1. Easy (1,48 stars, 95 notes)
2. Hard (2,9 stars, 210 notes)
3. Insane (3,73 stars, 403 notes)
4. Normal (2,14 stars, 143 notes)

Garven wrote:

Give some ambient motion to CarolBike (Pass). It looks too static compared to everything else going on.

Garven wrote:

Also a different boat in the background would be nice instead of the same one over and over (if there are resources from the game anyway)

Garven wrote:

Looks pretty awesome though!

1. 00:42:732 (2) - Missing add whistle with addition change to drum like you did other diff's, example 00:55:883 (2) have whistle with addition drum, but other pattern don't have it, so I think you are missing this thing
2. 01:09:034 (2) - missing add clap in end slider~
3. 01:13:965 (1) - I don't know why you add whistle and soft in start slider, Finish still better than this IMO because beat and music is soo high, so remove whistle and soft in start slider and add finish
4. 01:17:047 (4) - add whistle and addition soft? melody still fit a lot
5. 01:20:540 (1) - missing add finish in start slider also is sense too because song and beat is too high
6. 01:27:116 (1) - same in 01:13:965 (1)
7. 01:30:198 (4) - I like more whistle with addition soft, better than drumo IMO
8. 01:33:691 (1) - same in 01:13:965 (1)

1. 00:19:719 (2,1) - just nazi, this could be improve flow, I mean the (1) need more grid right like this http://puu.sh/bUmV4/4fc180673e better flow IMO if you fix this care spacing in 00:23:006 (2)
2. 00:47:664 (1) - can you blanket with 00:49:308 (2) and 00:46:020 (2) in end slider ?
3. 01:07:390 (1,2) - the border is little near, I prefer the (1) and do it rotate 20º then fix spacing, most better, just need clean little border http://puu.sh/bUokJ/b593fa3a65
4. 01:12:321 (4) - again too much near border, can you blanket with 01:10:677 (3) in end slider?
5. 01:39:445 (4) - just nazi, end point. need grid 1 left to better blanket with 01:40:266 (1)

1. 00:52:595 (4) - missing add whistle with addition Soft in start slider, you have done pattern before and consistency other diff's
2. 00:55:882 (3) - ^ same but addition drum
3. 01:28:758 (2) - missing add whistle with addition Soft in start slider
4. 01:36:157 (6) - in end slider need add clap with addition soft, I feel this really need it IMO
5. 01:45:198 (3) - missing add whistle with addition drum in start slider
6. 01:51:773 (4) - missing add whistle with addition Soft in start slider
7. 01:55:060 (3) - missing add whistle with addition drum in start slider

1. 00:14:786 (1) - the second point need move to x:184 y:24, just improve shape arc slider
2. 00:31:019 (1) - need improve shape arc slider
3. 00:36:156 (4,5,6,7) - U sure this is fine? I feel this is more hard in normal, is hard play to newbie, I prefer add slider instead note, like you did in
4. 00:49:307 (3,4,5), just for me, this part is hard for this diff IMO
5. 00:46:019 (3) - Improve shape arc slide?
6. 00:40:265 (5) - blanket with 00:40:883 (6) ?
7. 00:59:170 (3) - Improve shape arc slide?
8. 01:07:390 (1) - in start, could better blanket with whole sharpe border I mean this http://puu.sh/bUrCo/5a7e2c723f
9. 01:19:512 (4) - need improve more blanket with 01:20:539 (1)
10. 01:27:115 (1) - in end slider, could better blanket with sharpe border
11. 01:50:951 (2,3) - I feel this flow is little poor, the 01:51:567 (3,4) - could be more grid down, to better flow if you do that carefully spacing

1. 00:18:075 (1) - this should finish instead whistle? and remove from addition soft, finish still better than whistle IMO
2. 00:42:732 (3) - missing add whistle with addition drum, again I can see you have done pattern and inconsistency diff's
3. 00:44:376 (1) - ^ same but addition soft
4. 01:09:041 (5) - forget add whistle with addition soft
5. 01:15:609 (4) - ^ same in start slider
6. 01:18:904 (3) - ^ same
7. 01:22:191 (3) - ^ same
8. 01:23:835 (1) - ^ same
9. 01:25:478 (3) - ^ same
10. 01:27:123 (1) - ^ same
11. 01:28:760 (4) - ^ same
12. 01:32:047 (4) - ^ same
13. 01:36:979 (1) - in end slider, the addition should be soft to auto
14. 01:40:266 (1) - forget add whistle with addition soft in start slider
15. 01:41:917 (3) - ^ same
16. 01:43:561 (1) - ^ same

