Oh, Tune-up...
so...
Hard :00:17:664 (4) - remove note
00:18:487 (6) - remove clap on the reverse (00:18:899)
00:22:810 (1) - remove whistle
00:24:251 (1) - remove clap on the reverse (00:24:457)
00:29:603 (1) - ... hm. Try to replace this by the longer slider. as example, 00:29:603 - 00:30:838 (It may be reversing on white + red ticks or not)
00:31:250 (1) - end spinner on white tick ( 00:33:308 )
00:39:072 (1) - remove clap on the reverse
00:42:365 (1) - same as before
01:10:361 - add note
01:14:992 (1) - Hmm. Try increasing the time spinner. it would be nice if the osu!bot will be able recruit at least 4000
01:47:413 (1) - same as before
01:48:442 (1,1,1) - imho, This sliders are weird. Remove it or do this place better.
Eazy :Omg... As for me, it seems more hardly than "hard"
Velocity is too slow. Try raise it, if you have a time xD
Distance snap... I think, you must use it in easy.
00:11:077 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Too hard for easy.
00:16:223 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Same as before. Place them so players can see the end of slider.
00:23:016 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Same as before. Use distance snap...
00:33:720 (1) - Change it ! xD It's not for easy.
+ 2x time... It's not for easy too.
00:39:895 (1,1,1,1,1) - Too hard for easy.
00:48:953 (4) - end slider at 00:49:776
Zetsubou Sensei's Easy Rave : If you have a lot of time, fix it !
SPOILER00:07:372 (2) - Move 1 gris to the up
00:09:636 (3) - Move 1 gris to the down
00:10:665 (4,1,2,1) - Move 2 gris to the down
00:14:782 (2) - Move 1 gris to the down,1 gris to the right
...etc
If no, than fix it :
2x time... In this diff it seems more readable than in "
eazy" . But I don't advise it.
00:16:635 (2) - end slider at 00:17:870
00:19:928 (5) - end slider at 00:20:548
00:27:133 - add note
00:29:603 (3) - end slider at 00:31:250
00:38:249 (2) - make it visible
00:46:482 (6) - make it visible
00:48:953 (3) - end slider at 00:49:776
00:52:246 (3) - end slider at 00:53:069
00:54:716 (1) - remove note. Prolong 00:53:893 (4) slider .
00:57:186 (5) - end slider at 00:58:010
00:58:113 (1) - start spinner from this point
General :Cut mp3.
And full submit.
I would like to see the distance snap.somewhere i can't understand map.
I think the two colors is not enough. Try add third.
I'm bad in hitsounds, and I can't hardly help but advise you to double-check it all
Oh man, Thats enough for the first time. Fix problems and send PM to me. I'll give you a star.And If you want, i could remod it.