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Nomiya Ayumi - Lorelei

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saymun
299 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
saymun
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, 6 June 2010 at 12:09:57 PM

Artist: ALiCE'S EMOTiON
Title: Lorelei
Source: Touhou
Tags: REDALiCE Deaf to all but the Song Mystia Nomiya Ayumi
BPM: 172
Filesize: 7165kb
Play Time: 02:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.94 stars, 314 notes)
  2. Lunatic (4.99 stars, 466 notes)
  3. Normal (3.15 stars, 156 notes)
Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Lorelei
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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hope every one likes this x]
Last edited by saymun , edited 11 times in total.
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
emm... cut the unused part of the mp3?

[Normal]
Overall-1?
00:14:853 (3) - make it down a bit (turn off grid snap, maybe 0.5 grid) at the symmetrical place with (1)?
00:38:225 (2) - whistle?
00:41:016 (2) - ^
00:50:086 (2,4) - ^
00:53:923 (1) - whistle at the start
00:56:714 (1) - ^
01:45:202 (2) - whistle?
01:46:946 (1) - whistle at the end?
01:47:644 (2) - ^

[Hard]
00:22:004 (1,3) - remove sliderwhistle.
00:24:795 (1,2,3) - ^
00:26:016 (1,2) - whistle at the end?
00:27:411 (1,2) - ^
00:28:807 (1,3) - remove sliderwhistle
00:37:702 (2,3) - 2+ 3's end whistle.
00:38:574 (1,3) - 1's end + 3's end whistle.
00:40:493 (2) - whistle.
00:48:865 (2,3,5,7) - 2+3's end+5's end+7 whistle.
01:10:667 (1) - remove sliderwhistle.

[Insane]
OA 9 wins yeah!
00:49:039 (4,5) - whistle at the end?
00:50:958 (2) - whistle.
00:51:132 (3) - remove sliderwhistle= =
01:44:156 (1,2,4,6,8) - 1's end+2's end+4+6+8 whistle.
01:46:772 (2,4,5) - 2+4's start+5's end whistle.
01:54:446 (7) - whistle
saymun
299 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
saymun
Fixed the following:

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
emm... cut the unused part of the mp3? Will do it soon EDIT: think ill leave it as it is

[Normal]
Overall-1?
00:38:225 (2) - whistle?
00:41:016 (2) - ^
00:50:086 (2,4) - ^
00:53:923 (1) - whistle at the start
00:56:714 (1) - ^
01:45:202 (2) - whistle?
01:46:946 (1) - whistle at the end?
01:47:644 (2) - ^

[Hard]
00:22:004 (1,3) - remove sliderwhistle.
00:24:795 (1,2,3) - ^
00:28:807 (1,3) - remove sliderwhistle
00:37:702 (2,3) - 2+ 3's end whistle.
00:38:574 (1,3) - 1's end + 3's end whistle.
00:40:493 (2) - whistle.
00:48:865 (2,3,5,7) - 2+3's end+5's end+7 whistle.
01:10:667 (1) - remove sliderwhistle.

[Insane]
OA 9 wins yeah! yeah~
00:49:039 (4,5) - whistle at the end?
00:50:958 (2) - whistle.
00:51:132 (3) - remove sliderwhistle= =
01:44:156 (1,2,4,6,8) - 1's end+2's end+4+6+8 whistle.
01:46:772 (2,4,5) - 2+4's start+5's end whistle.
01:54:446 (7) - whistle
taNa
312 posts
Joined January 2009
taNa
:)
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. 60% mapped? uhh, I think it's the score that forced you to give up the left part :3
[Normal]:
  1. 00:07:876 (1) - finish? I noticed that you put a finish in [I] but not in [N] and [H] (also this section in [N] and [H] lack hitsounds imo)
  2. 00:31:597 (T) - if you change the volume, let the time section a little ealier than the note. For example, this section should be set at 00:31:510.
  3. 01:41:365 (1) - finish?
[Hard]:
  1. 00:31:597 (T) - the same issue as Normal
  2. 01:41:365 (1) - finish?
[Insane]:
  1. 01:41:365 (1) - finish?
  2. 00:20:435 (T) - time secion issue as Normal
  3. very wild jumps! X3
Star~
saymun
299 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
saymun
Fixed the following:

Colin Hou wrote:

[Normal]:
  1. 00:07:876 (1) - finish? I noticed that you put a finish in [I] but not in [N] and [H] (also this section in [N] and [H] lack hitsounds imo)
  2. 00:31:597 (T) - if you change the volume, let the time section a little ealier than the note. For example, this section should be set at 00:31:510. Don't think it really matters that much? but changed anyway if im wrong
  3. 01:41:365 (1) - finish?
[Hard]:
  1. 00:31:597 (T) - the same issue as Normal
  2. 01:41:365 (1) - finish?
[Insane]:
  1. 01:41:365 (1) - finish?
Star~
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
Yep, that's necessary.

Although soft and normal hitfinish are the same, the volume still matters. If you click on the note ealier than section line, you will hear a finish sound with lower volume.
Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
•Overall•
-You have to Resnap All Notes on all diffs. That's necessary because if I resnap the notes on the all diffs and then I try to quit the system ask me to save.

