尽量减少重叠,可以试下发散排列 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2964250
  • 01:16:767 (1,2) - 略不好读,可以下和前个Kiai类似的排列
  • 好像有个说法转盘消音不能低于10% orz


Hard


Insane

wwwwwwwwwww
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[Teichan] wrote:


这排版比我工整多了


General
  • 所有的diff里的Countdown, widescreen support, letterbox全部取消
  • NH的gap有点大,可能 肯定会被挑,因为hard下的节奏已经和insane差不多了 感觉不会把,hard我一处连打都没有放,insane倒是有很多连打。
  • 默认sliderslide好吵啊啊啊啊啊,其实现在我听默认音效都会觉得吵,还是建议找一组好音效我去找找看~


Normal


Hard


Insane
  • 没什么好说的了,节奏和hard差不多啊,排版比我好


谢谢!
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Kagamine Ren wrote:
M4M

Normal
  • 关了widescreen support和letterbox 都去掉了
  • 00:09:494 (2,3) - 感觉要么就再弯一点,要么就干脆直着好了,这个样子挺奇怪的,可能是位置问题导致看起来不好看,01:38:585 (2,3) - 这两个就挺好的 感觉两边差不多弯啊
  • 00:34:722 - 加个note?改了
  • 01:04:040 (1,3) - 调整一下让他们叠起来吧
  • 01:41:767 (4) - 去掉clap 改了



Hard



Insane

没了 :)
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AIR wrote:

Normal
  • nc略凌乱,最好是等拍数大白线,有些bn比较在意这个,后面不再提
  • 00:27:676 - 转盘结束这里,另外需要注意下间歇时间,00:28:585 (1,2) - 不是太必要的话建议减去 改了
  • 01:09:494 (1,2) - 低难度还是建议尽量减少重叠,可以试下发散排列 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2964250 差不多啊感觉
  • 01:16:767 (1,2) - 略不好读,可以下和前个Kiai类似的排列 改了
  • 好像有个说法转盘消音不能低于10% orz orz先保留把


Hard


Insane

wwwwwwwwwww


:) :) :)
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ClariS 赞~

general
offset + 8


Insane
00:09:949 (2,3) - 试下 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2968241
00:20:858 (2,3,4) - 建议头都可以加个fin
00:25:176 (1) - fin
00:33:131 (5,6) - 这两个和前面分开啊,和你前面那里一样00:30:858 (4,5,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2968261
01:14:267 (5,1) - 包好点
01:29:949 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 试下这顺序 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2968287
01:42:279 (1) - fin


Hard
音效可以参考我上面说的
00:58:585 (1,2,3) - 可以在稍微弄好点。。
01:26:313 (5,6) - 这里有个变化是两个音,前面叠的都是一个音,可以试下变化,例如把 01:26:540 (6,7) - ctrl+g


Normal
00:25:176 (1) - fin
00:50:858 (5,1) - 包好点
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offset 420

Insane
plz use 24clap or flollow the music
00:07:691 (4) - del whistle
00:18:146 (1) - make 1/4 shorter
00:18:600 (2) - make 1/4 longer
00:22:294 (1) - start at 00:22:350 - whistle
00:25:191 (1,1) - del
00:33:146 (5,1) - swap nc
00:33:600 (1,2) - Ctrl+G
00:37:919 (7) - del
00:38:146 - to 00:43:600 - 24clap
00:43:373 - clap
00:45:759 (2) - del 00:45:646 (1,2) - swap nc
00:47:578 (9) - del
00:48:941 (6,8) - move to 00:48:487 -
00:52:691 (1) - make 1/4 shorter
00:54:055 (2) - 00:53:600 -
00:53:600 (1) - 00:54:055 -
00:57:691 (1,1,1,1) - use circle
00:58:600 (1) - del whistle
01:09:737 - circle
01:02:464 (3,4,5,1,2) - http://puu.sh/h0XLn/e9635eef24.jpg
01:24:396 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/h0XNc/18f8651606.jpg
01:26:782 (6) - NC
01:40:419 (1) - del whistle
01:41:328 - 30%

Hard
00:30:873 - use 1/2 slider
00:38:146 (1,3) - use 1/2 slider
00:43:600 (4) - 1/2 slider
00:52:691 (1,3) - use 1/2 slider
00:58:600 (1,3) - blanket
01:07:464 (6) - keep ds
01:09:509 (5) - NC
01:18:374 (6,1) - avoid this lap
01:23:373 - Circle
01:30:419 (5) - use 1/2 slider
01:34:509 (6) - use 1/2 slider
01:36:328 (5) - use 1/2 slider
01:37:237 (2) - use 1/2 slider

