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Changin' My Life - Smile

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Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
Kerensa
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, 15 December 2009 at 8:43:32 PM

Artist: Changin' My Life
Title: Smile
Source: Fullmoon wo Sagashite
Tags: Searching for a Fullmoon Senbon
BPM: 130
Filesize: 6347kb
Play Time: 01:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.16 stars, 72 notes)
  2. Insane (4.83 stars, 400 notes)
  3. Normal (3.92 stars, 214 notes)
  4. Senbon's Hard (4.59 stars, 340 notes)
Download: Changin' My Life - Smile
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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woooo ~

This beatmap was made for Happy7Satsuki

( last mintue EASY dif ) ORZ

special thanks to:
DoubleDango: Skinning and other crap.
jockeytiyan: FIRST PERSON TO PLAY MAP AFTER I SUBMITTED IT LOLOL
Senbon: difficulty ~

BREAKING NEWS!!!!!!

~ HAISHA CUT HER OWN MP3!!! ~
Last edited by Kerensa , edited 14 times in total.
jockeytiyan
1,269 posts
Joined July 2009
jockeytiyan
D: No posts yet? This is surprising...

Good map, found nothing wrong. The skin and the BG is <3

Star~
Luvdic
2,113 posts
Joined July 2009
Luvdic
Insane:

Lol at this =o
-> 01:24:054 (4) - Object isn't snapped!

And nice difficult lol, only thing i dislike is the huge amount of spinners, so much that i was in the point where i started to spin thinking a spinner is going to come, but never came >_>. Althought of course, you dont have to change it, just my opinion.

Normal:

02:32:038 - Move this timing section later, maybe 1/2th tick later. Im saying this because sometimes you can hear the sound of the spinner at the end... Unless thats what you intended to do
Also the same thing with the excessive amount of spinners in this difficult >_>. But of course, i guess you dont really have to do anything about this :x

And starred =o
DoubleDango
27 posts
Joined October 2009
DoubleDango

jockeytiyan wrote:

D: No posts yet? This is surprising...

Good map, found nothing wrong. The skin and the BG is <3

Star~
I came to claim my kudosu for the skin stuff :D

Here is a star for you haisha_ ^_^
mao130
93 posts
Joined December 2008
mao130
great job think this will be your second rank map :3
DoubleDango
27 posts
Joined October 2009
DoubleDango

mao130 wrote:

great job think this will be your second rank map :3
Third, I think the Coin Laundry going to be second.


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Note that kudosu was approriate by the way, it was for the skinning stuff; she gave it to wrong post lol.
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Overall]
- Add the source 'Fullmoon wo Sagashite' instead of having it in the tags
- Possibly Add the tags full moon searching (English it means 'Searching for a Full moon')

[Normal]
00:24:008 (1) - Remove the kiai from these tiny sections, please. They barely work
01:55:046 (3) - Probably new combo here
01:57:031 (5) - Probably new combo here too
02:37:092 (3) - Kiai starting here would probably be better than where you currently have it. Also, only one line of the chorus is kiai? possibly change it so that more is kiai'd?

A pretty good beatmap. Some hitsounds could be moved around to better effect, but it's good.

[Hard]
This beatmap is a lot cleaner and well made in comparison to [Normal] but even [Normal] is pretty good

A good beatmap, love the spinner ;p Starred
yaya
osu! Alumni
1,164 posts
Joined November 2008
yaya
yo
idk if you can understand chinese..my english suck.
some suggestion for your map
for hitsound
if this map is your first map . you did pretty good . for hitsound , you use pretty much , the best way for adding hitsound is add to white tick . see pic . (include hitfinish)
[Insane]
00:52:92 (5) - new combo . becuz you change distance.
01:01:005 - kiai time start at 01:01:92 .
01:15:77 (4) - need new combo.
02:37:00 - kiai time start at 02:37:92
[Normal]
some kiai time part do it like insane
01:24:08 (3,4) - this jump for Normal is not allowed .

if you have questions , pm me.

DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Normal~
02:07:046 (1) - timintg saection is exactly on the note
03:08:085 (1) - ^
03:10:069 (3) - ^

~Hard~
01:28:023 (5) - select this slider and press Ctrl+R


+Star
An-Don
89 posts
Joined February 2009
An-Don
Wow its great :D
I found nothing to mod (personally)

+Star+
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
[Normal]
All hit sound issues are just suggestions
01:53:062 (1,1) - Kill those claps
01:57:031 (1) - Kill the clap and let it start with a whistle
01:57:077 (2) - Kill that finish
02:01:000 (3,4) - Kill those claps and whistles on last two hits
02:07:092 (2) - Align with #1
Clap sounds bad on this map really...

