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alan - Over the clouds -BURST mix-

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Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Xiaolin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, March 28, 2015 at 11:50:14 AM

Artist: alan
Title: Over the clouds -BURST mix-
Source: GOD EATER BURST
Tags: ゴッドイーター バース gods opening op Kibbleru dubstep electro
BPM: 137
Filesize: 16052kb
Play Time: 01:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.24 stars, 109 notes)
  2. Kibbleru's Hard (2.54 stars, 210 notes)
  3. Normal (1.7 stars, 156 notes)
Download: alan - Over the clouds -BURST mix-
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alan - Over the clouds -BURST mix-
3rd map for rank ~ ^・ω・^ And third ranked map
Hope you enjoy it ~ <3
Thanks apple for the bubble and re-bubble
And thanks Cel for the rank ~~
Redownload if you download it before 9/3/2015 new BG added, and new title
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Last edited by Xiaolin , edited 48 times in total.
Marcousen
12 posts
Joined October 2013
Marcousen
Hellu! M4M?

[General]

Offset should be 5190

So you have alot to fix in your map. Ctrl+a and resnap everything to be sure and also fix sliders thats off beat (too short after offset change)

My modding is based on 5190 offset, resnapped

[Insane]

Gonna give you optional ways to improve your map, trying not to disturb your style but these changes could make the map more enjoyable :)

00:05:846 (2,3,4) - Stack these, looks and feels better

00:08:474 (3,4) - Just swap these two's places in the timeline and it gives a much better flow

00:09:789 (2,3,4) - Again, stack

00:14:823 (1,2) - Ok here's an idea for that particular sound https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1874127

00:15:699 (3) - Map this sound if you fixed above^. Maybe with a third 1/2 slider (in which case you would remove 00:15:918 (3) - ofc)

00:23:582 (3,4) - Stack

01:22:487 (3,4) - ^



Well enough for now, gonna eat but I will return to mod the other diffs soon! bye bye
Marcousen
12 posts
Joined October 2013
Marcousen
Ok. Im back. Fed and happy.

[Easy]

Nothing noticeable, good map

[Normal]

01:05:408 (2) - Maybe delete this? Dunno, fits the beat better imo. Overall good map

[Hard]

Ok even without changing the offset, most of the sliders are not snapped. Is this intentional? Should be fixed either way, can't find any reason for it
Exampel: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1874696

[Insane]

00:26:867 (1) - ctrl+g? Also move it up a little, its outside the map. I like the way it's positioned, almost touching this 00:26:429 (3) - so don't change that part

01:10:224 (2) - Maybe change this part into a 3 stack? Stacks are fun and well placed stacks helps the map get less repetetive

01:07:597 (1) - stack with 01:07:378 (7)

01:14:604 (1,2,3) - really optional stack

01:22:487 (3) - stack

01:40:662 (2) - ^

That's about it from me! Sorry for being a stack nazi :I
Miramono
103 posts
Joined September 2013
Miramono
Hi! from modding queue...

Mod
[Easy]
00:22:705 (1) - move x:280 y:180
01:35:844 (1) - move x:340 y:132
01:40:662 (2) - move x:468 y:264

[Normal]
No comment

[Kibbleru's Hard]
01:08:692 (2) - ctrl + G
01:35:407 (4) - ctrl + G

NOTE: Please check your AiMod

That's all :D Hope I was Helpful
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Xiaolin

Miramono wrote:

Hi! from modding queue...

