This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年5月10日 at 23:05:15

Artist: Chihara Minori
Title: Paradise Lost
Source: 食灵零,GA-REI-ZERO,Paradise Lost
Tags: 食灵零,Chihara Minori,Paradise Lost,GA-REI-ZERO
BPM: 165
Filesize: 3309kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

1. Chihara (4.37 stars, 302 notes)
2. Insane (4.3 stars, 307 notes)

Download: Chihara Minori - Paradise Lost
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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最开始作图的目的就是想做出一些看起来很难 但是打起来很简单的图。。。。
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insane:done..
Chihara:almost done...
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thanks for Erina's modding!!
thanks for examination's modding~
thanks for wcx19911123's modding~
thanks for jemmmmy's modding~
thanks for everyone mod this map"o((>ω< ))o" ~~

七角星ver1.0哒"o((>ω< ))o"

七角星ver2.0哒"o((>ω< ))o"

《食灵零》（Ga-Rei:Zero，喰霊-零-）是由日本动画公司AIC Spirits与asread共同制作的动画作品，于2008年10月5日播放，全12话。此作为日本漫画家濑川初的漫画作品《食灵》前传，本篇的故事发生在漫画原作前两年。
主要讲述漫画女主角土宫神乐与其姐姐谏山黄泉从前的羁绊，此作揭示着黄泉黑化的过程和原因。


其实就是放课后退魔小队百合记（划掉。。。

没错这是一个shitty map
From my modding Queue~骗谁呢 只是在modding queue的forum里面看到了就过来看看惹
说几句

Slider Velocity在2.0以下就可以了 3.0明显不能玩
有的地方压BG音乐的音比较好 不一定要vocal

不过没事 毕竟是刚刚开始作图 随便做做什么的也可以啦~
先别急着找modder 多作几张图有感觉了 （比如感觉这张图长得跟那些rank的图很像）以后再去找modder
加油~

不要给kds

examination wrote:

没错这是一个shitty map
From my modding Queue~骗谁呢 只是在modding queue的forum里面看到了就过来看看惹
说几句

Slider Velocity在2.0以下就可以了 3.0明显不能玩
有的地方压BG音乐的音比较好 不一定要vocal

不过没事 毕竟是刚刚开始作图 随便做做什么的也可以啦~
先别急着找modder 多作几张图有感觉了 （比如感觉这张图长得跟那些rank的图很像）以后再去找modder
加油~

不要给kds

诶？给了kds会有不好的影响么！？

albatross11 wrote:

examination wrote:

没错这是一个shitty map
From my modding Queue~骗谁呢 只是在modding queue的forum里面看到了就过来看看惹
说几句

Slider Velocity在2.0以下就可以了 3.0明显不能玩
有的地方压BG音乐的音比较好 不一定要vocal

不过没事 毕竟是刚刚开始作图 随便做做什么的也可以啦~
先别急着找modder 多作几张图有感觉了 （比如感觉这张图长得跟那些rank的图很像）以后再去找modder
加油~

不要给kds

诶？给了kds会有不好的影响么！？

没有具体建议 不要啦
等你的图稍微好一点以后我再来摸一摸~

examination wrote:

没错这是一个shitty map
From my modding Queue~骗谁呢 只是在modding queue的forum里面看到了就过来看看惹
说几句

Slider Velocity在2.0以下就可以了 3.0明显不能玩
有的地方压BG音乐的音比较好 不一定要vocal

不过没事 毕竟是刚刚开始作图 随便做做什么的也可以啦~
先别急着找modder 多作几张图有感觉了 （比如感觉这张图长得跟那些rank的图很像）以后再去找modder
加油~

不要给kds


诶？给了kds会有不好的影响么！？

等你的图稍微好一点以后我再来摸一摸~

[/quote]

哪路后都"o((>ω< ))o"~~阿里嘎多~~
你这几句话对我以后的作图帮助很大啊。。。为啥不能给kudosu果断给了！

From my mod for voice queue!

[General]
You should add some hitsounds in other than just the default sound for every note!

Your timing seems to be off by a white tick. The emphasis tick doesn't fit currently.