1. 00:24:452 (1) - I feel the melody start in 00:24:650, so should slider should start in 00:24:650, and 00:24:445 could add note or not, because I can hear there only drum http://puu.sh/bUw2j/0929d6d2e4
2. 00:40:273 (5) - improve more blanket with 00:41:095 (1) in start ?
3. 01:40:273 (1) - improve more blanket with 01:41:917 (3) ?

1. 00:19:719 (5) - Missing add whistle with addition soft
2. 00:29:582 (8) - ^ same in start slider
3. 00:52:595 (6) - ^ same but with addition drum in start slider
4. 00:55:883 (7) - Missing add whistle with addition soft in start slider
5. 01:18:897 (1) - Missing add whistle with addition soft
6. 01:51:773 (6) - ^ same in start slider but with addition drum
7. 01:55:061 (8) - ^ same with addition drum

1. 00:39:445 (6) - this still can be improve blanket with 00:39:239 (5) if you do that carefully spacing
2. 00:47:253 (12,13,14,15,1,2) - can you bit more grid donw ? i feel this flow is little poor with 00:46:739 (11) like this http://puu.sh/bUxID/0aae65b5c4 for better flow
3. 01:08:828 (1) - could remove new combo ? I know this is long combo, but the music still continue, still better if remove new combo IMO
4. 01:09:445 (x) - add note? There beat IMO
5. 01:12:321 (1) - Remove new combo, same before in 01:08:828 (1)
6. 01:15:609 (1) - ^ same
7. 01:18:897 (1) - ^ same
8. 01:21:979 (1) - ^ same
9. 01:22:595 (x) - This have really beat that i can hear, add note?
10. 01:25:472 (1) - remove new combo
11. 01:28:554 (1) - ^ same
12. 01:32:047 (1) - ^ same
13. 01:40:883 (3) - improve blanket with 01:40:677 (2) ? if you do that, care spacing

Pereira006 wrote:

1. 00:36:156 (4,5,6,7) - U sure this is fine? I feel this is more hard in normal, is hard play to newbie, I prefer add slider instead note, like you did in
   Changed to it to be like 00:49:307 (3,4,5) aand....
2. 00:49:307 (3,4,5), just for me, this part is hard for this diff IMO I don't really agree, the rythms is less complex here because of the use of a repeat slider to show the rytms.

[Hard]

Gameplay

1. 00:24:452 (1) - I feel the melody start in 00:24:650, so should slider should start in 00:24:650, and 00:24:445 could add note or not, because I can hear there only drum http://puu.sh/bUw2j/0929d6d2e4 I don't agree. The melody sounds a bit different at that part so I moved it earlier to make it fit more.

[Insane]


Gameplay

1. 01:09:445 (x) - add note? There beat IMOThere's a beat, yes but it feels better if only the main melody is mapped at that part imo
2. 01:22:595 (x) - This have really beat that i can hear, add note?There's a beat, yes but it feels better if only the main melody is mapped at that part imo

[AppLoad] wrote:

Easy
AiMod say put NC on this spinner 01:58:363 (1) This is intentional. In all the difficulties I removed combo because it's a part of the last combo and not having NC there made sense to me.

Normal

00:36:171 (4,5) - Maybe this? I think it's better.Done
00:58:774 (2) - Maybe make so?
01:07:404 (1) - This slider is awry. DoneFix it.
01:41:513 (2,3,4) - I think it's hard for normal. Maybe use "Reverse Selection". It's really better.I did some visual edits but don't agree really on the difficulity of it.

Hard

00:26:308 (6,7,8) - Maybe make so?
00:47:061 (6,7,8) - Hmm, awry triangle. Make so.This isn't really meant to be a triangle however. It's more ment to be a rhombus
01:39:459 (6,7,8,9) - I can't say exactly, but this square is awry.Fixed

Insane

00:09:664 (6,7,8) - Maybe make so? I think it's better.
00:10:486 (9) - Maybe lower down this slider and raise this circle 00:10:897 (10) ? It's really looks better.
00:11:102 (11,12) - I don't like this. Maybe move 00:11:102 (11) in other place? Okay, it's just my opinion.
00:31:034 (11,12,1) - Maybe make this so?Did some changes to the pattern but not in the way you suggested
01:20:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - I think, it's so long combo, Maybe add NC here 01:23:431 (17), remove NC here 01:23:842, Add NC here 01:25:486 (1). Been considering this before but I decided against it in the end for consistency.