Mod
[Easy]
00:22:705 (1) - move x:280 y:180 Nah, I like it like this ~
01:35:844 (1) - move x:340 y:132 Fixed ~
01:40:662 (2) - move x:468 y:264 Nope ~

[Normal]
No comment

That's all :D Hope I was Helpful
Fixed everything in the AiMod for hard ~ :3

Thanks for modding ~ !
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,844 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
it seems like some of my timing points got unsnapped which resulted in the unsnapped sliders...

here is what is should be like

other than that, no changes

SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Over the clouds - BURST mix -.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 45918
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 17451
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Over the clouds - BURST mix -
TitleUnicode:Over the clouds - BURST mix -
Artist:alan
ArtistUnicode:alan
Creator:Lapis Aoki
Version:Kibbleru's Hard
Source:ゴッドイーター バースト
Tags:god eater 2 Kibbleru dubstep electro
BeatmapID:468752
BeatmapSetID:197651

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"sup.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
-67,437.956204379562,4,2,2,60,1,0
33217,-142.857142857143,4,2,2,50,0,0
40224,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,55,0,0
41100,-125,4,2,2,60,0,0
41976,-117.647058823529,4,2,2,65,0,0
42852,-111.111111111111,4,2,2,70,0,0
47232,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
60151,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
61246,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
74604,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
75261,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
85772,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
89276,-181.818181818182,4,2,2,70,0,0
92779,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 29,23,136
Combo2 : 177,139,112
Combo3 : 197,90,90
Combo4 : 58,197,66
Combo5 : 255,192,0
Combo6 : 255,252,113

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80,140,67816,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,140,67925,2,0,L|68:184,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,268,68254,6,0,L|168:272,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,248,68692,2,0,P|245:287|230:324,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,188,69130,2,0,B|176:152|176:152|180:108,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,36,69568,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,36,69677,2,0,L|272:40,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,96,70005,6,0,P|396:88|464:84,2,120,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,156,70881,2,0,P|268:200|272:240,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,264,71210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,264,71319,2,0,L|212:264,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,292,71757,6,0,B|128:236|128:236|132:128,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,68,72414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,112,72633,2,0,L|352:116,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,88,72962,2,0,L|380:184,1,80
396,208,73290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,296,73509,6,0,P|441:284|478:239,2,120,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,247,74385,2,0,B|280:252|280:252|228:248,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,252,74823,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,252,74932,2,0,L|148:204,1,40
116,128,75261,6,0,B|144:120|144:120|194:122,1,80,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,152,75589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,152,75699,2,0,L|316:144,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,108,76137,2,0,L|384:200,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,276,76575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,276,76684,2,0,L|340:272,1,40
268,304,77013,6,0,P|208:296|136:296,2,120,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,216,77889,2,0,P|268:152|272:124,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,100,78217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,100,78327,2,0,B|260:112|260:112|214:109,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,92,78765,6,0,P|96:60|16:136,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,192,79422,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,180,79641,2,0,P|196:180|228:188,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,220,79969,2,0,L|244:140,1,80
272,108,80297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,164,80516,6,0,L|348:288,2,120,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,108,81392,1,0,1:0:0:0:
212,172,81611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,136,81830,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,136,81940,2,0,L|88:140,1,40
96,228,82268,6,0,B|144:216|144:216|253:226,1,160,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,288,82925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,240,83144,2,0,L|388:152,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,72,83582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,72,83692,2,0,L|336:80,1,40