Consider placing your preview point right before the chorus, but this is just a suggestion

[Chihara]
I can't really say much about this difficulty. Overall, it feels very random. Try using distance snap more instead of just placing notes all over the place randomly.

00:04:976 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - This feels and looks weird, consider just changing it into two streams
00:10:794 (9) - Consider placing directly under 00:10:248 (7) -
00:23:340 (8) - This doesn't sound like it fits with the music
00:24:249 (9) - Add new combo
00:27:522 (4,5,6,7) - This spacing is too small, use distance snap
00:55:340 (2,3) - Feels like there should be more notes in between those
01:10:248 (1,2) - Weird spacing
01:26:431 (6) - I would move this slider somewhere else so that it's not under the previous slider, too hard to read

[Insane]
00:03:158 (5,1) - Consider stacking these notes
00:04:976 (7) - Consider adding new combo
00:05:703 (12) - Consider adding new combo
00:10:976 (7,8) - Spacing feels/looks weird
00:24:249 (8) - Add new combo
00:34:612 (7) - Consider extending this slider by 1/4 tick (to next white tick)
00:40:976 (17) - Add new combo
00:48:794 (5,6,7) - This spacing is too inconsistent
00:50:068 (13,1) - This doesn't play right, consider moving your previous slider to a 1/4 tick rather than a 1/8 tick
00:50:612 (2,3,4,5) - Weird spacing
01:07:340 (5,6) - These are overlapping in time! This is unrankable!
01:15:431 (15,1) - Same here!
01:16:248 (2,4) - Same here!
01:17:703 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Here as well until the end - there are many unrankable timing overlaps! Recheck this please!

[Normal]
Your slider velocity for normal feels too high, consider reducing it.

If you are trying to rank this, I would recommend you to read up in the Wiki about beatmapping and mapping techniques: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Beatmapping

Good luck with rank! Contact me later (PM or in-game) to decide what you're going to sing!

Erina wrote:

From my mod for voice queue!

[General]
You should add some hitsounds in other than just the default sound for every note!

Your timing seems to be off by a white tick. The emphasis tick doesn't fit currently.

Consider placing your preview point right before the chorus, but this is just a suggestion

[Chihara]
I can't really say much about this difficulty. Overall, it feels very random. Try using distance snap more instead of just placing notes all over the place randomly.

00:04:976 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - This feels and looks weird, consider just changing it into two streamsfixed
00:10:794 (9) - Consider placing directly under 00:10:248 (7) - fixed
00:23:340 (8) - This doesn't sound like it fits with the musicfixed
00:24:249 (9) - Add new combo fixed
00:27:522 (4,5,6,7) - This spacing is too small, use distance snap fixed(basic error= =...)
00:55:340 (2,3) - Feels like there should be more notes in between thosefixed
01:10:248 (1,2) - Weird spacingfixed
01:26:431 (6) - I would move this slider somewhere else so that it's not under the previous slider, too hard to readjust to mad you...don't mind╮(￣▽￣")╭..i delete it

[Insane]
00:03:158 (5,1) - Consider stacking these notesfixed
00:04:976 (7) - Consider adding new combofixed(oh i forgot= =)
00:05:703 (12) - Consider adding new combofixed
00:10:976 (7,8) - Spacing feels/looks weirdfixed
00:24:249 (8) - Add new combofixed
00:34:612 (7) - Consider extending this slider by 1/4 tick (to next white tick)u r right
00:40:976 (17) - Add new combofixed
00:48:794 (5,6,7) - This spacing is too inconsistentmad you╮(￣▽￣")╭...i would not change it
00:50:068 (13,1) - This doesn't play right, consider moving your previous slider to a 1/4 tick rather than a 1/8 tickfixed
00:50:612 (2,3,4,5) - Weird spacingfixed....maybe....
01:07:340 (5,6) - These are overlapping in time! This is unrankable!fixed(basic error double strike)
01:15:431 (15,1) - Same here!basic error triple kill!
01:16:248 (2,4) - Same here!basic error quadra kill
01:17:703 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Here as well until the end - there are many unrankable timing overlaps! Recheck this please!basic error has been rampage...╮(￣▽￣")╭