Cool SB, it's really nice idea. Good Luck~

1. 00:09:870 (2,1) - you can stack the tail for nice looking
2. 00:47:678 (1) - soft finish on repeated? (although I think whistle is better for that and this 00:34:527 (1) - )
3. 00:40:280 (4) - drum whistle on head maybe? (same for 00:53:431 (4) - )
4. 00:50:143 (3) - move it to y316 . To make it symmetrical with 00:47:678 (1) - tail
5. You're using very constants patterns, so why did you change these? >00:44:390 (1,2) - 00:57:541 (1,2,3) - since there's no difference
6. 01:00:828 (4) - NC?
7. 01:07:404 (1) - Both tail and head shouldn't touch the body of the slider to make it much more readable for new players IMO. Keep in mind that you also increased the SV.
8. 01:18:500 (5) - Fix the DS
9. Kiai from 01:07:404 - to 01:33:705 - would be nice. Would help your NC pattern change too i think
10. 01:12:335 (4) - the current shape looks bad to me. try something like this?
11. 01:09:048 (2) - drum sampleset on repeated? (using 01:22:198 (2) - as reference)
12. 01:27:130 (1) - missing clap on tail and soft finish on head
13. 01:29:801 (3) - this should be sampleset drum >01:16:650 (3) -
14. 01:30:212 (4) - delete whistle?
15. 01:28:774 (2,3,4) - you can improve blankets fixing the DS i think. Also try ctrl+g on (4) may work better for easy
16. 01:32:061 (6) - missing whistle on head?
17. 01:39:459 (4) - make it more curved as others
18. 01:41:924 (2) - missing drum whistle?
19. 01:58:363 (1) - you can use this pattern >00:59:185 (3,4) - . The spinner make look the final empy imo
20. there are some few inconsistencies with hitsounds i think><

1. 00:27:952 (1,4) - you could blanket this
2. 00:34:527 (1,2,3) - here you can try some different easier rhythm, maybe likethis or this?
3. 00:47:678 (1) - rotate it around 45° for better flow
4. 00:57:541 (1) - make a bow? http://puu.sh/c7zAU/377f3620eb.jpg
5. 01:00:828 (5) - nc?
6. 01:12:952 (3) - make it more curved to not overlap with 01:10:691 (1) -
7. 01:27:130 (4) - NC
8. 01:28:774 (5) - shouldnt it end on the red tick?at 01:29:390 -
9. 01:41:513 (2,3,4) - i think if you rotate it like -60° would be much better for gameplay
10. 01:44:801 (2,1) - stack them? 'd be nice
11. 01:55:486 (4,1) - bow?

1. 00:11:102 (7,2) - stack them
2. 00:24:253 (7,1) - here i think you can use this
3. 01:07:404 (2) - NC? cuz the rhythm doesnt start on 01:07:198 (1) - i think
4. 01:15:623 (4,5) - make them parallel?
5. 01:32:061 (4,5) - improve blanket, if you meant that
6. 01:36:787 (7,1) - ^^
7. 01:40:280 (1,3) - ^^
8. 01:42:335 (4) - I believe you're using a constant DS, so fix it and this 01:46:650 (7) -

1. While testing like 4 times, i never could acc this part 00:29:596 (8,9) - They are too away of each other, i know you're using symmetry but your whole map use a very constant DS and that jump make me think it was 1/1 away. Just my opinion
2. 00:22:609 (5,8) - Stack would be nice
3. 00:10:486 (9) - 2 circles? cuz the stong beat is on the tail, you can also ctrl g these 00:10:486 (9,10) - (same for 00:23:637 (8,9) - etc)
4. Your combos are too long imo, every one measure could be better

Milan- wrote:

[Easy]