Normal
00:07:237 (4) - del
NC at every long white line
fix all blankets
looks well
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Sakaue Nachi wrote:
ClariS 赞~

general
offset + 8


Insane
00:09:949 (2,3) - 试下 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2968241 感觉现在这样好些
00:20:858 (2,3,4) - 建议头都可以加个fin 已经加了2个finish了,感觉够用了
00:25:176 (1) - fin 改了
00:33:131 (5,6) - 这两个和前面分开啊,和你前面那里一样00:30:858 (4,5,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2968261 不一定要和前面一样吧,这里想弄个停留效果的
01:14:267 (5,1) - 包好点
01:29:949 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 试下这顺序 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2968287 不用改了吧,现在这样挺好的
01:42:279 (1) - fin 最后这两个转盘都挺轻的,不用加fin了


Hard
音效可以参考我上面说的 前半部分第二个转盘加了finish
00:58:585 (1,2,3) - 可以在稍微弄好点。。orz这个不仔细看很难看出来的
01:26:313 (5,6) - 这里有个变化是两个音,前面叠的都是一个音,可以试下变化,例如把 01:26:540 (6,7) - ctrl+g 这么改感觉难度太大了


Normal
00:25:176 (1) - fin 改了
00:50:858 (5,1) - 包好点 改了


谢谢! :) :) :)
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ts8zs wrote:
offset 420

Insane
plz use 24clap or flollow the music 24clap for kiai is enough for this song
00:07:691 (4) - del whistle no
00:18:146 (1) - make 1/4 shorter no
00:18:600 (2) - make 1/4 longer no
00:22:294 (1) - start at 00:22:350 - whistle not necessary
00:25:191 (1,1) - del no
00:33:146 (5,1) - swap nc no
00:33:600 (1,2) - Ctrl+G no
00:37:919 (7) - del no
00:38:146 - to 00:43:600 - 24clap no
00:43:373 - clap no
00:45:759 (2) - del 00:45:646 (1,2) - swap nc no
00:47:578 (9) - del no
00:48:941 (6,8) - move to 00:48:487 - no
00:52:691 (1) - make 1/4 shorter no
00:54:055 (2) - 00:53:600 -
00:53:600 (1) - 00:54:055 -
00:57:691 (1,1,1,1) - use circle no
00:58:600 (1) - del whistle no
01:09:737 - circle no
01:02:464 (3,4,5,1,2) - http://puu.sh/h0XLn/e9635eef24.jpg no
01:24:396 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/h0XNc/18f8651606.jpg no
01:26:782 (6) - NC fixed
01:40:419 (1) - del whistle no
01:41:328 - 30% fixed

Hard
00:30:873 - use 1/2 slider no
00:38:146 (1,3) - use 1/2 slider no
00:43:600 (4) - 1/2 slider no
00:52:691 (1,3) - use 1/2 slider no
00:58:600 (1,3) - blanket fixed
01:07:464 (6) - keep ds no
01:09:509 (5) - NC fixed
01:18:374 (6,1) - avoid this lap fixed
01:23:373 - Circle no
01:30:419 (5) - use 1/2 slider no
01:34:509 (6) - use 1/2 slider no
01:36:328 (5) - use 1/2 slider no
01:37:237 (2) - use 1/2 slider no

Normal
00:07:237 (4) - del no
NC at every long white line
fix all blankets
looks well


thank you for modding! :) :) :)
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M4M from my queue!
(Heads up, your mod was so boss so I'll try my best but sorry if it's not good :c_


General
The background you have atm is from oreimo but I'm fairly certain the song isn't from that show. Try using one like this http://puu.sh/h3Bto/1e1942b8bc.jpg instead.
Add more tags like the songs name, your username, ClariS, etc.
Metadata checks out.


Insane
00:00:413 (1) - This whole section desperately needs hitsounding. It feels very floaty and it's hard for some (like me) to get good accuracy. Even make the volume of hitsounds 10%, they just have to be there.
00:11:322 (1,2) - Keep spacing consistent to 00:06:663 (5,1,4,1) -
00:18:140 (1,2) - ^ I get you're doing it to emphasize the new sentence but it's not needed and just ruins flow
00:17:913 (5,4,5) - stack?
00:20:413 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent slider shapes
00:32:686 (4,5,6) - Hard to read
00:37:685 (5,6,7,8) - Turn into a line, stack ruins flow
00:39:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I like this!
00:50:867 (3) - NC to stay consistent with your NC patterns before the new stanza (big white line)
00:57:685 (1,1,1,1) - NC really needed here?
01:00:413 (5,2) - ugly overlap
01:36:776 (1,2,3,4,5) - Blanket the stream on the end of the slider
01:39:049 (1,2) - This jump is 400x harder than every other part of this song

