Kon Natsumi - Niji no Kakera [Taiko] · forum

☞ all kiais should be stopped on 01:18:804 - ; 02:24:259 - ; 03:55:168 - . i don't get any reasons for your current kiai stops now. please explain this one if you have your own reasons, but it's really clear that the kiais should stop on 01:18:804 - ; 02:24:259 - ; 03:55:168 -

☞ Kantan has a solid pattern actually, nothing problem for this one~ but we should simplify a bit your kantan because of the Spread diff. Kantan(302) <--170--> Futsuu(472) <---- 263 -----> Muzukashii(735) <---- 260 -----> Oni(985). you don't need to increase your Futsuu, because it will the spread diff between the 3harder diffs a bit bad. later in the Notes box, i am going to reduce some of your notes. don't need to worry, it's not hard and will not destroy your Kantan

• delete 00:19:713 - and 00:20:168 - . i delete these notes to make a 3/1 break there and also to make a 2/1 triplet pattern like you did on 00:13:350 - ~ 00:15:168 -

• remove this one 00:23:804 - and change 00:24:259 - to be kat. i deleted a note on 00:23:804 - to avoid that 1/1 triplet which you used too many. and also deleting a note there would give a little break for the Kantan players after the finisher comes out on 00:22:441 - . Finisher is a bit hard for Kantan players, so having more breaks or less notes will help Kantan players a lot to prepare theirself to another patterns/notes

• try to move 00:27:441 - to 00:29:259 - . a note on 00:29:259 - will emphasize the drum sound and also emphasize 00:29:713 - perfectly too

• not too important to follow the background sound with a finisher on 00:33:350 - . you can remove it to reduce the usage of the finishers and you can just keep one of finisher on 00:34:941 -

• delete this one 00:36:532 - . hm i know that you want to emphasize a next note on 00:36:986 - . but for having a break there would be better (the break will be longer than another breaks) so Kantan players will be more relax and also prepare theirself for next pattern for the next in the new part

• no no finishers on 00:42:213 - and 00:43:123 - . these finishers will just increase the difficulty for a Kantan difficulty and make the Kantan players confused. Kantan players aren't used to play with finishers/big notes, but it doesn't mean that we can't give any finishers. we can use it but we should manage too where it should be put. and now the problem is the finishers come out on the 1/2 strikes (the red strikes) which are a bit confusing for the Kantan players for playing with a red sections or 1/2 strikes. we can just use a normal note, so it can help the Kantan players face the notes there which are in the 1/2 strikes
a finisher on 00:44:259 - is enough already. the previous notes don't need any finishers to emphasize the background sounds

• this kind of pattern is really confusing for a Kantan one 01:03:123 - . it suddenly follows the vocal&bass there. the basic pattern in the kiai is using a 1/1 pattern, but you suddenly use a 1/2 one to emphasize the vocal and bass there. basically it's a nice idea and i agree if you use for another diff, not for Kantan. okay, try to move it to 01:03:350 -
anyway i allow a usage of 1/2 on 01:17:668 - , because it has enough break after and before the 1/2 comes out. so it's acceptable

• awh what a confusing one on 01:25:395 - . i know that you wanna to follow the pizzicato sound there, and it fits perfectly too. but consider for the Kantan one. if you want to make something creation on some additional notes, consider for the Kantan players. it might be easy for us, but not for all Kantan players to face this 1/2 pattern in the red strikes. okay, you can just delete it and just keep one 1/2 on 01:25:850 -

• delete too 01:29:259 - , same like the previous mods above, to make a break after the finisher comes out. and also change 01:29:713 - to be kat

• same here, delete this one 01:32:895 -

• this kind of pattern is a bit confusing, from 01:36:077 - ~ 01:38:804 - . what sounds that you follow? or maybe you just want to follow the basic pattern in the 1/1 and ignore all sounds? actually it's okay, but i think it would be better to use a similar pattern like 00:30:623 - ~ 00:33:350 -

• 01:47:668 - and 01:48:577 - don't need finishers. i have explained this in the previous mods above too

• remove finisher on 01:53:350 - . not a good idea to emphasize the background sound too much. just leave one finisher only on 01:54:941 -

• same here 02:08:577 - . move to 02:08:804 -

• delete this one 02:27:441 - and change 02:26:986 - to be don. it's not too important to emphasize the string sound on 02:27:441 - . it just increases your pattern because of 1/1 triplets

• just delete this one 02:29:259 - , so the Kantan players can prepare theirself for the next pattern, and your next pattern is finisher+1/2 note which is different with your another patterns. so the player should be prepare for this different one

• remove finisher on 02:40:623 - . it emphasizes the background sound too much. just leave one on 02:42:213 -

• same like 02:29:259 - . remove 02:43:804 -

• remove a finisher too on 02:51:532 - , it just needs one on 02:53:123 -

• remove this one 02:56:532 - since this is just an additional note and doesn't follow any particular sounds