[Normal]
Your slider velocity for normal feels too high, consider reducing it.this diff is not completed ...i'll finish it someday...maybe╮(￣▽￣")╭

If you are trying to rank this, I would recommend you to read up in the Wiki about beatmapping and mapping techniques: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Beatmapping

Good luck with rank! Contact me later (PM or in-game) to decide what you're going to sing!

sorry for reply you so late"o((>ω< ))o"..i remind it just now......

after a week's play ..i find out that i have no clear comprehension of a map's difficulty....so i decided not to update this map until my 10000 pc~╮(￣▽￣")╭

thank you for moding"o((>ω< ))o"

楼主好，如约来帮你摸了
以下说加note就找个合适的地方放就好了

[insane]

1. 00:05:612 (13) - 用滑条改成连打再摆
2. 00:14:067 (3,4,5) - 分开些
3. 00:29:703 - 连打结束在这
4. 00:43:158 - 加note
5. 00:54:431 (12) - 减note
6. 00:54:794 - 加note
7. 00:55:522 - ^
8. 00:55:703 - ^
9. 01:07:340 - ^
10. 没有好梗

[Ywywei's normal]

1. AR7真的是normal嘛？怎么说难度设置得都太难了
2. Kiai结束时间没有对齐时间轴 01:26:311

[other]

1. insane难度建议repeat
2. 音质太低
3. 两个难度offset设置不一样
4. 新手做图还算好了吧

-Hatano Kokoro- wrote:

楼主好，如约来帮你摸了
以下说加note就找个合适的地方放就好了

[insane]

1. 00:05:612 (13) - 用滑条改成连打再摆
2. 00:14:067 (3,4,5) - 分开些
3. 00:29:703 - 连打结束在这
4. 00:43:158 - 加note
5. 00:54:431 (12) - 减note
6. 00:54:794 - 加note
7. 00:55:522 - ^
8. 00:55:703 - ^
9. 01:07:340 - ^
10. 没有好梗

[Ywywei's normal]

1. AR7真的是normal嘛？怎么说难度设置得都太难了
2. Kiai结束时间没有对齐时间轴 01:26:311

[other]

1. insane难度建议repeat
2. 音质太低
3. 两个难度offset设置不一样
4. 新手做图还算好了吧

都莫阿里嘎多心酱╮(╯▽╰)╭~~
话说repeat是什么？。。。多读几遍么。。。= =

Hi, From my modding Queue

Red Means Important

[General]

Why only Insane and Normal? Try to make a Hard

[Normal]

Check Ctrl + Shift + A, a lot of objects are Not snapped
Check Ctrl + Shift + A, A lot of Kai times are not snapped
Check Ctrl + Shift + A, it suggests a Epilepsy warning
01:25:521 (3,4,5) - Do NOT have jumps in a Normal mode

[Insane]

00:07:885 (7) - New Combo
00:08:067 (8,10) - Stack these
00:10:976 (7) - New Combo
00:28:067 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - Try to put a new combo somewhere in here
00:45:703 (9) - New Combo
00:57:340 (9) - ^
01:08:794 (1) - Try to end this on a white tick


Hope this map gets ranked

Hi, From my modding Queue

Red Means Important


General

Why only Insane and Normal? Try to make a Hard


Normal

Check Ctrl + Shift + A, a lot of objects are Not snapped fixed
Check Ctrl + Shift + A, A lot of Kai times are not snappedfixed
Check Ctrl + Shift + A, it suggests a Epilepsy warning fixed
01:25:521 (3,4,5) - Do NOT have jumps in a Normal modefixed


Insane

00:07:885 (7) - New Combo fixed
00:08:067 (8,10) - Stack thesefixed
00:10:976 (7) - New Combofixed
00:28:067 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - Try to put a new combo somewhere in heredone
00:45:703 (9) - New Combofixed
00:57:340 (9) - ^^ ╮(￣▽￣")╭
01:08:794 (1) - Try to end this on a white tickdone

thank u for your advice ~always forgot to set new combo╮(￣▽￣")╭ ....

oh no....

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