267,115,84020,6,0,P|262:57|294:8,2,120,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,200,84896,2,0,P|256:196|216:196,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,228,85224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,228,85334,2,0,L|176:140,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,112,85772,6,0,L|260:116,2,160,12|8|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
44,184,86867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,184,86976,2,0,P|47:223|48:263,1,80
32,304,87305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,320,87524,6,0,P|156:364|213:357,2,120,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,236,88400,1,0,1:0:0:0:
236,252,88619,2,0,L|324:248,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,176,89276,6,0,L|204:116,1,44.0000013427735,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,128,89714,2,0,L|128:72,1,44.0000013427735,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,32,90151,6,0,L|244:20,1,44.0000013427735,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,84,90589,2,0,L|340:84,1,44.0000013427735,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,112,91027,6,0,L|400:164,1,44.0000013427735,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,168,91465,2,0,L|484:224,1,44.0000013427735,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,240,91903,6,0,L|352:260,1,44.0000013427735,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,340,92341,2,0,L|312:332,1,44.0000013427735,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,336,92779,6,0,L|240:248,1,80,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,184,93217,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,184,93436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,140,93655,2,0,L|136:144,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,112,93984,2,0,P|112:160|104:200,1,80
72,220,94312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,94531,6,0,L|208:288,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,240,94969,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,240,95188,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,208,95407,2,0,L|359:287,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,132,95845,2,0,L|404:132,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,44,96283,6,0,B|344:52|344:52|232:44,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,20,96940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,80,97159,1,0,1:0:0:0:
140,148,97378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,148,97487,2,0,B|140:180|140:180|130:227,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,268,97816,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,316,98035,6,0,L|240:256,2,53.3333333333333,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,292,98473,2,0,L|264:224,2,53.3333333333333,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,240,98911,2,0,L|312:128,1,106.666666666667,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,80,99349,2,0,B|324:88|324:88|366:82,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,48,99787,6,0,P|152:48|120:52,1,80,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,96,100224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,164,100443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,236,100662,2,0,L|64:324,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,356,100991,2,0,L|136:348,1,80
160,324,101319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,244,101538,6,0,P|248:280|284:280,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,196,101976,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,196,102195,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,200,102414,2,0,L|360:300,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,248,102852,2,0,L|436:156,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,100,103290,6,0,P|328:104|224:100,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,64,103947,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,124,104166,2,0,P|88:168|84:208,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,240,104495,2,0,L|140:232,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,252,104823,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,248,105042,6,0,L|256:312,2,53.3333333333333,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,196,105480,2,0,L|288:140,2,53.3333333333333,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,212,105918,2,0,L|460:212,1,106.666666666667,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,252,106356,2,0,L|500:148,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,36,106794,6,0,L|432:116,1,80,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,96,107670,6,0,L|348:180,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Xiaolin
Updated ~
Starfy
1,046 posts
Joined November 2012
Starfy
HI Aoki-san \o
Can I make a Insane GD in this map? :3
I want to map this song for my friend -> https://osu.ppy.sh/u/1967296
His name also called Over the clouds
So I'm interested to make this song ><
Can I?
If u don't like, you just ignore me is ok ><
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Xiaolin
Hmm, if you really want to map it so badly, then go ahead ~ :3
Since your mapping skills are good I'll let you make an diff ~ >w<
Thanks ~ :3
Starfy
1,046 posts
Joined November 2012
Starfy
Thanks :3
Today start my work xD
Starfy
1,046 posts
Joined November 2012
Starfy
Starfy's Insane Finished
Hope You Like It :3
http://puu.sh/aKXl7/d87914cd06.zip
Pho
1,785 posts
Joined November 2013
Pho
Mod from modding queue~