• a finisher missing on 02:58:804 - ? just add it to make it consistent with 03:02:441 - ; 03:06:077 -

• 03:18:577 - and 03:19:486 - don't need finishers. they emphasize the background sounds too much

• no no for following a bell on 03:59:486 - . it just makes a confusing pattern suddenly. move it to 03:59:713 -

• remove this one 04:07:441 - , not too important for following all the instruments there and it's much better for having breaks than it

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Futsuu]

☞ all kiais should be stopped on 01:18:804 - ; 02:24:259 - ; 03:55:168 - . i don't get any reasons for your current kiai stops now. please explain this one if you have your own reasons, but it's really clear that the kiais should stop on 01:18:804 - ; 02:24:259 - ; 03:55:168 -

☞ okay!

• a kat on 00:25:623 - , so avoid that similar 1/2 triplet which is ooo like 00:23:804 - and 00:27:441 -

• this kind of pattern is a bit confusing since your previous pattern is just 1/1 on 00:28:577 - ; 00:29:032 - . this is not a must, but it would be better to make these notes which the similar pattern like your previous pattern

• delete this one 00:42:895 - , it emphasizes too much with a note. it's really enough with a finisher on 00:43:123 -

• try to delete this one 00:59:259 - , to keep the consistency of breaks like 00:51:986 - ; 00:55:623 - and 01:02:895 -

• reverse 01:14:486 - and 01:14:713 - , a kat would be better to emphasize a vocal on 01:14:713 -

• delete this too 02:04:713 -

• here, just delete 02:28:350 - . well yah, to give a little break after the finisher comes out on 02:27:895 -

• a missing finisher on 02:58:804 -

• remove the finisher on 03:41:532 - since it doesn't follow anysound and just an additional sound

• remove 03:50:168 - too

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Muzukashii]

☞ all kiais should be stopped on 01:18:804 - ; 02:24:259 - ; 03:55:168 - . i don't get any reasons for your current kiai stops now. please explain this one if you have your own reasons, but it's really clear that the kiais should stop on 01:18:804 - ; 02:24:259 - ; 03:55:168 -

☞ basically this Muzukashii is nice, but the some of pattern is too dense and less breaks (more than 1/2 breaks). it will make the spread diff between Futsuu~Muzukashii~Oni become a bit bad since Futsuu has less patterns+many breaks and Muzukashii looks like Oni though Muzukashii is easier. okay, it's not too hard, i am going to give some breaks and simplify muzukashii pattern a bit and also don't need to worry since i will not destroy your patterns

• reverse 00:19:259 (38,39) - for the pattern?

• remove this please 00:26:532 - . first, the vocal doesn't come out and it's a perfect spot for the break and the second to make a little break. this is the most important. see your Futsuu and Oni. Futsuu contains many breaks and Oni already has dense notes. and this Muzu which is the transition between Futsuu and Oni already has full pattern (even though it's easy, but it just has a less break) ~~ah sorry i am lazy to post the screenshots for the Futsuu, Muzukashii and Oni patterns~~. so basically the base reason i deleted 00:26:532 - to give a little break to make a better spread between Futsuu~Muzu~Oni

• delete this one 00:35:850 - . at least to give a break with some 1/1 pattern there and with some 1/2 breaks to avoid that many notes with 1/2

• delete this too 00:47:668 - since it's just an additional note

• and also delete 00:48:577 - and 00:48:691 - . they will just make a similar pattern like Oni (even though the triplet is different, but the basic pattern is same)

• delete this one too 00:54:941 -

• 00:58:577 - ^ same. i know you wanna to follow the vocals, but consider for the dense patterns there

• 01:02:213 - ^

• 01:05:850 - ^

• 01:09:486 - ^

• 01:13:123 - ^

• 01:35:850 - ^

• 01:39:032 - ^ and also a missing finisher on 01:38:804 -

• delete 01:53:123 -

• the 2nd and 3rd kiai are same like the 1st kiai that i modded. you can change it by yourself

so i leave those parts to you

• delete this 02:44:032 - . i know that you want to follow the vocals there, but consider for adding a little break to avoid that long 1/2 patterns

• delete this one 03:06:986 -

• 03:21:304 - ^

• 03:24:941 - ^

• no no, delete this please 03:42:213 - . to give a little break between two patterns there

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Oni]

☞ all kiais should be stopped on 01:18:804 - ; 02:24:259 - ; 03:55:168 - . i don't get any reasons for your current kiai stops now. please explain this one if you have your own reasons, but it's really clear that the kiais should stop on 01:18:804 - ; 02:24:259 - ; 03:55:168 -

☞ the 2nd and 3rd kiai have dense notes. well, actually it's not a problem, but we need to make some deletions there. remember for the spread diff again (just a simple deletions for break, don't need to worry :p)