1. You're using very constants patterns, so why did you change these? >00:44:390 (1,2) - 00:57:541 (1,2,3) - since there's no differenceI like to spice it up a little bit to keep people interested.
2. 01:00:828 (4) - NC?Don't like 1 beat combos.
3. 01:12:335 (4) - the current shape looks bad to me. try something like this?
4. Kiai from 01:07:404 - to 01:33:705 - would be nice. Would help your NC pattern change too i thinkDon't agree, I don't think using kiai on this really fits.
5. 01:30:212 (4) - delete whistle?Nah
6. 01:58:363 (1) - you can use this pattern >00:59:185 (3,4) - . The spinner make look the final empy imoI prefer to have spinner as a constant finisher

[Normal]

1. 00:27:952 (1,4) - you could blanket thisWell it is kinda blanked already.
2. 00:34:527 (1,2,3) - here you can try some different easier rhythm, maybe likethis or this?Don't agree with any of those two as they would sound worse, I use stacks here to force people to notice the different rhythm.
3. 00:47:678 (1) - rotate it around 45° for better flowQuite frankly I think the flow is excellent here and making it into a circle would just make it less interesting.
   
4. 01:00:828 (5) - nc?Same as on easy
5. 01:41:513 (2,3,4) - i think if you rotate it like -60° would be much better for gameplayDon't agree, right now the pattern make the player move in a neat loop like this http://puu.sh/c7XbH/76fbb41967.jpg If I change it It changes into a pointy turn in the middle of it.
6. 01:44:801 (2,1) - stack them? 'd be niceIt's not noticble at all in game that they are not stacked and if I stack them the distance snap is inconsistent.

[Hard]

1. 00:24:253 (7,1) - here i think you can use this
2. 01:07:404 (2) - NC? cuz the rhythm doesnt start on 01:07:198 (1) - i thinkDon't really like one beat combos and It isn't that noticble.

[Insane]

1. 00:22:609 (5,8) - Stack would be niceI would force patterns to become worse if I do that.
2. Your combos are too long imo, every one measure could be betterI dunno, I want to keep the combos consistent across the map.

there are some missing files according to aimod, but i dunno about sb xd It's a AImod Bug, It doesn't understand animations

Woofle - Major Boss Battle

Neil Watts wrote:

http://puu.sh/c8ozb/34db2b8186.png
Thanks for making me discover this game! Absolutely worth it.

Neil Watts wrote:

[General]
- 01:58:363 (1) - put a new combo on spinnersAs said earlier, intentional.

[Easy]
- 00:13:979 (3) - This circle should be moved 1/4 before in the timeline. But it's an Easy diff, so it can be hard to follow for a beginner... I suggest you to place a slider in 00:13:157 (2) - and finish it in 00:13:979 (3) -I can't hear any thing that's supposed to be 1/4 before. It makes more sense at it is right now.


[Hard]
- 00:19:733 (1) - new combo?Nah, it would be inconsistent with the other combos.



[Skin/Storyboard]
- I think the reverse arrow should be replaced by something more visible. I think the reverse arrow is visible enough, it also fit's the slider ball great.
- 02:01:837 - It'll be really nice if you add some blast sounds. owo I'll add it if I find a good sound effect for it.
- The spinner is really hard to play, with this rotating picture. I think you should put your picture in background (on a spinner bar for example) and make a symmetric spinner circle, i.e. http://puu.sh/c8Ejf/142482f559.png Hmm... I might change it if I can figure out something good for it.
- Try to merge "teamlilac_madeit.ogg" and "victory_music.ogg" in an "applause.wav" (to play it when the score screen shows)I rather have those victory sounds for the SB ending instead, I tested a while back having it as an applause but it didn't feel right.

1. You are missing quite a few elements and the skin seems to need some work as well

1. For the countdown, the numbers 1 and 2 are being obscured but the hp bar and the score counter, is this intentional? If it is, I highly suggest you find a different place for it, because it seems a bit odd.