[Easy]
01:30:589 (2,3,4,5,1) - this is too clustered, map this more spacious
01:39:786 (1,2) - kind of big overlap in comparison to the others, reduce OR
just avoid overlaps in easy maps in general.

[Kibbleru's Hard]
00:54:130 (5) - add circle here.

[Insane]
00:24:458 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream doesn't fit in to the music
00:31:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:40:881 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - better go with this, the beats are set strangely http://puu.sh/aLkPn/988bb9168b.jpg
01:17:670 (4,5,1) - straight up, then straight down, this is not good flow
01:35:407 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - doesn't fit the music
01:41:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:44:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:45:863 (1,2,3) - something's off with this whole combo, fix

Decent song, doesn't map, sadly this is not really my case. :(
THe Insane map is okay as it is, but it still doesn't get the full potential out of this song (you don't go with the beats in the background enough). You should think about making another one or fixing this one up.
Anyway, good luck with this map! :)

Greetings,
paseli
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Xiaolin
Well update tomorrow and ofc add a new diff ~
Mortem
690 posts
Joined July 2013
Mortem
Hi, as requested.

EASY
00:30:589 (2) - Put it like this.
SPOILER
Check AIMod. (in every diff)

I looked at your other diffs and they seems fine to me.
I know, it's a poor mod, but as I said, i didn't find any mistakes.
Hope that helps
if not, then sorry.
Good Luck!
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Xiaolin

paseli wrote:

Mod from modding queue~

[Easy]
01:30:589 (2,3,4,5,1) - this is too clustered, map this more spacious Remapped ~
01:39:786 (1,2) - kind of big overlap in comparison to the others, reduce OR
just avoid overlaps in easy maps in general. I think its fine like this, maybe if another modder said the same thing, I might change ~

[Insane]
00:24:458 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream doesn't fit in to the music I should have listened to cloud in the first place ;w; I'm such an baka, changed ~
00:31:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
00:40:881 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - better go with this, the beats are set strangely http://puu.sh/aLkPn/988bb9168b.jpg I like the way it is ~
01:17:670 (4,5,1) - straight up, then straight down, this is not good flow Will try to fix that ~
01:35:407 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - doesn't fit the music Changed to 1/3
01:41:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
01:44:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ ^
01:45:863 (1,2,3) - something's off with this whole combo, fix Fixed ~

Decent song, doesn't map, sadly this is not really my case. :(
THe Insane map is okay as it is, but it still doesn't get the full potential out of this song (you don't go with the beats in the background enough). You should think about making another one or fixing this one up.
Anyway, good luck with this map! :)

Greetings,
paseli
Thanks for the mod o3o

Pjecoo wrote:

Hi, as requested.

EASY
00:30:589 (2) - Put it like this.
SPOILER
Check AIMod. (in every diff)

I looked at your other diffs and they seems fine to me.
I know, it's a poor mod, but as I said, i didn't find any mistakes.
Hope that helps
if not, then sorry.
Good Luck![/color]
Thanks for modding .w.
Venellys
154 posts
Joined March 2013
Venellys
You became mutual with me <33 a free mutual mod for you ^^
2 KUDO MAGIC!!

[Easy]
  • 00:13:947 (3) - make V smooth or remove second point for straight to smooth slider
    00:22:706 (1,2) - look overlap, make blanket
    00:34:093 (2,3,4) - flow break, make blanket or sym
    01:23:582 (3,1) - overlap
    01:30:589 (2,1) - stack perfectly
    01:39:786 (1,2) - same like 00:22:706 (1,2) -
    01:45:480 (3,1) - stack perfectly
    01:46:794 (1,1) - remove one of new combo, hp drain is too much for gameplay
[Normal]
  • 00:05:188 (1) - smooth like 00:06:940 (4) - , and you have sym
    00:13:509 (2,4) - stack perfectly
    00:17:013 (2,4) - ^
    00:26:648 (1,2,3) - remake as sym or blanket, or same as you make here 01:02:998 (1,2,3) -
    00:33:655 (1,2) - make full blanket
    00:48:984 (1,2) - ^
    00:57:743 (1,2,3,4,1) - make star?
i like the song and you mapping :) but i still think veyron's mapping is better o.o
make sure you bubble this map :D :D :D GL
Xiaolin
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Topic Starter
Xiaolin

VeeLaHee104 wrote:

You became mutual with me <33 a free mutual mod for you ^^ aaaaaaa thank you ~ >~< You're a nice person ~ ;w;
2 KUDO MAGIC!!

[Easy]
  • 00:13:947 (3) - make V smooth or remove second point for straight to smooth slider Fixed
    00:22:706 (1,2) - look overlap, make blanket Another person sayed it, fixed
    00:34:093 (2,3,4) - flow break, make blanket or sym But I like this flow ;w;
    01:23:582 (3,1) - overlap Lol, I remapped some parts cause of it ~ xD
    01:30:589 (2,1) - stack perfectly Well I remapped some parts as I said
    01:39:786 (1,2) - same like 00:22:706 (1,2) - Nah, I like the way it is
    01:45:480 (3,1) - stack perfectly I don't like stack
    01:46:794 (1,1) - remove one of new combo, hp drain is too much for gameplay Fixed
[Normal]
  • 00:05:188 (1) - smooth like 00:06:940 (4) - , and you have sym Fixed
    00:13:509 (2,4) - stack perfectly Fixed
    00:17:013 (2,4) - ^ ^
    00:26:648 (1,2,3) - remake as sym or blanket, or same as you make here 01:02:998 (1,2,3) - Fixed
    00:33:655 (1,2) - make full blanket Fixed
    00:48:984 (1,2) - ^ ^
    00:57:743 (1,2,3,4,1) - make star? I think star will be hard
i like the song and you mapping :) but i still think veyron's mapping is better o.o
make sure you bubble this map :D :D :D GL IT WILL
Thanks for the useful mod ~ ;w; <33
kakifly
940 posts
Joined April 2014
kakifly
m4m ^o^ ~ nice song :o