That's all from me!
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Litharrale wrote:
M4M from my queue!
(Heads up, your mod was so boss so I'll try my best but sorry if it's not good :c_


General
The background you have atm is from oreimo but I'm fairly certain the song isn't from that show. Try using one like this http://puu.sh/h3Bto/1e1942b8bc.jpg instead. I know it isn't from that anime but I can't find any better BG related to ClariS. The BG you just provided for me, I have used it in another ClariS map. I think I will find a better BG by myself, thank you for reminding me of that :D
Add more tags like the songs name, your username, ClariS, etc. I don't think songs name or my username should be written in tags.
Metadata checks out.


Insane
00:00:413 (1) - This whole section desperately needs hitsounding. It feels very floaty and it's hard for some (like me) to get good accuracy. Even make the volume of hitsounds 10%, they just have to be there. the hitsounds in the beginning is not very strong but definitely exist. I used soft-hitnormal2 and some soft whistle for the beginning part
00:11:322 (1,2) - Keep spacing consistent to 00:06:663 (5,1,4,1) - not really necessary
00:18:140 (1,2) - ^ I get you're doing it to emphasize the new sentence but it's not needed and just ruins flow I just fully stack them for better shape, not really affect the flow.
00:17:913 (5,4,5) - stack? OK
00:20:413 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent slider shapes not really need to be consistent
00:32:686 (4,5,6) - Hard to read added NC on it
00:37:685 (5,6,7,8) - Turn into a line, stack ruins flow streams here all stacked is a stop done in purpose
00:39:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I like this! thanks!
00:50:867 (3) - NC to stay consistent with your NC patterns before the new stanza (big white line) fixed
00:57:685 (1,1,1,1) - NC really needed here? yes, DS is increasing
01:00:413 (5,2) - ugly overlap I think it is fine o.o
01:36:776 (1,2,3,4,5) - Blanket the stream on the end of the slider ok
01:39:049 (1,2) - This jump is 400x harder than every other part of this song yes, you are right. decreased the distance

That's all from me!

thank you! :) :) :)
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Insane
00:25:185 (1) - Remove spinner, add slider and end it 00:25:526
00:25:640 - 00:25:867 - Add slider
00:26:094 - Add spinner
00:35:867 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:08:026 (6,7) - Change the technique for this
Image
01:08:822 (1) - Remove
01:45:185 (1) - Remove and end slider there ending 01:45:526
01:45:640 - Add a slider ending 01:45:867 - with reverse
01:46:322 - Add spinner


Hard
00:20:413 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make a star pattern with these
00:25:185 (1) - Remove spinner, add slider and end it 00:25:526
00:25:640 - 00:25:867 - Add slider
00:45:640 (4) - Place circle on top of 00:45:867 (1)
00:47:458 (6,1) - ^^
01:06:208 (2) - Flip this the other way
Image
01:40:413 (1,2,3,4,1) - Star pattern


Normal
00:38:140 (2) - Add hitsound Finish
00:38:594 (3) - ^^
00:39:958 (4) - ^^
(I would keep this going as a pattern)
01:23:140 (4) - Face this the other way
Image
01:40:413 (1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe do a star pattern?
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imaikiseta wrote:
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Insane
00:25:185 (1) - Remove spinner, add slider and end it 00:25:526 no
00:25:640 - 00:25:867 - Add slider ^
00:26:094 - Add spinner ^
00:35:867 (3) - Ctrl+G no
01:08:026 (6,7) - Change the technique for this no
Image
01:08:822 (1) - Remove no
01:45:185 (1) - Remove and end slider there ending 01:45:526 no
01:45:640 - Add a slider ending 01:45:867 - with reverse ^
01:46:322 - Add spinner ^


Hard
00:20:413 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make a star pattern with these no
00:25:185 (1) - Remove spinner, add slider and end it 00:25:526 ^
00:25:640 - 00:25:867 - Add slider ^
00:45:640 (4) - Place circle on top of 00:45:867 (1) no
00:47:458 (6,1) - ^^ ^
01:06:208 (2) - Flip this the other way I don't think so
Image
01:40:413 (1,2,3,4,1) - Star pattern why always star pattern?o.o


Normal
00:38:140 (2) - Add hitsound Finish no
00:38:594 (3) - ^^ ^
00:39:958 (4) - ^^ ^
(I would keep this going as a pattern)
01:23:140 (4) - Face this the other way no
Image
01:40:413 (1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe do a star pattern?no


thanks anyway :) :) :)
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