•Insane•
00:09:272 (3) - Make this symmetrical to the previous slider? Maybe copying the (2) slider and then flip horizontally.
00:22:528 (4) - Wrong spacing.
00:17:295 (4) - The end of this slider doesn't match with the (1)
00:25:318 (4) - Wrong spacing.
01:41:888 (4) - 2 grids left? (lv3)

•Hard•
01:54:621 (6,7) - ^

•Normal•
Maybe the slider velocity of this diff is too high for a Normal. What do you think about reducing it?

That's all.
Nice map~
Star~
Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
Edit : Double post, damn!
saymun
299 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
saymun

Kecco wrote:

•Overall•
-You have to Resnap All Notes on all diffs. That's necessary because if I resnap the notes on the all diffs and then I try to quit the system ask me to save. Done

•Insane•
00:09:272 (3) - Make this symmetrical to the previous slider? Maybe copying the (2) slider and then flip horizontally. X
00:22:528 (4) - Wrong spacing. Was purposely done like that (increasing and decreasing spacing)
00:17:295 (4) - The end of this slider doesn't match with the (1) Wasn't meant to lol, and the player wont really notice because of the high OD
00:25:318 (4) - Wrong spacing. same as above
01:41:888 (4) - 2 grids left? (lv3) same as above

•Hard•
01:54:621 (6,7) - ^ Fixed

•Normal•
Maybe the slider velocity of this diff is too high for a Normal. What do you think about reducing it? I think its fine

That's all.
Nice map~
Star~
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
General
- osb appeared :o
- um...I prefer to cut the mp3..

Normal
00:20:435 (T) - move this section to 00:20:347
00:28:807 (1,2) - whistle at end of sliders o.o?
01:10:667 (1) - spacing ?
01:12:063 (2) - ^
02:07:877 (3) - clap at end of slider o.o?

Hard
00:20:435 (T) - move this section to 00:20:347
00:31:597 (T) - move to 00:31:510
02:01:597 (4) - i would like to replace with 2 1/2 circles, just a suggestion
02:04:388 (5,6,7) - 1 grid down

Insane
(Press Skip button) > " 3, 2, 1, GO! " > missmissmissmissmiss > failed
well...nice OA9
00:50:435 (7) - whistle?
00:51:132 (3) - add whistle at begin of slider and remove whistle at reverse of slider?
00:59:504 (5) - 2 grids right?
02:00:813 (T) - add a inheriting section? (soft, 100%, no kiai)
02:13:807 (2) - miss a clap here?


Great saymun! (throw a star)
saymun
299 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
saymun
Fixed:

Pokie wrote:

General
- osb appeared :o blah thought i deleted it X_X

Normal
00:20:435 (T) - move this section to 00:20:347
00:28:807 (1,2) - whistle at end of sliders o.o?
02:07:877 (3) - clap at end of slider o.o?

Hard
00:20:435 (T) - move this section to 00:20:347
00:31:597 (T) - move to 00:31:510
02:04:388 (5,6,7) - 1 grid down

Insane
(Press Skip button) > " 3, 2, 1, GO! " > missmissmissmissmiss > failed XD
00:50:435 (7) - whistle?
02:13:807 (2) - miss a clap here?
ignorethis
osu! Alumni
1,885 posts
Joined August 2008
ignorethis
just note that overall 9 doesn't fit for this map <3

great map
Furawa
554 posts
Joined April 2009
Furawa
;)
DeadAlready
1,575 posts
Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
nice map~ >w</
jockeytiyan
1,269 posts
Joined July 2009
jockeytiyan
MY CAKE!!!
saymun
299 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
saymun


BAT opinions on OD?
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
STAR

OD9 is ok too.

but for me OD8 is better XD
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Ahai

[General]
1) You need an easier diff to make the beginner player easy to play
2) Cut the mp3 please

[Normal]
00:42:411 (4) - Is not stacked with 3 at the end
00:55:493 (3) - Maybe reverse this slider like 00:44:156 (3,4) and 00:46:946 (3,4)?
01:06:481 (3) - Move 2 grid up?
01:25:667 (x) - Add note?
02:16:946 (4) - Maybe reverse this slider like 00:44:156 (3,4) and 00:46:946 (3,4)?

[Hard]
00:16:946 (3) - Cut short this slider to red tick and add 1 repeating slider is better, IMO

[Insane]
I agree with everyone, the OD is too high......

00:28:807 (1,2) - Combine this into one slider?
00:29:068 (3,4) - ^
00:29:330 (5,6) - ^
00:29:592 (7,8) - ^
00:30:464 (3,4) - ^
00:30:725 (5,6) - ^
00:30:987 (7,8) - ^
00:31:249 (9) - New combo?

Good song
STAR
Gabi
2,554 posts
Joined December 2008
Gabi
................................offset -10ms............. sorry >.< (i'll try to ask lyby or someone to confirm it again -_-)

anyways the map is fine IMO. If mapper wants OD9 then it's good. I think both OD9 and OD8 is nice so it doesn't matter for me.

great map, and song (this theme is awesome <333333)
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