General

- I'm not sure if the current offset is correct; it should be either 808 or 1027 ?? but im not very good at offsets so double check

Easy

- Just a personal preference but i prefer if the AR and OD were balanced a bit rather than OD being higher than AR
- 00:25:772 maybe add a note here?
- 00:33:217 (1) - try something like this? because there is a slight pause yet you have a slider there which feels unnatural
SPOILER

- 00:36:721 (1,2) - ^
- 00:38:911 (3,4) - maybe make 3 into a 2/1 slider and add a circle on a downbeat; since you end 4 slider on an important beat
- 00:50:735 (1) - ctrl + j? make adjustments to 00:52:925 (2) - if you do this
- 00:59:057 (2,3) - try something like this? i think it follows the music better
SPOILER
- 01:02:998 (3) - imo the slider shape doesnt match the music
- 01:22:268 (1,2,3) - maybe try something like this because you start 01:23:582 (3) - on a really faint beat yet end it on a strong one which is the complete opposite of what should be happening so i think this may suit the music better
SPOILER
- 01:27:086 (3) - its repeat is on a strong beat; i suggest changing the rhythm a bit so a note starts on the downbeat
- 01:29:714 (1) - lower the volume here and raise it up again at 01:32:779 (1) - also try a blank slider slide? here you go http://puu.sh/bjTu3/5e0bd2c6b2.wav
- 01:38:035 (4) - make sure the red square thing (idk what its called) lines up with the slider tick so the curve of the slider is on beat.. if that makes any sense

Normal

-Lower HP,AR,and OD by 1 or so; they are very high
- 00:08:254 (5) - this repeat slider is 1/3 not 1/4 snap divisor
- 00:11:757 (4) - im not sure if a repeat slider suits this part of the music..?
- 00:15:261 (4) - same as first suggestion
- 00:18:765 (4) - same as second
- 00:19:641 (1) - nazi blanket; tail up an axis for perfect blanket ;P
- 00:23:582 (4) - again nazi; blankets on the approach circle should look like this
SPOILER
- 00:24:458 (1) - 1/3 sd, but for this one since the 1/3 dubstep thing goes on and you only mapped the first 3 'sounds' i suggest just a slider here
- 00:27:524 (3,1) - fix blanket
- 00:33:655 (1,2) - these would look a lot more organized if blanketed; also you ended 2 slider on an important down beat so...
- 00:34:531 (2,4) - should be a copy of each other; right now its a bit messy
- 00:49:860 (2) - should start at 00:49:641 (2) - , i know its a bit inconsistent but i think it really follows the music and is fun to play
- 00:52:925 (1) - start at 00:52:706 (1) - same reason ^
- 00:59:057 (4) - why dont you make this a 1/2 slider? theres a little music after it
- 01:00:370 (3,1) - nazi blanket! recheck it ~
- 01:10:443 (2,3) - ^
- 01:29:276 (1) - same thing as easy
- 01:33:655 (3,1) - blanket
- 01:38:473 (1) - 1/3 sd
- 01:46:356 (3,1) - try something like this? i think it follows the music better
SPOILER
also 01:47:670 (1) - remove nc 01:46:794 (4) - add nc