1. 00:34:527 (1) - The soft finish addition on the repeat here doesn't really fit well and stands out a lot. Try a different hitsound here maybe? I think just a drum hitnormal works well
2. 00:40:280 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved here a little, use 1's approach circle to help you with this. By fixing the blanket, you will continue to maintain consistent spacing
3. 00:47:678 (1) - Same soft finish addition thingy as earlier
4. 00:53:431 (4,1) - Same blanket suggestion as earlier
5. 01:12:335 (4) - Same soft finish addition thing
6. 01:25:486 (4) - ^
7. 01:25:486 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved slightly, use 1's approach circle to help you with this
8. 01:39:459 (4,1) - ^
9. 01:52:609 (4,1) - ^
10. 01:56:719 (1) - I would definitely recommend relocating this slider to somewhere lower on the map. The approach circle intrudes on the hp bar which can serve as a distraction to lower level players

1. 00:11:513 (1) - This goes pretty far out of the grid, to keep it safe and to prevent any out of playing area complaints I would suggest you move it closer inward
2. 00:23:020 (4,1) - I know what you are trying to go for here, but in my opinion it doesn't accurately present the rhythm and could in turn be a bit confusing. I feel like there should be a circle where 1 starts and a slider on 00:24:664 -. This creates a rhythm that follows more closely to the music
3. 00:30:212 (5,1) - Same thing here. A circle before and a slider after sounds and plays way better
4. 01:07:404 (1) - This starts out with a sort of weird curve on the inside, I am sure you can smoothen this out a little

1. 00:24:253 (7,1) - This rhythm could be improved in a similar fashion to the ones I pointed out in the normal. Try something like this, it will also maintain consistency with your future rhythms
   
2. 00:31:034 (1) - Same thing as in the normal. A circle followed by a slider works superbly!
3. 00:41:102 (1) - Haha, this was pretty cool
4. 01:09:870 (9,10) - Having similar hitsounds to 01:09:253 (6,7) - creates nice consistency and adds good emphasis on this part
5. 01:25:486 (3) - I think just a regular straight slider will work out better for you here. The curves aren't significant enough to provide any extra gameplay mechanics so having it straight will provide for more cleanliness

1. I think OD 7.5 (maybe even 8) would be nice here, the BPM is kinda low and the way you have your patterns set up are grounds for a lot of note locking.

1. 01:13:774 (1) - No NC
2. 01:13:979 (3) - NC
3. 01:20:349 (1) - No NC
4. 01:20:554 (3) - NC
5. 01:26:924 (1) - No NC
6. 01:27:130 (3) - NC
7. 01:33:500 (1) - No NC
8. 01:33:705 (3) - NC

1. 00:14:698 (13) - I'd either move this to x=216 y=272
   or
   00:14:801 (1) - move this to x=200 y=304
   The way it is now the curve of the notes into the slider feels funny to me
2. 00:18:500 (2,4) - I'd ctrl+G these to make it so the sliders alternate which side they start on, just personal preference for me
3. 00:27:130 (9) - maybe move this some so it isn't so close to 00:26:308 (7) - or you might be able to wrap them around each other somehow
4. 00:27:849 (13) - I'd move this to x=240 y=48 and 00:27:952 (1) - to x=208 y=48 It feels like it'd flow/ look a little better to me (you'd have to repostion 00:28:363 (2) - too)
5. 00:49:630 (8) - I'm not entirely sure this is mapped to something, maybe move it to 00:49:733 - and if it is mapped to something it feels odd to skip the white tick when it has such a strong beat
6. 00:56:924 (9,10,11) - I wouldn't stack these cause you've been using the triples to lead into sliders the whole song, so it feels kinda out of place, since the song sounds the same as all the other times you used them to lead into sliders
7. 01:15:520 (6) - I'd move this to x=472 y=152 cause it leads into the slider better imo
8. 01:35:349 (9) - I'd move this to x=376 y=328 cause it'd flow better to me
9. 01:48:808 (8) - Same thing as before about it feeling oddly timed
10. 01:56:102 (10,11,12) - I'd use it as a lead in again
11. 01:58:363 (1) - idk what this spinner is too, you could map the rest of the song and then put the spinner 02:06:582 - here imo

Xgor wrote:

Didn't do the new combo mods. I always try to use NC when a new part of the main melody starts, If you listen closely the main melody follows new combo placement.

That is also the case with 00:49:630 (8) and 01:48:808 (8). It's 3/4 distance between beats but that's what makes sense to the song, not everything is even in a song.

A lot of the visual things put things in a line, so I changed them instead keeping the curves I had to be more obvious.

I'm not sure what moving 01:15:520 (6) to x=472 y=152 because it looks wrong.... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2137318

The only thing I did was I unstacked the beats.