[Insane]
00:24:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Need hitsounds!!!
00:42:019 (9) - Kill this clap
00:43:069 (4) - Uh... kill neither #1 and #3 or #2 clap
00:47:038 (1) - Place whistle instead of finish
00:48:031 (4,5) - Kill those claps (Keep #6)
00:49:069 (3) - Whistle instead
00:50:015 (4,5) - Whistle on #4 and kill both claps
Not gonna mention anymore hitsound issues. I think you get the point
02:10:069 (4) - Not a fun jump to be honest.... ignore it ;_;
02:11:039 (5) - New combo

Remember: Clap and Finish (and Normal Whistle) are heavy hitsounds. It often sounds bad when it is on Red and Blue tick. Placing Every White tick also sounds bad when the song is not fast enough.

Starred for the potential
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
1,179 posts
Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
Yay for irc mod~ <3'
Nice map and skin, Haisha. Big and clear star for you, and I will make people mod/star this. Keep up the good work.
Senbon
480 posts
Joined September 2008
Senbon
Gyaaah Changin' My Life is great.

Can I make a difficulty? :oops:

[General]

- Source and tags, separate "Fullmoon" into "Full Moon".
- Hit sounds are kinda jumbly in places, lacking in some places and some making no sense or loud. Especially claps. So lower the volume when needed.

[Normal]

00:32:038 (3) - Whistle on ends?
00:33:008 (4) - Whistle instead of clap?
00:33:077 (5) - Whistle on end?
00:44:038 (3) - Remove finish?
00:49:092 (4) - Claps + finished don't sound good, IMO. Remove finish on start, remove clap on end?
01:30:031 (1,2,3,4) - Add hit sounds?
02:00:008 (1,2) - Unnecessary Kiai, I think. xD
02:07:092 (2) - Align with end of (2).
02:46:023 (4) - Clap on end?

[Insane]

00:19:023 (4) - Clap sound baad. Put it to 00:19:092 (5) Instead.
00:25:000 (4) - Finish?
00:26:015 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - At least put some whistles.
00:42:008 (8,9,10) - Remove the claps, too noisy for now. Leave the finish.
00:42:077 (2) - Clap on end?
01:24:054 (4) - Not snapped to time line.
01:54:054 (4,5,6) - Kill claps. Or lower the volume. (and be sure the timing sections are 1/4 before and after :D)
02:00:008 (1) - Unnecessary Kiai, I think. xD
02:18:019 (8) - Remove clap?

Star :D:P
DoubleDango
27 posts
Joined October 2009
DoubleDango
Custom hitsounds for clap and finish; they sound really good if you place them properly.

I'll improve the skin a bit.




Place them in the beatmap folder and make sure you enable "custom override".

Download: Clap and Finish hitsounds -DD.rar
DoubleDango
27 posts
Joined October 2009
DoubleDango
Okay.

Remove the hitcircle.png (it looks really ugly lol, default looks better.) but leave the hitcircleoverlay.png.
Remove the cursor.png (again, the default one looks way better.)

And I fixed the color of the section pass/fail. It might appear really pink but it's not, it's semi-transparent.



Senbon
480 posts
Joined September 2008
Senbon
Yay I'm finished I hope you like it 8-)

Download: Changin' My Life - Smile (haisha_) [Senbon's Hard].osu
yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
2,850 posts
Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Senbon
480 posts
Joined September 2008
Senbon

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Senbon's Hard:
02:40:046 (3) - Should be a single not, not a slider. sounds really weird and off
02:40:069 - Put a note here
02:40:081 (4) - Delete this
02:41:004 - Put a note here
all done thanks :)

:D

Download: Changin' My Life - Smile (haisha_) [Senbon's Hard].osu
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
[All diffs]
(suggestion) Maybe some more tags

[mp3]
A large part is unused...
cut it..

[Normal]
I prefer the kiai on Hard (Could you change it to that :) )

[Hard]


[Insane]]
No source here....
Also the same thing with the kiai

Good map
*star*
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