Kibbleru's Hard

AR 7.5? this song is kind of slow so i think if you lowered it a bit to 7 it'd feel better to play
- 00:06:064 (3,4) - try having a circle on the blue tick (where 4 slider is currently) and start the 4 slider at 00:06:502 (5) - since you are missing a faint beat at 00:06:721 (5) - and another beat at 00:06:502 (5) - of which this rhythm would emphasize better
- 00:07:268 add circle
- 00:12:414 (2,3) - not perfectly stacked; move 3 to x104 y120
- 00:14:276 (2) - add circle
- 00:16:137 (2,3) - not perfectly stacked, -1 on x and y axis
- 00:29:714 (1) - just make this a straight slider i dont see why it has to curve a tiny bit and a straight slider seemed more 'neat'
- 00:50:188 (3) - -1 on x axis for perfect stack
- 00:57:743 (1) - ..i dont understand this slider Dx the shape is very random imo


thats all ~hope that helped ad good luck with your beatmap ! have a star since this song is awesome *0*
do you accept gd on this song.. xD
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Xiaolin

kakifly wrote:

m4m ^o^ ~ nice song :o

General

- I'm not sure if the current offset is correct; it should be either 808 or 1027 ?? but im not very good at offsets so double check

Easy

- Just a personal preference but i prefer if the AR and OD were balanced a bit rather than OD being higher than AR
- 00:25:772 maybe add a note here? Nah, I don't like adding many notes
- 00:33:217 (1) - try something like this? because there is a slight pause yet you have a slider there which feels unnatural No change
SPOILER

- 00:36:721 (1,2) - ^ ^
- 00:38:911 (3,4) - maybe make 3 into a 2/1 slider and add a circle on a downbeat; since you end 4 slider on an important beat No change
- 00:50:735 (1) - ctrl + j? make adjustments to 00:52:925 (2) - if you do this it'll just break the flow and ds ~ :<
- 00:59:057 (2,3) - try something like this? i think it follows the music better Fixed
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- 01:02:998 (3) - imo the slider shape doesnt match the music Changed
- 01:22:268 (1,2,3) - maybe try something like this because you start 01:23:582 (3) - on a really faint beat yet end it on a strong one which is the complete opposite of what should be happening so i think this may suit the music better Did something familiar to it
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- 01:27:086 (3) - its repeat is on a strong beat; i suggest changing the rhythm a bit so a note starts on the downbeat I like the way it is
- 01:29:714 (1) - lower the volume here and raise it up again at 01:32:779 (1) - also try a blank slider slide? here you go I like the way it is, also, I don't really like changing the volume to a low volume ~ :< http://puu.sh/bjTu3/5e0bd2c6b2.wav
- 01:38:035 (4) - make sure the red square thing (idk what its called) lines up with the slider tick so the curve of the slider is on beat.. if that makes any sense I didn't really understand o-o

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-Lower HP,AR,and OD by 1 or so; they are very high
- 00:08:254 (5) - this repeat slider is 1/3 not 1/4 snap divisor I know that, i just wanted to make it like this >>
- 00:11:757 (4) - im not sure if a repeat slider suits this part of the music..? Changed it to a slider
- 00:15:261 (4) - same as first suggestion -
- 00:18:765 (4) - same as second -
- 00:19:641 (1) - nazi blanket; tail up an axis for perfect blanket ;P The blanket seems fine to me o-o
- 00:23:582 (4) - again nazi; blankets on the approach circle should look like this I tryed to make it like this, but i couldn't, i;m using ds
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- 00:24:458 (1) - 1/3 sd, but for this one since the 1/3 dubstep thing goes on and you only mapped the first 3 'sounds' i suggest just a slider here Fixed
- 00:27:524 (3,1) - fix blanket Fixed
- 00:33:655 (1,2) - these would look a lot more organized if blanketed; also you ended 2 slider on an important down beat so... Already, they're blanket
- 00:34:531 (2,4) - should be a copy of each other; right now its a bit messy Fixed
- 00:49:860 (2) - should start at 00:49:641 (2) - , i know its a bit inconsistent but i think it really follows the music and is fun to play no, not really, cause i don't map the vocals in this map ~ :<
- 00:52:925 (1) - start at 00:52:706 (1) - same reason ^ ^
- 00:59:057 (4) - why dont you make this a 1/2 slider? theres a little music after it Like i said, i don't map vocals
- 01:00:370 (3,1) - nazi blanket! recheck it ~Fixed
- 01:10:443 (2,3) - ^ ^
- 01:29:276 (1) - same thing as easy its fine like this
- 01:33:655 (3,1) - blanket Fixed
- 01:38:473 (1) - 1/3 sd nope
- 01:46:356 (3,1) - try something like this? i think it follows the music better
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also 01:47:670 (1) - remove nc 01:46:794 (4) - add nc The thing which you said first didn't fix, but the nc this fixed

thats all ~hope that helped ad good luck with your beatmap ! have a star since this song is awesome *0*
do you accept gd on this song.. xD
Thank you so much for the mod ! :3
The Girls
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The Girls
Hi Nana~ from Nana's Mod Queue


[General]
  1. Dupstep is still a thing? xD That's so 2011. JK, Awesome song actually. I love Alan ^^
  2. I think you should spend some time unifying the hitsounds for this map. You use Soft samplesets, whereas Kibbleru's Hard uses Custom 2 sampleset...something you don't even contain in your Osu! folder. Did some files not get copied? Then Starfy's Insane uses S:C9 and S:C10.
  3. I don't really know what this is 'cause I don't really storyboard, but Starfy's GD has a different WidescreenStoryboard: 1 compared to everyone else's.
  4. Also, you should check with someone about your Kiai scheme. You leave one beat out of Kiai time. And toggling errors come up in AIMod.
[Easy]
  1. 00:24:458 (3) - Clean up blanket.
  2. 00:37:597 (2) - Add Drum Whistle. You forgot this one. (Actually i don't think you should be using Drum Whistles for hitsounds during this entire section. Use Drum Clap. It sounds better.)
  3. 00:40:662 (1, 2, 3, Spinner) - Graduate volume?
  4. 01:47:670 (1) - Why not just put at center of map? Lol... Also, it makes more sense to make it a slider extending to the next 1/2 red tick. Its a two note finish, not one.
[Normal]
  1. 00:09:130 (1) - Maybe stack it? Its fine as it is since the AR is fast enough to clear away any overlay, but you seem to at least be trying to stack later in the music, so I guess stack for consistency.
  2. 00:33:655 (1) - Blanket. Reverse (2) if you need to and then fix the rest of the combo to make DS consistent with changes.
  3. 00:48:984 (1, 2, 3) - I think think you are making correctly to the rhythm of the song. I get you are trying to predominantly map on white and red ticks, but this song calls for blue ticks...they are even emphasized in the music. Try this for a way to incorporate blue ticks into a Normal diff.
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  4. 00:52:487 - ^
  5. 01:02:998 - This needs to remapped to the triplets. ^
  6. 01:06:512 (1) - ^
  7. 01:10:005 - ^
  8. 01:13:509 - ^ I think you get the idea for the rest of the song.
  9. 01:47:670 - (1) Same as Easy. Slider.
[Hard]
  1. Really well done :D I don't have very many qualms pattern-wise. I suggest maybe lowering the AR just a tad, some of the 1/4 hitcircles following the sliders approaching too late for detection. Idk. Probably not a big issue if you play the map a couple of times.
  2. Hitsound sampleset fix as mentioned in General.
  3. 00:24:458 (1, 2) - Rotate the angle of the sliders so that it turns into (3). The slider stream as it is right now feels a little choppy in terms of the turn in each slider.
  4. 01:17:889 (2) - Flatten out. It's too steep as it is.
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  5. 01:29:276 (1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2) - Increment the SV. As it is right now, its choppy and disrupting the flow of the song. Just doesn't feel like much of a build up.
[Insane]
  1. It's well mapped.
  2. 01:42:414 (1) - Bring closer to stream.
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